senya - Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni · forum

Setz

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-15T04:20:48+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Here as requested from modding queue. Sorry it took a while to get back to you. Yay for Senya

Setz Normal

Disable Widescreen support because no storyboard
00:16:212 (1,2,3) - I believe it would be more consistent to follow the same pattern because it's slider-note-slider and it happens on two occasions during that part so possibly match it with this 00:14:712 (3,4,5) also follows with the next note because 2 whistles to end and start here 00:16:962 (3,4) - doesn't sound as great as opposed to just 1 whistle at (4) on head to follow the pattern I am assuming you mean hitsounds. if so, I made them match.
01:08:712 (3) - Spacing Error fixed
01:06:462 (4) - Whistle at the tail isn't necessary especially if you are trying to repeat double whistles, because it happens on mostly throughout the song and it's my preference to keep it like that without adding additional whistles whistle on tail is for the stream like sound in the background.
01:12:462 (4) - Possible clap to just continue the vocals off with it? ok
01:18:462 (4,5,1) - This part can have the same hitsounding as this 01:06:462 (4,5,1) these parts, while vocals are similar, the background music is different.
01:46:774 (2) - I hear another sound along with the vocals so a clap can be added here and it would make that flow sound pretty neat ok
02:03:837 (6) - Whistle doesn't need to be here, I believe the clap itself should be fine and to follow whistle rhythm because this part seems almost the same and it doesn't have a whistle 02:15:837 (6) - so keeping it consistent would be best ok
02:06:462 (4) - Move to x:456 y:164 so it looks like a better blanket fixed blanket from 3 instead
02:06:462 (4) - Whistle whistle at the end for the same reasoning as stated above ok
02:10:024 (5) - Add whistle for same pattern as above same as above
02:12:462 (4) - Clap for vocals? ok
02:54:462 (4,5,1) - How about a flow like this? http://puu.sh/ewfzL/85ae2e80c6.jpg the one you had before looked eerie and wasn't the same as what you had before with slidercurve-note-slidercurve but if you insist to keep it move this a little to the left for better blanket 02:55:962 (2) dont like it, it clutters everything too far to the left, and some of the slider points even look like they are out of the grid.
02:57:274 (4) - I feel a note can be added here to go along with vocals like you had on previous parts in the map current rhythm is consistent with all the other kiais.
02:56:712 (3) - Clap on head doesn't sound well I feel it being on tail is better
03:04:212 (1) - Same here with clap on head as stated above fixed both
03:21:462 (4) - x:500 y:272 somewhat of a blanket but looks better fixed blanket instead of moving slider.
Nice Normal difficulty, it flows well but just one spacing error

thanks for modding

EDIT: damnit, i forgot to disable widescreen support, do that for me pls kakifly

SPOILER

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[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:setz kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-16T20:41:22+00:00

hi from pm req o/

[General]
Delete .osb file from folder
Setz's Normal has a different lead-in, set it to 2000ms

[Setz's Normal]
HP4

01:07:962 (2) - You forgot a clap here, on tail :3
01:10:212 (1) - ^
02:28:962 (2) - ^
03:04:962 (2) - ^

[Hard]
AR7

00:34:587 (2,3,4) - try ctrl+g, adjust hitsounds after if you do it :3
00:55:587 (2) - remove clap from tail
01:21:837 (4) - move 1 grid up. Better blanket with 01:21:087 (2) - Dont forgot to stack this 01:23:712 (1) - on (4) after moving it
01:52:774 (2) - remove clap
01:58:212 (1) - add a clap on tail like you did here 00:58:212 (1) -
02:07:587 (3) - split into one 1/2 slider + circle
02:53:712 (1) - move 1 grid down and the 3rd slider point 2 grids left, better blanket with 02:54:274 (2) -
02:55:774 - feels empty, maybe you can add a note here, like you did 01:07:774 - 01:19:774 - 02:07:774 - 02:19:774 - and parts like these imo
03:04:212 (1) - remove clap, also you can add a finish here :3
03:06:837 (4) - remove finish, you can add it here 03:07:212 (1) - instead
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove clap, sounds too loud and doesn't fit well here imo

[Affection]
AR 8.5

00:01:212 (1) - move 1 grid up
00:01:774 (2) - remove whistle so you keep the consistency
00:02:524 (4) - ^
00:10:774 (4) - ^
00:53:712 (1) - move 2 grid up
01:44:712 (1) - move 2 grids left and this 01:44:337 (5) - 3 grids left
03:01:212 (1,2,3) - try to do the same you did here 02:04:212 (1,2,3) - would be nice :3
03:04:962 (4) - forgot a clap, on tail
03:08:712 (1,2,3,4) - press r (or the key you use for add/remove claps) >.o
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove claps, too loud

Pretty nice map :3

Good luck >.o

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-16T23:47:21+00:00

added all claps.

will keep hp3 for now, since this is the lowest diff of the set, and the map is on the long side.

thanks for modding :3

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: senyatoyoump3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 120472
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 73601
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:setz kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
BeatmapID:596173
BeatmapSetID:250337

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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2,85222,96012
2,157222,168012
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Nathan

Beatmap Nominator

2,144 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-01-17T01:00:08+00:00

Hi from modding queue, great map

[Hard]

00:18:462 (4,5) - I think this overlap looks much better
00:51:462 (3) - I think a ctrl+g flows better
01:57:837 (5) - Bend it like this a little bit, looks nicer
02:07:493 (2) - Hm this note seems kind of unnecessary, or maybe add a clap

[Affection]

00:03:837 (4) - Try placing this around here, felt much better
00:08:337 (4) - Try pointing this towards 00:08:712 (1)
00:30:274 (1) - This might transition better
01:03:462 (3) - Should ctrl+g this
01:08:524 (5,6,1) - Just completely stacking it looks cleaner imo instead of slight overlaps
01:13:212 (1) - Try to slightly point/bend the end towards 01:13:587 (2) looks nicer
02:12:649 (3) - I highly recommend you bring this up here, the transition into a stream is a bit difficult
03:16:587 (2) - Point this a bit towards 03:16:962 (3)

edit: whoops typo

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-17T01:58:08+00:00

pkhg

pkhg wrote:
hi from pm req o/

[General]
Delete .osb file from folder there isn't one o.o
Setz's Normal has a different lead-in, set it to 2000ms

[Hard]
AR7

00:34:587 (2,3,4) - try ctrl+g, adjust hitsounds after if you do it :3 im not really sure what this is suppose to do D:/
00:55:587 (2) - remove clap from tail my mistake orz fixed
01:21:837 (4) - move 1 grid up. Better blanket with 01:21:087 (2) - Dont forgot to stack this 01:23:712 (1) - on (4) after moving it ok
01:52:774 (2) - remove clap fixed
01:58:212 (1) - add a clap on tail like you did here 00:58:212 (1) - aa forgot to fix this after copying hitsounds from affection :>
02:07:587 (3) - split into one 1/2 slider + circle i prefer current, maybe having this after 1/4 notes is a little hard?
02:53:712 (1) - move 1 grid down and the 3rd slider point 2 grids left, better blanket with 02:54:274 (2) - ok
02:55:774 - feels empty, maybe you can add a note here, like you did 01:07:774 - 01:19:774 - 02:07:774 - 02:19:774 - and parts like these imo i will consider this, i just wanted the player to have a quick break
03:04:212 (1) - remove clap, also you can add a finish here :3 fixed
03:06:837 (4) - remove finish, you can add it here 03:07:212 (1) - instead fixed, sorry this was my mistake from copying hitsounds i forgot to fixed
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove clap, sounds too loud and doesn't fit well here imo fixed

[Affection]
AR 8.5

00:01:212 (1) - move 1 grid up ok
00:01:774 (2) - remove whistle so you keep the consistency this whistle isnt for consistency its emphasizing the strong piano sound
00:02:524 (4) - ^ ^
00:10:774 (4) - ^ ^ orz
00:53:712 (1) - move 2 grid up ok
01:44:712 (1) - move 2 grids left and this 01:44:337 (5) - 3 grids left um ok
03:01:212 (1,2,3) - try to do the same you did here 02:04:212 (1,2,3) - would be nice :3 i prefer current
03:04:962 (4) - forgot a clap, on tail added
03:08:712 (1,2,3,4) - press r (or the key you use for add/remove claps) >.o lol switched to drum sampleset (no claps)
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove claps, too loud ok

Pretty nice map :3 thank u :3

Good luck >.o

sukinathan

sukiNathan wrote:
Hi from modding queue, great map thank u

[Hard]
00:18:462 (4,5) - I think this overlap looks much better i prefer the current better just because it suits my personal tastes better ;w;
00:51:462 (3) - I think a ctrl+g flows better ^
01:57:837 (5) - Bend it like this a little bit, looks nicer ^
02:07:493 (2) - Hm this note seems kind of unnecessary, or maybe add a clap but its following the drums?
[Affection]
00:03:837 (4) - Try placing this around here, felt much better i prefer current orz
00:08:337 (4) - Try pointing this towards 00:08:712 (1) ^
00:30:274 (1) - This might transition better did something similar
01:03:462 (3) - Should ctrl+g this i think current flows smoother because its more circular, ctrl + g may break the flow i was going at
01:08:524 (5,6,1) - Just completely stacking it looks cleaner imo instead of slight overlaps i feel this plays more comfortably, this is just personal preference, since when overlapping especially with hd its harder to tell how many notes are under it
01:13:212 (1) - Try to slightly point/bend the end towards 01:13:587 (2) looks nicer i think current looks nicer lol
02:12:649 (3) - I highly recommend you bring this up here, the transition into a stream is a bit difficult did something similar
03:16:587 (2) - Point this a bit towards 03:16:962 (3)i prefer current ;w;
i think a lot of your mod was your personal preference, and some goes against mine so im sorry i denied a lot ;w;

edit: whoops typo

thank you guys for modding !

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-01-22T08:18:46+00:00

Forum PM

RIP, bought the C86 albums but honestly didn't feel the C87 ones were value for money to ship lols. Time to hunt them this year when I go comiket in December orz.

General

Your Preview Time is not snapped to the line? Wouldn't it be at 02:00:462 if it follows the timing

Setz's Normal

01:07:962 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:10:212 (1) - ^
01:57:462 (5,6,1,2) - I don't think this is of the best flow it can be, flip them around:

SPOILER

02:13:962 (2) - shift slightly lower for a smoother entry from 02:13:212 (1)
02:16:212 (1) - I don't think you should have the whistle on the end of the slider
02:30:462 (5,6,1) - make them aligned straighter? Would look better

Hard

00:19:212 (1) - finish on start of slider?
01:41:149 (4,1) - to be honest, having that short slider end when the held vocals start is kinda off, and the repeat long slider doesn't really help it. I think a rhythm like this would follow more closely:

SPOILER

Affection

00:29:712 (1) - I think you should make the spacing of this the same as the rest of 00:29:805 (2,3,4,5)
00:42:837 (4,1) - ^ they just seem to be at the point where, at first glance, they look weird being different from each other
02:03:837 (4,5,6,7) - this section of the music seem like it complements a stream though
02:25:212 (1) - weird location for the spinner. Even so, it would be better for the rhythm if the spinner ended at 02:26:337 and there were already other objects at 02:26:524

Good Luck~

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-23T01:48:38+00:00

neonat

neonat wrote:
Forum PM

RIP, bought the C86 albums but honestly didn't feel the C87 ones were value for money to ship lols. Time to hunt them this year when I go comiket in December orz. yeah i'll have to agree, not many good songs this time ;w; though i liked this one, its one of my favourites, i don't really like any of the other songs as much :>

General

Your Preview Time is not snapped to the line? Wouldn't it be at 02:00:462 if it follows the timing oops fixed

Hard

00:19:212 (1) - finish on start of slider? i dont think a finish fits here orz
01:41:149 (4,1) - to be honest, having that short slider end when the held vocals start is kinda off, and the repeat long slider doesn't really help it. I think a rhythm like this would follow more closely: there is a little beat on 01:41:524 - though a repeat slider may not have been the best choice.. i will do something similar

Affection

00:29:712 (1) - I think you should make the spacing of this the same as the rest of 00:29:805 (2,3,4,5) fixed
00:42:837 (4,1) - ^ they just seem to be at the point where, at first glance, they look weird being different from each other fixed
02:03:837 (4,5,6,7) - this section of the music seem like it complements a stream though ?? it currently has a stream? or do you mean it doesnt work?
02:25:212 (1) - weird location for the spinner. Even so, it would be better for the rhythm if the spinner ended at 02:26:337 and there were already other objects at 02:26:524 shortened spinner, i think if i were to map here i would have to have lots of streams, the entire measure is a stream and i feel for this song such a murderous stream wouldnt suit it lol

Good Luck~

thank you for the mod /:D !!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-23T02:48:13+00:00

neonat wrote:
Forum PM

General

Your Preview Time is not snapped to the line? Wouldn't it be at 02:00:462 if it follows the timing if you change this for your diffs, do so for mine as well kakifly

Setz's Normal

01:07:962 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:10:212 (1) - ^ all these had claps for me, you must have modded an older version of the diff.
01:57:462 (5,6,1,2) - I don't think this is of the best flow it can be, flip them around:
SPOILER
prefer current flow, just to add some different cursor movements, instead of just going around in circles for 4 minutes.
02:13:962 (2) - shift slightly lower for a smoother entry from 02:13:212 (1) ok
02:16:212 (1) - I don't think you should have the whistle on the end of the slider ok
02:30:462 (5,6,1) - make them aligned straighter? Would look better ok

Good Luck~

thanks for modding

@Kakifly: if you change preview time for your diffs, do so for mine as well pls

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: senyatoyoump3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 120472
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 73601
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:setz kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
BeatmapID:596173
BeatmapSetID:250337

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bgkimi.jpg",0,0
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2,85222,96012
2,157222,168012
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2015-01-23T16:17:41+00:00

Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion

(copy paste end)

asdf Iam late

[General]
■ Just in case, your BG is 4:3. In case you want to step up to the current generation, ask ringating for a 16:9 version in his queue. Maybe he'll also find a higher quality for the song, since yours is pretty low

[Affection]
■ 00:22:118 (6,1) - You want to stack these differently, since the autostacking ingame ruins it. http://puu.sh/eURyF/9ccc7d0d08.jpg
Make it somewhat similar to 00:20:993 (2,3) -
■ 00:32:337 (3,1) - No blanket? :<
■ 00:46:212 (1,2,3) - Maybe have 3 have the same distance to 1 as 2 -> 1 has
■ 00:59:712 (1) - Add a repeating Slider for that streamy sound?
■ 01:03:087 (2) - Maybe something like this?

■ 01:24:274 (1) - Maybe fill this little gap with something like this?

■ 02:25:212 (1) - Iam not really a fan of this Spinner. It starts on something, but doesnt really end on something. The sound type/thingy it starts on still continues after the Spinner ends. I think some repeatsliders and maybe short Streams would work well here.
■ 02:35:712 (1) - Add a Spinner till the break here? (blue tick after the Circle) There's a nice buildup sound for that.

■ Sexy diff, I like :3

[Hard]
■ 00:15:462 (3) - ctrl+g? The Slider leniency should make this one less up-and-down-y to play
■ 01:24:274 (1) - See Affection
■ 01:49:962 (2) - Not quite sure if this could become a problem or not, but people might misread this one as a non-1/1 note. This one is basically the first (I think) combo where the next object is spaced like it's 1/4 away, yet actually isnt.
On the other hand, I dont think that people focus on the one object they play right now and disregard the approach Circle of the next object.
Any way, consider respacing.
■ 02:25:212 (1) - See Affection, though it's more critical here. The Spinner is pretty short and the first object after the Spinner is somewhat close - which gives the player not-so-much time to restable his/her aim. (I know that Spinner meets the MS rule thing, but still :v)
■ 02:35:712 (1) - See Affection as well.
■ 03:08:712 (1) - Curve this one a bit more for a better blanket

[Setz]
■ 02:34:212 (1,2,3) - I think it'd be better if you kept the rhythm to the stronger beats for this one. The way it is now feels rather complex for what it should do/be
■ 03:00:087 (4) - NC on this one? The player knows 02:58:212 (1,2,3) - by now, the new addition (which works as a buildup for the part after it) could be NCd.

Pretty set, have a star :3

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-23T17:11:46+00:00

Normal modding.

-- For your last spinner, since 03:26:712 is containing an audible sound at the song itself, setting the volume as 5% didn't felt nice.
-- 00:11:712 - Increasing the volume was a good select, but the ammount was too much. Around 45% will be enough. (Also logically, the part from 00:13:212 should be higher in volume)

Setz's Normal:

-- Audio lead-in conflicts with other diffs. Since all diffs start at the same point, discuss with kakifly which one to use.

00:05:524 - Adding a note seems to follow the music better than using a blanket.
00:29:899 (4) - Consider NC since it starts 1/2 late than the expected rhythm. Same suggestion for other similar parts afterwards.
00:47:337 (3,4,5) - I believe you can make a better regular triangle here.
01:05:524 - A note can be added.
01:17:524 - ^
01:48:087 (5,6,1) - Again, you can make a better regular triangle. http://puu.sh/eV1FX/1ec186e0ce.jpg

Affection:

00:04:962 (6) - Imo extending 1/4 to fit the vocals will play better.
00:39:087 (2,3) - The jump is too big. Moving (2) on top of 00:38:524 (5) will be a good solution.
00:59:712 (1) - Setting the combo might be a personal preference, but imo this combo doesn't seem to be needed...

Nice map, and have a star.

However my concern is that the difficulty gap between [Normal] and [Hard] was quite big. Even the distance of notes wasn't that huge in [Hard], there were several jumps and triplets which constructs a gap with Normal. Adding a new difficulty of the less complexed version of the current [Hard] is most recommended. Good luck~

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-23T23:33:35+00:00

Yauxo

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
(copy paste end)

asdf Iam late

[General]
■ Just in case, your BG is 4:3. In case you want to step up to the current generation, ask ringating for a 16:9 version in his queue. Maybe he'll also find a higher quality for the song, since yours is pretty low i swear i cannot survive the modding process without ringating lol ill post in his queue later then

[Affection]
■ 00:22:118 (6,1) - You want to stack these differently, since the autostacking ingame ruins it. http://puu.sh/eURyF/9ccc7d0d08.jpg
Make it somewhat similar to 00:20:993 (2,3) - rearranged this part a bit
■ 00:32:337 (3,1) - No blanket? :< added...lol
■ 00:46:212 (1,2,3) - Maybe have 3 have the same distance to 1 as 2 -> 1 has did this on purpose because of emphasizing different sounds :<
■ 00:59:712 (1) - Add a repeating Slider for that streamy sound? honestly ive been thinking about this but i dont even know what it will be snapped to, and seems risky, i think ill keep the current rhythm ;w;
■ 01:03:087 (2) - Maybe something like this? okay
■ 01:24:274 (1) - Maybe fill this little gap with something like this? no ,sorry i dont really want to map this part with no music, also it makes the break dramatic lol
■ 02:25:212 (1) - Iam not really a fan of this Spinner. It starts on something, but doesnt really end on something. The sound type/thingy it starts on still continues after the Spinner ends. I think some repeatsliders and maybe short Streams would work well here. ill think about this, i mean i dont really want to surprise the player with a stream after a measure of nothing, i mean the entire part where the spinner is would be 1/4 so after a measure of emptiness this may cause major hp drain lol
■ 02:35:712 (1) - Add a Spinner till the break here? (blue tick after the Circle) There's a nice buildup sound for that. i dont really want a spinner there orz

■ Sexy diff, I like :3 :3333

[Hard]
■ 00:15:462 (3) - ctrl+g? The Slider leniency should make this one less up-and-down-y to play i prefer the current, it flows better to the repeat slider (4)
■ 01:24:274 (1) - See Affection
■ 01:49:962 (2) - Not quite sure if this could become a problem or not, but people might misread this one as a non-1/1 note. This one is basically the first (I think) combo where the next object is spaced like it's 1/4 away, yet actually isnt.
On the other hand, I dont think that people focus on the one object they play right now and disregard the approach Circle of the next object.
Any way, consider respacing. [/color]
■ 02:25:212 (1) - See Affection, though it's more critical here. The Spinner is pretty short and the first object after the Spinner is somewhat close - which gives the player not-so-much time to restable his/her aim. (I know that Spinner meets the MS rule thing, but still :v) i still want it hereeeee //runs
■ 02:35:712 (1) - See Affection as well.
■ 03:08:712 (1) - Curve this one a bit more for a better blanket ok

Pretty set, have a star :3 yaay

SonnyC

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal modding.

-- For your last spinner, since 03:26:712 is containing an audible sound at the song itself, setting the volume as 5% didn't felt nice.
-- 00:11:712 - Increasing the volume was a good select, but the ammount was too much. Around 45% will be enough. (Also logically, the part from 00:13:212 should be higher in volume) changed to 15% i dont want sound to be too much

Affection:

00:04:962 (6) - Imo extending 1/4 to fit the vocals will play better. true but im following piano here, theres a light sound on the 1/2's
00:39:087 (2,3) - The jump is too big. Moving (2) on top of 00:38:524 (5) will be a good solution. fixed
00:59:712 (1) - Setting the combo might be a personal preference, but imo this combo doesn't seem to be needed... okay fixed for one at 01:59:712 (1) - as well

Nice map, and have a star. thanks!

However my concern is that the difficulty gap between [Normal] and [Hard] was quite big. Even the distance of notes wasn't that huge in [Hard], there were several jumps and triplets which constructs a gap with Normal. Adding a new difficulty of the less complexed version of the current [Hard] is most recommended. Good luck~ i dont think i will add another diff, i really want a 3 diff set, and it shouldnt be too hard to lessen jumps and remove triplets in hard so i'll do that

about the audio lead in, i actually changed it to be consistent many times but i think theres a glitch it changes back to "2000" @setz try changing your audio lead in to 1000 yourself, see if this time if it will work

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-24T01:00:40+00:00

fixed everything from both mods, except Yauxo's rhythm suggestion. mapping all the 1/2s in this part would lead to this part looking like a mess that would be harder to read. I opted to go with a simplified version of this rhythm.

thanks for modding!

I changed the lead in on my end, hope it works now.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 120472
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 73601
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:setz kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
BeatmapID:596173
BeatmapSetID:250337

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-01-24T07:20:07+00:00

from my queue:

I couldn't find anything regarding the mp3, so glhf with that, but the bg was fairly straightforward. I extended it out to 1366x768 then applied slight gradients to the sharp edges so the transitions to the extensions would be smooth.

bg

no kds

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2015-01-24T07:42:22+00:00

~General~

Your current mp3 is 124kbps while the minimum suggested is 128kbps, you must fix this.
Preview Point between the difficulties is inconsistent, make it consistent.

~Setz's Normal~

Reduce OD and AR by 1 tick, they're way too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset right now.

03:25:212 (1) - Kinda short spinner for this difficulty to be honest, I'd make a long slider instead.

~Hard~

AR7,5 would be more appropriate on this difficulty imo.

00:25:212 (1) - The recovering time doesn't seem good enough for a Hard difficulty here.
01:37:212 (1) - Same as I mentioned before.
02:26:712 (1) - ^
02:49:212 (1) - ^

~Affection~

00:10:587 (3,4) - There's a small spacing inconsistency here which looks kinda weird, I'm sure you could fix this and make it better.
00:10:962 (5,6) - Same here afterwards actually.
01:06:837 (4,5,6,7,1) - Try to move this whole pattern down if possible, so it's not touching the HP Bar.

This is a really good map and I would have bubbled it after this mod, but I have the same concern that Sonnyc has.

Adding a Light Hard would make the spread perfect, right now Normal difficulty has a really close spacing while Hard has a way too large spacing comparing to Normal, so you should make a difficulty which has the spacing on the middle between these. Also, if you're gonna make that, don't add any triplets or anything, since it's gonna be a pretty easy Hard difficulty. Best of luck!

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-01-24T08:36:23+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Your current mp3 is 124kbps while the minimum suggested is 128kbps, you must fix this.

actually, while viewing the bit rate under the windows properties dialogue does show 124, foobar2000 (which can give the overall bit rate an poll the song every second to get an "instantaneous" bit rate for vbr material) shows the bit rate as being a solid cbr of 128 kbps

media player classic also returns 128 kbps as the bit rate

also aimod would mention it if it was actually 124, so windows is probably just doing something strange to calculate the bit rate...

main point of this is don't re-encode to 128 again just to fix how it appears in windows, since it will be pointlessly damaging to the audio quality.
also don't re-encode to 192 'cause that's just wasteful

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2015-01-24T10:14:05+00:00

Yup I've checked with Windows, no idea if it's trustable but yeah it would be better to fix it anyways.

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-24T22:14:36+00:00

Andrea

Andrea wrote:
~General~
Your current mp3 is 124kbps while the minimum suggested is 128kbps, you must fix this. i will try to find a new mp3
Preview Point between the difficulties is inconsistent, make it consistent.fixed

~Hard~
AR7,5 would be more appropriate on this difficulty imo.
ok
00:25:212 (1) - The recovering time doesn't seem good enough for a Hard difficulty here. mapped that part
01:37:212 (1) - Same as I mentioned before. i think this is fine, for hard only need 1 beat recovery time?
02:26:712 (1) - ^ ^
02:49:212 (1) - ^^
~Affection~
00:10:587 (3,4) - There's a small spacing inconsistency here which looks kinda weird, I'm sure you could fix this and make it better. fixed
00:10:962 (5,6) - Same here afterwards actually. fixed
01:06:837 (4,5,6,7,1) - Try to move this whole pattern down if possible, so it's not touching the HP Bar. fixed
This is a really good map and I would have bubbled it after this mod, but I have the same concern that Sonnyc has.

Adding a Light Hard would make the spread perfect, right now Normal difficulty has a really close spacing while Hard has a way too large spacing comparing to Normal, so you should make a difficulty which has the spacing on the middle between these. Also, if you're gonna make that, don't add any triplets or anything, since it's gonna be a pretty easy Hard difficulty. Best of luck! as discussed in forum pm i will think about this ;w;

@Setz changed your preview time, update before fixing mods lol
@Ringating thanks for the bg !

edit : changed mp3 to 192kbps, redownload please

Last edited by kakifly 2015-01-24T23:26:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-24T22:58:52+00:00

Changed the OD and AR like andrea suggested. However, i would like to keep the spinner. I dont think it is too short at this BPM, and there are no objects directly before it. one a half second is more than enough time to get a 300, specially with the newly lowered OD.

thanks for moding !

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90,294,145212,6,0,L|82:357,2,55,6|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,258,145774,2,0,L|107:195,2,55,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,291,146337,1,10,0:0:0:0:
229,308,146712,2,0,P|293:306|346:320,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,327,147274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,337,147462,2,0,B|482:349|482:349|498:291,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,215,148212,6,0,P|510:162|498:94,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,59,148962,2,0,P|367:70|311:59,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,48,149524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,38,149712,2,0,P|173:27|117:38,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,76,150462,2,0,L|23:25,2,55,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,151024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
82,156,151212,6,0,P|95:207|81:265,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,326,151962,2,0,P|68:348|133:333,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,303,152712,2,0,P|248:301|298:323,2,82.5,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,271,153462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
134,195,153837,2,0,L|135:123,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,95,154212,6,0,P|197:93|246:69,2,110,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,75,155149,2,0,P|67:67|40:64,2,55,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,50,155712,1,4,0:0:0:0:
126,295,169212,6,0,P|181:315|238:295,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,227,169962,2,0,P|167:172|184:118,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,89,170524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,79,170712,2,0,P|290:88|366:77,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,48,171462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,135,171837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
465,218,172212,6,0,L|441:325,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,340,172962,2,0,L|378:233,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,178,173712,2,0,P|396:147|341:153,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,178,174462,2,0,P|208:179|163:150,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,117,175024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
91,105,175212,6,0,L|72:224,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,277,175962,2,0,P|65:303|126:288,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,262,176712,2,0,P|249:254|297:279,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,324,177462,2,0,L|422:215,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,186,178024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,153,178212,6,0,L|354:56,2,82.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,181,178962,2,0,L|320:278,2,82.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,146,179712,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,181,180087,2,0,P|161:194|109:181,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,136,180837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,223,181212,6,0,P|76:260|151:269,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,269,181962,2,0,L|333:259,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,254,182524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,230,182712,2,0,P|418:174|400:120,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,67,183462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,115,183837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,59,184212,6,0,P|137:64|77:53,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,109,184962,2,0,L|15:221,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,258,185524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,291,185712,2,0,P|123:289|187:316,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,341,186462,2,0,P|302:358|357:355,1,110,6|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,346,187024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,322,187212,6,0,P|446:268|433:215,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,137,187962,2,0,P|420:128|365:160,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,188,188712,2,0,P|230:173|181:175,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,199,189462,2,0,P|85:253|104:308,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,328,190024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,345,190212,6,0,B|292:349,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,348,190962,2,0,P|391:300|369:235,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,194,191712,2,0,L|314:105,2,82.5,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,237,192462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,87,193212,6,0,P|210:141|201:195,1,110,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,253,193962,2,0,P|185:281|240:273,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,251,194524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,235,194712,2,0,P|368:230|422:255,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,309,195462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,221,195837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,156,196212,6,0,B|449:117|449:117|435:92|435:92|434:44,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,71,196962,2,0,B|348:112|348:112|362:137|362:137|353:176,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,254,197712,2,0,P|251:252|203:278,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,310,198462,2,0,P|80:276|64:215,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,187,199024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,148,199212,6,0,P|150:136|195:104,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,25,199962,2,0,B|287:53|285:119,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,193,200712,2,0,P|380:198|430:219,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,276,201462,2,0,P|450:305|393:299,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,290,202024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,267,202212,6,0,P|276:269|224:257,2,82.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,229,202962,2,0,P|381:227|433:239,2,82.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,200,203712,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205212,12,2,206712,0:0:0:0:

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Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2015-01-25T01:36:28+00:00

As requested, i'll give my opinion, no kd please.

- Many 1/2s are used in Normal, this makes this diff enough difficult for a Normal diff, and it has less than 2.00 stars.
It is a well mapped Normal, and it does not need more difficulty/density.
- Some jumps are used in Hard, but they are not really difficult to handle for a Hard player, the diff is not really hard to read and that's a good point. There are jumps, but try to simplify a little the rhythm, you used some 1/4s and that's why you can increase the star rating. Try to avoid some circles on 1/4 to balance the diff spread between Normal-Hard and Hard-Affection, you can keep the kick sliders you used.

The diff spread between Normal and Hard is quite questionable, there should be less density in Hard, just a little.

kakifly

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Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-25T23:48:51+00:00

thanks CB
After thinking for a bit i think it would be best to add an advanced diff so ill be working on that right now.

Last edited by kakifly 2015-01-28T06:42:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2015-01-26T06:46:54+00:00

Glad to hear you are going to follow my suggestion

Setz

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Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-27T00:58:22+00:00

asdf

[Advanced]

00:07:137 (1) - move this just a tiny bit away from the previous object, I know this is nazi af, but this one stood out to me the most for some rwason
00:09:387 (5) - normal 1/1 slider fits better here, there is no sound on the reverse of this slider
00:10:137 (1) - reverse slider actually fits here.
00:16:137 (1,2) - maybe move this pattern up like this for more smooth circular flow
SPOILER
00:17:637 (3) - maybe turn this slider somewhat like this, for aesthetics and better flow
SPOILER
00:25:137 (1) - finish on head?
01:16:887 (3) - 1/1 slider follows the vocal here better, which is what you have been following for the most part
01:43:512 (2) - copy pasta and flip the 1?
02:34:137 (1,2) - maybe make these 2 sliders return on the red tick right before the blue tick you have them now. since it is the more clearly audible rhythm instead of the snares.
02:50:637 (5) - move this up a little bit, portion of the circle's lower edge is off screen
03:20:637 (5) - make this follow vocals? this is arguably the strongest vocal in the entire song.

pretty clean overall, I stopped offering flow suggestions because it seems to be your style.

kakifly

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Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-28T01:16:29+00:00

asdf

Setz wrote:
asdf

[Advanced]
00:07:137 (1) - move this just a tiny bit away from the previous object, I know this is nazi af, but this one stood out to me the most for some rwason k
00:09:387 (5) - normal 1/1 slider fits better here, there is no sound on the reverse of this slider yeah you're right..
00:10:137 (1) - reverse slider actually fits here. k
00:16:137 (1,2) - maybe move this pattern up like this for more smooth circular flow
SPOILER
did something similar while fixing prev stuff
00:17:637 (3) - maybe turn this slider somewhat like this, for aesthetics and better flow
SPOILER
k
00:25:137 (1) - finish on head? yeah. forgot added other diffs too
01:16:887 (3) - 1/1 slider follows the vocal here better, which is what you have been following for the most part but red tick is stronger here, same with 01:01:887 (3) - where i also have 1/2 repeat
01:43:512 (2) - copy pasta and flip the 1? prefer this way lol
02:34:137 (1,2) - maybe make these 2 sliders return on the red tick right before the blue tick you have them now. since it is the more clearly audible rhythm instead of the snares. blue tick is stronger imo
02:50:637 (5) - move this up a little bit, portion of the circle's lower edge is off screen fixed but actually in game its fine idk why editor is like this :>
03:20:637 (5) - make this follow vocals? this is arguably the strongest vocal in the entire song. k
pretty clean overall, I stopped offering flow suggestions because it seems to be your style.

thanks setz \:D

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2015-01-28T19:19:51+00:00

Asked to give opinion abt spread

Looks fine imo

1/2 are used for Normals, and then more 1/2 in Advanced with slightly bigger DS, then some trips and jumps in Hard, so on

call me if you need a mod? huehue

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-01-29T01:08:41+00:00

from the queue

kakifly wrote:
pishi can u NM advanced diff in my map

pointing out lots of stupid stuff cuz 1 difficulty you're welcome

[ueueuueueue]

difficulty settings seem kind of weird. for OD, a NHI spread with od3-5-7 makes sense, but with this new diff, it's od3-4-5-7 which is something. increasing advanced and hard by some amounts would be good. same goes for hp drain, which right now is the same as the normal :/ as for ar, lowering a bit would be better
00:01:137 (1,2,3) - stack right here does some overlapping derp which could be avoided by moving 1 to somewhere around 56:76
00:06:012 (5,6) - i dont think you wanted to make these parallel but right now they're so close to being parallel that it just looks weird. moving 5 up/angling less similar to 6 would be gud
00:07:887 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - so this is all 1.5x spacing, then the stuff before it is all 1.4x spacing. not really getting why since there's no difference between the parts. i'd say going with 1.5x for the whole section is better cuz things are less congested but it dosen't really matter if you choose 1.4x either. it would just make sense to have the whole section use equal spacing
00:13:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^pretty much the same thing as that. the stuff i selected is 1.4x spacing, then the stuff after it is 1.3x spacing even tho no musical difference cueing lower spacing. id go with 1.4x for the same reason as the last one but ya your call
00:28:699 (2,3,4) - compared to 00:34:137 (1,2,3,4) - 00:40:137 (1,2,3,4) - etc you're missing some hitsound stuff. you should knwo the ones. apparently hard is missing them too but insane isn't so i dunno what's going on
00:40:137 (1) - head is missing a sound to hit
00:59:637 (5) - dunno why but it just feels better to have this spaced equal to that of 3->4. probably because of the amount of emphasis put on it as the only object there. 01:59:637 (5) - does it and it plays good so
01:10:137 (1) - tailmissing a thing
01:20:637 (5) - looks better to angle this the opposite direction (away from previous slider), like you did at 00:54:387 (7) - 00:14:637 (5) - 01:10:887 (3) - 01:14:637 (5) - and everywhere else dfddfda
01:22:137 (1,2,3) - i guess you were going for some anti-flowy stuff here, but it doesn't really fit too well (mostly because of both 1->2 and 2->3 being flowbreak things as opposed to just one.) 02:22:137 (1,2,3) - 03:22:137 (1,2,3) - both of these places are the same thing, yet no antiflow thing and they just work better so like please (and i guess the triangle could be better too lol)
01:40:699 (2,3) - missing hitsound stuffs
02:02:637 (4) - stupid thing this would just look better if not pointed so much towards 6. even this much less woudl be good. only reasoning i have is that i think it looks/plays better and hard to explain idontknow
02:34:137 (1,2) - dunno what's going on with hitsounds on these.
03:04:887 (3) - claptail
03:21:949 (7) - stacking this on top of 1 would probably play a lot less weirdly than the back and forth stuff caused by ugh everything there. hey look you did it here too 02:21:949 (7) - so it must be the best choice do it

hitsounds are copied from some other diff (i think) so what i said might apply to the other diffs i dunno gl

kakifly

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kakifly 2015-01-29T01:48:18+00:00

o

pishifat wrote:
from the queue

kakifly wrote:
pishi can u NM advanced diff in my map
pointing out lots of stupid stuff cuz 1 difficulty you're welcome

[ueueuueueue]
difficulty settings seem kind of weird. for OD, a NHI spread with od3-5-7 makes sense, but with this new diff, it's od3-4-5-7 which is something. increasing advanced and hard by some amounts would be good. same goes for hp drain, which right now is the same as the normal :/ as for ar, lowering a bit would be better k but either way the OD's would be uneven unless setz wants to change his to 4 so it can go 4-5-6-7
00:01:137 (1,2,3) - stack right here does some overlapping derp which could be avoided by moving 1 to somewhere around 56:76 fixed
00:06:012 (5,6) - i dont think you wanted to make these parallel but right now they're so close to being parallel that it just looks weird. moving 5 up/angling less similar to 6 would be gud made parallel
00:07:887 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - so this is all 1.5x spacing, then the stuff before it is all 1.4x spacing. not really getting why since there's no difference between the parts. i'd say going with 1.5x for the whole section is better cuz things are less congested but it dosen't really matter if you choose 1.4x either. it would just make sense to have the whole section use equal spacing i remapped that part and forgot what spacing i used lol
00:13:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^pretty much the same thing as that. the stuff i selected is 1.4x spacing, then the stuff after it is 1.3x spacing even tho no musical difference cueing lower spacing. id go with 1.4x for the same reason as the last one but ya your call did 1/3 for those notes cuz i dont wanna rearrange more notes
00:28:699 (2,3,4) - compared to 00:34:137 (1,2,3,4) - 00:40:137 (1,2,3,4) - etc you're missing some hitsound stuff. you should knwo the ones. apparently hard is missing them too but insane isn't so i dunno what's going on oops....
00:40:137 (1) - head is missing a sound to hit added clap
00:59:637 (5) - dunno why but it just feels better to have this spaced equal to that of 3->4. probably because of the amount of emphasis put on it as the only object there. 01:59:637 (5) - does it and it plays good so k
01:10:137 (1) - tailmissing a thing ye
01:20:637 (5) - looks better to angle this the opposite direction (away from previous slider), like you did at 00:54:387 (7) - 00:14:637 (5) - 01:10:887 (3) - 01:14:637 (5) - and everywhere else dfddfda yeah ok at first i thought it was offscreen for 4:3 ppl but now with ringatings bg i see it not so fixed
01:22:137 (1,2,3) - i guess you were going for some anti-flowy stuff here, but it doesn't really fit too well (mostly because of both 1->2 and 2->3 being flowbreak things as opposed to just one.) 02:22:137 (1,2,3) - 03:22:137 (1,2,3) - both of these places are the same thing, yet no antiflow thing and they just work better so like please (and i guess the triangle could be better too lol) i like the current cuz flowbreak emphasizes the strong vocals???? lol
01:40:699 (2,3) - missing hitsound stuffs k
02:02:637 (4) - stupid thing this would just look better if not pointed so much towards 6. even this much less woudl be good. only reasoning i have is that i think it looks/plays better and hard to explain idontknow okk
02:34:137 (1,2) - dunno what's going on with hitsounds on these. added clap to head of 2 if thats whats wrong idk
03:04:887 (3) - claptail oops fixed
03:21:949 (7) - stacking this on top of 1 would probably play a lot less weirdly than the back and forth stuff caused by ugh everything there. hey look you did it here too 02:21:949 (7) - so it must be the best choice do itokk
hitsounds are copied from some other diff (i think) so what i said might apply to the other diffs i dunno gl

thankss pishi :^)

Tari

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2012

Tari 2015-01-29T08:00:13+00:00

Keeping my eye on this one :3

Setz

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Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-29T18:26:13+00:00

holy molly, teach me your secrets kaifly, you have BATs swarming this thread.

kakifly

940 posts

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Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-29T19:21:30+00:00

Setz wrote:
holy molly, teach me your secrets kaifly, you have BATs swarming this thread.

senya is magical

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2015-01-30T23:17:50+00:00

With so many BATs getting around this I think you don't even need me anymore o.o

kakifly

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Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-31T03:47:45+00:00

Andrea wrote:
With so many BATs getting around this I think you don't even need me anymore o.o

nooo andrea i need youuuu

Santtu

539 posts

Joined November 2012

Santtu 2015-01-31T21:48:33+00:00

Hi!
M4M as we talked

Advanced

00:04:137 (1) - move to x312 y284
00:07:887 (2) - move to x472 y268
00:13:699 (2,3) - stack perfectly
00:13:887 (3,5) - stack perfectly
00:15:762 (6) - move to x372 y344, so it makes better distant
00:18:949 (6) - move to x412 y416
00:35:824 (4,1) - stack perfectly
00:49:137 (1) - move to x108 y332, so distant is right
00:50:449 (3) - ^ to x424 y164
if you accepted ^, move 00:51:762 (6) - to x424 y164 and 00:51:574 (5) - to x500 y192
00:53:637 (5) - improve blanket
00:55:887 (3) - improve blanket
00:59:637 (5) - is this meant to jump?
01:10:137 (1,3) - stack perfectly
01:10:699 (2) - move to x268 y144, so it make sense with map's average distant
01:13:887 (3,5) - stack perfectly
01:15:762 (7) - blanket? if yes, improve it
01:19:887 (3,5) - stack perfectly
01:22:137 (1) - move to x232 y120 for perfect distant
01:38:074 (2) - move to x108 y111 for almost perfect distant
01:40:699 (2) - too close to prev object
01:42:387 (5) - move to x176 y72 to almost perfect distant
01:43:887 (3,5) - stack perfectly
01:45:949 (7) - move to x246 y217
01:46:512 (2) - move to x324 y74
01:51:012 (4) - move to x137 y148
01:52:699 (2) - move to x464 y68
01:58:887 (3) - is this meant to stack with 01:57:387 (6) - ? if not, why not make so? You have done whole map stakes like it so I prefer to stack it. Don't forget to move 01:58:699 (2,3,4,5) - also
02:10:137 (1,2) - improve blanket
02:10:137 (1,3) - stack perfectly
02:11:449 (4) - distant interval between prev. and next. is too large. Replace it somewhere like x204 y316, don't forget to replace 02:12:387 (6,7) -
02:13:887 (2,5) - stack perfectly
02:15:387 (6,1) - stack perfectly
02:17:637 (5,7) - stack perfectly
02:28:137 (1) - move to x124 y368, perfect distant
02:30:387 (5,3) - stack perfectly
02:32:637 (5,3) - maybe stack?
03:07:887 (3) - improve blanket

If I haven't write anything after "move x? y?", It means that you could move the object, because it's distant is somehow odd/wrong or better with other way.

That's all what I found to fix from advance. Hope it is useful

BIG Good Luck with map! Hope it get ranked :3 (cause senya and awesome mapper)

kakifly

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kakifly 2015-01-31T21:58:25+00:00

~~so nazi~~
fixed pretty much all of them, what i didnt include was fixed , since i don't really have reasons to deny any of these nazi suggestions
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smsh150 wrote:
00:15:762 (6) - move to x372 y344, so it makes better distant this small jump is intentional for better spread into hard where there are more jumps
00:49:137 (1) - move to x108 y332, so distant is right^

00:59:637 (5) - is this meant to jump? yes

Andrea

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Andrea 2015-02-01T01:53:16+00:00

Time to check the new difficulty and recheck the rest!

~Setz's Normal~

OD is too high with the new difficulty added now, reduce it by 1 tick.

~Advanced~

Same HP Drain as Normal difficulty isn't a good idea, increase it by 1 tick at least.

00:05:637 (4,5) - The whole difficulty have consistent spacing than we have this small jump, please avoid it and make consistent spacing here as well.
00:14:637 (5,6) - Same as above.

~Affection~

If you wanna be consistent with the rest of the difficulties, reduce HP Drain by 1 tick.

Difficulty spread is a lot better now.

Setz

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Setz 2015-02-01T02:23:09+00:00

lol, lower the OD again kakifly.

she wanted it to be 4 5 6 7 OD across the set, so she asked if she could bump my diff's OD back to 4 after your mod.

Last edited by Setz 2015-02-01T03:31:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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[ Setsuna ] 2015-02-01T03:08:38+00:00