1. ADVANCED (3.47 stars, 344 notes)
2. BASIC (1.86 stars, 184 notes)
3. EXHAUST (4.05 stars, 395 notes)
4. INFINITE (4.98 stars, 616 notes)
5. MASTER (5.69 stars, 802 notes)
6. NOVICE (2.52 stars, 240 notes)

-BASIC-
-NOVICE-
-ADVANCED-
-EXHAUST-
-INFINITE-
-MASTER-

Feerum wrote:

Hi! I have see your Mod Request @ #modreq so here we go!

[NOVICE]

you shoult add a Note to 00:02:837 - it feels so Empty for an Novice Diff and for beginner it might be better to Play:)

The part from 00:25:864 - to 00:26:512 - maybe make it with a Slider? It realy sound's good how it is.. but maybe its easyer to Play

Maybe also add Notes to 00:05:431 - and 00:08:026 - beginner realy orientate to the audible rythm

Thats all! The remeaning map sounds realy good, i LOVE SDVX Maps i really hope my Mod helps you and i wish you good luck with the Map!

BluOxy wrote:

thanks. (should I give you a star for your modding?)

Screen

Beardaru wrote:

[General]
Make sure to check AiMod, multiple notes are unsnapped in INFINITE. fixed
[EXHAUST]
00:39:485 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was fixed
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4) - Bump the SV up a bit here?
01:01:539 (1,2) - ^
01:06:404 (1,1,2) - ^　fixed I changed SV to 1.1.
01:15:810 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was
01:17:107 (1) - ^
01:18:404 (1) - ^ uhm I couldn't think half the length is better.

This diff was really good, I think I missed a few things though.thanks X)
[INFINITE]
00:16:458 (1) - Blanket this better fixed
00:17:107 (5) - ^ fixed
00:19:215 (4) - Move down so it's pointing to the next slider　fixed but I moved up 5 instead of 4.
00:20:999 (5,6,7,8,1) - Replace this with a 1/8 repeat slider http://puu.sh/e04BV.jpg fixed and I made extended streams. Thanks :]
00:25:158 - Snap slider end fixed
00:25:215 - ^　fixed
00:25:539 - ^　fixed
00:25:458 (2,3) - Ctrl + H　not fixed i felt weird. uhm(need other opinion)
00:32:675 (3) - Shorten to the red tick and place a note on the blue tick http://puu.sh/e14Vr.jpg fixed but i don't put a note on the blue tick
00:35:107 - Note here not fixed
00:35:269 (3) - Shorten to the red tick and place a note on the blue tick　fixed same,just the red tick.
00:42:080 (1) - This stream needs a bit of work. I think you need to emphasise the little sound effect that is present multiple times in the stream, such as 00:44:999 (4) - thisshould be a 1/4 slider. 00:42:729 (1) - 00:43:377 (1) - 00:44:999 (4) - 00:45:972 (1) - 00:45:972 (1) - 00:46:296 (4) - 00:47:594 (5) - 00:48:566 (1) - These are all examples of places that there should be a slider, I probably missed a few but you get the point. uhm, it might be good but I'm aware of flow of stream. so I don't change ;_;
01:11:918 (1) - 1/4 slider here not fixed
01:18:404 (1) - Make this half the length and put a note where the end originally was　not fixed
01:25:539 (3) - This could be 1/8 too　fixed
01:26:837 (1) - 1/4 slider here　not fixed
01:46:458 (8,9,10,11) - Change to singles, like this http://puu.sh/e06Tr.jpg　fixed

I'm pretty tired so I'll leave the mod there for now, this map is incredibly fun, good luck on getting it ranked!

Feerum wrote:

BluOxy wrote:

thanks. (should I give you a star for your modding?)

Okay! Than i give you more modding!

[ADVANCED]

Add Note here 00:51:323 - fixed
Make this reverse shorter 00:51:485 (2) - and longer for 1/2 Beat (Hard to explain it with my bad englisch so heres a screen :3

Screen

not fixed I could understand :] but I don't want to make 1/4 slider if I use it as kick slider.
Than add a note here 00:51:972 - maybe on the reverse? than its not so hard to play not fixed it'll be hard.
Hm.. maybe from here 01:49:539 - to 01:51:972 - here make every revers a 1/2 beat longer sounds better and better to play not fixed does these need to make 1/2 beat longer? uhm,i have no idea but i can understand it'll be hard a bit. :]
Ok thats all for the Adv diff

[INFINITE]

Okay, first time modding a very Hard map but i try it! Lets go!
This slider 00:09:810 (1) - Maybe you should make him a 1/4 beat longer and remove this one 00:09:972 (2) -
Then put the End of the slider to the beginning of the Stream not fixed I want to push (2) circle for sound :]

More i cant find :c Hope it helps a little bit

i think you did your best thank you for modding!

monstrata wrote:

Hi BluOxy! This was a fun map to play, my mod on your easier difficulties are very short because they are very well done! Good luck~

[INFINITE]

00:07:215 (2) - This slider seems out of place, it doesn't fit the music well imo uhm i feel it fits. need other opinion
00:07:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Streams are spaced so far they don't even overlap xP I think this might be an issue, consider spacing them slightly closer together at least. I understand you're spacing them apart for effect but this is pushing it imo . Indeed, I see. I care about it but I don't change this time. Thanks!
00:32:999 (1,1,1,1,1) - Reduce NC's here. I wanted to emphasize the sound of piano. well...fixed
00:35:269 (3,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ There really isn't much reason for so many NC's
00:38:188 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:783 (1,1,1) - ^
00:53:756 (1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well here. Try rotating 2, 3 a bit, counter-clockwise, so the angle that the cursor has to move after finishing the slider at 1 isn't as sharp. fixed I moved 2,3 a bit. thanks :]
01:02:837 (1,2,3) - ^ Same idea.
01:10:945 - 01:11:107 - 01:11:269 - Please map something here. You map over these strong beats with that long repeat slider and compared to the rest of this intense difficulty, is a missed opportunity and undermapped imo .I have no ideaaaaaa!!!!AAAAA!!
01:43:621 (8,1) - These notes touch the health bar on my screen . Just lower the whole pattern a bit. fixed
01:54:404 (2) - Ctrl+G not fixed if i changed so, it'll be fluffy.

[EXHAUST]

00:15:810 (8) - Ctrl+G gives it better flow imo. fixed
00:27:810 (1,2,3,4) - Make these more evenly spaced.these sliders are conscious of form. like..↓this picture

the form

00:40:458 (4) - Ctrl+G. fixed
01:10:621 (1) - Same concern as INFINITE about not mapping the 3 beats here. really? I have no idea to map on this part nicely.

[ADVANCED+]

01:00:729 (4) - Consider making this two circles instead of a slider. hm.Is this part too hard for Advanced+(Hyper)? I don't think this slider is strange.
01:43:702 (3,4) - 4 begins on a blue tick? Doesn't really fit the rhythm here. hmm.. I don't think so. I'll wait other opinion.

[ADVANCED]

00:22:945 (2) - Make this a circle. fixedI made repeat slider instead of circle.
00:25:864 (3,1) - Consider making 3 one repeat longer and just taking out 1. Switching from 1/3 to 1/4 after a repeat seems a bit difficult compared to the rest of the map.fixed
01:07:377 (2) - This sounds off when I listen at 50% playback rate... I feel like the circle should be moved to 01:08:350 (2) -
fixed
[NOVICE]

00:16:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - The gaps here are kind of awkward since beat remains constant throughout this section. I understand this is equivalent to an "Easy/Normal" difficulty so you can afford not to map every beat, but consider remapping this part for consistency?

fixed Indeed it might be awkward for beginners. thanks

GamerCL wrote:

Sorry I'm late >.<

The storyboard are cool

[Novice]

00:05:756 - You can change the slider? (Try this http://prntscr.com/5q7tn4) fixed
00:28:134 (4) - NC I put NC each 4/1 beats.
00:50:512 (2) - Move to X: 472 Y: 16Uhm,i felt this flow is not good.

Nothing else (I can made a GD?)

a,and I don't know I'll be done SB.
Just for practice so if this map could ready for being ranked and the SB was not good, I might delete. Don't except please

handsome wrote:

more blue maps!

BluOxy wrote:

monstrata wrote:

01:10:945 - 01:11:107 - 01:11:269 - Please map something here. You map over these strong beats with that long repeat slider and compared to the rest of this intense difficulty, is a missed opportunity and undermapped imo .I have no ideaaaaaa!!!!AAAAA!!

Pics

- the highlighted slider is the repeat slider that follows right after the stream at 01:10:621 - ;it's shorter than before.
- the last hitcircle is supposed be on 01:11:269 -

I'd replace that repeat slider with a few sliders, like in here:

Pics

- the highlighted slider is the repeat slider that follows right after the stream at 01:10:621 - ;it's shorter than before.
- the last hitcircle is supposed be on 01:11:269 -

This is just an idea though; you tried to add something like a break with that repeat slider so making this part too hard is probably not a good idea .

I changed like this

Secretpipe wrote:

I hope you'll rank your map @BluOxy

Secretpipe wrote:

I may help if you need it !

1. 全Diff01:08:026 - 01:08:594 - 01:09:242 - 01:09:891 - のKiaiフラッシュを消してください、連打中ピカピカされるとみづらいです、せっかくSB入れてるのであればSBでエフェクトかけるべきです、任意で切れますし
2. SBを付けるのであれば全Diff共通でないといけません
3. カウントダウン消しませんか？せっかくかっこいい曲なのに最初の３.２.１とかで萎えそうです()
   外すのであれば全Diffレターボックスのcheckを消しReadinを1500引くといい感じになると思います
4. ADVANCEDとADVANCED+の難度差がアウトかもしれませんADVANCEDをある程度DS無視してHardに3.25くらいのHardにしADVANCED+を4.3くらいにしてあげれば全体のバランスが取れると思います
5. 全DiffKiai中のVolを10％ほど上げてもいいと思います

1. 00:31:394 (3) - Normal以下の難易度で１往復以上のリバースを使うのはunrankableです、音取りを変える必要があります、以下同じ指摘はスルーします
2. 01:49:539 (1,1,1) - この音取りも十分unrankableになりえます、01:50:837 (1) - またこのお尻のスライダーボールが踊る形は推奨されません、最高難易度でも危ないのに低難易度ではアウトです
3. 00:32:918 - 00:32:999 - 00:35:512 - 00:35:594 - 不要な緑線です、削除しましょう
   
   Remapの際StarDiffを2以下に抑えてください

1. 00:08:350 (1) - NOVICEと同じです、StarDiff的にこの難易度はNormalとみなされるので変える必要があります
2. 00:09:972 (1) - ^青線まで伸ばす音取りもリバースの中間以外場合ダメです　
3. 00:31:783 (1,1) - このスピナーの間隔もダメです、こんな音取りでどうですか
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:891 (2,3) - DS的には問題なくても低難度はなるべく先に進むAIMの配置が推奨されます
5. 00:25:864 (3) - 1/4Snap以外使用してはダメなのでこれも変える必要があります、以下同じ指摘はしないので確認お願いします

1. 00:01:864 (3) - NC?00:04:458 (1) - ここに合わせるといいと思います
2. 00:22:945 (3) - 何をフォローしているのかわかりづらいです、リバースさせてバックのDrum拾いませんか
3. 01:00:566 (2,3,4) - オーバーラップです最高難度以外でこのような配置は避けるべき、defaultスキン基準なのでhitburstに隠れて次のスライダーが見にくいです
4. 01:03:323 (3,4) - 01:04:296 (2,3) - 手前までシンセ？の高い音からスライダーで伸ばしていたのに急にDrumフォローに切り替えるのはプレイヤーの混乱を招きます、簡単に言っちゃうと01:04:134 - からこのようにとって上げたほうがプレイヤーも理解しやすく楽しいと思います
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:10:539 (4,1) - これも１番をすこし離して上げたほうがいいです01:11:594 (2,3,4,5,1) - ここと違いスライダーEndとかぶってるので
6. 01:11:594 (2,3,4,5,1) - やりたい事は分かるんですがHardでのSV変化はスローパートの0.75くらいで押さえるべきです、Generalに書いてあるとおり、このDiffをInsaneにすれば通るかと思います
   
   指摘したとおりリバースをへらし1/1や1/2スライダーなどで音をもうすこしとってあげたほうがプレイヤーも楽しめると思います

1. 00:53:593 (9,1) - １で強い音がなるのにこの間隔は間違いなく詰まると思います、８.９より飛ばしてあげると気持ちいいと思います
2. 00:58:296 (1) - NCいりません、00:53:107 (6) - ここにありませんしあっても必要ないと思います
3. 01:31:215 (6,1) - もうすこし１達を右にやりませんか？近すぎて入りにくいです
4. 01:50:350 (1) - これはまだ1/8になるのでNC理解できますが、01:50:188 (1) - これは完全に綺麗だから入れた感あるのでいらないと思います
5. 01:51:485 (1) - ^
6. 01:51:972 (1,2) - これも連打に入りにくい配置だと思います

1. 00:51:810 (1,2) - NC削除、EXHAUSTには入ってなかったのと意義が見いだせませんでした
2. 01:35:512 (2,3) - Autoでみても難しそうですが、猛者なら普通なのかも？ｗ
3. 01:36:404 (8,9) - ^
4. 01:38:512 (1) - NCいらないと思います、付け方から見て混乱招きそうです
   
   素晴らしいDiffでした

-Nanaka- wrote:

from my que M4M

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]

1. 全Diff01:08:026 - 01:08:594 - 01:09:242 - 01:09:891 - のKiaiフラッシュを消してください、連打中ピカピカされるとみづらいです、せっかくSB入れてるのであればSBでエフェクトかけるべきです、任意で切れますし fixedSBは絶賛製作中であります
2. SBを付けるのであれば全Diff共通でないといけません 共通なのですか、alacatさんのEOSなどのサイクル1個目の光輪の位置などは難易度毎に違っていたのですが…念のため削除しておきます。
3. カウントダウン消しませんか？せっかくかっこいい曲なのに最初の３.２.１とかで萎えそうです()
   外すのであれば全Diffレターボックスのcheckを消しReadinを1500引くといい感じになると思います[/color] fixed
4. ADVANCEDとADVANCED+の難度差がアウトかもしれませんADVANCEDをある程度DS無視してHardに3.25くらいのHardにしADVANCED+を4.3くらいにしてあげれば全体のバランスが取れると思います やってみます
5. 全DiffKiai中のVolを10％ほど上げてもいいと思います

fixed

[NOVICE]

1. 00:31:394 (3) - Normal以下の難易度で１往復以上のリバースを使うのはunrankableです、音取りを変える必要があります、以下同じ指摘はスルーします fixed
2. 01:49:539 (1,1,1) - この音取りも十分unrankableになりえます、01:50:837 (1) - またこのお尻のスライダーボールが踊る形は推奨されません、最高難易度でも危ないのに低難易度ではアウトです fixed
3. 00:32:918 - 00:32:999 - 00:35:512 - 00:35:594 - 不要な緑線です、削除しましょう fixed
   
   Remapの際StarDiffを2以下に抑えてください

1.86です！

[ADVANCED]

1. 00:08:350 (1) - NOVICEと同じです、StarDiff的にこの難易度はNormalとみなされるので変える必要があります 難しくしておきます
2. 00:09:972 (1) - ^青線まで伸ばす音取りもリバースの中間以外場合ダメです　 fixed
3. 00:31:783 (1,1) - このスピナーの間隔もダメです、こんな音取りでどうですか Spinを消しました
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:891 (2,3) - DS的には問題なくても低難度はなるべく先に進むAIMの配置が推奨されます わかりました。今回の配置は特に不自然な配置ではないと思うのでこのままにしておきます。
5. 00:25:864 (3) - 1/4Snap以外使用してはダメなのでこれも変える必要があります、以下同じ指摘はしないので確認お願いします

fixed

[ADVANCED+]

1. 00:01:864 (3) - NC?00:04:458 (1) - ここに合わせるといいと思います　fixed
2. 00:22:945 (3) - 何をフォローしているのかわかりづらいです、リバースさせてバックのDrum拾いませんか　ガヤガヤした音のノイズの様なキックに合わせています。
3. 01:00:566 (2,3,4) - オーバーラップです最高難度以外でこのような配置は避けるべき、defaultスキン基準なのでhitburstに隠れて次のスライダーが見にくいですfixed
4. 01:03:323 (3,4) - 01:04:296 (2,3) - 手前までシンセ？の高い音からスライダーで伸ばしていたのに急にDrumフォローに切り替えるのはプレイヤーの混乱を招きます、簡単に言っちゃうと01:04:134 - からこのようにとって上げたほうがプレイヤーも理解しやすく楽しいと思います 前回のリズムと合わせているのでこの音取りが不自然には感じません
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:10:539 (4,1) - これも１番をすこし離して上げたほうがいいです01:11:594 (2,3,4,5,1) - ここと違いスライダーEndとかぶってるので fixed
6. 01:11:594 (2,3,4,5,1) - やりたい事は分かるんですがHardでのSV変化はスローパートの0.75くらいで押さえるべきです、Generalに書いてあるとおり、このDiffをInsaneにすれば通るかと思います SVが0.5の休憩の所ですか？大まかにSVをわけているのであまり問題が無いように思えます。
   
   指摘したとおりリバースをへらし1/1や1/2スライダーなどで音をもうすこしとってあげたほうがプレイヤーも楽しめると思います

[EXHAUST]

1. 00:53:593 (9,1) - １で強い音がなるのにこの間隔は間違いなく詰まると思います、８.９より飛ばしてあげると気持ちいいと思います 8から9の動きから1を離すと力の入った配置になってしまい不自然に感じたのと、ここの配置はAIMを意識する必要なく安心できるのでExhaustとしては良いと思います。
2. 00:58:296 (1) - NCいりません、00:53:107 (6) - ここにありませんしあっても必要ないと思います fixed
3. 01:31:215 (6,1) - もうすこし１達を右にやりませんか？近すぎて入りにくいです これは(3,5,6,1)で平行四辺形を作った隠し図形です。1から5のAIMの流れと間逆の流れというのはやりやすいと思います。もしそうでなく指摘が多い様でしたら直してみます。
4. 01:50:350 (1) - これはまだ1/8になるのでNC理解できますが、01:50:188 (1) - これは完全に綺麗だから入れた感あるのでいらないと思います fixed 確かにそうですね！
5. 01:51:485 (1) - ^
6. 01:51:972 (1,2) - これも連打に入りにくい配置だと思います

本の少し01:51:648のスライダーと連打の1が重ならないように動かしましたが、これは逆ブランケットです。3と4と5のスライダーの最初が1と2と5のスライダーの最後の3点を使った4点目が延長上にある平行四辺形の、4点目にブランケットされています。例をあげるとlesjuhがよく使っていてこういう流れも結構入りやすいと僕は思っています。同じく指摘があれば変えようと思います。

[INFINITE]

1. 00:51:810 (1,2) - NC削除、EXHAUSTには入ってなかったのと意義が見いだせませんでした fixed
2. 01:35:512 (2,3) - Autoでみても難しそうですが、猛者なら普通なのかも？ｗ AIMの流れの向きは正しく、AIMが合わしづらいという訳でも無く感じるので直しません
3. 01:36:404 (8,9) - ^
4. 01:38:512 (1) - NCいらないと思います、付け方から見て混乱招きそうです fixed
   
   素晴らしいDiffでした

感想としては高い音が多いので、そっちのhitsoundがあればまたかっこよくなったんじゃないかなぁと思いました
どんな口調使えばいいか分からずところどころうざいとこあったらすみません()

軽く見ただけなのでまたRemap終わった際PM頂ければ見に来ます
わからないとこあればメッセくださいね

3週間ほどですがお待たせしました。なるほど…hitsoundmoddingの方に頼んでみたのですがノーコメントだったみたいなので失念していました。高い音ですか…探してみます。　エラー、NC、音取り等参考になるものが色々とありました。親切にありがとうございます！
mod time:1.5 hour
gl

1. ADVANCED+は若干不自然な難易度名だと思ったので何か別の難易度名にしてみてはどうでしょうか？ADVANCED+のdiffをADVANCEDとして、本来のADVANCED diffをNOVICEに、そしてNOVICE diffをBASICにしてみるというのもアリだと思います。
2. ADVANCED+とADVANCEDのdiff spreadが大きいのでunrankableになる恐れがあります。

1. 00:15:648 (6) - このスライダーが次のnoteに近く、やや詰まっているように感じました。それぞれのnoteの間隔を統一させてみてはどうでしょうか？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:29:756 (3,4) - 00:27:810 (1,1,1,1) - こっちは曲に合わせてSVが上がってますが、00:29:756 (3,4) - こっちはそこよりも音が盛り上がってるように思うんですが、スライダーが1,10xと少々物足りなさを感じました。具体的な案はちょっと出ないですが工夫してみてはどうでしょう？
3. 00:32:350 (2) - whistle入れたほうが曲に合ってます。
4. 00:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - こういうところは全体にwhistleを入れるのではなく、00:32:999 (1,3,5) - 1/1のリズムで拾ってあげると、それっぽくなります。もちろん個人的な好みなのでスルーしてもOKです。
5. 00:34:945 (2) - whistle欲しいです
6. 00:35:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここと同様の提案です。
7. 00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) - ^
8. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:37:539 (3) - 赤点から終点にかけての線が若干歪んでるので直線にするか曲げるかした方がいいです。
10. 00:40:458 (4) - ここは前の流れから、1/2スライダーをオススメします。3/4はやや不自然かなと思います。
11. 00:51:161 (1) - 終端にもclap追加してみてはどうでしょう？始端と同じ音が鳴ってると思うので合うと思いました。
12. 00:51:972 (7) - 何もhitsound入れないのは少し寂しいです。結構大きな音だと思うので何かしら入れてみたら合うと思います。
13. 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1) - すごく良い流れのスライダーだと思うんですが、全てスタックされているため、それ本来の流れが止まってしまっているような気がします。個人的にはスタックさせずに流れるような置き方をしてほしい。。
14. 01:05:431 (1) - ここは0,50xよりもSV1,50xくらいの3/4スライダーを使って、前のスライダーとのギャップを作ってみるのも曲と合っていて面白いと思いました。
    
    
15. 01:14:512 - この辺のwhistleの提案も上記で挙げた00:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - これと同じです。1/1で鳴らして上げたほうが良いと思いました。

1. 00:20:999 (9) - 折り返しを1回にするのであれば、00:21:323 (1) - こことのスペーシングをもう少し広げたほうがいいです。

1. 00:15:485 (4) - offscreen.　枠外にギリギリ触れているので上に移動しましょう。
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:03:485 (2,3,4) - Normal diffでスライダーの下にnoteが来るような配置は極力避けたいです。この配置も初心者プレイヤーにとっては読みづらいものとなっているので変更することをオススメします。

Guy wrote:

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. ADVANCED+は若干不自然な難易度名だと思ったので何か別の難易度名にしてみてはどうでしょうか？ADVANCED+のdiffをADVANCEDとして、本来のADVANCED diffをNOVICEに、そしてNOVICE diffをBASICにしてみるというのもアリだと思います。変更致しました！
2. ADVANCED+とADVANCEDのdiff spreadが大きいのでunrankableになる恐れがあります。そうですよね、うーん。

[INFINITE]

1. 00:15:648 (6) - このスライダーが次のnoteに近く、やや詰まっているように感じました。それぞれのnoteの間隔を統一させてみてはどうでしょうか？　 fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:29:756 (3,4) - 00:27:810 (1,1,1,1) - こっちは曲に合わせてSVが上がってますが、00:29:756 (3,4) - こっちはそこよりも音が盛り上がってるように思うんですが、スライダーが1,10xと少々物足りなさを感じました。具体的な案はちょっと出ないですが工夫してみてはどうでしょう？
3. 00:32:350 (2) - whistle入れたほうが曲に合ってます。　fixed
4. 00:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - こういうところは全体にwhistleを入れるのではなく、00:32:999 (1,3,5) - 1/1のリズムで拾ってあげると、それっぽくなります。もちろん個人的な好みなのでスルーしてもOKです。fixedわかりました。Whistleの入れ方については全て変更しました。参考になります！
5. 00:34:945 (2) - whistle欲しいです
6. 00:35:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここと同様の提案です。
7. 00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) - ^
8. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:37:539 (3) - 赤点から終点にかけての線が若干歪んでるので直線にするか曲げるかした方がいいです。　fixed 曲げました。
10. 00:40:458 (4) - ここは前の流れから、1/2スライダーをオススメします。3/4はやや不自然かなと思います。fixed1.1のSVで3/4スライダーを作りました。
11. 00:51:161 (1) - 終端にもclap追加してみてはどうでしょう？始端と同じ音が鳴ってると思うので合うと思いました。 fixed
12. 00:51:972 (7) - 何もhitsound入れないのは少し寂しいです。結構大きな音だと思うので何かしら入れてみたら合うと思います。fixed確かに！
13. 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1) - すごく良い流れのスライダーだと思うんですが、全てスタックされているため、それ本来の流れが止まってしまっているような気がします。個人的にはスタックさせずに流れるような置き方をしてほしい。。 fixed ここは他のパートと比べてキックがあまり強調されてなく、重ねてやろうかなと考えていましたが、流れる様な配置にもできそうなので変更致しました。
14. 01:05:431 (1) - ここは0,50xよりもSV1,50xくらいの3/4スライダーを使って、前のスライダーとのギャップを作ってみるのも曲と合っていて面白いと思いました。fixed 同じく変更しました。若干、配置にあわせて後のジャンプの配置を平行四辺形から台形へ修正しました。
    
    
15. 01:14:512 - この辺のwhistleの提案も上記で挙げた00:32:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - これと同じです。1/1で鳴らして上げたほうが良いと思いました。

[EXHAUST]

1. 00:20:999 (9) - 折り返しを1回にするのであれば、00:21:323 (1) - こことのスペーシングをもう少し広げたほうがいいです。 fixed あとの流れのために、00:21:972の1と2のスライダーの最初、00:22:621の1のスライダーの最初で台形を描くように1を配置しました。

[NOVICE]

1. 00:15:485 (4) - offscreen.　枠外にギリギリ触れているので上に移動しましょう。fixed 若干せこい手かもしれませんが、全体を2dot分上にあげました。offscreenを確認した訳でもないので問題はないはず
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:03:485 (2,3,4) - Normal diffでスライダーの下にnoteが来るような配置は極力避けたいです。この配置も初心者プレイヤーにとっては読みづらいものとなっているので変更することをオススメします。 fixed

ADVANCED+ ADVANCEは特に気になるところはありませんでした。diff spreadだけはちょっと心配です。。そうですねー…個人的には新しい方のNOVICEのSDをあげたいと考えています。
多分また来ます

moddingありがとうございます　

-Tochi wrote:

From my modding queue

• 
  General

1. Enable an epilepsy warning. fixed
2. You should add a read combo color, and use it when the red part comes; 00:21:323 - to 00:26:512 - Indeed! I'll fix that on all diff but please wait

• 
  Storyboard

1. In INFINITE you use an object called "ring.png" You should put it exactly where the circle is. I think you should use it more, in the other diffs too :p yeah I'll consider about it

• 
  INFINITE

1. 00:11:837 (6,7) - Instead of circles, then u can make a 1/1 slider. 1/1 slider? is there a space? ..and If it's possible, it'll be easier. no change

• 
  EXHAUST

1. Fine

• 
  Feedback
  
  SUUGGOOII!!! OwOb
  Good luck with it! >.< It's so great mapped!
  Sorry for short mod D: 1 kd star~ thank you for your kudosu!!

1. There is quite a significant cap between the NOVICE and ADVANCED difficulties. ADVANCED has a lot of 1/4 in it while NOVICE is your typical normal-level difficulty. I highly recommend you add a difficulty with less 1/4 inbetween these.
2. Check AIMod, apparently there are some missing files
3. The hitsounds are just too quiet in a lot of areas, try raising most of the green lines volume by 10-15% or so
4. The combo colors are a bit dull, how about you try and utilize what you have in the storyboard and add colors like red to where 00:21:323 - starts? Would be nice
5. The white combo color is really hard to see at times, especially during the kiai. I highly recommend you change it to a darker shade of white

1. 00:08:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Never been quite the fan of 1/8 sliders, they can be quite hard to hit and receive a good accuracy from when players are on the move trying to hit them. I suggest maybe replace these with circles
2. 00:41:756 (5,1) - The slow pace of 5 into the fast pace of the streams afterwards doesn't really have enough momentum going forward, thus making it a bit harder to play. Maybe replace 00:41:756 (5) - with a circle and add another one 00:41:918 - here for a smoother play
3. 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1,1) - A lot of people commented how well this pattern moved. Nice job here!
4. 01:18:080 (5,6) - CTRL+G this for a nicer flowing pattern
5. 01:24:891 (1,2,3) - Same 1/8 slider suggestion as before
6. 01:53:431 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 00:07:702 (1,2) - This can be pretty hard of a transition, since 00:07:864 (2) - doesn't benefit from the slider leniency. Try replacing 00:07:864 (2,3) - with a 1/4 slider
2. 01:24:891 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern really kills the momentum moving forward, maybe try spacing them out a bit more so there is more movement + the rhythm is clearer
3. 01:32:675 (1,2,3,4) - The movement here is rather rigid in comparison to the smooth flow as before, maybe try something different here
4. 01:35:269 (1,2,3,4) - Difficult to play since 01:35:269 (1,2,3) - moves up at a rather rapid pace, making it difficult to jump to 01:35:756 (4) - . Stacking 01:35:512 (2,3) - underneath 01:35:269 (1) - 's slider end or lowering the spacing between them can work well
5. 01:50:350 (1,1) - With the circle patterns before it, players will be expecting more circles here as a result of the similar rhythm. I suggest you try another circle pattern instead
6. 01:51:648 (1,1) - ^

1. 00:46:945 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't really look neat because of the large stack 00:47:269 (1) - here. The stack leniency makes it look funky. I suggest you space out the distance between 00:46:945 (4,1) -
2. 01:00:566 (2,3,4,5) - The movement is a bit too difficult for this kind of difficulty imo. The pattern is a bit too jerky and can be confusing up in the corner. I suggest making it a large stack

1. 00:55:702 (2,3,4,5,1) - Perhaps this is a bit too much single tap here for a lower diff, maybe add a slider or so

Lust wrote:

Howdy!

[General]

1. There is quite a significant cap between the NOVICE and ADVANCED difficulties. ADVANCED has a lot of 1/4 in it while NOVICE is your typical normal-level difficulty. I highly recommend you add a difficulty with less 1/4 inbetween these. I see, I'll change diffs.
   ADVANCE=>EXHAUST
   EXHAUST=>INFINITE
   INFINITE=>ULTRA
   then I decided to make ADVANCED. ehh is that no problem?
   
2. Check AIMod, apparently there are some missing files
3. The hitsounds are just too quiet in a lot of areas, try raising most of the green lines volume by 10-15% or so fixed
4. The combo colors are a bit dull, how about you try and utilize what you have in the storyboard and add colors like red to where 00:21:323 - starts? Would be nice　fixed I added Red colors.
5. The white combo color is really hard to see at times, especially during the kiai. I highly recommend you change it to a darker shade of white fixed I changed more darker

[INFINITE]
Really well made diff here, impressive!

1. 00:08:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Never been quite the fan of 1/8 sliders, they can be quite hard to hit and receive a good accuracy from when players are on the move trying to hit them. I suggest maybe replace these with circles Uhm,I want to emphasize these overlapped kicks.
2. 00:41:756 (5,1) - The slow pace of 5 into the fast pace of the streams afterwards doesn't really have enough momentum going forward, thus making it a bit harder to play. Maybe replace 00:41:756 (5) - with a circle and add another one 00:41:918 - here for a smoother play
3. 00:56:350 (1,1,1,1,1) - A lot of people commented how well this pattern moved. Nice job here! thanks
4. 01:18:080 (5,6) - CTRL+G this for a nicer flowing pattern fixed
5. 01:24:891 (1,2,3) - Same 1/8 slider suggestion as before ^
6. 01:53:431 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

[EXHAUST]

1. 00:07:702 (1,2) - This can be pretty hard of a transition, since 00:07:864 (2) - doesn't benefit from the slider leniency. Try replacing 00:07:864 (2,3) - with a 1/4 slider　fixed
2. 01:24:891 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern really kills the momentum moving forward, maybe try spacing them out a bit more so there is more movement + the rhythm is clearer fixed
3. 01:32:675 (1,2,3,4) - The movement here is rather rigid in comparison to the smooth flow as before, maybe try something different here fixed I changed a bit after the part.
4. 01:35:269 (1,2,3,4) - Difficult to play since 01:35:269 (1,2,3) - moves up at a rather rapid pace, making it difficult to jump to 01:35:756 (4) - . Stacking 01:35:512 (2,3) - underneath 01:35:269 (1) - 's slider end or lowering the spacing between them can work well fixed
5. 01:50:350 (1,1) - With the circle patterns before it, players will be expecting more circles here as a result of the similar rhythm. I suggest you try another circle pattern instead hm, I have no idea the circle pattern..
6. 01:51:648 (1,1) - ^

[ADVANCED]
Impressive diff, this was really fun to play!

1. 00:46:945 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't really look neat because of the large stack 00:47:269 (1) - here. The stack leniency makes it look funky. I suggest you space out the distance between 00:46:945 (4,1) - fixed I spaced out a bit.
2. 01:00:566 (2,3,4,5) - The movement is a bit too difficult for this kind of difficulty imo. The pattern is a bit too jerky and can be confusing up in the corner. I suggest making it a large stack I changed the name to "EXHAUST". I guess the pattern is okay.

[NOVICE]

1. 00:55:702 (2,3,4,5,1) - Perhaps this is a bit too much single tap here for a lower diff, maybe add a slider or so fixed Oh yeah.. I didn't have no idea to make harder. well I'll make another diff so I fixed this part.

Your mapping is great as always. Fix the spread issues and my suggestions, find a mod or two for that new diff, and call me back!

Scatology wrote:

IRCmod

SPOILER

17:11 Scatology: 00:21:323 (1,2,3,4) - 
17:11 Scatology: なんか物足りない？
17:11 BluOxy: あぁ～＾
17:12 BluOxy: なんか音弱いなーと思って音取ってなかった
17:12 Scatology: 00:21:648 - 
17:12 Scatology: ここがやっぱ欲しくなるよね
17:12 BluOxy: うむうむ
17:12 BluOxy: 入れておこう
17:15 Scatology: 00:31:783 (1) - 緑線を入れてだんだん音を小さくするのがいいかも？
17:16 BluOxy: 難易度によってはメロディを音取ってる部分があるから、スピナーを使っている難易度は音量調整しよう
17:22 Scatology: 01:40:458 (1,2) - やっぱりやりにくい印象
17:23 BluOxy: 検討しよう
17:23 Scatology: 01:40:945 (3,1) - ここが重なってるように見えるだけで実際はいいのかは不明
17:24 Scatology: ※あくまでもEdit上での問題
17:24 BluOxy: あああ、そこはBATの指摘に任せます。
17:26 Scatology: 01:41:107 (4,5,1) - 
17:27 Scatology: 01:41:756 (1) - ここのスライダーにあわせて01:41:107 (4,5) - の傾きを合わせてもいいかも？
17:31 BluOxy: 確かに、直しました
17:31 Scatology: とりあえず見たところ以上かな～と
17:31 Scatology: GL

sumomo301 wrote:

1つだけですー。
[ADVANCED]
00:20:026 (1,2) - ここhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2741827にしてみては？うまく修正しておきました～

以上です。
がんばってください

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hi I am here for giving mod idk mostly suggestions xD sry for late (okay, really late)
And I apologize if my mod is bad and useless / I am really rude to you I am a newbie in modding QAQ
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

BASIC

I assume this is more to Easy.

1. 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5) – Suggestion 1 or Suggestion 2.
2. If you want to keep 00:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5), then try lower 00:00:567 (1,2,3) as 00:01:864 (3,1) are kinda overlap a little when playing fixed
3. 00:04:134 (2) – Lower the parts start from this note for better flow and easier to play
4. 00:04:458 (3) – Increase x of point x:114 y:233 (curve more inwards? Ok I am bad in directions idk) just for slider design fixed
5. 00:05:756 (1) – Maybe Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, Ctrl+G and move it higher than before (decrease y)? Still suggestion for flow and design idk
6. 00:27:810 (1) – No NC but if it affects the combo colour, then just ignore this
7. 00:30:404 (1) – The design seems not so perfect (nvm ignore this I can’t think of a better slider design right now)
8. 00:36:891 (1,2,3,4) – This pattern =A= try not to because it seems copy and paste. Maybe try sth like this?
9. If you want to keep the pattern in 00:36:891 (1,2,3,4), at least change one of the sliders in 00:38:512 (4,1) become V-shaped (no matter direction it is) or curve so that it won’t be too horizontal-vertical fixed
10. 00:41:431 (2,1) - Maybe not make it V-shaped but a curve that blankets 00:41:431 (2). This is just suggestion so let us just carry on the mod lol
11. 00:48:242 (2,3,4) – Smiley face #yay :D
12. 00:49:864 (1,2,3) – And here comes the sad face lol (okay you can just ignore xD)
13. 00:55:702 (2,3) – Fix blanket fixed
14. 00:56:350 (3,4,5,6,1) – The star shape is not perfect yet. Move 00:56:675 (4,5,6,1) together and make 00:56:675 (4) to x:256 y:192
    fixed
15. Make 01:03:485 (2) lower than 01:03:810 (3) to form triangle pattern fixed
16. 01:08:026 (1,2,3,4,1) – Star pattern not perfect but nvm let us go on fixed
17. 01:13:215 (1) – Maybe lower this note for better flow fixed
18. 01:19:702 (2,1) – Fix blanket fixed
19. 01:23:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) – Too many circles QAQ maybe try making some of them into sliders?
20. 01:43:053 (3) – Move the red turning point x:372 y:266 to centre of slider to follow rhythm fixed
21. 01:46:945 (1,1) – Try not make them in similar slider design unless the slider is not curve fixed

Older map is better but since you remap this diff so nvm it is still good too

NOVICE

I assume this is more to Normal.

1. 00:01:215 (2,3) – Seems copy and paste. Increase x for point x:137 y:50 in slider 00:01:864 (3) and also for point x:267 y:90 in slider 00:02:513 (4) fixed
2. 00:41:107 (5) – Not making it curve seems better
3. 00:52:134 (1) – No NC fixed
4. 00:52:783 (2) – NC fixed
5. 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,1) – Star pattern seems not perfect (nt confident for this)
6. 01:05:107 (4) – Make the red turning point more to centre of the slider I changed the slider to streat, it might be better i guess.
7. 01:06:729 (1,2,3) – Oh god 3/4 notes. Try this kind of note placement to make it easier and neat fixed
8. 01:12:891 (3,4,1) – Make it into one slider is easier and better, in my opinion fixed
9. 01:18:404 (1,2,1) – I do more prefer to make V-shaped or straight sliders for them I made round slider instead of your opinion.
10. 01:53:107 (3,1,2,3,4,1) – wut that’s why this is labelled H. Try reduce the number of circles

Seems this diff is also remapped a little?

One more thing to state about, why don’t make the AR of MASTER diff 10 I don’t even get it AR10 is too fast I think! just because of it.
I think other diffs are really nice and I am still noobie in playing too so okay that’s all of my diff
I know my English is really terrible so PM me if you hv questions about mod
BTW good luck for both of us

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi BluOxy random mod btw because i saw u made a collab with gero before so i stalk open your profile and saw this need mod

Let's see

MASTER
00:56:350 (1,1,1) - I'm not sure with this cymbal because it doesn't fit in here I changed a hitsound from finish to whistle

BASIC
01:11:431 - i'm not sure with this one btw fixed

no kds because random mod :<

Thank you for your modding~