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2015-03-01 04:41 -BlueSun-: i'll give you my map.
2015-03-01 04:41 -BlueSun-: http://puu.sh/gggQL/3283309511.osz
2015-03-01 04:43 -BlueSun-: 138.00 seems like the closest i can get.
2015-03-01 04:43 Cartographer: kk
2015-03-01 04:44 Cartographer: Yeah 138 is right?
2015-03-01 04:45 Cartographer: :P
2015-03-01 04:45 -BlueSun-: oh.
2015-03-01 04:45 -BlueSun-: *facepalmms*
2015-03-01 04:45 -BlueSun-: Sorry i'm tired xDDD
2015-03-01 04:45 Cartographer: nw lol
2015-03-01 04:45 -BlueSun-: its all good lol
2015-03-01 04:47 -BlueSun-: nw?
2015-03-01 04:47 -BlueSun-: oh.
2015-03-01 04:47 -BlueSun-: no worries xD
2015-03-01 04:47 Cartographer: :P
2015-03-01 04:48 -BlueSun-: ok
2015-03-01 04:53 -BlueSun-: Wanna be mates anyway? xD
2015-03-01 04:53 -BlueSun-: ACTION virtually shakes hands with cartographer
2015-03-01 04:54 Cartographer: Haha alright
2015-03-01 04:54 Cartographer: added
2015-03-01 04:54 -BlueSun-: sweet
2015-03-01 04:54 Cartographer: I'm livestreamming mapping atm so if you wanna watch and pick up some tips from watching feel free
2015-03-01 04:54 Cartographer: http://www.twitch.tv/magicmushies
2015-03-01 04:55 -BlueSun-: cool.
2015-03-01 04:55 -BlueSun-: not a lot of people normallt livestream mapping.
2015-03-01 04:55 -BlueSun-: im gonna watch.
2015-03-01 05:03 -BlueSun-: i've learnt a bit already. xD
2015-03-01 05:03 Cartographer: XD
2015-03-01 05:03 -BlueSun-: i'm such a noob xD
2015-03-01 05:03 Cartographer: You'll be suprised to find that this is only my 25th beatmap
2015-03-01 05:03 Cartographer: Most people make like 50-150 :<
2015-03-01 05:04 Cartographer: Before they have anything worth ranking
2015-03-01 05:04 -BlueSun-: well yeah...
2015-03-01 05:04 -BlueSun-: mapping is hadr but its pretty fun.
2015-03-01 05:04 -BlueSun-: hard*
2015-03-01 05:06 Cartographer: Yeah 100% fun
2015-03-01 05:06 Cartographer: learning can take a while
2015-03-01 05:06 Cartographer: some people get it some don't
2015-03-01 05:06 -BlueSun-: i've submitted 11 total beatmaps
2015-03-01 05:06 -BlueSun-: no wait
2015-03-01 05:06 Cartographer: Like I can show you an example of getting it vs not getting it, in fact it's in the map im doing now
2015-03-01 05:07 -BlueSun-: those are the graveyarded ones.
2015-03-01 05:07 Cartographer: 01:12:525 (4) - everything before this is awesome
2015-03-01 05:07 -BlueSun-: i have 3 pending beatmaps in total.
2015-03-01 05:07 Cartographer: 01:17:352 (1) - everything after that point to this point is just foundaion and just ignore
2015-03-01 05:08 Cartographer: 01:20:111 (1) - 01:22:525 (10) - same as above just ignore this
2015-03-01 05:08 Cartographer: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/647713 Metrik - Freefall VIP (feat. Reija Lee) [Insane]]
2015-03-01 05:08 Cartographer: You can see the difference in everything
2015-03-01 05:08 Cartographer: if you wanna have a look]
2015-03-01 05:08 -BlueSun-: yeah i'm having a look.
2015-03-01 05:09 -BlueSun-: wow you have the same amount of graveyarded maps that i do xD
2015-03-01 05:09 -BlueSun-: 11
2015-03-01 05:09 Cartographer: You'll find that the bad bits feel Linear or robotic, very grid like stuff
2015-03-01 05:09 Cartographer: ya lol
2015-03-01 05:09 Cartographer: I only have 3 full mapped songs
2015-03-01 05:09 Cartographer: the rest are like 1m or less :P
2015-03-01 05:10 Cartographer: If your looking at the stream half of those are empty
2015-03-01 05:10 -BlueSun-: i feel like this slider is a tiny bit ugly 00:55:801 (4) -
2015-03-01 05:11 Cartographer: Maybe, I think it bends into a nice angle
2015-03-01 05:11 Cartographer: flow -> aesthetics
2015-03-01 05:12 -BlueSun-: hmm
2015-03-01 05:13 -BlueSun-: so after around 01:13:042 it's just foundation?
2015-03-01 05:14 Cartographer: Yes
2015-03-01 05:14 -BlueSun-: i get it..kind of haha.
2015-03-01 05:14 -BlueSun-: imma test it now.
2015-03-01 05:15 -BlueSun-: your map feels very smooth btw
2015-03-01 05:15 Cartographer: I lay the rhythm foundation first and then place the patterns
2015-03-01 05:15 -BlueSun-: it has a nice flow.
2015-03-01 05:15 Cartographer: Just my preference of mapping
2015-03-01 05:15 Cartographer: and thank you.
2015-03-01 05:16 -BlueSun-: my maps on the other hand...
2015-03-01 05:16 -BlueSun-: lol
2015-03-01 05:16 Cartographer: lol
2015-03-01 05:16 Cartographer: we all started somewhere
2015-03-01 05:17 Cartographer: I'll link you something I made 6 months ago and it was the last map before this one
2015-03-01 05:17 Cartographer: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/474007 Fox Stevenson - All This Time]
2015-03-01 05:17 -BlueSun-: can you give me some tips on my map?
2015-03-01 05:17 Cartographer: Um I have it right?
2015-03-01 05:18 -BlueSun-: not that one...
2015-03-01 05:18 -BlueSun-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/650257 nano - Now Or Never]
2015-03-01 05:18 Cartographer: lelel
2015-03-01 05:18 -BlueSun-: i litterally just started snowblind.
2015-03-01 05:18 -BlueSun-: xD
2015-03-01 05:18 Cartographer: XD
2015-03-01 05:19 -BlueSun-: and i'm probably going to cancel it xD
2015-03-01 05:21 -BlueSun-: it doesn't feel like a good song to map.
2015-03-01 05:21 -BlueSun-: but idk
2015-03-01 05:23 Cartographer: SEC
2015-03-01 05:23 Cartographer: I'll look now
2015-03-01 05:24 Cartographer: I've seen A LOT worse tbh
2015-03-01 05:24 Cartographer: 00:16:017 (4,5,6) - Looks like you should keep the distance spacing consistent
2015-03-01 05:24 Cartographer: I havent seen the whole thing yet but I can imagne that it isnt 100%
2015-03-01 05:25 Cartographer: Are you watching the livestream?
2015-03-01 05:25 Cartographer: take a look at what ive done
2015-03-01 05:26 -BlueSun-: yeah
2015-03-01 05:28 Cartographer: obviously it isn't perfect
2015-03-01 05:28 Cartographer: but it's close
2015-03-01 05:28 -BlueSun-: yay
2015-03-01 05:28 Cartographer: 00:21:669 (2,3) - This is overmapping btw
2015-03-01 05:28 Cartographer: avoid it
2015-03-01 05:29 -BlueSun-: yes i figured i should have changed that.
2015-03-01 05:29 Cartographer: I'd just put a another slider there
2015-03-01 05:29 -BlueSun-: ok
2015-03-01 05:31 Cartographer: [http://puu.sh/ggjry/5e23c93d57.osu Here]
2015-03-01 05:31 Cartographer: I uploaded the small changes I did
2015-03-01 05:31 Cartographer: so you can look at them first hand and just see how things are
2015-03-01 05:31 -BlueSun-: thank you.
2015-03-01 05:32 Cartographer: Also, this looks like a hard
2015-03-01 05:32 Cartographer: And it isn't bad once you've fixed it up
2015-03-01 05:32 Cartographer: 00:41:669 (7,8,9) - Make stuff like this
2015-03-01 05:32 Cartographer: How it is on the stream
2015-03-01 05:33 Cartographer: Also what I've just done here
2015-03-01 05:33 Cartographer: 00:43:299 (10,11,12)
2015-03-01 05:33 Cartographer: Plays much much better
2015-03-01 05:34 Cartographer: Just learn where to use things where they fit the best
2015-03-01 05:34 Cartographer: other then that you've definitely got the general idea of mapping.
2015-03-01 05:34 Cartographer: Nice work!
2015-03-01 05:34 Cartographer: 02:36:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) -
2015-03-01 05:35 Cartographer: Did you forget to add combos here?
2015-03-01 05:35 Cartographer: 01:56:669 (5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Avoid combo spam like this
2015-03-01 05:35 Cartographer: 01:57:104 (7) - So delete the nc on this note
2015-03-01 05:35 -BlueSun-: oh yes.
2015-03-01 05:36 Cartographer: Reworking maps is a pain
2015-03-01 05:36 Cartographer: I've spent a while redoing the freefall one but its worth it
2015-03-01 05:36 -BlueSun-: yep
2015-03-01 05:36 Cartographer: and you'll have a very good chance of getting a ranked map without spending AGES figuring everything out.
2015-03-01 05:37 -BlueSun-: thanks :)