Hey -Mo-! M4M from #modreqs . Especially enjoyed Insenya :3, here is my mod:
[Insenya]
00:02:050 (2) - Try shortening this slider and starting another circle at 00:02:425 -
00:02:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - See below. (missed this one)
00:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend considering another pattern. I realize you are taking 1,2 and c/p rotating it but because it's only 5 notes the pattern is a bit difficult to notice.
00:14:050 (2,3,4,5) -
00:18:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The shape of the stream seems a bit weird, i think its mainly these 3 notes: 00:18:550 (3,4,5) -
00:22:862 (3,4) - If you are aiming for a jump here, I would move the 3 a bit farther apart. Right now it seems like it's unevenly spaced but not spaced wide enough to call it a jump .
00:29:050 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:29:425 (4,1,2) - ^
00:34:300 (1,2) - Try rotating 2 a bit. Something like this. Flows better imo. Same with the pattern directly after.
00:36:737 (2,1) - Make this more evenly spaced.
01:12:737 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - You can curve this stream a bit better imo.
01:13:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You had a lot of good polygon patterns right before, so why this :S.
01:33:175 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:01:300 (1,2,3) - Make them evenly spaced.
02:02:800 (1,2,3,4) - Try moving the 4 so that it overlaps with 1. I think this pattern plays better, also it's slightly more readable since the 4 stacks under 1 instead of 2 so more time.
02:13:112 (10) - This note looks out of place in the stream.
02:41:800 - Reduce the repeats by 1 and start another slider after the repeat here.
I really like your patterns :3.
[Hard]
00:17:800 (1,2,3) - Consider moving 3 so that the blanket distance is the same as 1, 2 (Up to you, some mappers intentionally leave it like that)
00:34:675 (2,3) - Try moving 3 up a bit so there is an equal gap between 2 and 3 throughout. (Like a blanket).
00:38:050 (2) - Shorten this a bit to make room for another slider at 00:39:175 - .
00:49:300 (1) - End spinner at 00:52:112 - so you can start another circle/slider on the white tick.
01:01:112 (4,5) - Take out the 5. This stack is overmapped on the Hard imo, there is no musical indication of a triplet
01:40:675 (1,2) - Blanket the tail of 2 to 1 better. (Blanket from 1 to 2 is good though)
01:58:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The jump from slider end of 3 to 4 is kind of awkward imo. Consider remapping this part.
02:04:112 (4,5) - Take out 5, same reason. Other sections are fine, i just don't think there is a musical cue here .
02:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon? This pattern is really weird.
[Normal]
This is really well done!
01:28:300 (1,2,3) - More 60 degree triangular shape?
02:14:800 (3,4,5) - 4 Isn't right in the middle of 3 and 5. Also make it straight?
02:47:800 (1,2,3) - I think you can make a better pattern here, maybe rotate 02:49:300 (3) - to fit the angle change?
[Easy]
00:04:300 (1,2) - Consider editing the sliders so you can blanket them and remove that weird gap in the center.
00:26:050 (2) - Make this more symmetrical
00:40:300 (4) - The repeat doesn't really capture anything a beginner would pick up. Consider taking out the repeat or extending the slider to a white tick.
00:53:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could make this a hexagonal pattern like this.
00:56:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same here.
02:11:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ or Pentagon?
[Insenya]
00:02:050 (2) - Try shortening this slider and starting another circle at 00:02:425 -
00:02:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - See below. (missed this one)
00:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend considering another pattern. I realize you are taking 1,2 and c/p rotating it but because it's only 5 notes the pattern is a bit difficult to notice.
00:14:050 (2,3,4,5) -
00:18:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The shape of the stream seems a bit weird, i think its mainly these 3 notes: 00:18:550 (3,4,5) -
00:22:862 (3,4) - If you are aiming for a jump here, I would move the 3 a bit farther apart. Right now it seems like it's unevenly spaced but not spaced wide enough to call it a jump .
00:29:050 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:29:425 (4,1,2) - ^
00:34:300 (1,2) - Try rotating 2 a bit. Something like this. Flows better imo. Same with the pattern directly after.
00:36:737 (2,1) - Make this more evenly spaced.
01:12:737 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - You can curve this stream a bit better imo.
01:13:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You had a lot of good polygon patterns right before, so why this :S.
01:33:175 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:01:300 (1,2,3) - Make them evenly spaced.
02:02:800 (1,2,3,4) - Try moving the 4 so that it overlaps with 1. I think this pattern plays better, also it's slightly more readable since the 4 stacks under 1 instead of 2 so more time.
02:13:112 (10) - This note looks out of place in the stream.
02:41:800 - Reduce the repeats by 1 and start another slider after the repeat here.
I really like your patterns :3.
[Hard]
00:17:800 (1,2,3) - Consider moving 3 so that the blanket distance is the same as 1, 2 (Up to you, some mappers intentionally leave it like that)
00:34:675 (2,3) - Try moving 3 up a bit so there is an equal gap between 2 and 3 throughout. (Like a blanket).
00:38:050 (2) - Shorten this a bit to make room for another slider at 00:39:175 - .
00:49:300 (1) - End spinner at 00:52:112 - so you can start another circle/slider on the white tick.
01:01:112 (4,5) - Take out the 5. This stack is overmapped on the Hard imo, there is no musical indication of a triplet
01:40:675 (1,2) - Blanket the tail of 2 to 1 better. (Blanket from 1 to 2 is good though)
01:58:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The jump from slider end of 3 to 4 is kind of awkward imo. Consider remapping this part.
02:04:112 (4,5) - Take out 5, same reason. Other sections are fine, i just don't think there is a musical cue here .
02:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon? This pattern is really weird.
[Normal]
This is really well done!
01:28:300 (1,2,3) - More 60 degree triangular shape?
02:14:800 (3,4,5) - 4 Isn't right in the middle of 3 and 5. Also make it straight?
02:47:800 (1,2,3) - I think you can make a better pattern here, maybe rotate 02:49:300 (3) - to fit the angle change?
[Easy]
00:04:300 (1,2) - Consider editing the sliders so you can blanket them and remove that weird gap in the center.
00:26:050 (2) - Make this more symmetrical
00:40:300 (4) - The repeat doesn't really capture anything a beginner would pick up. Consider taking out the repeat or extending the slider to a white tick.
00:53:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could make this a hexagonal pattern like this.
00:56:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same here.
02:11:800 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ or Pentagon?