1. The Glorious (3,6 stars, 746 notes)

Euny wrote:

dear al♥ as your request! so, here i am♥

• General

1. found unused hitsound
   - soft-hitclap.wav

• The Glorious

1. 00:13:098 (1) - seems to remove clap for this back is fine to me.
2. 00:24:143 (5,6) - how about remove (6) combo and make 1/4slider start with 00:24:511 - this timing? i think its more fit for this part.
   
   
   of course pattern is your choice. just for sample. but i love that types pattern > <

   
3. 00:27:825 (1) - add whistle at this front. cause begin new part + vocal sound.
4. 00:39:606 (1) - same as above i recommend add whistle at this front
5. 00:42:183 (6) - pattern suggestion. rotate this slider with -57 degrees and place it on x158y154 . i think it gives you nice flow
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:37:223 (5) - should be add whistle at this back.
7. 01:47:716 (2,3,5) - trying put whistle to red ticks.
   
8. 02:24:900 (6,2,5,1) - lets make same ds for these just place 02:26:373 (2) - this on x448y306 ► Little DS variations up to +/-0.05x are fine, so kept.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:07:607 (3) - move it on x314y319 for better place with 03:06:871 (1) - this. ► not needed, barely/not noticeable during playing
10. 03:20:309 (5) - lets makes triangle flow. how about place this on x150y42? ► made something alike
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 03:27:304 (1) - i heard little cymbals sound from this back, so, how about add whistle at this back?
12. 03:35:772 (9) - add note here. i think it gives really funny jump for this part. also good tempo. ► nothing sounds here for a note ><
    
    
    if you have other nice patterns, take it. this is just sample

    
13. 04:47:011 - add timing point for here. s:c1 with 20%vol is the best. because its really calm part.
14. 04:56:569 (1) - add whistle at this front.
15. actually, i cant catch after this. because i'm really weak at bpm changing. how.. how did you found that timing xDDDD wow.. ► It took from me many days ><
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 05:50:068 (1,1) - i think need to break time for between these. its really hard with HRmod ► Hm...not really needed, even more for noob/Pro players (as they might be used to finish slider/note and enter spinning in a row -- even morew for those ones who are used to spin clockwise)

that's it
hope this is helpful...

1. I'm not pretty sure about the slider sounds, but I don't think some parts are fit for that
2. 00:24:511 (6) - whistle?
3. 00:51:387 (1) - finish?
4. 01:58:393 (5) - add whistle? clearly i head a double sound for that
5. 02:25:269 (7) - clap?
6. 03:03:925 (1) - strange. change this one into Auto (sampleset)
7. 03:06:871 (1) - ^
8. 03:15:707 (1) - ^
9. 04:23:448 (1) - remove finish (head)
10. 04:35:966 (1) - well well. looks like that will be useful for the fans there hehe
11. 06:11:995 (1) - Auto for Additions
12. 06:19:280 (1) - ^
13. 06:26:566 (1) - ^
14. 06:41:370 (1) - ^
15. 06:56:133 (1) - ^
16. 07:01:715 (1) - yeyyy the song ends with the fans clapping and shouting to the singer

eINess wrote:

Sorry for deley x_x

[The Glorious]

1. 00:24:880 (1) - this placement make bad follow I think. you can make better shape for follow.
2. 00:26:536 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is not a problem but It's not fun and good playable. change rhythm or make jump better.
3. 00:29:113 (3) - how about this? looks better to music
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:35:004 (3,4,5) - same above
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:104 (5) - Nagi, make 1/4 slider in 01:19:920 - here? owo ► No, it can't. (unless with silenced tail, which would not make sense here)
6. 02:12:751 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - same here ( 00:26:536 ) I guess you can make better here ► Hm... let's keep this piece of Larto ~.~ (I miss him ><)
7. 03:22:518 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same above ► Removed clap from 03:22:886 (6) and made some progressive spacing on 03:23:070 (7,8,9,10,11)...
8. 03:29:881 - and 03:30:249 - add note ( make 4 circle ) looks good to follow base guiter.
9. After 04:56:569 - try 40% voiume. kinda loud whistle >_> ► Made to 35%

good map but It's little awkward coz you matched only drum sounds. try follow background music :3

Good luck~

-Hakurei- wrote:

M4M request...

[The Glorious]

1. I'm not pretty sure about the slider sounds, but I don't think some parts are fit for that
2. 00:24:511 (6) - whistle? ► just removed the existing clap.
3. 00:51:387 (1) - finish?
4. 01:58:393 (5) - add whistle? clearly i head a double sound for that
5. 02:25:269 (7) - clap?
6. 03:03:925 (1) - strange. change this one into Auto (sampleset)
7. 03:06:871 (1) - ^
8. 03:15:707 (1) - ^
9. 04:23:448 (1) - remove finish (head)
10. 04:35:966 (1) - well well. looks like that will be useful for the fans there hehe
11. 06:11:995 (1) - Auto for Additions
12. 06:19:280 (1) - ^
13. 06:26:566 (1) - ^
14. 06:41:370 (1) - ^
15. 06:56:133 (1) - ^
16. 07:01:715 (1) - yeyyy the song ends with the fans clapping and shouting to the singer

GL!

• M4M! c:
  
  
  1. 1. 07:01:715 (1) - The Spinner dosn't have NC on it. Remove and replace it to fix this.
     2. Eh, The finish sounds a tad bit too loud and too short. Have considered using one
        like this? http://puu.sh/iylSs/5c40e894a9.wav
     3. I highly suggest you silence all spinners entirely, as the spin, the -bonus and the ending hit sound
        too distracting and loud for such a calm and quiet song. They drown out the music entirely.
     4. I also suggest you silence all slider-ticks. They sound to 'cringy', too noisy for this song.
  
  [The Glorious]
  1. 06:29:888 (4,1) - I really do not like these jumps. The 1/8 gap is way too small and feels very forced
     while playing. I am not going to tell you to change it, because it is justifyed to be there due to the
     guitar, and I wouldn't know how to fix this either. Take this more as simple feedback.
     
  2. Placement Issues:
     1. 00:24:880 (1,2) - It's a bit unfortunate but the flow you build up with 00:24:143 (5,6,1) - is
        broken between these two objects due to the 90° angle. Have you considered setting 00:25:248 (2) -
        to x:76 y:328? This seems to flow a lot better. The spacing would be then inconsistent between
        00:25:248 (2,3) - so this would obviously mean you'd have to rearrange this partially. Or maybe try
        something like this?
        
        
        Pattern

        
     2. 03:00:612 (9,1) - This would usually go under 'Nazi' but this map is so damn clean, that something
        like this should really get out of this map. Please properly stack the sliderend. It should be an easy
        and quick fix. same with these 03:29:881 (7,3) -
        
     3. 04:00:622 (2,3) - I find this spacing to be highly questionable. It's a really signifficant slow-down
        that isn't really suggested by the music in any way. If you want to keep the pattern (which looks nice
        btw) then you can hit ctrl+g a couple of times to do something like this:
        
        
        Pattern

        
  Short mod for a long beatmap. Nice Map. ~

Snaggletooth wrote:

• M4M! c:
  
  
  1. 1. 07:01:715 (1) - The Spinner dosn't have NC on it. Remove and replace it to fix this. ► done.
     2. Eh, The finish sounds a tad bit too loud and too short. Have considered using one
        like this? http://puu.sh/iylSs/5c40e894a9.wav ► thanks (:.
     3. I highly suggest you silence all spinners entirely, as the spin, the -bonus and the ending hit sound
        too distracting and loud for such a calm and quiet song. They drown out the music entirely. ► Silenced just the spinnerspin and kept the bonus (silencing both is unrankable)
     4. I also suggest you silence all slider-ticks. They sound to 'cringy', too noisy for this song. ► ok.
  
  [The Glorious]
  1. 06:29:888 (4,1) - I really do not like these jumps. The 1/8 gap is way too small and feels very forced
     while playing. I am not going to tell you to change it, because it is justifyed to be there due to the
     guitar, and I wouldn't know how to fix this either. Take this more as simple feedback.
     
  2. Placement Issues:
     1. 00:24:880 (1,2) - It's a bit unfortunate but the flow you build up with 00:24:143 (5,6,1) - is
        broken between these two objects due to the 90° angle. Have you considered setting 00:25:248 (2) -
        to x:76 y:328? This seems to flow a lot better. The spacing would be then inconsistent between
        00:25:248 (2,3) - so this would obviously mean you'd have to rearrange this partially. Or maybe try
        something like this? ► Rearranged in something alike-to-different way.
        
        
        Pattern

        
     2. 03:00:612 (9,1) - This would usually go under 'Nazi' but this map is so damn clean, that something
        like this should really get out of this map. Please properly stack the sliderend. It should be an easy
        and quick fix. same with these 03:29:881 (7,3) - ► ok
        
     3. 04:00:622 (2,3) - I find this spacing to be highly questionable. It's a really signifficant slow-down
        that isn't really suggested by the music in any way. If you want to keep the pattern (which looks nice
        btw) then you can hit ctrl+g a couple of times to do something like this: ► amazing !!!
        
        
        Pattern

        
  Short mod for a long beatmap. Nice Map. ~

Alarido wrote:

Well, let's push it up! Need modding and some attention in order to attain the needed perfection.