This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月4日 at 13:43:54

Artist: Hoshizora Rin (CV.Iida Riho) & Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile)
Title: Beat in Angel
Source: Love Live! School idol project
Tags: μ's muse u's Hori Eriko Kurauchi Tatsuya Hata Aki Lantis EMOTION Bandai Visual 堀絵梨子 倉内達矢 畑亜貴 バンダイビジュアル
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5677kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

1. Another - 8Key (3.85 stars, 1741 notes)
2. Hyper - 8Key (2.79 stars, 1143 notes)
3. Normal - 8Key (1.78 stars, 560 notes)

Download: Hoshizora Rin (CV.Iida Riho) & Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile) - Beat in Angel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mar 19: PLS re-download. MP3 file has changed.
Check out 4K diffs by -LASU-
click me
8K (7+1K) by me
N ☆4 / H ☆9 / A ☆11

BG Suggested by Lunatic Raccoon
BG Edited by -Kamikaze-
Hit-Sounds Offered by LordRaika

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thank you richard for star!

Tried with beatmania controller, Column S 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Another]

02:10:270 ~ 02:10:770 - Try separate notes to left hand, not bad pattern but we need to handle this pattern by almost right hand

Can't find any problem, nice pattern, nice turntables.

[Hyper]

00:44:070 (44070|2) - I prefer move this note to 1, because this part of column line 1 express kick hitsound
01:21:270 ~ 01:22:670 - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2431177

[Normal]

Can't find any problem

Perfect map, Good Luck!

all mods are applied. thank you so much for your time

Hi dosyeru
mod from queue

column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

7 + 1 key??? no problem xD




nice 7 + 1 K mapset
Good luck

Takane6 wrote:

Hi doseru
mod from queue
thank you for taking my request
column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
7 + 1 key??? no problem xD
[Another]
00:07:070 - missing note?
01:06:870 - delete for consistency( you use 2 note for snare,right?)
01:24:070 - add 1 or 2 note for kick sound
er... not finished yet ??? or you decided to end it there?? *_*
these should be fine.

00:21:070 (21070|5,21170|7,21270|6,21370|4,21470|5,21570|7,21670|6) - the whistle here looks like not fit to the music ??? maybe because the volume too loud?
I removed all whistle sounds.
[Normal]
00:07:270 - add note
00:13:670 - ^
add 2 notes for each part to follow kick

nice 7 + 1 K mapset
Good luck

other mods not quoted are changed as your suggestions.
thank you again for your time

bakaaa~☆

⊂(・8・)⊃ honoka-chaaaan <3

Hello dosyeru
mod ready
column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

[General]
Offset 2470

Notice: before checking mod, please correct offset

[8K Normal]
OD7

00:00:820 (820|0) - delete
00:04:470 - add note
00:32:070 - ^
00:59:270 - ^
01:07:070 (67070|6) - move to 4
01:19:270 (79270|1) - move to 3


[8K Hyper]

00:46:870 - add note
00:48:470 - ^
00:53:870 - delete 1 note
01:10:470 - add note
01:22:670 (82670|6,82670|4,82670|2) - ctrl + h
01:24:070 - add note
01:48:470 (108470|0) - move to 5

[8K Another]
HP8 OD8

00:01:070 - add note to 1
00:04:070 - add note
00:04:470 - ^
00:05:670 - ^
00:07:270 - ^
00:07:670 - ^
00:10:470 - ^
00:10:870 - ^
00:12:070 - ^
00:14:070 - ^


Nice map !
Good luck

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello dosyeru　hi, thank you for mods
mod ready
column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

[General]
Offset 2470
Notice: before checking mod, please correct offset
I'm sure my offset is perfectly correct

[8K Normal]
OD7
I want more opinions about HP, and OD. let me change these settings later.
OD changed to 8.5
00:00:820 (820|0) - delete
00:04:470 - add note
00:32:070 - ^
there would be fine with no notes.
01:19:270 (79270|1) - move to 3
I prefer bass drum notes on 1 here.

[8K Hyper]
OD changed to 8.5
00:46:870 - add note
00:48:470 - ^
there would be fine with no notes.
01:24:070 - add note
I got 2 mods about here, but I like finishing up this part by only a Scratch note...
i'd change if other mods come.

[8K Another]
HP8 OD8
OD changed to 8.5, and HP to 8 as you said
i wait further mods as well
00:01:070 - add note to 1
ahhh, it can be, but let me think for a while.
sry, no change
00:04:070 - add note
00:04:470 - ^
00:05:670 - ^
00:07:270 - ^
00:07:670 - ^
00:10:470 - ^
00:10:870 - ^
00:12:070 - ^
00:14:070 - ^
I see your points, but no change.

Nice map !
Good luck

other mods not quoted are applied.
Thank you again for your time

Hi~ I really like this map
below are some suggestions~
sp|1|2|3|4|5|6|7


Good luck :3/

richardfeder wrote:

Hi~ I really like this map I give you lots of thanks!!
below are some suggestions~
sp|1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Hyper]

00:17:270 (17270|3) - kinda unnecessary for me...?
I want a note representing bass guitar sound.
00:26:470 (26470|0,26870|0) - move up 1/2?
I want to follow voice sound
01:54:070 (114070|3) - add a note and move 01:54:270 (114270|3) - to 1
no additional note, but I moved a note to 1
maybe delete 02:07:870 (127870|6) - and move 02:07:870 (127870|2) - to 1?
I removed a note, but moved another note to 4
02:10:770 (130770|1,130970|5) - no sound here?
yes here is strings sounds.
02:13:070 (133070|3,133270|5,133470|6,133536|4,133603|2) - same as Normal
do you mean notes placement here should be the same as normal ?
hm, no change this time, but may change if other mods about this come.

[Another]

00:59:570 (59570|3,59970|3,61170|5) - are they hithat? I am not sure if they are other sounds but if they are hithat then you may miss a lot of them.
I am also not quite sure about 01:14:770 (74770|7,76370|4) - them
remapped...

Good luck :3/

Thank you again for your time!!!!!

dat gif image so NSFW >w<

thank you for your nyamazing kudous star

ohai very late mod by request

[General]

I suggest to have a consistent diff name in general like this :

-LASU-'s 4K Hyper
-LASU-'s 4K Normal
8K Another
8K Hyper
8K Normal

OR

-LASU-'s 4K NM
-LASU-'s 4K HD
8K NM
8K HD
8K MX

You definitely need a "8K" within the diff name so as to make it rankable, the diff name itself is a bit subjective, it's better to make the naming consistent though

[Another]

00:08:470 (8470|6,8570|4) - You might want to hammer this like the previous pattern here 00:08:070 (8070|3,8170|3) -
00:09:270 (9270|7,9370|6) - Same as ^
00:14:370 (14370|4,14470|3,14570|4,14670|5,14870|4,14970|5,15070|6,15270|5,15370|6,15470|7,15670|6,15770|4,15870|6) - I suggest some hammer pattern like this so as to fit with ^ |

00:31:870 (31870|4,31970|4) - Don't think you need a minijack here i suggest to replace with a 1/2 LN here
01:00:670 (60670|5,60770|6) - I suggest to swap columns of these 2, the bracket here feels more comfortable imo
01:06:370 (66370|6,66470|5) - ^
01:07:070 (67070|5,67170|6) - ^
01:10:670 (70670|5,70770|6,70970|6,71070|5,71170|4) - I suggest something like this instead, it's more comfortable for me to play

01:41:870 (101870|3,101970|2,102270|3,102370|2) - I suggest to swap columns so that it's more comfortable to play

Don't really like the scratch jacks since i'm using a keyboard so i don't really wanna comment about it

[-LASU-'s 4K MX]

00:04:170 (4170|2,4370|3,4570|2,4770|3) - Since you mapped the synths here i suggest to map another note here 00:04:670 - for the synth like this

00:06:170 (6170|1,6370|0,6470|1) - same here ^
00:07:370 (7370|3,7470|0,7570|1,7670|2,7770|3,7870|2,7970|1) - I suggest to use

00:09:170 (9170|1) - I suggest to make this a 2 note chord due to the kick like this

00:10:970 (10970|2,11170|3) - same as the first mod
00:13:770 (13770|3,13870|2,13870|1,13970|0,14070|3,14170|0,14270|2,14270|1,14370|3) - I suggest to make the pattern like the first mod
01:31:270 - Don't really get what you are mapping here, it's not directly mapped to the guitar here so idk what to say (?) I'm rather confused on this map
01:34:970 - Well if you are mapping to the guitar you missed a note here
01:42:603 (102603|1,102736|3,102870|2,102870|0,103003|1,103070|2,103136|3,103270|0,103370|1,103403|3,103403|2,103536|0,103603|1,103670|2,103670|3,103803|0,103803|1,103870|2,103936|3) - errr idk what is this mapped to, it feels like ghosts notes for majority of these
01:48:470 (108470|3) - Move 1/4 forward here or map a note 1/4 earlier than this for the kicks?
01:53:870 (113870|3) - I suggest to move 1/4 later so as to map to the kicks
02:00:970 (120970|3) - Don't think this note is needed here, i suggest to remove it so that the notes here emphasize the bass sound effects

[Hyper]

the front part feels rather nicely mapped

00:33:070 (33070|0,33170|0,33470|0,33570|0) - I suggest to not use scratch jacks in hyper so that people who don't use 2 keybinds or can't hammer with the pinky won't suffer
00:36:270 (36270|0,36370|0,36670|0,36770|0) - ^ same thing and this applies to the other scratch jacks
01:45:070 (105070|0,105170|0,105270|0) - ^
01:46:270 (106270|0,106370|0,106470|0) - ^

01:09:670 (69670|1,69870|2,69870|0,70070|1,70270|0) - Don't think Hyper players would enjoy a scratch bracket here

02:13:470 (133470|6,133536|4,133603|2) - Not sure about overlaying a 1/6 over a 1/8 beat here, BATs might not accept this (?)

[Normal]

it seems fine overally, nothing to really point out

[-LASU-'s NM]

00:24:870 (24870|3) - I suggest to make this a 1/1 LN so as to map to the vocal stretch
00:41:870 (41870|2) - I suggest to make this a 1/1 LN and move this 1 to the left so that it doesn't feel too clumped on the right hand
00:51:870 (51870|2) - Extend this by 1/2 so as to fit with 00:53:470 (53470|1) -
01:04:070 (64070|0) - If you are vocal mapping i don't think this note is needed
01:05:670 (65670|3,66470|1,66870|2) - I suggest to map it like this instead due to vocal mapping

01:08:270 - Might have missed a vocal here
01:09:870 (69870|3,70270|1) - I suggest to make the note a 1/1 LN and make the 1/1 LN a note since it maps to the vocal stretch better imo
01:15:870 (75870|0,76270|1) - I think a 1/1 LN will make the note here give more impact and make it more special as the vocal there is rather strong
01:19:070 (79070|2,79270|1) - Don't think you mapped the vocals correctly here, recheck this
01:20:670 (80670|1) - I think you can shorten this by 1/2 and add on 01:21:270 - so as to map the vocals better
01:23:070 (83070|3) - a 1/2 gap here isn't really needed, i suggest to extend by 1/2
01:57:670 (117670|1,118070|2,118470|3,118470|0,118670|2) - I think you can structure this vocal mapping better (?) | Like this

01:59:870 (119870|0) - I think you can use a 1/1 LN here for vocal
02:02:270 (122270|0,122870|1) - Shorten and move back by 1/2 and make the note a 1/1 LN for vocal map
02:05:470 (125470|3,125870|2) - I think these can be 1/1 LNs
02:07:470 (127470|2,128470|3,128870|1,128870|0,129270|3,129470|0,129870|1,130070|2,130270|3) - Idk what you are mapping here lol


nothing elsu

Z3nx wrote:

ohai very late mod by request
I really appreciate you took my request
[General]
I suggest to have a consistent diff name in general like this :
-LASU-'s 4K Hyper
-LASU-'s 4K Normal
8K Another
8K Hyper
8K Normal

OR
-LASU-'s 4K NM
-LASU-'s 4K HD
8K NM
8K HD
8K MX

You definitely need a "8K" within the diff name so as to make it rankable, the diff name itself is a bit subjective, it's better to make the naming consistent though

added "8K" into my diff name. 4K HD is coming soon btw
This brought me a concern. my point is that I don't want players to misunderstand what each key-set looks like before they play.
I think it's more likely to happen that player expects this 8K MX map is piano or symmetrical style and consists of LNs from its name, even though my 8k maps are obviously not.
i will change my diff names if my concern above is just a ridiculous worry , and players can correctly expect what they are going to play from those diff names you suggested.


[Another]

00:08:470 (8470|6,8570|4) - You might want to hammer this like the previous pattern here 00:08:070 (8070|3,8170|3) -
00:09:270 (9270|7,9370|6) - Same as ^
no chgange atm. I like not having jack here, but may change if other mods come.
00:14:370 (14370|4,14470|3,14570|4,14670|5,14870|4,14970|5,15070|6,15270|5,15370|6,15470|7,15670|6,15770|4,15870|6) - I suggest some hammer pattern like this so as to fit with ^ |

added hammers
00:31:870 (31870|4,31970|4) - Don't think you need a minijack here i suggest to replace with a 1/2 LN here
removed a note instead
Don't really like the scratch jacks since i'm using a keyboard so i don't really wanna comment about it
removed jacks on Scratch lane atm.
[Hyper]
01:45:070 (105070|0,105170|0,105270|0) - ^
01:46:270 (106270|0,106370|0,106470|0) - ^
moved notes to 3 and 5
01:09:670 (69670|1,69870|2,69870|0,70070|1,70270|0) - Don't think Hyper players would enjoy a scratch bracket here
a bit simplified this pattern.
02:13:470 (133470|6,133536|4,133603|2) - Not sure about overlaying a 1/6 over a 1/8 beat here, BATs might not accept this (?)
changed pattern like previous one
nothing elsu

thank you again for your time!

Z3nx wrote:

ohai very late mod by request

mod thx

updated

thank you for a star, REDYUMiKA

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~
Here is my HM as request :


GL for ranked ^^b

LordRaika
thank you for great tips for hit-sounding.
I was wondering why this map was somehow uncomfortable to play.
now I see what was wrong

Id like to ask you any hit-sounds that would fit with scratch notes.
those notes are not always following crash cymbal, but some sound effects.
It would be great if those notes following those sounds had specific hit-sounds,
so that player can easily distinguish special column from other 7 lanes while playing.

do you have any idea, or suggestion for it?

dosyeru wrote:

LordRaika
thank you for great tips for hit-sounding.
I was wondering why this map was somehow uncomfortable to play.
now I see what was wrong

Id like to ask you any hit-sounds that would fit with scratch notes.
those notes are not always following crash cymbal, but some sound effects.
It would be great if those notes following those sounds had specific hit-sounds,
so that player can easily distinguish special column from other 7 lanes while playing.

do you have any idea, or suggestion for it?

Glad to know that it helps >w<

oh, sure~


>w< nice SFX, hope you can handle them just fine with CTRL+SHIFT+I
GL~

Im applying hitsounds and feeling your 2nd post is definitely worth one more kudous.

Bobbiasさんから-LASU-'s 4K MXの感想いただきました。

only thing i would point out is LNs like this: 00:25:670 (25670|0) - or 00:30:470 (30470|2) - overlapping with other LNs.
i would suggest ending them when the next LN starts. there's not really a good reason to overlap them.
it's not a big problem, just feels... not quite right to me when playing。

せっかくなのでPOSTしておきます

Language : japanese

こんにちは～

キューから

|1|2|3|4|

頑張って下さい～ >w</

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

Language : japanese
こんにちは～ こんにちわ、MODありがとうございます:)
キューから

[General]
タグ : 飯田 里穂の苗字と名前の間の空白を消したほうがいいと思われます
８K譜面からは消しました。４K譜面はLASUさんのアップデートをまってから確認します。

[4K MX]
01:39:270 - to 01:39:670 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2624811
音はこんな感じになってると思います（右の選択しているのがギター？左の選択してないのが1/1でなってる音）
1/12で音をとるか01:39:536 (99536|1,99603|2) - を消して01:39:570 - に追加するかどちらかですね…
同じ点が8K Anotherにもあるのでお二方で相談してください

01:42:470 - to 01:44:070 -
上記と同じですがこちらは1/8で音が取れると思います。こちらは8K Ａｎｏｔｈｅｒとhyperと同じ
参考までにギターのみ音を取った画像　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2624899
（選択しいてる部分だけ1/6です）
８K譜面では上記２点修正しました。４KについてはLASUさんにすべてお任せします。

頑張って下さい～ 　>w</

MODとお星様ありがとうございました

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

Language : japanese

こんにちは～

キューから

|1|2|3|4|

mod

[General]
タグ : 飯田 里穂の苗字と名前の間の空白を消したほうがいいと思われます
空白消去しました
[4K MX]
00:13:570 (13570|2) - 削除？　削除

00:35:670 - to 00:36:070 - 青線にnoteがあってもいいかなと　そうだねーadd
00:37:170 - add 3 ^
00:56:370 - ^4 ? ^
01:15:270 - ^4 ^

01:30:570 (90570|2,90770|0) - delete ? delete

01:39:270 - to 01:39:670 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2624811
音はこんな感じになってると思います（右の選択しているのがギター？左の選択してないのが1/1でなってる音）
1/12で音をとるか01:39:536 (99536|1,99603|2) - を消して01:39:570 - に追加するかどちらかですね…
同じ点が8K Anotherにもあるのでお二方で相談してください
ここは1/12で音取ることにしました。
01:42:470 - to 01:44:070 -
上記と同じですがこちらは1/8で音が取れると思います。こちらは8K Ａｎｏｔｈｅｒとhyperと同じ
参考までにギターのみ音を取った画像　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2624899
（選択しいてる部分だけ1/6です）
SSの参考にして、修正しました
01:50:470 - add 1
add
[4K HD]
00:21:670 (21670|3) - LNに変更、終わりを00:22:070 - に　（00:24:870 - から00:25:670 - までと同じ音があるため）
ok
00:48:470 (48470|0,48470|2,48670|1,48670|3) - CTRL + H
反転した後に00:48:670 (48670|0) - を削除、最後に00:48:870 (48870|0) - の始まりを00:48:670 - に Nice

01:00:670 (60670|3) - これの意味とは…？ ボーカルLN

01:47:270 (107270|3) - delete ok

[4K NM]
00:02:470 - to 00:03:270 - 1/2でランダムnoteがいいかなと ここは保留で

00:48:870 (48870|3) - 始まりを00:48:670 - に ok

00:49:270 - add 1 or 2 add 1にしました

00:51:870 (51870|2) - 終わりを00:52:470 - に ok

00:52:470 - add 1 or 3 ここはadd 4にしました

01:19:270 (79270|1) - 始まりを01:19:070 - に ok
01:19:470 - add LN 、終わりを01:19:870 - に ^

01:20:670 (80670|1) - 始まりを01:20:870 - 、終わりを01:21:270 - に ok
01:20:670 - add 1 ^
01:21:270 - ^3 or 4 add 4にしました

02:02:270 (122270|0) - 終わりを02:02:470 - に
02:02:670 - add 2 LN、終わりを02:02:870 - に（02:02:870 (122870|1) - delete）
ok
02:10:270 (130270|3) - 始まりを02:10:470 - 、終わりを02:10:870 - に
02:10:270 - add 4
02:10:870 - ^2
再配置しました https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2628149

頑張って下さい～>w</　

mod&starありがとー（＾ω＾） b

Metadata is completely wrong lol
Current artist should go to tags and based on http://vgmdb.net/album/40836, you should add the following:

Artist: Iida Riho & Pile

Unicode Artist: 飯田 里穂 & Pile //From what I read, Pile doesn't use japanese characters

Add to tags:
Original Song CD4 - μ's Original Song CD4 is the album this song is from, and you already have μ's in tags
オリジナルソングCD④ - original album name
BCXA-0700 - Catalog number of album (not sure if needed)
Tatsuya Kurauchi 倉内 達矢 (くらうち たつや) - Composer of the song
Aki Hata 畑 亜貴 (はた あき) - Wrote lyrics for the song
Lantis EMOTION - Publishers
Bandai Visual バンダイビジュアル株式会社 - Distributor

Remove from tags:
Iida Riho Pile 飯田里穂 - since it goes to artist

You don't need to give me kudosu, I will be back to mod it after I get through stuff from my to-do list (p/3461641)
Also that gif on map's page got me into watching LoveLive AND I LOVED IT, THANK YOU SO MUCH DOSYERU I LOVE YOU <3

I didnt pay attention to metadata at all. whoaaaa
im gonna fix metadata fixed, thank you

Im really happy with that you love love live

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Metadata is completely wrong lol
Current artist should go to tags and based on http://vgmdb.net/album/40836, you should add the following:

Artist: Iida Riho & Pile
Unicode Artist: 飯田 里穂 & Pile //From what I read, Pile doesn't use japanese characters
done. I leave "Hori Eriko" in tags because DJPOP's snow halation has that name in tags.
Add to tags:
Original Song CD4 - μ's Original Song CD4 is the album this song is from, and you already have μ's in tags
オリジナルソングCD④ - original album name
Tatsuya Kurauchi 倉内 達矢 (くらうち たつや) - Composer of the song
Aki Hata 畑 亜貴 (はた あき) - Wrote lyrics for the song
Lantis EMOTION - Publishers
Remove from tags:
Iida Riho Pile 飯田里穂 - since it goes to artist
added/removed
BCXA-0700 - Catalog number of album (not sure if needed)
I dont think this is needed in tags. thank you anyway
Bandai Visual バンダイビジュアル株式会社 - Distributor
added "バンダイビジュアル" in tags.

You don't need to give me kudosu, I will be back to mod it after I get through stuff from my to-do list (p/3461641)
Also that gif on map's page got me into watching LoveLive AND I LOVED IT, THANK YOU SO MUCH DOSYERU I LOVE YOU <3

Have a cute Kotori to guide you to rank

your lovely Kotori's been hacked by KOTORIs
just kidding

From LR mod queue~ :3
Sorry I'm the slowest modders in dat queue ;w;...


Ok my mod might seem a bit huge, but doesn't mean is super bad, I really freaking love it!! really wish to see this rank and hope my mod help. shoot *star*, because love the mapset !! osu also need more 8k

Rip Skystar

dosyeru wrote:

removed jacks on Scratch lane atm.

Nooooooooooooo(crying face

to Rei
I just thought Amamiya Yuko got banned or something, and you posted on wrong thread LOL


ＬＡＳＵさんへ
マニア経験のない人にＮＭをプレイしてもらいました。
以下リプレイです。興味があればどうぞ
http://puu.sh/faK5n.rar

８ＫＮｏｒｍａｌもプレイしてもらったんですが、８Ｋは敷居が高かったようです・・・

richardfeder wrote:

dosyeru wrote:

removed jacks on Scratch lane atm.

Nooooooooooooo(crying face

I believe this is right decision. (maybe, dunno )
since almost all users in this community are KB players
some are back

to Julie
thank you for mods
I will apply those tomorrow

Julie wrote:

From LR mod queue~ :3
Sorry I'm the slowest modders in dat queue ;w;...

My moddu~

For -LASU-

Try keeping the "finish" hitsound consistent in all difficulty

1|2|3|4

4k NM

00:43:070 - forgot finish hitsound? 4K all diff add finish hitsound

　

4k HD

00:40:870 (40870|3) - I'm not sure about this slider, cuz unlike the one before, the voice kinda stop here 00:41:070 keep

00:52:070 (52070|0,52470|0) - don't stack these, different drum sound keep Are easy to press

00:57:670 , 00:57:970 and 00:58:270 - forgot finish hitsound? you did add it in MX :3 ok

01:08:670 (68670|0) - I think this slider for voice, stop it at 01:08:870 no I have also taken the growth of voice

01:16:670 (76670|0) - ^ stop at 01:16:870 same

01:27:570 (87570|0,87670|0) - don't stack these different drum sound ok 01:27:570 (87570|0) - move to 1

01:29:670 - add note on 3 add note

02:04:470 (124470|0) - this slider for voice I guess, should stop at 02:04:670 no Breath also I have to follow

02:07:070 (127070|3) - ^ should stop at 02:07:270 no

4k MX

00:03:470 (3470|2,3470|1) and 00:03:870 (3870|0,3870|1) - probably just me, but move one of the note to blue stick down? Feel like it can give this 00:03:670 (3670|3,3670|2) more impact. Also because rhythm is weird, the sound on blue stick is pretty important~ XD
00:05:070 (5070|1,5070|2,5470|3,5470|2) - ^ remap Blue line add note

00:12:970 - map this sound since you mapped this? 00:13:370 (13370|0) - 00:12:970 - add note 4

01:08:720 - add a note at 5 (1/8), to keep these 01:08:670 (68670|6,68770|4) consistent
???add note 5...

01:11:070 (71070|3) - move to 1? so can feel more these 2 01:11:270 (71270|3,71470|3) difference from 01:11:070 (71070|3) while playing
hand balance

01:18:470 - oups, I think forgot finish hitsound here, since you didn't miss it in HD
add finish hitsound

01:18:770 (78770|1) - I think you try matching the drum, but if you hear carefully, the drum in this part is faster then usually, 2 tap fast. I would say is 1/8 at 01:18:720 , but you are also free to delete it and not map it as well since the drum sound isn't loud, but that's your choice :3

01:23:420 - drum sound start here, so should add a note since your matching the drum for this part

01:24:070 (84070|3) - remove finish no add 4K NM,HD finish sound

00:40:870 (40870|2) - I'm not sure about this slider, cuz unlike the one before, the voice kinda stop here 00:41:070 no both vocal follow

01:43:420 (103420|1) - this note is wrong timed, hear here 01:43:370 - (1/4) and 01:43:403 - (1/6), in 8k Another only the (1/6) is map so your choice :3! I rather put those 2 sound lol, but depend on you remap

01:43:603 (103603|1) - what is this map for? ^

01:48:470 (108470|0) - delete finish delete

02:04:470 (124470|1) - this slider for voice I guess, should stop at 02:04:670 keep

02:07:070 (127070|1) - ^ should stop at 02:07:270 ^

02:13:070 (133070|2,133136|1,133203|0,133270|1,133336|2,133403|1,133470|0,133536|1,133603|2) - drum sound start here 02:13:020 , and I hear 1/8 drum, 1/6 is pretty slow here

02:13:670 (133670|1) - remove finish no add 4K NM,HD finish sound

Ok my mod might seem a bit huge, but doesn't mean is super bad, I really freaking love it!! really wish to see this rank and hope my mod help. shoot *star*, because love the mapset !! osu also need more 8k

Julie mod thx (^ω^)

other mods not quoted are applied as your suggestions.
thank you sooo much. this helped me make sure what I mapped and what I should map.