About goddamn time I see this song on o!m hueeee. Coming for M4M o/
General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
This BG is kinda meh :/ I could try to make one, but I'm not too sure about my PS skills and I don't have that much time on my hands xD
[Normal]
00:04:337 (4337|2,4525|3,4712|3) - Move all 1 to left, should be easier to read/hit
00:44:650 (44650|0,44837|0) - Move to 2nd (same finger as LN on right hand, should be easier to understand)
00:41:650 (41650|2,41837|2) - vs 00:42:025 (42025|0) - Reverse positions
00:40:150 (40150|4,40337|4) - vs 00:40:150 (40150|4,40337|4) - ^
00:47:650 (47650|2,47837|2,48025|4) - Move 2 to the left
01:15:400 - I find this section quite hard for Normal since newbies have massive problems with LN+notes let alone at this pace. Just an observation tho, it's technically fine
[Hard]
OD/HP 7,5~7,8 //7 is just too low :v
00:41:650 (41650|1) - Move 1/2 earlier, you should stick to mapping one sound, not avioding that sound here and mapping it on 00:41:837 - // Applies to this whole section
00:54:962 - Missing note
00:55:150 - ^ broken flow :V
00:59:837 (59837|2,59931|0) - Move those to 67 maybe? (Stair-like pattern)
01:38:650 - This is too hard for Hard diff. I barerly combo it lmao
01:51:025 (111025|2,111118|2) - If you want to jack/shield it (I'm counting both notes as one here) it'd be more accurate to do it on 6th
I see some inconsistencies here, but I judged them as justified, because it'd be dangerously close to insane if you'd fix them. And flow is already very good
[LoliPew's Insane]
00:16:712 (16712|5) - Shouldn't this start at 00:16:900 - ? Ignore if notes on 1st and 7th represent that sound
00:16:712 (16712|2,16806|3) - Ctrl+G beause it's a bit too cramped on spacebar
00:19:337 (19337|3) - Delete
00:37:525 (37525|6) - Suggesting turning this note into 1/1 LN for the whoosh
00:40:056 - Add on 6th and move 00:40:150 (40150|5) - on 5th (suggestion)
00:41:181 - Add note
00:42:681 - Add note
00:44:181 - Add note
00:44:462 - Add note
01:01:993 - Add note (I can't even tell if that's bass or kick, that's how bad I am at naming things. I THINK it's a kick tho)
01:02:181 - Add note
01:07:150 (67150|6) - Start this LN 1/4 later and add note before it just like you did with other shields (btw neat idea of having shields instead of jacks)
01:07:900 - Why'd you skip this tho? (not counting LN ends as expressing the sound, dosen't feel good imho)
01:33:150 (93150|2,93150|1,93275|2,93275|3) - I think it plays better as 12 -> 34 -> 56 //That's just my opinion
01:39:775 (99775|1) - Ghost note, or at least I can't hear anything other than fading out sound (I always check on 25%)
01:40:712 (100712|2) - ^ If it's the tiny piano sound, add on 01:40:525 - same sound here
01:43:900 - Move one of those notes by 1 column, guitar pitch change
[Ex-ray]
Holy shit I keep thinking that it's Pew's diff lmao, talk about unfortunate word usage change it to Loli-ray please
Got a testplay for that too
http://puu.sh/cLpkT/dcdfba01db.osr
HP 8,2, won't hurt and will make spam plays less possible
00:01:337 (1337|4) - Hitsound volume on 5% and those two LN's are still loud as hell at least on my end lol, Consider starting that LN at 00:01:525 - because that sound abruptly gets louder around here
00:10:900 - Add note (some wierd sound alongside piano)
00:19:900 (19900|3) - Maybe turn this into 1/2 LN?
00:20:181 - Add note
00:20:368 - ^
00:21:400 (21400|1,21493|0,21587|1) - Make those 121 instead of 212
00:28:150 - Delete one, 00:28:056 - feels much stronger and it's also a 3-chord/Conflicts with 00:28:431 -
00:31:150 - Remove one, similar reason
00:55:993 - Add on 1st (chordjack for that strong sound seems appropiate)
00:56:650 - Consider adding 1/4 LN on 1st for that strong sound (idk if that's violin or something else, anyway same sound as above)
01:09:775 - Maybe 2 LN's instead of 1 for this entire section? It'll still be a rest setion, but not not too relaxing xD Also feels nice with those sounds
01:30:775 - 01:33:400 - Try adding little SV jumps for more excitement
01:52:150 - Add one
01:52:900 - Remove one
01:53:650 - Add one
I hope it'll make it to be the last Boss Map of 2014, Good luck~! o/ I tried