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Leorda wrote:
Hello
[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it already fixed by Streliteela yay
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider? ^
-Famous- wrote:
Alpaca's Easy
- Check AiMod. 02:33:754 - Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. All the other difficulties doesn't have that warning. Fix it. i've seen many ranked maps with this in their AiMod so i suppose it's not a major problem
- 00:29:296 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved slightly. fix
- 00:37:525 (3,1) - ^ fix
- 01:00:496 (1,2) - Improve blanket. fix
- 01:05:982 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. the curent one is fine i guess
- 01:09:068 (2) - Move that slider to x:104 ; y:104 to keep the flow with 01:08:725 (1). fix
- 01:49:868 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure about that part. The sliders are really weird shaped and 01:49:868 (1,2) overlap. since there are no more option on this lmao well the first slider quickly disappear after we played it so then we can see the next slider's path clearly, so i guess it's not a problem. might reconsider if more modders point this out
- 02:00:839 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - That part doesn't sound right. You should snap 02:02:382 (2) to 02:02:211 and repeat it. Same with 02:05:125 (2,2). wait i thought they're the same
- 02:12:496 - Feels like a note is missing. it's better not to put a slider/circle too fast after spinner, especially in easiest diff
- 02:13:868 - Also feels like a note is missing. dang will reconsider about this
- 02:16:954 - Again note is missing. Snap 02:17:296 (1) to 02:16:954 and 02:17:639 (2) to 02:17:296. Then add a note 02:19:011. following the vocal here. also i'd like to add some gaps here because beginners can't play rhythms which is too long (based on my friend's experience tho lmao
- 02:27:925 - Add a note. ^
- 02:52:268 (2,1) - Slider doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). Also 02:53:296 (2) doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). fix
Thank you for mods!pinataman wrote:
[Easy]
00:29:294 (2,1) – make the second part of the 1 slider more curved so players can see the bend better. Could use 2 slider anchors for the 1 since the red anchor makes it less circular. 1 can blanket 2 better. fix
00:35:809 (1,2) - As shown by this helpful slider, you're pattern is not straight http://puu.sh/eXHg9/5fa2015e2e.jpg . So either rotate 00:35:809 (1,2) – by 4 CC and put at 118, 243, or rotate 1 and 2 Clockwise so you don't have linear flow here intentional
00:52:609 (2) - It would be nice if you had the red anchor on 00:53:123 – to match the beat, but this kind of messes up your slider design hmm yeah i dont want to ruin the blanket but i'll try something about this
00:59:809 (3) - This could be curved a bit more to match the 2 slider better like this: http://puu.sh/eXJ9L/9d02dbe390.jpg fix221,337,59809,2,0,P|254:317|274:283,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:49:866 (1,2) – I don't like this overlap/design. If you go with the anchor suggestions below, this is the pattern that came to mind (had to break 1.2x DS, which if you do you could try to keep your pattern, jut make sure 1 overlaps 2 at the center of the curved part of the 2 slider): dang since this is the easiest diff it's not allowed to break the dshttp://puu.sh/eXNz3/6a24ccf09a.jpg47,109,109866,6,0,B|107:35|213:8|300:36|300:36|435:202,1,479.999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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01:49:866 (1) – See if putting the red anchor at 01:51:066 - feels better since it matches the singer http://puu.sh/eXMBZ/71193386d3.jpg
In a similar vain, see if red anchors at 01:53:294 - , 01:53:809 – work better and put the red anchor here 01:59:294 – instead of 01:59:637 – and also if you do these, then 01:55:352 (1) – would feel out of place so go add similar anchors there. i think i prefer the current one /runs
02:00:837 (1) – For these kinds of sliders, it looks like you're using the red anchor to get the lyric “I” and then using the reverse slider on the electronic rhythm. I would put the red anchor more on the white slidertick to better match, but overall I don't recommend using a red anchor. Since the rhythm is not the same for the vocals/electric, trying to hit both is really confusing since it's hard not to focus on only one of them. Especially for the first note to introduce this pattern, I would just use a smooth slider. i didnt use red anchor for the vocal tho lmao i'll reconsider about the smooth slider because it's kinda good to lessen the sudden change in rhythm but long sliders all over again will be boring (and i've got a lot of complains about this diff being too repetitive lol) but yeah in this part the 3/4 rhythm is actually dominant in the song so i still choose to keep this rhythm tho, but yeah i'll re-think about the smooth sliders
02:33:066 (5,2) – It's possible to blanket these given rotation/movement, but this probably isn't necessary yeah it's not a blanket
02:46:780 (4) - Maybe try this flow? (Ctrl + > on 4) http://puu.sh/eXOnR/148be42b3a.jpg . If so, you can fit the rest with something like http://puu.sh/eXOj3/8635da73fa.jpg fix
03:00:152 (3,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel. Put the slider end at 188, 145. I don't want to assume that you do or don't know how to do this, so I put how I got here in this box: fixSPOILERCopy paste 03:00:152 (3) - . CTRL + Shift + S by about 1.5 . Delete the red anchor and end. You can be done, but for precise knowledge of where the slider ends, hit CTRL + G twice on it. End up with 188, 145.
and really sorry for the very late reply ;w;
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