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Traktion - Gid V (Cut Ver.)

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Buttercup
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on segunda-feira, 18 de julho de 2022 at 11:31:28

Artist: Traktion
Title: Gid V (Cut Ver.)
Tags: dnb drum and bass Shadren Damnae alacat Zer0- galvenize Asphyxia
BPM: 174
Filesize: 5512kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asphyxia's Extra (5,66 stars, 664 notes)
  2. Buttercup & alacat's Insane (5,17 stars, 553 notes)
  3. Collab Insane (4,52 stars, 513 notes)
  4. Damnae's Insane (4,38 stars, 496 notes)
  5. Easy (1,76 stars, 125 notes)
  6. galvenize's Extra (5,47 stars, 578 notes)
  7. Mimari & schoolboy's Extra (5,65 stars, 274 notes)
  8. Normal (2,22 stars, 228 notes)
  9. Shadren's Hard (3,42 stars, 384 notes)
  10. Smile (6,16 stars, 639 notes)
  11. Zer0's Expert (5,25 stars, 638 notes)
Download: Traktion - Gid V (Cut Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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bg by 久方綜司
collab insane wip
mimari wip
iMega
Gid V <3
Tarrasky
short mod ask in game

Geral

adiciona Short ver. ou algo do tipo no titulo, afinal a musica original tem 5 minutos, vc adicionou "cut version" nas tag mas tag n esclarece a musica
O sliderstack fica melhor sendo 1, pq esse slider aqui da Hard ta bem troll 00:25:227 (1) - 00:27:986 (1) - 00:30:745 (1) - 00:33:503 (1) -

Normal

01:10:400 (4,5) - muda essas 2 de posição, tipo, coloca um no lugar da outra, acho q o flow fica melhor
01:24:193 (5) - faz isso aqui ser reto paralelo a 01:24:883 (1) - , fica mais legal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2823316
01:15:227 (3) - isso pode ser um 3/4 começando em 01:15:055 -
01:20:745 (4) - /\
01:26:262 (4) - /\
01:09:710 (3) - /\, claro, é algo apenas optativo, ta bom do jeito que tá
01:15:917 (4,1) - essa sobreposição não combina mt com o mapa


no kds
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Obrigado, irei aplicar os que eu achar necessário.
Não acho que eu devo colocar short version no título, a maioria das músicas dnb rankeadas do osu são cortadas, e nem por isso está escrito ''Short. Ver'' no título xD
Secretpipe
Have a star! c:
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Secretpipe wrote:

Have a star! c:
thanks pipe o3o
hehe
hi

General

  1. you're gonna have people up your ass about spread. 2.8 > 4.6 is not good.

Asphyxia's Insane

  1. 00:45:917 (11) - blanket lol
  2. 01:15:055 (10,1,2) - i'd much prefer what you'd done here 01:09:538 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - to emphasize vocals as well as downbeat. consider doing something similar, maybe repeats? currently the big jump at 01:15:055 (10,1) - just feels weird as its not that loud of a sound. same with the one later on.
  3. 01:21:262 (5,6,7) - odd step down in difficulty.

Collab Insane

  1. 00:57:296 (1,3) - this was just weird to play. it seemed like it was stack leniency but its on purpose. i suggest moving 3 so it doesnt overlap with 1, if not stack it with 1.
  2. 01:26:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is so ew, so much obtuse ;_;

Shadren's Hard

  1. 00:44:021 (3) - try not tio have a clap on a repeat.

Normal

  1. 00:22:469 (3,4) - maybe not this rhythm, its weird to play this cuz the sliders are so short~ maybe http://i.imgur.com/POsA5gF.png
  2. 00:33:503 (1) - do a slider. right now you're missing out of important beats because of spinner recovery.
  3. 00:43:331 (6,2) - didnt really fit when you take the whole difficulty into consideration.

ya u definitely need something between Collab Insane and Shadren's Hard. something with that incorporate some 1/4 elements like triples but not as heavy as the insane, using repeats etc. also smaller jumps.

good luck
Asphyxia

handsome wrote:

hi

General

  1. you're gonna have people up your ass about spread. 2.8 > 4.6 is not good.

Asphyxia's Insane

  1. 00:45:917 (11) - blanket lol Can't help it, if I were to rotate it more to give the note more of a blanketish placement, it'd either touch the stream so it wouldn't matter or it would break the perfect star
  2. 01:15:055 (10,1,2) - i'd much prefer what you'd done here 01:09:538 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - to emphasize vocals as well as downbeat. consider doing something similar, maybe repeats? currently the big jump at 01:15:055 (10,1) - just feels weird as its not that loud of a sound. same with the one later on. I'll most likely change it if someone else also suggests it, but I decided to leave it for now because I like variation and I think that makes the map more interesting to play
  3. 01:21:262 (5,6,7) - odd step down in difficulty. Added some extra spacing to it, yay
Thanks a lot for modding!!

http://puu.sh/ghYK1/cafcfcf3dd.txt
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Tarrasky wrote:

short mod ask in game

Geral

adiciona Short ver. ou algo do tipo no titulo, afinal a musica original tem 5 minutos, vc adicionou "cut version" nas tag mas tag n esclarece a musica
O sliderstack fica melhor sendo 1, pq esse slider aqui da Hard ta bem troll 00:25:227 (1) - 00:27:986 (1) - 00:30:745 (1) - 00:33:503 (1) - Resposta dada no 3º post :P

Normal

01:10:400 (4,5) - muda essas 2 de posição, tipo, coloca um no lugar da outra, acho q o flow fica melhor acho que não muda muita coisa
01:24:193 (5) - faz isso aqui ser reto paralelo a 01:24:883 (1) - , fica mais legal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2823316 ok o3o
01:15:227 (3) - isso pode ser um 3/4 começando em 01:15:055 - prefiro manter o ritmo constante
01:20:745 (4) - /\ ^
01:26:262 (4) - /\ ^
01:09:710 (3) - /\, claro, é algo apenas optativo, ta bom do jeito que tá ^
01:15:917 (4,1) - essa sobreposição não combina mt com o mapa concordo, arrumei


no kds yes kds o3o

handsome wrote:

General

  1. you're gonna have people up your ass about spread. 2.8 > 4.6 is not good. Shadren's Hard is 3,27 now :3

Normal

  1. 00:22:469 (3,4) - maybe not this rhythm, its weird to play this cuz the sliders are so short~ maybe http://i.imgur.com/POsA5gF.png ok
  2. 00:33:503 (1) - do a slider. right now you're missing out of important beats because of spinner recovery. no changes ;w;
  3. 00:43:331 (6,2) - didnt really fit when you take the whole difficulty into consideration. no changes ;w;
Thanks all for mod o3o


Updated :!:

Normal and Asphyxia's Insane
BoatKrab
Shadrennnn!
xD
Shadren
handsome's mod

handsome wrote:

Shadren's Hard

  1. 00:44:021 (3) - try not tio have a clap on a repeat.

ya u definitely need something between Collab Insane and Shadren's Hard. something with that incorporate some 1/4 elements like triples but not as heavy as the insane, using repeats etc. also smaller jumps. I'm tried to map this follow spread ;( sorry, Nhawak

good luck

Nhawak, pls look at mod to fix issue with hs. Thank you for the mod, handsome

BoatKrab wrote:

Shadrennnn!
xD
hi :D
Nakano Itsuki
Hi
Yay, more dnb.

General
  1. As the previous mods mentioned, the difficulty spread from 2.8 > 4.6 is too large :?
Collab Insane
  1. 00:22:124 (3) Blanket this a bit better to 00:21:952 (2) ? The start of the slider could be closer to the previous note
  2. 00:24:021 (4) This beat seems pretty far from the next slider
  3. 00:40:745 (1) Move this up a bit, it's nearly offscreen
  4. 01:26:952 (5,6,7,8) This pattern... ;w; Also the last note seems awkward and far to jump to the next one
Easy
  1. 00:25:227 (1) Feels weird when this, 00:27:986 (1) and 00:30:745 (1) have slider end on strong beats in the song. Shorten the sliders to the previous white tick and add a beat there perhaps.
  2. 01:28:159 (2) Pretty inconsistent with the previous beats, probably this:
Couldn't really find anything on other diffs. Good luck. :D

I ruined my 69 postcount now
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Thanks thanks :)

I'll apply your mod soon
Kuron-kun
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Normal


00:22:469 (3,4,5) - Nas partes anteriores você tava seguindo um ritmo diferente do que você usou agora, que seria esse. Eu acho melhor você usar esse mesmo ritmo aqui pra manter a consistencia e ficar mais bonitinho. E pra não ficar sem opção de pattern, aqui uma sugestão.

00:36:779 (3) - O flow aqui ficou meio estranho, porque o slider tá curvado pra direita e a intenção é ele ir pra esquerda. É só mudar a posição dele com um Ctrl + H e ajeitar 00:36:262 (2) - depois disso.

01:07:986 - Essa parte antes do kiai é bem forte e você não usou nenhuma nota aí. Mesmo pra um Normal ficou bem vazio. Você pode colocar um slider 1/2 ou duas notas, você que sabe.

Shadren's Hard


00:25:227 (1) - The spacing here is low if you compare with the previous section. Even if the SV changes, the emphasis of the beat doesn't. I'd recommend putting the same spacing here too. Same goes for 00:27:986 (1) - and 00:30:745 (1) - .

00:35:227 (1,2) - This is the only part of this section you started a slider on a downbeat. It's better to change places and put the slider on the big white tick, instead of the red one. There is no emphasis on it. Example of pattern.

Collab Insane


00:21:434 (1) - Sempre quando vinha um tick brando grande você usava um spacing bem mais alto que o normal, aqui você não fez. Seria legal aumentar também e fazer um jump. Uma sugestão seria você simplesmente afastar o slider mais pra direita, assim não estragaria a blanket.

00:29:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a bit too much overmaped. You even used a really low volume to hide the sound of the note while on the other patterns you used 1/1 and 2/1 sliders. I don't know if it's a good idea, I'd recommend to use 1/2, 2/1 :c

00:35:055 - Essa seção tá bem legal, eu só não curti muito as partes que você não colocou jumps nos beats mais fortes, tipo 00:40:745 (1) - e 00:43:503 (1) - sendo que nos outros você colocou. Mas sei lá né, é só frescurinha minha.

00:46:262 (4) - E aqui você poderia aumentar o DS também ja que esse beat é BEM mais forte que esses 00:45:745 (1,2,3) - , mas a pattern de star ia pro saco. Mas se você quiser ver como fica, tenta mover pra algo próximo de x484 y96. Eu achei bem daora também.

01:16:607 (1) - Porra, para de usar jump errado. Aqui a enfase é bem maior que 01:15:917 (3,4,5,6) - e nem usa jump. Seu lixo!!!!!!

01:24:883 (1) - Same thing I've mentioned above about the wrong jump. This beat is really stronger than 01:23:848 (2,4) - and 01:25:055 (2,3,4) - and you used jumps on those, but didn't use on the stronger beat.

Asphyxia's Insane


00:18:676 (1) - You added a jump here 00:18:331 (3,4) - but you didn't here 00:18:676 (1) - , and the emphasis on this part is higher than 00:18:331 (3,4) - . I'd recommend increase the DS a bit to create a jump. Plus, you used a jump here 00:18:331 (3,4) -.

Lindo!
Topic Starter
Buttercup

StarrStyx wrote:

General
  1. As the previous mods mentioned, the difficulty spread from 2.8 > 4.6 is too large :? Shadren's Hard is 3,27 stars now :)
Collab Insane
  1. 00:22:124 (3) Blanket this a bit better to 00:21:952 (2) ? The start of the slider could be closer to the previous note I changed the slider :D
  2. 00:24:021 (4) This beat seems pretty far from the next slider I added CTRL + G in the sliders Krfawy not kill me pls ;w;
  3. 00:40:745 (1) Move this up a bit, it's nearly offscreen I don't see a problem, sorry ;w;
  4. 01:26:952 (5,6,7,8) This pattern... ;w; Also the last note seems awkward and far to jump to the next one Krfawy part xD
Easy
  1. 00:25:227 (1) Feels weird when this, 00:27:986 (1) and 00:30:745 (1) have slider end on strong beats in the song. Shorten the sliders to the previous white tick and add a beat there perhaps. fixed
  2. 01:28:159 (2) Pretty inconsistent with the previous beats, probably this: fixed
Thank you very much :)

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Near wrote:

(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Oi gato (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Normal


00:22:469 (3,4,5) - Nas partes anteriores você tava seguindo um ritmo diferente do que você usou agora, que seria esse. Eu acho melhor você usar esse mesmo ritmo aqui pra manter a consistencia e ficar mais bonitinho. E pra não ficar sem opção de pattern, aqui uma sugestão. ok

00:36:779 (3) - O flow aqui ficou meio estranho, porque o slider tá curvado pra direita e a intenção é ele ir pra esquerda. É só mudar a posição dele com um Ctrl + H e ajeitar 00:36:262 (2) - depois disso. ok (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

01:07:986 - Essa parte antes do kiai é bem forte e você não usou nenhuma nota aí. Mesmo pra um Normal ficou bem vazio. Você pode colocar um slider 1/2 ou duas notas, você que sabe. coloquei

Collab Insane


00:21:434 (1) - Sempre quando vinha um tick brando grande você usava um spacing bem mais alto que o normal, aqui você não fez. Seria legal aumentar também e fazer um jump. Uma sugestão seria você simplesmente afastar o slider mais pra direita, assim não estragaria a blanket. acho que arrumei

00:35:055 - Essa seção tá bem legal, eu só não curti muito as partes que você não colocou jumps nos beats mais fortes, tipo 00:40:745 (1) - e 00:43:503 (1) - sendo que nos outros você colocou. Mas sei lá né, é só frescurinha minha. arrumei (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

00:46:262 (4) - E aqui você poderia aumentar o DS também ja que esse beat é BEM mais forte que esses 00:45:745 (1,2,3) - , mas a pattern de star ia pro saco. Mas se você quiser ver como fica, tenta mover pra algo próximo de x484 y96. Eu achei bem daora também. não mudei, estragou minha meiga estrelinha </3

01:16:607 (1) - Porra, para de usar jump errado. Aqui a enfase é bem maior que 01:15:917 (3,4,5,6) - e nem usa jump. Seu lixo!!!!!! acho que arrumei sua biscate ousada

Lindo! vc (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
Obrigado pelo mod Kuron-kun gatinho ヽ(´▽`)/
Nathan
[Shadren's Hard]
  1. 01:27:296 (9,1) - Doesn't this deserve a bit of a jump too? It's on a downbeat with a finish
  2. 01:28:159 (3) - Curving this a bit could carry more momentum from the downward movement of 01:27:986 (2), it should also lead better into 01:28:676 (4)
  3. 01:10:400 (8) - ^
[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:21:262 (4,1) - Isn't the spacing here quite small compared to parts like 00:18:503 (2,1) and 00:15:745 (2,1)
  2. 00:27:986 (3) - Try stacking this under the head of 00:26:952 (1), it'll make spacing consistent throughout 00:26:952 (1,2,3)
  3. 00:32:469 (1,2) - Stack is off by 1 grid ;w;
  4. 00:42:469 (6,7) - Decrease spacing a bit here, it doesn't really make sense to have it as large as in 00:40:572 (8,1) when 00:42:814 (7) isn't as emphasized
That's it, nice map
have a star owo
Shadren
Near's mod

Near wrote:

Shadren's Hard


00:25:227 (1) - The spacing here is low if you compare with the previous section. Even if the SV changes, the emphasis of the beat doesn't. I'd recommend putting the same spacing here too. Same goes for 00:27:986 (1) - and 00:30:745 (1) - .

00:35:227 (1,2) - This is the only part of this section you started a slider on a downbeat. It's better to change places and put the slider on the big white tick, instead of the red one. There is no emphasis on it. Example of pattern.
Fixed all!

sukiNathan's mod

sukiNathan wrote:

[Shadren's Hard]
  1. 01:27:296 (9,1) - Doesn't this deserve a bit of a jump too? It's on a downbeat with a finish
  2. 01:28:159 (3) - Curving this a bit could carry more momentum from the downward movement of 01:27:986 (2), it should also lead better into 01:28:676 (4)
  3. 01:10:400 (8) - ^
Fixed all!

Thank you for the mods, guys!

Diff : http://puu.sh/gxsCI/69effe365f.osu
Topic Starter
Buttercup

sukiNathan wrote:

[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:21:262 (4,1) - Isn't the spacing here quite small compared to parts like 00:18:503 (2,1) and 00:15:745 (2,1) fixed :3
  2. 00:42:469 (6,7) - Decrease spacing a bit here, it doesn't really make sense to have it as large as in 00:40:572 (8,1) when 00:42:814 (7) isn't as emphasized no changes ;3;
That's it, nice map
have a star owo
thanks :)
phaZ
yay, again someone is mapping this song <3!
Topic Starter
Buttercup
I didn't give up o3o
I'll rank this later :3
hent2222
very good beatmap. I'm waiting for ranked :3
xLolicore-
Ayy more DnB! :DDDDDD
Edit: Shot a star. Hope it gets ranked ^^
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Let's work on it now!

Waiting gds
xLolicore-

Nhawak wrote:

Let's work on it now!

Waiting gds
Can I make one? O:
Pappy

xLolicore- wrote:

Nhawak wrote:

Let's work on it now!

Waiting gds
Can I make one? O:
Slots are taken.
xLolicore-

Pappy wrote:

Slots are taken.
Oh RIP ;w;
Topic Starter
Buttercup
sorry ;w;
Xilver15
The hypeeee
Irreversible
Hey I dunno which parts are mine anymore... and you deleted the description.
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Irreversible wrote:

Hey I dunno which parts are mine anymore... and you deleted the description.
sent via forum pm lel
Ciyus Miapah
hey

add galvenize diff here C:

edit: Foreverends is here! must download

edit2: the hell....
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Fort wrote:

hey

add galvenize diff here C:

edit: Foreverends is here! must download

edit2: the hell....
his diff isn't done xD
Foreverends
sorry.........QAQ
Topic Starter
Buttercup
.
Founntain
Mod From me ^^

Easy:

00:25:227 (2) - Maybe a Slider?
00:26:952 (1,2) - Same ^
00:29:710 (1,2) - Same ^
00:35:745 - Note Here?
00:41:262 - Same ^
00:42:296 - Something Like this?

01:07:296 - Something Like this were pretty nice?

01:13:848 (1,2) - Same Curves or Other Sliders? But not a Straight Line
01:26:262 (3) - Same ^
01:33:159 (1) - Same ^
01:38:331 - Maybe a Note Here?
01:42:814 (3) - Start that one here 01:42:641 - and let the slider end here 01:43:676 -
02:20:055 (1) - Maybe a Curve but the Line is Pretty well here. (Its an Idea)

Normal:

00:58:676 (2) - Slider Like This


01:01:434 (2) - Same ^ Only that you make it up

Shadren's Hard:

01:38:676 (1,2) - Make them Like these Two 01:35:917 (1,2) -
01:33:159 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:30:400 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:53:676 (5,6,7) - Single Tab Part Maybe?
01:56:434 (4,5,6) - Same ^

galv's Insane:

00:17:814 (2) - Delete this one
00:40:745 (1,2,3) - Curves?
00:44:538 (5) - A Curve is Welcome here as Well for a Sexy Flow
02:13:245 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change it to a Curve Stream.
02:35:228 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same ^ (maybe a Snake Stream)

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Thats From my Side

Good Luck with your map
Topic Starter
Buttercup
^
thank you, I'll apply it when the map is ready to modding/rank

edit:
mod:

raiko's dance

00:46:090 - seems empty, add a note
00:51:799 - remove it, there isn't any strong beat to emphasize this note
01:40:400 (3,4,5,6) - confuse rhythm, try to do the same rhythm that I made on insane
02:14:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - pls, this part wanna kill you cuz you made stacked notes, there is emphasis enough for you do full screen 1/2 mortal jumps 1/2 nice jumps

overmap things
imo u need to change these things cuz they are absurdly overmapped and can complicate the ranking process :c
try to put 1/2 beautiful jumps, will get cool
01:12:124 (5,6,7,8) -
01:15:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:18:676 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:21:434 (3,4,5,6) - do the same that you made at 01:10:227 (3,4,5,6,7) - cute non-overmapped 1/2 notes
01:23:503 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pls
01:26:952 (4,5,6,7) -
01:53:590 (5) - only this note
02:03:159 (5,6) -
02:12:814 (3,4,5,6) - 1/4 sounds starts only at 7th note
02:16:434 (5,1,2,3,4) -
02:17:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - pls
02:22:296 (3,4,5) -
02:24:193 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
02:27:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:29:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
02:32:986 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -

asphyxia's extra
sup
I collected some opinions and a lot of people think that your diff will be better ar 9,3~9,5 cuz there are MANY MANY MANY big continuous jumps and ar 9 plays slow and weird to read (I agree)
:D

edit2:
mapset done WOoOooOoOoOoOo
*mods coming*
not 100% done cuz it is missing kawa's sb but i think i can start to hunt mods uwu
ghm12


Boa sorte :3
Topic Starter
Buttercup
obrigado owo/
vitail
Gerawakversible's Insane

01:25:572 (1,2,1,2) - this is imposible

Nice song
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