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[General]
[Kyubey's Insane]
btw, i'll finish this by tomorrow i'm wondering that if you satisfy with current hitsounds, i mean some claps are placed on wrong place (maybe this is because we have different mapping style). if you want to add them consistently and need any helps about it, plz call me
good luck~
[General]
- 00:22:282 - i'm not sure if the second timing line is really necessary because it seems that you added an additional timing line in order to make the long white tick your starting point. but i found that moving the first timing line to 00:01:067 - here and deleting second timing line are better solution
- 00:23:607 (2) - try moving this clap on ending point to next note
- 01:27:254 - same opinion with your insane diff
- 02:06:701 (4) - missed clap?
- 02:14:657 (3) - ^
- 00:24:270 (4) - i think clap on the starting point should be moved to ending point for consistency
- 00:24:933 (6,1) - sawp NC for consistency. i recommend you to add NCs consistently on low diffs, there are some NCs which is placed in improper way. what about fixing them?
- 00:36:867 (4) - change Auto additions on the ending point to soft for proper clap sound
- 00:44:491 (3) - add soft clap on the ending point and delete it on 00:45:486 (4) - this slider's starting point
- 00:48:138 (3) - same opinion with 00:36:867 (4) - here
- 01:08:690 (3) - try adding whistles on any placement of this slider, a slider without any whistle on this part feels too empty to hear
- 01:58:746 (3) - is this soft sampleset intended to be here?
- 02:02:392 (2,3) - i'm really not sure whether it was supposed to be here or not, either way, i'd perfer to adjust these claps for consistency
- about the newcombos, i'm not sure if these NCs are inteded to be on current places. i'm going to give some suggestions about misplacd(i think) NCssuggestions based on consistency00:27:585 (5) - add NC
00:28:911 (1) - remove NC
00:30:237 (5) - add NC
00:54:105 (5) - ^
00:55:431 (1) - remoev NC
00:56:757 (5) - add NC
00:59:409 (5) - ^
01:00:735 (1) - remove NC
01:02:061 (5) - this is an exception; it needs NC because the atmosphere of the song chagese
01:51:121 (1) - remove NC
01:52:447 (5) - add NC
01:53:773 (1) - remove NC
02:17:641 (5) - add NC - 00:44:823 (4,5) - maybe you had a mistake while placing claps?
- 01:27:254 - same opinion with Aka's insane diff, delaying breaktime feels kinda awkward
- 01:43:165 (1) - does this note really need normal sampleset on the ending point?
- 01:47:556 - try adding finish
- 01:25:431 (5) - i think this note should be on 1/3 beat compared with the music, but you have to reverse 01:25:265 (4,5) - this rhythm by using ctrl g to fit with the music well
[Kyubey's Insane]
- 00:27:254 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency
- 01:02:392 (2) - since there isn't any reasonable sound for normal sampleset, this note needs soft sampleset instead of normal imo
- 01:03:221 (1) - actually, i expected a kind of this flow instead of current flow
- 01:09:105 (3) - this note should be on 1/3 beat according to the song
- 01:56:922 (5) - i think changing this slider to 1/4 slider with a repeat fits better with the song than current one. not only here but also other same parts like 02:07:530 (4) - here too
- 02:04:712 (4) - what about adding NC here as well? i know that you didn't add NC 02:25:928 (4) - here too but i think adding NC would be great for overall consistency
- 02:28:911 (3) - this isn't proper place for a clap.02:28:828 (2) - this is the right place where it needs a clap according to the music
- 02:29:077 (5) - probably you forgot to add a clap here?
- 01:07:364 (1) - i'd rather use 1/3 sliders with a repeat instead of 1/3 sliders without a repeat like this, the slider which has a repeat fits better with the song imo, but in this case, you would be better to adjust the SV changes identically. 1/3 slider with a note is also nice
- 01:08:235 (3,4) - theses sliders should be on 1/3 beats not on 1/16
- 01:27:254 - delaying breaktime feels kind of weird while playing, try removing it
- 01:51:784 (2) - seriously, consider flipping this slider by using ctrl g, this plays even better and this also has awesome flow
- 02:19:132 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
- 02:48:138 (6) - add NC for consistency as well
- 01:03:221 (2,1) - swap NC? to fit with the music
- 01:17:972 (1) - i think current pattern can be improved by avoiding those overlapping placements, and i have a good idea about thistry this
144,105,77972,5,2,2:0:0:0:
134,242,78193,1,2,2:0:0:0:
222,136,78414,1,0,2:0:0:0:
89,170,78635,5,2,2:0:0:0:
217,221,78856,1,2,2:0:0:0:
144,105,79077,1,0,2:0:0:0:
134,242,79298,53,2,2:0:0:0:
208,356,79519,1,2,2:0:0:0:
217,221,79741,1,0,2:0:0:0:
128,324,79961,5,2,2:0:0:0:
260,292,80182,1,0,2:0:0:0:
134,242,80403,1,0,2:0:0:0:
20,316,80624,1,4,2:0:0:0: - 01:23:276 (1) - this should be fixed as well if you applied above suggestion
- 01:50:956 (4) - perhaps this clap should not be here. try adding a clap on 01:50:458 (3) - this slider's ending point
- 01:57:254 (6,7) - what about changing these notes to a 1/4 slider because current part has quite similar rhythm and same sounds with previous sliders (like 01:57:005 (5) - this)
- 02:09:022 (1) - i think this NC isn't that necessary, what about removing this NC?
- 02:18:552 - since there is audible sound on here, how about adding a note? try making triplet on it
- 02:27:420 - i have 2 suggestions about this part. First, i recommend you to add a 1/2 slider rather than empty space because there are some mappable sounds which can improve this part if they are mapped with some objects. Second, try chaging 02:26:922 (5) - this slider to a note, it seems that you tried to give static feelings by adding a 1/1 slider only, but this is little bit awkawrd to hear imo, so consider adding a note instead of slider
good luck~