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Topic Starter
Muu-chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 19, 2016 at 8:03:22 PM

Artist: nao
Title: Taiyou Paradise
Source: ネコぱら vol.1 ソレイユ開店しました!
Tags: NEKO WORKs さより 雪仁 水城新人 KIZAWA Studio Sayori Yuki Jin Mizuki Shinjin Nekopara Soreiyu Kaiten Shimashita eroge VN galgame visual novel sun opening Eternalie
BPM: 147
Filesize: 4911kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Azuki [4K NM] - 4Key (1.66 stars, 503 notes)
  2. Chocola [4K MX] - 4Key (3.81 stars, 1093 notes)
  3. Cinnamon [4K HD] - 4Key (2.44 stars, 848 notes)
  4. Coconut [Etlie's 7K HD] - 7Key (2.66 stars, 815 notes)
  5. Maple [Etlie's 7K NM] - 7Key (1.76 stars, 581 notes)
  6. Vanilla [Etlie's 7K MX] - 7Key (3.43 stars, 1125 notes)
Download: nao - Taiyou Paradise
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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。◕‿◕。 Osu!Mania need more nao and neko 。◕‿◕。

Map by:



========= Muu-chan ~ 4K ====================================== Eternalie ~ 7K =========

*NEKOPARA*
"Maple" [Etlie's 7K NM]

Maple is the second oldest of the Minaduki family Nekos. She enjoying visiting cafes to try different food and drinks. Maple knows her table manners and understands technology. She can be a little strict to Azuki whenever Azuki wolfs down her food. Despite this, she can be welcoming to her family when necessary.

"Azuki" [4K NM]

Azuki is the oldest of the Minaduki family Nekos. Despite being the oldest, she has a mischievous personality. Azuki can be energetic and sometimes badmouth a family member when she's angry. Azuki loves to eat, and sometimes become out of control when she sees food, which can be a problem.

"Coconut" [Etlie's 7K HD]

Coconut is the fourth oldest of the Minaduki family Nekos. Other characters praise her for her "cool" personality, but she wishes she were cute rather than cool.

"Cinnamon" [4K HD]

Cinnamon is the third oldest of the Minaduki family Nekos. She has a dirty mind, so she frequently interprets things in a sexual manner, and ends up becoming aroused.

"Vanilla" [Etlie's 7K MX]

Vanilla looks more like the ame, or older girl type, because of her characteristic for being level-headed. She's from Kansai, but due to her master's scolding, she has dropped her accent. Vanilla also a quiet and calm white haired Neko. She rarely expresses her emotions, making her a somewhat of a kūdere character. She loves her twin sister Chocola, and will follow her anywhere she goes

"Chocola" [4K MX]

Chocola is a cheerful and energetic brown haired Neko. She could not bear the thought of being separated from her master, so she came along with him when he moved to his new shop. She likes her master but can't quite honestly express her feelings, and doesn't notice her sister's feelings one bit. Chocola seems like a lolita, since she looks younger than her twin sister, Vanilla.
*Special thanks*

Shigure chan would say a big bigger biggest thanks to everyone who help improve this map 。◕‿◕。
Please enjoy 。◕‿◕。 Osu!std mapset by Minakami Yuki. Also mp3 taken from there~
ToifAmri
Mantap :D
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

ToifAmri wrote:

Mantap :D
hihi ^^ arigatou~
-LASU-
Hi

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
7K MX mod
MX
00:01:630 - add note
00:12:854 - add note 6
00:13:772 - add note
00:24:487 (24487|2,24487|0) - 1 notes change LN?(HD 2notes LN)
00:52:242 - ~ 00:53:466 - HD diff is harder than MX diff..
01:57:242 - add note 5
01:57:548 (117548|1) - change LN
02:03:262 - add LN
nice song choice ;) good luck (^ω^)b
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

-LASU- wrote:

Hi

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
7K MX mod
MX
00:01:630 - add note
00:12:854 - add note 6
00:13:772 - add note
00:24:487 (24487|2,24487|0) - 1 notes change LN?(HD 2notes LN)
00:52:242 - ~ 00:53:466 - HD diff is harder than MX diff..
01:57:242 - add note 5
01:57:548 (117548|1) - change LN
02:03:262 - add LN
nice song choice ;) good luck (^ω^)b thank youuuu ><"
yayyy thank you so much for noticing this map lasu san ^^
Fubukicat

-LASU- wrote:

Hi

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
7K MX mod
MX
00:01:630 - add note
00:12:854 - add note 6
00:13:772 - add note
00:24:487 (24487|2,24487|0) - 1 notes change LN?(HD 2notes LN)
00:52:242 - ~ 00:53:466 - HD diff is harder than MX diff..
01:57:242 - add note 5
01:57:548 (117548|1) - change LN
02:03:262 - add LN
nice song choice ;) good luck (^ω^)b
Thanks for mod LASU - san , Everything fixed re arranged the parts , thanks for noticing the LNs :3/
also could you add me >n< I added you abit ago already but i'm kinda shy to ask mutual friend :3
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Eternalie wrote:

Thanks for mod LASU - san , Everything fixed re arranged the parts , thanks for noticing the LNs :3/
also could you add me >n< I added you abit ago already but i'm kinda shy to ask mutual friend :3
me too me too :'3
NicoHolic777
You have requested this from my queue, so there you go.
Remember that this is MY opinion and I'm a starter, so you can just ignore it, or at least reply, so I can improve my modding skills!


[General]
+ You didn't hitsound any beatmaps! According to the osu!wiki, all beatmaps should be hitsounded.

[4K NM]
00:25:099 (25099|3,25201|0,25303|2) - Those short gap notes should NOT be in Easy/Normal. Suggestion: Follow the bass guitar instead, like this http://puu.sh/gQddz.jpg
00:57:854 (57854|1) - Remove, short gap again.
00:59:181 (59181|2,59181|3,59283|1,59487|1,59589|3,59589|2) - Consider changing the pattern and remove those short gaps.
01:29:793 (89793|0,89997|2) - Add 1 more note on each line, for drum impact like 01:30:201 (90201|3,90201|1,90405|2,90405|0) - .
01:39:997 (99997|3,99997|2,100099|1,100303|1,100405|3,100405|2) - Short gap note.
01:58:160 (118160|3,118262|0,118364|2,118568|1) - Short gap note.
01:47:752 - to 01:59:997 - I feel like the pattern is similar to the intro.
Verdict: Good mapping, but short notes are considered as hard. Also, maybe it would be nice if you have more patterns, like changing the ending one, 'cause it's similar to the intro, as I said.

[4K HD]

00:26:323 (26323|0) - Woah, that's not fun, jacking very short long note to another!
00:39:793 (39793|0,39997|3) - These notes don't really necessary, unless you want it to be really hard!
00:59:181 (59181|1,59181|3,59181|0,59283|2,59283|1,59487|2,59487|1,59589|3,59589|0,59589|2) - Aren't them for insane mode? I think that's way too hard.
01:02:650 (62650|3,62752|2,62854|1,62854|0,62956|2,63058|1,63058|0,63160|2,63262|0,63262|3,63262|1) - Hmmm, as above, take it a bit less difficult. Maybe this works http://puu.sh/gQdXt.png
01:59:385 (119385|0) - Not a good jacking, too.
Verdict: Maybe I was tired from mapping my other map. But I think that somethings on this map got too hard, even this is hard difficulty.

[4K MX]

I'm so sorry, I can't mod this. The difficulty star has reached my rules' limit, means it's too hard for me to mod. But judging from autoplay, it looks pretty!

[Self Comment]

This song is beautiful! Good choice! For mapping, there are more issues which maybe I couldn't have seen it. But your map is challenging, and mostly fun!
Good luck! Get Ranked soon!

==Tatsuya-Kun==
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Tatsuya Kaname wrote:

You have requested this from my queue, so there you go.
Remember that this is MY opinion and I'm a starter, so you can just ignore it, or at least reply, so I can improve my modding skills!


[General]
+ You didn't hitsound any beatmaps! According to the osu!wiki, all beatmaps should be hitsounded. yup, i would put them soon ^^

[4K NM]
00:25:099 (25099|3,25201|0,25303|2) - Those short gap notes should NOT be in Easy/Normal. Suggestion: Follow the bass guitar instead, like this http://puu.sh/gQddz.jpg i would keep this to follow the piano note :3 since it isn't not that hard for normal, i think it also makes their skill improved :3
00:57:854 (57854|1) - Remove, short gap again. same with v
00:59:181 (59181|2,59181|3,59283|1,59487|1,59589|3,59589|2) - Consider changing the pattern and remove those short gaps. sure^^ i changed them to follows only the organ sound here :3 so there would be not a drum beat and that short gap :)
01:29:793 (89793|0,89997|2) - Add 1 more note on each line, for drum impact like 01:30:201 (90201|3,90201|1,90405|2,90405|0) - i single this 01:30:201 - to make it same with them xD and this double 01:30:405 - is for additional cymbal sound :3 hihi thank you for noticing this tatsu kun^^
01:39:997 (99997|3,99997|2,100099|1,100303|1,100405|3,100405|2) - Short gap note. changed :3
01:58:160 (118160|3,118262|0,118364|2,118568|1) - Short gap note. i would keep this too :3
01:47:752 - to 01:59:997 - I feel like the pattern is similar to the intro.
Verdict: Good mapping, but short notes are considered as hard. Also, maybe it would be nice if you have more patterns, like changing the ending one, 'cause it's similar to the intro, as I said. yes they are :3

[4K HD]

00:26:323 (26323|0) - Woah, that's not fun, jacking very short long note to another! my bad :D changed ><" hihi
00:39:793 (39793|0,39997|3) - These notes don't really necessary, unless you want it to be really hard! deleted :D
00:59:181 (59181|1,59181|3,59181|0,59283|2,59283|1,59487|2,59487|1,59589|3,59589|0,59589|2) - Aren't them for insane mode? I think that's way too hard. i just follows the drum set and chord sound :3 drum impact is 2 notes, and 3 notes for additional drum + chord ^^
01:02:650 (62650|3,62752|2,62854|1,62854|0,62956|2,63058|1,63058|0,63160|2,63262|0,63262|3,63262|1) - Hmmm, as above, take it a bit less difficult. Maybe this works http://puu.sh/gQdXt.png i would keep this to follows the drum :3
01:59:385 (119385|0) - Not a good jacking, too. changed xD sowwy
Verdict: Maybe I was tired from mapping my other map. But I think that somethings on this map got too hard, even this is hard difficulty.

[4K MX]

I'm so sorry, I can't mod this. The difficulty star has reached my rules' limit, means it's too hard for me to mod. But judging from autoplay, it looks pretty! sankyu :3 also no need to sorry^^

[Self Comment]

This song is beautiful! Good choice! For mapping, there are more issues which maybe I couldn't have seen it. But your map is challenging, and mostly fun!
Good luck! Get Ranked soon!
yayy^^ still long way to go~~~ hihi
==Tatsuya-Kun==


Thank you so much tatsu kun :D amazing mod, well noticed :3 hihi
-Rebecca-


Time to get down to modding. Here from my queue and ready to do this mod in exchange for your mod to my map.

Will be going from highest diffs down following column style 0|1|2|3 as per copy-paste style.
My 7k follows columns style 0|1|2|3|4|5|6 too.

General
SPOILER
You addressed this in your reply to Tatsuya's mod but this definitely needs hitsounds.
I don't see any other issues in general, so it's time for the difficulties.

Chocola [4k MX]
SPOILER
While this is completely playable, it feels very weird to me in this instance
00:26:323 (26323|0) - change from short LN to normal note
or move to a different column. You probably could keep it though if you wanted.

These drum hits here feel identical and it feels weird playing 1-2-1 fast like that in a roll with a LN. I propose:
00:46:629 (46629|3) - remove note

This short burst of notes from
00:59:181 (59181|0,59181|1,59181|3) to 00:59:589 (59589|1,59589|0,59589|3)
Feels extremely awkward to play. The drums call for it but I think perhaps move them away from columns 1 and 2 there in the middle?

The rest of this difficulty seems pretty good, especially the kiai time section. I like it!



Vanilla [Etlie's 7K MX]
SPOILER
So, my 7k isn't as good as my 4k so I'm gonna try my hardest to use this as a learning experience and offer input

00:36:936 (36936|0) - This LN does not seem to be mapped to any discernable sound. it starts on a lyric but goes on for quite some time.
If the LN was meant for the lyric, shorten it to 00:37:140 (37140|0) perhaps?

01:37:548 (97548|5) - - Something tells me this should go over to column 4 next to it? The pitch works well with it there in my opinion.

01:55:099 (115099|6) - was this LN meant to cover all of the sounds the LNs are being mapped to here?
The group of lines 01:51:834 (111834) to 01:52:446 (112446) worked really well here.

01:59:997 (119997|3,119997|5,119997|1,120405|5,120405|1,120405|3) - These notes should be LNs to match the flow of the notes after it.

Coconut [Etlie's 7K HD]
SPOILER
00:04:078 (4078|6) - This LN after that tiny gap is not good here. I think it'd be best to move it over and eliminate the gap.
The synth sound it is mapped to does not have a gap like that.

This is super nitpicky but
00:50:609 (50609|0) - What is the LN mapped to? I don't think it's needed here.

This diff looks pretty good apart from that. Can't really think of much outside of the realm of being extremely nitpicky.

Cinnamon [4K HD]
SPOILER
This difficulty looks really good for a HD, but a couple concerns.

00:51:834 (51834|1,51834|0,51834|2,52038|2,52038|1,52038|3) - Perhaps instead of triples they should just be doubles?
Like, remove these two?
00:51:834 (51834|2)
00:52:038 (52038|1)
I don't think the drum hits are that exaggerated.

This cluster of notes right here
00:59:181 (59181|1,59181|3,59181|0,59283|1,59283|2,59487|2,59487|1,59589|3,59589|0,59589|2)
This suffers the same problem as the 4k MX difficulty and should not be in a HD difficulty.
I think this should be toned down slightly, Maybe changing these two to singles.
00:59:283 (59283|1,59283|2)
00:59:487 (59487|2,59487|1)

I love the ending LNs to the 7k difficulties but this LN for this difficulty
02:02:242 (122242|1)
Split it into two LNs like the 7k MX and HD difficulties?

Maple [Etlie's 7K NM]
SPOILER
Looks good, only concern is this section
00:27:752 (27752|3,27752|5,27752|1) to 00:38:364 (38364|6,38364|1)
It is very long and repetitive for the same keys for an entire measure before changing.
Since it's slow, make them alternate a little bit?
Sorry it's hard to describe this.

Azuki [4K NM]
SPOILER
00:25:099 (25099|3,25201|0,25303|2,25507|1) - This group of notes might be a little fast for a NM. A possible solution:
00:25:201 (25201|0) - remove this note

00:46:527 (46527|0,46629|3,46732|1) - same problem as above. A possible solution:
00:46:629 (46629|3) - remove this note

01:20:813 (80813|3) - Is this mapped to the instruments or the lyric? If it's mapped to lyrics it should not be there, otherwise it's okay.

01:58:160 (118160|0,118262|3,118364|2) - same problem as those other two note clusters I mentioned earlier. A possible solution:
01:58:262 (118262|3) - remove this note

As far as I can tell that's it. I'm still learning the ropes of modding so forgive me if I didn't catch everything I think I should have.

I tried to explain all of my suggestions, I feel like this really helps me understand the mapping and sometimes I catch an error on my end in understanding while I mod! :D

This is a good mapset, it shows promise!
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

CrabCow wrote:



Time to get down to modding. Here from my queue and ready to do this mod in exchange for your mod to my map.

Will be going from highest diffs down following column style 0|1|2|3 as per copy-paste style.
My 7k follows columns style 0|1|2|3|4|5|6 too.

General
SPOILER
You addressed this in your reply to Tatsuya's mod but this definitely needs hitsounds. okay i would HSing this soon :3 i just can't decide which one is fit with the song yet.
I don't see any other issues in general, so it's time for the difficulties.

Chocola [4k MX]
SPOILER
While this is completely playable, it feels very weird to me in this instance
00:26:323 (26323|0) - change from short LN to normal note
or move to a different column. You probably could keep it though if you wanted. i would keep this :D

These drum hits here feel identical and it feels weird playing 1-2-1 fast like that in a roll with a LN. I propose:
00:46:629 (46629|3) - remove note you are right :D i deleted this LN 00:46:527 (46527|0) - and make them 2 noters ^^ thank you for noticing this

This short burst of notes from
00:59:181 (59181|0,59181|1,59181|3) to 00:59:589 (59589|1,59589|0,59589|3)
Feels extremely awkward to play. The drums call for it but I think perhaps move them away from columns 1 and 2 there in the middle? sure, i deleted these notes to make it more enjoyable :3 00:58:976 (58976|2,59078|1) -

The rest of this difficulty seems pretty good, especially the kiai time section. I like it! thank youuu xD

Cinnamon [4K HD]
SPOILER
This difficulty looks really good for a HD, but a couple concerns.

00:51:834 (51834|1,51834|0,51834|2,52038|2,52038|1,52038|3) - Perhaps instead of triples they should just be doubles? sure, make it as double :3 hihi
Like, remove these two?
00:51:834 (51834|2)
00:52:038 (52038|1)
I don't think the drum hits are that exaggerated.

This cluster of notes right here
00:59:181 (59181|1,59181|3,59181|0,59283|1,59283|2,59487|2,59487|1,59589|3,59589|0,59589|2)
This suffers the same problem as the 4k MX difficulty and should not be in a HD difficulty. ahah my bad^^ changed them
I think this should be toned down slightly, Maybe changing these two to singles.
00:59:283 (59283|1,59283|2)
00:59:487 (59487|2,59487|1)

I love the ending LNs to the 7k difficulties but this LN for this difficulty
02:02:242 (122242|1)
Split it into two LNs like the 7k MX and HD difficulties? sure :D hihi

Azuki [4K NM]
SPOILER
00:25:099 (25099|3,25201|0,25303|2,25507|1) - This group of notes might be a little fast for a NM. A possible solution:
00:25:201 (25201|0) - remove this note

00:46:527 (46527|0,46629|3,46732|1) - same problem as above. A possible solution:
00:46:629 (46629|3) - remove this note

01:20:813 (80813|3) - Is this mapped to the instruments or the lyric? If it's mapped to lyrics it should not be there, otherwise it's okay. actually that's for long soft cymbal sound which should be start on 01:21:017 - but i think it is too hard for NM so i decided it to placed it there :3

01:58:160 (118160|0,118262|3,118364|2) - same problem as those other two note clusters I mentioned earlier. A possible solution:
01:58:262 (118262|3) - remove this note i would keep the rest :3 hihi thank you so much ^^

As far as I can tell that's it. I'm still learning the ropes of modding so forgive me if I didn't catch everything I think I should have.

I tried to explain all of my suggestions, I feel like this really helps me understand the mapping and sometimes I catch an error on my end in understanding while I mod! :D

This is a good mapset, it shows promise!
THANK YOUU <3
Topic Starter
Muu-chan
/orz double post. my bad
-Rebecca-

Muu-chan wrote:

/orz double post. my bad
Hehe, it happens. This website can be so fussy sometimes. ^~^

Looking forward to seeing future mods on this map.
Remillion Cross
just passing by

put Eternalie in tags since he made a lot of GDs for your map

no kd


oh nevermind lol the bss was lol'd me
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Remillion Cross wrote:

just passing by

put Eternalie in tags since he made a lot of GDs for your map

no kd


oh nevermind lol the bss was lol'd me
remi san has been lol'd by bss xD

the tags are too long u.u i just copy paste them from yuki san's map :D hihi
thank you so much for noticing this remi san :D
Fubukicat

CrabCow wrote:



Time to get down to modding. Here from my queue and ready to do this mod in exchange for your mod to my map.

Will be going from highest diffs down following column style 0|1|2|3 as per copy-paste style.
My 7k follows columns style 0|1|2|3|4|5|6 too.

General
SPOILER
You addressed this in your reply to Tatsuya's mod but this definitely needs hitsounds.
I don't see any other issues in general, so it's time for the difficulties.

Chocola [4k MX]
SPOILER
While this is completely playable, it feels very weird to me in this instance
00:26:323 (26323|0) - change from short LN to normal note
or move to a different column. You probably could keep it though if you wanted.

These drum hits here feel identical and it feels weird playing 1-2-1 fast like that in a roll with a LN. I propose:
00:46:629 (46629|3) - remove note

This short burst of notes from
00:59:181 (59181|0,59181|1,59181|3) to 00:59:589 (59589|1,59589|0,59589|3)
Feels extremely awkward to play. The drums call for it but I think perhaps move them away from columns 1 and 2 there in the middle?

The rest of this difficulty seems pretty good, especially the kiai time section. I like it!



Vanilla [Etlie's 7K MX]
SPOILER
So, my 7k isn't as good as my 4k so I'm gonna try my hardest to use this as a learning experience and offer input

00:36:936 (36936|0) - This LN does not seem to be mapped to any discernable sound. it starts on a lyric but goes on for quite some time.
If the LN was meant for the lyric, shorten it to 00:37:140 (37140|0) perhaps?
Actually I'll just rework that I think

01:37:548 (97548|5) - - Something tells me this should go over to column 4 next to it? The pitch works well with it there in my opinion.
I think the pitch is correctly represented here it does sound same as 01:37:140 (97140|5) -

01:55:099 (115099|6) - was this LN meant to cover all of the sounds the LNs are being mapped to here? it's actually Bass line LN
The group of lines 01:51:834 (111834) to 01:52:446 (112446) worked really well here. < sound cool , will try to change all that

01:59:997 (119997|3,119997|5,119997|1,120405|5,120405|1,120405|3) - These notes should be LNs to match the flow of the notes after it.
hmm I'll note that , but I don't like the fact of making a 1/3 LN ( or cut it midway ) to go on the same notes , so i'll keep it simples :3

Coconut [Etlie's 7K HD]
SPOILER
00:04:078 (4078|6) - This LN after that tiny gap is not good here. I think it'd be best to move it over and eliminate the gap.
The synth sound it is mapped to does not have a gap like that.
Actually since it's same pitch , I assum it could be a good way to introduce basics of some harder pattern here :3

This is super nitpicky but
00:50:609 (50609|0) - What is the LN mapped to? I don't think it's needed here. I have no idea owo changed to simples

This diff looks pretty good apart from that. Can't really think of much outside of the realm of being extremely nitpicky.

Cinnamon [4K HD]
SPOILER
This difficulty looks really good for a HD, but a couple concerns.

00:51:834 (51834|1,51834|0,51834|2,52038|2,52038|1,52038|3) - Perhaps instead of triples they should just be doubles?
Like, remove these two?
00:51:834 (51834|2)
00:52:038 (52038|1)
I don't think the drum hits are that exaggerated.

This cluster of notes right here
00:59:181 (59181|1,59181|3,59181|0,59283|1,59283|2,59487|2,59487|1,59589|3,59589|0,59589|2)
This suffers the same problem as the 4k MX difficulty and should not be in a HD difficulty.
I think this should be toned down slightly, Maybe changing these two to singles.
00:59:283 (59283|1,59283|2)
00:59:487 (59487|2,59487|1)

I love the ending LNs to the 7k difficulties but this LN for this difficulty
02:02:242 (122242|1)
Split it into two LNs like the 7k MX and HD difficulties?

Maple [Etlie's 7K NM]
SPOILER
Looks good, only concern is this section
00:27:752 (27752|3,27752|5,27752|1) to 00:38:364 (38364|6,38364|1)
It is very long and repetitive for the same keys for an entire measure before changing.
Since it's slow, make them alternate a little bit?
Sorry it's hard to describe this.
So hmm well , this is NM and people need to learn the keys and all that . Also repeating 4 time the same chords them switch is really neat for NM imo i'll still note that thanks :3

Azuki [4K NM]
SPOILER
00:25:099 (25099|3,25201|0,25303|2,25507|1) - This group of notes might be a little fast for a NM. A possible solution:
00:25:201 (25201|0) - remove this note

00:46:527 (46527|0,46629|3,46732|1) - same problem as above. A possible solution:
00:46:629 (46629|3) - remove this note

01:20:813 (80813|3) - Is this mapped to the instruments or the lyric? If it's mapped to lyrics it should not be there, otherwise it's okay.

01:58:160 (118160|0,118262|3,118364|2) - same problem as those other two note clusters I mentioned earlier. A possible solution:
01:58:262 (118262|3) - remove this note

As far as I can tell that's it. I'm still learning the ropes of modding so forgive me if I didn't catch everything I think I should have.

I tried to explain all of my suggestions, I feel like this really helps me understand the mapping and sometimes I catch an error on my end in understanding while I mod! :D

This is a good mapset, it shows promise!
Thanks for the mod , Have a nice day ^^
Topic Starter
Muu-chan
going to fix and update this very soon ><" i did a lol mistake and my update suddenly gone u.u

updated :3
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

4K NM
00:52:650 - add note
00:53:058 - ^
01:07:956 - ^
01:08:160 - ^

7K NM
01:58:160 (118160|0) - move to 4
01:58:262 - add note

just quick look

please reply before
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Fubukicat

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7



7K NM
01:58:160 (118160|0) - move to 4 Actually I 'm following base line and here it does sound like this 01:58:568 (118568|0) - < it's the same pitch so i'll keep it on 1
01:58:262 - add note ^ same as above , i'm not following that instrument and base dosn't sound here , tho your idea is cool i'll take it in mind , it could change later ^^

just quick look
Thanks for the idea , will probably change that if it's pointed again :3/ have a nice day Frim
please reply before
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Thanks~
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

4K NM
00:52:650 - add note
00:53:058 - ^ i would keep both of them :3 following only following the piano
01:07:956 - ^
01:08:160 - ^ same case here :3

7K NM
01:58:160 (118160|0) - move to 4
01:58:262 - add note

just quick look

please reply before
expired 29/4/2015
hihi thank you so much frim san :3
Verniy_Chan

Hi Muu-chan >.<)/
M4M from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( )
Mapset : ( )
Metadata : ( ) Very Detailed :3
Timing : ( )
Audio : ( X ) Must use Hitsounds
Background : ( )

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)


Azuki (4K NM)
00:07:956 (7956|0) mending delete aja, rata2 fokus whistle sperti 00:06:936 (6936|2,7140|0,7548|3)
00:08:976 (8976|1) pindah ke 00:08:772 konsisten utk whistlenya
00:59:793 tmbah note, ada sound disini
01:28:568 hapus slah satu, cuma 1 suara aja dan gak keras2 amat :3
Very Solid Pattern ^^b
Cinnamon (4K HD)
00:07:344 tmbah note?
00:54:487 & 00:54:589 missing note disini, cek 00:57:752 (57752|3,57854|2)
01:07:956 (67956|0) mending ganti jadi LN utk konsisten stream sound sperti 01:06:732 (66732|3,67140|0,67548|3)
01:20:609 knpa gak lanjutin jd stairnya aja biar cantik patternya, klu mau 01:20:609 (80609|2) pindah ke 4, terus 01:20:711 (80711|1,80813|2) Ctrl + G kan HD jg :v tpi ini optional aja
01:24:895 ini 2 note, sedangkan disini 01:11:834 pdhal sma musiknya? pilih mana ayo..
01:35:711 tambah note?
01:44:895 tmbah note, music + vocal disini
Nice Pattern
Chocola (4K MX)
00:13:466 mending hpus slah satu, suaranya gak keras2 amat
01:21:629 tmbah note high sound?
01:37:956 (97956|0,98364|0,98772|0,99181|0,99589|0,99997|0,100405|0) hindari LN berderet, mending ganti posisi, ksihan player lelah jari main bginian :v
01:41:221 (101221|0,101629|0,102038|0,102446|0,102854|0,103262|0) ini jg, biar bervariasi pattermu dan enak dimainin
01:53:160 (113160|0,113262|1) lebih cocok jadi stair pattern
02:02:446 coba sperti ini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2946855 lebih berisi endingnya lol
Awesome pattern
Nice Song & Map
take my star (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Muu-chan >.<)/ hii verniy chan^^ thanks for accepting my request :3
M4M from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( )
Mapset : ( )
Metadata : ( ) Very Detailed :3 yay xD
Timing : ( )
Audio : ( X ) Must use Hitsounds guide meeee T^T
Background : ( )

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)


Azuki (4K NM)
00:07:956 (7956|0) mending delete aja, rata2 fokus whistle sperti 00:06:936 (6936|2,7140|0,7548|3) sure xD aku pindahin ini ke v
00:08:976 (8976|1) pindah ke 00:08:772 konsisten utk whistlenya
00:59:793 tmbah note, ada sound disini iya ada xD tp memang aku buat dr 00:53:874 - ngikut piano nya sih :3 karena drum beatnya variatif :3 takutnya jd tambah susah :D
01:28:568 hapus slah satu, cuma 1 suara aja dan gak keras2 amat :3 sureee ><"
Very Solid Pattern ^^b makasih verniy chan ><"
Cinnamon (4K HD)
00:07:344 tmbah note? wah iya .w. added, sama sdikit rubah pattern :3
00:54:487 & 00:54:589 missing note disini, cek 00:57:752 (57752|3,57854|2) added xD tp kaya nya di 00:54:487 - cmn ada piano tile, ngga ada drumnya ><"
01:07:956 (67956|0) mending ganti jadi LN utk konsisten stream sound sperti 01:06:732 (66732|3,67140|0,67548|3) sure :3
01:20:609 knpa gak lanjutin jd stairnya aja biar cantik patternya, klu mau 01:20:609 (80609|2) pindah ke 4, terus 01:20:711 (80711|1,80813|2) Ctrl + G kan HD jg :v tpi ini optional aja i would keep this desu xD
01:24:895 ini 2 note, sedangkan disini 01:11:834 pdhal sma musiknya? pilih mana ayo.. oiya gomen >< added on 01:11:834 makasih verniy chan :3
01:35:711 tambah note?
01:44:895 tmbah note, music + vocal disini i would keep both :3
Nice Pattern yay modnya juga keren ><"
Chocola (4K MX)
00:13:466 mending hpus slah satu, suaranya gak keras2 amat i would keep them :3 itu kick+drum sama kaya bawahnya desu. Kicknya sama cmn mukul drumnya beda :3
01:21:629 tmbah note high sound? added :D
01:37:956 (97956|0,98364|0,98772|0,99181|0,99589|0,99997|0,100405|0) hindari LN berderet, mending ganti posisi, ksihan player lelah jari main bginian :v
01:41:221 (101221|0,101629|0,102038|0,102446|0,102854|0,103262|0) ini jg, biar bervariasi pattermu dan enak dimainin
01:53:160 (113160|0,113262|1) lebih cocok jadi stair pattern changed :3
02:02:446 coba sperti ini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2946855 lebih berisi endingnya lol yay xD awesome hihi. aku ada in sedikit perubahan disini verniy chan :3 setelah aku denger2 lg ^^
Awesome patternverniy chan juga ><"
Nice Song & Map
take my star (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
waa makasih makasih banyak verniy chan ><" ntah udh bilang brp kali, tp skali lg makasih~ yayyy! :D
Rivals_7
Hi~
From my queue
Let this Pony mod your map :3


Click me :3
Azuki

No issues I think. Udh bagus lah (mantap)

Cinnamon

00:20:099 (20099|1) - Ghost note?
00:24:997 (24997|3) - ^
00:30:099 (30099|2,30303|1,30507|1) - Consider to delete this. why is this so thrilling, for such a calm melody?
00:41:425 (41425|2) - No vocal here. consider to delete this
01:08:772 - vocal "mu" can be hearded here. add?
01:50:201 (110201|3) - should start here 01:49:997

Chocola

00:29:997 (29997|1,30099|2,30201|3,30303|2,30405|1,30507|2) - Consider to delete this. why is this so thrilling, for such a calm melody?
01:50:201 (110201|3) - should start here 01:49:997 (sama kayak cinnamon)
02:02:854 (122854|2) - ini ngikut apa?


That's it. Good luck to your Beatmap :) . I can't find any other thing to mod :3
Sorry for one day-ish delay. Abis ulangan susulan :v
Kalo bisa kasih alasan ya kalo kamu menolak Mod-ku ^_^

If that's okay with you *eeeep
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~
From my queue
Let this Pony mod your map :3


Click me :3
Azuki

No issues I think. Udh bagus lah (mantap) makasih banyak rival san ^^

Cinnamon

00:20:099 (20099|1) - Ghost note?
00:24:997 (24997|3) - ^ mereka ada kok^^ coba deh di playback. hihi.
00:30:099 (30099|2,30303|1,30507|1) - Consider to delete this. why is this so thrilling, for such a calm melody? disitu ada 1/4 piano nya ^^
00:41:425 (41425|2) - No vocal here. consider to delete this itu utk 1/4 snare :D 00:41:425 (41425|2,41527|1,41629|0) -
01:08:772 - vocal "mu" can be hearded here. add? unfortunately i am following the drums desu :3
01:50:201 (110201|3) - should start here 01:49:997 ano sebenernya disitu ada LN kecil dr 01:49:997 sampai 01:50:201 , cmn berhubung ada 1/4 drum beat juga, aku pake drumnya^^

Chocola

00:29:997 (29997|1,30099|2,30201|3,30303|2,30405|1,30507|2) - Consider to delete this. why is this so thrilling, for such a calm melody? same reason :D
01:50:201 (110201|3) - should start here 01:49:997 (sama kayak cinnamon) sama juga :D
02:02:854 (122854|2) - ini ngikut apa? itu utk 1/8 piano :3 coba deh diplayback. tp berhubung 1/8 di akhir itu bakal susah, jd aku lanjutin 1/6 drumnya xD


That's it. Good luck to your Beatmap :) . I can't find any other thing to mod :3
Sorry for one day-ish delay. Abis ulangan susulan :v
Kalo bisa kasih alasan ya kalo kamu menolak Mod-ku ^_^

If that's okay with you *eeeep
makasih banyak pony chan :3 hihi.
Aruel
Chocola [4K MX]

00:12:650 (12650|2) - remove
00:18:160 - add one
00:58:160 (58160|0) - remove
01:43:874 (103874|2,103976|1,104078|3,104078|0,104181|2,104283|1,104385|0) - I think. it's a ghost note. it fixed looks good :)
02:02:242 (122242|3) - finish it 02:03:670


Vanilla [Etlie's 7K MX]

00:08:976 (8976|3) - finish it 00:09:589 -
00:20:099 - add one
00:59:385 - to add one note,good for play I think :) '
02:03:262 (123262|2,123262|4) - finish it 02:03:670

Coconut [Etlie's 7K HD]

00:02:242 (2242|6) - move 00:02:038 -
00:04:078 (4078|6) - move to 4 and 00:03:262 (3262|6) - finish it 00:04:078 -
00:13:772 (13772|5) - ghost note... remove it
00:59:283 (59283|4,59283|1,59487|1,59487|4) - what is it...? i don't understand this note... :o
02:03:262 (123262|0,123262|4) - finish it 02:03:670 -

I hope this helps :)
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Chocola [4K MX]

00:12:650 (12650|2) - remove removed^^
00:18:160 - add one added :D
00:58:160 (58160|0) - remove i would keep this ^^ it same with 00:58:568 -
01:43:874 (103874|2,103976|1,104078|3,104078|0,104181|2,104283|1,104385|0) - I think. it's a ghost note. it fixed looks good :) yay there're a drum there :D
02:02:242 (122242|3) - finish it 02:03:670 sure thing^^ also added a short LN from 02:03:670 until 02:04:078 - i heard bass there :3
I hope this helps :)
thank you so much fresh san :D it is helps so much ><"
Frostcage
From modding queue :) t/315448

I will be modding all of your 4K diffs: Azuki [4K NM], Cinnamon [4K HD], and Chocola [4K MX].

Alright, let's do this!

1|2|3|4

Bacon colored parts = How was this not changed already?

General
I recommend you rename the difficulties. I understand you want them to have cool names, but if I were you, I'd remove the Azuki, Cinnamon, and Chocola parts, as well as the brackets (obviously). Or, you could say "4K Azuki", etc. :)
Same goes for 7K, even though I'm not modding them XD
Azuki 4K NM
00:04:895 - add note
00:07:140 (7140|0) - add note (try not to only map vocals)
00:17:344 (17344|2) - remove
00:21:221 - remove one note
00:56:732 to 00:59:997 - Mix it up a bit; perhaps change some 1,2 and 2,3 and 3,4 to 1,3 and 2,4
01:04:078 (64078|1,64487|3,64895|1) - remove
01:04:487 (64487|1) - move to 3
I feel this part might be too hard for people wanting to play an NM. Not because of difficulty, but it would just be confusing.
01:07:140 (67140|3) - move to 1
01:07:548 (67548|0) - move to 4
01:08:568 (68568|3) - move to 1
01:12:242 (72242|2) - move to 2
01:15:099 (75099|2) - move to 2
01:31:834 (91834|0,92242|1,92650|0) - remove (same reason as before^^)
01:37:344 - remove one note
01:37:956 to 01:40:813 - Mix it up a bit. Same reason as the last time I said to mix it up.
01:40:609 - remove one note
01:43:874 (103874|0) - move to 4
01:44:078 (104078|3) - move to 1,2, or 3 (preferably 2)
01:54:283 (114283|1) - move to 3
02:02:242 (122242|3) - change end from 02:04:078 to 02:03:262
02:03:262 - add ln to 1 or 2, end at 02:03:772

I mostly just tried to improve the patterns in this difficulty :)
Cinnamon 4K HD
00:25:099 (25099|2) - remove
00:27:956 to 00:33:058 - Why is it so repetitive? Mix it up!
00:52:956 (52956|0) - remove
00:59:487 (59487|3) - move to 3
00:59:589 (59589|1) - move to 4
01:02:854 (62854|1,63058|1,63262|1) - remove (too many many notes in little time for an HD!)
01:03:670 (63670|3) - remove
01:25:201 (85201|1) - remove
01:40:099 (100099|2) - move to 4
01:40:405 (100405|1) - move to 4
02:01:629 (121629|2) - move to 2, change to ln, end at 02:01:834
02:03:262 (123262|0) - change end from 02:04:078 to 02:03:772

Made tweaks, but overall, fun HD!
Chocola 4K MX
00:39:793 (39793|3) - remove
01:37:956 to 01:42:854 - keep the lns in the same place, but move the notes that happen at the same time as the lns around.
02:02:242 (122242|3) - change end from 02:03:670 to 02:03:262
02:03:670 (123670|0) - move to 02:03:262, change end from 02:03:670 to 02:03:772

I didn't really have much problems like I did the other diffs. Awesome MX! :)

And.. done.
I hope my mod helps you! Good luck!
Fubukicat

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Vanilla [Etlie's 7K MX]

00:08:976 (8976|3) - finish it 00:09:589 - this note is flowing well imo , it suit the bass sound so i'll keep that :3
00:20:099 - add one hmm noted , but this will be abit tricky to place so just keeping that how it is for the moment
00:59:385 - to add one note,good for play I think :) ' added :3
02:03:262 (123262|2,123262|4) - finish it 02:03:670 hmm no I think it's end at the good place also it's fine for consistency with other diff in my opinion

Coconut [Etlie's 7K HD]

00:02:242 (2242|6) - move 00:02:038 - This note actually follow this instrument 00:02:242 (2242|6) - 00:04:487 (4487|6) - ) so i'll keep it like this
00:04:078 (4078|6) - move to 4 and 00:03:262 (3262|6) - finish it 00:04:078 - since the LNs are on the same sounds i'll keep it like this
00:13:772 (13772|5) - ghost note... remove it hmm listened multiple times this note isn't ghosting for me , i'll note in case someone else poin it thanks
00:59:283 (59283|4,59283|1,59487|1,59487|4) - what is it...? i don't understand this note... :o it's for the drum ^^b
02:03:262 (123262|0,123262|4) - finish it 02:03:670 - Same for MX , I think it's good like this


I hope this helps :)
Thanks for the mod :3 it helps desu~ >W<b have a nice day
Topic Starter
Muu-chan

Frostcage wrote:

From modding queue :) t/315448 thank you for accepting my request^^

I will be modding all of your 4K diffs: Azuki [4K NM], Cinnamon [4K HD], and Chocola [4K MX].

Alright, let's do this!

1|2|3|4

Bacon colored parts = How was this not changed already?

General
I recommend you rename the difficulties. I understand you want them to have cool names, but if I were you, I'd remove the Azuki, Cinnamon, and Chocola parts, as well as the brackets (obviously). Or, you could say "4K Azuki", etc. :)
Same goes for 7K, even though I'm not modding them XD desuu :3 it is just same with this map. hihi. i did ask a qat about it and it is fine as long as i noted the real difficulty behind its name :3 click me~
Azuki 4K NM
00:04:895 - add note sure i assume it as the chord desu^^
00:07:140 (7140|0) - add note (try not to only map vocals) owo eh, im not mapping vocal desu. it is for whistle. Also there's already a note. I hear no additional sound in this part so i would keep it one note :3
00:17:344 (17344|2) - remove it has same sound with 00:17:548 - eventhough 00:17:548 has additional kick sound :3 i would keep this
00:21:221 - remove one note it is for additional cymbal sound^^
00:56:732 to 00:59:997 - Mix it up a bit; perhaps change some 1,2 and 2,3 and 3,4 to 1,3 and 2,4 :D yay it is nice desu. but as you could see, i change the pattern after each 4 white line based on the chord on BG music :3
01:04:078 (64078|1,64487|3,64895|1) - remove sure^^ i think it is too hard hihi
01:04:487 (64487|1) - move to 3 of course^^ hihi
I feel this part might be too hard for people wanting to play an NM. Not because of difficulty, but it would just be confusing.
01:07:140 (67140|3) - move to 1
01:07:548 (67548|0) - move to 4
01:08:568 (68568|3) - move to 1
01:12:242 (72242|2) - move to 2
01:15:099 (75099|2) - move to 2 i would keep those 'move' suggestion :D hihi
01:31:834 (91834|0,92242|1,92650|0) - remove (same reason as before^^) sure thing ^^
01:37:344 - remove one note i would keep this :3 since it has same sound with 01:37:140 and 01:37:548 -
01:37:956 to 01:40:813 - Mix it up a bit. Same reason as the last time I said to mix it up. desu :3 same reason
01:40:609 - remove one note here too^^
01:43:874 (103874|0) - move to 4 owh sure^^
01:44:078 (104078|3) - move to 1,2, or 3 (preferably 2) moved to 3 :3
01:54:283 (114283|1) - move to 3 i would keep this, for cymbal ^^
02:02:242 (122242|3) - change end from 02:04:078 to 02:03:262
02:03:262 - add ln to 1 or 2, end at 02:03:772 both sure^^

I mostly just tried to improve the patterns in this difficulty :) thank you so much :D
Cinnamon 4K HD
00:25:099 (25099|2) - remove i removed this 00:24:997 - :3 i didn't realize it before :D
00:27:956 to 00:33:058 - Why is it so repetitive? Mix it up! you're right :D mixed it up desu :3
00:52:956 (52956|0) - remove yay it is for drum~
00:59:487 (59487|3) - move to 3
00:59:589 (59589|1) - move to 4 i do same changes here :3
01:02:854 (62854|1,63058|1,63262|1) - remove (too many many notes in little time for an HD!) ahah yes i think so, i delete 01:02:854 and 01:03:058 - a note.
01:03:670 (63670|3) - remove yay it has same sound with before (additional cymbal desu)
01:25:201 (85201|1) - remove ahah sure^^
01:40:099 (100099|2) - move to 4 i would keep this :3 it has same kick with before
01:40:405 (100405|1) - move to 4 i would keep this too :3
02:01:629 (121629|2) - move to 2, change to ln, end at 02:01:834 i would keep this, since it has a ln already. and the note is for drum.
02:03:262 (123262|0) - change end from 02:04:078 to 02:03:772 sure, already changed this before :3

Made tweaks, but overall, fun HD! thank you^^
Chocola 4K MX
00:39:793 (39793|3) - remove sure^^
01:37:956 to 01:42:854 - keep the lns in the same place, but move the notes that happen at the same time as the lns around. i would keep this :3
02:02:242 (122242|3) - change end from 02:03:670 to 02:03:262
02:03:670 (123670|0) - move to 02:03:262, change end from 02:03:670 to 02:03:772 yay both applied :)

I didn't really have much problems like I did the other diffs. Awesome MX! :) thank youu ;)

And.. done.
I hope my mod helps you! Good luck!
yay thank you so much^^ it is very helpful :3 hihi
once again, thank you :D
Reba
Hi~ came to mod from queue

Etlie's 7K MX
00:12:446 (12446|5) - previous notes with similar sounds had 2 notes, delete one note.
00:34:283 - too many notes for a sound that is not that big, delete one.
00:53:466 cymbal sound, add a note.
01:11:425 stronger sound than the previous one, add a note
01:20:915 (80915|4) - no sound, but your choice to leave it or delete it
01:21:323 (81323|5) - no sound ^ same
01:43:466 delete one



4K MX
00:52:956 there shouldn't be 2 notes, the correct place is here 00:53:058
00:57:854 (57854|0) - delete

Good luck! :)
Fubukicat

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came to mod from queue

Etlie's 7K MX
00:12:446 (12446|5) - previous notes with similar sounds had 2 notes, delete one note. this have a little sound that is différent that's why
00:34:283 - too many notes for a sound that is not that big, delete one. OKay deleted in 5
00:53:466 cymbal sound, add a note. okay
01:11:425 stronger sound than the previous one, add a note Good catch
01:20:915 (80915|4) - no sound, but your choice to leave it or delete it
01:21:323 (81323|5) - no sound ^ same RE-arranged the part nice catch up thanks
01:43:466 delete one I use 3 notes for kicks+instru and here it's kick instru+cymbal so I think it should be 4 notes (i'll keep that)





Good luck! :)
Thanks for the mod :3 have a nice day
Shinzo-
Hi Muu >w<

MOD READY


From
Hattori's Modding Queue

Requested by Muu-chan

Muu-chan wrote:

Diff to Mod: any difficulty you want to mod :3
Column 4K
|1|2|3|4|


Column 7K
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

4K

Chocola [4K MX]

00:06:527 (6527|2) - i suggest u to end the LN 00:07:140 - here
00:29:997 (29997|1,30099|2,30201|3,30303|2,30405|1,30507|2) - i think this is a ghost note, but up to u, just suggest u to make like the pattern before and after this
00:57:854 (57854|0,57956|0) - avoid this jack
00:59:283 (59283|2,59283|1,59487|2,59487|1,59793|1,59793|0) - i think this shouldnt be 2 note since this not too loud but its up to u xD
01:02:038 (62038|1,62038|3,62242|3,62242|1,62446|2,62446|0,62446|1) - u might want to make some variation on here to prevent boring
01:03:670 (63670|2,63670|1,63670|0,63670|3) - 3 is enough, since this is not too loud but if ur ear say it was loud then its ok xD
01:07:140 - u can add note at 3 this is loud
01:07:548 - ^ 2
01:20:510 - i think something like this will be better
01:33:874 (93874|3,93874|0,93925|1,93976|2,94027|3,94078|0,94129|1,94181|2,94232|3,94283|0,94334|1,94385|2,94436|3,94487|0,94538|1,94589|2,94640|3) - i dont know, but stairs right to left will be better for human's hand. since the sound are reducing too.
01:44:487 (104487|2,104487|3,104691|3,104691|2,105303|1,105303|0,105507|1,105507|0) - u can make them 3 note, but if u dont want, then make 01:45:303 (105303|0,105303|1,105507|1,105507|0) - 3 note since it has high sound
01:57:140 - missing note

Cinnamon [4K HD]

00:02:038 - missing note, since u follow this sound after this
00:09:453 (9453|2,9521|1) - delete ! actually, this isnt 1/6 anymore, try to hear with 25% and u can know if it should be add a note 00:09:487 - here 1/4
00:29:997 (29997|1,30099|2,30303|1,30405|2,30507|1) - same reason with MX
01:02:038 (62038|3,62038|1,62242|3,62242|1,62446|0,62446|3,62446|2) - same reason with MX (to prevent boring)


7K

Vanilla [Etlie's 7K MX]

00:14:232 (14232|6) - move to 5 ?
00:34:283 (34283|4,34283|6,34283|5,34283|3,34283|0) - whoa ! -_- is that too loud so u make it 5 note ?
00:38:976 - actually u should add 1 more note here or 00:39:385 (39385|4,39385|0,39385|6) - delete one of it
00:39:997 (39997|6,39997|0,39997|1) - delete one of it, i didnt hear piano
00:54:691 - 00:55:507 - why the stream for piano is stop ? ._.
01:05:711 (65711|2,65711|1) - move 2 column to right to prevent boring
01:06:323 (66323|1,66323|2) - ^
01:07:344 (67344|6,67344|2) - 1 is enough except u change one of it to LN
01:08:160 - add note 4
01:17:752 (77752|4,77752|3,77956|3,77956|4) - 2 note ? it means 01:14:487 (74487|2,74691|1) - u should make them 2 note too
01:33:874 - lol u follow the piano before, why not anymore ?
01:46:936 - ^ if u didnt follow the piano, 00:13:874 (13874|6,13925|5,13976|4,14027|2,14078|1,14129|0,14181|5,14232|6) - then delete this
01:37:752 (97752|0,97752|2) - delete ! please, no more melody
01:41:017 (101017|2,101017|4) - ^
01:42:854 (102854|0,103058|1,103262|2) - kinda inconsisten... maybe 01:43:058 (103058|1) - delete this and 01:42:854 (102854|0) - this LN ends 01:43:058 - here for consistency with the pattern
01:52:242 (112242|5) - change to Circle
02:00:813 (120813|6,120813|0) - this is 2 note, then why 02:01:425 (121425|3,122038|3) - just 1 note ? please make it consisten
02:03:262 (123262|0) - i think this should be end 02:04:895 - but i dont think this is a problem xD

Coconut [Etlie's 7K HD]

00:04:283 (4283|2) - i hear nothing
00:07:956 (7956|4) - ^
00:10:201 (10201|1) - move to 7 ?
00:17:344 (17344|1,17344|0,17548|1,17548|0) - this 2 note, actually didnt fair with the MX but up to u
00:21:221 - add note 3 for cymbal
00:27:344 (27344|5,27344|2,27344|0) - 3 note ? i think isn fair with 00:26:323 (26323|5,26323|1,26527|4,26527|0,26936|6,26936|1)
00:40:609 - add note for cymbal
00:51:834 (51834|6,51834|0,52038|4,52038|2) - whoa 2 note only ? i think it same with 00:34:283 (34283|6,34283|5,34283|3)
01:24:487 - ^
00:59:283 (59283|4,59283|1) - i think u should delet one of it since this was HD
00:59:487 (59487|4,59487|1) - ^
01:07:344 (67344|6,67344|4) - delete one of it
01:13:670 - missing note
01:13:874 - add one more note for consistency
01:18:160 - missing note
01:19:793 - add 1 more note for cymbal
01:20:915 (80915|6,81323|6) - i hear nothing, delete this and try to re-arrange
01:29:691 - add note
01:33:874 (93874|3,93976|0,94078|6,94181|4,94283|2,94385|0,94487|5,94589|3) - this is kinda confusing, i suggest u to delete 01:34:385 (94385|0) - *follow the drum
01:37:752 (97752|2) - same reason with MX
01:41:017 (101017|0) - ^
01:44:487 (104487|6,104487|1,104691|1,104691|6,105303|5,105303|2,105507|5,105507|2) - it will be okay to make them 3 note
02:01:017 (121017|1,121017|5) - 2 LN ? 02:01:629 (121629|3) - then add 1 more LN here for consistency
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