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Masayoshi Minoshima feat. nomico - Alice Maestera

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Topic Starter
Aenna
Fixed.
Thanks :)
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine

[EASY]

looks good. might be a little to hard for an easy though

[NORMAL]

seems fine to me. again, a little hard for a normal maybe

[HARD]

no problems

[INSANE]

looks good

nice map. no real problems that i can find. good job :)

star'd
AngelHoney
Lunatic

00:27:051 repeat to this slider ?
00:35:408 new combo ?
00:35:515 ^
00:36:158 remove ?
00:36:372 ^
00:38:515 ^
01:13:658 move 3 right ?
01:15:372 ^
01:21:051 slider ?
01:21:479 ^
01:21:908 ^
01:22:337 ^
02:25:122 new combo ?
02:25:230 ^
02:25:872 remove ?
02:26:087 ^

03:08:515 move 3 right ?
03:10:230 ^
03:11:730 new combo ?
03:11:837 ^
03:25:765 move ending 1 left ?
03:26:194 move 2 left and move ending 2 right ( or repeat to this slider ?
03:58:551 move ending 2 right ?


Hard
03:58:551 repeat to this slider ?
Topic Starter
Aenna
>Doomsday93
Thank you mod & star~ :)

>AngelHoney
Thank you suggestion.
Everything is not done...sorry :(
mao130
good work
den1092den
I like this song :)

star~
Topic Starter
Aenna
>mao130
Thank you~ :)

>den1092den
me too :oops:
thanks :)
Takuma
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
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Tanmak
:oops:
Topic Starter
Aenna
>Takuma,orion,Tanmak
thanks.
La Valse
star ~ :)
Skyripper
02:30:480 - In this spot in every difficulty you do kiai fountains 6 times in a row in 50ms succession. This is not a rankable technique. If you would like to emphasize this section of music, use a strobe or more hitsounds or something. Delete all the kiai but the first one. It's basically the same effect.
Topic Starter
Aenna
Fixed.
Cyril Scarlet
やっぱ nomico もえぇわ~ ♡(✿´∀`✿)ノ
Gens
[General]
  1. Delete the osb and full submit.
  2. Remove "nomico" from the tags.
[Normal]
  1. The slowdown part and the star rating made me say this: maybe call this [Normal+]?
00:43:980 (1,2) - Stack the endpoints perfectly? (extremely nitpicky)

[Insane]
  1. Shouldn't this be called [Lunatic] instead? Just to follow up with the other Touhou maps.
  2. 13 million points huh...
03:00:480 - The break ending here is a bit awkward IMO, you should finish it at 02:58:765.

~ ~ ~

I think that's it.
Topic Starter
Aenna
All fixed.
Mafiamaster
Since you changed your mp3 file, it will usually have a slight offset change.
As of now, your offset is real late.
I'm no expert at timing but I suggest dropping the offset down about -16ms (464).
Topic Starter
Aenna
done.
Furawa
:P
anonymous_old
Nice Song~ XD
Andrea
Revived.
Topic Starter
Aenna
thanks
gowww
kami 8-)
bakatii
ウメエナァ
Gabi
Great, love the song and map

gogo fighto!
swish
star :)
Frill
しんxynかと思った
Rusty
star~ :)
Clemaister
- Timing respected
- Beatmap perfectly playable
- Spacing good

Nothing bad to say in this beatmap, congratulation ! Hope it'll be ranked~

Oh, and of course, a star.
ElecoR
good!! star☆~
Faust
Artist is " Masayoshi Minoshima feat. nomico". He's part of Alstroemeria Records, but this is an arrangement of his own and performed with nomico. Please don't use Circle names for artists/arrangers, especially for Video Game Music or Doujin music. In the case of IOSYS, they always work as a circle, and sometimes collaborate.
Topic Starter
Aenna
kk
vivi90722
> <
nuisible
:o
MayBe
Nice :oops:
ArzatoRx
:)
Hakeru
Hoshi <3 :) :)
Topic Starter
Aenna
thanks
Natteke
:oops:
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