Lally wrote:

hi o3o #queue

[Normal]

1. HP -1 Okay
2. first thing that i notice in this map is that the first object after the spinner is to close to it like: 00:03:076 (1,1) - 00:15:605 (1,1) - 00:49:816 (1,1) - 01:12:741 (1,1) - ecc.. You're right, I think I forgot to see those... Fixed
3. second thing is that the hitsound could be really better in parts like 00:05:899 (1) - missing finishes 00:46:818 (2) - missing whistle you should notice more the strong sounds and add the appropriate hitsound I'll re-sound the map after a while
4. 00:14:723 (1,2,3) - this pattern is so borring why don't you try to unstack this circles to continue the flow to the spinner and not block it Un-stacked.
5. 00:15:605 (1) - this spinner basicly should start in the strong sound of battery that you hear also 00:15:782 - and not where is atm Fixed!
6. 00:20:014 (3) - is better to do a singular slider as a reverse one it would fitt better Indeed! What was I thinking?!
7. 00:21:072 (5) - this slider basicly should end at 00:21:777 - Fixed!
8. 00:40:823 (1) - ;_; nuuh this basicly should start 00:41:175 - here in the down beat Fixed!
9. 00:41:175 - from here you should start to change your hitsound pattern with a stronger sound as a whistle like a normal sampleset and i'm really sorry you should change the rhythm aswell Don't be sorry for stuff that's right lol, I'll look for a different wistrle.
   
10. 00:55:283 (5) - new combo Fixed!
11. 01:08:333 - you can clearly hear you're missing something here like this kind of rhythm Fixed!
    
12. 01:15:034 (1,2) - missing totally the hitsounds I swear I hitsounded these ones. Arrgh. Fixed!
13. 01:25:615 (1) - i can't hear any sound that introduce this circle so remove it I was thinking about adding a spinner but yeah. Gone
14. 01:26:320 - basicly from here you should start a hitsound pattern that introduce the drum in the background so you should follow it for exsample with a normal sampleset I'll keep it in mind when I resound tha map
15. 02:04:763 (8) - i find unapropriate this slider with all the diff itself Yep
16. 02:14:286 (5,6) - this kind of overlaps are really ugly I'll ask for more opinions, I wanted to do something diferent
17. 02:55:904 (1,2,3) - same what i said before this kind of stacks I don't see the problem with stacking every once a while...
18. 02:22:751 - this kiai is not necessary instead of adding it here add it 03:07:895 - here But that's the climax of the song!... I'll ask for more opinions about that one...
19. 03:06:837 (5) - same Gone!
20. 03:42:459 (1,2,3) - same

I'll fix this one later

[Hard]

1. i think the slider velocity is a bit low and the pattern feels really slow like a another normal,personally i would tell you to try to change it and to try to do some separate spacing as the one you're using atm Increased CS for now, I'll see another SV later since I would have to move everything atm
2. following the new rules go arround and check your spinners like i said in normal diff Fixed!
3. 00:26:715 (6) - ctrl+g Fixed!
4. 00:28:478 (1,2,3,4) - borring pattern as normal Keeping it for now
5. 00:41:881 (2,3,4) - same Keeping it for now
6. 01:36:195 (1,2,3) - again Yeah this one isn't really good. Fixed.
7. 01:42:367 (2) - better flow: Really nice! Fixed!
   
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8. 01:43:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this combo is to long
9. same what i said about the kiai in normal Same answer
10. in the end on the last spinner remove the finish [color=#00BF00]Fixed![/color[/list]

gl ;_;/

Static Noise Bird wrote:

from the q

[General]
The video needs to be reduced in file size. 17+MB is really too much. Reduced to ~10MB.
The preview point is weirdly positioned, use 00:51:756 instead. Yeah I think I might have forgotten to re-snap it while timing the map. Fixed.

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00:11:193 (4) - The finish could be clickable IMO. I don't get your point. You mean not using a reverse slider but two circles?
00:20:014 (3) - Could and should blanket the following (4). Fixed!
00:21:072 (5) - Could be divided into a circle and a 1/2 slider, unless you want to strictly follow the vocal only. Your idea sounds better, so fixed!
00:24:246 (4,5) - Fix the distance snap. Fixed!
00:29:889 (4) - Improve the blanket to the previous (3). Fixed!
00:41:175 (1,2,3,1,2) - This is really unfitting and eccentric. Use the same rhythm as at 01:48:892 (1,2,3,1,2) instead. I don't really get what's so unffiting with that pattern, the second part has some drums for that repeating slider...
00:49:993 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier. Doesn't give much room to prepare for the following object. Fixed!
00:59:163 (3) - x124 y256 for proper blanket with the previous (2). Fixed!
01:00:221 (5) - Middle point x352 y276 and end point x312 y204 for perfect blanket. Fixed!
01:01:631 (2) - Middle point x224 y160 and end point x264 y224 for perfect blanket. Fixed!
01:11:860 (6,7) - Use a circle and a 1/4 repeat slider instead. The slider starts 1/4 too late, which is not suitable. Fixed!
01:27:378 (3) - x276 y288 Fixed!
01:30:552 (1) - Middle point x348 y248 and end point x328 y284 for a proper blanket with the previous slider end. Fixed!
01:31:610 (3,4) - Replace with a circle and 1/4 repeat slider etc. same as a while ago. Fixed!
01:40:428 (4) - Move to x8 y260 and open up the curve a little more for a smoother pattern. Fixed!
01:42:896 (2) - Should be a 1/2 repeat slider instead, or a circle and a 1/2. Ignores important elements in the music (both the vocal and the beat). Fixed!
[box=Static Noise Bird]01:57:710 (1) - Again, end 1/2 earlier. Fixed!
02:05:116 - Missing object (1/2 slider, perhaps?). Fixed!
02:07:232 (3) - Improve the blanket to (2)'s end. Fixed!
02:11:817 (1) - Replace with a circle starting 1/2 later. Spinner reasons, again. Fixed!
02:14:286 (5,6) - Doesn't play well, doesn't look good. Second opinion, so fixed.!
02:26:278 (1) - Move the slider end up. This looks too compressed. Fixed!
02:31:215 (1) - Middle point x128 y148 for a proper blanket. Fixed!
03:27:293 (7,8) - Do the same as with 01:11:860 (6,7) Fixed!
03:34:701 (3) - Copy, paste and flip the previous (1) here. That shape fits the pattern better. Fixed!
03:47:397 (1) - Put a circle here and start this 1/2 later. The finish should be clickable and not a spinner start. Fixed!

[Hard]
00:06:605 (3,4,5) - Rhythm improvement below. Sounds a lot better. Fixed!

00:09:428 (3,4,5) - Rhythm improvement above. Fixed!
00:11:546 (9,1) - Swap New Combo. Fixed!
00:12:252 (2,3,4) - Rhythm improvement above. Fixed!
00:59:515 (3) - Shorten by 1/4, since you're following the vocals, apparently. Fixed!
01:06:922 (2) - Rhythm improvement below. Alternatively don't use the repeat slider, and use a normal 1/4 slider + circle. Fixed!

01:15:739 (2,3,4) - You know, the good old stuff as in the start. Fixed!

01:21:382 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed!
01:23:498 (7,8,9) - ^ Fixed!
01:31:610 (4,5) - Use the non-repeat slider first, then the one with the repeat. The (5) is 1/4 off. Fixed!
01:52:066 (7) - x316 y240 to be blanketed better by (6) and (8). Fixed!
01:52:419 (8) - x232 y208 for better blanketing with (7). Fixed!
02:15:697 (8,9) - Slider first, then the circle. Fixed!
02:29:981 (4) - Shorten by 1/4 and add a circle to the end. Fixed!
02:59:783 (6) - Fixed!

03:06:837 (5,6,7,8) - Don't stack 1/4 and 1/2 to the same point. Fixed!
03:07:543 (8) - Should be two circles. The next section start deserves a new hit object and not a slider end. Fixed!
03:28:351 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and add a circle to the ending point. Fixed!

-Dave Strider- wrote:

M4M from my queue!

Normal:
+00:11:193 (4) - move this up so that it doesn't go off the grid
+00:41:175 (1) - ^
+01:06:569 (6) - ^
+01:40:428 (4) - ^
there are a few more that do this but i won't pinpoint them all, it's no big deal anyway unless half of the slider or circle is sticking off the grid (like 01:06:569 (6)) All of them fixed!, I'll look later for some more like this.
+01:44:660 (1,2) - just having two long sliders here seems too weird to me (kinda hard to describe) Hmm... I'll think about this one.
+01:57:004 - maybe start the spinner here? it might sound better because it goes with the song Moved!
+03:47:397 (1) - i suggest removing this circle and moving the beginning of the spinner here, but this can be optional That was my original idea, but another modder pointed that it would be better to leave the end beat clickeable, so I'll have to pass.

Hard:
+01:31:610 (4,5,6) - this looks reeally hard to read Yeah I knew it was a bad idea. Changed.
+03:04:897 (7) - seems a little too far off the grid (there are fewer in this diff that do this than in normal) Fixed!

overall this is a good map!! it was kinda hard for me to find issues here, especially in the hard diff, which is why its so short (or that could just be my eyes are bad). Don't worry! good luck!

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, from my queue! Sorry for the delay.

Avril Lavigne! 8D

[> General <]

1. - I guess you should make an Easy diff for your mapset to make your spread balanced better, just some simple patterns and that's all. It's up to you if you're trying to find someone to make an Easy, or making it by your own. Yeah, I'm hoping for a GD or I'll make an easy myself.
2. - Timing Check: I think the first offset should be 260, second is 15,789. I'll try those later
3. - Checked everything, looks fine!Yay!

[> Normal <]

1. 00:20:014 (3,4,5,6) - This flow looks odd, you can make a triangle with (4), (5), and (6). Okay.
2. 00:21:425 (6,1) - Swap NC, new track came off there.
3. 00:24:246 (4,1) - ^
4. 00:25:657 (1,2,3,4) - Curve the flow here, here's my example > http://puu.sh/eASFb/26db950cbc.png Fixed!
5. 00:29:889 (4,5) - Fix your spacing here, jumps aren't allowed in Easy/Normal. Also swap NC with 00:31:300 (1) - Fixed!
6. 00:33:416 (4,1) - Swap NC.
7. 00:36:943 (1,4) - ^
8. 00:41:175 (1,2) - Fixx your spacing. Fixed!
9. 00:46:466 (1,2) - Swap NC.
10. 00:52:461 (1) - Add finish on head? Okay, sounds better!
11. 01:04:100 (2,3,4) - Kinda offbeat on these sliders, looks fine, but might be a little complicated when they're kept without a steady beat. This is not an important issue to be fixed. I'll consider changing it, awaiting for more opinions.
12. 01:05:511 (4,6) - I prefer not to overlap here, keeping it clear makes it more readable. I don't really know how that overlap got there. Fixed!
13. 01:15:034 (1) - Add Finish? Fixed!
14. 01:20:677 (6,1) - Swap NC.
15. 01:29:141 (3) - Try keeping this pattern symmetric, by moving it downgrid to y:88. Watch your spacing. Fixed!
16. 01:31:963 (4,5) - Check your spacing. Also swap (4)'s NC with 01:30:552 (1) - Fixed!
17. 01:33:374 (1) - If you've done above, remove this NC.
18. - i think i'll need to stop the NC inconsistencies here, so try finding them on your own. Since it's a Normal diff, it's recommended to always add an NC in the long white tick to notice the players the music changes. I will work on these soon, thanks for telling me!
19. 01:41:838 (1,2) - Check your spacing, quite nazi. Fixed!
20. 01:53:125 (4,5,1) - Form a Triangle here, improves the flow. Fixed!
21. 02:00:178 (1) - Add Finish on head. Fixed!
22. 02:06:174 (3,4) - Try to double blanket here, not just a single slider blankets and the other one not. Also fix the spacing. Okay, I think I got it!
23. 02:09:701 (1) - I don't think the spinner fits in this part like the other ones you've added, remove it and map some notes. I'd rather not, otherwise I would have to use an stream and I can't.
24. 02:12:523 (2,3) - Try remaking them symmetric. Fixed!
25. 02:15:344 (6) - This slider looks off, i might help a bit for this > http://puu.sh/eAUWd/b74a5dba71.png Fixed!
26. 02:18:518 (5,1) - Stack? Now properly stacked!
27. 02:20:635 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here, or not planning to make one? It wasn't really my intention...
28. 02:22:751 - Imo, this part is not really intense for a kiai time like the others. Okay, a third modder that mentions this will make me change it... but I still think its the climax of the song o_o
29. 02:41:443 (3,4) - Recorrect this parallel. Fixed!
30. 02:50:966 (1) - Add finish? Fixed!
31. 03:02:958 (3,4) - Fix spacing~ Fixed!
32. 03:07:895 - Try to add a kiai time here, sounds fitting. Same as before
33. 03:16:713 (1) - Same as 02:09:701 (1) - Same answer
34. 03:33:289 (1,2,3) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!
35. 03:34:700 (3,4) - Fix spacing~ Fixed!
36. - Pointed out much major issues here, some NC inconsistencies are flowing in this diff. You made a good work, but it's quite valuable.Thanks!

[> Hard <]

1. - Same issues like the previous diff about the NC inconsistency and spacings. Might not mention them here to increase the size of mods. So as again, find them yourself. Okay!
2. 00:06:605 (3) - You should avoid moving sliderpoints out of grid, this might lead to unrankability. Whoops, Fixed!
3. 00:09:428 (3,5) - Try to curve them in the same position to improve the flow, by copy-pasting ofc! I actually think that flow is better...
4. 00:12:252 (3,4,5) - Make a symmetry? Okay!
5. 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - Instead of stacking, make a formation or a triangle at least.Changed, but did something else
6. 00:26:362 (5,6) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!
7. 00:28:478 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - I'd rather leave the stacks
8. 00:34:474 (2,3,4) - Not sure if you intentionally make a jump here, but i prefer keeping the spacing balanced like the previous notes. Re-arranged notes so the jump is obvious
9. 00:37:648 (6) - I think a downbeat for the rhythm here is enough for this track. Repeat arrow sounds too weak for a white long tick. I'm putting emphasis on the lyrics in that one part... so I'll have to pass.
10. 00:40:823 (1) - I can hear a strong beat in the middle of the slider, i guess you should shorten the slider for a downbeat to hit that strong beat. Agreed, so fixed!
11. 00:41:881 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - Re-arranged
12. 00:52:461 (2) - Add finish on head. Fixed!
13. 00:54:930 (1,2) - Recorrect this blanket, also same as 00:37:648 (6) - for the repeat arrow issue. Fixed!
14. 01:10:449 (4,5,6) - This spacing changes is much bigger major issue than the minor ones, i guess you'll need to fix this one to avoid unrankability. Huh? Which spacing changes...? Either way I double-checked them and fixed some minor differences.
15. 01:15:034 (1,2) - Curve and making them the same position for a better double blanket. I did not want to blanket these...
16. 01:24:909 (1,2) - Symmetry? Fixed!
17. 01:28:789 (4,5,6) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!... blanketing is hard.
18. 01:33:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - This back-and-forth flow looks nice! It can be neater when you form a perfect diamond formation. I don't really get this one. A diamond on these ones?.. tried but it didn't look really good.
19. 01:48:716 (5) - Remove circle? i don't think this part is likely need a circle. Well, not really an important issue. I can hear the drums on that beat
20. 01:51:361 (6,7,8) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!... I think I hate blankets
21. 01:54:183 (2,3,4,5) - Try to recurve them all the same position, it'll improve the flow if so. uhh... any suggestions on this? I thought they were already curved nicely D:
22. 02:07:232 (2,3,4) - Symmetry? I'll pass on this one.
23. 02:10:406 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream looks okay, i prefer replacing it as a 1/4 beat slider. Hmm... no thanks.
24. 02:13:228 (3,4,5,6) - You almost complete this perfect square formation, so remake it? Fixed!
25. 02:26:807 (3) - Replace as 1/4 circles? like you've did on the previous parts you made. I did that so it would be somewhat different... if it is an issue then I'll change it...
26. 02:44:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks okay, how about making a formation instead of stacks? Yeah, nice idea! I made an hexagon!
27. 02:58:373 (3,4) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!
28. 03:08:248 (1,2) - ^, Also this pattern have a great quality of mapping, try to make those more often! Okay!
29. 03:24:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Form a Star formation here. I'll think about this one.
30. 03:41:048 (7,8) - Stack perfectly? Or move circle (8) somewhere for a triangle formation with circle (1). Stacked properly
31. - Likely needs a small work with pattern changes, blankets, streams, and some spacings. Well, not remapping, just try to focus on them to keep them perfectly balanced.

I guess that's all, it's a good map, but needs a bit more improvement. Or try to find more modders to see their opinions about the map. Understood, thanks a lot for your help!
Good luck, Zexion!

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Zexion!

General

1. 02:22:751 - I wouldn't put a kiai point here, since it's the solo. The kiai is usually used for the chorus, so a kiai there won't be necessary. But, the second goes more to 02:50:966 -, since it's a chorus. All right, 3 modders think the same thing so... changed.

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1. 00:03:076 (1) - I highly suggest you reduce the spinner's length by a 1/2 a beat (which is on 00:05:193 - ), in order for the players to get back in track when they finished spinning it. It'll have a bigger break than a 1/4 beat break. Okay!
2. 00:11:193 (4,1) - It's not major, but the distance is inconstant from the distance snap. Fixed!
3. 00:21:425 (6) - I would rotate this a bit to the left, or make it straight so it could shoot better to the next circle. Fixed, now it's a straight slider!
4. 00:23:188 (3) - This slider seems really weird when you hear. If you followed the vocals, but you shouldn't break the rhythm that follows the piano. Also, you left a piano beat on 00:23:541 with a slider tick, which I don't think it would go together. I suggest that you put something that is clickable on that beat. Not sure on this one
5. 00:39:765 - I don't think you should put a long pause here. I would add a circle or a slider on that beat so the pause wouldn't be really awkward. Okay!
6. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider ends on a tick that shouldn't be on. And the slider is really weird to hear. Unless it's a mistake, you should end it on the white tick before the blue tick. Indeed, that was totally a mistake, fixed!
7. 01:08:333 (7) - Make a blanket with the previous slider? It will look nicer. Okay!
8. 01:12:212 (7) - Add claps on the head, repeat, and tail since add a clap on the slider will only go to the body. There's also 03:27:646 (8) . Fixed!
9. 01:12:918 (1) - The end of the spinner must not be silent, else it's unrankable. I also suggest that you trim the spinner, like it's stated in the first suggestion to let players have the time to get back in-track. And when the spinner is on the white tick, it would be perfect of a clap and a finish. Fixed! Really nice suggestion.
10. 01:21:735 (2) - Add a finish hitsound on the tail, since there's a cymbal sound in the music. Fixed!
11. 01:29:141 (3,1) - Improve the blanket a bit. It also goes for 02:20:635 (2,3) . Fixed!
12. 01:41:486 (6,1) - There's an inconsistency with distance. Please fix it. Fixed!
13. 01:46:071 (2) - The flow would go better if the slider is next to the previous slider, like placing it to x:177 y:215. Don't forget about the next circle. Fixed!
14. 01:48:187 (4) - Add whistles on repeat and tail? It would hit the drums, like you did to the head. Fixed!
15. 02:00:178 (1) - Maybe move the tail on the other side, like moving it to x:161 y:27, so it won't repeat the same pattern as 02:01:236 (3) . I'll pass, I don't really see a problem with a simple repeating pattern.
16. 02:09:701 (1) - I suggest you take out that spinner and map that part. Since you didn't do in the first chorus, it would make a consistency between them. Do it also to 03:16:713 (1) . Fair enough, mapped both parts!
17. 02:15:344 (6) - Sounds great if you put a finish on the head. This also goes to 03:00:489 (3) and 03:22:003 (6) . Okay!
18. 02:31:215 (1,2) - Be careful with the distance. Fixed!
19. 02:55:904 (1,2,3) - I'd unstack them for making more movements for player. No thanks
20. 03:06:837 - Like before, you shouldn't let a break on there, because it's a little awkward, and you're missing some good beats. I suggest you map this part, and 03:23:414 . Okay for the first one, but for the second one I wanted to make a small break since its a normal.
21. 03:28:351 (1) - I think a clap with a finish would go together. Okay!
22. 03:33:289 (1,3) - Make them more symmetric. Fixed!
23. 03:35:758 (4) - Move the tail to somewhere to x:424 y:276, so it could shoot up instead of shooting down. Fixed!
24. 03:42:459 (1,3) - These sliders have too much repeats, and they can lead to confusion because there are a lot of one-repeat sliders during the map. Try replacing those sliders by long sliders, or a spinner that starts on 03:42:106 to 03:43:870 .
    
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    Agreed, also I wanted to change those way before but I forgot lol, fixed!

Hard

1. 00:06:605 (3) - I don't like how the flow was made for the two next objects, because of this slider. I'd make something like this:
   
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   Fixed!
2. 00:13:664 (1) - It's a little the same the previous suggestion, so I'd go more with something like this:
   
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   Fixed!
3. 00:19:661 (1) - This new combo is unnecessary, so you can remove it. Fixed!
4. 00:34:121 (1,2,3,4) - This is unexpected. The pattern would fit with the strong vocals, but I don't think it would with the map, since it's too random. Try moving them closer to each other, or make another pattern with the distance snap.
5. 00:40:117 (2) - I'd replace the circle by a 1/2 slider so it doesn't avoid the white tick. Without the white tick, I clicked the circle (3) too early. Fixed!
6. 00:47:876 (3,4,5) - This rhythm breaks the previous rhythms, because it follows the voice, instead of the instrument. It's a little weird to listen to it. So I'd map the instrument there. Fixed!
7. 00:52:461 (2) - Add a new combo? The chorus and kiai start here, but there's already 00:51:756 (1) that have a new combo. Added on the beat you mentioned, I guess it's okay to leave the one beat combo.
8. 01:00:044 - You should add circle on that tick, because you added objects on the blue ticks, so that tick should also have one. It's about "polarity". It will avoid the confusion. Hmmm... okay, fixed!
9. 01:07:627 (4) - Add a finish. Okay!
10. 01:12:389 (8,9) - Add claps. Fixed!
11. 01:12:918 (1) - Objects must not have silent sounds, else it's unrankable. You should turn up the volume more. Fixed!
12. 01:15:034 (1) - The slider is a bit ugly with the next object. Plus, the distance between this and the next object is inconsistent to the others. You can make something similar as in the first suggestion: Really nice, changed!
    
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13. 01:19:266 (3) - Distance is inconstant from the others with the previous object. There's also 01:33:021 (1) - 01:37:959 (5) - 02:42:501 (1) . Fixed!... I don't know how those got so messed up.
14. 01:22:088 (4) - Add a finish on the head. Okay!
15. 01:25:615 (1) - Remove the new combo, then add it to the next object. And, remove the new combo to 01:27:378 (1) .
16. 01:59:120 (6) - This repeat slider should have claps, since it hits the drum. But add claps on head and tail, and each repeat. Else, if you select the slider and add the clap, it'll only go the body. Fixed!
17. 02:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the distances between them are too high. I'd reduce it a bit. I'll wait more opinions on this one.
18. 02:15:344 (7) - Add a finish since there's a cymbal beat in the music. Fixed!
19. 03:27:293 (7,8,9) - The claps should be added on the tail of the slider and on the circles. There's drum beats in the background. Fixed!
20. 03:41:754 (1) - I think it should need a finish.Agreed

To be honest, the new combo pattern seems to be too random. Try to aim the big downbeat. I know, I'll work on the combos soon.
Anyways, good luck with your map! Thanks a lot! Any question ca be asked via PM or in-game.

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. Sorry. I can't speak English. : ( Don't worry!

I hope you understand:

All diff
Uncheck: Letterbox Done!

[Hard]

Circle size is bit small. Change to 4. The song is slow and not too difficult. I don't see a problem with using smaller circles.

1. 00:06:605 (3) - Add claps to slider head. Missed it. Fixed!
   
2. 00:11:193 (7,8) - Add claps Okay!
   
3. 00:23:541 (5,6,7) - Follow the vocal here. Put circles here: 00:23:541 - 00:24:951 - and 1/1 slider here: 00:23:893 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIrGn/c8207ffe27.jpg Really nice suggestion, changed!
   
4. 00:32:005 (4,5,6) - Same as. Follow the vocal here. Put circles here: 00:32:005 - 00:33:416 - and 1/1 slider here: 00:32:358 - Changed!
   
5. 00:37:296 (5,6) - I think my conception is better fits here: Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIsbH/9a80a1b520.jpg Make reverse slider here: 00:37:296 - 1/1 slider here: 00:38:001 - and circle here: 00:39:059 -
   Better suited to the vocals. Passing on this one, I don't really like how it sounds.
   
6. 00:40:823 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals. This part weird, and some long slider is not good start. Example: 00:42:939 (6) - This slider is not good start here, because the vocal interrupted here: 00:43:291 - Move this slider here: 00:42:586 - Fixed!
   
7. 01:19:971 (4,5,6,7) - Add claps Okay, just hoping it won't be too loud...
   
8. 01:24:909 (1,2) - Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIt4l/1881776609.jpg Add repeat: 01:24:909 (1) - , remove repeat: 01:25:615 (2) - and move this slider here: 01:25:967 - Reverse slider better fits here: 01:24:909 - Fixed!
   
9. 01:27:378 (3,4) - Put circles here: 01:27:378 - 01:27:554 - and put 1/2 slider here: 01:27:731 - My conception better fits the vocal. Timeline: http://puu.sh/eItuF/c26b65d0d6.jpg Fixed!
   
10. 01:31:610 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think don't put stream here, because 1/4 sounds is very low, the vocal louder. Follow the vocal.Waiting for more opinions on this one
    
11. 01:33:021 (1,2) - Use this: http://puu.sh/eItRH/f4e1e0418a.jpg Better here. Okay, I think I got it...
    
12. 01:39:370 (3) - Move slider here: 01:39:193 - because vocal starts here 01:39:193 - and put circles here: 01:39:722 - 01:40:075 - Okay, but made some slight modifications
    
13. 01:48:892 (1,2) - Move slider here: 01:48:892 - and circle here: 01:49:598 - I think better fits to the vocal. Okay, changed!
    
14. 01:49:950 (3,4) - Same as ^ Slider here: 01:49:950 - circle here: 01:50:656 - No thanks
    
15. 01:52:066 (7,8) - Same as ^ Slider here: 01:52:066 - Circle here: 01:52:772 - No thanks
    
16. 01:52:948 - Put circle here Okay!
    
17. 02:05:116 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps Then again, I hope its not too loud...
    
18. 02:07:232 (2) - I think 1/4 reverse slider is better here. Indeed, but added as three circles.
    
19. 02:08:290 (4,5) - Delete circle: 02:08:996 (5) - Move 02:08:290 (4) - slider here: 02:08:643 - and put circles here: 02:08:290 - 02:08:467 - I think better. Really nice, fixed!
    
20. 02:10:406 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Add clapsNo, notice that the drums in the song are lowering their intensity while the claps keep theirs. It just sounds off.
    
21. 02:44:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is ugly. Use similar: http://puu.sh/eLCvn/4372e41d7e.jpg Fixed!
    
22. 03:14:949 (3) - 1/4 slider is better fits here. If i use: put circle here: 03:15:302 -
    
23. 03:32:936 (1,2,3) - Uhh, this is bad/weird. Please, follow vocal: (use this): http://puu.sh/eLD23/c99b9e8fe9.jpg (Time: 03:32:936 - to 03:35:229 - ) Let me think about this one...

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CS: 3! Same answer as hard

1. 02:03:353 (6,7) - This flow bad. Use similar: http://puu.sh/eLDDX/5a7451b02b.jpg Fixed!
   
2. 02:06:174 (3,4) - Same as. Flow is weird. Notes are blanketed there, what's the problem?
   
3. 02:56:609 (3,4,5,6) - I think better, if slider is start the white line. Timeline: http://puu.sh/eLDUf/999c4e30b3.jpg Fixed!
   
4. 03:19:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^ Fixed!

GL.

VINXIS wrote:

le mod

from me modding q

k only 2 diffs nic e kthx

u dont need the second timing point m8 check the timing bro, ticks will fuck up if there's no second point
Normal CS3 and the rest 4-5 too lax for normal aside from the CS which is too rough forthe normal
Hard CS4 OD 6.5 dont use CS5 for hard pls gonna need one more opinion b4 changing this m8
put alternative rock into tags k

it's mostly just inconsistent comboing in context with the song so yeah i actually had to rework that. So now it's a good chance, le nc changes:
00:21:425 (6) - nc k
00:22:483 (1) - remove nc k
00:24:246 (4) - nc k
00:25:657 (1) - remove nc k
00:26:715 (4) - nc k
00:38:354 (4) - nc k
00:40:823 the vocal starts here m8
>implying everything is vocals
le background rhythm man
00:42:586 (3,1) - blanket will look much better tried and failed over 9000 times.
00:46:466 (1) - if u want the nc here, then make a slider as it fits more, otherwise remove nc and nc the next note k
01:29:141 (3) - nc k
01:30:552 (1) - remove nc k
01:31:610 (3) - nc k
01:37:606 (3) - nc k
01:38:664 (1) - remove nc k
01:40:428 (4) - nc k
01:50:303 (3,1) - blanket will look better yee
02:43:560 (1) - map this with 1/2 notes instead of a spinner for map consistency noice
02:55:904 (1,2,3) - no stak pls no
02:59:078 (1) - remove nc k
02:59:431 (2) - nc k
03:04:721 (1) - remove nc k
03:05:074 (2) - nc k
03:22:003 (6) - nc k
03:38:227 (3) - nc k
03:38:580 (1) - remove nc k
03:40:343 (4) - nc
03:41:754 (7) - nc
03:42:459 (1) - remove nc
don't agree with the last three

00:46:466 (1) - remove nc k
00:46:818 (2) - nc k
01:23:498 (7) - nc k
01:29:494 (7) - nc k
02:54:140 (6) - nc k
02:56:609 (5) - nc k
02:56:962 (1) - remove nc k
02:59:431 (5) - nc k
03:07:895 (9) - nc k
03:08:248 (1) - remove nc k
03:13:538 (5) - nc k
03:13:891 (1) - remove nc k
03:16:360 (6) - nc k
03:18:476 (1) - remove nc k
03:19:181 (5) - nc k
03:21:650 (1) - remove nc k
03:22:003 (2) - nc k
idk the map is fine to me, but it looks like a bland old map with not much variety in the map tbh (that's just my opinion TT_TT, I'm not fond with this kind of mapping style, it is fine with this style though). It'll look much better once it's CS4 and, most of the stacks are redundant but yehj
Now being serious, my mapping style is old, so yeah, some people will love and some others will hate it, but whatever. I kinda like those stacks.

good luk m9
tyvm
gr7 mod m10 5much15me

TAILOW wrote:

This is really a cut off of all
00:07:311 (3) - remove whistle. It will take better sound for the guitar Not sure, so no for now.
00:08:370 - same circle as 00:06:958 (2) Yes, it was missing. Fixed.
00:08:723 (1) - make the reverse slider. The sound take more normal level You mean making it a half-time reverse slider...? I don't really like how that sounds :c
00:10:134 (2) - remove But there will be something missing there!
00:10:487 - circle (whistle) OK
00:10:840 (3) - circle The repeating is fine I guess
00:12:605 (2) - reverse slider Added as a circle
00:14:723 (1,2,3) - check: clap, clap+whistle, whistle Agreed
00:43:997 (1) - x:280 y:260 to x:288 y:268Okay!
00:45:760 (3) - this reverse slider isn't need. Try with 1/2 slider It's actually for consistency with Hard, and I think it fits.
00:56:694 (3) - put the slider in 00:57:399 (4) ctrl+g to get better effect Nice suggestion, changed!
01:02:690 (3) - slider blinding at (1) I don't understand this one...
01:15:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ~same thing like at the beginning okay, will rework this soon.
01:36:901 (2) - remove whistle eemm... noty
03:22:003 (1) - reverse slider Following the vocals there
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2601977 the breaks; same to other parts

Map should get more normal^ look. Pattern is pretty cool, and the timming tricks as at 00:23:364-00:23:717 are also appreciated! Understood!

1. DS=Distance Snap
2. SV=Slider Velocity
3. RC=Ranking Criteria
4. NC=New Combo
5. HS=Hitsound(s)

LixRei wrote:

Yo! Modding as requested.
Cool song, btw. Thanks!

1. DS=Distance Snap
2. SV=Slider Velocity
3. RC=Ranking Criteria
4. NC=New Combo
5. HS=Hitsound(s)

[Overview]

1. Eh... your Kiai time on every diff should be consistent, since you're the only mapper. There isn't any apparent reason to end Kiai earlier on Hard. This was actually a problem with a inherited point not having kiai on. Fixed!
2. Cool, other things here seem to be clear.

[Normal]

1. 00:13:664 (4,5) - I think it's a little better rhythm-wise if you Ctrl+G those notes and fix spacing afterwards. My reason: Clicking a hold slider in a red tick and ending it in a downbeat (or a big white tick) doesn't mark a real difference in rhythm and it's ankward to play (and downbeats are usually strong notes, and that's why they should be clicked instead). It also helps to hold vocals better Okay, changed.
2. 00:15:075 (2,3) - And if you do ^, consider turning this into a slider too, for the same reason. It has a major effect on gameplay, since players hold a vocal (which feels good and natural to play). Agreed!
3. 00:20:014 (3,4) - You should fix the blanket here. Should look like this instead of this. Fixed!
4. 00:23:188 (5) - If you plan on using slidertick-based hitsounds, you should make them quieter than average, clickeable (or the ones at the end of a slider/spinner) hitsounds since they could be confusing for new players. This is also a guideline on the Ranking Criteria:
   

   RC wrote:

   Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.

   I had no idea that rule existed, lowered volume.
5. And ^ also applies to every pattern like this, so check your timing sections! o/ (and talking about timing sections, you can place them right above the slidertick, for example, you could move the green section on 00:23:364 - to 00:23:541 - and the slidertick hitsound will be played! You might want to do it, it's only a minor thing tho). I'd rather not, that would mess up other ticks and then there's the volume thing you mentioned.
6. 00:25:304 (3,4,5) - Preference: Consider turning those into a 1/2 slider with a reverse. I think that follows vocal more accurately. I don't really see how it fits the vocal better, but it is a more newbie friendly pattern. Changed!
7. 00:26:715 (1) - Remove NC here, for consistency with your mapping (you're applying NC every downbeat or every note after one if a slider ends/passes the downbeat). NC consistency is important to keep a balanced drain and a balanced number of notes for every measure (it also indicates rhythm changes when you arrive a downbeat).
8. 00:28:831 (2,3) - Alright, there is clearly a spacing issue. Distance Snap needs to be consistent on Easy and Normal diffs, so you need to fix it using the DS. Fixed!
9. 00:29:889 (4) - Add NC here and remove the one on 00:31:300 (1) - for consistency.
10. 00:33:416 (4,1) - Swap NCs for the same reason as ^
11. 00:36:238 (5,1) - ^
12. 00:49:640 (5) - Add NC here for the same reason as other NC things.
13. 00:56:694 (3,4) - Spacing issue here. Remember to keep DS consistent. Fixed!
14. 00:58:457 (2,3) - Fix blanket. Fixed!
15. 00:59:868 (4,5) - ^ (consider making the slider a bit more curve for a nicer blanket). Fixed!
16. 01:01:279 (1,2) - ^ Fixed!
17. 01:03:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I actually think a rhythm like this reflects vocals a bit more, and is also better rhythm-wise, since you click every time a beat sounds. So, with this you can follow both music beats and vocals. This would be awesome. Also, there's a spacing issue with every note in this combo, so you need to rearrange this anyway. Seems good, changed!
18. 01:06:569 (1) - If you're trying to follow vocals with a slider, it's better if you make it like this instead. Sounds several times better than the actual arrangement. Also, fix blanket with 01:08:333 (2) - if you decide to do or not to do this. Really nice, changed an fixed blanket.
19. 01:20:677 (6,1) - Swap NCs.
20. 01:24:909 - I'm pretty sure a finish HS is missing here. Indeed.
21. 01:27:731 (1) - Remove NC.
22. 01:29:141 (1,2) - Fix blanket with slider's tail. Should be okay now.
23. 01:31:610 (1,2) - Swap NCs.
24. 01:33:374 (1,3) - ^
25. 01:36:195 (1) - Remove NC.
26. 01:41:838 (1,3) - Swap NCs. Also, fix blanket of 01:41:838 (1,2) -
27. 01:44:660 (1,2) - Swap NCs.
28. 01:47:481 (1) - Remove NC.
29. 01:51:361 (1,2) - Swap NCs.
30. 01:54:183 (1,2) - ^
31. ...this mod might be longer, so I'll make it shorter. Go around the rest of the diff and fix the NC on your own accord. You're NCing every downbeat (or every beat after the downbeat), so keep consistency and add/remove any NC you might need, as long as you follow consistency. ALL NC FIXED!
32. 02:00:178 (1,2,3,4) - ...y'know, this is kinda complicated to play. Sliders follow vocal, but circles follow beats. If you just place random circles like that, players will think they are still following vocals. If you want a rhythm like this, it's better if you do something like this instead, since your actual arrangement is hard to play. I'm not sure if that is suitable for a normal. I'll wait for more opinions on that certain pattern.
33. 02:11:465 - Maybe you should making this beat clickeable. Forcing a player to hold a sound that isn't even held is ankward for player itself. So, ending the slider earlier and making this clickeable might make this part easier. 'kay.
34. 02:17:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - Alright, too much clicking here. Normal isn't still a place for singles in sucession yet so maybe you want to create a slider to replace 02:17:812 (3,4) - Are 5 circles that bad? ... okay.
35. 02:23:103 (2,3) - Idk if blankets are intended, but if they are you need to fix it. They weren't...
36. 02:24:514 (4,5) - ^ Those were intended. Fixed.
37. 02:36:153 (5) - Preference: Maybe curving this keeps the curve flow 02:34:742 (3,4) - started? Fixed!
38. 03:03:310 (4) - So... this slider is out of screen, so you need to move it back inside. Fixed!
39. 03:22:003 (1) - Adding a reverse to this slider and using a custom slidertick HS on 03:23:766 - would be pretty cool IMO (and would follow more beats, erasing that pause you suddenly did). I agree with the reverse, but why the hitsound?
40. 03:25:530 (3,4) - Slider 4 should begin where circle 3 is, to avoid ending slider on the white tick as there is a relevant note there, and it should be clicked.[/color]
41. 03:33:289 (1,2,3) - Ok, so you should check your blankets here. Fixed!
42. Diff can still improve rhythm-wise IMO, as well as regarding NCs. Flow is okay, but spacing issues are not. Flow being good is a victory for me. Thanks!

Alright... now I'm not really in the mood to mod Hard, so I'll only say two things: Check NCs and blankets. Make sure NCs are consistent and blankets are perfect (I checked and some NCs are just a mess; same with blankets). (Will do, I have serious problems with NC's.)

Such a half-assed answer to Hard; I know. Sorry about that
Yet I still wish ya good luck.

Nitrousdragon wrote:

[Normal]
Looks good Yay!

[Hard]
00:08:723 (1,2) - I would place circle 2 where it won't overlap with anything else in the combo. Um... but that's just a simple stack... I'll pass.
00:40:117 (3) - I think having this slider moved to x:360 y:264 would contain better flow in that part. I agree, curved it a bit too.
01:21:382 (2,3,4) - I'd make this corner more round than pointy. Curved the sliders
01:46:423 (2,3) - Now would be a good time to not make these two overlap. Now that you mention it, there was no reason for a stack here. Fixed!
02:00:178 (1) - I would replace this with two circles. Any particular reason? I wanted to make that pattern somewhat symetrical, and I think a 1/2 slider makes it a bit easier.
02:00:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also, again, I don't like corners. I never have. Hmm... not really sure I should change it. I'll think about this one.
02:01:236 (5,6) - If you plan on doing the last one, move to x:312 y:168 and make the slider more vertical. Don't forget equal spacing! ^
02:10:406 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - do this part like this: Really nice, fixed!
02:15:697 (3) - Replace with two circles. This is for consistency with the rest of the song, I always used that pattern with that rhythm.
02:23:809 (4) - Same Yes, great idea! Copied the previous pattern.

Those are all the warnings I caught. Hope it gets ranked. Thank you!!

Alarido wrote:

Hey!

♥ Your map is leaving me back to 2011 belle époque ~.~ i.e., English rock and simple mapping (: Good times ♥

[General]
* Consecutive combo colours feels very alike. Would make them more different (i.e., more distinguishable) from each other.


All right! Did something very similar.
* Disable "Widescreen support". Done!
♥ Everything else feels good.

[Hard]
00:19:308 (2,3,4,5) - A flow adjustement would be nice here. First, make Ctrl-G on 00:19:308 (2,3). Then do Ctrl-G on 00:20:014 (4,5). Done!
00:20:719 (6) - For better flow, make the 2nd node stay at (x:216,y:316) and the tail node at (x:168 y:240). Fixed.
01:06:922 (2,3,4) - A bit better flow here → http://puu.sh/gsmSw/7cdbe63046.jpg Fixed.
♥ Hitsounding feels good.

[Normal]
02:03:705 (3,1) - Fix spacing here, it's less spaced (0.93x) than the rest (1.20x). A fitting way for fixing this → http://puu.sh/gsnVU/4d8b59c09c.jpg
Really nice, fixed!
03:05:779 (2,3,4) - The (4)'s head is very near of (2) note, which can confuse players. So... better moving 03:05:779 (2) - to (x:208 y:68), then move 03:06:132 (3,4) - together to (x:300 y:108) and, finally, move the middle node of 03:06:837 (4) - by 1 grid left (i.e., curving it a bit more).
03:16:360 (1,2) - Feels better if you delete (1) and move (2) by 1/2 to back and, finally, add a note on 03:18:123. Image below:
Indeed, it feels a lot better. Fixed.
03:16:360 (1,2,3,4) - If you applied last mod above, perhaps you got a hard screen placement. Suggestion → http://puu.sh/gsoTZ/590c69bfbb.jpg Aaand I read this a bit too late but your fix is better. Done.
03:47:397 (1) - I would delete this note, move the spinner back here and stretch it by 1/2. Feels better (:
I'll pass on just this one, while I thought the same a while ago I feel like the finisher sound there should be clickeable, and having a spinner there would be just ignoring it...

That's all (: Good luck (:

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. It's recommended to use 1366x768 backgrounds these days. So, get one if it's possible. Understood, I will try to get one in a few days.

[Normal]

1. 00:24:599 (2) - the slide hitting the empty blue tick feels really confusing to me. Try something more suitable here and avoid the 1/4 slider as it doesn't really follow anything at this point. example Puush is trolling me atm and I can't open it. Will fix later.
2. 00:35:532 - just a friendly reminder to stress the slidertick sound at this point. Such a strong downbeat can't be mapped with a regular slidertick. Fixed!
3. 00:58:457 (2,3,4) - select them and hit Ctrl+g. It will swap them on the timeline, this way rhythm will match better with the music. However, you'll have to fix placement afterwards. Fixed!
   Note: 01:07:980 (2,3) - 01:18:208 (2,3) - 01:38:664 (3,4) - and so on, I think you can notice them yourself - same here. If you want to know more, you can read this
   I was aware of that, but with the lack of notes here in comparison to hard I ended up doing that. Will do a more deep check soon.
4. 01:16:092 - the music is really tough here, I would place a circle just to stress that. It feels empty as it is now.
   Note: 01:54:888 - same here. Both were added!
5. 02:37:564 (1,2,3) - I see the intention to stress this part, but it feels a little overmapped/exggerated and I would replace the first slider with an 1/2 slider. Fixed!
6. 02:58:725 (6,7) - while the first stack (1,2) in this combo worked well, this one makes me feel kind of uneasy. It breaks the movement and creates an unnatural stop, which goes against the song. Unstack them and we'll be cool. I would have never thought of that. Fixed!
   
   Not bad. I feel unsure about some 1/4s sliders and 1/2 rhythms. Everything else looks nice.
   Please tell me what makes you feel unsure :c, also it makes me happy seeing how I've improved since my first map

[Hard]

1. 00:15:781 (1,1) - try to make the spinner 1/2 shorter. (finish at 00:17:898). For a relaxing part of the song players will not expect (1) to pop out right after spinner. Fixed!
2. 00:19:308 (2,3) - (3) follows a very quite beat, replacing it with a slider seems to be a good idea. So, players won't feel weird about hitting a very quite beat. Fixed!
3. 00:23:893 (6) - 00:26:715 (7) - 00:32:358 (6) - try to emphasize the beats at big white ticks at least with some slidertick hitsounding. It really should be louder, in my opinion. Not sure, that would make them a lot more noiser in my opinion. Will give it some thought.
4. 00:35:532 - perople will expect you to follow loud beats on the hardest diff, so, why don't you map this one? Okay, rearranged into a star pattern.
5. 01:00:044 (6) - mind removing this one? Sounds a little out of place and feels overmapped. Quite right! Removed.
6. 01:42:896 (6,1) - try to use two 1/4 sliders here, instead? This would represent vocals much better, I think.Fixed!... but puush is down it seems, I will check your example later but for now I did it my way
7. 01:59:120 (7) - normally, you use 1/4 "streams" for this kind of sounds. So, the slider looks confusing. Try to replace it with 1/4 circles, you'll like it.
   Note: 03:42:459 (3,5) - same applies here, I think. I will fix these later since I will have to remap a lot on those parts, but I will definitly do it. (on the first, not sure about the second)
8. 02:38:622 (3,4,5) - I'd unstack them. The reason why is to keep this part more "dynamic". Music is quite intense here and stacks don't represent it well.
   Fixed! Did a little triangle with those three.
   
   It could look a little neater but everything else is quite okay.

Looks pretty nice but it can get just a little better. Keep it up! Yay! Thanks a lot!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Sala- wrote:

Here I am, sorry for being late. Don't worry! Better late than never~

Will do some polishing to make everything a bit neater. c:

[General]

Watch your NCs! They sometimes start at spots at which they don't make sense. Orientate on beginnings of beat snaps. I'll check them -again- when I have time. Some of them start at the next beat after the downbeat because sliders and stuff.

[Normal]

This difficulty has quite a high count of distance snap inconsistencies. I will try to spot and to point out most of them

|00:21:425 (1,2,3) - Slightly irregular Spacing. Use DS to keep the distance the same between all objects. Fixed!
|00:23:188 (5,1) - 1 is on a bad spot. The flow of the beatmap is cut here. I'd recommend to play it at the end of the slider instead of its side: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2915452 (Remember to relocate following objects to keep the DS clean. Yeah, blanketing with linear sliders doesn't work very much. Fixed!
|00:28:831 (3,1) - Those sliders could be the same, that would look neater. Just copy one of them, flip it by 180° and use Ctrl+G. You'll have to check the hitsounds on the newly created sliders, as they might be mixed up. Passing on this one... (personal tastes)
|00:29:889 (1,2) - Distance snap issue Fixed!
|02:14:286 (1,2) - Blanket :c Fixed!

[Hard]

|00:34:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rearrange those a bit, it could be a cleaner pattern than now. Also applies for 02:42:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 03:24:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Cleaned... at least I think I did so!
|00:41:881 (3) - Move this to x:158 y:120. It will form a good triangle. Fixed!
|01:12:918 (1) - I would not emphathise this spinner with a clap. It falls out of the hitsounding pattern. Removed!
|01:21:382 (2) - Missing clap. Fixed!


That's it from me. o/

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Normal
Creo que en la parte "Calmada" de la canción deberías seguir el ritmo de la música y no de la letra de la canción, me entiendes? Me parece que en algunas partes pierdes el ritmo que seguías al inicio. Ahora te dejo unos ejemplos. En la parte del kiai time no está mal el ritmo.
Deberías agregar más sonidos al mapa.

00:03:076 (1) - Siento que no tiene ritmo el final del spin, podrías alargarlo hasta aquí 00:05:546. O podrías simplemente bajarle al sonido al final del spin. No. El spinner quedaría muy cerca de la nota y es muy dificil para un jugador novato ver la siguiente.
00:11:193 (3) - NC Ok.
00:12:252 (1) - Remove NC Ok.
00:12:605 (3) - NC. Tan cerca del otro NC?
Remueve el slider y coloca una nota aqui 00:12:958 - En el tick blanco, para que siga el patron del ritmo. ¿Porque especificamente acá? No te quejaste de ningun otro slider que siguen un ritmo similar.
00:14:370 (1) - Remueve el whistle Cierto, estaba mal colocado.
00:18:603 - Add whistle Si, me gusta como suena.
00:20:014 (3) - ^ Si no voy a colocar wristles en cada tick blanco por esa sección, sonará extremadamente raro que algunos lo tengan solo al principio. Paso.
00:21:425 - ^ ^
00:21:072 (5) - No es necesaria esa nota.
00:22:483 (3,4) - Quita esas notas. De acuerdo con 3, pero no puedo quitar 4, por temas de la dificultad y que no marco un beat importante de la canción.
00:23:188 (5) - El slider recórrelo al tick blanco anterior 00:22:835. Y agrega una nota aqui 00:23:893. Esta la dejaré para mas tarde.
00:26:715 (1) - Creo que sigues el ritmo de la letra aquí, podrías hacerlo pero que el slider terminara aquí 00:27:068. Y agregar otro slider de aquí 00:27:773 hasta aquí 00:28:126. Excelente!! Quería deshacerme de ese slider hace un buen rato.
Deberías hacer esos cambios, ya que más adelante hiciste prácticamente lo mismo, mas que nada es para seguir el ritmo.
00:28:478 - NC and add whistle No me parece apropiado el NC, no está en un downbeat.
00:29:889 (1) - Add whistle
00:31:300 (3) - ^ Idem a 00:20:014
00:32:005 (5) - ^ Ya hay un wristle ahi o_o
00:32:005 - NC Ok.
00:32:711 - Add whistle Idem a 00:20:014
00:33:416 - Remove NC Ok.
00:34:121 - Add whistle and NC Me parece apropiado porque va con la letra
00:35:532 - Add whistle ^
00:36:943 (2) - ^ ^
00:38:354 (1) - ^ ^
00:46:818 (1) - Remove NC Ok.
00:47:524 - NC Ok.
00:49:640 - Remove NC Ok.
03:07:895 - NC Ya hay un NC ahi o_o
03:04:721 - Quita esta nota, no tiene ritmo. Emmm. okay.
03:05:779 - Podrías hacer un slider que termine aquí 03:06:132 Paso, creo que se siente mejor golpear alguno de esos beats.
03:06:485 - Y agrega una nota aquí. Creo que suena mejor así. ^
03:10:011 (5) - NC Ok.
03:11:070 (1) - Remove NC Ok.
03:13:538 (1,2,3) - No encuentro ritmo aqui. Podría haber hecho algo mas complejo pero es una normal...
03:16:360 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Sigo el "but we lost iiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttt", aunque enrealidad habia un par de nota al revés, ahora suena mejor.
03:44:928 (1) - Remove NC Ok.
03:45:633 (1) - NC Ok.
03:47:397 - Remove NC Ok.
03:47:750 (1) - Termina el spin aquí. Como?? Terminarlo donde empieza??
Personalmente siento que aun falta trabajar en el mapa, ya que en el clímax de la canción llenaste muchos espacios por llenar y muchos no siguen el ritmo que marcabas anteriormente. Espero que te sirva de algo mi mod. Suerte! La mayoria de veces que intenté hacer un ritmo mas complejo me decian "nope es normal, quitalo". Creo que estas olvidando que es dificil seguir este tipo de ritmos en dificultades mas bajas. De todas formas veré el remapeo de algunas partes que si podrian ser mejores sin ir en desmedro de la dificultad. Gracias por tu honesta opinion

Hard
Principalmente agrega los hitsounds que te recomendé en la dificultad normal. Más que nada sigue el patrón que te indiqué. Deberías solicitar una Guest Diff de Insane o hacerla, si quieres. No. Una insane no es necesaria porque: la canción es lenta, mapsets similares se rankean sin problemas, y además no todo tiene que tener una dificultad "loca" para que esté en osu. Personalmente me gustan los mapas mas lentos e intento trasmitir ese gusto con mi mapa, una insane mataría mis intenciones. (Aparte que seria super aburrida, jumps jumps y mas jumps porque no habría otra forma de hacer el mapa dificil).

00:08:546 - Estas siguiendo este tipo de ritmo, así que sería bueno si agregas una nota aquí. Si, definitivamente faltaba una aquí.
00:14:193 - ^
00:22:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Aquí empezaste a seguir prácticamente solo el ritmo de la letra y no lo combinas con la música y el ritmo que hacías antes. Haz más o menos lo que te dije en la dificultad normal. Lo hice porque el ritmo se vuelve muy monótono y lento, era preferible seguir solamente la letra para mantener el mismo flujo del mapa que hice en la primera parte.
00:57:399 (5) - NC Eeeeh, no me gusta.
00:58:105 - ^ ^
00:58:457 (2) - Remove NC ^
00:59:868 - Agrega una nota aquí.
01:00:044 - ^
01:01:102 - ^
01:02:866 - ^
01:04:982 - ^
Respecto a estas ultimas 5, me parece que agregarlas todas en todos los kiai (por consistencia) es algo de sobremapeo. Agregué la de 01:02:866 que me pareció la mas apropiada en todos los kiai.
01:10:801 - NC Ok.
01:12:212 - Remove NC Ok.
01:17:679 - Add note Estás no me suenan tan bien como las primeras... las dejaré pendientes.
01:19:090 - ^ ^
01:19:266 (3) - Que sea solo un slider, que no tenga reverse arrow No suena bien sin la reverse o_o
01:19:971 - NC No me gustan esos combo de 4 en stream
01:20:677 - ^ ^
01:21:030 - Remove NC Ooookay, te creeré estas dos.
01:21:911 - NC ^
01:23:322 - Add note Me parece apropiada.
01:30:376 - ^ ^
01:29:494 - Remove NC Paso.
01:30:552 - NC ^
01:32:845 - Remove note Definitivamente.
01:33:550 - Add note No, mataría mi pattern de ir y volver :c
01:37:077 - ^ Ya hay una nota ahi o_o
01:44:307 - NC Nooo creooo...
01:47:481 - NC ^
02:26:278 - Se te acabó la imaginación aquí. Si? Sería genial que pudieras desarollar este punto. Si es por los 4 beats seguidos, siguen las voces bien y no se como complementar esa parte.
De ahí en adelante es casi lo mismo a lo que te dije. Repites mucho el ritmo porque es Hard, por eso te recomiendo que hagas una insane o la pidas. Será quizas un ritmo repetido, pero lo necesito por la consistencia y además cambio siempre la forma de jugarlo. Mucha suerte en tu mapa! Espero verlo rankeado!! Muchas gracias! Te recomiendo que rehagas algunas partes del mapa, sigue el ritmo de la música y de la letra, no te pegues mucho en una sola.[/color]