Thanks for looking over it! /Mao wrote:
Reason for Disqualification
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- In Fatfan Kolek's Extra 00:32:888 (5) - should be snapped to 1/6 to follow the sounds you want to properly like in Kenterz's Insane.
- The lower difficulties (E/N/H) really need improvements to be ready. I'll explain certain points in the mod below, especially Hard needs much more work if you ask me.
[ Fatfan Kolek's Extra]
- Bitte nenn die Diff Insane, das ist nicht ansatzweise eine Extra. Ooooooooook.
- Das mag vielleicht nur meine Meinung sein, aber ich finde in der Kiai vor allem sind manche Slidershapes wie 01:00:000 (7) - ein wenig "zusammenhanglos" und sehen aus, als wären sie einfach nur da um etwas "speziellere" Slidershapes zu haben :/ Bringt für mich persönlich halt ein bisschen variation rein, no change. D:
- 00:14:555 (3) - Wieso ignorierst du auf dem weißen Tick das Piano? Ich würde eher von rot zu weiß ein Triplet machen anstatt den weißen Tick ganz auszulassen. Ich followe den stärkeren Pianosounds.
- 00:28:333 (15,1) - Muss ich den Stack hier verstehen? Damit wird ja eine neue Section eingeleitet und deshalb würd ichs eher mit größerem Spacing betonen. Kann aber sein, dass das nur ich bin. Mmh, hast eigentlich recht, wurde sogar bevors gemoddet wurde mit mehr spacing gemappt, aber so spielts sich schöner für mich. :c
- 00:30:222 (1,2,3) - Was folgst du hier? Das ist soeine ruhige Section. Auch die Betonung find ich liegt auf den blauen Ticks und wär deshalb schöner clickable. Example Ok, changed.
- 00:31:111 (1,2) - Das kommt ein wenig plötzlich und die Symmetry wirkt ein wenig aus dem Stil raus. Spacing verkleinern würde meiner Meinung nach helfen. Variation!
- 00:32:888 (5) - Siehe Disqualification Reason. Fixed.
- 00:43:000 (3,4,5,6) - Das wirkt total aus der Section raus. Die anderen folgen den blauen Ticks, wo die Vocals sind und hier ist einfach nur 1/4? Was folgst du damit überhaupt? Bitte map es so wie die folgenden auch oder mit einem 3/4 Slider anstatt 2. Man kann sehr gut jede einzelne Note hören, wenn du diese löschst. No change.
- 00:47:888 - Note für Piano wäre schön, wenn du mich fragst o: Ich follow der Stimme und deshalb finde ichs so wie es momentan ist besser, sorry.
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