00:03:920 (3) - I would make this a circle on the 1/1 or make it repeat once.
00:08:716 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:10:640 - ^
00:15:560 (1) - I'd make this a 1/1 slider starting at 00:15:680 - .
00:17:600 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider please.
00:18:320 (3) - Make into a 1/2 slider repeating once.
00:20:952 - Place a circle on the 1/1 here.
00:22:764 - Place a circle on the 3/4 here.
00:24:068 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:24:800 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
00:25:760 (4) - Make this a 1/2 slider repeating once.
00:28:887 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:30:426 - Place a circle on the 3/4 here, or remove 00:30:200 (3,4) - .
00:31:772 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:33:440 (1,2) - Change to a 1/2 slider repeating once.
00:35:589 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:37:530 - Place a circle on the 1/2 and 3/4 here.
00:37:760 (2,3) - Change this to a 1/2 slider.
00:39:462 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:42:790 - ^
00:43:754 - ^
00:44:720 (3) - Remove this note.
00:48:440 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like having this stream feels a bit useless in a cup, I'd delete all notes but 5.
00:52:880 (3) - Make this a circle on the 1/1, the beat on the 1/2 is no different to the beats you've been missing out the whole map.
00:54:560 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
00:55:760 (3) - Make this a circle on the 1/1, same reason as earlier.
00:56:720 (2) - Maybe remove this.
00:58:155 - Place a circle on the 1/2 and make this NC instead of 00:58:400 (1) - .
00:58:400 (1,2) - Make into a 1/2 slider.
00:58:889 - Add a circle here, or if you take the change above, you could possibly make the 1/2 slider repeat once.
00:59:360 (4) - I'd make this slider a 1/2 slider instead, and then place a circle on the 1/1 at 00:59:853 - .
01:01:760 (3) - I'd make this NC just because of the fact that it's the beginning of a kiai time. (But just wondering, why is this kiai time here...?)
01:08:000 (4) - I'd make this a 1/2 slider and put a circle on the 3/4 at 01:08:357 - .
01:09:920 (1,2) - Maybe make this a 1/2 slider?
01:16:404 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
01:16:880 (4) - I'd remove this note, and move (3) a bit closer to the middle of the circle and the slider with this change.
01:17:836 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
01:23:480 (3,4,5) - I'd get rid of (3) and (5), whilst I hear how this fits the song, you could have just the (4) and still fit the song.
01:25:280 (1,2,3) - Make this a 1/2 slider repeating once.
01:27:440 (6) - I'd change this to be like
This.
01:28:640 (1) - I'd shorten this down to a 1/2 slider.
01:40:760 (2,4) - Could remove these two possibly.
01:42:800 (2,3,4,5) - I'd delete (3) and (5).
01:45:560 (6,7) - Maybe move these notes so that they're going right after (5), I'd say 6 to x:100 and 7 to x:145, so that it's symmetrical to the (3,4) before.
01:47:120 (2) - I know it's still catchable, but it goes off the map... please change the repeat point to x:0, although this happens by default, just because it's less confusing.
01:49:280 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
01:50:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete 3, 5, and 7 please.
01:52:160 (1,2,3) - Possibly make this a 1/1 slider repeating twice instead.
01:54:080 (1) - Make this into a 1/2 slider.
01:54:560 (2) - ^
01:55:165 - Place a circle on the 1/4.
01:56:840 (5,6) - Possibly change to a 1/2 slider at 01:56:840 (5) - like
this? (co:ords in order for each point of slider) (449, y), (494, y),
(449, y-56) Where y is whatever y co-ordinate you like, as long as it stays the same for all points. (red co-ord being a red point).
01:59:240 (5) - Remove this.
02:02:720 (6) - Possibly make this repeat?
02:07:040 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
02:11:240 (2) - Move this point back to the 1/2.
02:12:800 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider repeating once.
02:17:000 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd delete 2, 4, and 6.
02:18:440 (1) - I'd make this a 3/4 slider, and change 02:18:560 (2) - to a circle on the 1/1 at 02:19:043 - .
02:22:400 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider.