冷笑话好评,先mark,下午摸
Thank you for modding!Regraz wrote:
Oyatsu’s Easy
Rhythm:
- 00:10:621 (3,4) – 3/2 repeat? Following the music and downbeat better imo. I prefer catching sound at 00:11:353 - and keep current parrtn because it's nice. But you're right, i will consider this
Structure:- Really nice.
Hitsounds- 00:05:499 (3) – The Clap on the end sounds a little weird. removed
- 00:35:499 (1) – Add something for the end. Same as 00:38:426 (1) – and next sections. Here’s instrument, so maybe it is better to add some hitsounds to emphasize rather than leaving it empty. added whistle
Others:- 01:26:535 (3,1) – Dunno if this is rankable, so close to the spinner. I'm really not sure. Before, it is normal and you know, slider after circle/note is normal for noob/newbie players to realize, it is different from circle/note after spin. I will take a care if BAT talks about this
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Kamio Misuzu wrote:
下不动图啊。只有当时你传的俩难度,还是摸摸两个I得了(其实懒...)
[Insane]
00:07:328 (5,1,2) - 改flow和blanket00:08:243 (3,4,5,6,7) - 后面的34567依次做了改动,后面不变。供参考我 感觉没必要改啊
00:39:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 玛德这一段怎么这么好听
01:01:109 (1,2) - 差评-。- 虽然是跟了背景,但怀疑是个被黑1分的点,随手断。考虑第二个换成直的slider?拉到这里01:01:474 -
拉进了
别的没啥了,就是发现一点烤老板的谜之flow,按排列看总觉得都少了一个note的节奏啊...
比如[Hard]
- 01:17:389 (5,6,1) - 5—6,6—1之间总觉得应该在差不多328|64的地方有个note才觉得顺手啊
- 01:18:853 (6,7) - 6—7之间,232|296
- 01:22:145 (8,1) - 8—1之间,360|304
- 01:24:340 (4,5) - 4—5之间,96|328(这个倒是还能接受,上面三个太明显了)
诸如此类,试着稍微改动一下吧(最后这个个保持也OK)
00:14:920 (6) - 柑橘多余,你后面也没放类似的啊 这边三连特别明显
01:06:596 (2,3,4,5) - 好像有不少人不擅长这个,而且这里本身就没有三连的音,硬塞一个白线三连也挺蛋疼。试试直接slider带过这种 这里有三连啊。。我换个pattern.
01:12:633 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 简化,五连+折返还后面有个停顿,hard里可能稍微有点难 先放着看看,懒改
01:14:096 (3,4) - 尽量不要红线起手,而且4的折返其实也有点卡。试试这样。卡吗。。 没压clap大概没事,这也是无奈,vocal在红线
01:15:194 (2) - 压在1上比3上好一点,准备时间上有所不同,和不宜大跳放连打一个道理。(狗屁道理,就是我自己总结的。。)
其实这边是跟那两声呱呱
其实你红线起手,然后后面用折返纠正的地方不少,不过就不提了,都也没啥特别的不舒服。
Regraz wrote:
General
- Add 2000ms to AudioLeadIn Time.
- Uncheck Wide-Screen Support if a storyboard wont be added.
- 01:26:627 (1) – Sudden drop of volume is really sudden. Considering making it drop gradually.改了改
Normal
Rhythm:
- Fine, though a little messy.
Structure:- 00:55:987 (1,2) – Blanket better?
Hitsounds- 00:08:792 (7) – The whistle sounds a little weird, really. Same as 00:32:206 (5) - 复制的,改了
- 00:11:170 (5) – Finish is enough, whistle is a little weird, imo. 好
- 00:35:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) – 这段感觉Clap有点少啊 照着背景下的,没有不加
- 01:12:084 (4) – whistle on end presents a not nice effect, really. 换了个
Others:- 01:25:804 (2,1) - Same comment as Easy.
Hard
Rhythm:
- 01:05:499 (3,4) – About this, it is better to make the repeat time consistent. Normally they will be regarded the same if there are in the same color. Strongly suggest adjust something here. 有道理,不过先放着看看
Structure:- 00:00:377 (3,4) – Really obvious blanket problem. 好
- 00:26:718 (1,2) – Such overlap pattern is not recommended. 这没关系把
Hitsounds- OK, the claps on the Kiai are nice :3
Others:- Fine, overall a solid diff while the structure can be better.
Heroine
- 00:52:145 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) – What the flow…
- 00:58:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – 爷爷,这flow
- 01:04:767 (1,4) – Make them in a circle. http://puu.sh/eDRxX/89e4babc06.jpg
改了前面就不好看了啊- ;w;
[size=150]Good Luck :3
actually i have no special feeling of this song. Just like the light noval.Kibbleru wrote:
o/
this song to kawaii
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Autumn wrote:
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊
[*]00:39:889 (2,3) - The same rhythm as 00:45:743 (2,3,4) - seems better for newbie players imo [/list][/notice]Normal
加了点
- 00:39:889 (4) - 弄个NC?后面到7了感觉有点多..这边正好是个重音
- 00:51:596 (5) - ^
- 01:06:962 (6) - ^
其他难度没看出什么来,别打我啊!Hard
- 00:28:913 (3,4,5,6) - AR7.5这一坨有点难读 难吗,DT就不难了
- 00:53:883 - 没重音弄个折返感觉怪怪的,不如和00:54:523 (1,2) - 统一 我感觉不用改
- 00:56:718 (3) - 这个貌似不是竖直的 直的!
AIR wrote:
烤肉老板 说完了我觉得好饿啊
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:00:377 (1) - 头部finish 好
[Heroine]
- 00:30:194 (2) - 叠3头上吧 不好啊,这边vocal
- 00:58:913 (1) - 转盘减一个线,这个难度会不会被挑刺?o.o 好
- 00:05:682 (4,5) - flow不太顺,随意
- 00:32:206 (5,6) - 5和6听起来一样,也改条吧
- 01:00:011 (5,6) - 可以跟着音乐再转一下,竖着摆
没改,感觉没必要
看不出什么问题只能滚去睡觉了
gl
[Teichan] wrote:
orzRed -> Unrank Issues
Blue -> highly recommended to fix
Black -> Personal Comments
[General]
01:26:627 (1) - Consider fade-out?
[/list]
Fine.
[Normal]
[Hard]
- 01:00:377 (5) - 建议改成两个circle来体现乐曲的高潮
- 01:06:596 (5) - 去whistle,这里完全被clap压下去了,并没听出与后面两个S:C4 clap有什么区别 这边clap是drum的
[/color]orz排版没得挑
- 00:47:755 (2,1) - stack 应该弄好了
- 01:06:596 (5) - 这里同normal,后面不提了
- 01:06:962 (3) - 这里是不是circle要好一点 再说
[Heroine]
- 00:15:377 (2,4) - 没对齐 好
- 00:24:340 (3,4) - 加音量,现在这样只能听到一点点
- 00:32:206 (5) - 这个normal whistle很违和,建议去掉
- 00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 很容易断,个人比较不喜欢,建议3和4放近一点
- 00:54:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这一段1/4spam感觉不太合曲,这里并没有1/4音 不过毕竟烤老板
- 01:01:109 (1,2) - 还是合并成一个slider感觉好一点
- 01:21:596 (5,6) - 太远了,和前面01:20:133 (6,7) - 差太多了,很容易断的
后面都没改,那段1/4必须有。。不然我是不会这么下的
Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Heroine]
- 00:07:694 (1) - 這個停在00:07:877 - 之後00:07:968 - 加個note 这更难啊
- 00:24:340 (3) - 換成circle 現在的打上去有點不舒服 改了下
- 00:27:816 (5) - ctrl+g 有个clap,抄兴业
- 01:01:292 (2,3) - 有點遠 近了点
- 01:24:798 - 為何要ignore這裡的vocal呀 听差了
[Hard][Normal]
- 00:30:194 (2) - stack在00:30:377 (3) - 頭感覺好點 vocal啊,感觉还是分开好
- 00:16:474 (5) - nc吧 畢竟這段單點有點長 这里还好。不难读
- 01:00:377 (5) - 也nc 好
- 01:24:523 (6,7) - 小建議
好
其他還好
圖不錯