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Topic Starter
Cirno
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月22日 at 0:28:47

Artist: TAG meets "eimy"
Title: Kono aozora no shita de
Source: REFLEC BEAT limelight
BPM: 165
Filesize: 3231kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 7Key (2.66 stars, 950 notes)
  2. BEGINNER - 7Key (1.38 stars, 338 notes)
  3. EXHAUST - 7Key (4.71 stars, 1625 notes)
  4. NOVICE - 7Key (2.18 stars, 649 notes)
Download: TAG meets "eimy" - Kono aozora no shita de
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BEGINNER / NOVICE / ADVANCED / EXHAUST
4 / 6 / 9 / 12

To anyone who might want to make arguments out of my playing skill:
SPOILER
I can't pass EXHAUST. I broke the "pass all diffs" guideline so here I'm refering to the guidelines itself:
Does what I'm about to do make sense? Is it more fun to play like this compared to sticking to the guidelines? If you answer yes to both these questions, then it is probably okay.
Yes. What I did made sense. If you can pick out patterns that say otherwise, I'll happily make changes.
Yes. Without a high difficulty the mapset is much less fun to high level players, and less fitting the song. If you can prove otherwise, I'll happily make changes.
xxbidiao
先简单说一些,回来再继续看:
[总体]
你可能offset不对。差别大概在5ms左右,再到editor里确认一下吧?

[Exhaust]
略微overmap了。
整体变化太少了些。还有不用拘泥于鼓点左synth右的规则(对称一下就OK,2~4小节轮换对称一下频率高些。建议以你任何的方式换梗都可以)。鼓点可以岔开到双手1/7/17/7完全是可行的。全卡在单手上非常卡手。
01:09:286 (69286|0) - 这里卡手的很,当然如果你是故意卡手的话。。。建议121212121212改成双手(比如35),手感会不错。
00:12:559 (12559|3) - 右手部分,这里虽然是(ooooooooo)但是最后一个音很轻。一上来的时候可以考虑空几个(ooo_ooo_)后面再引入高强度。

[Novice]
这双键。。强度太高了点。。作为novice有点高吧?
其他的后面再补充。。
Topic Starter
Cirno

xxbidiao wrote:

先简单说一些,回来再继续看:
[总体]
你可能offset不对。差别大概在5ms左右,再到editor里确认一下吧?我其实从来没搞清楚过这机器的全局offset,刚才把LR2的全局offset拿了过来然后新测的图offset是926,可能会好些

[Exhaust]
略微overmap了。orz
整体变化太少了些。还有不用拘泥于鼓点左synth右的规则(对称一下就OK,2~4小节轮换对称一下频率高些。建议以你任何的方式换梗都可以)。鼓点可以岔开到双手1/7/17/7完全是可行的。全卡在单手上非常卡手。ok 我试着多引入些变化
01:09:286 (69286|0) - 这里卡手的很,当然如果你是故意卡手的话。。。建议121212121212改成双手(比如35),手感会不错。ok
00:12:559 (12559|3) - 右手部分,这里虽然是(ooooooooo)但是最后一个音很轻。一上来的时候可以考虑空几个(ooo_ooo_)后面再引入高强度。这么说的话第二个音的音量也比一和三差上不少的,前面试了下改为不用这两个

[Novice]
这双键。。强度太高了点。。作为novice有点高吧?我自己的感觉是有beginner垫着可以弄难点,不过减少些强度也是合理的
其他的后面再补充。。
多谢 先给个kd,一会看补充再仔细改 :)
Entozer
Hello~

General
Maybe you can use this for the drum? http://puu.sh/2zHl5

BEGINNER
Just a suggestion, 00:24:563 (24563|2) - Starting at this point, maybe you can add whistles to the synths?
----
00:26:563 (26563|4) - Delete? (different and soft synth sound)

NOVICE
Same suggestion as BEGINNER diff, 00:12:744 (12744|4) - Add whistles to the synths?
----
00:26:562 (26562|4) - Delete? (different and soft synth sound)

This is just my opinion, but 01:00:744 (60744|0,60835|2) - This kind of pattern feels a bit... awkward for me. Going 3/4 is better here

01:38:016 (98016|3) - delete? it plays better without these
01:38:198 (98198|1) - ^

01:40:925 (100925|3) - ^
01:41:107 (101107|1) - ^

01:43:834 (103834|3) - ^
01:44:016 (104016|1) - ^

01:46:743 (106743|3) - ^
01:46:925 (106925|1) - ^

ADVANCED
00:26:562 (26562|6,26562|4) - delete (different and soft synth sound)

EXHAUST
Soon..

Good map \o/
Topic Starter
Cirno

Entozer wrote:

Hello~

General
Maybe you can use this for the drum? http://puu.sh/2zHl5

BEGINNER
Just a suggestion, 00:24:563 (24563|2) - Starting at this point, maybe you can add whistles to the synths?
----
00:26:563 (26563|4) - Delete? (different and soft synth sound)

NOVICE
Same suggestion as BEGINNER diff, 00:12:744 (12744|4) - Add whistles to the synths?
----
00:26:562 (26562|4) - Delete? (different and soft synth sound)

This is just my opinion, but 01:00:744 (60744|0,60835|2) - This kind of pattern feels a bit... awkward for me. Going 3/4 is better here

01:38:016 (98016|3) - delete? it plays better without these
01:38:198 (98198|1) - ^

01:40:925 (100925|3) - ^
01:41:107 (101107|1) - ^

01:43:834 (103834|3) - ^
01:44:016 (104016|1) - ^

01:46:743 (106743|3) - ^
01:46:925 (106925|1) - ^

ADVANCED
00:26:562 (26562|6,26562|4) - delete (different and soft synth sound)

EXHAUST
Soon.. QAQ

All fixed

Good map \o/
Thanks!
Hanyuu
The OD on exhaust is extreme what makes recoverying back HP very very hard :o
Topic Starter
Cirno

Hanyuu wrote:

The OD on exhaust is extreme what makes recoverying back HP very very hard :o
Well since exhaust has a lot more notes than advanced I set its HPD higher(after some observations it seems that osu!mania's gauge is not relative to the note count). But then, lacking official data, it's really hard to do rational decisions. Will consider it after I get back to my computer, thanks~

EDIT: Looks like full recovery@HP9 is around 250 rainbows and HP8 around 125. As the notecount gap between ADVANCED and EXHAUST is quite large, it seems that 9 is the way to go without an option in between :(
jyu
Hi :)

My testplay:

i'm sorry for only testplaying two diff (too noob x.x) i had fun playing this map :D And the song is catchy, i really like it

my suggestion is : The song starts too suddenly. How about adding audio lead-in? (Preferrably :1-1.5 s)

maybe that's all. everything is great, i hope this'll get ranked fast :)

Good luck
Topic Starter
Cirno

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

my suggestion is : The song starts too suddenly. How about adding audio lead-in? (Preferrably :1-1.5 s)

maybe that's all. everything is great, i hope this'll get ranked fast :)

Good luck
Thanks for the testplay~ Added lead-in and modified some patterns on NOVICE, hopefully making it more considerate (hopefully)

Kudo'd for suggestion
Andrea
Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 165,00 - Offset: 940 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Cirno

Andrea wrote:

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 165,00 - Offset: 940 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^
Updated, thanks
Entozer
Just passing by again. No Kudosu

BEGINNER
HP = 5 or 4 (You can't have HP=1 ><)
OD = 8?
Topic Starter
Cirno

Entozer wrote:

Just passing by again. No Kudosu

BEGINNER
HP = 5 or 4 (You can't have HP=1 ><)
OD = 8?
HP changed to 5
OD to 8

updated,thanks
Hanyuu
Can you even pass your own EXHAUST diff? lol <_<
Playing this map over and over just to try to pass it and this setting really sucks and i started to dislike this map. The map itself is very hard mapped and the drop in HP is just ridiculous if you make a mistake. And recovering is way too hard. Ontop of that OD 10 timing lol? you must be some kind of troll. I honestly really want to see yourself S rank this.
Topic Starter
Cirno

Hanyuu wrote:

Playing this map over and over just to try to pass it and this setting really sucks and i started to dislike this map. The map itself is very hard mapped and the drop in HP is just ridiculous if you make a mistake. And recovering is way too hard. Ontop of that OD 10 timing lol?
LONG
It's curious that the issue, if so irritating that you could turn to personally attacking me, is overlooked by other modders. Nevertheless, it's for uncovering those issues that I reposted the map for more modding. Certainly we can agree that you are one of the better performing players, and that your opinions weigh a lot.

As of what I read, I'm implying that your sole reason is that: you cannot pass the map right now. However, this alone can not dictate immediate changes. Players have been and will be improving constantly. What seems impossible by its time can be quite accessible some time later. This has happened in countless genres, countless games, and since you joined this game early, you probably have witnessed it with osu!standard. I'm sure that you can remember quite a few ranked (in their times approved) osu!standard maps in this era (that means excluding old TAGs and stuff) starting out with their scoreboards full of HTs and EZs and NFs.

Now what does this has to do with this particular map? Well: you will probably void your sole argument in not much time, unless you can prove that this map is never passable to you, even when you are at a skill level higher than now. Besides, you are one of the better players, but probably not one of the best. That means this map is at an easier position when compared to aforementioned stardard superhard maps (e.g. FREEDOM DiVE) and stuff that even best players at their times put easy mods on, and that even if you can prove this map never passable to you, it still isn't ample reason to call for immediate change since enough players better than you might just be able to pass it without problems.

As a side note, I have talked about correlation of note count and gauge in a post above and you negleted it.

tl;dr: You cannot pass it right now != must change at once or you are troll. That being said, I really appreciate your feedback and is considering changes. That is, if more reasoning or player feedback are given to back you up, I will happily do the changes that you proposed.

Hanyuu wrote:

Can you even pass your own EXHAUST diff? lol <_<
No, I can't. I would like to hear whatever point you are going to make out of this fact.

Hanyuu wrote:

you must be some kind of troll. I honestly really want to see yourself S rank this.
Please note that personal attacks on me do no good to your arguments. If anything, doing so can and will deter me from doing what you want. In other words, I would really prefer it if you please reason.
Bobbias
Bit of a bump, but... Don't worry about Hanyuu. He gets his panties in a bunch whenever he encounters something he decides he doesn't like.

I can't pass exhaust either, mostly because OD10+Drain9 (If I'm reading the beatmap page correctly, not ingame ATM) is absolutely unforgiving.

However, I see nothing wrong with the patterns or note count. It's not hard because it's too physically taxing, it's hard because you need to play it damn near perfectly to pass. Personally I've never liked mappers being able to pick and choose their own Drain/OD/Circle sizes in standard on principle. I dislike it just as much in mania, but I don't specifically see a problem with the choices for this map.

I'll try to see if I can find anything I feel is mod worthy next time I'm in the mood to mod something, because it is a pretty good map overall.
richardfeder
looking forward to further update! :D
Aqo
I love high OD and high HP rate and also I tried both top difficulties on this map and both are SO FUN

OMG the note placement is so good. genius

This map is great I love you so much thanks for making!
jyu
major necro bump because you're back and i'm internally screaming so hard and i want this to get ranked ;w;
Topic Starter
Cirno

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

major necro bump because you're back and i'm internally screaming so hard and i want this to get ranked ;w;
Thank you. My stay at osu suddenly seemed more worthwhile.
Revived.
Zan-
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HOST_old
hi Cirno mod from queue.

add source : REFLEC BEAT limelight


column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[]
[BEGINNER]

00:36:030 - add 4

00:46:576 (46576|4) - how about change LN ? end at 00:47:485

01:12:394 - add 4
01:16:758 - add 6

01:41:576 - add 3
01:42:121 - add 2


[NOVICE]

00:02:940 (2940|6,2940|4) - move 3, 5

00:12:212 (12212|1,12212|5) - move 4, 6


[]
[ADVANCED]

01:01:030 (61030|1) - move 1
01:02:121 (62121|1) - move 1
01:03:030 (63030|6) - move 6
01:03:485 (63485|5) - move 7
01:04:576 (64576|5) - move 7


[]
[EXHAUST]

00:30:940 (30940|4) - move 7
00:31:667 (31667|5) - move 7

00:38:212 (38212|1) - move 4
00:41:303 (41303|1) - move 4
00:44:030 (44030|1) - move 4
00:46:030 (46030|1) - move 3
00:50:212 (50212|2) - move 4
00:51:667 (51667|2) - move 1
00:52:576 (52576|2) - move 1
00:53:303 (53303|1) - move 4, add 7
00:53:485 (53485|3) - move 3
00:54:212 (54212|2) - move 1

01:03:212 (63212|2) - move 2
01:09:303 - add 1 for cymbal
01:10:030 - add 2 for cymbal
01:10:758 - add 7 for cymbal
01:11:121 - add 6 for cymbal
01:11:485 - add 7 for cymbal
01:11:849 - add 6 for cymbal


[]

thx for request :D

good luck~
Topic Starter
Cirno

HOST wrote:

hi Cirno mod from queue.

add source : REFLEC BEAT limelight Added

[BEGINNER]

00:36:030 - add 4 ok
00:46:576 (46576|4) - how about change LN ? end at 00:47:485 Sure a thing to consider. I don't personally like long notes, but this change is reasonable.
01:12:394 - add 4 ok
01:16:758 - add 6 ok
01:41:576 - add 3 Rearranged this part to fit loud synths completely.
01:42:121 - add 2 ^


[NOVICE]

00:02:940 (2940|6,2940|4) - move 3, 5 The bass here has same pitch as 00:03:303, and is highest among all those notes. So I'm keeping it here.
00:12:212 (12212|1,12212|5) - move 4, 6 I see your intention here. Rearranged this part for better melodic correspondence.

[ADVANCED]

01:01:030 (61030|1) - move 1 Hmm, this might be for variation I guess since there's no pitch difference between the notes. 01:02:758 (62758|4,62849|2,62940|0) would be a better target for this I guess.
01:02:121 (62121|1) - move 1 ^
01:03:030 (63030|6) - move 6 The pitch difference is now apparent.
01:03:485 (63485|5) - move 7 ^
01:04:576 (64576|5) - move 7 ^

[EXHAUST]

00:30:940 (30940|4) - move 7 ok
00:31:667 (31667|5) - move 7 ok

"chorus mods"
00:38:212 (38212|1) - move 4
00:41:303 (41303|1) - move 4
00:44:030 (44030|1) - move 4
00:46:030 (46030|1) - move 3
00:50:212 (50212|2) - move 4
00:51:667 (51667|2) - move 1
00:52:576 (52576|2) - move 1
00:53:303 (53303|1) - move 4, add 7
00:53:485 (53485|3) - move 3
00:54:212 (54212|2) - move 1
I see your intentions here. Removed the restrictive double notes for synth in this part for more variation. Rearranged in general.

01:03:212 (63212|2) - move 2 yeah
01:09:303 - add 1 for cymbal sure
01:10:030 - add 2 for cymbal ^
01:10:758 - add 7 for cymbal ^
01:11:121 - add 6 for cymbal ^
01:11:485 - add 7 for cymbal ^
01:11:849 - add 6 for cymbal ^

thx for request :D

good luck~
Thanks!
schwarzvgrune
Hi,
mod request from
t/265133&start=0

I'll focus more on pitch relevancy and consistency. (also applies to beat)
and also, you're a pro so I don't give you mods on note placement (add to x y z) you can choose which place to put because i am sure you know what i mean

EZ
SPOILER
00:02:576 - you're following the loudest beat, why omit / not follow that here as well?
00:02:758 - ^
00:03:303 - ^
00:03:667 - ^
00:04:030 - ^
00:05:485 - ^
00:05:667 - ^
00:06:212 - ^
00:06:576 - ^

you may be worried about the diff, but i don't think it will be overmapped just because you add those.

00:12:576 - add a note, to signify that you will change the phase, and also its quite loud here, and i know 2 notes are in most cases not allowed for EZ, but few parts in a map with 2 notes, i doubt would be an issue here. and you also have quite a bit of 2 notes after this phase anyways

01:11:849 (71849|6) - wrong place, should be 01:11:667 - listen with 25% playback

01:19:485 - until 01:23:849 - optional but you can add the melody sound instead in LN. more LN would be nice for players to train

01:48:576 - 4? for EZ? really? i never know it's allowed even for exception... so IDK for this one.

NM
01:19:485 - until 01:23:849 - same suggestion as EZ

i'll stop here for now. most of them are minor mods. i don't know whether you agree with my placement style or not.


nice map though! good luck OvO
Topic Starter
Cirno

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi,
mod request from
t/265133&start=0

I'll focus more on pitch relevancy and consistency. (also applies to beat)
and also, you're a pro so I don't give you mods on note placement (add to x y z) you can choose which place to put because i am sure you know what i mean

EZ
SPOILER
00:02:576 - you're following the loudest beat, why omit / not follow that here as well?
00:02:758 - ^
00:03:303 - ^
00:03:667 - ^
00:04:030 - ^
00:05:485 - ^
00:05:667 - ^
00:06:212 - ^
00:06:576 - ^
ok for all

you may be worried about the diff, but i don't think it will be overmapped just because you add those.

00:12:576 - add a note, to signify that you will change the phase, and also its quite loud here, and i know 2 notes are in most cases not allowed for EZ, but few parts in a map with 2 notes, i doubt would be an issue here. and you also have quite a bit of 2 notes after this phase anyways I don't feel it's quite necessary here. looks weird

01:11:849 (71849|6) - wrong place, should be 01:11:667 - listen with 25% playback the pitch relationship between 01:11:485 (71485|4,71849|6) - is correct i guess? Every 1/1 note is lower than the one a 1/4 before it but it goes generally upward so mapping like this is ok imo. It's an easy anyway.

01:19:485 - until 01:23:849 - optional but you can add the melody sound instead in LN. more LN would be nice for players to train Added melody in there. I think LNs at those intervals are not easy though...

01:48:576 - 4? for EZ? really? i never know it's allowed even for exception... so IDK for this one. reduced to 2

NM
01:19:485 - until 01:23:849 - same suggestion as EZ ^

i'll stop here for now. most of them are minor mods. i don't know whether you agree with my placement style or not.


nice map though! good luck OvO
Thanks!
richardfeder
什么挖起来了
卧槽
Topic Starter
Cirno

richardfeder wrote:

什么挖起来了
卧槽
挖挖更健康

谢谢星 :)
DarkSider2442
Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
BEGINNER
00:14:758 (14758|4) - move to 6, 00:16:212 (16212|3) - move to 5
00:55:121 (55121|3) - move to 5
00:55:667 (55667|5) - move to 3
01:31:121 (91121|0) - move to 2
01:32:030 (92030|6) - move to 3
NOVICE
00:28:576 (28576|1) - move to 3
01:05:849 (65849|3) - move to 3, 01:05:940 (65940|6) - move to 6
01:08:940 (68940|1) - move to 3
01:13:667 (73667|2) - move to 4
ADVANCED
00:10:849 (10849|2) - move to 4, 00:10:940 (10940|1) - move to 3 or 00:10:849 (10849|2) - move to 6, 00:10:940 (10940|1) - move to 5
00:24:212 - add note to 5
00:30:030 (30030|5) - move to 5
00:33:485 (33485|5) - move to 7
00:48:030 (48030|4) - move to 6, 00:48:121 (48121|5) - move to 4, 00:48:758 (48758|2) - move to 2, 00:48:849 (48849|1) - move to 7
00:59:849 (59849|6,59940|5,60030|4,60121|3,60212|4,60303|3,60394|2,60485|1) - ctrl+h
01:19:485 (79485|6) - move to 5
01:24:212 (84212|1) - move to 3
01:31:940 (91940|0) - move to 2, 01:33:394 (93394|1) - move to 3
01:46:849 (106849|2) - move to 4
EXHAUST
00:35:667 (35667|3) - move to 5
01:11:030 (71030|4) - move to 4
01:11:758 (71758|4) - move to 2
01:12:121 (72121|4) - move to 2
01:29:940 (89940|4) - move to 6

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Cirno

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
BEGINNER
00:14:758 (14758|4) - move to 6, 00:16:212 (16212|3) - move to 5 I suppose my current one is better.
00:55:121 (55121|3) - move to 5
00:55:667 (55667|5) - move to 3
It goes against pitch relevance if I swap those
01:31:121 (91121|0) - move to 2
01:32:030 (92030|6) - move to 3
I don't understand... It's not very obvious, and you don't care to explain.
NOVICE
00:28:576 (28576|1) - move to 3 moved 00:28:576 (28576|2,28940|2,29303|2,29667|2) -
01:05:849 (65849|3) - move to 3, 01:05:940 (65940|6) - move to 6 It is there for pitch relevance.
01:08:940 (68940|1) - move to 3 yes
01:13:667 (73667|2) - move to 4 I think it's fine as is.
ADVANCED
00:10:849 (10849|2) - move to 4, 00:10:940 (10940|1) - move to 3 or 00:10:849 (10849|2) - move to 6, 00:10:940 (10940|1) - move to 5 It breaks pitch relevance that way according to the lead synth
00:24:212 - add note to 5 needless note considering the context. No lead here.
00:30:030 (30030|5) - move to 5 I think it's better to keep it consistent with following notes.
00:33:485 (33485|5) - move to 7 Don't see why as the synth keeps its pitch
00:48:030 (48030|4) - move to 6, 00:48:121 (48121|5) - move to 4, 00:48:758 (48758|2) - move to 2, 00:48:849 (48849|1) - move to 7 Goes against pitch relevance (yes I care about that a lot...
00:59:849 (59849|6,59940|5,60030|4,60121|3,60212|4,60303|3,60394|2,60485|1) - ctrl+h ^
01:19:485 (79485|6) - move to 5 It's for consistency with 01:19:758 (79758|6) -
01:24:212 (84212|1) - move to 3 yes
01:31:940 (91940|0) - move to 2, 01:33:394 (93394|1) - move to 3 Fine to me as is for consistency with previous notes
01:46:849 (106849|2) - move to 4 same as similar note before
EXHAUST
00:35:667 (35667|3) - move to 5 yes
01:11:030 (71030|4) - move to 4 part of the snares. I do find this pattern a little weird in hindsight though... Maybe a revision later
01:11:758 (71758|4) - move to 2 ^
01:12:121 (72121|4) - move to 2 ^
01:29:940 (89940|4) - move to 6 lead pitch remains the same as 01:29:667 (89667|4,89667|3), so no change

Good luck! :)
Thanks!
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General
i think dif gap beetwen Advance and Exhaust is to large. try to increase the adv dif into 3 star

Beginer
00:23:121 (23121|6) - move to 7
00:23:485 (23485|4) - ^ 5
00:23:849 (23849|2) - ^ 3
00:36:212 - you can make LN here. end 00:36:940 -
00:46:576 - you can make LN here. end 00:47:485 -

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00:34:849 - add note to 3
00:35:030 - ^ 6
00:36:212 - you can make LN here. end 00:36:940 -
01:22:940 -you can make LN here. end 01:23:849 -


just little sugestion bcause i not good at 7k

please reply before
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dosyeru
it is time to revive and seek to rank this, I hope.
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