1. DavidEd's Hard (3.41 stars, 225 notes)
2. Easy (1.46 stars, 95 notes)
3. Fizz's Insane (4.12 stars, 275 notes)
4. Insane (4.82 stars, 309 notes)
5. Normal (2.13 stars, 135 notes)

• Easy
  i loved the blankets you made! I thought the easy was mapped too heavily in the center. i dont think its bad or needs changing, but i felt the need to mention this.

1. 00:21:250 (3,1) - overlapping here. consider moving them.
2. 00:12:779 (5) and 00:26:191 (6) - i dont think these are needed.
   overall, well made and sounds nice.

• Normal

1. 00:12:779 (1) - I dont think this circle is needed.
2. 00:14:544 (4,5) - stack (5) on the end of (4)
3. 00:11:368 (4,1,1) - put these all on the same X coordinate.
   blankets look good. nice map!

• DavidEd's Hard

1. 00:07:485 (2) - start the new combo here
2. 00:10:309 (2) - ^
3. 00:16:838 (4) - ^
4. 00:21:073 (4) - ^
5. 00:25:485 (6) - ^
6. 00:29:544 (5) - ^
7. 00:32:368 (7) - ^
8. 00:40:839 (7) - ^
9. 01:05:191 (5) - ^
10. 01:08:015 (4) - ^
11. 00:44:544 (2,3) - make these more parallel. select (2) and copy paste, Ctrl + G, and then place it where you want.
    overall, i liked the map. nice job!

• Insane

1. 00:48:779 (4,5,6) - line these up on the same X coordinate.
   i wish i had your mapping skills. i thought this was a well made map.

[Dominic] wrote:

• Easy
  i loved the blankets you made! I thought the easy was mapped too heavily in the center. i dont think its bad or needs changing, but i felt the need to mention this.

1. 00:21:250 (3,1) - overlapping here. consider moving them. Fixed
2. 00:12:779 (5) and 00:26:191 (6) - i dont think these are needed. Removed both
   overall, well made and sounds nice.

• Normal

1. 00:12:779 (1) - I dont think this circle is needed. Removed
2. 00:14:544 (4,5) - stack (5) on the end of (4) Kinda fucks with DS a bit. Changed for now because it looks better.
3. 00:11:368 (4,1,1) - put these all on the same X coordinate. Fixed
   blankets look good. nice map!

• Insane

1. 00:48:779 (4,5,6) - line these up on the same X coordinate. Jesus that's sloppy. Fixed.
   i wish i had your mapping skills. i thought this was a well made map. <3

Thats it for my mods. good luck with getting this ranked! I hope something I mention is useful.

[Dominic] wrote:

• DavidEd's Hard

1. 00:07:485 (2) - start the new combo here
2. 00:10:309 (2) - ^
3. 00:16:838 (4) - ^
4. 00:21:073 (4) - ^
5. 00:25:485 (6) - ^
6. 00:29:544 (5) - ^ Fixed most of these combo errors.
7. 00:32:368 (7) - ^
8. 00:40:839 (7) - ^
9. 01:05:191 (5) - ^
10. 01:08:015 (4) - ^
11. 00:44:544 (2,3) - make these more parallel. select (2) and copy paste, Ctrl + G, and then place it where you want. Fix
    overall, i liked the map. nice job!

1. Double check the Aimod?
2. Unrankable Issue, the video on Normal, Hard and Extra is not playing, please fix that. You can fix it by open .osu each diff and check the Event section, the right one should be like this http://puu.sh/g3mfK/3966f4d5e9.png
3. Have you double check the metadata of the song?
4. In my opinion the gap between Normal and Hard is too big, consider to make it more balance?
5. Audio can be maximized to 192kbps
6. Un-check widescreen support on here http://puu.sh/g3hfT/690602e1c7.png ? this mapset doesn't even have an SB
7. To minimized the size of the .osz, I think you can delete soft-hitclap3 and soft-hitwhistle3. they are generaly have same sound as soft-hitclap2 and soft-hitwhistle2. Also delete soft-clap4, soft-whistle4, and soft-hitclap22 they are generaly have same sound as default soft sample set
8. Have you double check the timing? I'm a bit concern on the timing on this part 00:49:485 - and what I found is there should be three red timing on this map instead of two, regarding to the metronome reset here 00:50:191 - and here 00:51:293 - But it's up to you, another timing recheck would be great
   

   [TimingPoints]
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1. 00:07:132 (4) - Add finish?
2. 00:08:544 (2) - Add finish on slider head?
3. 00:07:132 (4,1) - Swap NC? It seems on easy you make New Combo every two downbeat
4. 00:09:956 (1) - Add finish on head?
5. 00:12:603 - Add circle there? to emphize more the drum sound from music
6. 00:16:662 - Add circle there? As for me a bit odd not to be mapped and make a sudden stop
7. 01:06:778 (1,2,3) - The flow between them somewhat awkward imo, my sugestion is 01:08:896 (3) - rotate that -40 degree then move to x:48 y:208 and adjust the next notes according to the DS, http://puu.sh/g3jKd/c6a33aa882.jpg
8. 01:06:778 (1,2) - Spacing error? the DS diffrent from 1,00x to 1,06x is quite noticeable
9. 01:08:896 (3,4) - Spacing error also
10. 01:17:719 - Add green line there? then lower the volume a bit, might apply to the rest of the diff
    
    Some sugestion, you can use tiny grid to make the DS precise or disable the grid snap, check your NC more to make sure and the hitsound

1. Video is not playing
2. 00:01:485 (3) - NC? I think it's necesary to begin the downbeat and you can delete this NC 00:02:897 (1) -
3. 00:07:132 (1) - Add finish?
4. 00:08:544 (4) - Add finish on head?
5. 00:09:956 (1) - Add finish on head?
6. 00:14:191 (3) - NC and add finish?
7. 00:29:721 (1,2,3) - That pattern might make player confused, at least on normal and easy that kind of thing should be prevent to use, and as far as I know you can't put any notes that completely covered under the slider body, you might consider to re-think that one
8. 00:42:426 (3,4,5,1) - It's just me or the turn between them is just too sharp imo
9. 01:14:543 (1) - Make it a curve instead?
   
   Some notes is overlapping each other and the hitsound on drum is kinda mess up a bit imo

1. Check your Aimod??
2. Video is not playing
3. It's a shame you don't use the custom hitsound, you can apply some if you want to make this diff better
4. 00:21:073 (1,2,3) - Stack properly?
5. 00:48:779 (4,5,6) - Not stack them? It's hard to read and yet there's 1/3 rhythm here 00:48:779 (4,5) - So to make it more noticeable and better read for the rhythm changing consider to not stacking them
6. 01:13:132 (1,2) - Literally same as above
   
   The hitsound prety plain lol, yet there's so many costum sound on the song folder, other than that polish more and I think it's ready to go

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Hard]

1. Check your Aimod??
2. Video is not playing Are you sure you have ''show video'' checked?
3. It's a shame you don't use the custom hitsound, you can apply some if you want to make this diff better Added some hitsounds
4. 00:21:073 (1,2,3) - Stack properly? Fix
5. 00:48:779 (4,5,6) - Not stack them? It's hard to read and yet there's 1/3 rhythm here 00:48:779 (4,5) - So to make it more noticeable and better read for the rhythm changing consider to not stacking them Fix
6. 01:13:132 (1,2) - Literally same as above Fix
   
   The hitsound prety plain lol, yet there's so many costum sound on the song folder, other than that polish more and I think it's ready to go

[]
Such a cute song haha XD
Good luck~

Mako Sakata wrote:

[General]

1. Double check the Aimod?
2. Unrankable Issue, the video on Normal, Hard and Extra is not playing, please fix that. You can fix it by open .osu each diff and check the Event section, the right one should be like this http://puu.sh/g3mfK/3966f4d5e9.png wow i was lazy. fixed
3. Have you double check the metadata of the song? unsure of english title, everything else should be correct
4. In my opinion the gap between Normal and Hard is too big, consider to make it more balance? I'll try to do what i can with my normal
5. Audio can be maximized to 192kbps if anyone would donate a higher quality mp3, i'll gladly use it. fine for now though
6. Un-check widescreen support on here http://puu.sh/g3hfT/690602e1c7.png ? this mapset doesn't even have an SB fixed
7. To minimized the size of the .osz, I think you can delete soft-hitclap3 and soft-hitwhistle3. they are generaly have same sound as soft-hitclap2 and soft-hitwhistle2. Also delete soft-clap4, soft-whistle4, and soft-hitclap22 they are generaly have same sound as default soft sample set Took me so long to clean up my hitsound files but i finally did it ;-;
8. Have you double check the timing? I'm a bit concern on the timing on this part 00:49:485 - and what I found is there should be three red timing on this map instead of two, regarding to the metronome reset here 00:50:191 - and here 00:51:293 - But it's up to you, another timing recheck would be great The first few notes sounded perfect with this timing, but the rest sounded off again. I think I'll wait for another timing check

[Easy]

1. 00:07:132 (4) - Add finish? yup
2. 00:08:544 (2) - Add finish on slider head? yup
3. 00:07:132 (4,1) - Swap NC? It seems on easy you make New Combo every two downbeat fixed
4. 00:09:956 (1) - Add finish on head? yup
5. 00:12:603 - Add circle there? to emphize more the drum sound from music added
6. 00:16:662 - Add circle there? As for me a bit odd not to be mapped and make a sudden stop added
7. 01:06:778 (1,2,3) - The flow between them somewhat awkward imo, my sugestion is 01:08:896 (3) - rotate that -40 degree then move to x:48 y:208 and adjust the next notes according to the DS, http://puu.sh/g3jKd/c6a33aa882.jpg fixed this part to pretty much the same way you explained
8. 01:06:778 (1,2) - Spacing error? the DS diffrent from 1,00x to 1,06x is quite noticeable this wasn't an issue after i fixed above
9. 01:08:896 (3,4) - Spacing error also ^
10. 01:17:719 - Add green line there? then lower the volume a bit, might apply to the rest of the diff good idea, changed on all my diffs
    
    Some sugestion, you can use tiny grid to make the DS precise or disable the grid snap, check your NC more to make sure and the hitsound

[Normal]

1. Video is not playing fixed
2. 00:01:485 (3) - NC? I think it's necesary to begin the downbeat and you can delete this NC 00:02:897 (1) -
3. 00:07:132 (1) - Add finish?
4. 00:08:544 (4) - Add finish on head?
5. 00:09:956 (1) - Add finish on head?
6. 00:14:191 (3) - NC and add finish? added everything above^^
7. 00:29:721 (1,2,3) - That pattern might make player confused, at least on normal and easy that kind of thing should be prevent to use, and as far as I know you can't put any notes that completely covered under the slider body, you might consider to re-think that one ehh, fixed just to be safe
8. 00:42:426 (3,4,5,1) - It's just me or the turn between them is just too sharp imo softened the turn a bit
9. 01:14:543 (1) - Make it a curve instead? got it
   
   Some notes is overlapping each other and the hitsound on drum is kinda mess up a bit imo i have literally no clue what happened to the drum hitsound wtf. i'll fix

[]
Such a cute song haha XD
Good luck~

Lazer wrote:

[DavidEd's Hard]

00:09:073 (2,3) - Switch 2 and 3 around Fixed

00:12:691 (1,1) - I believe there needs to be more recovery time Removed spinner cause there isn't really that much noise other than vocals.

00:50:632 - I suggest mapping this part too as the song is already pretty short ^^

01:08:721 (4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing isn't exactly right Fixed

01:10:662 (1) - Remove NC Fixed

Lazer wrote:

Taken care of.
[Insane]

00:04:132 (7,1) - Spacing is off between those two did that on purpose to make a small jump

Good luck with your map ^^ <3

koyomiya wrote:

[DavidEd's Hard]
the hit sound custom 2 didnt apply in the song folder, althought is set to S:C2, but it take default hit

sound. add custom 2 hit sound or change the hit sound. What do you mean?

DavidEd wrote:

koyomiya wrote:

[DavidEd's Hard]
the hit sound custom 2 didnt apply in the song folder, althought is set to S:C2, but it take default hit

sound. add custom 2 hit sound or change the hit sound. What do you mean?

Anyways... I added some hitsounds in this update. Thanks for the mod!

Heres the update!

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: attakaindakaraa.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61708
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7132,14191,25485,38191,42073,49485,56897,62544,68191,75250
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.199999

[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara~
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Anba
ArtistUnicode:アンバ
Creator:[ Way ]
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:
Tags:honeyworks kumamushi hatsune miku vocaloid Because It's Warm~ Lolparty DavidEd
BeatmapID:644573
BeatmapSetID:276201

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"attakain-bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"attakain.avi"
//Break Periods
2,49685,54382
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo4 : 109,172,91

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koyomiya wrote:

from koyomiya queue. thanks for waiting my mod.

koyomiya mod

[general]
timing
i know the first beat is changing, but timing cant resnap, 00:49:485 - may be insert 5/4 I'm a little confused, but this part is definitely in 4/4 time.
00:50:015 ~ 00:56:896, the timing are abit no match, suggest recheck the timing.you will hear the problem when play at 50% I'll try to find someone who can time this part better than me ;~;
inherited point
place it nicely as you can.....it hard to determined wat using for, place it to the white point that i draw Fixed easy and normal, i'll get to insane when i get back from class

[easy]
00:11:544　00:11:897　00:55:131　01:01:307 - inherited point doesnt use, might delete it. removed all

[normal]
00:04:485　00:35:897　 01:01:308 - inherited point doesnt use, might delete it. removed all
00:01:132 (2) - change to slider to fit his voice. fixed
01:10:484 (5) - may be reverse slider will better? added

[DavidEd's Hard]
the hit sound custom 2 didnt apply in the song folder, althought is set to S:C2, but it take default hit sound. add custom 2 hit sound or change the hit sound Changed this for him

[Insane]
00:37:309 - is not necessary to change the velocity to 0.8. suggest put back to 1.0. you can put same distance by using pressing alt to adjust the spacing to 0.8 SV doesn't really matter here anymore, but i'm keeping the inherited point because volume change
00:38:191　00:38:897 - this 2 inherited point is same, which are you using it? the one which is not using delete it. removed one
01:13:839 - inherited point is a bit over, move to 01:13:837 the point was snapped on 01:13:838 already ;-;
00:37:044 (7) - i think is no need to add. a little bit strange when pressing..might delete it, I'd rather the player only singletap the slow part, unchanged for now

qxqd_1993 wrote:

DavidEd's Hard:
01:06:779(1) Beautiful sliders, but it does not make sence, i mean, i guess stream can make better effect here since in kiai.
01:08:721(4) I do believe it will be better to New a combo here. And a jump can be stirring i think. Made a new combo at 01:08:191(1) instead because thats where the sv change starts.
01:10:132(1,2,3,4) I love this combo but... Circle 3 seems making no effect?

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:48:779 (4,5,6) - increase the spacing here fixed

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:54:073 (4,5) - try to move slider's tail for a better flow fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:07:838 (3,5) - Not stacked completely they were stacked fine already
2. 00:21:250 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - may be too hard for a normal diff, try using some sliders? changed one into a slider
3. 00:31:132 (3,4) - flow looks bad here, try to fix this fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:03:250 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Increase the ds for 00:03:779 (5,6,7), this is too close for jump I think it's fine
2. 00:07:132 (1) - NC here instead There already was one though?
3. 00:28:838 (8) - 1/2 slider instead fixed

sorry for late mod ;w;

qxqd_1993 wrote:

But posted one star=w=