Hello CloudSplash16! from my queue
dunno if you already fixed somethings from the other mod o_o
* 00:08:098 (1) - This long slider is kinda awkward here x_x - try using a repeat slider like 00:05:504 (1) - to catch the whistle at 00:08:423 (2) - and to make it more interesting.
* 00:18:801 (2) - You could try and add a whistle on the slider end. There's a tone shift + bass in the song.
* 00:23:666 (1) - Maybe you can try pointing it the other way, so it has a smoother flow with (2).
* 00:51:558 (3) - I'd remove the slider tick hitsound here. The only thing that's present in the song is the hi-hat like sound, and the bass is already on the repeat. This is basically the same sound as 00:52:855 (3) - , where you didn't put a whistle - so I recommend you to skip this one as well. Just like at the end of the song at 01:40:854 (3) -
* 00:58:044 (2) - With this slider you emphasize both the clap + vocal and the downbeat poorly. I highly recommend to at least emphasize the clap + vocal better, with something like this.
* 01:09:719 (2) - NC for SV change here? I think it's quite important if you use a SV change in a Normal diff >_>
* 01:10:367 (3) - Add whistle for the bass sound?
* 01:13:286 (4,1) - Optional, but you can try blanketing these owo
* 01:27:232 (3) - Curve the other way to improve flow?
* 01:36:962 (1) - Not a problem or anything, but what's that extra slider point doing there?
* 01:42:800 (2) - Missing clap on the slider head?
* 01:43:449 (3) - Missing finish on the head?
* 01:44:908 (1) - I recommend you to end the spinner on 01:52:530 - to be consistent with the other diffs, and this spinner is already quite long for a Normal diff o_o
* 00:11:504 (3,4) - CTRL+G for rhythm only? The string sound at 00:11:666 - should have more emphasis than 00:11:504 (3) - imo
* 00:34:531 (2,3) - No 1.3x spacing here like the rest of the combo?
* 00:54:801 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Insane
* 00:57:396 (1) - Same as Insane, I'd add a finish here like Meyrink :3
* 01:15:881 (4,1) - Use 1.2/1.3 spacing here? Everytime you have a gap in the KIAI you use 1.2/1.3 so why not
* 01:18:151 - I do recommend mapping this hi-hat sound out here. Having a gap at a red tick where there's no actual sound in the song itself like 01:15:881 (4,1) - is fine, but not here, or else parts like 01:23:340 (3) - shouldn't be mapped either.
* 01:26:421 (4) - I'd split this one into 2 circles to make the finish clickable. I see that you're trying to follow the guitar here, but the cymbal sound in the song is more important in my eyes.
* 01:43:611 (2) - Point the slider end to somewhere else, so that it flows much better to (3)?
* 00:25:774 (8,9,1) - I'd actually make the distance between (9,1) larger than (8,9). To me, clap-to-finish should get more emphasis than bass-to-clap.
* 00:30:963 (5,6,1) - ^
* 00:37:125 (2) - Hmm.. I don't recommend doing this here. With a repeat slider like this, you miss the vocals + clap on 00:37:287 (3) - . Try a circle + slider here instead? I'd be nice if the vocal+clap was actually clickable here.
* 00:57:396 (1) - Meyrink has a finish here, and I think you should add it too, there's a cymbal in the song ;w;
* 00:57:882 (2,3) - I'd CTRL+G these for rhythm only. Considering that there's no real hold-note in the song at 00:57:882 (2) - , there shouldn't be a slider there imo.
* 00:59:990 (1,2,3,4) - This confused me a lot. (1,2) are one stack, and (3,4) as well - but there's a small break at (3,4). This can be easily misread and I recommend you to space it out for readability.
* 01:10:205 (5) - Add whistle on the slider end for the bass sound?
* Video's still missing here.
* Why did you use the same settings as the Insane diff? I think you can definitely raise the OD, since this map is quite easy to SS. Maybe even raise the HP a bit if you can.
* 00:05:504 (1) - I think you should add a whistle here. Since the piano is still here on the downbeat, just like 00:02:909 (1) -. Or else the whistle on for example 00:09:720 (2) - wouldn't make any sense either.
* 00:08:098 (1) - ^
* 00:08:098 (1) - Split into two circles to make this rhythm-wise consistent with 00:05:504 (1,2) - ?
* 00:08:747 (3,4) - and 00:09:233 (5,1) - Maybe you could make jumps out of these? You did it in this whole section, so why not here as well owo?
* 00:11:666 (1) - NC here is not really needed imo, because you didn't put one at 00:14:260 (4) - 00:16:855 (3) - 00:22:044 (4) - etc...
* 00:12:801 (6) - Bass is still here, just like (4,5) x_x - also to make it consistent with 00:17:666 (7,8,9) -
* 00:15:396 (7) - Use drum finish, like the other diffs?
* 00:15:882 (1) - Hmm.. considering that this is the hardest diff, I think you shouldn't leave the strong clap sound out at 00:16:369 (2) - . I'd remove the repeat and add a 1/2 slider instead (just circles should be fine as well).
* 00:18:477 (2) - NC this one instead? The downbeat is here, and the jump from the previous slider is quite big anyway >_>
* 00:20:585 (4) - I'd remove the whistle on the slider head, since this is like one of the only places where you put one on the hi-hat (same sound as 00:17:504 (6) - ). As for the slider end, I think we can both agree that a clap sounds better with the strong sound here ._.
* 00:20:747 (5,6) - I'd put claps on both slider head and ends here. The clap sound is really obvious in the song itself.
* 00:21:720 (3) - Remove whistle on the head? You don't follow the hi-hat(-like) sound in this part, as you can see at 00:23:017 (8) -
* 00:23:666 (2) - NC this one instead? The piano/string is present here and it really does give a downbeat feel >_>
* 00:25:450 (6) - ^
* 00:27:720 (4,5,6) - I personally would make the distance between (4,5) larger than (5,6) or have equal DS. To me the clap at (5) should get more emphasize with a jump rather than the bass at (6).
* 00:33:071 (6,7) - Hmm.. this distance confused me a little. I could still FC but I thought it was a bit weird. If you can, could you please use at least 1.0x (I recommend 1.4x though, to keep consistent with 00:36:639 (1,2) - ) spacing here to make it a bit more clear that there's a break here? Stacking (7) under (6) might help as well for a stop-and-go effect. It could just be me though x_x
* 00:35:017 (1) - The NC here breaks the pattern you have. I highly recommend you to remove it, since you didn't even put one after 00:32:585 (5) - 00:37:774 (4) - etc.
* 00:39:233 (3) - Downbeat is here, so I'd NC this one instead.
* I'd NC 00:43:125 (7) - , remove at 00:43:774 (1) - , add at 00:44:423 (7) - to keep your pattern. At the first suggestion the downbeat is clearly there because of the bass. The second suggestion is because you shouldn't NC on the guitar here, since you didn't put one on 00:42:476 (3) - either. The last suggestion is because of the downbeat + high vocals.
* 00:46:855 (5) - I'd try to avoid offbeat sliders with a finish on the end, doesn't give enough emphasis here. I'd CTRL+G (5,6) for rhythm only.
* 00:54:314 (4,5,1) - The jump at (4,5) doesn't really make sense to me, considering that there's no strong sound at (5). If you you do want a jump here, I recommend you to put it at (5,1), since the downbeat is at (1). You could also just try equal DS here.
* 00:57:396 (1) - Cymbal sound in the song. Add finish like Meyrink's diff?
* 01:16:205 (7) - NC this one instead, cymbal's here >_> I also think it's kinda necessary to put it on (7), because the square also has the same colour which can be hard to read with a slider like this that ends on (3).
* If you applied the suggestion above, I highly recommend to you add a NC at 01:17:503 (7) - , remove the one at 01:18:476 (5) - and add one to 01:18:800 (7) - to keep your pattern.
* 01:21:881 (2) - Increase the spacing to at least 1.2 here. This 1.0x distance here plays really awkward, especially this KIAI being very jumpy, this almost looked like the 1/4 rhythm you had at 01:14:584 (9,1) - , which is really confusing.
* 01:22:043 (1) - NC not needed here. There's no strong sound/vocal here. Add one on 01:22:692 (5) - instead?
Nice mapset, needs a bit more patches in the Hearts diff but I think it'll be fine after a few more mods!
If you want you can call me back if you want the Easy diff modded as well.
I hope you can rank this soon, good luck o3o/
EDIT: you can have a star as well
dunno if you already fixed somethings from the other mod o_o
Meyrink's Normal
* 00:08:098 (1) - This long slider is kinda awkward here x_x - try using a repeat slider like 00:05:504 (1) - to catch the whistle at 00:08:423 (2) - and to make it more interesting.
* 00:18:801 (2) - You could try and add a whistle on the slider end. There's a tone shift + bass in the song.
* 00:23:666 (1) - Maybe you can try pointing it the other way, so it has a smoother flow with (2).
* 00:51:558 (3) - I'd remove the slider tick hitsound here. The only thing that's present in the song is the hi-hat like sound, and the bass is already on the repeat. This is basically the same sound as 00:52:855 (3) - , where you didn't put a whistle - so I recommend you to skip this one as well. Just like at the end of the song at 01:40:854 (3) -
* 00:58:044 (2) - With this slider you emphasize both the clap + vocal and the downbeat poorly. I highly recommend to at least emphasize the clap + vocal better, with something like this.
* 01:09:719 (2) - NC for SV change here? I think it's quite important if you use a SV change in a Normal diff >_>
* 01:10:367 (3) - Add whistle for the bass sound?
* 01:13:286 (4,1) - Optional, but you can try blanketing these owo
* 01:27:232 (3) - Curve the other way to improve flow?
* 01:36:962 (1) - Not a problem or anything, but what's that extra slider point doing there?
* 01:42:800 (2) - Missing clap on the slider head?
* 01:43:449 (3) - Missing finish on the head?
* 01:44:908 (1) - I recommend you to end the spinner on 01:52:530 - to be consistent with the other diffs, and this spinner is already quite long for a Normal diff o_o
Hard
* 00:11:504 (3,4) - CTRL+G for rhythm only? The string sound at 00:11:666 - should have more emphasis than 00:11:504 (3) - imo
* 00:34:531 (2,3) - No 1.3x spacing here like the rest of the combo?
* 00:54:801 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Insane
* 00:57:396 (1) - Same as Insane, I'd add a finish here like Meyrink :3
* 01:15:881 (4,1) - Use 1.2/1.3 spacing here? Everytime you have a gap in the KIAI you use 1.2/1.3 so why not
* 01:18:151 - I do recommend mapping this hi-hat sound out here. Having a gap at a red tick where there's no actual sound in the song itself like 01:15:881 (4,1) - is fine, but not here, or else parts like 01:23:340 (3) - shouldn't be mapped either.
* 01:26:421 (4) - I'd split this one into 2 circles to make the finish clickable. I see that you're trying to follow the guitar here, but the cymbal sound in the song is more important in my eyes.
* 01:43:611 (2) - Point the slider end to somewhere else, so that it flows much better to (3)?
Insane
* 00:25:774 (8,9,1) - I'd actually make the distance between (9,1) larger than (8,9). To me, clap-to-finish should get more emphasis than bass-to-clap.
* 00:30:963 (5,6,1) - ^
* 00:37:125 (2) - Hmm.. I don't recommend doing this here. With a repeat slider like this, you miss the vocals + clap on 00:37:287 (3) - . Try a circle + slider here instead? I'd be nice if the vocal+clap was actually clickable here.
* 00:57:396 (1) - Meyrink has a finish here, and I think you should add it too, there's a cymbal in the song ;w;
* 00:57:882 (2,3) - I'd CTRL+G these for rhythm only. Considering that there's no real hold-note in the song at 00:57:882 (2) - , there shouldn't be a slider there imo.
* 00:59:990 (1,2,3,4) - This confused me a lot. (1,2) are one stack, and (3,4) as well - but there's a small break at (3,4). This can be easily misread and I recommend you to space it out for readability.
* 01:10:205 (5) - Add whistle on the slider end for the bass sound?
Hearts
* Video's still missing here.
* Why did you use the same settings as the Insane diff? I think you can definitely raise the OD, since this map is quite easy to SS. Maybe even raise the HP a bit if you can.
* 00:05:504 (1) - I think you should add a whistle here. Since the piano is still here on the downbeat, just like 00:02:909 (1) -. Or else the whistle on for example 00:09:720 (2) - wouldn't make any sense either.
* 00:08:098 (1) - ^
* 00:08:098 (1) - Split into two circles to make this rhythm-wise consistent with 00:05:504 (1,2) - ?
* 00:08:747 (3,4) - and 00:09:233 (5,1) - Maybe you could make jumps out of these? You did it in this whole section, so why not here as well owo?
* 00:11:666 (1) - NC here is not really needed imo, because you didn't put one at 00:14:260 (4) - 00:16:855 (3) - 00:22:044 (4) - etc...
* 00:12:801 (6) - Bass is still here, just like (4,5) x_x - also to make it consistent with 00:17:666 (7,8,9) -
* 00:15:396 (7) - Use drum finish, like the other diffs?
* 00:15:882 (1) - Hmm.. considering that this is the hardest diff, I think you shouldn't leave the strong clap sound out at 00:16:369 (2) - . I'd remove the repeat and add a 1/2 slider instead (just circles should be fine as well).
* 00:18:477 (2) - NC this one instead? The downbeat is here, and the jump from the previous slider is quite big anyway >_>
* 00:20:585 (4) - I'd remove the whistle on the slider head, since this is like one of the only places where you put one on the hi-hat (same sound as 00:17:504 (6) - ). As for the slider end, I think we can both agree that a clap sounds better with the strong sound here ._.
* 00:20:747 (5,6) - I'd put claps on both slider head and ends here. The clap sound is really obvious in the song itself.
* 00:21:720 (3) - Remove whistle on the head? You don't follow the hi-hat(-like) sound in this part, as you can see at 00:23:017 (8) -
* 00:23:666 (2) - NC this one instead? The piano/string is present here and it really does give a downbeat feel >_>
* 00:25:450 (6) - ^
* 00:27:720 (4,5,6) - I personally would make the distance between (4,5) larger than (5,6) or have equal DS. To me the clap at (5) should get more emphasize with a jump rather than the bass at (6).
* 00:33:071 (6,7) - Hmm.. this distance confused me a little. I could still FC but I thought it was a bit weird. If you can, could you please use at least 1.0x (I recommend 1.4x though, to keep consistent with 00:36:639 (1,2) - ) spacing here to make it a bit more clear that there's a break here? Stacking (7) under (6) might help as well for a stop-and-go effect. It could just be me though x_x
* 00:35:017 (1) - The NC here breaks the pattern you have. I highly recommend you to remove it, since you didn't even put one after 00:32:585 (5) - 00:37:774 (4) - etc.
* 00:39:233 (3) - Downbeat is here, so I'd NC this one instead.
* I'd NC 00:43:125 (7) - , remove at 00:43:774 (1) - , add at 00:44:423 (7) - to keep your pattern. At the first suggestion the downbeat is clearly there because of the bass. The second suggestion is because you shouldn't NC on the guitar here, since you didn't put one on 00:42:476 (3) - either. The last suggestion is because of the downbeat + high vocals.
* 00:46:855 (5) - I'd try to avoid offbeat sliders with a finish on the end, doesn't give enough emphasis here. I'd CTRL+G (5,6) for rhythm only.
* 00:54:314 (4,5,1) - The jump at (4,5) doesn't really make sense to me, considering that there's no strong sound at (5). If you you do want a jump here, I recommend you to put it at (5,1), since the downbeat is at (1). You could also just try equal DS here.
* 00:57:396 (1) - Cymbal sound in the song. Add finish like Meyrink's diff?
* 01:16:205 (7) - NC this one instead, cymbal's here >_> I also think it's kinda necessary to put it on (7), because the square also has the same colour which can be hard to read with a slider like this that ends on (3).
* If you applied the suggestion above, I highly recommend to you add a NC at 01:17:503 (7) - , remove the one at 01:18:476 (5) - and add one to 01:18:800 (7) - to keep your pattern.
* 01:21:881 (2) - Increase the spacing to at least 1.2 here. This 1.0x distance here plays really awkward, especially this KIAI being very jumpy, this almost looked like the 1/4 rhythm you had at 01:14:584 (9,1) - , which is really confusing.
* 01:22:043 (1) - NC not needed here. There's no strong sound/vocal here. Add one on 01:22:692 (5) - instead?
Nice mapset, needs a bit more patches in the Hearts diff but I think it'll be fine after a few more mods!
If you want you can call me back if you want the Easy diff modded as well.
I hope you can rank this soon, good luck o3o/
EDIT: you can have a star as well