• 
  Normal and Hard:

1. 00:03:424 - there are 2 inherited points here, remove one of them because this is unrankable
2. 00:08:299 - ^
3. 00:08:392 - ^
4. 00:27:049 - ^
5. 01:15:049 - ^
6. 01:15:142 - ^

• 
  This difficulty is clean but I think you should try to reduce the combos since this is only a normal but you have combos until about (8) so I would rather not have more than 6

1. 02:32:299 (1) -
2. 02:38:299 (1) -
3. 02:44:299 (1) -
4. 03:32:299 (1) -
5. 03:44:299 (1) -

1. Irri: 00:12:049 (1,3) - I think you can make this nicer so that the sliderend won't overlap with the sliderbody - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277645
2. Stefan: 00:21:049 (2,3) - a slider would fit better because of both the vocals and the bass (?) you can here this is a kind of a "long" sound so hit circles doesn't really fit imo
3. Garven: 02:03:236 (2) - I guess you are trying to follow the longer background vocals here but it's boring to play just one long slider which doesn't even fit the clap pattern, so I would rather map more of the song (also considering that basically half of your part of the collab is one slider xD) but of course it's up to you, I tried to still make it match to your style with a long curvy slider so I really do hope you consider this (it's kind of ugly though sorry about that) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277700
4. S o r d a: 02:23:299 (6,7) - this doesn't really play nicely imo because we have to hit (7) on a red tick which is not a big beat, so it just doesn't feel nice to play, try this for better play - http://puu.sh/d4VO0/60eb0c1e71.jpg or this - http://puu.sh/d4VPb/e62d2c7aa9.jpg
5. W h i t e: 02:47:674 (4) - this should be an 1/2 slider because there is a clearly "loud" beat at 02:47:861 - and it's annoying that you don't hit it in any way, there is nothing here 02:47:955 -
6. TicClick: 02:56:205 - consider adding a hit circle here because it would fit to the vocals
7. Xanandra:
   02:58:549 (2) - please don't use a 3/4 slider, it ends on nothing while on the red tick there is a sound so the slider should end there and it actually doesn't play so nicely either (imo!)
   03:01:549 (2) - same ^
   03:02:486 (2) - add clap to the end of the slider
8. Kyshiro: 03:12:799 (3) - 3/4 slider doesn't make sense like I said before, there is nothing on the blue tick please use either an 1/2 slider or an 1/1 slider
9. Teara:
   03:15:424 (4) - add clap to the beginning of the slider
   03:16:924 (3,4) - ctrl+G would fit a lot better to the vocals and it would play better in my opinion also, the distance is too small so it's a bit confusing to play (it feels like you used a 3/4 slider and a hit circle afterwards so people might want to hit it early) and it would look nicer anyway if there was a bigger distance
   03:18:424 (1,2,3) - small thing but I think you could make this look nicer but it's really up to you, maybe something like this could be fun to play - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277808
10. Fycho: 03:46:549 (1,2) - this was confusing to play because your previous pattern had jumps so I would just simply add a new combo here 03:46:924 (2) - and remove NC here 03:46:549 (1) - and it will be easier to read

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Here's your in-game requested mod!

[General]

• 
  Normal and Hard:

1. 00:03:424 - there are 2 inherited points here, remove one of them because this is unrankable
2. 00:08:299 - ^
3. 00:08:392 - ^
4. 00:27:049 - ^
5. 01:15:049 - ^
6. 01:15:142 - ^

Fixed all

[Normal]

• 
  This difficulty is clean but I think you should try to reduce the combos since this is only a normal but you have combos until about (8) so I would rather not have more than 6

1. 02:32:299 (1) -
2. 02:38:299 (1) -
3. 02:44:299 (1) -
4. 03:32:299 (1) -
5. 03:44:299 (1) -

I really don't see a problem with this, actually the lenth in time line of the combos is the same, is just that somo has more sliders than notes, so it looks like are shorter, if I change what you say will ruin the pattern I have for combos, hope this is not too much of a problem for you

[Hard]
Very nice difficulty, however I'm not really satisfied with the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard because Normal is almost only 1/1 while Hard is almost only 1/2 but there is no in-between, and because of this Hard looks a lot harder than normal. Like I said in a previous post, the Normal diff was harder before, but I had to remapped to fit better, cuz it was almost a Hard, if I do that it will look the same now, also since this has no Easy diff is fair that the Normal is a bit light, plus the star rating of all the diffs on this set is rankable as it is now.

[Happy Collab]
Irri: 00:12:049 (1,3) - I think you can make this nicer so that the sliderend won't overlap with the sliderbody - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277645 Personally I think this is ok, because doesn't make anything harder to read and it's Irre's style*O*
Garven: 02:03:236 (2) - I guess you are trying to follow the longer background vocals here but it's boring to play just one long slider which doesn't even fit the clap pattern, so I would rather map more of the song (also considering that basically half of your part of the collab is one slider xD) but of course it's up to you, I tried to still make it match to your style with a long curvy slider so I really do hope you consider this (it's kind of ugly though sorry about that) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277700 Well this is a matter of style, Garven already talked about that on previous posts, this is a collab and mappers never have the same style. so I will keep it the same
Xanandra:
02:58:549 (2) - please don't use a 3/4 slider, it ends on nothing while on the red tick there is a sound so the slider should end there and it actually doesn't play so nicely either (imo!) We talked about this on the previous post too, I personally think are ok, basically because is a style and gives more variety to the map, also the beats on this part of the song are kinda low and the hitsounds pattern is not interrupted, hope is fine for you ><
Kyshiro: 03:12:799 (3) - 3/4 slider doesn't make sense like I said before, there is nothing on the blue tick please use either an 1/2 slider or an 1/1 slider like I said before ><
Feel free to call me back when you're ready.

Mystyk wrote:

Recheck~

[Normal]
02:24:049 (1,2,3) - this might be too confusing since (3) appears quite early and players might want to hit that instead of (2) so I would rather try it differently (maybe you can stack (1) and (2) that way your pattern will stay the same)

[Hard]
01:15:049 - there are still too green sections please remove one of them!

Kenezz wrote:

I'll leave this here if it becomes necessary.

PD: Save as "ykcarrot" and replace the current one.

deadbeat wrote:

i guess you could say Lissette is rather happy now \:D/


please no hurting ;~;

Kenezz wrote:

YAAAAY <3

Zero__wind wrote:

yeah we did it~

Gabe wrote:

since when was this ranked


was I away for that long