senya - Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni · forum

kakifly

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2014-12-30T05:33:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月5日,星期四 at 19:48:58

Artist: senya
Title: Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
Source: 艦隊これくしょん
Tags: setz kantai collection kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎 Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song yuri Kitakami Ooi
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6315kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2.29 stars, 369 notes)
Affection (4.09 stars, 644 notes)
Hard (3.15 stars, 471 notes)
Setz's Normal (1.83 stars, 286 notes)

Download: senya - Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Happy Valentine's Day !
the day to stay at home alone playing osu

Normal - Setz

Advanced - Me

Hard - Me

Affection - Me

Andrea //

captin1

Thanks Ringating for BG

Last edited by kakifly 2015-02-09T01:34:55+00:00, edited 84 times in total.

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2014-12-30T05:50:37+00:00

first

Modem

3,013 posts

Joined February 2014

Modem 2014-12-30T14:04:44+00:00

Second!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2014-12-31T20:55:15+00:00

senyaaAaAaA

Last edited by Setz 2015-01-08T02:33:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2015-01-02T05:37:51+00:00

I see you have become a full-fledged sales person.

Uses Yuri to attract men

FlobuFlobs

575 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-05T05:16:12+00:00

Yo, no kd

just wanted to sayyou should avoid overlapping with the hp bar
00:34:034 (6,7,1) - 01:44:159 (4) - 02:10:784 (2) - 02:34:972 (4) -

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-06T02:43:46+00:00

thanks @FlobuFlobs ;; fixed them all.. since i don't use the default skin (or skins with large health bars) it's hard to tell whether objects were overlapping ;w;''

Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2015-01-10T10:04:28+00:00

Hi, sorry for taking longer than expected

[General]
The clap hitsound isn't audible, consider increasing it's volume.

[Insane]

00:41:722 (1) - You are skipping a beat with this slider here 00:41:909 - , i suggest splitting it into a circle and a slider or something
00:46:222 (1,2,3) - I think some jumps would work better here instead of the sliders, to put more emphazis on those vocals. It would be more fun imo.
01:08:722 (1) - I think you should make this a 3/4 repeat slider like you did with similar parts of the kiai, it follows better the voice
01:20:722 (1) - Same as above, you can also try this:
click me
01:52:222 (1) - You shouldn't skip this 01:52:409 - vocal, it sounds like something is missing on the map to me. Try shortening the slider and add a circle.
02:25:222 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit too well here in my opinion, some streams/sliders would be more fun
02:29:440 - Add circle for a triple?
02:32:722 (1) - Same as 01:08:722 (1) - , it would sound better with a a 3/4 repeat slider or similar

[Hard]

00:33:659 (2,3) - This jump feels a bit overkill, it's a hard and it doesn't emphasize anything on the song
00:52:972 (3,4) - Two sliders would follow the vocals better
01:07:972 (3) - Missing clap at the end?
01:08:534 (4) - This doesn't flow that well, something more simple would be better like (228, 364)
01:09:097 (3,4,5) - I suggest a different rhythm to follow better the vocals:
click me
01:21:097 (2,3,4) - Same as above
01:37:784 (3) - This slider is not following anything important, move it forward and add a circle in it's place, it would follow vocals better.
click me
02:20:722 (1) - Try making it shorter (3/4)
03:06:472 (3) - This would flow nicer if it was stacked on the beginning of 03:05:722 (1) - imo
03:08:347 (4) - Ctrl+g this then this 03:08:722 (1) - ?

[Setz's Normal]

02:34:222 (1) - Try this:
http://puu.sh/ejXaH/3811c22a3a.jpg

Nothing else, pretty good, but the kiais are a bit boring as they mostly consist of 1/1 sliders. Try giving it more variety .

Good luck!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-10T18:11:05+00:00

Atsuro wrote:
Hi, sorry for taking longer than expected

[Setz's Normal]
02:34:222 (1) - Try this:
http://puu.sh/ejXaH/3811c22a3a.jpg

the blue tick where you have the first slider return has nothing on it.... so I will be leaving that as is, i did however change the rhythm here slightly.
Nothing else, pretty good, but the kiais are a bit boring as they mostly consist of 1/1 sliders. Try giving it more variety When I mapped this, I was concerned about the star rating, because this is supposed to be the lowest diff of the set. I want it to be more accessible. I can easily add circles if needed later on though. .
Good luck!

ty for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: senyatoyoump3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 120472
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 73601
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
BeatmapID:589055
BeatmapSetID:250337

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

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kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-10T20:32:42+00:00

Atsuro

Atsuro wrote:
Hi, sorry for taking longer than expected

[General]
The clap hitsound isn't audible, consider increasing it's volume. i think its fine, i also used the exact same hitsound in this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/227847 which ranked without a problem

[Insane]
00:41:722 (1) - You are skipping a beat with this slider here 00:41:909 - , i suggest splitting it into a circle and a slider or something then the rhythm would be repetitive as what ive put before, also i think the slider tick can emphasize this enough lol
00:46:222 (1,2,3) - I think some jumps would work better here instead of the sliders, to put more emphazis on those vocals. It would be more fun imo. they have jumps alredady i think the strongest sound is at (4) where i included a big jump
01:08:722 (1) - I think you should make this a 3/4 repeat slider like you did with similar parts of the kiai, it follows better the voice but theres no sound on the blue tick unlike stuff like 00:22:222 (1,2) - where the blue ticks are really emphasized in the music
01:20:722 (1) - Same as above, you can also try this: similar to above^ i want to emphasize the red tick where there is a 'triplet' sound
01:52:222 (1) - You shouldn't skip this 01:52:409 - vocal, it sounds like something is missing on the map to me. Try shortening the slider and add a circle. fixed
02:25:222 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit too well here in my opinion, some streams/sliders would be more fun i tried before but i think having streams right after a measure of no notes would drain the hp easily
02:29:440 - Add circle for a triple? ill think about this, i kind of like the jump i have atm
02:32:722 (1) - Same as 01:08:722 (1) - , it would sound better with a a 3/4 repeat slider or similar you're right but theres also a strong sound on the red tick..
[Hard]
00:33:659 (2,3) - This jump feels a bit overkill, it's a hard and it doesn't emphasize anything on the song fixed
00:52:972 (3,4) - Two sliders would follow the vocals better ok
01:07:972 (3) - Missing clap at the end? nice catch
01:08:534 (4) - This doesn't flow that well, something more simple would be better like (228, 364) i think its fine
01:09:097 (3,4,5) - I suggest a different rhythm to follow better the vocals: i think the current is just fine, the vocals arent very strong
01:21:097 (2,3,4) - Same as above ^
01:37:784 (3) - This slider is not following anything important, move it forward and add a circle in it's place, it would follow vocals better. yeah not sure what i was doing, fixed
02:20:722 (1) - Try making it shorter (3/4) true it has emphasis on the blue tick but i think the white tick is stronger
03:06:472 (3) - This would flow nicer if it was stacked on the beginning of 03:05:722 (1) - imo i prefer current orz
03:08:347 (4) - Ctrl+g this then this 03:08:722 (1) - ? did something similar
Good luck!

Thanks Atsuro \:D All updated

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-01-11T00:33:05+00:00

hey kakifly o/ m4m thingy

General

* Offset might need a -10, but check with more people.
* Your background has really weird dimensions. Use the recommended 1366x768 size?
* Weird use of capital letters in the title - check with a BAT/QAT?

Hitsounds

* I do agree with Atsuro that the clap sound is not audiable at some parts. You should note that your Savior of Cross' mp3 file is a little bit softer than this ones and combine that with frequent 1/4 beats in this song - the clap sound might not be audiable/noticeable at all the parts of the song.
* 00:16:222 (1) - Clap on the head really needed? Whistle only does the job already, like 00:14:722 (1) -
* 00:17:909 (2) - Remove this whistle here? You didn't put one at 00:15:284 (2) - 00:16:784 (2) - 00:19:784 (2) - etc.
* 00:19:972 (3) - No whistle/clap here? There's a very small bass sound + piano here.
* 00:25:972 (3) - ^
* 00:27:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:097 (2) - ^
* 00:33:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:847 (5) - ^
* 00:49:972 (3) - ^
* 00:51:472 (3) - ^
* 03:16:972 (3) - ^
* 00:46:222 (1) - Finish (or whistle+clap)? Really strong cymbal sound in the song.
* 00:46:597 (2) - Here on the repeat a finish?
* 00:47:347 (5) - Definitely here ;w;
* 00:55:222 (1) - lol maybe here as well o_o?
* 01:46:222 (1) - ^
* 01:46:597 (2) - On the repeat again here.
* 01:47:347 (4) - Here maybe? Same sound as 00:47:347 (5) -
* 01:23:722 (1) - 02:23:722 (1) - 03:23:722 (1) - 00:22:222 (1,2) - etc. Consider using finishes for these? I don't really have a good argument why, but it sounds cool.
* 00:59:722 (1) - and 02:59:722 (1) - and 02:35:722 (1) - Use finish like 01:59:722 (1) -

I'd add more whistles and finishes here and there, but usage is fine I guess. One thing that bothered me a bit is that you sometimes use whistle + clap instead of finishes at strong beats of the song, but I guess it's a personal preference

Hard

* 00:13:597 (2) - Since you were mainly following the piano - putting in the repeat might confuse some players. Consider splitting it up?

* 00:29:722 (1) - Feels awkward having a 1/1 slider here. I see how it could emphasize the 1/4 beats in the song - but consider mapping the bass on the red tick instead.
* 00:41:722 (1) - ^
* 01:22:972 (2) - I'd flip this slider, to create a better flow with the next circle. Would also make the flow a bit similar to 02:22:222 (1,2,1) -

* 01:46:128 (5) - Consider removing this note? You're not using any 1/4 in the Insane diff, and all the places where there is 1/8 present you tend to use 1/2 circle only.
* 02:49:222 (1,3,4) - Just wanted to say that this is pretty cool >//<
* 03:16:597 (2,3) - You have a jump at (1,2) anyway, so you could make these a blanket like most of your other patterns.
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line

Nice and clean Hard diff! Great flow overall ~

Insane

* 00:04:972 (6) - Sounds a bit weird here. If you were following the vocals, in my point of view the repeat should be on the blue tick - like you used a lot in your KIAI times. The vocals are the only 'repeating' part in this section, so if you wanted to emphasize the piano here I'd go for two times 1/2 slider.
* 00:23:815 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2 tick like the Hard diff? The sound from 00:24:472 - stops on the white tick.
* 00:30:190 - The stream continues here as well - map it out? You'll probably have to rework this pattern because of this because of the clap.
* 00:32:159 (2,3) - This stack doesn't really have a use here imo. The vocals are quite strong on (3), so I actually kinda thought that there'd be a jump here. Maybe it's just me >_>
* 00:46:597 (2) - I already mentioned in the hitsounds thingy that there's a cymbal (or at least a very strong sound) present here - so reworking the rhythm a bit could help with better emphasis of the vocals. I think with this kind of repeating rhythm I suggested you can make a really fun back and forth/mirror pattern c:

* 01:46:597 (2) - ^
* 01:04:972 (3) - CTRL+G? The jump with (3,4) seems a bit big, and considering you kept a reasonable DS with 01:06:284 (2,3,4) - , I'd try that here as well.
* 01:09:097 (2) - Well, the clap sound gets interrupted by a new syllable on the red tick, making this 1/1 slider quite awkward here, especially when there's a strong sound on the end as well. Consider splitting it up into a 1/2 slider + circle or use a repeat slider like in the second KIAI at 02:08:909 (2,3,4) -
* 01:17:534 (5,6,1,3) - Bad blanket ;_;
* 01:41:347 (5,1) - Not a big problem or anything, but why do you have a small space here lol. You didn't have that at all at 00:29:347 (5,1) -
* 01:49:222 (1,2) - Distance is rather small when you compare it to the rest isn't it? I must say that even increasing it to 1.1 can make a real difference here. (if you do apply this, don't forget to stack with 01:50:347 (4) - )
* 01:56:722 (1,2) - No 1.1/1.2 DS here and a small jump with (3) like 02:02:722 (1,2,3) - ?
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line

I disagree with some jump parts like 02:28:972 (4,5,6) - 00:43:972 (4,5,6) - where the jump is not on the clap, but on rather weak beats of the song - but I guess it's your thing. The rest is fine - enjoyable diff!

~~it's midnight here so ill mod setz' diff tomorrow, pls forgive me x_x~~

Setz's Normal

* Ehhhh? Same OD as the Hard diff? Considering that this is the easiest diff of the set you could try OD3 (also for a 3/5/7 spread)
* 00:19:962 (2) - Consider flipping the slider for a smoother flow?

* 00:31:212 (1,2,3) - Hmm.. no blankets - but also no symmetry? Not a problem, but it might not be visually attractive in lower diffs because of very low distance. Try symmetry?

* 00:47:337 (3,4,5,6,1) - Placement here could use a bit of tweaking for a smooth movement.

* 00:56:712 (1) - Remove NC here? Doesn't fit your NC after every 2 downbeat pattern.
* 00:58:212 (4) - NC this one instead if you apply the suggestion above.
* 01:56:712 (1) - and 01:58:212 (4) - ^
* 01:07:212 (1,2) - dunno if this is supposed to be blanketed, but if it is you can really improve it here ;w;
* 02:16:962 (2,3) - Two times a straight slider here is a bit too plain for the KIAI time imo, especially how they are placed. Try this?

* 02:34:212 (1,2,3) - Use the same rhythm as 02:25:212 (1,2,3) - ? I have no idea what you're trying to follow now o_o
* 03:00:087 (4,5) - Consider removing these. In the previous KIAIs you didn't have anything. I might see why you'd place it here, because of the extra sounds, but the rhythm at 02:58:212 (1,2,3) - is quite harsh for beginners - and you should keep in mind that this is the easiest diff of the mapset. A break here would fit well here.
* 03:20:712 (1) - Remove NC, breaks your pattern.

good luck o/

Last edited by Mint 2015-01-11T19:14:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-11T01:54:11+00:00

appleeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:
hey kakifly o/ m4m thingy

:idea: General

* Offset might need a -10, but check with more people. fixed, will change again if i get new suggestions
* Your background has really weird dimensions. Use the recommended 1366x768 size? ah yes i was going to , thanks for reminding me. fixed this
* Weird use of capital letters in the title - check with a BAT/QAT?i'll confirm this later on too thanks for reminding again lol

Hitsounds

* I do agree with Atsuro that the clap sound is not audiable at some parts. You should note that your Savior of Cross' mp3 file is a little bit softer than this ones and combine that with frequent 1/4 beats in this song - the clap sound might not be audiable/noticeable at all the parts of the song. hmm.. i'm not sure where i can find a version/ another clap atm
no comment = fixed
* 00:16:222 (1) - Clap on the head really needed? Whistle only does the job already, like 00:14:722 (1) -
* 00:17:909 (2) - Remove this whistle here? You didn't put one at 00:15:284 (2) - 00:16:784 (2) - 00:19:784 (2) - etc.
* 00:19:972 (3) - No whistle/clap here? There's a very small bass sound + piano here.
* 00:25:972 (3) - ^
* 00:27:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:097 (2) - ^
* 00:33:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:847 (5) - ^
* 00:49:972 (3) - ^ dont think either suits here
* 00:51:472 (3) - ^ ^
* 03:16:972 (3) - ^
* 00:46:222 (1) - Finish (or whistle+clap)? Really strong cymbal sound in the song. not as strong as other cymbals i think the current works just fine
* 00:46:597 (2) - Here on the repeat a finish?
* 00:47:347 (5) - Definitely here ;w;
* 00:55:222 (1) - lol maybe here as well o_o? same as 00:46:222 (1)
* 01:46:222 (1) - ^
* 01:46:597 (2) - On the repeat again here.
* 01:47:347 (4) - Here maybe? Same sound as 00:47:347 (5) -
* 01:23:722 (1) - 02:23:722 (1) - 03:23:722 (1) - 00:22:222 (1,2) - etc. Consider using finishes for these? I don't really have a good argument why, but it sounds cool. they dont really have the finish sound for me, orz
* 00:59:722 (1) - and 02:59:722 (1) - and 02:35:722 (1) - Use finish like 01:59:722 (1) - they already do? lol

I'd add more whistles and finishes here and there, but usage is fine I guess. One thing that bothered me a bit is that you sometimes use whistle + clap instead of finishes at strong beats of the song, but I guess it's a personal preference probably just preference, i would only add finish if i hear cymbols in the music usually orz

Hard

* 00:13:597 (2) - Since you were mainly following the piano - putting in the repeat might confuse some players. Consider splitting it up?i think its fine as it is because the start of the slider theres a faint piano sound ;w;
* 00:29:722 (1) - Feels awkward having a 1/1 slider here. I see how it could emphasize the 1/4 beats in the song - but consider mapping the bass on the red tick instead. yeah i guess
* 00:41:722 (1) - ^ ^
* 01:22:972 (2) - I'd flip this slider, to create a better flow with the next circle. Would also make the flow a bit similar to 02:22:222 (1,2,1) - i think this is just a personal preference thing, i prefer the current :>
* 01:46:128 (5) - Consider removing this note? You're not using any 1/4 in the Insane diff, and all the places where there is 1/8 present you tend to use 1/2 circle only. fixed
* 02:49:222 (1,3,4) - Just wanted to say that this is pretty cool >//< thank you ^q^
* 03:16:597 (2,3) - You have a jump at (1,2) anyway, so you could make these a blanket like most of your other patterns. i like of like the current, blanket curves the note too much it looks a bit ugly imo >_>
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line deleted

Nice and clean Hard diff! Great flow overall ~ thank youuu o3o

Insane

* 00:04:972 (6) - Sounds a bit weird here. If you were following the vocals, in my point of view the repeat should be on the blue tick - like you used a lot in your KIAI times. The vocals are the only 'repeating' part in this section, so if you wanted to emphasize the piano here I'd go for two times 1/2 slider. theres a slight piano sound on the repeat
* 00:23:815 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2 tick like the Hard diff? The sound from 00:24:472 - stops on the white tick. sure
* 00:30:190 - The stream continues here as well - map it out? You'll probably have to rework this pattern because of this because of the clap. the notes i mapped out were the strongest part of the stream, if i were to map the whole thing then i would have a 1 measure long stream i dont want my map to be a freedom dive intimidation lol
* 00:32:159 (2,3) - This stack doesn't really have a use here imo. The vocals are quite strong on (3), so I actually kinda thought that there'd be a jump here. Maybe it's just me >_> fixed
* 00:46:597 (2) - I already mentioned in the hitsounds thingy that there's a cymbal (or at least a very strong sound) present here - so reworking the rhythm a bit could help with better emphasis of the vocals. I think with this kind of repeating rhythm I suggested you can make a really fun back and forth/mirror pattern c: fixed~
* 01:46:597 (2) - ^ ^
* 01:04:972 (3) - CTRL+G? The jump with (3,4) seems a bit big, and considering you kept a reasonable DS with 01:06:284 (2,3,4) - , I'd try that here as well. i felt that without ctrl g it would be more fun to play, but i fixed the distance
* 01:09:097 (2) - Well, the clap sound gets interrupted by a new syllable on the red tick, making this 1/1 slider quite awkward here, especially when there's a strong sound on the end as well. Consider splitting it up into a 1/2 slider + circle or use a repeat slider like in the second KIAI at 02:08:909 (2,3,4) - ok
* 01:17:534 (5,6,1,3) - Bad blanket ;_; lol fixed
* 01:41:347 (5,1) - Not a big problem or anything, but why do you have a small space here lol. You didn't have that at all at 00:29:347 (5,1) - idk why i unstacked,, ill restack for consistency i guess
* 01:49:222 (1,2) - Distance is rather small when you compare it to the rest isn't it? I must say that even increasing it to 1.1 can make a real difference here. (if you do apply this, don't forget to stack with 01:50:347 (4) - ) yeah i took out distance for the blanket but ill try to increase it
* 01:56:722 (1,2) - No 1.1/1.2 DS here and a small jump with (3) like 02:02:722 (1,2,3) - ? not really sure what you mean orz
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line deleted

I disagree with some jump parts like 02:28:972 (4,5,6) - 00:43:972 (4,5,6) - where the jump is not on the clap, but on rather weak beats of the song - but I guess it's your thing. The rest is fine - enjoyable diff!

it's midnight here so ill mod setz' diff tomorrow, pls forgive me x_x

thanks apple ! again nice modding ^q^

- changed offset and BG , ill need ~~new clap hs i guess~~ and metadata confirmation
edit : got new clap its a lot louder so hopefully it works

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-01-11T05:26:13+00:00

As your Metadata check request.

Artist : senya
Title : 君と誰かの優しさに
Romanised Title : Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
Source : Kantai Collection

Of course No kds please. Nice map good luck !

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-11T06:12:11+00:00

thank you @Satellite ( ´ ▽ ` )

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2015-01-13T16:33:17+00:00

Sorry for being late!

General

Fine~

Setz's Normal

Hitsounds

Nothing I can pick up

Arrangement & Design

00:23:712 (3) - At least don't stack it... imo this works too, just make 2 triangles.
img1
img2
02:35:712 (3) - ^

Nice job!

Hard

Hitsounds

Clear!

Arrangement & Design

Ah, good diff! If you applied the suggestion about breaktime in Affection diff, please apply it in this diff too.

Affection

Hitsounds

Well done!

Arrangement & Design

00:21:837 (5) - I think this looks better. Just my own opinion, the place now you are doing is too close to the next object, which is not consistent with previous pattern you've done.
img
00:36:462 (3) - ummm, I'd change the direction of curve like this:
this
for the following part is on the right side of this slider, not the left.
00:49:212 (1) - Make it parallel to this: 00:49:962 (3) - . Here's my suggestion:
img
If you apply this, I can provide the code of this slider.
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00:59:712 - You can use 1/8 reverse slider here (extending to here: 01:00:462 - ). There's very strong beats. Furthermore, you can add green line adjusting the volume from low to high.
green line example
01:10:962 (3) - You can do this better, or just copy the sample slider I posted above :3
01:25:212 - How about adding a note here? I feel a bit not natural because a strong down beat is here though you dragged the breaktime. It feels empty.
02:37:212 - Same as above
01:44:149 (4) - Too close to 3. Consider move it some grids left.
01:59:712 - Same suggestions as what I said about 00:59:712 - .
02:04:212 (1,2) - This pattern has room to improve.
img
02:10:962 (3) - I'd suggest you do a Ctrl+G.

Good luck!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-13T22:07:17+00:00

appleeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:
Setz's Normal

* Ehhhh? Same OD as the Hard diff? Considering that this is the easiest diff of the set you could try OD3 (also for a 3/5/7 spread) I forgot to change OD when i saved the new diff from kakifly's hard. though, OD3 seems really low for a normal, I am going to go with od 4 for now.
* 00:19:962 (2) - Consider flipping the slider for a smoother flow?
[box=]

done on purpose, just to lessen the feeling of going around in circles for the whole map with some different cursor movements, even though in the end you still are going around in circles anyway. this flow is not horrible by any means
* 00:31:212 (1,2,3) - Hmm.. no blankets - but also no symmetry? Not a problem, but it might not be visually attractive in lower diffs because of very low distance. Try symmetry?

I really don't think this is an issue. it gives the map a little more variety than just blanket spam.
* 00:47:337 (3,4,5,6,1) - Placement here could use a bit of tweaking for a smooth movement. ok

* 00:56:712 (1) - Remove NC here? Doesn't fit your NC after every 2 downbeat pattern.
* 00:58:212 (4) - NC this one instead if you apply the suggestion above.
* 01:56:712 (1) - and 01:58:212 (4) - ^ ok done for all these
* 01:07:212 (1,2) - dunno if this is supposed to be blanketed, but if it is you can really improve it here ;w; fixed
* 02:16:962 (2,3) - Two times a straight slider here is a bit too plain for the KIAI time imo, especially how they are placed. Try this?

I really don't like how that looks, will keep my pattern here.
* 02:34:212 (1,2,3) - Use the same rhythm as 02:25:212 (1,2,3) - ? I have no idea what you're trying to follow now o_o I am simplifying the rhythm. I don't like how cluttered the other part looks, and this also works and adds variety.
* 03:00:087 (4,5) - Consider removing these. In the previous KIAIs you didn't have anything. I might see why you'd place it here, because of the extra sounds, but the rhythm at 02:58:212 (1,2,3) - is quite harsh for beginners - and you should keep in mind that this is the easiest diff of the mapset. A break here would fit well here. will keep this in mind if brought up again
* 03:20:712 (1) - Remove NC, breaks your pattern. ok

for fanzhen's mod, fixed both, thanks for modding guys

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kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-14T00:12:01+00:00

fanzhen0019

fanzhen0019 wrote:
Sorry for being late!

General
Fine~

Hard

Hitsounds
Clear!
Arrangement & Design
Ah, good diff! If you applied the suggestion about breaktime in Affection diff, please apply it in this diff too.no change orz, but thank u!

Affection

Hitsounds

Well done!
Arrangement & Design
00:21:837 (5) - I think this looks better. Just my own opinion, the place now you are doing is too close to the next object, which is not consistent with previous pattern you've done. no change, i prefer current ;w;
00:36:462 (3) - ummm, I'd change the direction of curve like this:
for the following part is on the right side of this slider, not the left. fixed
00:49:212 (1) - Make it parallel to this: 00:49:962 (3) - . Here's my suggestion:fixed
00:59:712 - You can use 1/8 reverse slider here (extending to here: 01:00:462 - ). There's very strong beats. Furthermore, you can add green line adjusting the volume from low to high. i think that might be a bit risky.. im not pro enough to use 1/8 lol and sliderbreaks :p
01:10:962 (3) - You can do this better, or just copy the sample slider I posted above :3 fixed
01:25:212 - How about adding a note here? I feel a bit not natural because a strong down beat is here though you dragged the breaktime. It feels empty. no change , i want the break to start after kiai with no more notes playing, that might be a bit unexpected
02:37:212 - Same as above ^
01:44:149 (4) - Too close to 3. Consider move it some grids left. fixed
01:59:712 - Same suggestions as what I said about 00:59:712 - . no change
02:04:212 (1,2) - This pattern has room to improve. fixed
02:10:962 (3) - I'd suggest you do a Ctrl+G. then the transition to next note feels awkward, i prefer current

Good luck!

thanks for modding fanzhen!
updated all diffs

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-14T20:55:58+00:00

Here as requested from modding queue. Sorry it took a while to get back to you. Yay for Senya

Setz Normal

Disable Widescreen support because no storyboard
00:16:212 (1,2,3) - I believe it would be more consistent to follow the same pattern because it's slider-note-slider and it happens on two occasions during that part so possibly match it with this 00:14:712 (3,4,5) also follows with the next note because 2 whistles to end and start here 00:16:962 (3,4) - doesn't sound as great as opposed to just 1 whistle at (4) on head to follow the pattern
01:08:712 (3) - Spacing Error
01:06:462 (4) - Whistle at the tail isn't necessary especially if you are trying to repeat double whistles, because it happens on mostly throughout the song and it's my preference to keep it like that without adding additional whistles
01:12:462 (4) - Possible clap to just continue the vocals off with it?
01:18:462 (4,5,1) - This part can have the same hitsounding as this 01:06:462 (4,5,1)
01:46:774 (2) - I hear another sound along with the vocals so a clap can be added here and it would make that flow sound pretty neat
02:03:837 (6) - Whistle doesn't need to be here, I believe the clap itself should be fine and to follow whistle rhythm because this part seems almost the same and it doesn't have a whistle 02:15:837 (6) - so keeping it consistent would be best
02:06:462 (4) - Move to x:456 y:164 so it looks like a better blanket
02:06:462 (4) - Whistle whistle at the end for the same reasoning as stated above
02:10:024 (5) - Add whistle for same pattern as above
02:12:462 (4) - Clap for vocals?
02:54:462 (4,5,1) - How about a flow like this? http://puu.sh/ewfzL/85ae2e80c6.jpg the one you had before looked eerie and wasn't the same as what you had before with slidercurve-note-slidercurve but if you insist to keep it move this a little to the left for better blanket 02:55:962 (2)
02:57:274 (4) - I feel a note can be added here to go along with vocals like you had on previous parts in the map
02:56:712 (3) - Clap on head doesn't sound well I feel it being on tail is better
03:04:212 (1) - Same here with clap on head as stated above
03:21:462 (4) - x:500 y:272 somewhat of a blanket but looks better
Nice Normal difficulty, it flows well but just one spacing error

Hard

00:07:962 (2) - I don't think the clap at the tail sounds good here. I'd rather just have it start on the next note
00:19:212 (1) - Move the tail of this note up a little more so the blanket can be evenly spaced inside the note instead of having 1 end closer to the other. Something like this http://puu.sh/ewiId/891927cb9c.jpg
00:21:462 (2) - Whistle on head to follow with the guitar sound? It also follows with the whistle rhythm you had in place as well
00:42:462 (2) - Like before adjust a little bit like this to look cleaner http://puu.sh/ewjc3/eac26e6882.jpg
00:55:962 (3,4) - Can this be blanketed more or just keep it the same because these 00:55:212 (1,4) - can stack
01:07:962 (3) - Missing clap at tail or is this on purpose?
02:22:212 (1,2) - I feel these two sliders should have the exact same hitsound effects. So add a whistle on the head of (2) and it should be the same
Love this hard difficulty is really amazing

Affection

00:08:337 (4) - Same reasoning as on hard with the clap here. Maybe it's because of the piano sound there but it wouldn't matter either way. It's fine
00:10:774 (4) - How about having the same spacing of 1.4 like the previous 3 notes?
00:21:087 (3) - Optional - Whistle at tail to go with the piano note here?
01:55:587 (3) - 1.2 spacing?
No problems as far as I can tell

Welp going to add you to my favorite mappers collection. I feel you do things really well and I like your mapping style CLEAN AND EFFICIENT

I hope this mod can help senya is life so I hope this does get ranked before valentines day haha

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-15T03:11:32+00:00

Kocari

Kocari wrote:
Here as requested from modding queue. Sorry it took a while to get back to you. Yay for Senya

Hard

00:07:962 (2) - I don't think the clap at the tail sounds good here. I'd rather just have it start on the next note that was an accident, replaced with whistle lol
00:19:212 (1) - Move the tail of this note up a little more so the blanket can be evenly spaced inside the note instead of having 1 end closer to the other. Something like this http://puu.sh/ewiId/891927cb9c.jpg fixed
00:21:462 (2) - Whistle on head to follow with the guitar sound? It also follows with the whistle rhythm you had in place as well that kind of breaks my consistency with whistles sorry
00:42:462 (2) - Like before adjust a little bit like this to look cleaner http://puu.sh/ewjc3/eac26e6882.jpg did something similar
00:55:962 (3,4) - Can this be blanketed more or just keep it the same because these 00:55:212 (1,4) - can stack lol so nazi but fixed
01:07:962 (3) - Missing clap at tail or is this on purpose? fixed!
02:22:212 (1,2) - I feel these two sliders should have the exact same hitsound effects. So add a whistle on the head of (2) and it should be the same [color=#FF0000]same as 00:21:462 (2) -/color]
Love this hard difficulty is really amazing thank u
Affection

00:08:337 (4) - Same reasoning as on hard with the clap here. Maybe it's because of the piano sound there but it wouldn't matter either way. It's fine fixed
00:10:774 (4) - How about having the same spacing of 1.4 like the previous 3 notes? fixed
00:21:087 (3) - Optional - Whistle at tail to go with the piano note here? no change, same reason as hard
01:55:587 (3) - 1.2 spacing? i decided to do 1.3 but fixed
No problems as far as I can tell
Welp going to add you to my favorite mappers collection. I feel you do things really well and I like your mapping style CLEAN AND EFFICIENT
I hope this mod can help senya is life so I hope this does get ranked before valentines day haha thank u so much ! it makes me really happy hearing you like my maps ;wwww;

thank you kocari !

edit: thanks for the first star lol

Last edited by kakifly 2015-01-19T01:00:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-15T04:20:48+00:00

Kocari

Kocari wrote:
Here as requested from modding queue. Sorry it took a while to get back to you. Yay for Senya

Setz Normal

Disable Widescreen support because no storyboard
00:16:212 (1,2,3) - I believe it would be more consistent to follow the same pattern because it's slider-note-slider and it happens on two occasions during that part so possibly match it with this 00:14:712 (3,4,5) also follows with the next note because 2 whistles to end and start here 00:16:962 (3,4) - doesn't sound as great as opposed to just 1 whistle at (4) on head to follow the pattern I am assuming you mean hitsounds. if so, I made them match.
01:08:712 (3) - Spacing Error fixed
01:06:462 (4) - Whistle at the tail isn't necessary especially if you are trying to repeat double whistles, because it happens on mostly throughout the song and it's my preference to keep it like that without adding additional whistles whistle on tail is for the stream like sound in the background.
01:12:462 (4) - Possible clap to just continue the vocals off with it? ok
01:18:462 (4,5,1) - This part can have the same hitsounding as this 01:06:462 (4,5,1) these parts, while vocals are similar, the background music is different.
01:46:774 (2) - I hear another sound along with the vocals so a clap can be added here and it would make that flow sound pretty neat ok
02:03:837 (6) - Whistle doesn't need to be here, I believe the clap itself should be fine and to follow whistle rhythm because this part seems almost the same and it doesn't have a whistle 02:15:837 (6) - so keeping it consistent would be best ok
02:06:462 (4) - Move to x:456 y:164 so it looks like a better blanket fixed blanket from 3 instead
02:06:462 (4) - Whistle whistle at the end for the same reasoning as stated above ok
02:10:024 (5) - Add whistle for same pattern as above same as above
02:12:462 (4) - Clap for vocals? ok
02:54:462 (4,5,1) - How about a flow like this? http://puu.sh/ewfzL/85ae2e80c6.jpg the one you had before looked eerie and wasn't the same as what you had before with slidercurve-note-slidercurve but if you insist to keep it move this a little to the left for better blanket 02:55:962 (2) dont like it, it clutters everything too far to the left, and some of the slider points even look like they are out of the grid.
02:57:274 (4) - I feel a note can be added here to go along with vocals like you had on previous parts in the map current rhythm is consistent with all the other kiais.
02:56:712 (3) - Clap on head doesn't sound well I feel it being on tail is better
03:04:212 (1) - Same here with clap on head as stated above fixed both
03:21:462 (4) - x:500 y:272 somewhat of a blanket but looks better fixed blanket instead of moving slider.
Nice Normal difficulty, it flows well but just one spacing error

thanks for modding

EDIT: damnit, i forgot to disable widescreen support, do that for me pls kakifly

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-16T20:41:22+00:00

hi from pm req o/

[General]
Delete .osb file from folder
Setz's Normal has a different lead-in, set it to 2000ms

[Setz's Normal]
HP4

01:07:962 (2) - You forgot a clap here, on tail :3
01:10:212 (1) - ^
02:28:962 (2) - ^
03:04:962 (2) - ^

[Hard]
AR7

00:34:587 (2,3,4) - try ctrl+g, adjust hitsounds after if you do it :3
00:55:587 (2) - remove clap from tail
01:21:837 (4) - move 1 grid up. Better blanket with 01:21:087 (2) - Dont forgot to stack this 01:23:712 (1) - on (4) after moving it
01:52:774 (2) - remove clap
01:58:212 (1) - add a clap on tail like you did here 00:58:212 (1) -
02:07:587 (3) - split into one 1/2 slider + circle
02:53:712 (1) - move 1 grid down and the 3rd slider point 2 grids left, better blanket with 02:54:274 (2) -
02:55:774 - feels empty, maybe you can add a note here, like you did 01:07:774 - 01:19:774 - 02:07:774 - 02:19:774 - and parts like these imo
03:04:212 (1) - remove clap, also you can add a finish here :3
03:06:837 (4) - remove finish, you can add it here 03:07:212 (1) - instead
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove clap, sounds too loud and doesn't fit well here imo

[Affection]
AR 8.5

00:01:212 (1) - move 1 grid up
00:01:774 (2) - remove whistle so you keep the consistency
00:02:524 (4) - ^
00:10:774 (4) - ^
00:53:712 (1) - move 2 grid up
01:44:712 (1) - move 2 grids left and this 01:44:337 (5) - 3 grids left
03:01:212 (1,2,3) - try to do the same you did here 02:04:212 (1,2,3) - would be nice :3
03:04:962 (4) - forgot a clap, on tail
03:08:712 (1,2,3,4) - press r (or the key you use for add/remove claps) >.o
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove claps, too loud

Pretty nice map :3

Good luck >.o

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2015-01-16T23:47:21+00:00

added all claps.

will keep hp3 for now, since this is the lowest diff of the set, and the map is on the long side.

thanks for modding :3

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 120472
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:setz kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
BeatmapID:596173
BeatmapSetID:250337

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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
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400,346,187024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,322,187212,6,0,P|446:268|433:215,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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291,188,188712,2,0,P|230:173|181:175,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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137,328,190024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,345,190212,6,0,B|292:349,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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500,221,195837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Nathan

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Nathan 2015-01-17T01:00:08+00:00

Hi from modding queue, great map

[Hard]

00:18:462 (4,5) - I think this overlap looks much better
00:51:462 (3) - I think a ctrl+g flows better
01:57:837 (5) - Bend it like this a little bit, looks nicer
02:07:493 (2) - Hm this note seems kind of unnecessary, or maybe add a clap

[Affection]

00:03:837 (4) - Try placing this around here, felt much better
00:08:337 (4) - Try pointing this towards 00:08:712 (1)
00:30:274 (1) - This might transition better
01:03:462 (3) - Should ctrl+g this
01:08:524 (5,6,1) - Just completely stacking it looks cleaner imo instead of slight overlaps
01:13:212 (1) - Try to slightly point/bend the end towards 01:13:587 (2) looks nicer
02:12:649 (3) - I highly recommend you bring this up here, the transition into a stream is a bit difficult
03:16:587 (2) - Point this a bit towards 03:16:962 (3)

edit: whoops typo

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-17T01:58:08+00:00

pkhg

pkhg wrote:
hi from pm req o/

[General]
Delete .osb file from folder there isn't one o.o
Setz's Normal has a different lead-in, set it to 2000ms

[Hard]
AR7

00:34:587 (2,3,4) - try ctrl+g, adjust hitsounds after if you do it :3 im not really sure what this is suppose to do D:/
00:55:587 (2) - remove clap from tail my mistake orz fixed
01:21:837 (4) - move 1 grid up. Better blanket with 01:21:087 (2) - Dont forgot to stack this 01:23:712 (1) - on (4) after moving it ok
01:52:774 (2) - remove clap fixed
01:58:212 (1) - add a clap on tail like you did here 00:58:212 (1) - aa forgot to fix this after copying hitsounds from affection :>
02:07:587 (3) - split into one 1/2 slider + circle i prefer current, maybe having this after 1/4 notes is a little hard?
02:53:712 (1) - move 1 grid down and the 3rd slider point 2 grids left, better blanket with 02:54:274 (2) - ok
02:55:774 - feels empty, maybe you can add a note here, like you did 01:07:774 - 01:19:774 - 02:07:774 - 02:19:774 - and parts like these imo i will consider this, i just wanted the player to have a quick break
03:04:212 (1) - remove clap, also you can add a finish here :3 fixed
03:06:837 (4) - remove finish, you can add it here 03:07:212 (1) - instead fixed, sorry this was my mistake from copying hitsounds i forgot to fixed
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove clap, sounds too loud and doesn't fit well here imo fixed

[Affection]
AR 8.5

00:01:212 (1) - move 1 grid up ok
00:01:774 (2) - remove whistle so you keep the consistency this whistle isnt for consistency its emphasizing the strong piano sound
00:02:524 (4) - ^ ^
00:10:774 (4) - ^ ^ orz
00:53:712 (1) - move 2 grid up ok
01:44:712 (1) - move 2 grids left and this 01:44:337 (5) - 3 grids left um ok
03:01:212 (1,2,3) - try to do the same you did here 02:04:212 (1,2,3) - would be nice :3 i prefer current
03:04:962 (4) - forgot a clap, on tail added
03:08:712 (1,2,3,4) - press r (or the key you use for add/remove claps) >.o lol switched to drum sampleset (no claps)
03:19:212 (1,2) - remove claps, too loud ok

Pretty nice map :3 thank u :3

Good luck >.o

sukinathan

sukiNathan wrote:
Hi from modding queue, great map thank u

[Hard]
00:18:462 (4,5) - I think this overlap looks much better i prefer the current better just because it suits my personal tastes better ;w;
00:51:462 (3) - I think a ctrl+g flows better ^
01:57:837 (5) - Bend it like this a little bit, looks nicer ^
02:07:493 (2) - Hm this note seems kind of unnecessary, or maybe add a clap but its following the drums?
[Affection]
00:03:837 (4) - Try placing this around here, felt much better i prefer current orz
00:08:337 (4) - Try pointing this towards 00:08:712 (1) ^
00:30:274 (1) - This might transition better did something similar
01:03:462 (3) - Should ctrl+g this i think current flows smoother because its more circular, ctrl + g may break the flow i was going at
01:08:524 (5,6,1) - Just completely stacking it looks cleaner imo instead of slight overlaps i feel this plays more comfortably, this is just personal preference, since when overlapping especially with hd its harder to tell how many notes are under it
01:13:212 (1) - Try to slightly point/bend the end towards 01:13:587 (2) looks nicer i think current looks nicer lol
02:12:649 (3) - I highly recommend you bring this up here, the transition into a stream is a bit difficult did something similar
03:16:587 (2) - Point this a bit towards 03:16:962 (3)i prefer current ;w;
i think a lot of your mod was your personal preference, and some goes against mine so im sorry i denied a lot ;w;

edit: whoops typo

thank you guys for modding !

neonat

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neonat 2015-01-22T08:18:46+00:00

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RIP, bought the C86 albums but honestly didn't feel the C87 ones were value for money to ship lols. Time to hunt them this year when I go comiket in December orz.

General

Your Preview Time is not snapped to the line? Wouldn't it be at 02:00:462 if it follows the timing

Setz's Normal

01:07:962 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:10:212 (1) - ^
01:57:462 (5,6,1,2) - I don't think this is of the best flow it can be, flip them around:

SPOILER

02:13:962 (2) - shift slightly lower for a smoother entry from 02:13:212 (1)
02:16:212 (1) - I don't think you should have the whistle on the end of the slider
02:30:462 (5,6,1) - make them aligned straighter? Would look better

Hard

00:19:212 (1) - finish on start of slider?
01:41:149 (4,1) - to be honest, having that short slider end when the held vocals start is kinda off, and the repeat long slider doesn't really help it. I think a rhythm like this would follow more closely:

SPOILER

Affection

00:29:712 (1) - I think you should make the spacing of this the same as the rest of 00:29:805 (2,3,4,5)
00:42:837 (4,1) - ^ they just seem to be at the point where, at first glance, they look weird being different from each other
02:03:837 (4,5,6,7) - this section of the music seem like it complements a stream though
02:25:212 (1) - weird location for the spinner. Even so, it would be better for the rhythm if the spinner ended at 02:26:337 and there were already other objects at 02:26:524

Good Luck~

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

kakifly 2015-01-23T01:48:38+00:00

neonat

neonat wrote:
Forum PM

RIP, bought the C86 albums but honestly didn't feel the C87 ones were value for money to ship lols. Time to hunt them this year when I go comiket in December orz. yeah i'll have to agree, not many good songs this time ;w; though i liked this one, its one of my favourites, i don't really like any of the other songs as much :>

General

Your Preview Time is not snapped to the line? Wouldn't it be at 02:00:462 if it follows the timing oops fixed

Hard

00:19:212 (1) - finish on start of slider? i dont think a finish fits here orz
01:41:149 (4,1) - to be honest, having that short slider end when the held vocals start is kinda off, and the repeat long slider doesn't really help it. I think a rhythm like this would follow more closely: there is a little beat on 01:41:524 - though a repeat slider may not have been the best choice.. i will do something similar

Affection

00:29:712 (1) - I think you should make the spacing of this the same as the rest of 00:29:805 (2,3,4,5) fixed
00:42:837 (4,1) - ^ they just seem to be at the point where, at first glance, they look weird being different from each other fixed
02:03:837 (4,5,6,7) - this section of the music seem like it complements a stream though ?? it currently has a stream? or do you mean it doesnt work?
02:25:212 (1) - weird location for the spinner. Even so, it would be better for the rhythm if the spinner ended at 02:26:337 and there were already other objects at 02:26:524 shortened spinner, i think if i were to map here i would have to have lots of streams, the entire measure is a stream and i feel for this song such a murderous stream wouldnt suit it lol

Good Luck~

thank you for the mod /:D !!

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