I finally get a chance to mod your map >w<
* Not unrankable; There are like really really really small delays in some of your hitsounds, that people'll probably never even notice them (1 to 3ms of delay), but if you';re interested you can download them without delay here :3
* drum-hitfinish.wav - http://puu.sh/dK2eM/817dff39a8.wav
* drum-hitwhistle2.wav - http://puu.sh/dK2cw/48b54cd537.wav
* soft-hitfinish2.wav - http://puu.sh/dK23J/906812e2d4.wav
* soft-hitwhistle.wav - http://puu.sh/dK200/b59a07833d.wav
* 00:16:186 (1) - Remove whistle here? There's absolutely no extra (bass) instrument it can go with and the piano sound is the same as 00:09:596 (2,1,2,1,1,2,3) -
* 00:19:307 (2) - Add a whistle on the slider end here, or delete the ones at 00:20:694 (2) - (literally the same sound)
and 00:21:214 (2) - (same sound + piano, but you don't put whistles on the piano in your whole map..)
* 00:25:029 (15) - Uhmm.. can you tell me why you put a whistle here? Since this one and 00:24:335 (7) - are very different from each other ._. - because if you follow the soft drum sound, you should put ones at 00:25:377 (3) - and 00:26:417 (15) - 00:26:764 (2) - etc....
* 00:27:284 (1) - Remove whistle on the second repeat? There's no extra piano sound like 00:27:977 (1) -
* 00:29:885 (7) - Did you miss something here ? Same sound as 00:25:723 (7) - only you don't need the finish since there's no drum here.
* 00:30:753 (1) - Add whistle? I think you missed this one :3
* 00:32:660 (5) - Add whistle on the head? Like 00:33:353 (3) -
* 00:34:047 (4) - Head could also use a whistle.
* 00:35:433 (7) - Missing hitsound.
* 00:40:983 (7) - ^ (unless intentional, wont mention anymore)
* 00:36:820 (7) - Missing whistle?
* 00:37:167 (11) - Delete whistle, only bass sound here.
* 00:40:983 (7) - ^
* 00:41:850 (1) - Piano is present here as well, add whistle along with the finish, like 00:40:463 (1) - ?
* 00:42:371 (7) - ^
* 00:57:457 (1,2) - A distance around 0.95x would be better here imo, so it's consistent with 01:00:405 (2,3) -
* 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe it's just me, but at this part of the song I can't hear anything on the blue ticks >_>
* 01:06:821 (1) - Use normal additions here with a clap? Would give the same effect as 01:13:758 (1) -
* 02:24:509 (1) - ^
* 01:12:198 (2) - The multi-repeat here is not good imo, skipping the downbeat with 1/4 rhythms like these should be avoided, because they confuse the player and they don't really make sense. I highly recommend to just split these up into 1/4 sliders, or try to use something like 01:10:636 (3) - where it doesn't land on the downbeat.
* 02:29:886 (2) - ^
* 01:11:330 (3) - It seems that you only put claps, when there's a clap sound + high vocal note, like 01:13:411 (3) - . That's also the case here, so why not put a clap here?
* 01:12:718 (2) - ^
* 01:47:573 (7) - Missing whistle again (im going to stop here ;_;)
* 01:54:943 (12,13) - Meh, I wouldn't add hitsounds here, like 04:17:660 (10,11,12) - , but if you do want to keep it, consider removing the clap at (12). Nothing in the song itself and it sounds spammed.
* 01:56:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really really nazi, but could you move this until 01:57:977 (8) - is in the middle of the circle at 01:58:671 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ?
* 02:00:492 (12) - Shouldn't the clap be on the next note? The music is stronger there o_o
* 02:01:532 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Shape is a bit 'meh' to me sorry ;_;, try this?
* 02:24:509 (1) - Add whistle on the slider end for the drum, like 01:06:821 (1) - ?
* 02:46:879 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i love you <3
* 03:21:388 (1,2,3) - The jump should be at (2,3) imo, because the clap is at (3). Just like 03:24:162 (2,3,1) -
* 03:22:775 (1,2,3) - ^
* 03:26:937 (1,2,3) - ^ etc...
* 04:03:006 (1,2,3) - What? This is way too close imo, try spacing 0.3/0.4x like 04:01:619 (1,2,3) -
* 04:07:428 (4) - Add finish here? For the finish-clap kind of rhythm that's also present at 00:25:463 (4,5) - and 01:43:151 (4,5) -
* 04:09:249 (9) - Well, the vocals ('re') are the strongest here, so the sharp turn should be here imo.
* 04:21:560 (7) - ^
* 04:24:335 (7) - ^
* 04:45:145 (7) - ^
* 04:27:110 (4) - NC here to indicate DS change of the stream? You did have it at for example 00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,5) -
Can't play it, but it's beautiful *_*
Good luck ~
Tess wrote:
Is there a reason you changed from Mysterious Hymn to Higan Torrent? I personally liked Mysterious Hymn a looot more. I hope you'll change it back but it's up to you of course.
General
* Not unrankable; There are like really really really small delays in some of your hitsounds, that people'll probably never even notice them (1 to 3ms of delay), but if you';re interested you can download them without delay here :3
* drum-hitfinish.wav - http://puu.sh/dK2eM/817dff39a8.wav
* drum-hitwhistle2.wav - http://puu.sh/dK2cw/48b54cd537.wav
* soft-hitfinish2.wav - http://puu.sh/dK23J/906812e2d4.wav
* soft-hitwhistle.wav - http://puu.sh/dK200/b59a07833d.wav
Higan Torrent
* 00:16:186 (1) - Remove whistle here? There's absolutely no extra (bass) instrument it can go with and the piano sound is the same as 00:09:596 (2,1,2,1,1,2,3) -
* 00:19:307 (2) - Add a whistle on the slider end here, or delete the ones at 00:20:694 (2) - (literally the same sound)
and 00:21:214 (2) - (same sound + piano, but you don't put whistles on the piano in your whole map..)
* 00:25:029 (15) - Uhmm.. can you tell me why you put a whistle here? Since this one and 00:24:335 (7) - are very different from each other ._. - because if you follow the soft drum sound, you should put ones at 00:25:377 (3) - and 00:26:417 (15) - 00:26:764 (2) - etc....
* 00:27:284 (1) - Remove whistle on the second repeat? There's no extra piano sound like 00:27:977 (1) -
* 00:29:885 (7) - Did you miss something here ? Same sound as 00:25:723 (7) - only you don't need the finish since there's no drum here.
* 00:30:753 (1) - Add whistle? I think you missed this one :3
* 00:32:660 (5) - Add whistle on the head? Like 00:33:353 (3) -
* 00:34:047 (4) - Head could also use a whistle.
* 00:35:433 (7) - Missing hitsound.
* 00:40:983 (7) - ^ (unless intentional, wont mention anymore)
* 00:36:820 (7) - Missing whistle?
* 00:37:167 (11) - Delete whistle, only bass sound here.
* 00:40:983 (7) - ^
* 00:41:850 (1) - Piano is present here as well, add whistle along with the finish, like 00:40:463 (1) - ?
* 00:42:371 (7) - ^
* 00:57:457 (1,2) - A distance around 0.95x would be better here imo, so it's consistent with 01:00:405 (2,3) -
* 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe it's just me, but at this part of the song I can't hear anything on the blue ticks >_>
* 01:06:821 (1) - Use normal additions here with a clap? Would give the same effect as 01:13:758 (1) -
* 02:24:509 (1) - ^
* 01:12:198 (2) - The multi-repeat here is not good imo, skipping the downbeat with 1/4 rhythms like these should be avoided, because they confuse the player and they don't really make sense. I highly recommend to just split these up into 1/4 sliders, or try to use something like 01:10:636 (3) - where it doesn't land on the downbeat.
* 02:29:886 (2) - ^
* 01:11:330 (3) - It seems that you only put claps, when there's a clap sound + high vocal note, like 01:13:411 (3) - . That's also the case here, so why not put a clap here?
* 01:12:718 (2) - ^
* 01:47:573 (7) - Missing whistle again (im going to stop here ;_;)
* 01:54:943 (12,13) - Meh, I wouldn't add hitsounds here, like 04:17:660 (10,11,12) - , but if you do want to keep it, consider removing the clap at (12). Nothing in the song itself and it sounds spammed.
* 01:56:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really really nazi, but could you move this until 01:57:977 (8) - is in the middle of the circle at 01:58:671 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ?
* 02:00:492 (12) - Shouldn't the clap be on the next note? The music is stronger there o_o
* 02:01:532 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Shape is a bit 'meh' to me sorry ;_;, try this?
* 02:24:509 (1) - Add whistle on the slider end for the drum, like 01:06:821 (1) - ?
* 02:46:879 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i love you <3
* 03:21:388 (1,2,3) - The jump should be at (2,3) imo, because the clap is at (3). Just like 03:24:162 (2,3,1) -
* 03:22:775 (1,2,3) - ^
* 03:26:937 (1,2,3) - ^ etc...
* 04:03:006 (1,2,3) - What? This is way too close imo, try spacing 0.3/0.4x like 04:01:619 (1,2,3) -
* 04:07:428 (4) - Add finish here? For the finish-clap kind of rhythm that's also present at 00:25:463 (4,5) - and 01:43:151 (4,5) -
* 04:09:249 (9) - Well, the vocals ('re') are the strongest here, so the sharp turn should be here imo.
* 04:21:560 (7) - ^
* 04:24:335 (7) - ^
* 04:45:145 (7) - ^
* 04:27:110 (4) - NC here to indicate DS change of the stream? You did have it at for example 00:45:145 (1,2,3,4,5) -
Can't play it, but it's beautiful *_*
Good luck ~