Hi
For M4M
[Beginner]
Good diff
00:51:164 (1,2) - Flows kinda badly
01:06:250 (1,2) - Doesn't feel good for Easy diff
01:17:222 (1,2) - ^^
01:28:879 (3) - NC
01:46:022 (3) - Slider can be improved, (quite a lot actually)
Also, why is there such a short break?
It feels kinda bad for an easy difficulty
01:50:136 (1,2) - Jumps are not allowed in low diffs
01:52:879 (1,2) - ^^
02:00:079 (1,2,1) - ^^
[Advanced]
SV changes are NOT allowed in Easy/Normal
Make them ALL 1.0 and remap the diff following this, sorry to say this, but it's highly unrankable afaik
01:22:708 (1,4) - Ugly overlap, change them, so they don't overlap
01:51:507 (4,1) - Try to blanket it better
02:07:965 (4,5) - Try to blanket it better
02:07:965 (4,6) - Looks really ugly, imo, change location of 6, or ctrl G them both, and set them at the same place, and then ctrl g again
[Hyper]
IMO, it's to hard for Hyper, you can easily delete some of the 1/4 streams, so the map gets rankable, as now the icons need to be the same as the listed difficulty, but I'm not sure how it works with the current names, as the difficulty is a little different, but please consult a BAT/QAT about this
00:24:764 (4,5,6) - Not really a fan of this, due to the reverse ending at big white tick, but it's up to you
00:30:250 (7) - ^^
00:49:107 (5) - Move to 98:183 (1 to the left)
Please map the 'break'
01:15:336 (3) - Feels a little weird, please change, as them ending at big white tick feels weird
01:16:536 (6) - Ctrl G? IMO this feels a little better, but up to you
01:51:507 (7,8) - Bad flow IMO
01:57:507 (5) - For me, it feels better with ctrl G
01:59:222 (3,2) - Overlapping, also, you know what I'm gonna say about the (3)
02:11:736 (4) - Make it stream stack? Even though the diff might be a little hard, the end feels weird, having no circles
[Another]
00:55:964 (3,1) - Overlap
00:57:164 (5,6) - Jump is a little big
01:00:507 (4,1) - Can be blanketed better, look at 01:00:336 to see (Start of (3))
01:11:564 (8) - Ctrl G
01:16:193 (5,7) - A really ugly Overlap, sorry, consider changing this part a lot (5,6,7,8) to make it look cleaner
01:18:593 (6,7) - Try to better blanket
01:19:622 (8) - Move to 408:272
01:50:136 (1,2) - Try to blanket better, example is spoilerbox02:10:022 (2,6) - NC them both
02:12:079 (5) - NC (?)
[Extreme]
Ar 9.5 What? Use 9.2-9.3
00:47:050 (8) - Move to 285:212
01:17:736 (2,3) - Red points don't feel good for me
Make them grey
01:38:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - WHAT? Move the circles to the middle of the sliders. Now it looks like they are 1/2 apart
01:48:764 - Add a break, gives more emphasis to the following kiai
01:59:222 (3,4,5,1) - Distance between those looks a little high, especially the (5,1)
02:01:108 (1,2) - Blanket better, move (2) to 257:249 looks good for me
02:07:965 (5,6) - Blanket can get a little improvement, move (5) to 255:190 (do the same with the (1) following
02:10:793 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ALL these sliders feel offbeat
Delete the repeat from 02:10:536 (7) - and move them all back 1/4 tick. Then add a circle at the end. you might need to turn it all a little for better flow with 02:10:536 (7)
Wow, this is a really good map!
Good Luck
For M4M
[Beginner]
Good diff
00:51:164 (1,2) - Flows kinda badly
01:06:250 (1,2) - Doesn't feel good for Easy diff
01:17:222 (1,2) - ^^
01:28:879 (3) - NC
01:46:022 (3) - Slider can be improved, (quite a lot actually)
Also, why is there such a short break?
It feels kinda bad for an easy difficulty
01:50:136 (1,2) - Jumps are not allowed in low diffs
01:52:879 (1,2) - ^^
02:00:079 (1,2,1) - ^^
[Advanced]
SV changes are NOT allowed in Easy/Normal
Make them ALL 1.0 and remap the diff following this, sorry to say this, but it's highly unrankable afaik
01:22:708 (1,4) - Ugly overlap, change them, so they don't overlap
01:51:507 (4,1) - Try to blanket it better
02:07:965 (4,5) - Try to blanket it better
02:07:965 (4,6) - Looks really ugly, imo, change location of 6, or ctrl G them both, and set them at the same place, and then ctrl g again
[Hyper]
IMO, it's to hard for Hyper, you can easily delete some of the 1/4 streams, so the map gets rankable, as now the icons need to be the same as the listed difficulty, but I'm not sure how it works with the current names, as the difficulty is a little different, but please consult a BAT/QAT about this
00:24:764 (4,5,6) - Not really a fan of this, due to the reverse ending at big white tick, but it's up to you
00:30:250 (7) - ^^
00:49:107 (5) - Move to 98:183 (1 to the left)
Please map the 'break'
01:15:336 (3) - Feels a little weird, please change, as them ending at big white tick feels weird
01:16:536 (6) - Ctrl G? IMO this feels a little better, but up to you
01:51:507 (7,8) - Bad flow IMO
01:57:507 (5) - For me, it feels better with ctrl G
01:59:222 (3,2) - Overlapping, also, you know what I'm gonna say about the (3)
02:11:736 (4) - Make it stream stack? Even though the diff might be a little hard, the end feels weird, having no circles
[Another]
00:55:964 (3,1) - Overlap
00:57:164 (5,6) - Jump is a little big
01:00:507 (4,1) - Can be blanketed better, look at 01:00:336 to see (Start of (3))
01:11:564 (8) - Ctrl G
01:16:193 (5,7) - A really ugly Overlap, sorry, consider changing this part a lot (5,6,7,8) to make it look cleaner
01:18:593 (6,7) - Try to better blanket
01:19:622 (8) - Move to 408:272
01:50:136 (1,2) - Try to blanket better, example is spoilerbox02:10:022 (2,6) - NC them both
02:12:079 (5) - NC (?)
[Extreme]
Ar 9.5 What? Use 9.2-9.3
00:47:050 (8) - Move to 285:212
01:17:736 (2,3) - Red points don't feel good for me
Make them grey
01:38:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - WHAT? Move the circles to the middle of the sliders. Now it looks like they are 1/2 apart
01:48:764 - Add a break, gives more emphasis to the following kiai
01:59:222 (3,4,5,1) - Distance between those looks a little high, especially the (5,1)
02:01:108 (1,2) - Blanket better, move (2) to 257:249 looks good for me
02:07:965 (5,6) - Blanket can get a little improvement, move (5) to 255:190 (do the same with the (1) following
02:10:793 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ALL these sliders feel offbeat
Delete the repeat from 02:10:536 (7) - and move them all back 1/4 tick. Then add a circle at the end. you might need to turn it all a little for better flow with 02:10:536 (7)
Wow, this is a really good map!
Good Luck