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Ipas

Sieg wrote:

alright
Thank you so much Sieg ><
I don't think I can update my map without your Pop ><

Thanks ><
Haruto
Go ranked!! :D
-Nya-

NewIpas wrote:

Sieg wrote:

alright
Thank you so much Sieg >< I don't think I can update my map without your Pop >< Thanks ><


No, you can still update. The bubble will then be popped and then Sieg can just rebubble.
Topic Starter
Ipas

-Nya- wrote:

NewIpas wrote:

Thank you so much Sieg >< I don't think I can update my map without your Pop >< Thanks ><


No, you can still update. The bubble will then be popped and then Sieg can just rebubble.
Oh,yes xD
I just forget that Sieg is the BN who pop my map ><
-Nya-
Recheck~

Easy:
  1. 01:25:843 (2) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.
  2. 01:27:501 (4) - And then also add a clap on the head of this slider.

Normal:
  1. 01:22:197 (5) - This clap on the tail feels out of place. Rather remove it and make sure the hitsounds are set to auto. Or if you really like that clap on the tail, then for consistency and to make it sound better, add a clap on the tail of this slider: 01:21:865 (4) - as well.
  2. 01:25:843 (3) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.
  3. 01:27:169 (3) - Same thing here. Add a clap on the tail. It will make the hitsounds in that section sound very nice.

Hard:
  1. 01:10:429 - Add a circle here? I think it will help with flow.
  2. 01:22:363 (4) - Either remove that clap here. Or add a clap here: 01:22:031 (2) - as well. Same reason as in Normal.
  3. 01:26:175 (4) - Add clap on the head of this slider.
  4. 01:27:501 (4) - Also add a clap on the head of this slider.

Insane:
  1. 01:16:562 (3) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.
  2. 01:22:197 (5) - Like the previous diffs, remove the clap on the tail or add a clap on the tail of this slider: 01:21:865 (4) -
  3. 01:24:517 (1,2) - Make the jump from the slider to the circle similar to this jump: 01:23:854 (3,4) -
  4. 01:26:175 (5) - Add clap on the head of the slider.
  5. 01:27:335 (7) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.

Just some hitsounding that needs improving.
Call me back~
Topic Starter
Ipas

-Nya- wrote:

Recheck~

Easy:
  1. 01:25:843 (2) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.
  2. 01:27:501 (4) - And then also add a clap on the head of this slider.

Normal:
  1. 01:22:197 (5) - This clap on the tail feels out of place. Rather remove it and make sure the hitsounds are set to auto. Or if you really like that clap on the tail, then for consistency and to make it sound better, add a clap on the tail of this slider: 01:21:865 (4) - as well.
  2. 01:25:843 (3) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.
  3. 01:27:169 (3) - Same thing here. Add a clap on the tail. It will make the hitsounds in that section sound very nice.

Hard:
  1. 01:10:429 - Add a circle here? I think it will help with flow.
  2. 01:22:363 (4) - Either remove that clap here. Or add a clap here: 01:22:031 (2) - as well. Same reason as in Normal.
  3. 01:26:175 (4) - Add clap on the head of this slider.
  4. 01:27:501 (4) - Also add a clap on the head of this slider.

Insane:
  1. 01:16:562 (3) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.
  2. 01:22:197 (5) - Like the previous diffs, remove the clap on the tail or add a clap on the tail of this slider: 01:21:865 (4) -
  3. 01:24:517 (1,2) - Make the jump from the slider to the circle similar to this jump: 01:23:854 (3,4) -
  4. 01:26:175 (5) - Add clap on the head of the slider.
  5. 01:27:335 (7) - Add a clap on the tail of this slider.

Just some hitsounding that needs improving.
Call me back~
~ Thank you very much >< Accept all of your mods >< ~
-Nya-
Everything looks perfect now~
I don't see any other issues.

Qualified~


Gratz on your first ranked map, NewIpas~!
Haruto
Congrats NewIpas for your first Ranked Diff ;w; :cry: ;w;
Topic Starter
Ipas

NewIpas wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 Maret 2015 at 16:57:59

Artist: amazarashi
Title: Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul A Edit-
Source: 東京喰種 トーキョーグール√A
Tags: tokyo ghoul root a season 2 ending Seasons die one after another
BPM: 181
Filesize: 13140kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (3.17 stars, 225 notes)
  3. Insane (4.02 stars, 315 notes)
  4. Normal (2.01 stars, 131 notes)
Download: amazarashi - Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul A Edit-
Download: amazarashi - Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul A Edit- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
MY FIRST RANKED MAP!

*If you downloaded this map before 26/03/2015, please re-download it

東京喰種 トーキョーグール√A 1st ED Theme
アマザラシ - 季節は次々死んでいく -東京喰種トーキョーグール√A Edit-


Special Thanks to
  1. -Nya-
  2. Gaia
  3. Sieg
  4. KSHR
  5. Gamu
  6. wendao
  7. Haruto_Aizawa
  8. theramdans
  9. farel12345
  10. No Dap
  11. ByBy_ChAn
  12. -Dave Strider-
  13. RzHr
  14. CelsiusLK
  15. Sky Trias
  16. mrturtle99
  17. SoGa
  18. monstrata
  19. Setsurei
  20. Peachtrees
  21. Neil Leo
  22. Fort
  23. Sognux
  24. Squirrel
  25. jloughman14
  26. NeK0Nyqn
  27. JBHyperion

Topic Starter
Ipas

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Congrats NewIpas for your first Ranked Diff ;w; :cry: ;w;

-Nya- wrote:

Everything looks perfect now~
I don't see any other issues.

Qualified~


Gratz on your first ranked map, NewIpas~!
~ THANKS ALL~ :')
Topic Starter
Ipas
AT LEAST ><
JBHyperion

-Nya- wrote:

Everything looks perfect now~
I don't see any other issues.

Qualified~


Gratz on your first ranked map, NewIpas~!
Wow dude great job! Congrats! ^^
meii18
Grats :3
wendao
congrats
Yukarisama-
Cieee Ranked
Topic Starter
Ipas

farel12345 wrote:

Cieee Ranked
Eh, kok kau tiba" kirim post ><
Anyway, THANKS :3
Shiranai
おめでとう!🎉🎉🎉
[ Mephisto ]
Congrats O/
Gaia
oh hey, congrats on ur first ranked !
Ciyus Miapah
hahahaha greget ini map di HDHR
Atrue
ORZ..
Sorry for the inconvenience, but the romanised title should be "Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Root A Edit-". You forgot the root on A..

Should be a quick fix, feel free to find BNs to bring it back :D

And congrats on your first ranked mapset in advance~
wendao
orz
Sieg
my bad, all English sources were like Tokyo Ghoul √A

unicode strikes back D: :o :o :o
riffy
Just a few things bfore we'll push it forward. Please note, that you're free to ignore most of it.

[General]
  1. More like a matter of personal preference, but I'd use something less bright.
    Example

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 108,196,217
    Combo2 : 202,84,222
    Combo3 : 95,218,88
    Combo4 : 200,100,100
[Easy]
  1. Consider lowering your OD and HP to 2. 3 feels relatively hard and breaks the balance of the set (the rest of the set has OD and HP settings a little lower than AR).
  2. 00:15:567 (4,2) - minor - is that overlap okay with you? It's quite noticeable while testing.
  3. 00:26:506 (4,2) - (2) appears a little too suddenly. In order to avoid it, you can unstack it to make the pattern a little easier. Example
  4. 00:32:142 (1,2,3) - vocals are pretty similar. So, you might want to keep rhythm mre consistent. example
    Note: if you want, you can have two sliders. That'll be okay, too.

    Great job! :)
[Normal]
  1. 01:21:865 (4) - the clap here sounds quite extra. Probably you should remove this one.
    Note: 01:22:363 - the one at is fine! Keep it!

    Wow, you really did great on this diff!
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:860 (3) - try removing the circle here, as it feels a little extra. while we remove it, we'll have the vcals emphasized in a nice way.
  2. 00:23:689 - and probably you should have a circle here to make this part match with the instruments.
  3. 00:33:136 - just a little weird to me: you have this beat mapped in your Normal, but not here. Any reason for that?
  4. 01:22:031 (2) - same suggestion as on the Normal. Remove the clap?

    Well done!
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:562 (5) - isn't that overmapped? I'd rather remove this.
  2. 00:18:551 (5,6) - it feels quite tricky to have 1/4 and 1/2 stacked in the same combo. Try to unstack the 1/2s here?
  3. 00:26:341 - the beat is mapped in Hard, but ot in Insane (which is supposed to be harder). Agagin, any reason for that?
  4. 00:37:114 - try to increase volume by 5-10%, let's make the circles more audible.
  5. 00:52:694 (3) - just to emphasize the end of this antijump pattern, you might want to have a NC here.
  6. 01:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - is it your intention to lower DS here or is it just DS being a little glitchy?

    Pretty nice. Not much to add. :)
Find me when you check these suggestions.
Topic Starter
Ipas
Ow...
Ahhh
Thanks ><
Topic Starter
Ipas

-Bakari- wrote:

Just a few things bfore we'll push it forward. Please note, that you're free to ignore most of it.

[General]
  1. More like a matter of personal preference, but I'd use something less bright.
    Example

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 108,196,217
    Combo2 : 202,84,222
    Combo3 : 95,218,88
    Combo4 : 200,100,100
[Easy]
  1. Consider lowering your OD and HP to 2. 3 feels relatively hard and breaks the balance of the set (the rest of the set has OD and HP settings a little lower than AR).
  2. 00:15:567 (4,2) - minor - is that overlap okay with you? It's quite noticeable while testing.
  3. 00:26:506 (4,2) - (2) appears a little too suddenly. In order to avoid it, you can unstack it to make the pattern a little easier. Example
  4. 00:32:142 (1,2,3) - vocals are pretty similar. So, you might want to keep rhythm mre consistent. example
    Note: if you want, you can have two sliders. That'll be okay, too.

    Great job! :)
[Normal]
  1. 01:21:865 (4) - the clap here sounds quite extra. Probably you should remove this one.
    Note: 01:22:363 - the one at is fine! Keep it!

    Wow, you really did great on this diff!
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:860 (3) - try removing the circle here, as it feels a little extra. while we remove it, we'll have the vcals emphasized in a nice way.
  2. 00:23:689 - and probably you should have a circle here to make this part match with the instruments.
  3. 00:33:136 - just a little weird to me: you have this beat mapped in your Normal, but not here. Any reason for that?
  4. 01:22:031 (2) - same suggestion as on the Normal. Remove the clap?

    Well done!
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:562 (5) - isn't that overmapped? I'd rather remove this.
  2. 00:18:551 (5,6) - it feels quite tricky to have 1/4 and 1/2 stacked in the same combo. Try to unstack the 1/2s here?
  3. 00:26:341 - the beat is mapped in Hard, but ot in Insane (which is supposed to be harder). Agagin, any reason for that?
  4. 00:37:114 - try to increase volume by 5-10%, let's make the circles more audible.
  5. 00:52:694 (3) - just to emphasize the end of this antijump pattern, you might want to have a NC here.
  6. 01:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - is it your intention to lower DS here or is it just DS being a little glitchy?

    Pretty nice. Not much to add. :)
Find me when you check these suggestions.
Accepted all of them :3
I've accept but i do it as my own opinions *Especially, on Easy :3
And made up some changes at Insane

Please, I can't update now .-.
There is an error with my connection .-.
I will update it tomorrow morning *at mine* ><
riffy
Just a few more things!

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:534 (1,2,3) - spacing feels inconsistent. (it doesn't look like you would do it intentionally, so...)
    Note: 00:35:457 (3,4,5) - same.
Let me know when you're ready. :)

Edit: looks good to me!

Re-Qualified!
Ciyus Miapah
good
Mood Breaker
wah sempet di unrank trnyata. congrats ipas for the first requalified map :>
Topic Starter
Ipas

Mood Breaker wrote:

wah sempet di unrank trnyata. congrats ipas for the first requalified map :>
Yeah ><
DQ nya cuma gara" metadata :3
Tapi jadi makin keren loh xD
Kogum_old
노래 개졓아 ♡
BDOG
Awesome song, awesome map.
Kamith
Love the song and your Beatmap
Great job man ! ;D
Mio08
Hello guy's :D
unluko
it's a Great song! i loved it ;D
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