7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) · forum

Frobe wrote:
[FreeSong's Hard]
00:32:389 (4,5,6,7) - i think have better to little changing this pattern. applied.
00:41:284 (7) - i think that is better to if you add the whistle on the tail of the slider. ^
00:48:958 (4) - what do you think about the slider end to add a whistle? ^
00:49:830 (5,6,7) - what do you think of my opinion for this pattern? uhmmm. I don't quiet like the flow, but I made some changes to improve it
01:22:621 (1) - if you want this slider to have a better shape, how about moving x:452 y:232 I prefer mine because 01:22:621 (1,2) - form a perfect blanket
Thanks for your mod

Xinchii

Xinchii wrote:
[FreeSong's Hard]
00:05:179 (1) - Add whistle at slider start吧 , 00:07:970 (1) - 這邊都有加好
00:22:621 (2) - 雖然前面很多變速的NC了 , 不過這邊重音應該也繼續NC吧 , 順便強調這顆萌萌心<3 <3
00:56:807 (2) - miss a clap at start ? fixed
01:03:086 (3) - 這個還是放在(1)的尾巴吧 ? 感覺這首歌高潮的部分還是不太適合疊在尾巴 , 給一點移動感覺比較好虽然感觉读图可能会有障碍不过还是改了
01:05:354 (3) - 試試看放在x:84|y:124左右的地方 ? 有一點角度感覺也好玩 , 跟(1)的頭還有(2)的尾巴作一個三角感覺也整齊好
01:06:226 (6) - 這個可以像01:05:005 (2) - 一樣做成彎的 , 感覺比較好看赞!;w;
谢谢你的mod;w;

hea

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TitleUnicode:オレンジ
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-02-26T04:36:10+00:00

fixed all, thank you Frobe and Xinchii, and thank you for metadata help alacat san >.<

Euphoria wrote:
~~好想做个I~~
为啥不把最高难度命名成insane啊，这样自由度还高一点

因为他是个hard啊

JJburstOwO

183 posts

Joined July 2012

JJburstOwO 2015-02-26T05:51:07+00:00

monstrata wrote:
hihi~ from PM request . Good luck, Mei & friends ^^

[JJBurst's Normal]

Please check AIMod... There are some spacing issues that should not be present in a Normal.

00:13:900 (3) - Why not have the note at 00:13:551 - to keep with the 1/1 rhythm?
00:40:063 (2,3) - You should just mimic the slider at 00:40:761 (4) - . This part is unnecessarily overmapped imo. You could simplify it. Unlike below, these 1/4 sliders don't exactly reflect the melody very well.
00:43:551 (3,4) - This makes more sense because it reflects the vocals. ^
00:47:737 (1,2) - Check blankets.
00:53:668 (2,1) - Pretty big jump for a Normal... Plus this breaks flow because of the 180 degree motion the player has to make after jumping from 2, to the slider.
01:19:133 (3) - Why is there SV increase by 1.25x on a Normal :S

all fixed~

Normal

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hehe

1,959 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-26T16:55:24+00:00

hi there, beautiful song.

General

FreeSongs' Hard

00:20:877 (1,1) - NCs are not necessary for 'reading' since you can't really tell their lengths from a glance, consider removing.
00:20:877 (1) - uhm what's with the shape? use a redpoint https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826177
00:22:621 (1,2) - improve so that both sliderhead and start end at same place? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826184
00:25:412 (4) - hmm the sound is not on the timeline... not sure how you gonna fix this.
00:57:854 - suggest having a note here instead of sliderend
01:13:551 (3,5) - don't like the shape.. its very half-half. i think you should make it do that the elbow is more obvious

Hard

01:18:435 - maybe add note and spinner after?

Melt's Hard

00:08:493 (4) - do circle+1/1 slider like1 the rest?
00:28:202 - duplicate green line
00:33:086 - you missed a sound here~
00:43:551 (3,4,1) - DS is the same, but the rhythm spacing is different. 1/4 to 1/2. i suggest shift 00:44:423 (1) - 1/4 forward and extend it.
00:56:284 - why no kiai...
01:19:133 (1) - symmetry?

thats all, good luck

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-02-27T05:09:59+00:00

handsome

handsome wrote:
FreeSongs' Hard
00:20:877 (1,1) - NCs are not necessary for 'reading' since you can't really tell their lengths from a glance, consider removing. removed
00:20:877 (1) - uhm what's with the shape? use a redpoint https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826177 uhmm... yours is almost as same as mine
00:22:621 (1,2) - improve so that both sliderhead and start end at same place? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826184 fixed
00:25:412 (4) - hmm the sound is not on the timeline... not sure how you gonna fix this. not sure about this. shouldnt be a big issue since the note is only a little bit off
00:57:854 - suggest having a note here instead of sliderend sorry, i think it doesn't fit here...
01:13:551 (3,5) - don't like the shape.. its very half-half. i think you should make it do that the elbow is more obvious changed

Thanks for your mod!

upd

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: hey.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54714
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11458,28202,50528,53319,56109,67272,78435,84016
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ（アニメVer.）
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
BeatmapID:644989
BeatmapSetID:260797

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bgOAO.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-02-27T21:21:44+00:00

handsome wrote:
Hard
01:18:435 - maybe add note and spinner after?well i dont think thats really necessary
Melt's Hard
00:08:493 (4) - do circle+1/1 slider like1 the rest?
00:28:202 - duplicate green linefixed
00:33:086 - you missed a sound here~followed vocal
00:43:551 (3,4,1) - DS is the same, but the rhythm spacing is different. 1/4 to 1/2. i suggest shift 00:44:423 (1) - 1/4 forward and extend it.made some change here
00:56:284 - why no kiai... already have a spring at 00:56:109
01:19:133 (1) - symmetry?
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thats all, good luck

thank you for modding ><

hehe

1,959 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-03-03T14:26:29+00:00

hi

check again. no kds, i love this song.

JJ's Normal has different combo colours, keep consistent as the rest.
here's MP3 i made to fix 00:25:492 - late sound, offset 376
maybe spinner end consistentcy? i think its nicer to end at 01:26:807 -
doublechecking metadata would be good too

FreeSong's Hard
maybe change to FreeSongs' Hard? follow the name owo
AR to 8.5~ maximum, increase a bit because of patterns like 00:40:761 (4,5,6) - which are actually 190bpm jumps, a higher AR would be necessary.
00:08:668 (2,3,1) - nazi but you can follow the straight line pattern
01:22:621 (1) - you can just make this nicer, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845042 2 points for good curve. also remove NC if you like :p

Hard
01:23:319 (3) - really think that you should just use a 3/4, 2/3 or 1/2 slider here. the reverse doesn't sound too good when the vocals is not very loud and prominent. strongly suggest.

Melt's Hard
drop AR slightly, maybe 7-7.5~ i think its better since you do not use many 1/4.
00:08:493 (4) - no fix? pls fix
00:31:691 (3) - outside playfield
01:12:505 (1,2) - swap NC
01:15:470 (1) - 01:00:121 (5) - maybe circle+slider too, i know its vocal mapping but you can map both.

JJburst's Normal
delete greenlines http://i.imgur.com/N5am5Bv.png
00:27:505 (4) - split to 2 circles so 00:28:202 - is mapped?
01:10:063 (1) - i think the flow can be improved here, change the slidershape and following spacing. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845081

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-03-03T22:28:46+00:00

handsome

handsome wrote:
FreeSong's Hard
maybe change to FreeSongs' Hard? follow the name owo sure owo
AR to 8.5~ maximum, increase a bit because of patterns like 00:40:761 (4,5,6) - which are actually 190bpm jumps, a higher AR would be necessary. Increase to AR8.3
00:08:668 (2,3,1) - nazi but you can follow the straight line pattern fixed!
01:22:621 (1) - you can just make this nicer, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845042 2 points for good curve. also remove NC if you like :p fixed!

Thank you!

mi

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JJburstOwO

183 posts

Joined July 2012

JJburstOwO 2015-03-04T05:39:13+00:00

handsome wrote:
hi

check again. no kds, i love this song.

JJ's Normal has different combo colours, keep consistent as the rest.

JJburst's Normal
delete greenlines http://i.imgur.com/N5am5Bv.png
00:27:505 (4) - split to 2 circles so 00:28:202 - is mapped?
01:10:063 (1) - i think the flow can be improved here, change the slidershape and following spacing. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2845081

All fixed~ thx

Normal

osu file format v14

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Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ（アニメVer.）
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:JJburst's Normal
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2015-03-04T12:41:17+00:00

handsome

Melt's Hard
drop AR slightly, maybe 7-7.5~ i think its better since you do not use many 1/4. changed to 7.5
00:08:493 (4) - no fix? pls fix

its fine for me ;w;
00:31:691 (3) - outside playfield fixed
01:12:505 (1,2) - swap NC i add nc in the beginning of each sentences,same as 01:09:714 (1)
01:15:470 (1) - 01:00:121 (5) - maybe circle+slider too, i know its vocal mapping but you can map both. slider is enough for me ;w;

thanks for modding :3

SPOILER

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Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ（アニメVer.）
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:Melt's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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BeatmapSetID:260797

[Difficulty]
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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-03-04T21:49:30+00:00

to handsome:
I fixed the end part and made all spinner consistence now
about offset, i've changed to a better mp3 and reset the offset
about metadata. i am not an expert of such this ;w;w;w;w but i have asked alacat to checked for me and think it should be fine now. If you have any suggestion plz tell me <3

thank you, now update

hehe

1,959 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-03-05T05:22:41+00:00

wee

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-03-05T05:24:07+00:00

thank you handsome!!

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-03-05T05:58:16+00:00

~~mod coming sooooooooooooooooooooooon~~

minor things/suggestions
should really change
change or die

popping for everything in purple
[general]

offset -12, then add an 80bpm point on 01:24:190 - and reset your spinner end locations. should look like this. right now your spinners end on nothing. do this after applying the rest of the mod, otherwise timestamps will all be wrong
is there a reason why video isn't included?

[jjburst]

00:00:482 - remove the green line here. contradiction with ranking criteria because it does not modify slider speed
00:11:644 (1,2,3) - vocals on 1/4 here just make for really awkward reading between these objects. your spacing doesn't indicate anything about the difference between a 1 beat gap at 00:11:644 (1,2) - and a 1.25 beat gap at 00:13:040 (2,3) - . the best solution would be completely removing 00:13:912 (3) - and ignoring the vocals as you had up until this point since it just makes rhythm pointlessly awkward there
00:16:877 (3,1) - 00:28:737 (1,2) - 00:31:528 (1,2) - 00:55:598 (2,1) - 01:06:761 (4,1) - 01:09:900 (5,1) - you need to space all of these properly. explanation here
00:24:900 (5,1,2) - all of these need to be using 1.0x ds. going from 0.5x to 1.7x is nonsense
00:28:388 (4,1) - should swap new combos
00:41:819 (4,1) - 01:19:309 (3,4,1) - these should be spaced because switching between different lengths of stacking (like 1/4, 1/2, 1/1) and stacking underneath slider ends is not a great idea for the easiest diff on the set. an example of this being an issue would be this disqualification
00:42:342 (1,2) - 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - assuming you're trying to blanket, using a less sharp angle on (1) looks as lot better. ~~using a picture of a blanket to avoid any possible word confusion what is wrong with me~~
00:53:505 (1,2,1) - you can't stack both 1/2 and 1/1 in the same position like this. the best thing to do would be stacking 00:53:505 (1,2) - and spacing 00:53:854 (2,1) - because every other stack on the map is 1/2
00:54:551 (1,2) - should be 1.2x spacing
01:05:714 (3) - using a different hitsound on the tail would be more appropriate. you used claps for snare hits up til this point and there isn't a snare hit here. switching the hitnormal to the drum sampleset for the tail sounds fine, as you did with 01:06:761 (4) -
01:11:295 (2,3,4,1) - should be 1.2x spacing
01:15:830 (1,2,3) - should be 1.2x spacing
01:17:923 (3,3) - some sort of placement where these aren't overlapping at all would be best. if you insist on overlapping them, at least make the tails cleaner
01:19:319 (3) - same suggestion as 01:05:714 (3) -

[melt]

00:00:482 - is there a reason why you're ignoring the first piano sound here? you could easily map it in the same way as mei's hard with a stackish thing
00:04:668 (3) - there's no piano/vocal on the head of this. should just map the same ticks as mei's hard at 00:03:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:13:912 (6) - remove whistle on sliderbody. assuming this was just a mistake
00:10:250 (2,3) - what are these whistles following? cuz there are no vocals or piano on either positions (although 3 has some breathing thing if that counts lol). 2 has a piano hit on its head and 3 has a vocal on its tail, so using whistles in those places would be fine
00:15:830 (4) - same reasoning, tail shouldnt have a whistle
00:50:714 (1) - the finish on this seems really unfitting since the climax is actually at 00:53:505 (1) - , where you've already got a finish. may be better to just remove this one.
01:18:621 (2,1) - really should avoid this cross screen jump. moving it somewehre like this would be a lot more acceptable of a jump
01:19:319 (1) - this uh... doesn't end on the right beat and looks super messy lol. could just steal this one or re-do yours to be less of a blob
SPOILER
```
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```

[hard]

just like freesong, everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be better
00:03:272 (1,2) - shoudl really reduce distance here. the jump at 00:08:854 (1,2) - is fine, so making it the same distance as that would be acceptable
00:12:342 (3) - should really be snapped 1/4 later. exact same rhythm as 00:15:307 (3) - . hitsounds should also be the same as that position for 00:12:342 (3,4) - with whistles on heads
snapping on this isn't right. probably never will be because the sound isn't actually in time with anything that will work as a repeating slider. best choice would be to just continue with 1/4 there and ignore that instrument

[freesongs]

everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be better. star difficulty should be irrelevant
why doesn't the second kiai use S:C2? those claps sound way better than the snap sounds you have with S:C1 :/
00:25:598 (4,1) - i'm not seeing any reason why this gap is left empty. piano is just as consistent as everything else you mapped right before it, so this should be mapped as well

getting some mods on the normal after jj fixes things up may be a good idea. message me ingame or send a forum pm when you think it's ready

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-03-05T14:07:01+00:00

;w;
fixed timing first and i will do others later
about video, since the blueray is not put on sale now, I cant get good NCED resource so not putting a video there. but if there is a good quality video i will definetly put it on

JJburstOwO

183 posts

Joined July 2012

JJburstOwO 2015-03-05T14:53:59+00:00

pishifat wrote:
~~mod coming sooooooooooooooooooooooon~~

[jjburst]
00:00:482 - remove the green line here. contradiction with ranking criteria because it does not modify slider speed
00:11:644 (1,2,3) - vocals on 1/4 here just make for really awkward reading between these objects. your spacing doesn't indicate anything about the difference between a 1 beat gap at 00:11:644 (1,2) - and a 1.25 beat gap at 00:13:040 (2,3) - . the best solution would be completely removing 00:13:912 (3) - and ignoring the vocals as you had up until this point since it just makes rhythm pointlessly awkward there
00:16:877 (3,1) - 00:28:737 (1,2) - 00:31:528 (1,2) - 00:55:598 (2,1) - 01:06:761 (4,1) - 01:09:900 (5,1) - you need to space all of these properly. explanation here
00:24:900 (5,1,2) - all of these need to be using 1.0x ds. going from 0.5x to 1.7x is nonsense
00:28:388 (4,1) - should swap new combos
00:41:819 (4,1) - 01:19:309 (3,4,1) - these should be spaced because switching between different lengths of stacking (like 1/4, 1/2, 1/1) and stacking underneath slider ends is not a great idea for the easiest diff on the set. an example of this being an issue would be this disqualification
00:42:342 (1,2) - 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - assuming you're trying to blanket, using a less sharp angle on (1) looks as lot better. ~~using a picture of a blanket to avoid any possible word confusion what is wrong with me~~
00:53:505 (1,2,1) - you can't stack both 1/2 and 1/1 in the same position like this. the best thing to do would be stacking 00:53:505 (1,2) - and spacing 00:53:854 (2,1) - because every other stack on the map is 1/2
00:54:551 (1,2) - should be 1.2x spacing
01:05:714 (3) - using a different hitsound on the tail would be more appropriate. you used claps for snare hits up til this point and there isn't a snare hit here. switching the hitnormal to the drum sampleset for the tail sounds fine, as you did with 01:06:761 (4) -
01:11:295 (2,3,4,1) - should be 1.2x spacing
01:15:830 (1,2,3) - should be 1.2x spacing
01:17:923 (3,3) - some sort of placement where these aren't overlapping at all would be best. if you insist on overlapping them, at least make the tails cleaner
01:19:319 (3) - same suggestion as 01:05:714 (3) -
getting some mods on the normal after jj fixes things up may be a good idea. message me ingame or send a forum pm when you think it's ready

all fixed, thank you pishifat

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-03-06T03:23:36+00:00

pishifat wrote:
[hard]
just like freesong, everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be betterwell i just feel like it is a hard....it is not that insane right ;w;w;w;w;
00:03:272 (1,2) - shoudl really reduce distance here. the jump at 00:08:854 (1,2) - is fine, so making it the same distance as that would be acceptable
00:12:342 (3) - should really be snapped 1/4 later. exact same rhythm as 00:15:307 (3) - . hitsounds should also be the same as that position for 00:12:342 (3,4) - with whistles on heads
snapping on this isn't right. probably never will be because the sound isn't actually in time with anything that will work as a repeating slider. best choice would be to just continue with 1/4 there and ignore that instrument

others fixed thank you pishifat and your awesome mp3!

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-03-06T03:29:38+00:00

pishifat wrote:
[freesongs]
everything about this diff makes it seem more like an insane than a hard. renaming it to insane may be better. star difficulty should be irrelevant
why doesn't the second kiai use S:C2? those claps sound way better than the snap sounds you have with S:C1 :/ changed
00:25:598 (4,1) - i'm not seeing any reason why this gap is left empty. piano is just as consistent as everything else you mapped right before it, so this should be mapped as well mapped!

Thanks for your mod!

wa!

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Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2015-03-06T13:42:12+00:00

pishifat

[melt]

00:00:482 - is there a reason why you're ignoring the first piano sound here? you could easily map it in the same way as mei's hard with a stackish thing added
00:04:668 (3) - there's no piano/vocal on the head of this. should just map the same ticks as mei's hard at 00:03:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - its fine for me ;w;
00:13:912 (6) - remove whistle on sliderbody. assuming this was just a mistake fixed
00:10:250 (2,3) - what are these whistles following? cuz there are no vocals or piano on either positions (although 3 has some breathing thing if that counts lol). 2 has a piano hit on its head and 3 has a vocal on its tail, so using whistles in those places would be fine fixed
00:15:830 (4) - same reasoning, tail shouldnt have a whistle fixed
00:50:714 (1) - the finish on this seems really unfitting since the climax is actually at 00:53:505 (1) - , where you've already got a finish. may be better to just remove this one. fixed
01:18:621 (2,1) - really should avoid this cross screen jump. moving it somewehre like this would be a lot more acceptable of a jump
01:19:319 (1) - this uh... doesn't end on the right beat and looks super messy lol. could just steal this one or re-do yours to be less of a blob fixed
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thanks for modding

SPOILER

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pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2015-03-07T02:29:15+00:00

@Melt some things were changed by Mei since you replied in the mod that you fixed them, yet you hadn't. they were the hitsounds at 00:10:250 (2,3) - and 00:50:714 (1) -

he also changed the thing at 01:18:621 (2,1) - which you didn't reply to at all. if you don't like the change, reverting back to what you originally had won't work because of the illogically large jump from 01:18:609 (2) - to 01:19:307 (1) - . if you plan on changing it, let me see it before ranking

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2015-03-09T11:27:46+00:00

is this naruto?

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-03-10T02:13:55+00:00

title Fixed Orange(Anime Ver.)

Orange (Anime Ver.)

call me back

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-03-10T02:38:54+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
title Fixed Orange(Anime Ver.) Orange (Anime Ver.)

call me back

fixed ;w;w;w;w;

Genocide wrote:
is this naruto?

no, it is from 四月は君の嘘 which i dont know its english name

Last edited by Mei 2015-03-10T02:47:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

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HabiHolic 2015-03-10T02:44:47+00:00

Rebubbled

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2015-03-10T05:53:06+00:00

irc with Mei, fixed some issue

irc

2015-03-10 12:55 ZZHBOY: normal能不能移开几个stack啊
2015-03-10 12:56 Mei: 你先np我
2015-03-10 12:56 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/602865 7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [Melt's Hard]]
2015-03-10 12:56 Mei: 哦不用了我找到了
2015-03-10 12:56 Mei: .-.
2015-03-10 12:56 Mei: 妹贴？
2015-03-10 12:56 ZZHBOY: 煤铁的hard我觉得有几个地方也能动一下节奏
2015-03-10 12:56 Mei: hard不用移吧
2015-03-10 12:56 ZZHBOY: normal要
2015-03-10 12:56 Mei: 大哥说随便动
2015-03-10 12:57 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/618921 7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [JJburst's Normal]]
2015-03-10 12:57 ZZHBOY:  00:08:144 (1) - 要去掉nc吗
2015-03-10 12:57 ZZHBOY:  00:10:237 (1) - ^
2015-03-10 12:57 Mei: 加上吧
2015-03-10 12:58 Mei: 那个叠着的不加有点难判断
2015-03-10 12:58 Mei: 后面那个去掉了
2015-03-10 12:58 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-03-10 12:59 ZZHBOY: 00:53:842 (2) - 我觉得可以一开
2015-03-10 12:59 ZZHBOY: 移开
2015-03-10 13:00 Mei: 候
2015-03-10 13:01 ZZHBOY: 01:18:609 (1,2,3) - 这三个叠一起感觉有点jb
2015-03-10 13:03 ZZHBOY: 改吗
2015-03-10 13:03 Mei: 我在想怎么改
2015-03-10 13:03 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-03-10 13:03 Mei: 改了滑条但是感觉不太顺
2015-03-10 13:03 Mei: http://puu.sh/gu6Ls/402bf89aab.jpg
2015-03-10 13:03 Mei: 大概这样
2015-03-10 13:04 Mei: http://puu.sh/gu6OG/0e319bc4e3.jpg
2015-03-10 13:04 Mei: 或者这样
2015-03-10 13:05 Mei: 后面那个你感觉怎么样
2015-03-10 13:05 ZZHBOY: 不错
2015-03-10 13:07 ZZHBOY: 01:18:958 (2,3) - 但思考了下觉得这两个不应该stack
2015-03-10 13:07 ZZHBOY: 唔
2015-03-10 13:07 ZZHBOY: qwq
2015-03-10 13:07 Mei: 啥难度？
2015-03-10 13:07 ZZHBOY: normal
2015-03-10 13:07 Mei: 打包
2015-03-10 13:07 Mei: 那咋改啊
2015-03-10 13:07 Mei: 我可不想拉打滑条
2015-03-10 13:08 ZZHBOY: 还是第一种吧....
2015-03-10 13:09 ZZHBOY: 改了吗
2015-03-10 13:10 Mei: 说实话不太好改
2015-03-10 13:10 ZZHBOY: 就第一种吧
2015-03-10 13:10 ZZHBOY: 三个stack我觉得qat可以来吐槽
2015-03-10 13:11 Mei: http://puu.sh/gu79I/8626fb2fa6.jpg
2015-03-10 13:11 ZZHBOY: 就这样吧
2015-03-10 13:11 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/602865 7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [Melt's Hard]]
2015-03-10 13:13 ZZHBOY: 00:08:667 (4) - 我觉得应该是一个圈+一个1/1滑条啊
2015-03-10 13:13 Mei: 压得人声
2015-03-10 13:14 ZZHBOY: 00:08:842 - 我觉得这里音在滑条身上不太好诶
2015-03-10 13:14 ZZHBOY: 而且那里似乎有声a?
2015-03-10 13:14 Mei: 没
2015-03-10 13:14 Mei: 有个钢琴
2015-03-10 13:14 Mei: 算了我跟上吧
2015-03-10 13:17 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-03-10 13:19 ZZHBOY: 00:41:283 (4,5) - 考虑这两个移远点?
2015-03-10 13:20 Mei: http://puu.sh/gu7AF/d32b2497aa.jpg
2015-03-10 13:20 ZZHBOY:  00:58:900 (1,2) - ^
2015-03-10 13:21 Mei: http://puu.sh/gu7FZ/3e31b02eaf.jpg
2015-03-10 13:22 ZZHBOY: 01:00:295 (5) - 同00:08:667 - 
2015-03-10 13:22 Mei: 思考
2015-03-10 13:22 Mei: 你这差的好远啊
2015-03-10 13:22 ZZHBOY: 01:15:644 - ^
2015-03-10 13:25 Mei: 其实我感觉还是不改了
2015-03-10 13:25 ZZHBOY: 那就不改了
2015-03-10 13:25 ZZHBOY: 煤铁难度要ar7吗
2015-03-10 13:25 ZZHBOY: 没有啥1/4
2015-03-10 13:26 Mei: 7.5也行吧
2015-03-10 13:26 Mei: 我感觉都行
2015-03-10 13:26 ZZHBOY: 那就7啦
2015-03-10 13:26 Mei: 那就7吧
2015-03-10 13:28 ZZHBOY: 00:18:435 (3) - 这个算不算overmap啊
2015-03-10 13:28 Mei: 候
2015-03-10 13:28 ZZHBOY: 00:24:888 (1) - 连续3/4感觉不好啊
2015-03-10 13:28 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/595683 7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [Hard]]
2015-03-10 13:29 Mei: 很好的
2015-03-10 13:29 Mei: 这个真心可以
2015-03-10 13:29 ZZHBOY: 感觉这个就简单放两个圈反而更有感觉啊=.= 不改没任何问题 个人意见
2015-03-10 13:29 Mei: 不改=.=
2015-03-10 13:29 ZZHBOY: hou
2015-03-10 13:33 ZZHBOY: 01:23:493 (3) - 感觉这里有点奇怪啊
2015-03-10 13:34 ZZHBOY: 怎么现唱歌的唱歌都这么jb
2015-03-10 13:34 Mei: 那怎么改啊
2015-03-10 13:34 Mei: .-.
2015-03-10 13:34 Mei: 我原来用的1/3
2015-03-10 13:34 ZZHBOY: 那更不行吧
2015-03-10 13:34 ZZHBOY: 我觉得应该打爆711
2015-03-10 13:34 ZZHBOY: !!
2015-03-10 13:35 ZZHBOY: 00:14:423 (1,3) - peng xue tiao
2015-03-10 13:35 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/644989 7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [FreeSongs' Hard]]
2015-03-10 13:35 ZZHBOY: 碰血条
2015-03-10 13:35 ZZHBOY: 00:33:783 (8,1) - 也建议往下移点
2015-03-10 13:35 Mei: 我这没碰啊
2015-03-10 13:36 ZZHBOY: 我1024 769
2015-03-10 13:36 ZZHBOY: 8
2015-03-10 13:36 ZZHBOY: 往下移点毕竟没啥坏处
2015-03-10 13:36 ZZHBOY: 免得到时候有人来thread来放屁u
2015-03-10 13:36 Mei: 你说得对
2015-03-10 13:38 ZZHBOY: 我的妈
2015-03-10 13:38 ZZHBOY: soft-hitclap
2015-03-10 13:38 ZZHBOY: 前10ms我觉得最好都删了
2015-03-10 13:38 Mei: 思考
2015-03-10 13:38 Mei: 那里啊
2015-03-10 13:38 ZZHBOY: soft-hitclap
2015-03-10 13:38 Mei: 。。
2015-03-10 13:38 Mei: 不会
2015-03-10 13:38 ZZHBOY: 我弄好发你qq
2015-03-10 13:38 Mei: 候
2015-03-10 13:39 ZZHBOY: 00:33:783 (8,1) - 这也往下移点
2015-03-10 13:40 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/644989 7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [FreeSongs' Hard]]
2015-03-10 13:40 Mei: 移了
2015-03-10 13:42 Mei: 我上传？