hi ~
Personally i dislike the kiai reset here 01:28:845 - since the music didn't really appropriate. Feel more like overusing it for me.
[Hard]
Is it just me or this diff is missing BG ? it doesn't appear on my screen not like the Normal diff o.o
00:00:622 (1) - Add whistle ? On the slider's head seems pretty nice
00:06:136 (5,6) -
This slider is offbeat, if you clearly hear the violin is on 1/6 rhythm00:06:798 (1) - This really should be a finish since you can hear a cymbal clash on the music, try lower the volume into 20% so it would fit perfectly
00:10:768 (3) - Whistle seems more appropriate for the piano emphasize if you replace it to (2) instead :c
00:21:796 (5,6,7,1) - As you can hear the vocal became quite complicated here, that make them was off-beat, try more following the vocal i guess ? It's still up to you if you want it become more simple though
00:31:500 (3) - Try the arranging below ?
00:32:382 (5,6,7) - The angle of (6) break the flow from (5) that make it less sense, also those 2 sliders look cramped due to slow SV imo, how about something like this :
00:36:352 (2,3,5) - Too much whistles here that make it sounds noisy, i'd delete some of them o.o
00:41:205 (1) - 00:43:851 (1) - Missing drum finish ?
00:53:776 (7,8,9) - Maybe you can make the volume transition became more softer, now it's too loud compared to the drum that playing on the music
01:00:613 (3) - This slider make the flow become weird imo, i'd go for 2 note instead for smoother transition between them
01:14:729 (4) - Change this into 1/2 slider instead ? as you can hear a drum hit on the red tick
01:26:198 (1) - Remove the whistle ? it doesn't sounds really good along with the finish
01:28:845 (1) - Finish ?
01:31:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's confusing since they do like on the same rhythm due to the spacing. Pls space (2) more farther >_>
01:35:902 (3,1) - I'd delete them and start a repeat slider from 01:35:902 - and 01:36:454 - for more understandable pattern to follow ~
[Normal]
Maybe you can add some whistles on the slow part of the song like you did at 00:22:678 (1) - ? it sounds pretty plain without them
00:00:622 (1) - Replace the whistle to the head instead? the piano is louder at there
00:01:505 (2) - ^ to Head
00:06:136 (4) -
This slider is offbeat, if you clearly hear the violin is on 1/6 rhythm00:09:445 (1) - Whistle on slider body was intentional ? it sound really bad orz
00:22:016 (3) - same as Hard
00:24:883 (4) -
There're no appropriate sound at the end of the slider, i'd simplify this into a single note for an easier pattern to follow00:36:242 (1) - I don't understand what are you trying to follow here, the vocal is definetely not at this beat ~_~
00:38:889 (1) - ^
00:59:731 (1) - Try make this slider a bit more curvy so it would look better ?
01:15:611 (1) - A finish would be better here instead of whistle
Fine map, good luck ~