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Modding for this bk o3o
I think that's it for me... Good Luck.
Modding for this bk o3o
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No update in a week, TU KOODO PAOWR
No update in a week, TU KOODO PAOWR
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- - Is 183kbps mp3 bitrate is rankable?
- 00:16:846 (4,1,2) - Why would you differ the spacing from 0.9x to 1.1x here?
- 00:22:690 (2,4) - Overlap, or you're trying to make it readable? Okay then, how about splitting them? it'd be more readable.
- 00:26:196 (2,1,2,1) - Recorrect your blankets here, or you're bad at blankets?
- 00:32:820 (2,1) - ^, Nazi, just move it to x:360 or closer to the suggested grid.
- 00:40:222 (1,2) - Curve slider (1)'s tail a bit for a better pattern > http://puu.sh/bGubd/4279fd435b.png
- 00:41:781 (2,1) - ^, and remake your symmetry here.
- 00:56:781 (2,3) - Try changing these slider's positions, just like the next notes you did, and a little blanke ofc.
- 01:03:599 (2,1) - Same as 00:40:222 (1,2) -, and remake your symmetry.
- 01:10:222 (2,3,1) - Plan to make a triangle formation here?
- 01:20:742 (1) - Move to x:420|y:232? Pattern would look better than the current one.
- 01:24:833 (4,2) - Almost the same as 00:22:690 (2,4) -, and stack perfect on the slider tail on head.
- 01:31:651 (3,1) - Same as 00:26:196 (2,1,2,1) -
- 01:53:469 (3,4) - ^
- 01:59:703 (3) - I think this slider is almost under the healthbar, You maybe need to move it to x:108|y:124 or closer to this grid for a triangle formation.
- 02:16:846 (1,2,3,4) - Good rhythm, but i suggest this one > http://puu.sh/bGuTR/1fec311462.png
- 02:19:963 (1,2,3,4,1) - Recorrect this star formation perfectly, i can show you my suggested formation > http://puu.sh/bGvaS/83c8606731.png
- 02:28:534 (4,1) - Parallel with slider (4) and slider (1)'s tail?
- - The ending gets nicer, some nazi stuff here to fix.
- 00:14:313 (2,3,4) - The spacing changed much here, also, it's not sensitive when adding a jump here.
- 00:16:846 (1,2) - Unstack? you've never did this on the previous tracks 'til the next ones.
- 00:19:378 (4,5,1,2) - Mind a diamond formation?
- 00:21:326 (7,1) - How about jump here? The track sounds intense here, Try making jump same as you did on 00:16:456 (3,1) - , 1.4 spacing ofc.
- 00:23:080 (1,2) - Blanket, it's nazi, just move slider (1)'s tail downgrid a little.
- 00:27:755 (1,2,3) - Triangle formation or no?
- 00:43:924 (2,3,4,1) - Strange flow you've made here, Mind a sqaure here?
- 00:47:430 (4,1) - Recorrect your Parallel here.\
- 00:49:183 (5,6) - Spacing, or on purpose?
- 00:54:248 (1,2) - Same as 00:16:846 (1,2) -
- 01:01:456 (6,1) - Make a little jump here? sounds intense.
- 01:11:196 (5,1) - Recorrect your blanket(?).
- 01:26:391 (8,1) - Same as 01:01:456 (6,1) -
- 01:30:093 (1,3,1) - Stack them all PERFECTLY.
- 01:34:378 (4,5,1,2) - Nice stackings, but i think this pattern i prefer fits here > http://puu.sh/bGwkf/72f04cd1ce.png
- 01:41:586 (2,3,4,5,1) - Same as 00:19:378 (4,5,1,2) -
- 01:46:456 (7,8,1) - Same as 00:27:755 (1,2,3) -
- 01:56:002 (3) - Ctrl + G? Nicer flow.
- 02:28:924 (5) - ^
- 02:39:833 (5,3,1) - Same as 01:30:093 (1,3,1) -
- 03:01:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - Strange flowing here, A Star formation should be nice here.
- 03:03:599 (1,2) - Trying to make a blanket here or not? If so, recorrect it.
- 03:05:352 (2) - Looks exactly under the healthbar, Move it downgrid with other notes, if you still need a symmetry here.
- - Same reason as the previous diff, I think you need to add more hitsounds for this. Anyway, GJ!
- 00:25:417 (3,4,5,6) - Recorrect your half Polygon formation here.
- 00:26:586 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try this Star formation, as i prefer here > http://puu.sh/bGxQO/54236b036e.png
- 00:28:729 (4,5) - Swap this Clap, doesn't make sense on a 1/2 beat.
- 00:30:287 (4,5) - ^
- 00:31:651 (5,6,7,8) - I don't understand why you've made flow strange flow, but i think you should make a diamond or a square formation.
- 00:33:599 (5,6) - Why not rotate a little and extend the spacing here?
- 00:41:196 (4,2) - Stack slider (2)'s tail perfectly with circle (4), or does it look impossible for you to do it?
- 00:45:482 (2,2) - ^
- 00:51:326 (4,5,1) - A little off pattern here, How about a symmetry?
- 00:53:274 (2,2) - Same as 00:41:196 (4,2) -
- 01:02:041 (1,2,3) - Recorrect your symmetry.
- 01:03:599 (1,2) - Extend the spacing, and Ctrl + G on slider (2).
- 01:08:664 (3) - Ctrl + G? Just my suggestion.
- 01:15:287 (3) - Why this ugly slider showing up here? Make a wave or a Z/S/N formation.
- 01:18:404 (5,6,7,8,1) - Same as 00:26:586 (2,3,4,5,6) - > http://puu.sh/bGys8/37ea94be4e.png
- 01:27:365 (3,4) - Curve or Uncurve these two sliders, Pattern will look nicer than the current one.
- 02:04:768 (1,2,3) - Symmetry?
- 02:21:521 (3,4,5) - Weird flowing, Why not make the same as you did on 02:18:404 (4,5,6) - ?
- 02:42:560 (3) - Move to x:280|y:148 for a nicer symmetry, and watch your spacing for the next notes.
- 02:55:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too lazy to complete the Hexagon formation?
- - Nicely done, but it needs a little work with the pattern's flowing and some blankets. So just gonna say, Great diff.
I think that's it for me... Good Luck.