[General]
Please use Combo colors.
[Garven's Easy]
00:59:354 (3) - I honestly think you should place this 1/2 later, that rhythm is really hard to guess, and having the downbeat not mapped (here especially, it is really strong imo) appears really odd to me. Would be great if you could somehow map both, maybe with a 1/2 slider?
Too many red tick stuff, too long NCs, I'm not sure whether that easy is really "good". I mean, of course it works, but using that many red tick rhythms is really weird to play, especially in easy diffs. On the other hand, it offers more variation, so idk what to think tbh. As said, it certainly works somehow, and at least it's not filled with circles to follow everything unlike my easy / normals.
[inv's Easy]
Rename to Normal, no way this is an Easy. Complicated rhythm, stacks, unconsistent spacing (not in a bad way), well.
00:47:354 (2,1) - Yeah, you could go like "no matter what diff it is, the person playing this doesn't have to spam and miss because they're confused". Yet, I think that one is really misleading, and could cause frustration. Place at another spot would be the solution. If you rename it to normal it's fine.
01:41:354 (2,3) - I think that's in one measure and should follow a circle flow, not left right. move to 24 152?
02:29:816 (5) - neat!
[Broseph's Normal]
00:33:508 (1,2) - Make sure both blankets are equal.
00:42:046 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try something like this, it offers more movement and flows better as well. http://puu.sh/eigYD/50eb55dba8.jpg
00:44:354 (5,6) - Symmetric slider usage would really fit here! It looks neater, and seems more interesting to me. http://puu.sh/eih6N/1fbbfad8d1.jpg
01:11:354 (3) - That double repeater doesn't seem necessary, since it unneedly stresses the player. Try two sliders pointing to the bottom right (middle thing) to fix that.
01:13:200 (3) - Same.
01:45:509 (1) - 3 and 1 don't compliment each other at all. http://puu.sh/eihIn/1967fe869f.jpg Even if it needs some replacing, go for this, or something similar. Same for your copy pasted part.
The song has different parts, yet you kept mapping everything the same. No different stuff in the kiai, is what saddens me the most! You should try being more variating your stuff, to get it more interesting.
[Insane]
I'm bored, I wanna see the insane first.
So.. I've testplayed it, and it didn't play ~that~ great to me. The first kiai is what stood out the most to me, so I focus on that. (the rest was readable, so duh)
01:18:277 (2,3) - Hm, The flow between those is slighty interrupted by 3 being too low, for what actually needed to create a smooth flow here. So first of all, it would be good if you could move that a bit up. Secondly, what about a straight slider shape instead (being mirrored afterwards?) Her voice is pretty direct, and a straight slider seems more appropriate to me, because it's "directer". I'm bad in explaining, yknow.
01:21:046 (1,2,3) - Honestly, the song isn't that strong here, the jump is way too exaggerated. You should definitely lower that one a bit, and it will play better. A lot.
01:22:431 (3) - The songs flow stays the same, but the noise changes a bit, so what about ctrl + g to keep the flow as well?
01:23:354 (5) - Flows being very tight angled again here, would soften it a bit up. What about something like http://puu.sh/eijMp/244c83f9b4.jpg ?
01:24:585 (2) - 1) I think this is 1/3 2) Spacings too high to be readable, compare with your other spacing; it's almost the same, yet there's more time in timeline.
01:26:816 (5) - Bad flow, would be solved if moved up. Let me give you some coordinates
01:26:816 (5) - 256 32
01:27:046 (6) - 256 324
01:27:277 (7) - 256 144
01:27:739 (8) - 396 256
01:27:970 (9) - 116 256
^ try it , and let me know!
01:28:431 (1,2,3) - What about a same-length-triangle?
01:31:200 (6) - Again, flow things. something liek http://puu.sh/eikeB/9f81e6c257.jpg maybe?
Same to the other part, obviously
I'll check the hard later
Gl Maeglwn, I hope you can improve your map a bit!
Please use Combo colors.
[Garven's Easy]
00:59:354 (3) - I honestly think you should place this 1/2 later, that rhythm is really hard to guess, and having the downbeat not mapped (here especially, it is really strong imo) appears really odd to me. Would be great if you could somehow map both, maybe with a 1/2 slider?
Too many red tick stuff, too long NCs, I'm not sure whether that easy is really "good". I mean, of course it works, but using that many red tick rhythms is really weird to play, especially in easy diffs. On the other hand, it offers more variation, so idk what to think tbh. As said, it certainly works somehow, and at least it's not filled with circles to follow everything unlike my easy / normals.
[inv's Easy]
Rename to Normal, no way this is an Easy. Complicated rhythm, stacks, unconsistent spacing (not in a bad way), well.
01:41:354 (2,3) - I think that's in one measure and should follow a circle flow, not left right. move to 24 152?
02:29:816 (5) - neat!
[Broseph's Normal]
00:33:508 (1,2) - Make sure both blankets are equal.
00:42:046 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try something like this, it offers more movement and flows better as well. http://puu.sh/eigYD/50eb55dba8.jpg
00:44:354 (5,6) - Symmetric slider usage would really fit here! It looks neater, and seems more interesting to me. http://puu.sh/eih6N/1fbbfad8d1.jpg
01:11:354 (3) - That double repeater doesn't seem necessary, since it unneedly stresses the player. Try two sliders pointing to the bottom right (middle thing) to fix that.
01:13:200 (3) - Same.
01:45:509 (1) - 3 and 1 don't compliment each other at all. http://puu.sh/eihIn/1967fe869f.jpg Even if it needs some replacing, go for this, or something similar. Same for your copy pasted part.
The song has different parts, yet you kept mapping everything the same. No different stuff in the kiai, is what saddens me the most! You should try being more variating your stuff, to get it more interesting.
[Insane]
I'm bored, I wanna see the insane first.
So.. I've testplayed it, and it didn't play ~that~ great to me. The first kiai is what stood out the most to me, so I focus on that. (the rest was readable, so duh)
01:18:277 (2,3) - Hm, The flow between those is slighty interrupted by 3 being too low, for what actually needed to create a smooth flow here. So first of all, it would be good if you could move that a bit up. Secondly, what about a straight slider shape instead (being mirrored afterwards?) Her voice is pretty direct, and a straight slider seems more appropriate to me, because it's "directer". I'm bad in explaining, yknow.
01:21:046 (1,2,3) - Honestly, the song isn't that strong here, the jump is way too exaggerated. You should definitely lower that one a bit, and it will play better. A lot.
01:22:431 (3) - The songs flow stays the same, but the noise changes a bit, so what about ctrl + g to keep the flow as well?
01:23:354 (5) - Flows being very tight angled again here, would soften it a bit up. What about something like http://puu.sh/eijMp/244c83f9b4.jpg ?
01:24:585 (2) - 1) I think this is 1/3 2) Spacings too high to be readable, compare with your other spacing; it's almost the same, yet there's more time in timeline.
01:26:816 (5) - Bad flow, would be solved if moved up. Let me give you some coordinates
01:26:816 (5) - 256 32
01:27:046 (6) - 256 324
01:27:277 (7) - 256 144
01:27:739 (8) - 396 256
01:27:970 (9) - 116 256
^ try it , and let me know!
01:28:431 (1,2,3) - What about a same-length-triangle?
01:31:200 (6) - Again, flow things. something liek http://puu.sh/eikeB/9f81e6c257.jpg maybe?
Same to the other part, obviously
I'll check the hard later
Gl Maeglwn, I hope you can improve your map a bit!