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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月4日 at 23:50:51

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: FUBUKI
Source: Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
Tags: 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- kantai collection ending minatoku Hige Driver WEST GROUND xxdeathx CloudSplash16 Amamiya Yuko Skystar kakifly
BPM: 180
Filesize: 19102kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cloud's Easy (1.48 stars, 99 notes)
  2. Insane (4.88 stars, 358 notes)
  3. kakifly's Hard (3.24 stars, 231 notes)
  4. Normal (2.06 stars, 135 notes)
  5. Skystar's Extra (5.36 stars, 428 notes)
  6. xxdeathx's Insane (4.31 stars, 322 notes)
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2015/01/20 - title changed, redl if you need
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Mapset - >
Extra by Amamiya Yuko
Insane by me
Insane by xxdeathx
Hard by kakifly
Normal by me
Easy by CloudSplash16
Kuuhaku
继续占沙发,坐等开模
Cloud's Easy
Good Map

01:23:573 (1) -I prefer normal-hitfinish here

Normal

00:31:406 (3) - 加上soft-whistle感觉能对称些

00:58:740~00:59:073 不加slider不舒服斯基~如果加了slider,头部也务必用drum-hit音效

01:23:573 (1) - 还是更喜欢normal-hitfinish一些

kakifly's Hard

00:01:406 (2) - the se of the slider`s tail is great,but it is too loudly at the same time
and00:04:073 (2) - the same problem,how about add a green line to solve it?

00:24:740 (1) - hmm,drum-whistle doesn`t sound good here...try soft-hitfinish

00:42:073 (1) - add soft-whistle to the slider`s head

00:49:906 60%volume is kind of noisy,how about 50%volume?

01:00:073 (3) - change the se to drum-whistle,and 01:00:740 (1) - use drum-finish instead
I think this is a better startegy here!

01:23:490 (1) - well,I`m keen on normal-hitfinish,lol


xxdeathx's Insane

00:00:073 (1) - add whistle to the slider`s tail

00:02:740 (1) - as above

00:20:740 (1,2) - exchanging might be a good choice,
and,of course,move 00:20:573 (5,6) - to (336,184)

00:24:073 (3) - why not add a soft-whistle here?

00:40:240 (4) - as above

00:58:740 (1) -change the sampleset to the drum to the slider`s head
although never used in any object for this map,drum-hit is the best choice here

01:23:573 (1) - I prefer normal-hitfinish to soft-hitfinish


Insane

00:10:739 (3,4) - 这两处头部用drum-finish会不会更好些?

00:39:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - 整体不变,平移到(152,220)似乎更好呢

00:46:573 (2,3,4) - 顺时针旋转三十度并保持4的尾部与5的相对位置

00:56:740 加根绿线90volume

试验型意见:00:58:740 (1) - 00:59:073 (1,2) - 头部都加上Drum-hit音效,
亲测可行,至少58740那里我觉得加上一定会更好

01:02:073 (1) - 这里好像少了个soft-whistle呢?

试验型意见:01:04:073 (3,4) - 头部均加上whistle

01:12:073 (3) - 对应前面的话,这里的尾部不该加上Whistle么

01:14:906 (4) - 也觉得缺少一个whistle(感觉上貌似是个人对音乐理解的不同吧,嗯)

01:26:073 (1) - 最后这里我更倾向于normal-finish

Skystar`s Extra
前面一段完全是默认的soft-hit虽然也不错,不过觉得有改进的空间呢
但更可能是我哪里还体会的不够深刻
比如00:00:740 (1) - 头部加上finish
以及00:07:406 (1) - 和00:08:073 (1) - 头部soft-whistle
00:09:406 (1) - 和00:10:073 (2) - 与上面一个意见

00:25:740 (4) - 滑条中间的whistle也许能让节奏更热闹些
00:27:073 (6) - 也一样

00:34:740 (1) - 这里为何突然就不加whistle了?

00:35:740 (5) - 尾部的whistle不大合适,建议去掉

00:37:740 (6) - 滑条中间的哨音加上似乎效果不错

00:39:406 (1) - 和上面一个意见

试验型意见:00:39:906 (4) - 和00:40:573 (5) - whistle也许更合适

00:43:406 (1) - 00:44:073 (1) - 00:44:740 (1) -
这三个地方不是很明白为何不对应前面相应的部分头部加上whistle

00:46:072 (1) - 好像缺个finish音效?

00:46:240这里的绿线50%音量,然后00:50:573加个绿线恢复到60%

试验型意见:00:57:406 (3,4,5) - 这三个去掉whistle

01:07:073 (5) - 尝试下延长到01:07:323,并在尾部加上soft-whistle?

01:10:073 (1) - 感觉第二段这里也加上个finish比较好

01:26:073 (1) - 这里也觉得加个finish好

over~
Little
Awaken
Ya o/

[Cloud's Easy]
  1. beginning - 00:11:406 The volume of this part is a bit large, I recommened to decrease it.
  2. 01:23:740 (1) - It looks too close to last circle, moving it to 01:23:740 seems better.
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:073 (3) - Though I know maybe you are on purpose, I think adding hitsound like body-whislte or something else here would be better than none. The main reason is that vocal here is a little special, which is something like "~~~".
  2. 01:08:073 (2,2) - Stack perfectly
[kakifly's Hard]
  1. 00:11:406 (1) - Since there is a long vocal here, adding some hitsound on body may be better than empties.
  2. 00:31:240 (5) - Add a clap or whistle here so that this triplet can hit better? It also looks fit with the music here.
  3. 00:56:740 (1,3) - Stack perfectly.
  4. 01:10:073 (1) - I seldom see you set only Finish in one object, maybe adding whistle for this would be more consistent.
  5. 00:39:406 (1) - Whistle for this? No hitsound on a 1/1 slider is a bit strange.
[xxdeathx's Insane]
  1. 01:00:740 (1,4) - Stack perfectly
  2. 01:13:406 (3) - Adding whistle should be better than none.
  3. 01:13:406 (3) - Same as above
  4. 00:20:573 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - I recommened to increase the DS among them because it looks a little crouded, which seems that the triplet overlaps with the next slider.
  5. 00:36:740 (1,3) - Stack perfectly
  6. 00:42:073 (1,3) - Same as above
  7. 00:48:656 (3) - Consider adding a clap on this circle or 00:48:073 (2) - this slider tail, following this special drum would be cool.
  8. 00:45:740 (5,6,7,8,1) - Just my opinion but I prefer adding clap on these all objects or on (5) and (7) here, which won't sound empty lol.
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:406 (9) - Not a serious problem but I prefer adding NC for this, long-NC stream frightened me. ;w;
  2. 00:48:740 (2) - Stack perfectly. But you may be on purpose. If so, I advise to get 00:48:656 (1) - this had distance with the slider.
  3. 01:24:073 Maybe hitsound on this cool pattern is a bit empty, I advise change a hitnormal or add some hitsound for it.
  4. 01:17:740 (1,2) - Stack perfectly.
[Skystar's Extra]
  1. 00:29:406 (6) - NC looks good and I see you seldom set too long in whole map.
  2. 00:56:573 (2,3,1) - After big jumps I think players will be quite hard to find it's a stack triplet. I recommend that you change 2,3 to a short slider.
  3. 01:04:740 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Harder than later pattern lol. 感觉最难的梗放到了前面 有点变态
Nice and really pro mapset, nothing much to say and hope this get ranked soon, good luck!
kakifly

Awaken wrote:

Ya o/

[kakifly's Hard]
  1. 00:11:406 (1) - Since there is a long vocal here, adding some hitsound on body may be better than empties. i feel having hitsound on this vocal with no background music feels weird ;w;
  2. 00:31:240 (5) - Add a clap or whistle here so that this triplet can hit better? It also looks fit with the music here. fixed
  3. 00:56:740 (1,3) - Stack perfectly. lol fixed
  4. 01:10:073 (1) - I seldom see you set only Finish in one object, maybe adding whistle for this would be more consistent. good point, added
  5. 00:39:406 (1) - Whistle for this? No hitsound on a 1/1 slider is a bit strange. ill think about this but it will break my hs pattern and the whistle sound is not really prominent in the music
thanks Awaken !

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TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:kakifly's Hard
Source:Kantai Collection -KanColle-
Tags:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- ending xxdeathx CloudSplash16 Amamiya Yuko kakifly wkyik
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Topic Starter
Rizia

Awaken wrote:

Ya o/

[Normal]
  1. 00:42:073 (3) - Though I know maybe you are on purpose, I think adding hitsound like body-whislte or something else here would be better than none. The main reason is that vocal here is a little special, which is something like "~~~". i try
  2. 01:08:073 (2,2) - Stack perfectly ds

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:406 (9) - Not a serious problem but I prefer adding NC for this, long-NC stream frightened me. ;w; it's fine imo
  2. 00:48:740 (2) - Stack perfectly. But you may be on purpose. If so, I advise to get 00:48:656 (1) - this had distance with the slider. k
  3. 01:24:073 Maybe hitsound on this cool pattern is a bit empty, I advise change a hitnormal or add some hitsound for it. ummm, 想不到怎下了
  4. 01:17:740 (1,2) - Stack perfectly.k

Nice and really pro mapset, nothing much to say and hope this get ranked soon, good luck!
thanks for mod and updated
Karen
[Cloud's Easy]

  • nothing to say.-.

[Normal]
  1. 00:38:740 (2) - 漏了whistle?
  2. 00:42:073 (3) - ^
  3. 00:38:740 (2) - ^
  4. 00:42:073 (3) - ^
  5. 01:04:073 (6) - ^
  6. 01:18:740 (2) - ^
  7. 01:13:406 - 这绿线没用
  8. 01:08:073 (2,2) - 没有叠好.
  9. 01:23:406 (6) - NC

[kakifly's Hard]
  1. 00:11:073 (3,1) - improve the blanket
  2. 01:00:906 (2) - I think this is not fit here,try to put it at (35,202)?
  3. 00:58:740 (3) - a slider fits here more than a circle,try change it to a slow slider?than try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/eG8HV/3cf2c0fde6.jpg

[xxdeathx's Insane]
  1. 00:55:240 (6) - move it a little right(maybe 118,129) to make 00:54:573 (3,4,6) - more beautiful
  2. 00:58:406 (3) - why no clap here,it sounds bad.-.
  3. 01:13:406 (3) - missing whistle here
  4. 01:22:740 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this parttern looks not good.try this?http://puu.sh/eGaR5/a69e81cf14.jpg
    this diff is good but i think more details can be improved.-. like 00:54:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - u can make it better: http://puu.sh/eGbCR/233fd68654.jpg of course this is my personal advice :D

[Insane]
  1. 开头我觉得可以适当加一些轻轻的whistle.
  2. 00:20:573 (5,1) - 这两个也太远了...容易读错
  3. 01:13:406 - 没用的绿线
  4. kiai段的音量有点小了.建议加一点

[Extra]

  • 不会摸
    no kiai time? :o
Come[Back]Home
Cloud's Easy
00:02:073 (2) Why dont you make this one a bit blanket with 00:00:740 (1)
00:15:406 (1) Why dont you make this one curvy so it goes well with (2)?
00:50:406 (2,1) Those two are really close why dont you make a cruvy slider with (2) and blank it with (1)?
00:55:740 Try something like this instead 01:15:406 (1) Move the last white point too 336/68

Normal
00:02:073 (2,1) Bad overlap
00:20:740 (3) Move the last white point too 456/320 Better flow
00:24:073 (3,2) Bad overlap again
00:42:073 (3) Isnt here a whistle missing?
01:04:740 (1,3) Make (3) blanket with (1) Looks better
01:08:073 (2,2) Stack is not perfect

kakifly's Hard
00:16:740 (1,4) Stack is not perfect

xxdeathx's Insane
00:01:406 (1,2) Why the different ds?
00:04:740 (1) Why dont you make this one curvy too?

Insane


Well, the mapset is really good. Ive tried do mod Insane and Extra, but it seems like i just can't (yet)
Sorry that i couldn't find much, but the mapset is really nice. Good luck with it :)
Fortune_old_1
omg this insane is so amazing o.O

wkyik so pro! get my star :p
Topic Starter
Rizia

Fortune wrote:

omg this insane is so amazing o.O

wkyik so pro! get my star :p

thanks for star >w<
you too~~
Ujimatsu Chiya
then take my star too owo
Little
Awaken

Awaken wrote:

[Cloud's Easy]
  1. beginning - 00:11:406 The volume of this part is a bit large, I recommened to decrease it. No, I think this volume is perfect. It makes the spinner audible, but not overwhelmingly loud.
  2. 01:23:740 (1) - It looks too close to last circle, moving it to 01:23:740 seems better. I think this is fine. I tested it both ways, and it seems easier to get larger spin bonus if it starts on the red tick, because the player can notice the spinner sooner.
ComeBackHome

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Cloud's Easy
00:02:073 (2) Why dont you make this one a bit blanket with 00:00:740 (1) It feels better without blanket.
00:15:406 (1) Why dont you make this one curvy so it goes well with (2)? I think it goes better the current way...
00:50:406 (2,1) Those two are really close why dont you make a cruvy slider with (2) and blank it with (1)? Moved (2,3) a bit to make it spaced more evenly. I didn't blanket this because I want more contrast with direction change on (1) so it's stronger.
00:55:740 Try something like this instead No.01:15:406 (1) Move the last white point too 336/68 No.
Thanks.
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Cloud's Easy
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Topic Starter
Rizia
updated
thanks for star einess :)
kakifly

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[kakifly's Hard]
  1. 00:11:073 (3,1) - improve the blanket k
  2. 01:00:906 (2) - I think this is not fit here,try to put it at (35,202)? i prefer the current i think the flow is smoother this way :<
  3. 00:58:740 (3) - a slider fits here more than a circle,try change it to a slow slider?than try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/eG8HV/3cf2c0fde6.jpg i prefer this because it emphasizes the drum with a single note
@come[back]home // fixed the stack

thanks guys !
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328,216,68073,2,0,L|316:136,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,104,68406,2,0,P|404:64|392:24,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Rizia
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xxdeathx

Awaken wrote:

Ya o/
[xxdeathx's Insane]
  1. 01:00:740 (1,4) - Stack perfectly ok
  2. 01:13:406 (3) - Adding whistle should be better than none. ok
  3. 01:13:406 (3) - Same as above linked the same thing o.o
  4. 00:20:573 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - I recommened to increase the DS among them because it looks a little crouded, which seems that the triplet overlaps with the next slider.it's already pretty far
  5. 00:36:740 (1,3) - Stack perfectly ok
  6. 00:42:073 (1,3) - Same as above ok
  7. 00:48:656 (3) - Consider adding a clap on this circle or 00:48:073 (2) - this slider tail, following this special drum would be cool. added to both
  8. 00:45:740 (5,6,7,8,1) - Just my opinion but I prefer adding clap on these all objects or on (5) and (7) here, which won't sound empty lol. added claps on first 4

Nice and really pro mapset, nothing much to say and hope this get ranked soon, good luck!

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[xxdeathx's Insane]
  1. 00:55:240 (6) - move it a little right(maybe 118,129) to make 00:54:573 (3,4,6) - more beautiful ok
  2. 00:58:406 (3) - why no clap here,it sounds bad.-. added
  3. 01:13:406 (3) - missing whistle here added
  4. 01:22:740 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this parttern looks not good.try this?http://puu.sh/eGaR5/a69e81cf14.jpg used a hexagon pattern instead
    this diff is good but i think more details can be improved.-. like 00:54:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - u can make it better: http://puu.sh/eGbCR/233fd68654.jpg of course this is my personal advice :D changed patterns around there
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Come[Back]Home wrote:

xxdeathx's Insane
00:01:406 (1,2) Why the different ds? to emphasize the stronger first one. i know this is a little weird, so i might change it if a lot of people don't like it
00:04:740 (1) Why dont you make this one curvy too? it can be straight too
Well, the mapset is really good. Ive tried do mod Insane and Extra, but it seems like i just can't (yet)
Sorry that i couldn't find much, but the mapset is really nice. Good luck with it :)
thanks modders!

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Topic Starter
Rizia

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:38:740 (2) - 漏了whistle? 都加了
  2. 00:42:073 (3) - ^
  3. 00:38:740 (2) - ^
  4. 00:42:073 (3) - ^
  5. 01:04:073 (6) - ^
  6. 01:18:740 (2) - ^
  7. 01:13:406 - 这绿线没用
  8. 01:08:073 (2,2) - 没有叠好.
  9. 01:23:406 (6) - NC

[Insane]
  1. 开头我觉得可以适当加一些轻轻的whistle.
  2. 00:20:573 (5,1) - 这两个也太远了...容易读错 應該不會
  3. 01:13:406 - 没用的绿线
  4. kiai段的音量有点小了.建议加一点

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal
00:02:073 (2,1) Bad overlap
00:20:740 (3) Move the last white point too 456/320 Better flow KEEP
00:24:073 (3,2) Bad overlap again
00:42:073 (3) Isnt here a whistle missing? added
01:04:740 (1,3) Make (3) blanket with (1) Looks better ok
01:08:073 (2,2) Stack is not perfect ok


Well, the mapset is really good. Ive tried do mod Insane and Extra, but it seems like i just can't (yet)
Sorry that i couldn't find much, but the mapset is really nice. Good luck with it :)
thanks for mod and undated
Fycho
Romanised Title: FUBUKI
, http://kancolle-anime.jp/goods/?page=cd

Source: Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence.

The official gives the English name of the anime in the logo, please use it or keep the original japanese source.
Topic Starter
Rizia
thanks fycho~~~

reminder: fix source tmr
Mafumafu
As requested.

[Cloud's Easy]
00:54:073 (1,2) - Try this? Coz newbie players cannot catch 3/4 rhythm well.http://puu.sh/eQQsR/c3ed489760.jpg

01:08:073 (2) - Use this? The vocal here at 01:08:740 is really strong and high-pitch and also there's a downbeat on it. So imo it will play better if it is on a independent circle instead of slider-tail. http://puu.sh/eQQFT/5e641eb90e.jpg

01:23:406 (5,1) - Dunno if this is OK in Easy ;w;

Others are pretty nice.

[Normal]
00:09:740 (2,1) - Blanket.

00:48:740 (1) - A little 扭曲, imo. If you want to keep the current shape, try to put the curve on the vocal.

Really solid. Though imo the Sv is a little fast. ;w;

[kakifly's Hard]
00:06:073 (1) - Rhythm is a little weird imo ;w;.

00:56:740 (1,2) - Blanket.

01:15:406 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It feels like it's will be more recreational if you follow all the vocals, I mean, map the 1/3 vocals here.

I love the style!

[xxdeathx's Insane]
00:04:073 (3,1) - Too large jump indeed.

00:09:184 (3,4) - Hmm, why there's a jump between 3 and 4? The vocal on 4 is even weaker than previous note. And I guess the jump should be between 4 and 5, since the vocal on 5 is really emphasized and high-pitch.

00:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Nice shot!

The rhythms are nice. :3

[Insane]
00:00:073 Start mapping from here to keep consistent eith other diffs.

00:13:406 (9) - NC, since you've NCed at 01:24:740 (1) -

00:03:406 (1) - Ctrl+G? Current flow is a little 卡手。

00:31:073 (4) - Ctrl+G?

01:04:073 It feels better to use triplet instead of 1/4 sliders? 这里还是三连吧, 感觉四分之一短滑条有点太密了。

01:04:740 (1) - Also use 1/3 here?

[Xingye]
星爷!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

00:11:406 (1) - Is this slider pass-able? Maybe the route of it seems not that clear, consider adjusting it a little?

00:23:406 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4 sliders? 感觉和前面的00:20:073 (1,2) - 类似这种节奏配合得更好。

00:31:240 (2) - Unsnapped end.

01:09:739 (1) - Since the DS doesnt change, better not to use NC.

=====================================================
Really nice mapset and song! I really loce this! >w<

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Rizia
TO all GDer: update your diff before check mod

also kuuhaku mod on first page: p/3718559
xxdeathx

Regraz wrote:

As requested.

[xxdeathx's Insane]
00:04:073 (3,1) - Too large jump indeed. decreased a little

00:09:184 (3,4) - Hmm, why there's a jump between 3 and 4? The vocal on 4 is even weaker than previous note. And I guess the jump should be between 4 and 5, since the vocal on 5 is really emphasized and high-pitch. was trying to follow distance snap, changed to do that better

00:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Nice shot!

The rhythms are nice. :3

=====================================================
Really nice mapset and song! I really loce this! >w<

Good luck!
thanks Regraz!

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Topic Starter
Rizia

Kuuhaku wrote:

Normal

00:31:406 (3) - 加上soft-whistle感觉能对称些

00:58:740~00:59:073 不加slider不舒服斯基~如果加了slider,头部也务必用drum-hit音效 加了有點密

01:23:573 (1) - 还是更喜欢normal-hitfinish一些 skin問題吧 我不太喜歡

Insane

00:10:739 (3,4) - 这两处头部用drum-finish会不会更好些? keep

00:39:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - 整体不变,平移到(152,220)似乎更好呢 keep

00:46:573 (2,3,4) - 顺时针旋转三十度并保持4的尾部与5的相对位置 keep

00:56:740 加根绿线90volume

试验型意见:00:58:740 (1) - 00:59:073 (1,2) - 头部都加上Drum-hit音效,
亲测可行,至少58740那里我觉得加上一定会更好

01:02:073 (1) - 这里好像少了个soft-whistle呢?

试验型意见:01:04:073 (3,4) - 头部均加上whistle

01:12:073 (3) - 对应前面的话,这里的尾部不该加上Whistle么

01:14:906 (4) - 也觉得缺少一个whistle(感觉上貌似是个人对音乐理解的不同吧,嗯)

01:26:073 (1) - 最后这里我更倾向于normal-finish

over~
whistle都加了

Regraz wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:740 (2,1) - Blanket.

00:48:740 (1) - A little 扭曲, imo. If you want to keep the current shape, try to put the curve on the vocal. 還行

Really solid. Though imo the Sv is a little fast. ;w;

[Insane]
00:00:073 Start mapping from here to keep consistent eith other diffs. 這裡不太想map唉

00:13:406 (9) - NC, since you've NCed at 01:24:740 (1) -

00:03:406 (1) - Ctrl+G? Current flow is a little 卡手。 style

00:31:073 (4) - Ctrl+G? ^

01:04:073 It feels better to use triplet instead of 1/4 sliders? 这里还是三连吧, 感觉四分之一短滑条有点太密了。 還好

01:04:740 (1) - Also use 1/3 here?


Good luck!
thanks for mod
Little
Regraz

Regraz wrote:

[Cloud's Easy]
00:54:073 (1,2) - Try this? Coz newbie players cannot catch 3/4 rhythm well.http://puu.sh/eQQsR/c3ed489760.jpg I think 3/2 is fine. I use it there because I want to accent the syncopated rhythm and really bring it out.

01:08:073 (2) - Use this? The vocal here at 01:08:740 is really strong and high-pitch and also there's a downbeat on it. So imo it will play better if it is on a independent circle instead of slider-tail. http://puu.sh/eQQFT/5e641eb90e.jpg I like the current rhythm better. I hear this as two parts, because there is detachment between the two sliders, but the last note feels connected, which is why I keep it as part of the slider.

01:23:406 (5,1) - Dunno if this is OK in Easy ;w; I don't know... is there some rule against doing this?

Others are pretty nice.
@Kuuhaku, I think soft-finish sounds fine there too, and wkyik kept it, so I'll keep it in my diff too.

Thanks, no change to my diff.
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