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Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月14日 at PM 12:26:30

Artist: ETIA.
Title: Nihonshiki Koukaku-Oukaranman-
Tags: puxtu
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3962kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.10 - 4Key (3.32 stars, 1081 notes)
  2. Lv.15 - 4Key (4.16 stars, 1402 notes)
  3. puxtu's Lv.6 - 4Key (1.97 stars, 610 notes)
Download: ETIA. - Nihonshiki Koukaku-Oukaranman-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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HOLY SHIT
Critical_Star
woooots~
Icing_wind
1/2/3/4/
[Lv.15]

00:05:535 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2602751
00:07:249 (7249|2) - 移到2
00:10:592 - 补一个


表示太难了qw
不过图不错。
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

Icing_wind wrote:

1/2/3/4/
[Lv.15]

00:05:535 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2602751 這邊還是留著 前面不取這音
00:07:249 (7249|2) - 移到2 Fixed
00:10:592 - 补一个 同 (1)


表示太难了qw
不过图不错。
吃翔掰 謝謝IC Mod :)
hokin1995
聽說這裡好像可以騙kudosu
以前那個版本不好嗎?為啥刪掉了?
[General]
TN啊 :o 檢查一下AIMOD : http://puu.sh/f0NRf/8978a15cdc.png
column : 1|2|3|4
[Lv.15]
00:01:420 (1420|2,1420|1,1421|0,1421|3) - 弄個面條 怎樣?

00:09:649 - 再加一個音吧(? 因為00:06:906 (6906|2,6906|3,6906|0)及00:12:391 (12391|0,12391|1,12391|2)等都是用3 notes

00:18:049 (18049|1) - 移到4

00:45:563 (45563|1) - 好像沒音

00:45:906 (45906|3) - ^

00:46:249 (46249|1) - ^

01:02:878 (62878|1) - add 1 notes

01:26:449 - add 1 notes 好像會好一點(?

01:51:135 (111135|2,111135|3,111135|1,111135|0) - 這裡我想用不著4個notes吧

01:52:506 (112506|0,112506|3,112506|1,112506|2) - ^

01:53:878 (113878|0,113878|2,113878|1,113878|3) - ^

順便有空也幫我摸摸圖好嗎w?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/215305
puxtu
HOLY SHIT
Ayachi-
HOLY SHIT
Akasha-
ETIA. - OukaRanman


Here come of the offset checking <(") your choice if you think its the right ~

BPM: 175.000
Offset: 1429


Good luck then ~ I love the song, taken 2 of 7k diffs <(") thanks
SReisen
hii

Column : 1 2 3 4

open it
[Lv.15]

00:08:971 - add note
00:16:686 - here got kick , care to add?
00:19:771 - ^
00:22:686 - add here , loud sound , snare :v
00:30:143 (30143|0) - remove
00:30:656 (30656|1) - ^
00:33:142 (33142|1,33314|2,33656|1) - ctrl + h
00:35:628 - missing note
00:46:086 - add to 4
01:02:114 - add , snare
01:02:800 - add and , - 01:02:886 - here also can add :3
01:03:486 - add
01:04:857 - ^snare
01:28:857 - add to 4
01:30:228 - ^ to 1
01:31:428 - ^to 1

sorry for late , no kds if this does not help
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

hokin1995 wrote:

聽說這裡好像可以騙kudosu
以前那個版本不好嗎?為啥刪掉了? 以前的太Shit
[General]
TN啊 :o 檢查一下AIMOD : http://puu.sh/f0NRf/8978a15cdc.png 這個Bug
column : 1|2|3|4
[Lv.15]
00:01:420 (1420|2,1420|1,1421|0,1421|3) - 弄個面條 怎樣? 這邊考慮很久 看看其他Modder怎麼說再改好了

00:09:649 - 再加一個音吧(? 因為00:06:906 (6906|2,6906|3,6906|0)及00:12:391 (12391|0,12391|1,12391|2)等都是用3 notes Fixed

00:18:049 (18049|1) - 移到4 Fixed

00:45:563 (45563|1) - 好像沒音 有 只是電音不明顯

00:45:906 (45906|3) - ^ Same

00:46:249 (46249|1) - ^ Same

01:02:878 (62878|1) - add 1 notes Fixed

01:26:449 - add 1 notes 好像會好一點(? 這邊還是取主音為主好

01:51:135 (111135|2,111135|3,111135|1,111135|0) - 這裡我想用不著4個notes吧 這邊都是故意弄的hhhh (run

01:52:506 (112506|0,112506|3,112506|1,112506|2) - ^ Same

01:53:878 (113878|0,113878|2,113878|1,113878|3) - ^ Same

順便有空也幫我摸摸圖好嗎w?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/215305
Thanks Mod

moemoe HK :)
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

hii

Column : 1 2 3 4

open it
[Lv.15]

00:08:971 - add note
00:16:686 - here got kick , care to add?
00:19:771 - ^
00:22:686 - add here , loud sound , snare :v
00:30:143 (30143|0) - remove
00:30:656 (30656|1) - ^
00:33:142 (33142|1,33314|2,33656|1) - ctrl + h
00:35:628 - missing note
00:46:086 - add to 4
01:02:114 - add , snare
01:02:800 - add and , - 01:02:886 - here also can add :3
01:03:486 - add
01:04:857 - ^snare
01:28:857 - add to 4
01:30:228 - ^ to 1
01:31:428 - ^to 1

sorry for late , no kds if this does not help
Sorry i forgot what i fixedMost Fixed

:) Thanks for mod . help a lot 8-)
Zan-
HOLY SHIT

m4m

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

mod
[Lv.15]
00:05:199 (5199|0,5199|2) - make it 2,4 | different pitch

00:06:057 - add note to 2

00:06:571 (6571|1) - move to 1

00:07:771 (7771|2,7943|3) - ctrl +J

00:09:828 (9828|2,9999|1,10171|0) - move to right by 1 col.

o wait... i ruin your pattern in this section, move next

00:36:742 (36742|0,37085|1) - delete la | double is enough same with 00:36:400 - 00:36:057 - e.t.c
00:39:485 (39485|3,39828|2) - ^

00:44:114 (44114|3) - move to 3 | too much notes in 4 recently

00:44:971 (44971|1) - delete
00:46:171 (46171|0) - ^
00:50:799 (50799|0) - ^

00:52:342 (52342|2,52428|2,52514|3,52514|1,52514|0) - ctrl + H ;w;

00:59:371 (59371|3,59456|3) - delete | nak is killer

01:03:656 (63656|1) - move to 1 | col.1 need notes

01:17:885 (77885|0) - move to 3? | pitch i guess

01:27:828 (87828|2) - move to 2

01:43:256 (103256|2) - move to 2 | spare our fingers

01:44:628 (104628|0) - delete | not too loud for triple

01:56:457 - triple here
LeiN-
>^<

Line : 1 2 3 4

[Lv.15]
00:09:485 (9485|3,9571|3) - move to 3
00:09:657 (9657|2) - move to 4

00:29:971 (29971|2) - move to 00:29:886 - here's 2
00:30:056 (30056|3) - move to 3

00:35:456 (35456|3) - move to 00:35:371 - here

00:43:514 (43514|1) - move to 00:43:600 - here

00:59:371 - is here really 48th? if not, I suggest to use 32nd. (also 32nd is deadly enough lol)
but if you are correct, http://puu.sh/fjlHH/7fa5eda4f0.png suggest this

01:25:943 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660701

01:28:686 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660717

01:31:600 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660727 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660731 (I prefer the first one)

01:43:128 (103128|1,103214|0) - delete
01:43:257 - add on 1

01:54:100 (114100|3,114186|2) - delete
01:54:143 (114143|0) - move to 3
01:54:228 - add 3
01:54:399 (114399|2,114485|2,114571|1) - Ctrl + H
01:54:742 (114742|2) - move to 2
01:54:828 (114828|3) - move to 3
01:54:914 (114914|2) - move to 4
01:55:085 (115085|3) - move to 3

01:55:942 (115942|1) - move to 1

done :) GL
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

LeiN- wrote:

>^<

Line : 1 2 3 4

[Lv.15]
00:09:485 (9485|3,9571|3) - move to 3
00:09:657 (9657|2) - move to 4

00:29:971 (29971|2) - move to 00:29:886 - here's 2
00:30:056 (30056|3) - move to 3

00:35:456 (35456|3) - move to 00:35:371 - here

00:43:514 (43514|1) - move to 00:43:600 - here

00:59:371 - is here really 48th? if not, I suggest to use 32nd. (also 32nd is deadly enough lol)
but if you are correct, http://puu.sh/fjlHH/7fa5eda4f0.png suggest this

01:25:943 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660701

01:28:686 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660717

01:31:600 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660727 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2660731 (I prefer the first one) NICE

01:43:128 (103128|1,103214|0) - delete X . Keep follow the sound
01:43:257 - add on 1 Same

01:54:100 (114100|3,114186|2) - delete X . Keep follow the sound
01:54:143 (114143|0) - move to 3 Same
01:54:228 - add 3 Same
01:54:399 (114399|2,114485|2,114571|1) - Ctrl + H
01:54:742 (114742|2) - move to 2
01:54:828 (114828|3) - move to 3
01:54:914 (114914|2) - move to 4
01:55:085 (115085|3) - move to 3

01:55:942 (115942|1) - move to 1

done :) GL
:) Thanks for mod my dear 8-)
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

Zan - wrote:

HOLY SHIT

m4m

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

mod
[Lv.15]
00:05:199 (5199|0,5199|2) - make it 2,4 | different pitch Move to 23

00:06:057 - add note to 2 X . For follow drum sound

00:06:571 (6571|1) - move to 1 Same

00:07:771 (7771|2,7943|3) - ctrl +J +H . Fixed

00:09:828 (9828|2,9999|1,10171|0) - move to right by 1 col. X. Pattern

o wait... i ruin your pattern in this section, move next

00:36:742 (36742|0,37085|1) - delete la | double is enough same with 00:36:400 - 00:36:057 - e.t.c Fixed
00:39:485 (39485|3,39828|2) - ^ X. Claps here

00:44:114 (44114|3) - move to 3 | too much notes in 4 recently LOL Ok fixed

00:44:971 (44971|1) - delete X. Clap
00:46:171 (46171|0) - ^ X. For the dadada sound (wtf)
00:50:799 (50799|0) - ^ Fixed NICE one

00:52:342 (52342|2,52428|2,52514|3,52514|1,52514|0) - ctrl + H ;w; X. For music

00:59:371 (59371|3,59456|3) - delete | nak is killer X. LOL

01:03:656 (63656|1) - move to 1 | col.1 need notes Fixed

01:17:885 (77885|0) - move to 3? | pitch i guess Fixed

01:27:828 (87828|2) - move to 2 X. I like this better

01:43:256 (103256|2) - move to 2 | spare our fingers LOL Fixed

01:44:628 (104628|0) - delete | not too loud for triple Fixed

01:56:457 - triple here NICE i missed this one . Fixed
:) Thanks for mod . NICE one
Rido
ba' dum tss
Sky_Demon
看得我都濕了 屌屌屌 >_>
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

Sky_Demon wrote:

看得我都濕了 屌屌屌 >_>
diaodiaodiao
Ayachi-
1234

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxofQPf0xic
誒 歌名多難找找到這個
找不到歌名之類的資料

volume 別0%

沒音效你悲劇

[Puxtu's Lv.6]
00:17:799 (17799|2,17799|1) - ?
00:18:142 (18142|1,18313|2) - 1/3
recheck the diff plz

[15]
00:05:543 - 為啥兩個音 跟00:06:228 - 一樣
00:08:286 - ^
一樣的不指了
00:14:286 - 加音
00:20:543 - ^
00:28:857 - 移除一個音 和 00:28:514 - 不同 和00:28:171 - 一樣
一樣的不提了
00:53:543 - 移除一個音
00:53:886 - 加
00:54:228 - 移除一ㄍ
00:58:343 - - 仔細聽就會知道這個和00:58:000 - - 的不同 這比較適合放兩個然後那個比較適合放三個 之類的 吧
01:27:314 - 加音
01:27:486 - 01:27:657 - ^


[10]
00:06:571 (6571|1) - 為啥LN 那這些00:04:171 (4171|2,4857|2,5543|2,6228|2) - 也要吧
一樣的不指了
00:16:343 - 建議移除一個因為LV 10 不然00:16:686 - 加個音吧
00:19:257 - 不用3個吧
00:19:771 - 這啥兩個音? 00:20:114 - 這怎麼辦
00:25:257 (25257|3,25314|0,25371|1,25428|2) - 跟你的LV15對下吧
00:59:028 - 移除一個吧
01:42:743 - ^
00:46:343 (46343|2,46514|2) - 移到4比較舒服
00:46:686 (46686|3) - 看要不要移到3
和LV15一樣 01:11:371 - 要不要慢慢漸慢 http://puu.sh/fYNZT/53050b5d7b.png 比較舒服

大概這樣 吧
puxtu
err looks like nak resnaped all my notes to 1/4 lmao
this is the first version of my diff http://puu.sh/fsoY1/ee70e4e0ed.rar
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

1234

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxofQPf0xic
誒 歌名多難找找到這個 那就沿用了 話說那是我的影片
找不到歌名之類的資料

volume 別0% 泡前再放HS

沒音效你悲劇 你全家都悲劇

[15]
00:05:543 - 為啥兩個音 跟00:06:228 - 一樣
00:08:286 - ^
一樣的不指了
00:14:286 - 加音
00:20:543 - ^
00:28:857 - 移除一個音 和 00:28:514 - 不同 和00:28:171 - 一樣
一樣的不提了
00:53:543 - 移除一個音
00:53:886 - 加
00:54:228 - 移除一ㄍ
00:58:343 - - 仔細聽就會知道這個和00:58:000 - - 的不同 這比較適合放兩個然後那個比較適合放三個 之類的 吧
01:27:314 - 加音
01:27:486 - 01:27:657 - ^


[10]
00:06:571 (6571|1) - 為啥LN 那這些00:04:171 (4171|2,4857|2,5543|2,6228|2) - 也要吧
一樣的不指了
00:16:343 - 建議移除一個因為LV 10 不然00:16:686 - 加個音吧
00:19:257 - 不用3個吧
00:19:771 - 這啥兩個音? 00:20:114 - 這怎麼辦
00:25:257 (25257|3,25314|0,25371|1,25428|2) - 跟你的LV15對下吧
00:59:028 - 移除一個吧
01:42:743 - ^
00:46:343 (46343|2,46514|2) - 移到4比較舒服
00:46:686 (46686|3) - 看要不要移到3
和LV15一樣 01:11:371 - 要不要慢慢漸慢 http://puu.sh/fYNZT/53050b5d7b.png 比較舒服

大概這樣 吧
Most fixed . Thanks for Mod :)
Reba
Columns | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |
Lv.6
00:08:114 (8114|3) - move to any other column
00:10:686 (10686|3) - move to 2
00:10:857 (10857|1) - move to 3
01:16:257 (76257|0) - to 2
01:16:514 (76514|3) - to 2

Lv.10
00:43:514 (43514|3) - delete

Lv.15
It's perfect
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

- R e b a - wrote:

Columns | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |


Lv.10
00:43:514 (43514|3) - deleteFixed

Lv.15
It's perfect WAT
:) Thanks for mod
puxtu

- R e b a - wrote:

[Lv.6]00:08:114 (8114|3) - move to any other column same pr
00:10:686 (10686|3) - move to 2 ok
00:10:857 (10857|1) - move to 3 ok
01:16:257 (76257|0) - to 2 ok
01:16:514 (76514|3) - to 2 same pr
SPOILER
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2
PreviewTime: 94670
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:OukaRanman
TitleUnicode:桜花爛漫
Artist:ETIA.
ArtistUnicode:ETIA.
Creator:Taiwan-NAK
Version:puxtu's Lv.6
Source:
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richardfeder
Hi~
Lv.6
00:06:914 (6914|1,7086|0,7257|0,7428|3,7600|0,7771|2,7943|3,8114|3,8457|0) - rearrange to according to PR? You have plenty of space to do that
Same for all similar pattern. You dont need to 100% stick to PR, but at least try a little bit.

00:53:028 (53028|3,53114|0,53200|2) -
00:58:514 (58514|0,58600|3,58686|1) -
01:04:000 (64000|2,64086|1,64171|3) -
01:09:486 (69486|0,69571|3,69657|1) -
1/6 snap

01:29:200 (89200|1) - delete for consistency. This is the only place where you map heavy beat like this and you abandon anywhere else.

01:45:657 (105657|3) - should start at 01:46:343 -. Also add a note at 01:45:657 (105657|3) - after moving the LN backward

That's all. Not bad :3/

Lv.10
开头的双键有点莫名 跟的是鼓声吗? 都不是特别清楚 特别是00:18:228 (18228|0) - 这种
其实我建议双键最好放在有弦乐的那个地方 特别清楚 一看就懂 比如一开头00:04:857 - 00:05:543 - 其他地方都单键 当然也有对音的问题 各有利弊啊看你取舍
我觉得你还是全部重新检查一遍双键好

00:19:600 (19600|2,19600|3,19771|3,19771|1) - 应该单键啊 其实我觉得整一串拍的都有点过 因为现在还比较安静

00:42:914 (42914|3) - 删
00:43:000 (43000|2) - 加一个

00:46:000 (46000|2) - 简化一下删掉吧 然后00:46:171 (46171|2) - 往右挪一个

00:51:486 (51486|3,51657|1,51828|0,52000|3) - 好像有点难看..要不要试着摆点花样(.
其实这个地方大可条子像lv6那样 没有必要这样放

01:02:628 (62628|1,62628|2) - 这个可以舍弃掉 只写条子会好很多

01:04:000 (64000|2) - 干 卡死你(.

01:32:457 (92457|3) - 删 这里没crash

01:50:543 - 有音

Lv.15
没有15级 大概14级吧
双键还是跟10一样 稍微检查在斟酌一下吧
00:32:800 (32800|1) - double啊 有那个tick的声音 加一个note 排列可变可不变你可以看下

00:35:457 - 1/4没停的
00:35:628 - ^
00:41:800 (41800|1,42143|2) - 这几个到感觉跟前面是一样的 应该没音 只是前面那个音的延长并不是一个新的音 是不是删掉?

00:51:486 (51486|0,51657|3,51828|2,52000|1) - 好难看!

后面大体都没啥好说的了
01:41:714 (101714|0) - 类似这个地方倒是要统一一下 你连点的红线究竟是应该双键还是单键? 你有的双有得单
还有很多地方要检查 比如01:50:114 (110114|3,110114|1) - 应该是三键 01:50:457 (110457|2,110457|0,110457|3) - 应该是双 写反的地方 都要检查下 别的都没啥了

好图!
puxtu

richardfeder wrote:

[Lv.6]
00:06:914 (6914|1,7086|0,7257|0,7428|3,7600|0,7771|2,7943|3,8114|3,8457|0) - rearrange to according to PR? You have plenty of space to do that
Same for all similar pattern. You dont need to 100% stick to PR, but at least try a little bit. ugh ok

00:53:028 (53028|3,53114|0,53200|2) -
00:58:514 (58514|0,58600|3,58686|1) -
01:04:000 (64000|2,64086|1,64171|3) -
01:09:486 (69486|0,69571|3,69657|1) -
1/6 snap fixed

01:29:200 (89200|1) - delete for consistency. This is the only place where you map heavy beat like this and you abandon anywhere else. double notes 01:27:657 (87657|0,87828|3) - & 01:30:571 (90571|0,90571|3) -

01:45:657 (105657|3) - should start at 01:46:343 -. Also add a note at 01:45:657 (105657|3) - after moving the LN backward re-arranged

That's all. Not bad :3/ thanks :3/
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Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

richardfeder wrote:

Hi~

Lv.10
开头的双键有点莫名 跟的是鼓声吗? 都不是特别清楚 特别是00:18:228 (18228|0) - 这种
其实我建议双键最好放在有弦乐的那个地方 特别清楚 一看就懂 比如一开头00:04:857 - 00:05:543 - 其他地方都单键 当然也有对音的问题 各有利弊啊看你取舍
我觉得你还是全部重新检查一遍双键好 這邊其實我對的是鼓音 有兩種鼓音

00:19:600 (19600|2,19600|3,19771|3,19771|1) - 应该单键啊 其实我觉得整一串拍的都有点过 因为现在还比较安静

00:42:914 (42914|3) - 删
00:43:000 (43000|2) - 加一个

00:46:000 (46000|2) - 简化一下删掉吧 然后00:46:171 (46171|2) - 往右挪一个

00:51:486 (51486|3,51657|1,51828|0,52000|3) - 好像有点难看..要不要试着摆点花样(.
其实这个地方大可条子像lv6那样 没有必要这样放

01:02:628 (62628|1,62628|2) - 这个可以舍弃掉 只写条子会好很多

01:04:000 (64000|2) - 干 卡死你(.

01:32:457 (92457|3) - 删 这里没crash

01:50:543 - 有音

Lv.15
没有15级 大概14级吧 同10 後面我覺得有Lv15
双键还是跟10一样 稍微检查在斟酌一下吧
00:32:800 (32800|1) - double啊 有那个tick的声音 加一个note 排列可变可不变你可以看下

00:35:457 - 1/4没停的
00:35:628 - ^
00:41:800 (41800|1,42143|2) - 这几个到感觉跟前面是一样的 应该没音 只是前面那个音的延长并不是一个新的音 是不是删掉?

00:51:486 (51486|0,51657|3,51828|2,52000|1) - 好难看!

后面大体都没啥好说的了
01:41:714 (101714|0) - 类似这个地方倒是要统一一下 你连点的红线究竟是应该双键还是单键? 你有的双有得单
还有很多地方要检查 比如01:50:114 (110114|3,110114|1) - 应该是三键 01:50:457 (110457|2,110457|0,110457|3) - 应该是双 写反的地方 都要检查下 别的都没啥了

好图!
All fixed!

:) 謝謝皮西大詩人
Spy
[General]
Title: 日本式硬核-OukaRanman-
至於羅馬是怎樣,我建議你找找幾個日本BN吧,我不知道前面的羅馬要不要一起附上
這soft-hitnormal難聽的一逼

[puxtu's Lv.6]
00:13:943 (13943|1) - Same as 00:13:600 (13600|2), move to same column
00:25:300 (25300|3,25343|2,25386|0,25428|1) - Since it is Normal diff, I don't recommend you use such patterns. Better to use stair
01:38:800 (98800|0) - Remove

[Lv.10]
00:08:800 (8800|3) - 沒意義
00:09:486 (9486|2) - 坦白來講小jack不算什麼,不過你這排列我覺得不太適合,算了,只是點出來講這個搞成jack是ok的
00:14:628 (14628|2) - Move to 4,木板還有敲那麼的一下
00:23:028 (23028|0) - 00:22:171 - 你這裡都沒抓了,這裡幹嘛抓,刪了
00:24:657 (24657|2,24743|2) - 明顯跟00:24:057 (24057|2) - 不同音高,沒理由同一軌
00:30:057 - Add a note at 3
00:35:200 (35200|3,35371|1,35371|2,35543|2) - 有同一個音,建議jack,但是排列調整一下
00:40:686 (40686|3,40686|0,40857|1,40857|2) - 跟00:30:057一樣,要不然就是00:30:057調整成跟這個一樣
00:46:257 (46257|1) - 抓起來沒意義,而且這個是回音
00:50:800 (50800|1,50800|2) - 個人覺得沒意義
00:53:543 (53543|2,53543|3) - ^
00:56:286 (56286|2,56286|0) - ^
01:18:400 (78400|2,78571|0) - 是這2個才要同一軌才對。。
01:23:886 (83886|2,84057|0) - ^
01:38:800 (98800|0,98800|1) - 我覺得沒必要

[Lv.15]
這diff的hitsound吵得我很難摸圖
00:08:800 (8800|0) - 刪
00:09:828 (9828|2,10000|1) - 放到同一軌你覺得如何
00:12:057 (12057|0,12228|3) - ^
00:14:286 (14286|0,14371|3,14457|1,14457|3,14628|0,14800|1,14971|2) - 我個人覺得調整一下排列應該可以做出好的jack段,又能順手
01:05:371 (65371|2,65457|2,65543|1,65543|0,66057|2,66143|2,66228|3,66228|0,66228|1) - 很單調
01:32:114 (92114|2,92114|1,92171|3,92228|0) - 怎麼看起來略奇葩
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

Spy wrote:

[General]
Title: 日本式硬核-OukaRanman- 你少一個空格
至於羅馬是怎樣,我建議你找找幾個日本BN吧,我不知道前面的羅馬要不要一起附上 附上
這soft-hitnormal難聽的一逼 hhhhh


[Lv.10]
00:08:800 (8800|3) - 沒意義
00:09:486 (9486|2) - 坦白來講小jack不算什麼,不過你這排列我覺得不太適合,算了,只是點出來講這個搞成jack是ok的
00:14:628 (14628|2) - Move to 4,木板還有敲那麼的一下
00:23:028 (23028|0) - 00:22:171 - 你這裡都沒抓了,這裡幹嘛抓,刪了
00:24:657 (24657|2,24743|2) - 明顯跟00:24:057 (24057|2) - 不同音高,沒理由同一軌
00:30:057 - Add a note at 3
00:35:200 (35200|3,35371|1,35371|2,35543|2) - 有同一個音,建議jack,但是排列調整一下
00:40:686 (40686|3,40686|0,40857|1,40857|2) - 跟00:30:057一樣,要不然就是00:30:057調整成跟這個一樣
00:46:257 (46257|1) - 抓起來沒意義,而且這個是回音
00:50:800 (50800|1,50800|2) - 個人覺得沒意義
00:53:543 (53543|2,53543|3) - ^
00:56:286 (56286|2,56286|0) - ^
01:18:400 (78400|2,78571|0) - 是這2個才要同一軌才對。。
01:23:886 (83886|2,84057|0) - ^
01:38:800 (98800|0,98800|1) - 我覺得沒必要

[Lv.15]
這diff的hitsound吵得我很難摸圖
00:08:800 (8800|0) - 刪
00:09:828 (9828|2,10000|1) - 放到同一軌你覺得如何
00:12:057 (12057|0,12228|3) - ^
00:14:286 (14286|0,14371|3,14457|1,14457|3,14628|0,14800|1,14971|2) - 我個人覺得調整一下排列應該可以做出好的jack段,又能順手
01:05:371 (65371|2,65457|2,65543|1,65543|0,66057|2,66143|2,66228|3,66228|0,66228|1) - 很單調
01:32:114 (92114|2,92114|1,92171|3,92228|0) - 怎麼看起來略奇葩
All fixed. Thanks for mod 給 :)
puxtu

Spy wrote:

[puxtu's Lv.6]
00:13:943 (13943|1) - Same as 00:13:600 (13600|2), move to same column
00:25:300 (25300|3,25343|2,25386|0,25428|1) - Since it is Normal diff, I don't recommend you use such patterns. Better to use stair
01:38:800 (98800|0) - Remove
all fixed
update
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192,192,96400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,96571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98114,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100171,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,101028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,101543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102228,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,103086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,103257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103943,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104286,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105657,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,105657,128,4,106343:0:0:0:0:
320,192,106000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106343,128,0,107028:0:0:0:0:
64,192,106686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107028,128,0,107714:0:0:0:0:
320,192,107371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107714,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107714,128,0,108400:0:0:0:0:
64,192,108057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108400,128,0,109771:0:0:0:0:
192,192,108743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,109428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,190,109600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109771,128,0,111828:0:0:0:0:
320,192,110114,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,110457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111143,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,111486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111828,128,0,112514:0:0:0:0:
448,192,112171,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,112514,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,112514,128,4,113200:0:0:0:0:
192,192,112857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,113200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113200,128,0,113886:0:0:0:0:
192,192,113543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,113714,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113886,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,192,113886,128,4,115257:0:0:0:0:
320,192,114228,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,114571,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115257,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,192,115428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115943,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116114,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,116286,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,116457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,116628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Zan-
HOLY NAK
Sky_Demon
Mod by request

key: 1|2|3|4|


Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal


General
Check your AiMod
puxtu's Lv.6
00:05:371 (5371|2) - move to 4
00:10:857 (10857|2) - move to 2
00:53:143 (53143|2,53200|1) - ctrl + g
00:59:543 (59543|1,59714|0) - ^ ,and 00:59:886 (59886|2) - move to 2
01:49:600 (109600|3) - move to 2 ,and 01:49:771 (109771|1) - to 1
Lv.10
00:17:543 (17543|3) - 移到1
00:39:143 (39143|1) - 移到1
00:40:857 (40857|1,40857|2) - 移到1 4 跟這裡一樣的音 00:40:686 (40686|0,40686|3) - 同樣的聲音同樣的列來呈現
00:42:400 (42400|0) - 移到2
00:59:028 - 不建議3鍵 沒感覺特別重
麻煩減少這種一堆的 卡手排列 01:08:457 (68457|2,68628|2,68800|2,68971|2,69143|2) - 所以 01:08:800 (68800|2) - 移到1
這裡3鍵 有鈸的聲音 01:53:886 - 這裡怎麼沒有 01:54:571 - 01:55:257 -
01:56:114 (116114|1,116114|0,116286|1,116286|2,116457|3,116457|2,116628|2,116628|3,116628|1,116628|0) - 作死
Lv.15
00:14:457 (14457|3) - 放到2
01:13:943 (73943|2) - 移到2 感覺問題
01:18:057 (78057|0,78228|1) - ctrl + g ^

Nice diff

好啦就這樣了 小摸一下

好圖
Zan-
i just realized, why still in WIP?
Sky_Demon
What are you talking about?
Zan-
this mapset is in WIP category
isn't this already finished?

http://puu.sh/gjbDU/ca9e45f26a.png
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

Zan - wrote:

this mapset is in WIP category
isn't this already finished?

http://puu.sh/gjbDU/ca9e45f26a.png
THIS SHIT
I trying do my best :)
Zan-
move it to pending then...
Topic Starter
Taiwan-NAK

Sky_Demon wrote:

Mod by request

key: 1|2|3|4|


Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal


General
Check your AiMod

Lv.10
00:17:543 (17543|3) - 移到1
00:39:143 (39143|1) - 移到1
00:40:857 (40857|1,40857|2) - 移到1 4 跟這裡一樣的音 00:40:686 (40686|0,40686|3) - 同樣的聲音同樣的列來呈現
00:42:400 (42400|0) - 移到2
00:59:028 - 不建議3鍵 沒感覺特別重
麻煩減少這種一堆的 卡手排列 01:08:457 (68457|2,68628|2,68800|2,68971|2,69143|2) - 所以 01:08:800 (68800|2) - 移到1
這裡3鍵 有鈸的聲音 01:53:886 - 這裡怎麼沒有 01:54:571 - 01:55:257 -
01:56:114 (116114|1,116114|0,116286|1,116286|2,116457|3,116457|2,116628|2,116628|3,116628|1,116628|0) - 作死
Lv.15
00:14:457 (14457|3) - 放到2X 我喜歡這樣
01:13:943 (73943|2) - 移到2 感覺問題
01:18:057 (78057|0,78228|1) - ctrl + g ^

Nice diff

好啦就這樣了 小摸一下

好圖
Thanks la 終於來了
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