Easy00:25:339 (3) - Shouldn't you add a New Combo here, since you were adding one every 2/1 big white ticks on this section?
Done01:47:235 (1) - In my opinion, as a player, would be better to move this circle to x220 y172, since 01:46:666 (3) - is leading completely to that direction. This would also improve the flow.
Hmm, I want to keep this consecutive movement 01:46:097 (2,3,1) - but I changed the following slider to create a better flow02:13:396 (2,3) - Wouldn't be better to add 2 sliders here? The vocal emphasis is strong, and you kinda ignored it with a 2/1 slider. You can do like you did with 02:06:571 (3,4) - 02:11:121 (1,2) - and etc...
The vocals are not on the middle white tick here so I think the slider fits them better02:16:240 (3) - The beat on the big white tick is really strong, would be really better to add a circle on it instead of ending a slider on it.
DoneTwin Normal02:54:913 (2) - Is this Finish here necessary? There's no emphasis or loud sound on this part, a whistle or even the soft hit would be enough :c Don't forget other diffs if you apply this.
I think it fits the guitar well.Advanced01:44:676 (3) - Instead of starting this on a white tick and ignore the vocal/make the slider a bit offbeat, you can make
this rhythm. Wouldn't ignore the vocal, would emphasize the strong beat on 01:44:960 -, would keep the consistency with 00:49:936 (2) - by following the vocal, and wouldn't be confusing. Don't forget to rearrange 01:45:244 (1) - DS if you apply this.
I'm following the drums here.. It's a bit hard to explain. I don't mind the slider ending on the big white tick since the main emphasis is on the white tick afterwards. I really prefer keeping this one02:25:908 - Don't know it's just me but this looks/plays easier than the pattern you make on Normal. Try to increase the DS a bit.
DoneHard00:56:334 (6) - What about a Ctrl + G here? Would improve the flow. Saying as a player.
Hmm I don't think it improves the flow.. I prefer consecutive movements in this map, where the movement continues over more than 2 objects, so I'd like to keep it01:03:159 (6) - If I'm right, you were stacking 1/1 notes with a higher DS than this, and this exactly DS you used here is for 1/2 stacked circles. Same here 01:07:425 (1,2) -
Nice find, thanks!