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ONE OK ROCK - Clock Strikes

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Topic Starter
Saut
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 31. März 2015 at 17:50:05

Artist: ONE OK ROCK
Title: Clock Strikes
Tags: 人生×僕= Jinsei x Boku taka toru ryota tomoya pishifat moway pkhg
BPM: 192
Filesize: 7726kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,77 stars, 460 notes)
  2. Easy (1,49 stars, 178 notes)
  3. Hard (3,31 stars, 578 notes)
  4. Insane (5,02 stars, 735 notes)
  5. Moway's Extra (5,8 stars, 816 notes)
  6. Normal (2,24 stars, 315 notes)
  7. pishi's Insane (4,49 stars, 678 notes)
Download: ONE OK ROCK - Clock Strikes
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Kurokocchi
Sadly I don't know enough about mapping to do anything under insane diffs :S.
On a good note I didn't find anything wrong with the Insane :)


Moway's Extra


  • It was really refreshing to play, the flow feels awesome. Some might consider the jumps a bit too extreme though.
  1. 00:24:176 (3,1) - you might want to try moving the 1 so that it isn't stacked with the 2 preceding it because it feels like the same pattern as before but now it feels really awkward by adding a note with a different timing. Basically it just confuses the player for the first play or two.


These are all suggestions still learning to mod so feel free to leave messages as to why you didn't do changes, it's a learning experience for everyone ^.^
brunn08
Add a video :)
gavin898
I really love this song and tried to make a map. But I am too noob in handling the timing of this song. haha
Thats why I found your map.

ONE OK ROCK - Clock Strikes (Saut) [Hard]
02:25:269 (4, 5) Between 4, 5 it should be a new combo because you did that in the previous pattern


02:10:347 (1, 2) I think the "bell sound" is hard to follow. Can't identify the hit. (maybe it is just me so bad in hearing) so I am not sure for this one Compare to this part in [Insane] difficulty, the [Insane] one seem more obvious and easier to follow.
02:12:535 (2, 3, 4) ^ same as above
Topic Starter
Saut

EmiyaShirou wrote:

On a good note I didn't find anything wrong with the Insane :) thx 4 checkzor
hue

brunn08 wrote:

Add a video :) when the set is ready
huehue

gavin898 wrote:

02:25:269 (4, 5) Between 4, 5 it should be a new combo because you did that in the previous pattern added
02:10:347 (1, 2) I think the "bell sound" is hard to follow. Can't identify the hit. (maybe it is just me so bad in hearing) so I am not sure for this one Compare to this part in [Insane] difficulty, the [Insane] one seem more obvious and easier to follow.
02:12:535 (2, 3, 4) ^ same as above dont feel anything wrong with this part, but i gonna keep that in mind ofc
thx for checking
huehuehue



>map good song
>get random mods
Mao
ONE OK ROCK <3
gavin898
The [insane] difficulty is so good! Drum pattern look nice. Game play is smooth. Spacing is good.
Nice work!
Moway

EmiyaShirou wrote:

Sadly I don't know enough about mapping to do anything under insane diffs :S.
On a good note I didn't find anything wrong with the Insane :)


Moway's Extra


  • It was really refreshing to play, the flow feels awesome. Some might consider the jumps a bit too extreme though. Probably, hoping that some modding will help me identify where to cut back. I really like the big jumps for this type of song since it sounds really airy and open (if that makes sense!). Thanks for the kind words!
  1. 00:24:176 (3,1) - you might want to try moving the 1 so that it isn't stacked with the 2 preceding it because it feels like the same pattern as before but now it feels really awkward by adding a note with a different timing. Basically it just confuses the player for the first play or two. going to leave for now, I like having the stacks with different timings and I don't think it's too bad to read


These are all suggestions still learning to mod so feel free to leave messages as to why you didn't do changes, it's a learning experience for everyone ^.^
Myxo
sex
Topic Starter
Saut
fanboy
jason102491
love this song and the insane versions.
PatZar
can i GD this?
taiko oni and muzukashii?
Topic Starter
Saut
nah, i want to keep it o!std
Battquif
Your map is pretty fun!!! (and i love this song <3 ) Patterns are nice.

I've played it, if you want : Insane : https://www.mediafire.com/?05i5bxz3pe8eez4

I saw a lot of notes that could be at the same place. Like sliders : 01:31:676 (1,2,3) It's just my opinion but, your map will be more beautiful if you do that (for jump, like here : 01:00:738 (3,5) - You can see on my replay that i failed my combo here :D ).

Good luck, your map is good !!!
-Tochi
From my modding queue


  • General

  1. Fine.


  • Moway's Extra

  1. I first of all want to tell you my opinion; I think you stack a little bit too much, but it's just my opinion!
  2. 00:46:051 (3,5) - The stack here leading to this circle 00:46:519 (6) - is a bit random imo. Try to move 00:46:207 (4) - to x220 y248, and move 00:46:363 (5) - to x396 y208, so it should look like this:
    I think the flow is much better like this, and it looks nicer.
  3. 02:35:894 (1,2,3) - Here too, maybe you should select these 02:35:894 (1,2,3) - and rotate it by -6 degrees and put it back like:
  4. 02:40:426 (2) - Delete (no sound) and stack 02:40:582 (3) - on 02:40:738 (1) - 's head. Or just put it close to it.
  5. 02:46:051 (1,2) - Here again, i think you should move 02:46:207 (2) - to x288 y324
  6. 03:07:847 (5) - Move to x296 y44?


  • Insane

  1. 00:57:613 (5) - Ctrl + G for a better flow?
  2. 01:31:676 (1,3) - Why not use same shape??
  3. 01:56:363 (1,1) - I think the flow is bad here if you don't rotate it by -40 degrees.
  4. 02:46:676 (1) - I think this slider is too curve. If you delete the 2nd node it should be fine. Or just make it more straight.



  • Pishi's Insane

  1. 02:46:207 (5) - Improve the blanket by curving it a bit more.


  • Feedback


    Only found so much as this, good luck with it!
Talanski
One of the best maps i've ever played. Continue with that AWESOME work! I hope it gets ranked soon! (: :oops:
- Milhofo -
Wow, here I was thinking it wasn't possible to map a great insane or + out of this song and then I come across this.. If you need a mod when you move this to pending send me a message, keep it up!
Trosk-
That Insane difficulty is so good! I can't find any part that really needs mod. Maybe just the slider at 00:15:738 (3) but i think it's just me who don't like it. Keep up the good work!! ^^ I really hope this gets ranked, love this song <3

Edit: I saw you changed the 00:15:738 (3) slider. It looks really nice now :D

BTW, i can't stop playing it, i love the song and the map <3
Topic Starter
Saut
thanks for supporting this everyone
Trosk-

Saut wrote:

thanks for supporting this everyone
^^
Topic Starter
Saut
finally pending ~
Sharkie
-Easy-

00:26:051 (3) - I like this better at x:168 and y:208. Not really that important. It's fine either way.

-Normal-

I really like it! Don't see anything wrong with it.

-Advanced-

01:34:176 (1) - I like this better Ctrl+G.

-Hard-

Again, I think this is perfect. Love how the flow works.

-pishi's Insane-

01:06:363 (7) - I like this better Ctrl+G too.
01:56:051 (4) - This seems too big of a jump. I'd suggest x:184, y:176.

-Insane-
02:47:926 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This seems cluttered. How about this?

-Moway's Extra-

How could I possibly suggest anything better? Really beautiful map.

Overall a really great mapset, great job!
(Sadly I don't think I helped that much, all the things I suggested are very, VERY minor.)
P A N
irc

SPOILER
03:06 Saut: yo p a n, got some time for a fresh nm/m4m?
03:06 P A N: lol fresh nm
03:07 P A N: how do you know me
03:07 P A N: asdkaofme
03:08 Saut: i will never tell you
03:08 *Saut runs away
03:08 P A N: meh
03:08 P A N: i can
03:08 P A N: take a fast look
03:08 P A N: to it
03:08 Saut: nvm then
03:08 Saut: its not that short huh
03:09 Saut: just collecting some more mods so a friend can bubble
03:09 *Saut is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/633373 ONE OK ROCK - Clock Strikes]
03:09 P A N: a friend meh
03:10 Saut: its not like we are lovers and he bubbles what ever i do
03:10 P A N: lol
03:10 P A N: irc?
03:11 Saut: up 2 you
03:11 P A N: so many diff
03:12 Saut: i dont want to force you, feel free to deny
03:13 P A N: it's ok
03:13 P A N: i will mod just yours
03:13 P A N: 00:31:207 (4) -
03:13 P A N: Im trying to follow it but imo, it really need to be further
03:13 P A N: plays weird
03:15 Saut: uh insane diff?
03:15 P A N: yep
03:15 P A N: tell me what do you think
03:15 P A N: next thing incoming
03:16 Saut: 00:36:051 (3,4) -
03:16 Saut: same here?
03:16 P A N: that's playing fine
03:16 P A N: but 00:32:769 (1,2) -
03:16 P A N: why reverse?
03:17 Saut: uh
03:17 P A N: ar...
03:17 Saut: okay i see doesnt makes sense
03:18 P A N: yep :3
03:21 P A N: mhm i gonna point out next
03:21 P A N: 00:50:582 (1,2,3,4) -
03:21 Saut: mhmm too sudden or is it the slider?
03:22 P A N: slider should be on 00:50:738 -
03:23 P A N: because 00:50:894 - is not that strong
03:23 P A N: wait
03:23 P A N: puush done
03:23 P A N: i just reinstalled
03:24 P A N: http://puu.sh/gnQEH/f2933a7e91.jpg
03:24 P A N: there
03:24 P A N: also 00:54:332 (2) -
03:24 Saut: oh okay got it
03:25 P A N: I don't get why you use reverse because there still have strong beat on tail
03:25 P A N: you can remove it and add note on 245|147
03:26 P A N: or if you think it's too untidy, you can move it to 458|197 instead so it will be perfect stack with the old note
03:27 Saut: havent really thought about them, lets leave the reverseslider aside i gonna recheck everyone
03:27 P A N: yea..
03:27 P A N: i saw it a lot
03:27 P A N: i gonna say
03:27 Saut: because this issue will repeat very often
03:28 Saut: lack of experience i guess hue
03:28 P A N: mhmm
03:28 P A N: but have reverse also not that bad
03:28 P A N: it's great
03:29 P A N: yea i decide
03:29 P A N: keep it
03:29 P A N: better
03:29 P A N: no need to fix
03:29 Saut: wat
03:29 Saut: u confuse me
03:29 P A N: lol
03:29 P A N: i mean
03:30 P A N: it also great with reverse
03:30 Saut: why the sudden change? D:
03:30 P A N: i feel like press 3 notes after reverse slider
03:30 P A N: is more fit than press 4 notes after slider
03:31 Saut: okay i see
03:31 P A N: it's...... up to you
03:31 P A N: both are great, depends on which do you like
03:31 Saut: hard decisions everywhere
03:31 Saut: gonna think about it kk
03:32 P A N: 01:11:363 (1) - i understand
03:32 P A N: but it sounds weird
03:32 P A N: sound on 01:11:519 - is really strong
03:33 P A N: which slidertick can't emphasis it well
03:33 P A N: so, i mean end that slider on red tick
03:33 P A N: i think many ppl will said
03:34 Saut: okay makes sense
03:34 Saut: also gonna add some ds between those 01:11:363 (1,1) -
03:39 Saut: somethin else odd?
03:40 P A N: finding
03:42 P A N: why i think 03:21:676 (1,2) - 's spacing is too short
03:42 P A N: compared to other that you used
03:43 Saut: oh yep
03:44 P A N: that's it
03:45 P A N: now hard
03:45 P A N: neat diff
03:46 P A N: im not sure if 01:07:613 (4) - touch the hp bar
03:46 P A N: 01:11:363 (1) - same case
03:47 Saut: thx
03:47 Saut: mhm
03:48 Saut: wait how can this tough the hp bar 01:11:363 (1) -
03:49 Saut: ah i get it
03:49 Saut: was talking about the same issue u mentioned in the insane diff
03:49 P A N: yep
03:49 P A N: 03:18:551 (1) -
03:49 P A N: remove NC
03:49 P A N: doesn't make sense, even yes you also didn't add NC on the first part
03:51 P A N: that's all i can catch for now
03:52 Saut: whoops youre right
03:52 P A N: advanced
03:52 P A N: 00:37:926 (5) - NC?
03:53 Saut: yep oops
03:53 P A N: 00:40:113 (4,5) - mhmm this
03:53 P A N: should ctrl+g imo
03:53 P A N: and NC on circle
03:53 P A N: up to you
03:55 Saut: sounds good
03:55 P A N: 01:28:551 (7,8) - ctrl+g sounds better for me
03:56 P A N: 01:38:863 (6,1) - parallel perfectly would be great
03:56 Saut: oh i cant change this stuff
03:57 Saut: that advanced is a collab with pkhg
03:57 P A N: ah
03:57 Saut: i can link this stuff to him
03:57 Saut: he will probably fix it
03:57 P A N: what about this 01:36:676 -
03:57 P A N: pkhg?
03:57 Saut: Thats the mapper
03:58 P A N: i mean is this pkhg's part as well?
03:58 P A N: 01:36:676 -
03:58 Saut: yes
03:58 P A N: mhm
03:58 Saut: i guess he hasnt removed the greenlines yet
03:58 P A N: as i guess
03:58 P A N: your both NC don't match to each other
03:58 Saut: dam
03:58 P A N: I prefer pkhg's one
03:59 P A N: which mean...
03:59 P A N: 00:55:426 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC
03:59 Saut: pretty much on every 8takt
03:59 P A N: oh wait
03:59 Saut: okay i see i will remove the 4takt ncs
03:59 P A N: yea yea
03:59 P A N: just follow his NC
04:00 P A N: 02:14:176 (1,2) - lol
04:00 P A N: whois part is this?
04:02 Saut: great my osu crashed without savin the last few changes
04:02 Saut: could you post the irc in the thread later on? so i will be on the safe side
04:03 P A N: yep
04:03 P A N: 02:14:176 (1,2) -
04:03 P A N: hey
04:03 Saut: ugly?
04:03 P A N: really
04:03 Saut: :c
04:03 Saut: desperate saut
04:04 P A N: easy to fix
04:05 P A N: just http://puu.sh/gnUg8/843c29ce6a.jpg
04:05 Saut: uh
04:05 Saut: k
04:05 Saut: gonna a little edge
04:06 P A N: as you wish
04:06 P A N: 02:26:051 (1) -
04:06 P A N: doesn't make sense to NC
04:06 P A N: and NC messed up again
04:07 P A N: please discuss with him
04:07 P A N: about Nc
04:07 Saut: well its not that hard
04:07 Saut: basically i got twice as many ncs than him
04:07 P A N: well
04:07 P A N: match them
04:07 Saut: and since his nc makes sense
04:08 Saut: i will reduce my 4takt ncs
04:08 P A N: follow him then :3
04:10 Saut: okay already fixed al ncs
04:11 P A N: you didn't save the thing i talk about pkhg's part right?
04:11 Saut: no
04:11 Saut: :c
04:12 P A N: http://puu.sh/gnUSB/b1aa257520.jpg
04:12 P A N: just in case
04:12 Saut: he will check that out in a moment
04:12 P A N: that's all for me because im lazy to mod lower diff
04:12 Saut: you did more than i expected
04:12 P A N: whew
04:13 Saut: wait that sounds bad
04:13 Saut: you did more than i asked for ~ that sounds better D:
04:14 Saut: thx for irc helped a lot
04:14 P A N: i didn't think before you said this
04:14 Saut: also you can post that in the thread if you want to get kdsrinos
04:15 P A N: indeed i want
04:16 P A N: have you send it to him yet?
04:16 P A N: http://puu.sh/gnVhF/31f291da50.jpg
04:16 P A N: he looks surprised
Topic Starter
Saut

Nerodae wrote:

-Easy-

00:26:051 (3) - I like this better at x:168 and y:208. Not really that important. It's fine either way. want to keep this, because this would destroy the ds huh

-Normal-

I really like it! Don't see anything wrong with it. thanks

-Advanced-

01:34:176 (1) - I like this better Ctrl+G. both would be ok, but we prefere the first way

-Hard-

Again, I think this is perfect. Love how the flow works. thanks again

-Insane-
02:47:926 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This seems cluttered. How about this? good idea, reranged stuff

Overall a really great mapset, great job!
(Sadly I don't think I helped that much, all the things I suggested are very, VERY minor.)
thanks for checking the diffs out and for supporting the mapset hue
Tarrasky
mod req from my queue
YAY ONE OK ROCK <3 <3

Easy

nice map, nothing in special

Normal

nice longer sliders ^^
nice map, no defects

Advanced

nothing in special too

Hard

00:20:269 (1,1) - (nazi) you can perfect stack here
01:43:863 (4) - Ctrl + G please, increase substantially the flow
03:17:926 (1,3) - (nazi) can improve this stack
03:18:551 (3) - Ctrl + G maybe

pishi's Insane

00:36:363 (5,6,7,8,1) - decrease the distance in stream, i recommend 0,8x distance or lower
01:31:363 (4) - Ctrl + G maybe, to match with this 01:30:113 (5,1,2,3) -
02:49:332 (2,4) - hmm avoid this overlap, what do you think?
03:04:801 (3) - Ctrl + G can increase the flow

Insane

00:40:269 (1,3) - (nazi) you can stack perfectly this
00:43:238 (2) - Ctrl + G maybe
01:50:426 (1) - Ctrl + G here and move 01:50:738 (2) - from x:136 y:239
Really nice map, congrats


Moway's Extra

try stack 00:08:394 (4) - in 00:08:551 (1) -, to me it seems more fun to play
00:10:894 (4,1) - /\ same
00:13:394 (4,1) - /\
move 00:32:613 (5) - from x:183 y:250, the distance between 00:32:613 (5,1) - is very small in current way
01:00:738 (3,4) - Ctrl + G will make a good jump
01:53:394 (3,4) - short distance, move 01:53:394 (3) - from x:218 y:317 is better
02:48:551 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 0,8x distance or more sounds perfect, 0,6x seems like a 1/4 stream
Topic Starter
Saut

Tarrasky wrote:

mod req from my queue
YAY ONE OK ROCK <3 <3

Hard

00:20:269 (1,1) - (nazi) you can perfect stack here fixed
01:43:863 (4) - Ctrl + G please, increase substantially the flow fits pretty well, good idea
03:17:926 (1,3) - (nazi) can improve this stack fixed
03:18:551 (3) - Ctrl + G maybe its intentional here, to make it a bit more tricky

Insane

00:40:269 (1,3) - (nazi) you can stack perfectly this fixed
00:43:238 (2) - Ctrl + G maybe 2much ds since i dont want to move it to an other place
01:50:426 (1) - Ctrl + G here and move 01:50:738 (2) - from x:136 y:239 also intentional here, but i moved 5 a bit down so its easier to play
Really nice map, congrats thanks
thanks for checkerino m8
pkhg

P A N wrote:

04:16 P A N: http://puu.sh/gnVhF/31f291da50.jpg
04:16 P A N: he looks surprised
Im still surprised owo
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