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[General]
[General]
- you should add muted slider-slide, it'll make the beatmap better
- 00:10:975 - : move NC to 00:11:725 (2) - it's more fit and follow your nc pattern. If you do this then remove nc on here 00:12:475 -
- 00:17:725 (5) - : it's better to move NC here, it'll make follow point so easy player can catch the beat easily and support your nc pattern too. if you do this then remove nc here 00:18:475 -
- 00:23:350 (5) - : same NC suggestion as above
- 00:28:225 (1) - : this break your nc usage, remove nc? you can add nc here 00:29:350 - and remove nc on 00:30:475 -
- 00:40:225 (1) - : this break your nc usage, remove nc please
- 00:47:725 (3) - : if you use nc every 1 stanza then you should add nc here, this breaks your nc usage
- The flow is good and mostly random NC usage
- 00:59:725 (2) - : remove finish, doesn't support anything
- 00:13:225 (4,5,6,7,1) - : I think there's distance error here, you used 1,0 ds why suddenly used 1,20 ds here?
- 00:20:725 (1,2,3) - : a bit boring pattern to me, how about make this to fan pattern? rearrange slider 2 and 3 like this? it wont be too bad
- 00:35:350 (6,1) - : strange jump and can trap player, if you want to keep this jump, how about put 00:35:350 (6) - to x116 y52 and 00:35:537 (1) - to x124 y172 to make better jump patternSPOILER[img]00:35:537[/img]
- 01:06:850 (6,7) - : pretty boring if you stack this, how about make jump here? how about rearrange like this (just use 1,5 or 1,6 ds setting to make the jump(:
- 01:12:475 (7) - : remove finish, it doesn't support anything and destroy the finish pattern usage
- 00:11:537 (6) - : this slider is very awkward and didn't finish the pattern goodly, so how about make this as 2 circles and put them like this? this is an Insane anyway so a lot of jump is good and fun for me~ (circle 7 is stacked with 00:12:287 (1) - )
- 00:29:350 (6) - : feel awkward for me too, how about rearrange the slider like this and put it in x72 y208
- 00:34:694 (4) - : this slider can make miss/combo break, since there's no sign and the pattern is like 1/2, to make this readable, how about rearrange like this and put to 316 152
- this diff is good, but need a lot of jump/good flow patterns, which I suggest to your next map that usually making the same slider in 1/2 will make the flow isn't really good, imo like this
you can try to move slider no 2 to like this
or like this!
try to do something different to each slider, it'll be a nice insane! (btw this image i took on 00:57:850 - )
make sure that the jump is fit with the song, usually jump is put before long white line, like at here 00:58:600 - 00:58:787 - 00:58:975
try to use custom clap too, i'm sure your map will be more good (: