So sorry for late ;w;
[General]
Good luck :3
[General]
- Your mp3's Audio Bitrate is higher than 192kbps (it's 320kbps to be exact) which is unrankable. You need to lower it. If you don't know how to do that, feel free to ask me ingame or by PM.
- soft-hitfinish3 and soft-sliderslide3 are unused, please remove those hitsounds.
- Better ask a Timing Expert for help with the slowdowns at the end of the song. Adding additional Timing sections would make it perfect (since the 1/4 is most likely off by some ms atleast) and you'd avoid messing up the sliderticks.
- AR 4 fits much better with the pace of the diff imo.
- 00:01:505 - Add Whistle
- 00:05:475 (3) - Replace this slider with a single circle? For consistency with other rhythms you used, for example 01:32:815 (3,1) -
- 00:14:738 to 00:35:911 - I'd add whistles on all big white ticks that have no clap, because there seem to be cute piano / vocal sounds
- 00:17:164 (1,2) - Please avoid 1/2-stacks since you are already using 1/1-stacks (and even more kinds of stacks) in this difficulty - It will be really difficult for newbies to tell the difference so I'd recommend you to space this one out.
- 00:22:016 (3) - Imo flow and aesthetics would improve if this was a straight slider: http://puu.sh/dsS0U/40d918e099.jpg
- 00:30:618 (1,2,3) - What about this rhythm: http://puu.sh/dsTyX/978809f865.jpg You'd have better emphasis on the big white tick and generally it would sound better with the music imo.
- 00:37:235 and 00:39:881 - Missing claps
- 00:38:999 (1,2) - Spacing >w<
- 00:49:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Turn them into a diamond shape, to make the pattern more clean? http://puu.sh/dsSqs/0e532ae4a3.jpg
- 00:54:548 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:54:879 - Having it 1/4 after the circle is too close for the easiest difficulty, since newbies need some reaction time even before spinners. Also, your current method will cause playability problems on other gamemods, which are to be considered since the mapset doesn't have any mode-specific difficulties.
- 00:59:731 (1) - Nice!
- 01:03:481 (2) - Replace with two circles please. 01:03:701 - is more emphasized than 01:03:481 - so there shouldn't be a slidertail Also, the current rhythm might be difficult to understand for newbies since they have to click on the red tick only.
- 01:07:671 (3) - What about http://puu.sh/dsUl1/9e787b4765.jpg and then also add a clap at 01:08:333 - ? Same could be done at 01:18:258
- 01:10:318 (1) - Imo this slidershape could be improved by curving the first section a bit more and tidying up the last section, like this: http://puu.sh/dsSLX/0dcf2829a9.jpg (Code in case you like it)
- 01:14:067 (2) - Same as 1:03
- 01:18:258 (1) - (In case you didn't take my previous suggestions and didn't replace this slider) You can make neat wavesliders by placing the anchors symmetrically like this: http://puu.sh/dsSZ0/6ca0738166.jpg It makes the map feel much more clean when playing it.
- 01:22:007 (2) - Same as 1:03
- 01:24:654 (2) - ^
- 01:26:198 (1,2) - What about http://puu.sh/dsUrC/8f57a7fb7e.jpg ? And clap at 01:26:860
- 01:28:734 - Maybe you can add Pappy's kiai fountain here too, it seems quite nice :3
- 01:30:168 - Finish fits better than Clap here imo
- 01:32:815 (3,1) - Please don't use a 3/2-stack. Same reason as previously, stacks are difficult to read for newbies, so they'll expect this to be 1/1 or 2/1.
- Most of it were suggestions, only few was highly recommended (like the stacks) so feel free to deny much :b
- You are missing Audio Lead In in this diff, which is absolutely necessary! Use Railgun's 1378 too, so it is consistent.
- 01:31:491 - I'd end the kiai here since the chorus ends at this point (with the start of the new section)
- AR 6.5 or 7 feel much better with the pace of this map.
- OD 6 please, very low OD is boring for most players (and 6 is already quite low)
- 00:00:622 to 00:06:798 - The sliders feel to fast here. The section is soooo damn calm and your low spacing fits perfectly, but the fast sliders play really weird since they don't fit in... It would be much more sensible if you use 0.75x SV-multiplier for this section. (Note: You cannot place an inherited section before the offset. That means, you would have to replace 00:00:622 (1) with circles if you apply this recommendation)
- 00:02:828 (4,5,1) - It makes sense to use high spacing for 1/2 here compard to the low 1/1 spacing, but please don't make the gaps look exactly the same. It's a (rather simple) Hard diff after all, so it should be enjoyable for rather bad players, who will most likely not be able to read these patterns. I'd recommend you to lower the spacing for 1/2 a bit, for example using 1.0x
- 00:05:475 (4,5,6,1) - Same for this pattern then.
- 00:06:136 (5,6,1) - Placing the NC at (5) instead of (1) would make more sense here imo, since these objects belong together somehow
- 00:10:768 (3,1) - Better space this like 00:14:738 (1,2) to avoid confusion.
- 00:16:723 (5,6) - Ctrl+G this rhythm-wise. The offbeat-slider doesn't seem to fit here imo.
- 00:31:500 (3) - Changing the direction of this slider would improve the flow a lot in my opinion, for example: http://puu.sh/dsWz6/923575e438.jpg
- 00:32:603 (6,7) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/dsVRC/63e1700b71.jpg It would fit the vocals much better!
- 00:35:911 (1,2) - Consider to switch NCs, because 00:35:911 belongs to the previous combo music-wise.
- 00:42:087 (3) - Please, don't ignore the stanza (big white tick) in this way - There is a strong sound so there shouldn't be a slidertail, since it causes weird emphasis. What about this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/dsW0H/d799c13bff.jpg
- 00:49:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This sounds weird since the guitar you are following is off the music. It's clearly hearable if you listen at 25% speed. If you remind me ingame I can help you find a Timing Expert who might have an idea what to do here.
- 01:01:055 - Here you used Normal Sampleset and the Clap together, which sounds awesome :3 It would be nice if you can use this hitsounding for the rest of the kiai as well
- 01:01:937 (1,2) - Switch NCs, since you usually NC on the big white tick
- 01:31:491 to 01:37:005 - This section is similar to the first one, so the 0.75x-SV-suggestion applies here as well.
- 01:32:815 (3,4,5,1) - Same as I said at the beginning about 1/2- and 1/1-spacing in these sections.
- 01:34:138 (1,2,3) - Hmmm. Since 01:35:461 is pretty strong compared to the other piano sounds here, this rhythm would fit better here imo: http://puu.sh/dsWse/2533fe0635.jpg
- Except the offbeat sliders and SV / spacing in the beginning and end sections, everything is quite minor / optional, so feel free to deny most of it :b
Good luck :3