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ChouchouP feat. Hatsune Miku - White Prism [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年8月13日 at 19:45:32

Artist: ChouchouP feat. Hatsune Miku
Title: White Prism
Tags: Vocaloid Fictional worlds Taiko Virus papiyon yaoyujie0332 [I]MMoRTal[S]
BPM: 172
Filesize: 5899kb
Play Time: 03:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.23 stars, 509 notes)
  2. IMT's Oni (4.28 stars, 1182 notes)
  3. Inner Oni (4.92 stars, 1352 notes)
  4. Kantan (1.67 stars, 277 notes)
  5. Muzukashii (2.74 stars, 750 notes)
  6. Oni (3.97 stars, 1114 notes)
  7. YYJ's Inner oni (4.61 stars, 1361 notes)
Download: ChouchouP feat. Hatsune Miku - White Prism
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kantan 100% - by me (- Love1yV1ruS -)
Futsuu 100% - by me
Muzukashii 100% - by me
Oni 100% - by me
IMF's oni 100% - by IMMoRTalS
YYJ's inner oni 100% - by yaoyujie0332
Inner Oni 100% - by me
BG - by me

If you download this before 12/19/2014, redownload please! > <

Enjoy! Ready for mod!
ghm12
WHITE PRISM IS A SEQUEL OF BLACK BOARD? WHY NOBODY TOLD ME? NOW I WANNA FINISH MY BLACK BOARD DIFFS
Hi, random bad mod ~

[General]
Maybe add "vocaloid" to the tags? and it's "Fictional World" the correct name, please change the tags, they are "Frictional worlds"
The quality of the mp3 is 128kbps, here's a 192kbps version from the original album, for me the same timing is fine (and that's not normal i think, lol)
Maybe this bg looks better

Kiai should finish in 00:22:853 - and not in 00:22:504 - imo
Kiai should finish in 00:45:179 - and not in 00:44:830 - imo
Kiai should start in 01:07:504 - and not in 01:06:807 - / Finish in 01:18:667 - and not in 01:18:318 - imo (some diffs have a break before my suggested end. In this case, maybe it can finish in 01:17:969 - because there's a break, but i think its better you place some notes and finish in 01:18:667 - )
Kiai should start in 01:57:737 - and not in 01:57:388 - / Finish in 02:08:900 - and not in 02:08:551 - imo
02:36:458 - I think this timing point is TOTALLY unnecessary, if you want to change the volume, use a Inherited one

I'll mod the diffs when they're done, star ~
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

ghm12 wrote:

WHITE PRISM IS A SEQUEL OF BLACK BOARD? WHY NOBODY TOLD ME? NOW I WANNA FINISH MY BLACK BOARD DIFFS
Hi, random bad mod ~

[General]
Maybe add "vocaloid" to the tags? Sure, done. and it's "Fictional World" the correct name, please change the tags, they are "Frictional worlds" Silly mistake by me :( , thank you for your information.
The quality of the mp3 is 128kbps, here's a 192kbps version from the original album, for me the same timing is fine (and that's not normal i think, lol) Yea, the timing is almost the same. I will test to make sure if they are the same. Thank you for your better mp3
Maybe this bg looks better Nice BG for taiko mode

Kiai should finish in 00:22:853 - and not in 00:22:504 - imo ok
Kiai should finish in 00:45:179 - and not in 00:44:830 - imo ok
Kiai should start in 01:07:504 - and not in 01:06:807 - / Finish in 01:18:667 - and not in 01:18:318 - imo (some diffs have a break before my suggested end. In this case, maybe it can finish in 01:17:969 - because there's a break, but i think its better you place some notes and finish in 01:18:667 - ) 01:18:667 - changed to this time
Kiai should start in 01:57:737 - and not in 01:57:388 - / Finish in 02:08:900 - and not in 02:08:551 - imo ok
02:36:458 - I think this timing point is TOTALLY unnecessary, if you want to change the volume, use a Inherited one As you said, i just want to change the volume here. inherited line used

I'll mod the diffs when they're done, star ~
Thank you for ur star :D And also your good modding.
Charlotte
hi~.from my modding queues

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • I think Futsuu=easy?

[ Kantan]


  • SV1.0→1.2 or 1.4 (1.0=very easy) HP3→4

    00:17:989 - add notes
    00:20:765 - ^
    00:40:290 - ^
    00:43:085 - ^
    01:06:456 - add k.because,follow the vocal.
    01:08:202 - ^
    01:09:259 - ^
    01:09:601 - add d
    01:11:001 - add notes
    01:13:800 - ^
    01:16:589 - add d
    01:24:952 - add notes
    01:27:736 - ^
    01:53:883 - add d.because,follow the vocal.
    01:56:697 - ^

    01:57:742 - 02:08:903 - 01:07:508 - 01:18:666 - try to reference.

    02:32:978 - add notes.
    02:33:311 - ^
    02:35:752 - ^
    02:36:112 - ^

    02:49:379 - 03:00:528 - 01:07:508 - 01:18:666 - try to reference.

    03:01:233 - add notes.
    03:04:019 - ^
    03:06:830 - ^
    03:09:619 - ^
    03:17:961 - ^
    03:20:756 - ^
[ Futsuu]


  • 00:23:214 - move to 1/2 right
    00:26:004 - ^
    00:28:780 - ^
    00:31:573 - ^

    00:33:488 - add d.

    00:45:179 (1,2,1) - hmm.I think hard.00:45:440 - delete.
    00:48:225 - delete.
    00:51:028 - ^
    00:53:813 - ^

    00:46:235 - add notes
    00:49:017 - ^
    00:51:811 - ^
    00:54:593 - ^

    00:52:510 - changek
    00:55:818 - add k
    01:01:056 - ^

    01:30:522 - move to 1/2 left
    01:33:315 - ^
    01:36:117 - ^
    01:38:906 - ^

    01:30:884 - add notes.
    01:33:657 - ^
    01:36:460 - ^
    01:39:246 - ^

    01:34:888 - add d

    01:40:989 - 01:51:809 - 01:29:829 - 01:40:650 - try to reference.

    02:18:318 (1,1) - swap (Ctrl +G)

    02:50:939 - add note.because,Last Kiai,so try add? (option)
    02:53:736 - ^
    02:56:506 - ^
someday,I will mod Muzukashii.call me when you ready.Good luck :)
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Charlotte wrote:

hi~.from my modding queues

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]
[ Kantan]


  • SV1.0→1.2 or 1.4 (1.0=very easy) HP3→4 Ok, changed to 1.2. And HP changed.

    00:17:989 - add notes k
    00:20:765 - ^ k
    00:40:290 - ^ k
    00:43:085 - ^ k
    01:06:456 - add k.because,follow the vocal. ok
    01:08:202 - ^ k
    01:09:259 - ^ k
    01:09:601 - add d prefer k
    01:11:001 - add notes k
    01:13:800 - ^ k
    01:16:589 - add d ok
    01:24:952 - add notes k
    01:27:736 - ^ k
    01:53:883 - add d.because,follow the vocal. ok
    01:56:697 - ^ ok

    01:57:742 - 02:08:903 - 01:07:508 - 01:18:666 - try to reference. reference? You mean a finish? all add except 02:08:903

    02:32:978 - add notes.
    02:33:311 - ^
    02:35:752 - ^
    02:36:112 - ^ all add d

    02:49:379 - 03:00:528 - 01:07:508 - 01:18:666 - try to reference. all added.. since you say it twice -w-

    03:01:233 - add notes. d
    03:04:019 - ^ k
    03:06:830 - ^ d
    03:09:619 - ^ d
    03:17:961 - ^ k
    03:20:756 - ^ k
[ Futsuu]


  • 00:23:214 - move to 1/2 right
    00:26:004 - ^
    00:28:780 - ^
    00:31:573 - ^ all keep... they are a part of my style...

    00:33:488 - add d. ok

    00:45:179 (1,2,1) - hmm.I think hard.00:45:440 - delete.
    00:48:225 - delete.
    00:51:028 - ^
    00:53:813 - ^ umm... one of my style again QAQ.. I may delete it if somebody say it is hard again...

    00:46:235 - add notes
    00:49:017 - ^
    00:51:811 - ^
    00:54:593 - ^ Since I'm not going to change as what you recommended before, I think its necessary to give time for player to prepare for this 1/3

    00:52:510 - changek ok
    00:55:818 - add k ok
    01:01:056 - ^ Keep. That will be xtremely hard.. I do only set this at the end of the song.

    01:30:522 - move to 1/2 left
    01:33:315 - ^
    01:36:117 - ^
    01:38:906 - ^

    01:30:884 - add notes.
    01:33:657 - ^
    01:36:460 - ^
    01:39:246 - ^ get the idea and made some other changes.

    01:34:888 - add d ok

    01:40:989 - 01:51:809 - 01:29:829 - 01:40:650 - try to reference. Added some big notes, but not all of them

    02:18:318 (1,1) - swap (Ctrl +G) all changed to k

    02:50:939 - add note.because,Last Kiai,so try add? (option)
    02:53:736 - ^
    02:56:506 - ^ sure. add some notes at the end.
someday,I will mod Muzukashii.call me when you ready.Good luck :)
Thank you :)
Hanjamon
Hi Virus~ here a mod

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Some notes are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect this), I recommend you to do a Auto-Snap in all diffs, you can do this easily with F6, Snap objects to the new timing, and ok
[Kantan]

  • 00:11:690 (1) - why no finish here? i recommend add a finish here, fits good (you can apply these finishers suggestions to other diffs too, so you can apply them more easy, btw, don't apply if they are a 1/4 pattern like the Oni)
    00:17:272 (1) - here too, add finish?
    00:21:458 (1) - resnap this slider ;w; (you can do that removing and adding a new slider or trying to lengthen)
    00:22:853 (1) - same as before, add finish here?
    00:28:435 (1) - add finish here too?
    00:39:598 (1) - ^ finish here?
    00:42:388 (1) - ^ finish here?
    00:43:783 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider
    00:45:179 (1) - same as before, add finish here?
    00:50:760 (1) - ^ finish here?
    00:56:341 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:01:923 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:13:086 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:15:876 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:24:249 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:27:039 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:28:434 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider
    01:29:830 (1) - same as before, add a finish here?
    01:35:411 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:40:993 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:46:574 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:52:156 (1) - ^ finish here?
    01:54:248 (1) - maybe remove finish here and change to k? sounds good imo
    01:54:946 (1) - same as before, add a finish here?
    01:57:039 (1) - same as 01:54:248 (1) - , remove finish and change to k? i think sounds better
    02:03:318 (1) - same as before, add a finish here?
    02:06:108 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:14:481 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:17:272 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:20:062 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:25:644 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:31:225 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:34:016 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:36:806 (1) - ^ finish here?
    02:57:736 (1) - ^ finish here?
    03:06:109 (1) - ^ finish here?
    03:08:899 (1) - ^ finish here?
    03:10:295 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider
    03:11:690 (1) - same as before, add a finish here?
    03:17:272 (1) - ^ finish here?
    03:20:062 (1) - ^ finish here?

    You are free to reject these finishers suggestions but imo sounds better with them, anyway, good kantan here :3
[Futsuu]

  • 00:21:458 (1) - same as Futsuu, resnap slider
    00:43:783 (1) - ^ resnap slider
    00:45:440 (2) - i think is better to delete this note, 1/4 beat is a bit confuse for a Futsuu
    00:48:231 (1) - ^ delete?
    00:51:022 (1) - ^ delete?
    00:53:812 (2) - ^ delete?
    00:58:086 (1) - maybe delete this note too? I see this with few breaks..
    01:02:272 (1) - ^ delete? same reason
    01:28:434 (1) - same as before, resnap slider
    01:31:923 (1) - maybe delete this note? same as before
    01:37:504 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:09:597 (1) - delete this note? i think sounds good and is easier
    02:12:388 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:15:528 (1,1,1) - delete these notes? the actual pattern is so hard imo
    02:20:411 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:23:202 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:25:993 (1,1) - delete these notes? ^ same reason
    03:10:295 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider
[Muzukashii]

  • 00:32:621 (1) - I don't recommend the use of ddk/kkd etc.. in a Muzukashii, change to d this note? (ddd)
    00:54:947 (1) - change to d? (ddd) ^ same reason
    01:09:074 (2,3,1) - This ddk is fine for me because is the kiai and is a short pattern, so you can keep this
    01:39:598 (1) - change to d? (ddd) same reason as before
    01:50:761 (1) - change to d? (ddd) ^ same reason
    01:52:330 (2) - i think this is better without note
    01:55:121 (2) - if you deleted ^ delete this too for consistency?
    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    02:08:900 - From here, why this is so hard? This is not okay for a Muzu imo, I recommend this

    02:09:074 (2,3,2,3) - Delete these notes, is better without triplets here
    02:11:865 (2,3,2,3) - Same here, delete these notes
    02:13:871 (2,3,4) - Delete these notes, less triplets and more break
    02:14:655 (2,3,2,3) - Delete these notes, same as before and change 02:14:830 (1,1) - to k? i think sounds better
    02:16:225 (1) - I think is better to have a simple ddd here so change to d?
    02:17:621 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    02:20:236 (2,3,2,3) - delete these notes, same as before
    02:23:027 (2,3,2,3) - delete these notes ^ same
    02:25:033 (2,3,4) - same as before, delete these notes for more break
    02:25:817 (2,3,2,3) - same as before delete these notes, also, 02:25:992 (1) - change this to k? sounds better imo
    02:27:387 (1) - as before, change to d (ddd)
    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    02:33:318 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    02:39:248 (2) - imo is better deleting this, is a calm part, so this need more breaks, also, this makes consistency with 02:36:458 -
    02:42:039 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:49:190 (2) - why are you doing this so hard? lol, delete this note first
    02:50:586 (4) - Deleting this note too is better
    02:51:982 (3) - Delete ^ same reason
    02:53:376 (4) - Delete ^ same reason
    02:54:772 (3) - Delete ^ same reason
    02:56:167 (4) - Delete ^ same reason
    03:02:098 (2) - Delete, a 1/1 break is good
    03:04:190 (2,3) - Delete these notes, without the triplet ddk is better and a 1/1 break too
    03:07:679 (2) - Delete, same as before
    03:13:173 (2,3) - Delete these notes, same as before
    03:15:353 (2,3) - Delete these notes, same ^
    03:18:754 (2,3) - Delete these notes, same as before, need breaks this
[Oni]

  • 00:05:934 (1) - Delete this note for a mini-break? is a Oni but need breaks too
    00:43:435 (1,1) - control+g? (k d) sounds better imo
    01:34:365 (1,1) - control+g? (k d) sounds better imo
    03:02:882 (2) - Delete, i don't think is necessary to make this last part harder
    03:05:673 (2) - Delete, same ^
    03:12:126 (2,2) - Delete these notes, same ^
    03:14:917 (2,2,1) - Delete these notes, same ^
    03:16:836 (2) - Delete these notes, same ^

    Consider to make the Oni more easier, the spread from Muzukashii to Oni is not good imo
[Inner Oni]

  • 00:06:283 (1) - delete this note? a doublet works fine i think
    00:07:679 (1) - delete this note? ^ same
    00:11:081 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    00:12:650 (1,1) - control+g these notes? (kkddkdk) kkdkddk is a bit weird here and kkddkdk fits better imo
    00:15:353 (1) - change to k? (kkddkkd) kkddkkd is simple and more easier i know but i don't think kkdddkd fits well here
    01:33:667 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    01:54:248 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    02:19:190 (1,1) - maybe change these notes to k? (ddddkdkkd) i think sounds good
    02:26:080 (1,1) - control+g? (ddk) sounds better imo
    02:33:317 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    03:22:504 (11) - change to k? i think sounds better
[IMT's Oni]

  • 01:23:725 (472,473) - control+g? i think sounds better
    02:23:434 (833,834,835) - i don't see any reason for have a 1/3 here, 1/4 dkd or dk will work better imo
    02:27:388 (862) - change to k? i think sounds better
    02:37:155 - This long break is not necessary i think, I recommend to add more notes
    02:55:208 (57) - so many triplets lol, i think is better deleting this note
    02:56:254 (65) - delete this note too? ^ same reason
    02:57:301 (73) - move this note to 02:57:475 - and change to k? (kkd) sounds better imo
    02:58:173 - maybe add a k here too (ddkkd) sounds good imo
    03:25:295 (257) - delete this note and move 03:25:411 - this note to 03:25:382 - and change to k? sounds better imo
[YYJ's Inner Oni]

  • 01:03:231 (117) - move to 01:03:318 - and 01:03:144 (116) - to 01:03:057 - ? sounds better imo
    01:03:318 (117) - change to k? sounds better imo
    01:04:452 (125) - delete this note, is not necessary, also, 01:04:365 (124) - change to k? i think sounds better
    01:03:667 - add a d here? (ddd) sounds weird without note
    01:40:557 (82) - change to k? (ddkkdkd) sounds better imo
    02:36:371 (37) - move this note to 02:36:458 - and add a k in 02:36:632 - ? sounds a lot better than the actual pattern
    02:37:155 - same as IMT's Oni, this long break is not necessary i think, add more notes?
    02:48:667 (9) - maybe change this to K? sounds good at the end of these D D D D D D.....
    03:22:679 (10,11) - lot what, delete these notes o.o

    Also, are unsnapped notes in AiMod, resnap all notes (i think Love1yV1ruS will do this)
And... this is all lol, good luck ^^
wasonz

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Virus~ here a mod

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Some notes are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect this), I recommend you to do a Auto-Snap in all diffs, you can do this easily with F6, Snap objects to the new timing, and ok
[IMT's Oni]

  • 01:23:725 (472,473) - control+g? i think sounds better NO :v
    02:23:434 (833,834,835) - i don't see any reason for have a 1/3 here, 1/4 dkd or dk will work better imo o3o
    02:27:388 (862) - change to k? i think sounds better \o3o/
    02:37:155 - This long break is not necessary i think, I recommend to add more notes ?, NOOOOOo it's kind of prepare to triplet storm
    02:55:208 (57) - so many triplets lol, i think is better deleting this note nope
    02:56:254 (65) - delete this note too? ^ same reason nope , My style.
    02:57:301 (73) - move this note to 02:57:475 - and change to k? (kkd) sounds better imo no no ,i make it consist ddk ddk ddk xxx ddk ddk ddk xxx ddk d k ddk d k ddk just like this
    02:58:173 - maybe add a k here too (ddkkd) sounds good imo ^ also i leave to use 5-plet cuz it's only make this part harder
    03:25:295 (257) - delete this note and move 03:25:411 - this note to 03:25:382 - and change to k? sounds better imo nahhhh this should not have that sudden note drop like this ,it's make this harder xD
Also, are unsnapped notes in AiMod, resnap all notes (i think Love1yV1ruS will do this)[/list]

And... this is all lol, good luck ^^

Lovely Virussss ~ here : http://puu.sh/dr2th/4056a62cd9.osu
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Virus~ here a mod

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Some notes are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect this), I recommend you to do a Auto-Snap in all diffs, you can do this easily with F6, Snap objects to the new timing, and ok
[IMT's Oni]

  • 01:23:725 (472,473) - control+g? i think sounds better NO :v
    02:23:434 (833,834,835) - i don't see any reason for have a 1/3 here, 1/4 dkd or dk will work better imo o3o
    02:27:388 (862) - change to k? i think sounds better \o3o/
    02:37:155 - This long break is not necessary i think, I recommend to add more notes ?, NOOOOOo it's kind of prepare to triplet storm
    02:55:208 (57) - so many triplets lol, i think is better deleting this note nope
    02:56:254 (65) - delete this note too? ^ same reason nope , My style.
    02:57:301 (73) - move this note to 02:57:475 - and change to k? (kkd) sounds better imo no no ,i make it consist ddk ddk ddk xxx ddk ddk ddk xxx ddk d k ddk d k ddk just like this
    02:58:173 - maybe add a k here too (ddkkd) sounds good imo ^ also i leave to use 5-plet cuz it's only make this part harder
    03:25:295 (257) - delete this note and move 03:25:411 - this note to 03:25:382 - and change to k? sounds better imo nahhhh this should not have that sudden note drop like this ,it's make this harder xD
Also, are unsnapped notes in AiMod, resnap all notes (i think Love1yV1ruS will do this)[/list]

And... this is all lol, good luck ^^

Lovely Virussss ~ here : http://puu.sh/dr2th/4056a62cd9.osu
get ~
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Virus~ here a mod :D

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Some notes are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect this), I recommend you to do a Auto-Snap in all diffs, you can do this easily with F6, Snap objects to the new timing, and ok
ok

[Kantan]

  • 00:11:690 (1) - why no finish here? i recommend add a finish here, fits good (you can apply these finishers suggestions to other diffs too, so you can apply them more easy, btw, don't apply if they are a 1/4 pattern like the Oni) agreed
    00:17:272 (1) - here too, add finish? yes
    00:21:458 (1) - resnap this slider ;w; (you can do that removing and adding a new slider or trying to lengthen) done
    00:22:853 (1) - same as before, add finish here? nope, quite calm here.
    00:28:435 (1) - add finish here too? ok
    00:39:598 (1) - ^ finish here? done
    00:42:388 (1) - ^ finish here? done
    00:43:783 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider done
    00:45:179 (1) - same as before, add finish here? nope, same as before
    00:50:760 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    00:56:341 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:01:923 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:13:086 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:15:876 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:24:249 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:27:039 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:28:434 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider done
    01:29:830 (1) - same as before, add a finish here? nope, same as before
    01:35:411 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:40:993 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:46:574 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:52:156 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    01:54:248 (1) - maybe remove finish here and change to k? sounds good imo done
    01:54:946 (1) - same as before, add a finish here? nope, 2 finishes are too close and no reason for this
    01:57:039 (1) - same as 01:54:248 (1) - , remove finish and change to k? i think sounds better ok
    02:03:318 (1) - same as before, add a finish here? ok
    02:06:108 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    02:14:481 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    02:17:272 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    02:20:062 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    02:25:644 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    02:31:225 (1) - ^ finish here? nope, light vocal is coming
    02:34:016 (1) - ^ finish here? nope
    02:36:806 (1) - ^ finish here? nope
    02:57:736 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    03:06:109 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    03:08:899 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    03:10:295 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider done
    03:11:690 (1) - same as before, add a finish here? nope, same as before
    03:17:272 (1) - ^ finish here? ok
    03:20:062 (1) - ^ finish here? ok

    You are free to reject these finishers suggestions but imo sounds better with them, anyway, good kantan here :3
thank you for your recommendations :D

[Futsuu]

  • 00:21:458 (1) - same as Futsuu, resnap slider ok
    00:43:783 (1) - ^ resnap slider ok
    00:45:440 (2) - i think is better to delete this note, 1/4 beat is a bit confuse for a Futsuu ok, Charlotte mentioned as well.
    00:48:231 (1) - ^ delete?
    00:51:022 (1) - ^ delete?
    00:53:812 (2) - ^ delete? all ok
    00:58:086 (1) - maybe delete this note too? I see this with few breaks.. ok
    01:02:272 (1) - ^ delete? same reason ok
    01:28:434 (1) - same as before, resnap slider ok
    01:31:923 (1) - maybe delete this note? same as before ok
    01:37:504 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason ok
    02:09:597 (1) - delete this note? i think sounds good and is easier ok
    02:12:388 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason ok
    02:15:528 (1,1,1) - delete these notes? the actual pattern is so hard imo
    02:20:411 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:23:202 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:25:993 (1,1) - delete these notes? ^ same reason got the point and made some other changes
    03:10:295 (1) - same as before, resnap this slider
ok

[Muzukashii]

  • 00:32:621 (1) - I don't recommend the use of ddk/kkd etc.. in a Muzukashii, change to d this note? (ddd) nope, cuz im quite sure that they are acceptable.
    00:54:947 (1) - change to d? (ddd) ^ same reason ^
    01:09:074 (2,3,1) - This ddk is fine for me because is the kiai and is a short pattern, so you can keep this
    01:39:598 (1) - change to d? (ddd) same reason as before ^
    01:50:761 (1) - change to d? (ddd) ^ same reason ^
    01:52:330 (2) - i think this is better without note ok
    01:55:121 (2) - if you deleted ^ delete this too for consistency? ok
    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    02:08:900 - From here, why this is so hard? This is not okay for a Muzu imo, I recommend this

    02:09:074 (2,3,2,3) - Delete these notes, is better without triplets here ok
    02:11:865 (2,3,2,3) - Same here, delete these notes ok
    02:13:871 (2,3,4) - Delete these notes, less triplets and more break make some different changes
    02:14:655 (2,3,2,3) - Delete these notes, same as before and change 02:14:830 (1,1) - to k? i think sounds better ok
    02:16:225 (1) - I think is better to have a simple ddd here so change to d? nope
    02:17:621 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo
    02:20:236 (2,3,2,3) - delete these notes, same as before I'll keep most of the remaining of this part to make a surprise ;) .
    02:23:027 (2,3,2,3) - delete these notes ^ same
    02:25:033 (2,3,4) - same as before, delete these notes for more break
    02:25:817 (2,3,2,3) - same as before delete these notes, also, 02:25:992 (1) - change this to k? sounds better imo
    02:27:387 (1) - as before, change to d (ddd)
    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    02:33:318 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo ok
    02:39:248 (2) - imo is better deleting this, is a calm part, so this need more breaks, also, this makes consistency with 02:36:458 - ok
    02:42:039 (1) - delete this note? ^ same reason ok
    02:49:190 (2) - why are you doing this so hard? lol, delete this note first I asked a player with about #3000 rank, he said he was excited at the end of the song and glad to see it became a little bit harder here. But, if somebody recommend as well, I will change the patterns. And changed
    02:50:586 (4) - Deleting this note too is better
    02:51:982 (3) - Delete ^ same reason
    02:53:376 (4) - Delete ^ same reason
    02:54:772 (3) - Delete ^ same reason
    02:56:167 (4) - Delete ^ same reason
    03:02:098 (2) - Delete, a 1/1 break is good
    03:04:190 (2,3) - Delete these notes, without the triplet ddk is better and a 1/1 break too
    03:07:679 (2) - Delete, same as before
    03:13:173 (2,3) - Delete these notes, same as before
    03:15:353 (2,3) - Delete these notes, same ^
    03:18:754 (2,3) - Delete these notes, same as before, need breaks this
fixed almost

[Oni]

  • 00:05:934 (1) - Delete this note for a mini-break? is a Oni but need breaks too ok
    00:43:435 (1,1) - control+g? (k d) sounds better imo ok
    01:34:365 (1,1) - control+g? (k d) sounds better imo ok
    03:02:882 (2) - Delete, i don't think is necessary to make this last part harder ok
    03:05:673 (2) - Delete, same ^ want to keep this
    03:12:126 (2,2) - Delete these notes, same ^ ok
    03:14:917 (2,2,1) - Delete these notes, same ^ ok
    03:16:836 (2) - Delete these notes, same ^ keep

    Consider to make the Oni more easier, the spread from Muzukashii to Oni is not good imo
[Inner Oni]

  • 00:06:283 (1) - delete this note? a doublet works fine i think
    00:07:679 (1) - delete this note? ^ same keep
    00:11:081 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo ok
    00:12:650 (1,1) - control+g these notes? (kkddkdk) kkdkddk is a bit weird here and kkddkdk fits better imo ok
    00:15:353 (1) - change to k? (kkddkkd) kkddkkd is simple and more easier i know but i don't think kkdddkd fits well here keep
    01:33:667 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo ok
    01:54:248 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo ok
    02:19:190 (1,1) - maybe change these notes to k? (ddddkdkkd) i think sounds good keep
    02:26:080 (1,1) - control+g? (ddk) sounds better imo ok
    02:33:317 (1) - change to k? sounds better imo ok
    03:22:504 (11) - change to k? i think sounds better
ok

And... this is all lol, good luck ^^
Thank you so much, very helpful :)
yaoyujie0332

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Virus~ here a mod

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Some notes are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect this), I recommend you to do a Auto-Snap in all diffs, you can do this easily with F6, Snap objects to the new timing, and ok

[YYJ's Inner Oni]

  • 01:03:231 (117) - move to 01:03:318 - and 01:03:144 (116) - to 01:03:057 - ? sounds better imo keep,It's my style :3
    01:03:318 (117) - change to k? sounds better imo keep,It's my style :D
    01:04:452 (125) - delete this note, is not necessary, also, 01:04:365 (124) - change to k? i think sounds better keep,It's my style D:
    01:03:667 - add a d here? (ddd) sounds weird without note keep,It's my style ;w;
    01:40:557 (82) - change to k? (ddkkdkd) sounds better imo maybe right
    02:36:371 (37) - move this note to 02:36:458 - and add a k in 02:36:632 - ? sounds a lot better than the actual pattern
    02:37:155 - same as IMT's Oni, this long break is not necessary i think, add more notes? \(^o^)/OK
    02:48:667 (9) - maybe change this to K? sounds good at the end of these D D D D D D..... OK
    03:22:679 (10,11) - lot what, delete these notes o.o It's a mistake o.o

    Also, are unsnapped notes in AiMod, resnap all notes (i think Love1yV1ruS will do this)
And... this is all lol, good luck ^^
tetsutaro



[General]
:idea: Artist name (romanized): space between "feat. Hatsune Miku"

[Taiko]
:idea: Perceived Ratings: 2★ Kantan/1★ Futsuu/4★ Muzu/8★ Oni/9★ YYJ/8★ IMT/9★ Inner Oni
:idea: <Kantan><Futsuu> Very deficient. The complexity of this song warrants way more 1-beat and 1/2-beat separations. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Kantan and Futsuu (lowest two rows)
:idea: <All diffs> 02:36:458 ~ 02:49:365 - Keep simple as a deserved break. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Ura Oni (2:12)
:idea: <All diffs> (except <IMT>) 03:22:853 (1) - (or wherever that last fuusen is) Should have been mapped over normally.
:!: <IMT> 00:08:202 (41) / 01:06:807 (362) / 01:12:562 (395) / 02:02:795 (678) / 03:00:004 (91) - Drumroll ends never replace legitimate notes because they are optional. Shorten and add note. (PS 02:35:760 (915) is OK because going to break anyway)
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

tetsutaro wrote:




[General]
:idea: Artist name (romanized): space between "feat. Hatsune Miku" I keep. I see some map type this way too, example:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/107420 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/25935

[Taiko]
:idea: Perceived Ratings: 2★ Kantan/1★ Futsuu/4★ Muzu/8★ Oni/9★ YYJ/8★ IMT/9★ Inner Oni 2 star kantan... 1 star futsuu...
:idea: <Kantan><Futsuu> Very deficient. The complexity of this song warrants way more 1-beat and 1/2-beat separations. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Kantan and Futsuu (lowest two rows) I see the authentic one, but osutaiko is different, we generally play by keyboard and the difficulty of my kantan and futsuu is already very low. (you can see the evaluation of Charlotte above)
:idea: <All diffs> 02:36:458 ~ 02:49:365 - Keep simple as a deserved break. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Ura Oni (2:12) sorry I keep.
:idea: <All diffs> (except <IMT>) 03:22:853 (1) - (or wherever that last fuusen is) Should have been mapped over normally. Sure, Im going to make approvement about this part
:!: <IMT> 00:08:202 (41) / 01:06:807 (362) / 01:12:562 (395) / 02:02:795 (678) / 03:00:004 (91) - Drumroll ends never replace legitimate notes because they are optional. Shorten and add note. (PS 02:35:760 (915) is OK because going to break anyway)
tetsutaro
Well if not more there are equally many maps that has the space after "feat.". Your move.

And to clarify: I would like to see your Kantan and Futsuu more difficult, because now it is disproportionately easy.
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

tetsutaro wrote:

Well if not more there are equally many maps that has the space after "feat.". Your move.

And to clarify: I would like to see your Kantan and Futsuu more difficult, because now it is disproportionately easy.
er... I don't want to change the 'feat.' because I think it is just an issue of habit. And if I change the name, the people who already downloaded this map will see this map 'not submitted' and therefore not able to see changes I made. I'm really unwilling to see that happen.

And sorry for misunderstood your meaning. I'll try to make kantan and futsuu harder than before.

Thank you for your modding :)
Asagi Mutsuki
厄 路过说一下 到了官方网站看了一下,基本上那里都是用“蝶々P feat. 初音ミク”,简单来说就是feat. 前后空格

个人是强烈建议改啦,不然到时候rank的时候un的几率非常大

而且针对那些看到"not submitted"的 你可以在beatmap description 打个-> redownload after *更新的日期* OwO

no kd
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

cdhsausageboy wrote:

厄 路过说一下 到了官方网站看了一下,基本上那里都是用“蝶々P feat. 初音ミク”,简单来说就是feat. 前后空格

个人是强烈建议改啦,不然到时候rank的时候un的几率非常大

而且针对那些看到"not submitted"的 你可以在beatmap description 打个-> redownload after *更新的日期* OwO

no kd
Uploaded. :)
Charlotte
hi~.from game in chat

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • Muzu tag=add Taiko?
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:11:169 - move to 00:11:266 - because,follow the rhythm
    00:11:346 - move to 00:11:508 - ^

    00:12:216 -add note. (option)
    00:15:004 - ^
    00:15:357 - ^
    00:17:789 - ^
    00:20:593 - ^
    00:20:928 - ^

    00:34:022 - 00:36:464 - This pattern=I think easy.so try think again.
    00:39:588 - 00:42:051 - ^

    01:08:382 - add d.
    01:11:172 - ^
    01:13:952 - ^

    01:16:224 - add k
    01:16:921 - ^

    01:16:576 - not finish.

    01:17:626 - move to 01:17:542 -
    01:17:795 - add D

    01:18:675 - 01:28:086 - same as first kiai time.

    02:01:405 - add d
    02:04:189 - ^

    02:07:864 - move to 02:07:771 -
    02:08:025 - add K

    02:25:990 - move to 02:26:175 -

    02:59:485 - move to 02:59:393 -
    02:59:658 - add D
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Charlotte wrote:

hi~.from game in chat

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • Muzu tag=add Taiko? ok
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:11:169 - move to 00:11:266 - because,follow the rhythm
    00:11:346 - move to 00:11:508 - ^ ok

    00:12:216 -add note. (option)
    00:15:004 - ^
    00:15:357 - ^
    00:17:789 - ^
    00:20:593 - ^
    00:20:928 - ^ changed some pattern

    00:34:022 - 00:36:464 - This pattern=I think easy.so try think again.
    00:39:588 - 00:42:051 - ^ made some changes

    01:08:382 - add d.
    01:11:172 - ^
    01:13:952 - ^ made similar changes

    01:16:224 - add k
    01:16:921 - ^ keep

    01:16:576 - not finish. ^

    01:17:626 - move to 01:17:542 -
    01:17:795 - add D i do this in oni and i choose to make it easier

    01:18:675 - 01:28:086 - same as first kiai time. done

    02:01:405 - add d
    02:04:189 - ^

    02:07:864 - move to 02:07:771 -
    02:08:025 - add K

    02:25:990 - move to 02:26:175 - made some changes.

    02:59:485 - move to 02:59:393 -
    02:59:658 - add D all denied because of former reason.
Good luck :)
Thank you for your continuous mod :)
mliencheng
mod from queue request

[ Kantan]

  1. 貌似沒什麼問題,個人建議1/2的三連音以後若要擺音符 擺一個就夠了,留一點空間
    1. 例: ooo x o o 改為 ooo x _ o
[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:19:539 k 合理一點
  2. 00:28:086 k 高音
[ Muzukashii]

  1. 我不太建議在Muzukashii放dddkkk以外的1/4三連音組合,原因其一 因為本家也極少這樣,其二 跟Futsuu難度差距會太大
    所以像 00:32:621 - 00:54:946 - 01:09:248 - 01:39:597 - 01:50:760 - 02:02:272 - 02:16:225 ... 這類的可以改為 d
  2. 02:05:062 k
  3. 這個Muzukashii跟Futsuu差距有點大,可以簡化一些 :D
[ Oni]

  1. 00:55:818 和 00:55:993 交換顏色感覺不錯
  2. 01:26:516 k
  3. 01:34:888 和 01:35:062 交換顏色
  4. 01:40:469 和 01:40:644 同上,後面相同例子就不列了.. XD
[ IMT's Oni]

  1. It's possible to have some more breaks by removing notes such as for example - 01:18:144 and 01:18:231
  2. Seems fine :)
[ Inner Oni]

  1. 01:23:812 k 聽起來順耳
  2. 02:46:836 和 02:47:097 可以改為 k ? 前後音調都是一樣的
  3. 後面的串放得不錯 :)
[ YYJ's Inner Oni]

  1. 00:06:719 和 00:08:115 建議移除,因為那時間點真的沒有聲音 :o
  2. 00:27:388 ~ 00:28:434 建議改為和 00:32:795 相似的音符
  3. 01:06:109 - 01:06:196 - 01:06:458 - 01:06:545 - 改為d 會順些
  4. 整體上算不錯 :)
SB做得很漂亮 :D
wasonz

tetsutaro wrote:



[Taiko]

:idea: <All diffs> 02:36:458 ~ 02:49:365 - Keep simple as a deserved break. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Ura Oni (2:12) :arrow: ? no ,Keep
:!: <IMT> 00:08:202 (41) / 01:06:807 (362) / 01:12:562 (395) / 02:02:795 (678) / 03:00:004 (91) - Drumroll ends never replace legitimate notes because they are optional. Shorten and add note. (PS 02:35:760 (915) is OK because going to break anyway) hmm ok

mliencheng wrote:

mod from queue request


  1. It's possible to have some more breaks by removing notes such as for example - 01:18:144 and 01:18:231 NO !
  2. Seems fine :)
[ Inner Oni]
Update : http://puu.sh/dG8k7/9815203509.osu
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

mliencheng wrote:

mod from queue request

[ Kantan]

  1. 貌似沒什麼問題,個人建議1/2的三連音以後若要擺音符 擺一個就夠了,留一點空間
    1. 例: ooo x o o 改為 ooo x _ o
除了歌曲的最后一段 全部都留了空间

[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:19:539 k 合理一點 fixed
  2. 00:28:086 k 高音
fixed

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 我不太建議在Muzukashii放dddkkk以外的1/4三連音組合,原因其一 因為本家也極少這樣,其二 跟Futsuu難度差距會太大
    所以像 00:32:621 - 00:54:946 - 01:09:248 - 01:39:597 - 01:50:760 - 02:02:272 - 02:16:225 ... 這類的可以改為 d ok
  2. 02:05:062 k
  3. 這個Muzukashii跟Futsuu差距有點大,可以簡化一些 :D
简化了一部分pattern

[ Oni]

  1. 00:55:818 和 00:55:993 交換顏色感覺不錯 ok
  2. 01:26:516 k 我还是喜欢kkdkd这个组合。 kkdkk有点卡手
  3. 01:34:888 和 01:35:062 交換顏色 ok
  4. 01:40:469 和 01:40:644 同上,後面相同例子就不列了.. XD
done. 后面的也done了 :D

[ IMT's Oni]

  1. It's possible to have some more breaks by removing notes such as for example - 01:18:144 and 01:18:231
  2. Seems fine :)
[ Inner Oni]

  1. 01:23:812 k 聽起來順耳 ok
  2. 02:46:836 和 02:47:097 可以改為 k ? 前後音調都是一樣的 做了一定的改动
  3. 後面的串放得不錯 :)
谢谢 :)

[ YYJ's Inner Oni]

  1. 00:06:719 和 00:08:115 建議移除,因為那時間點真的沒有聲音 :o
  2. 00:27:388 ~ 00:28:434 建議改為和 00:32:795 相似的音符
  3. 01:06:109 - 01:06:196 - 01:06:458 - 01:06:545 - 改為d 會順些
  4. 整體上算不錯 :)
SB做得很漂亮 :D
谢谢 太好了 :D

Thank you for your modding!
Kin
Hi ~

[Kantan]
I think this Kantan is ok, but some pattern are sometimes too hard for kantan diff.

  1. 00:13:086 (1,2,1) - do not use 1/2 triplet on kantan diff. It's a way too hard for kantan 172bpm.
  2. 00:15:876 (1,2,1) - 00:18:667 (1,2,1) - 00:32:969 (2,3,1) - 00:35:411 (1,2,1) - 00:38:202 (1,2,3) - 00:40:993 (1,2,1) - 00:49:365 (1,2,3) - 01:08:900 (1,2,3) - 01:12:039 (1,2,1) - 01:14:481 (1,2,1) - 01:20:062 (1,2,1) - 01:25:644 (1,2,1) - 01:59:132 (1,2,1) - 02:01:923 (1,2,3) - 02:05:062 (1,2,1) - 02:32:621 (1,2,3) - 02:35:411 (1,2,3) - 03:01:923 (1,2,1) - 03:04:714 (1,2,1) - 03:07:504 (1,2,1) - 03:13:086 (1,2,3) - 03:18:667 (1,2,1) - 03:21:807 (1,2,1) - ^
  3. 00:21:458 (1,1,2) - even thought there's 1/1 break for all note. It may be kinda hard with the fact you "stream" for the drum roll, and then d k 1/1 after. I think it will be better to finish the drum roll here : 00:22:155 - .
  4. 00:43:783 (1,1) - kinda the same as this one ^. Reduce de drum roll to here ? 00:44:481 -
  5. 00:52:155 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think there's too much 1/1 note. Maybe try oo oO or ooo O.
  6. 00:59:132 (1,3) - add a finish to make it as big note ? both have a strong cymbal sound.
  7. 01:04:714 (1) - ^
  8. 01:28:434 (1,1) - same reason as simular pattern : reduce the drum roll to here ? 01:29:132 -
  9. 01:33:318 (2) - I think this note should be there 01:32:969 - . Since the music is stronger.
  10. 01:36:807 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think there's too much 1/1 note. Maybe try oo oo or ooo o.
  11. 01:54:946 (1) - change as D. The drum here is really strong, + there's also a cymbal sound.
  12. 02:08:900 (1) - ^
  13. 02:10:295 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think there's too much 1/1 note. Maybe try oo oo or ooo o.
  14. 02:28:434 (1) - 02:31:225 (1) - change both as D. You did it for simular pattern like those one 02:25:644 (1) - 02:17:272 (1) - 02:20:062 (1) - etc...
  15. 02:36:807 (1) - change as D ? there's a cymbal sound.
  16. 02:54:946 (1) - ^ + the drum is strong. And you did it here : 02:57:737 (1) - .
  17. 03:10:295 (1,1) - same as simular pattern. Reduce the slider roll to here ? 03:10:993 - .
    Also, the finish is missing here : 03:11:690 (1) - .
  18. 03:14:481 (1) - I don't think a D is necessary here since this note is not so strong. I think a simple d is ok abd better.
  19. 03:16:574 (1,2) - swap as d k ? This one 03:16:923 (2) - as k sounds better with the cymbal.
[Futsuu]


  1. 00:10:295 (1) - change as D for the cymbal sound ?
  2. 00:11:690 (1) - ^. Also it'll mark the fact it's a new part of the song.
  3. 00:18:667 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - instead of ddd kkk d, I think a ddd k kkd sounds better with the piano and also the drum.
  4. 00:35:411 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - ^
  5. 00:39:597 (1) - add finish to make it as D ? It'll sounds better with the drum.
  6. 00:50:760 (1) - ^
  7. 00:56:341 (1) - ^
  8. 01:04:714 (1) - ^ ; as K.
no kd for now, I'll finish the mod asap
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

[Kantan]
I think this Kantan is ok, but some pattern are sometimes too hard for kantan diff.

  1. 00:13:086 (1,2,1) - do not use 1/2 triplet on kantan diff. It's a way too hard for kantan 172bpm.
  2. 00:15:876 (1,2,1) - 00:18:667 (1,2,1) - 00:32:969 (2,3,1) - 00:35:411 (1,2,1) - 00:38:202 (1,2,3) - 00:40:993 (1,2,1) - 00:49:365 (1,2,3) - 01:08:900 (1,2,3) - 01:12:039 (1,2,1) - 01:14:481 (1,2,1) - 01:20:062 (1,2,1) - 01:25:644 (1,2,1) - 01:59:132 (1,2,1) - 02:01:923 (1,2,3) - 02:05:062 (1,2,1) - 02:32:621 (1,2,3) - 02:35:411 (1,2,3) - 03:01:923 (1,2,1) - 03:04:714 (1,2,1) - 03:07:504 (1,2,1) - 03:13:086 (1,2,3) - 03:18:667 (1,2,1) - 03:21:807 (1,2,1) - ^ done
  3. 00:21:458 (1,1,2) - even thought there's 1/1 break for all note. It may be kinda hard with the fact you "stream" for the drum roll, and then d k 1/1 after. I think it will be better to finish the drum roll here : 00:22:155 - . ok
  4. 00:43:783 (1,1) - kinda the same as this one ^. Reduce de drum roll to here ? 00:44:481 - ^
  5. 00:52:155 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think there's too much 1/1 note. Maybe try oo oO or ooo O. ok
  6. 00:59:132 (1,3) - add a finish to make it as big note ? both have a strong cymbal sound. no. quiet part here
  7. 01:04:714 (1) - ^ ^
  8. 01:28:434 (1,1) - same reason as simular pattern : reduce the drum roll to here ? 01:29:132 - fine
  9. 01:33:318 (2) - I think this note should be there 01:32:969 - . Since the music is stronger. made some other change
  10. 01:36:807 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think there's too much 1/1 note. Maybe try oo oo or ooo o. ooo o
  11. 01:54:946 (1) - change as D. The drum here is really strong, + there's also a cymbal sound. fine
  12. 02:08:900 (1) - ^ fine
  13. 02:10:295 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think there's too much 1/1 note. Maybe try oo oo or ooo o. ok i leave it at the end
  14. 02:28:434 (1) - 02:31:225 (1) - change both as D. You did it for simular pattern like those one 02:25:644 (1) - 02:17:272 (1) - 02:20:062 (1) - etc... keep
  15. 02:36:807 (1) - change as D ? there's a cymbal sound. nope but made some change here
  16. 02:54:946 (1) - ^ + the drum is strong. And you did it here : 02:57:737 (1) - . ok
  17. 03:10:295 (1,1) - same as simular pattern. Reduce the slider roll to here ? 03:10:993 - . ok
    Also, the finish is missing here : 03:11:690 (1) - . done
  18. 03:14:481 (1) - I don't think a D is necessary here since this note is not so strong. I think a simple d is ok abd better. to be same as following stream
  19. 03:16:574 (1,2) - swap as d k ? This one 03:16:923 (2) - as k sounds better with the cymbal. fine
[Futsuu]


  1. 00:10:295 (1) - change as D for the cymbal sound ? keep
  2. 00:11:690 (1) - ^. Also it'll mark the fact it's a new part of the song. good idea
  3. 00:18:667 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - instead of ddd kkk d, I think a ddd k kkd sounds better with the piano and also the drum.
  4. 00:35:411 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - ^ both changed to ddd k k d
  5. 00:39:597 (1) - add finish to make it as D ? It'll sounds better with the drum.
  6. 00:50:760 (1) - ^
  7. 00:56:341 (1) - ^
  8. 01:04:714 (1) - ^ ; as K. all changed and made some other changes on similar parts
no kd for now, I'll finish the mod asap
waiting for your further modding :)
Kin
ok, here is the 2nd part of the mod :

[Futsuu]

  1. 01:54:248 (1) - I think this one as k sounds better with the vocal + drum.
  2. 01:54:946 (1) - change as D ? for the strong cymbal sound.
  3. 02:26:167 (2) - change this one as k for the piano ?
  4. 02:33:318 (1) - change this one as k ? It'll sounds better with the vocal and also the drum.
  5. 02:36:807 - 02:46:574 - since this part is more calm than the other. Try to make this part easier than the other ?
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:11:254 (2) - change this one as k ? It sounds better with the piano. Also I think It'll be a bit better because I think there's too much d spam.
  2. 00:25:469 - add a note for the vocal ? since you're following the vocal, it'd be better to do it properly.
  3. 00:27:562 (3) - change this one as k ? The vocal is going more high pitched.
  4. 00:32:969 (2) - change this one as k ? the pitch is almost the same as this one : 00:32:795 (1) - .
  5. 00:57:737 - add a note for the vocal ? your pattern are following the vocal, so why not this one ?
  6. 00:58:434 (1) - change this one as k ? the voice goes higher here.
  7. 00:59:132 - 00:59:307 - add a note to both for the vocal ?
  8. 01:03:318 - ^
  9. 01:09:946 (2) - maybe just me, but I think this one as k sounds better.
  10. 01:16:225 - 01:16:923 - add note for the vocal ?
  11. 01:32:446 - ^
  12. 01:38:028 - ^
  13. 01:47:621 (1) - delete this note to be more consistent with your pattern ?
  14. 01:55:993 (2,1,2,1) - how about a k k d d k instead of k k d k ?
  15. 02:06:458 (1) - it's maybe just me, but I like this one as k.
  16. 02:11:167 (2) - change this one as k ?It'll make a difference with this note 02:11:341 (3) - .
  17. 02:14:132 (3) - change this one as k ? It'll sounds better with the cymbal and the piano's pitch.
  18. 02:22:504 (4) - I think this one as k flow better with other pattern.
  19. 02:26:516 (2) - change this one as k for the melody ? the piano's melody is higher pitched.
  20. 02:31:225 (1) - ^
again still not finish sry >_<
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Kin wrote:

ok, here is the 2nd part of the mod :

[Futsuu]

  1. 01:54:248 (1) - I think this one as k sounds better with the vocal + drum. keep
  2. 01:54:946 (1) - change as D ? for the strong cymbal sound. ^
  3. 02:26:167 (2) - change this one as k for the piano ? ok
  4. 02:33:318 (1) - change this one as k ? It'll sounds better with the vocal and also the drum. ^
  5. 02:36:807 - 02:46:574 - since this part is more calm than the other. Try to make this part easier than the other ?ok
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:11:254 (2) - change this one as k ? It sounds better with the piano. Also I think It'll be a bit better because I think there's too much d spam. ok
  2. 00:25:469 - add a note for the vocal ? since you're following the vocal, it'd be better to do it properly. nope. this will increase the difficulty rapidly
  3. 00:27:562 (3) - change this one as k ? The vocal is going more high pitched. ok
  4. 00:32:969 (2) - change this one as k ? the pitch is almost the same as this one : 00:32:795 (1) - . ok
  5. 00:57:737 - add a note for the vocal ? your pattern are following the vocal, so why not this one ? I intended to leave a space here. Its a kinda style
  6. 00:58:434 (1) - change this one as k ? the voice goes higher here. ok
  7. 00:59:132 - 00:59:307 - add a note to both for the vocal ? ^
  8. 01:03:318 - ^ ^
  9. 01:09:946 (2) - maybe just me, but I think this one as k sounds better. keep
  10. 01:16:225 - 01:16:923 - add note for the vocal ? keep. i prefer blank here.
  11. 01:32:446 - ^ ^
  12. 01:38:028 - ^ ^
  13. 01:47:621 (1) - delete this note to be more consistent with your pattern ? ok
  14. 01:55:993 (2,1,2,1) - how about a k k d d k instead of k k d k ? ok
  15. 02:06:458 (1) - it's maybe just me, but I like this one as k. i keep.
  16. 02:11:167 (2) - change this one as k ?It'll make a difference with this note 02:11:341 (3) - . keep
  17. 02:14:132 (3) - change this one as k ? It'll sounds better with the cymbal and the piano's pitch. keep. the point of this part is not to follow the piano, but free style.
  18. 02:22:504 (4) - I think this one as k flow better with other pattern. ^
  19. 02:26:516 (2) - change this one as k for the melody ? the piano's melody is higher pitched. ^ and i shortened some of the patterns
  20. 02:31:225 (1) - ^ok
again still not finish sry >_<
nvm. Im waiting for u :D
Kin
[Muzukashii]

  1. 02:44:830 (3,5) - change both as k for the vocal ?
  2. 02:51:283 (2) - I think this one should also be a k. The voice goes high pitched. the pitch is almost simular to this one : 02:51:458 (1) - .
  3. 02:59:132 (1,1,1) - change as this ? http://puu.sh/dMYJK/c1a87355fe.jpg the current one ignore too much strong beat.
[Oni]

  1. 00:11:341 (1) - maybe it's just me but a note here sounds a bit wrong to me. I think it should be better if this one would be there 00:11:516 - .
  2. 00:15:004 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - instead of k ddkkd, I think kkddk d is a way better with the piano.
  3. 00:34:539 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the 5 notes streams feels 1/2 too late for me. I think it would be better if the pattern is ooooo o.
  4. 00:47:184 (1) - might be weird, but this one as k sounds good with the pitch voice. (also you did it here : 01:42:911 (1,1) - )
  5. 00:59:307 - maybe add a k here ?
  6. 01:14:132 (1,1) - swap as k d ? This one 01:14:132 (1) - as k is a way better with the vocal a previous kkk, but might feel weird if the next note as k.
  7. 02:04:365 (1) - I think this one as k is better for the vocal. To make it sounds good with the pattern, maybe change this tripet 02:04:539 (1,1,1) - to ddd or ddk ?
  8. 02:18:841 (1,1) - change both as k for the piano ? Also the spam d here is kinda strange to me.
  9. 02:37:068 (1) - to me, this note will be better as k for the vocal. Maybe change only this note as k, or the whole triplet : 02:36:981 (1,1,1) - as k ?
  10. 02:36:458 - 02:43:609 - I can't really understand your 3/2 break >_<
  11. 02:53:725 (1,1,1) - I think kdk will be better for the vocal.
  12. 03:23:202 (15,16,17,18,19) - how about k dkd k ? It sounds better with the piano.
[IMT's Oni]

  1. 00:09:859 (49) - change this one as k ? there's the piano note here.
  2. 01:21:632 (461) - change this one as k for the high pitched piano sound ?
  3. 01:42:562 (578,581) - how about changing both as k to follow th vocal while the drum ?
  4. 01:54:597 (630,631,632,633,634) - maybe change as ddkdk ?
  5. 01:56:690 (641,642,643,644,645) - 5 note here sounds kinda weird to me. I think a triplet + simple will sounds better.
  6. 02:33:667 (910,911,912,913,914) - maybe change as ddkdk ?
  7. 03:23:202 (241,248) - I think both should be k, and this one 03:23:987 (249) - a d. for drum, or melody, a k 03:23:987 (249) - here sounds wrong to me.
[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:06:283 (1) - I know the intention, but the music isn't simular to this one 00:04:714 (1,1,1,1) - . Make it different would be better. Or just delete this note.
  2. 00:07:679 (1) - ^
  3. 00:30:353 (1) - change this one as k ? the voice goes high pitched here.
  4. 00:59:307 - I think add a k here for the vocal won't be a problem since it's a Inner Oni.
  5. 01:55:644 (1,1,1,1,1) - how about kkddk for this one ? the voice here 01:55:644 (1) - is kinda simular to this one 01:55:469 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to make it the same.
  6. 02:25:818 (1) - change this one as k since the piano here is simular to this one 02:25:644 (1) - ?
  7. 02:39:074 (1) - I think if this note is deleted, it'll plays better.
  8. 02:41:865 (1) - 02:44:655 (1) - ^
  9. 03:23:900 (23) - I think this one as k is better for the piano and also the drum
well, I think I finnaly finished my mod, sry for the long delay >_<
good luck \o
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Kin wrote:

[Muzukashii]

  1. 02:44:830 (3,5) - change both as k for the vocal ? nope, dont want to follow the vocal
  2. 02:51:283 (2) - I think this one should also be a k. The voice goes high pitched. the pitch is almost simular to this one : 02:51:458 (1) - . d is ok to me
  3. 02:59:132 (1,1,1) - change as this ? http://puu.sh/dMYJK/c1a87355fe.jpg the current one ignore too much strong beat.i know, i map it on purpose.
[Oni]

  1. 00:11:341 (1) - maybe it's just me but a note here sounds a bit wrong to me. I think it should be better if this one would be there 00:11:516 - . made some change
  2. 00:15:004 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - instead of k ddkkd, I think kkddk d is a way better with the piano. keep
  3. 00:34:539 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the 5 notes streams feels 1/2 too late for me. I think it would be better if the pattern is ooooo o.keep
  4. 00:47:184 (1) - might be weird, but this one as k sounds good with the pitch voice. (also you did it here : 01:42:911 (1,1) - )
  5. 00:59:307 - maybe add a k here ? keep, to make it various
  6. 01:14:132 (1,1) - swap as k d ? This one 01:14:132 (1) - as k is a way better with the vocal a previous kkk, but might feel weird if the next note as k. no i dont want any 5 stream in the calm part
  7. 02:04:365 (1) - I think this one as k is better for the vocal. To make it sounds good with the pattern, maybe change this tripet 02:04:539 (1,1,1) - to ddd or ddk ? made some change
  8. 02:18:841 (1,1) - change both as k for the piano ? Also the spam d here is kinda strange to me. keep
  9. 02:37:068 (1) - to me, this note will be better as k for the vocal. Maybe change only this note as k, or the whole triplet : 02:36:981 (1,1,1) - as k ? keep
  10. 02:36:458 - 02:43:609 - I can't really understand your 3/2 break >_< :)
  11. 02:53:725 (1,1,1) - I think kdk will be better for the vocal.
  12. 03:23:202 (15,16,17,18,19) - how about k dkd k ? It sounds better with the piano.ok
[IMT's Oni]

  1. 00:09:859 (49) - change this one as k ? there's the piano note here.
  2. 01:21:632 (461) - change this one as k for the high pitched piano sound ?
  3. 01:42:562 (578,581) - how about changing both as k to follow th vocal while the drum ?
  4. 01:54:597 (630,631,632,633,634) - maybe change as ddkdk ?
  5. 01:56:690 (641,642,643,644,645) - 5 note here sounds kinda weird to me. I think a triplet + simple will sounds better.
  6. 02:33:667 (910,911,912,913,914) - maybe change as ddkdk ?
  7. 03:23:202 (241,248) - I think both should be k, and this one 03:23:987 (249) - a d. for drum, or melody, a k 03:23:987 (249) - here sounds wrong to me.
[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:06:283 (1) - I know the intention, but the music isn't simular to this one 00:04:714 (1,1,1,1) - . Make it different would be better. Or just delete this note. ddkk
  2. 00:07:679 (1) - ^ ddkk
  3. 00:30:353 (1) - change this one as k ? the voice goes high pitched here. keep
  4. 00:59:307 - I think add a k here for the vocal won't be a problem since it's a Inner Oni. no, rest time
  5. 01:55:644 (1,1,1,1,1) - how about kkddk for this one ? the voice here 01:55:644 (1) - is kinda simular to this one 01:55:469 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to make it the same. ok
  6. 02:25:818 (1) - change this one as k since the piano here is simular to this one 02:25:644 (1) - ? ok
  7. 02:39:074 (1) - I think if this note is deleted, it'll plays better. made another change
  8. 02:41:865 (1) - 02:44:655 (1) - ^
  9. 03:23:900 (23) - I think this one as k is better for the piano and also the drum ok
well, I think I finnaly finished my mod, sry for the long delay >_<
good luck \o
Thank you for your modding! It is helpful.
yaoyujie0332

tetsutaro wrote:




[General]
:idea: Artist name (romanized): space between "feat. Hatsune Miku"

[Taiko]
:idea: Perceived Ratings: 2★ Kantan/1★ Futsuu/4★ Muzu/8★ Oni/9★ YYJ/8★ IMT/9★ Inner Oni
:idea: <Kantan><Futsuu> Very deficient. The complexity of this song warrants way more 1-beat and 1/2-beat separations. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Kantan and Futsuu (lowest two rows)
:idea: <All diffs> 02:36:458 ~ 02:49:365 - Keep simple as a deserved break. Refer Senbonzakura authentic Ura Oni (2:12) OK
:idea: <All diffs> (except <IMT>) 03:22:853 (1) - (or wherever that last fuusen is) Should have been mapped over normally. Right
:!: <IMT> 00:08:202 (41) / 01:06:807 (362) / 01:12:562 (395) / 02:02:795 (678) / 03:00:004 (91) - Drumroll ends never replace legitimate notes because they are optional. Shorten and add note. (PS 02:35:760 (915) is OK because going to break anyway)
yaoyujie0332

mliencheng wrote:

mod from queue request



[ YYJ's Inner Oni]

  1. 00:06:719 和 00:08:115 建議移除,因為那時間點真的沒有聲音 :o 删除的话谱面总觉得不是很连贯,Keep :o
  2. 00:27:388 ~ 00:28:434 建議改為和 00:32:795 相似的音符 已修改
  3. 01:06:109 - 01:06:196 - 01:06:458 - 01:06:545 - 改為d 會順些 OK
  4. 整體上算不錯 :)
SB做得很漂亮 :D
KUURAhoshi
Hello ! Special request from PM ><
Duration > 3:00.. So i only mod Muzukashii
[General]
  1. BG Size, try 1366 X 768
  2. Turn on “Widescreen Support” ?
  3. Remove "Taiko" from the tags
  4. Some notes are different at each diff, check it
  5. 00:34:016 - Remove this Kiai
[Muzukashii]
HP +1,
00:06:109 (1) – k
00:07:155 (1,1) – Ctrl+G
00:08:551 (1,1) - ^
00:10:295 (1) – K
00:11:690 (2) - ^
00:17:272 (1) - ^
00:20:062 (1) - ^
00:21:458 (1) – Change to slider
00:22:853 (1) – K
00:28:434 (1) - ^
00:39:597 (1) - ^
00:42:388 (1) - ^
00:45:179 (1) - ^
00:46:748 (2) – k
00:50:760 (1) - K
00:54:946 (1) – k
00:56:341 (1) – K
01:01:923 (1) - ^
01:04:714 (1) - ^
01:09:946 – Add k
01:10:121 – Add d
01:18:667 – Stop the Kiai here
01:28:434 (1) – Slider ?
01:29:830 (1) – K
01:35:411 (1) - ^
01:40:993 (1) - ^
01:46:225 (2) – d
01:46:574 (1) – K
01:52:155 (1) - ^
01:54:946 (1) - ^
02:08:900 (1) - ^
02:14:481 (1) - ^
02:20:062 (1) - ^
02:25:644 (1) - ^
03:00:528 – Stop the Kiai here
03:03:841 (4) – d
03:06:109 (1) – K
03:08:900 (1) - ^
03:10:295 (1) – Slider
03:15:004 (4) – d
03:17:272 (1) – K
03:20:062 (1) - ^

Good luck..
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Hello ! Special request from PM ><
Duration > 3:00.. So i only mod Muzukashii
[General]
  1. BG Size, try 1366 X 768 the bg size is enough imo
  2. Turn on “Widescreen Support” ? i just turned it off
  3. Remove "Taiko" from the tags fine
  4. Some notes are different at each diff, check it i know, but i dont want to change. They should be different.
  5. 00:34:016 - Remove this Kiai
nope. very typical kiai
[Muzukashii]
HP +1, keep
00:06:109 (1) – k keep
00:07:155 (1,1) – Ctrl+G keep
00:08:551 (1,1) - ^ keep
00:10:295 (1) – K keep
00:11:690 (2) - ^ change to D
00:17:272 (1) - ^ keep
00:20:062 (1) - ^ keep
00:21:458 (1) – Change to slider no, I hate slider in diff over muzu, so i won't do this
00:22:853 (1) – K keep
00:28:434 (1) - ^ keep
00:39:597 (1) - ^ keep
00:42:388 (1) - ^ keep
00:45:179 (1) - ^ keep
00:46:748 (2) – k ok
00:50:760 (1) - K keep
00:54:946 (1) – k ok
00:56:341 (1) – K keep
01:01:923 (1) - ^ keep
01:04:714 (1) - ^ keep
01:09:946 – Add k d
01:10:121 – Add d ok
01:18:667 – Stop the Kiai here nope. typical kial
01:28:434 (1) – Slider ? ^ i hate slider :)
01:29:830 (1) – K keep
01:35:411 (1) - ^ keep
01:40:993 (1) - ^ keep
01:46:225 (2) – d keep
01:46:574 (1) – K keep
01:52:155 (1) - ^ D
01:54:946 (1) - ^ ok
02:08:900 (1) - ^ keep
02:14:481 (1) - ^ keep
02:20:062 (1) - ^ keep
02:25:644 (1) - ^ keep
03:00:528 – Stop the Kiai here keep
03:03:841 (4) – d ok
03:06:109 (1) – K keep
03:08:900 (1) - ^ keep
03:10:295 (1) – Slider keep
03:15:004 (4) – d keep
03:17:272 (1) – K keep
03:20:062 (1) - ^ keep

Good luck..
Thank you for your mod
Grimbow
Hi! From mod queue! Really sorry it took so long to get round to this :(

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:41:341 (1,1) - Ctrl+g these two notes, it will fit the drums better since there is a snare "clap" at 00:41:341 -
00:45:179 (1) - Add a finish to this note. I feel like there should be emphasis one the vocals starting again and since there are also cymbal crashes in the background, it matches up quite nicely
01:04:714 (1) - Maybe add a finish to this note? When I tried it out it felt like it fit the map pretty well
02:31:225 (1) - Maybe add a finish to this note? It's a transition between the solo and the vocals coming back so I think it would make nice emphasis
02:36:807 (1) - Maybe add a finish here too? It's another transition and there are cymbal hits in the song. This one isn't too important though

[Futsuu]

00:45:179 (1) - Add a finish to this note, same reasoning as in Kantan
01:57:737 (1) - Add a finish here since you've had one at the start of every other kiai time before this
02:03:318 (1) - Add a finish to this note since you have ones on 01:13:086 (1) - and 00:39:597 (1) -
02:49:365 (1) - Add a finish here since it's the start of kiai time and all the others have one too
03:19:016 (1) - Change this to a k so it contrasts with the triplet before it! (Or change 03:18:667 (1,1) - to k's so it matches with the triplet after)

[Muzukashii]

00:59:132 -Consider adding a note here since you are following the vocals closely in this section. Leaving it empty makes an awkward gap since the vocals here are particularly stressed
02:13:434 (1,2) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the ddk d d pattern flows better with the music here
02:39:597 - Add a d here since there are some unmapped vocals
02:42:388 - Add a d here for the same reason as above

[Oni]

00:10:121 - Add a k here. I'm assuming you are mapping the piano here and there is a very high pitched key played here
00:50:498 - to 00:50:760 - I think for this part here, you should either make all the notes between these two times k's, or add a finish to 00:50:760 (1) - to give more character to this section!
01:51:807 - to 01:52:155 - Add k's between these two points or change 01:52:155 (1) - to a D for the same reason as above
01:54:248 (1) - Change this to a k since the vocals and drums are a higher pitch here
02:39:597 - Add d here for the same reason as Muzukashii, there are unmapped vocals and it leaves an awkward gap
02:42:388 - Add a d here for the same reason as above

[IMT's Oni]

02:35:760 (920) - Start this slider at 02:35:411 -, it's a little bit awkward having the gap that large
03:25:179 (259,260,261) - Maybe change these to 1/3 notes? I think it fits this part well
03:25:411 (261) - Change this to a k to make it match the snare hit in the song

[YYJ's Inner Oni]

00:39:161 - Add a k here and change 00:39:248 (109) - to a k? It sounded nice when I tested it out in the map!
00:44:830 (8) - Change this to a k and add a k at 00:44:917 - to map the drum roll here
02:16:051 (333,334,335,336) - Change this to ddkd to add a bit more variation to this section
02:27:214 (426,427,428,429) - Same with this pattern here, change to ddkd
03:10:295 (40,41,42,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change these two patterns to kkddd to add variation to this section too

Inner Oni is great fun to play and I can't find anything wrong with it! Good luck with getting the mapset ranked, it was great fun modding it! :D have some stars for the good work and nice SB! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue! Really sorry it took so long to get round to this :(

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:41:341 (1,1) - Ctrl+g these two notes, it will fit the drums better since there is a snare "clap" at 00:41:341 - keep
00:45:179 (1) - Add a finish to this note. I feel like there should be emphasis one the vocals starting again and since there are also cymbal crashes in the background, it matches up quite nicely keep, just as what ive done here 01:29:830
01:04:714 (1) - Maybe add a finish to this note? When I tried it out it felt like it fit the map pretty well keep, i prefer no finish here
02:31:225 (1) - Maybe add a finish to this note? It's a transition between the solo and the vocals coming back so I think it would make nice emphasis ok and also add finish here 02:34:016
02:36:807 (1) - Maybe add a finish here too? It's another transition and there are cymbal hits in the song. This one isn't too important though nope, light vocal here.

[Futsuu]

00:45:179 (1) - Add a finish to this note, same reasoning as in Kantan ^
01:57:737 (1) - Add a finish here since you've had one at the start of every other kiai time before this ok
02:03:318 (1) - Add a finish to this note since you have ones on 01:13:086 (1) - and 00:39:597 (1) - ok
02:49:365 (1) - Add a finish here since it's the start of kiai time and all the others have one too made some changes
03:19:016 (1) - Change this to a k so it contrasts with the triplet before it! (Or change 03:18:667 (1,1) - to k's so it matches with the triplet after) ok

[Muzukashii]

00:59:132 -Consider adding a note here since you are following the vocals closely in this section. Leaving it empty makes an awkward gap since the vocals here are particularly stressed fine
02:13:434 (1,2) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the ddk d d pattern flows better with the music here freestyle here
02:39:597 - Add a d here since there are some unmapped vocals
02:42:388 - Add a d here for the same reason as above keep, its important here.

[Oni]

00:10:121 - Add a k here. I'm assuming you are mapping the piano here and there is a very high pitched key played here ok
00:50:498 - to 00:50:760 - I think for this part here, you should either make all the notes between these two times k's, or add a finish to 00:50:760 (1) - to give more character to this section! get the idea but keep
01:51:807 - to 01:52:155 - Add k's between these two points or change 01:52:155 (1) - to a D for the same reason as above ^
01:54:248 (1) - Change this to a k since the vocals and drums are a higher pitch here made some change to show the vocal fall.
02:39:597 - Add d here for the same reason as Muzukashii, there are unmapped vocals and it leaves an awkward gap
02:42:388 - Add a d here for the same reason as above ^

[IMT's Oni]

02:35:760 (920) - Start this slider at 02:35:411 -, it's a little bit awkward having the gap that large
03:25:179 (259,260,261) - Maybe change these to 1/3 notes? I think it fits this part well
03:25:411 (261) - Change this to a k to make it match the snare hit in the song

[YYJ's Inner Oni]

00:39:161 - Add a k here and change 00:39:248 (109) - to a k? It sounded nice when I tested it out in the map!
00:44:830 (8) - Change this to a k and add a k at 00:44:917 - to map the drum roll here
02:16:051 (333,334,335,336) - Change this to ddkd to add a bit more variation to this section
02:27:214 (426,427,428,429) - Same with this pattern here, change to ddkd
03:10:295 (40,41,42,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change these two patterns to kkddd to add variation to this section too

Inner Oni is great fun to play and I can't find anything wrong with it! Good luck with getting the mapset ranked, it was great fun modding it! :D have some stars for the good work and nice SB! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Thank you for your modding and stars! :)
rew0825
Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:32:621 (1) - d
  2. 01:01:225 (2) - k
  3. 01:11:690 (1,1) - ctrl+g
  4. 02:02:272 (3,1) - k
  5. 02:06:807 (2) - d
  6. 02:19:365 (1) - k
  7. 02:53:900 (1,1) - ctrl+g

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:10:993 (1) - k
  2. 00:25:295 (2) - k
  3. 00:27:388 (1,1) - ctrl+g
  4. 00:35:760 (1,1) - ctrl+g
  5. 00:41:341 (1) - k
  6. 00:47:272 (1) - move to 00:47:446 and change 00:46:923 (1,2,1,1) - to kd dk
  7. 00:49:365 (1) - d
  8. 00:49:539 (2) - move to 00:49:888 and 00:50:062 (1) - move to 00:50:237 and change that to kd dk
  9. 00:53:202 (1) - k
  10. 01:00:876 (1) - change to d and 01:01:225 (1) - change to k
  11. 01:12:737 (1) - k
  12. 01:14:830 (1) - d
  13. 01:25:993 (1) - k
  14. 01:31:923 (3) - move to 01:32:097
  15. 01:37:504 (3) - move to 01:37:679
  16. 01:54:248 (1) - k
  17. 02:33:318 (1) - k
  18. 02:51:458 (1) - k
  19. 03:07:853 (1) - k
  20. 03:13:434 (1,1) - ctrl+g

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:07:853 (2) - k
  2. 01:13:434 (2) - k and 01:13:783 (1) - d
  3. 01:34:888 (1) - d
  4. 01:46:051 (1) - d
  5. 01:49:190 (2) - k
  6. 02:05:237 (2) - d
  7. 02:11:167 (2) - k
  8. 02:22:155 (4) - k
  9. 02:32:969 (1) - k
  10. 02:44:655 (2) - Delete and 02:45:179 (4) - k

[ Oni]
  1. 00:17:882 (1) - k
  2. 00:21:022 (2) - k
  3. 01:06:807 (1) - k
  4. 01:45:353 (1,1) - ctrl+g and 01:46:225 (1) - d
  5. 02:32:272 (1) - d
  6. 03:12:650 (2) - k

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:32:621 (1) - d keep
  2. 01:01:225 (2) - k vocal goes down here
  3. 01:11:690 (1,1) - ctrl+g keep
  4. 02:02:272 (3,1) - k changed to kd
  5. 02:06:807 (2) - d ok
  6. 02:19:365 (1) - k keep
  7. 02:53:900 (1,1) - ctrl+g alright

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:10:993 (1) - k ok
  2. 00:25:295 (2) - k keep
  3. 00:27:388 (1,1) - ctrl+g keep
  4. 00:35:760 (1,1) - ctrl+g keep
  5. 00:41:341 (1) - k keep
  6. 00:47:272 (1) - move to 00:47:446 and change 00:46:923 (1,2,1,1) - to kd dk no good here imo
  7. 00:49:365 (1) - d keep
  8. 00:49:539 (2) - move to 00:49:888 and 00:50:062 (1) - move to 00:50:237 and change that to kd dk ^
  9. 00:53:202 (1) - k ok
  10. 01:00:876 (1) - change to d and 01:01:225 (1) - change to k keep, but made some changes
  11. 01:12:737 (1) - k keep
  12. 01:14:830 (1) - d ok
  13. 01:25:993 (1) - k ok
  14. 01:31:923 (3) - move to 01:32:097 denied
  15. 01:37:504 (3) - move to 01:37:679 ^
  16. 01:54:248 (1) - k nope but changed former note to k
  17. 02:33:318 (1) - k ^
  18. 02:51:458 (1) - k ok
  19. 03:07:853 (1) - k keep
  20. 03:13:434 (1,1) - ctrl+g keep

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:07:853 (2) - k keep
  2. 01:13:434 (2) - k and 01:13:783 (1) - d good idea
  3. 01:34:888 (1) - d keep
  4. 01:46:051 (1) - d ^
  5. 01:49:190 (2) - k ok
  6. 02:05:237 (2) - d ok
  7. 02:11:167 (2) - k keep
  8. 02:22:155 (4) - k keep
  9. 02:32:969 (1) - k ok
  10. 02:44:655 (2) - Delete and 02:45:179 (4) - k get the point, made other change

[ Oni]
  1. 00:17:882 (1) - k keep
  2. 00:21:022 (2) - k keep
  3. 01:06:807 (1) - k keep
  4. 01:45:353 (1,1) - ctrl+g and 01:46:225 (1) - d accept the first suggestion.
  5. 02:32:272 (1) - d alright
  6. 03:12:650 (2) - k keep... seems that you dont like ddkdd :D

Good luck :)
Thank you for you modding!
And sorry for my late reply.. Cuz I have to pass my final exam.
Akiyama Mizuki
Okay finally I'm here to mod... >_>

Extreme laziness brought here the problem, that the diff has been fixed a bit and my modding for Kantan and Futsuu (Until 00:41:341 (1) - ) has been made several weeks ago. Maybe there would be some lines that have already fixed. My apologies..

Kantan
00:14:481 (2) - d - The finisher is meant to represent the song's emphasis or to fit the crash on songs have drums like this (or w/e it fits). But I hear no crash or legit emphasis here, and it very likely means the finisher doesn't fit. A lot of new-comers tend to make this kinda mistakes. I guess you'll do better in future maps considering it's like your first map :D
00:22:853 (1) - D - In this case there's crash, so I recommend you to follow the drums.
00:36:807 (1) - d - Following the drums.
00:45:179 (1) - D - ^
00:53:551 (1) - d - ^
01:04:714 (1) - K - ^
01:10:295 (1) - d - ^
01:12:039 - How about adding a note? I guess it would make more sense because it would make better consistency with the very previous pattern 01:08:900 (1,2,3) - k would be fine, considering music's ambience such as drums, vocal's pitch or so. :3
01:16:574 (2) - k - Again, it doesn't really fit the drums. And why I recommend k is, the pitch is gradually becoming higher, so k would be better to represent the song.
01:21:458 (1) - d - Following the drums.
01:29:830 (1) - D - ^
01:38:202 (1) - d - ^
01:39:946 (1) - k - Following the drums again maybe, but hearing the vocal's pitch, it makes song's ambience higher imo, I think k makes more sense.
01:40:993 (1) - K - Following the drums.
01:49:365 (1) - d - ^
02:00:528 (1) - d - ^
02:02:272 (3) - k - Pretty much same as 01:39:946 (1) -
02:08:900 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:14:481 (1) - D - ^
02:17:272 (1) - K - ^
02:25:644 (1) - K - ^
02:28:434 (1) - D - ^
02:36:807 (1) - D - ^
02:52:155 (1) - d - ^
02:58:434 (2) - k - Same as 01:16:574 (2) - goes for it.
03:03:318 (1) - d - Following the drums.
03:14:481 (1) - d - ^
03:16:225 (2,1,2) - d k k - The piano's pitch becomes lower on 03:16:225 (2) - compared to 03:15:876 (1) - , and it becomes higher on 03:16:574 (1) - .. so yeah ;D

Futsuu
00:10:295 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:17:272 (1) - D - ^
00:20:062 (1) - D - ^
00:22:853 (1) - D - ^
00:25:295 (2) - k - It follows the song better and, if you look at the white lines on timelines, you'll see here you almostly used k on white lines. So for keeping consistency!
00:27:388 (1) - ^
00:28:434 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:41:341 (1) - k - In this part 00:40:993 (1,2,1) - , the piano's pitch is going up until 00:41:341 (1) - and just d pattern is not that good way to represent the song.
00:42:388 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:45:179 (1) - ^
00:55:818 (2,1) - Reverse. There's vocal's pitch going up and also the drum's snare. k d is kinda for the music's ambience going down, but the opposite happens here.
01:01:225 (1,1) - K D - Following the drums. Specifically the K for ride on 01:01:225 (1) - and crash on 01:01:923 (1) -
01:10:295 (1) - d - Following the drums.
01:16:574 (1) - k - ^
01:18:667 (1) - D - ^
01:27:039 (1) - ^
01:35:411 (1) - ^
01:54:946 (1) - K - ^
02:00:528 (1) - d - ^
02:06:109 (1) - D - ^
02:07:155 (1) - k - Because of the vocal's pitch going up.
02:08:900 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:14:481 (1) - D - ^
02:17:272 (1) - K - ^
02:20:062 (1) - D - ^
02:25:644 (1) - ^
02:28:434 (2) - ^
02:31:225 (1) - ^
02:34:016 (1) - ^
02:36:458 - How about adding a note? There definitely is a sound but there's no note. It feels empty and doesn't really seem to follow the song.
02:36:807 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:52:155 (1) - k - ^
02:58:434 (1) - Same as 01:16:574 (1) -
03:00:528 (1) - D - Following the drums.
03:06:109 (1) - ^
03:08:900 (1) - ^
03:11:690 (1) - ^
03:13:434 (1,1) - Reverse. The pitch goes up at 03:13:434 (1) - and goes down at 03:13:783 (1) -

Muzukashii
00:10:295 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:17:272 (1) - ^
00:20:062 (1) - ^
00:22:853 (1) - ^
00:28:434 (1) - ^
00:29:655 (1,1) - Reverse. Seems like you are following the vocal, but it doesn't really fit.
00:39:597 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:42:388 (1) - ^
00:45:179 (1) - ^
00:49:190 (2,1) - Same as 00:29:655 (1,1) -
00:50:760 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:56:341 (1) - ^
00:59:132 - How about adding a note? There's clear drums sound in the music, and it kinda feels odd.
01:01:225 (1,1) - Same as Futsuu
01:04:365 (1,1) - Finishers, following the drums.
01:10:295 (1) - d - ^
01:16:574 (1) - k - ^
01:18:667 (2) - D - ^
01:24:248 (1) - ^
01:27:039 (1) - ^
01:29:830 (1) - ^
01:33:841 (2,1) - Same as 00:29:655 (1,1) -
01:35:411 (1) - D - Following the drums.
01:40:993 (1) - K - ^
01:46:574 (1) - D - ^
01:56:167 (3) - K - ^
01:56:865 - How about adding a note here? There's vocal to follow, and would make better flow at 01:56:341 (1,2,1,1) - this part.
02:00:528 (1) - d - Following the drums.
02:08:900 (1) - K - ^
02:14:481 (1) - ^
02:17:272 (1) - D - ^
02:20:062 (1) - K - ^
02:25:644 (1) - D - ^
02:28:434 (2) - ^
02:31:225 (1) - K - ^
02:34:016 (1) - ^
02:36:458 - Same as Futsuu
02:36:807 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:52:155 (3) - d - ^
03:00:528 (2) - D - ^
03:06:109 (1) - ^
03:08:900 (1) - ^
03:11:690 (1) - D - ^
03:17:272 (1) - ^
03:20:062 (1) - ^

Oni
00:08:725 (1) - d - Having d at both at the start and the end of the piano 7-plet would be nice.
00:10:295 (3) - K - Following the drums.
00:17:272 (1) - D - ^
00:22:853 (1) - D - ^
00:45:179 (1) - K - ^
00:50:760 (1) - D - ^
00:56:341 (1) - D - ^
00:59:132 (1) - D - ^
01:01:225 (1,1) - ^
01:04:365 (1,1) - D K - ^
01:07:504 (1) - D - ^
01:13:086 (1) - K - ^
01:15:876 (1) - D - ^
01:16:923 (1) - k - Come on, even pitch is higher than 01:16:574 (1) - :<
01:27:039 (1) - D - Following the drums.
01:29:830 (1) - D - ^
01:35:411 (1) - ^
01:40:993 (1) - ^
01:46:574 (1) - K - ^
01:52:155 (1) - D - ^
02:03:318 (1) - K - ^
02:06:109 (1) - D - ^
02:07:155 (1) - Same as 01:16:923 (1) -
02:17:272 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:17:272 (1,1,1,1,1) - I feel like this part could have more density. bunch of 1/2 with 1/4 triplets and suddenly 1/1 part?
02:20:062 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:25:644 (1) - K - ^
02:25:818 (1) - Move to 02:25:993 - , the drum sound clearly exists here, it can be more emphasizing.
02:28:434 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:31:225 (1) - ^
02:34:016 (1) - K - ^
02:35:237 (1) - ^
02:36:807 (1) - D - ^
02:54:946 (1) - K - ^
02:57:737 (1) - D - ^
02:58:783 (1) - Same as 01:16:923 (1) -
03:25:411 - Add a note, following the piano sound.

IMT's Oni
00:10:295 (52) - D - Following the drums.
00:27:911 (161,162) - These finishers are kinda pointless. Is there any emphasis in the music?
00:45:179 (266) - K - Following the drums. But if you don't really like ooooX xxxxO - this kind of pattern, just ignore.
01:01:225 (336) - K - pretty much same as above
01:06:109 (362,363) - How about 1/2 d d k k? Following the rhythm.
01:16:748 (425,426,427,428,429) - ddkkd - Because current one doesn't really follow music's ambience. Also the drums.
01:18:667 (439) - K - Following the drums.
01:29:830 (518) - Same as 00:45:179 (266) -
01:33:493 (536) - K - k would be enough. I see why you put K here but, imo, there's no enough emphasis to put finisher.
01:58:260 (651) - d - Here the vocal pitch goes down.
02:20:062 (813) - Same as 00:45:179 (266) -
02:34:016 (914) - ^
03:04:365 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - This part kinda lacks streams. Especially considering that this is following the piano's pitch.
My suggestion :
03:11:690 (166) - Same as 00:45:179 (266) -
03:15:528 (192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - Same as 03:04:365 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) -
Though I actually found many issues, overall quite nice.



Inner Oni
00:22:853 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:42:039 (1,1,1) - kkd - You seem to be piano-based mapping. kkd fits the piano's pitch better.
00:45:179 (1) - K - Following the drums.
00:50:760 (1) - D - ^
00:50:760 (1,1,1) - This part is so differently mapped compared with earlier part 00:45:179 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - . Please keep consistency.
00:56:341 (1) - D - Following the drums.
01:01:225 (1) - ^
01:01:923 (1) - ^
01:13:086 (1) - K - ^
01:29:830 (1) - K - ^
01:35:411 (1) - D - ^
01:40:993 (1) - ^
01:46:574 (1) - K - ^
01:52:155 (1) - D - ^
01:54:946 (1) - K - ^
01:55:295 (1,1) - Reverse. This follows the vocal pitch better.
02:03:318 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:06:109 (1,1) - D, k - These notes are what I explained likely one billion times in other diffs, I guess I don't really have to explain it again.
02:14:132 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:34:016 (1) - ^
02:36:807 (1) - ^
02:36:807 ~ 02:45:004 - SV 0.75~0.8, follows song's ambience much better imo.
02:46:225 (1) - k - The pitch is higher than some several previous notes. This would fit
02:49:365 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:54:946 (1) - ^
02:57:737 (1,1) - Same as 02:06:109 (1,1) -
03:25:411 - Yeah, add a note. I, and also you can clearly hear the drum here.

Hope you enjoy this, sorry for damn laziness ;_;/
Topic Starter
- Love1yV1ruS -

bbj0920 wrote:

Okay finally I'm here to mod... >_>

Extreme laziness brought here the problem, that the diff has been fixed a bit and my modding for Kantan and Futsuu (Until 00:41:341 (1) - ) has been made several weeks ago. Maybe there would be some lines that have already fixed. My apologies..

Kantan
00:14:481 (2) - d - The finisher is meant to represent the song's emphasis or to fit the crash on songs have drums like this (or w/e it fits). But I hear no crash or legit emphasis here, and it very likely means the finisher doesn't fit. A lot of new-comers tend to make this kinda mistakes. I guess you'll do better in future maps considering it's like your first map :D The finish here doesnt mean to emphasis. I put finish here to make the balance.
00:22:853 (1) - D - In this case there's crash, so I recommend you to follow the drums. I wont put finish at calm part.
00:36:807 (1) - d - Following the drums. as the first one
00:45:179 (1) - D - ^ ^
00:53:551 (1) - d - ^ optional
01:04:714 (1) - K - ^ fine
01:10:295 (1) - d - ^ I think youve already k the style.
01:12:039 - How about adding a note? I guess it would make more sense because it would make better consistency with the very previous pattern 01:08:900 (1,2,3) - k would be fine, considering music's ambience such as drums, vocal's pitch or so. :3 made some changes.
01:16:574 (2) - k - Again, it doesn't really fit the drums. And why I recommend k is, the pitch is gradually becoming higher, so k would be better to represent the song. keep.
01:21:458 (1) - d - Following the drums. ^
01:29:830 (1) - D - ^ ^
01:38:202 (1) - d - ^ ^
01:39:946 (1) - k - Following the drums again maybe, but hearing the vocal's pitch, it makes song's ambience higher imo, I think k makes more sense. ok
01:40:993 (1) - K - Following the drums. ^
01:49:365 (1) - d - ^ ^
02:00:528 (1) - d - ^ ^
02:02:272 (3) - k - Pretty much same as 01:39:946 (1) - it is k.
02:08:900 (1) - D - Following the drums. keep.
02:14:481 (1) - D - ^ keep
02:17:272 (1) - K - ^ keep
02:25:644 (1) - K - ^
02:28:434 (1) - D - ^
02:36:807 (1) - D - ^^
02:52:155 (1) - d - ^ ^
02:58:434 (2) - k - Same as 01:16:574 (2) - goes for it. keep
03:03:318 (1) - d - Following the drums.
03:14:481 (1) - d - ^ cant agree ;w;
03:16:225 (2,1,2) - d k k - The piano's pitch becomes lower on 03:16:225 (2) - compared to 03:15:876 (1) - , and it becomes higher on 03:16:574 (1) - .. so yeah ;D i don think it matters. and kkddd is simpler than kdkkd.

Futsuu
00:10:295 (1) - D - Following the drums. my opinion is no finish at the beginning part.
00:17:272 (1) - D - ^ ^
00:20:062 (1) - D - ^
00:22:853 (1) - D - ^
00:25:295 (2) - k - It follows the song better and, if you look at the white lines on timelines, you'll see here you almostly used k on white lines. So for keeping consistency! The main idea is not k on white line but k at the end of streams.
00:27:388 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:434 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:41:341 (1) - k - In this part 00:40:993 (1,2,1) - , the piano's pitch is going up until 00:41:341 (1) - and just d pattern is not that good way to represent the song. good idea. but i keep since ive done it before.
00:42:388 (1) - D - Following the drums. i almost cancel all unnecessary finishes. (to me lol)
00:45:179 (1) - ^
00:55:818 (2,1) - Reverse. There's vocal's pitch going up and also the drum's snare. k d is kinda for the music's ambience going down, but the opposite happens here. dk kd is a very typical stream in taiko imo. just a series, im not just trying to follow the background drum points.
01:01:225 (1,1) - K D - Following the drums. Specifically the K for ride on 01:01:225 (1) - and crash on 01:01:923 (1) - obviously, this wont be allowed to happen in futsuu diff.
01:10:295 (1) - d - Following the drums. i see a lot of same suggestion as you mentioned in kantan diff. so i wont reply one by one in following part. if i accept i write green words. if it is empty that means i keep. if i think it is necessary, i'll type red words to tell the reason why i keep.
01:16:574 (1) - k - ^
01:18:667 (1) - D - ^
01:27:039 (1) - ^
01:35:411 (1) - ^
01:54:946 (1) - K - ^
02:00:528 (1) - d - ^
02:06:109 (1) - D - ^
02:07:155 (1) - k - Because of the vocal's pitch going up. yes, i use d to display the difference but not to follow music here. i dont want it to be toooooo solid.
02:08:900 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:14:481 (1) - D - ^
02:17:272 (1) - K - ^
02:20:062 (1) - D - ^
02:25:644 (1) - ^
02:28:434 (2) - ^
02:31:225 (1) - ^
02:34:016 (1) - ^
02:36:458 - How about adding a note? There definitely is a sound but there's no note. It feels empty and doesn't really seem to follow the song. i leave a space of the following part.
02:36:807 (1) - D - Following the drums. really calm here. no finish.
02:52:155 (1) - k - ^
02:58:434 (1) - Same as 01:16:574 (1) -
03:00:528 (1) - D - Following the drums.
03:06:109 (1) - ^
03:08:900 (1) - ^
03:11:690 (1) - ^
03:13:434 (1,1) - Reverse. The pitch goes up at 03:13:434 (1) - and goes down at 03:13:783 (1) - ^

Muzukashii
00:10:295 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:17:272 (1) - ^
00:20:062 (1) - ^
00:22:853 (1) - ^
00:28:434 (1) - ^
00:29:655 (1,1) - Reverse. Seems like you are following the vocal, but it doesn't really fit. imo, k is not only applied for high pitch and d is not only applied for normal vocal. i prefer to make them different to make the difference. (for example, kd can be dk sometimes. if the pattern requires.)
00:39:597 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:42:388 (1) - ^
00:45:179 (1) - ^
00:49:190 (2,1) - Same as 00:29:655 (1,1) -
00:50:760 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:56:341 (1) - ^
00:59:132 - How about adding a note? There's clear drums sound in the music, and it kinda feels odd. it is just a randomly chosen point to make the rest.
01:01:225 (1,1) - Same as Futsuu nope, i dont like the way.
01:04:365 (1,1) - Finishers, following the drums.
01:10:295 (1) - d - ^
01:16:574 (1) - k - ^
01:18:667 (2) - D - ^
01:24:248 (1) - ^
01:27:039 (1) - ^
01:29:830 (1) - ^
01:33:841 (2,1) - Same as 00:29:655 (1,1) -
01:35:411 (1) - D - Following the drums.
01:40:993 (1) - K - ^
01:46:574 (1) - D - ^
01:56:167 (3) - K - ^
01:56:865 - How about adding a note here? There's vocal to follow, and would make better flow at 01:56:341 (1,2,1,1) - this part. too long for muzu since it is just the middle of the song. i prepared some 7x1/2 in the end part.
02:00:528 (1) - d - Following the drums.
02:08:900 (1) - K - ^
02:14:481 (1) - ^
02:17:272 (1) - D - ^
02:20:062 (1) - K - ^
02:25:644 (1) - D - ^
02:28:434 (2) - ^
02:31:225 (1) - K - ^
02:34:016 (1) - ^
02:36:458 - Same as Futsuu
02:36:807 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:52:155 (3) - d - ^
03:00:528 (2) - D - ^
03:06:109 (1) - ^
03:08:900 (1) - ^
03:11:690 (1) - D - ^
03:17:272 (1) - ^
03:20:062 (1) - ^

Oni
00:08:725 (1) - d - Having d at both at the start and the end of the piano 7-plet would be nice. 7-plet? sorry i dont get the meaning.
00:10:295 (3) - K - Following the drums. i wont put finish in my oni and inner oni except it is really necessary for me.
00:17:272 (1) - D - ^
00:22:853 (1) - D - ^
00:45:179 (1) - K - ^
00:50:760 (1) - D - ^
00:56:341 (1) - D - ^
00:59:132 (1) - D - ^
01:01:225 (1,1) - ^
01:04:365 (1,1) - D K - ^
01:07:504 (1) - D - ^
01:13:086 (1) - K - ^
01:15:876 (1) - D - ^
01:16:923 (1) - k - Come on, even pitch is higher than 01:16:574 (1) - :< agree. i change the pattern into kdk
01:27:039 (1) - D - Following the drums.
01:29:830 (1) - D - ^
01:35:411 (1) - ^
01:40:993 (1) - ^
01:46:574 (1) - K - ^
01:52:155 (1) - D - ^
02:03:318 (1) - K - ^
02:06:109 (1) - D - ^
02:07:155 (1) - Same as 01:16:923 (1) - ^
02:17:272 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:17:272 (1,1,1,1,1) - I feel like this part could have more density. bunch of 1/2 with 1/4 triplets and suddenly 1/1 part? hahaha im a soft mapper :) .
02:20:062 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:25:644 (1) - K - ^
02:25:818 (1) - Move to 02:25:993 - , the drum sound clearly exists here, it can be more emphasizing. nonono, listen carefully.....
02:28:434 (1) - D - Following the drums.
02:31:225 (1) - ^
02:34:016 (1) - K - ^
02:35:237 (1) - ^
02:36:807 (1) - D - ^
02:54:946 (1) - K - ^
02:57:737 (1) - D - ^
02:58:783 (1) - Same as 01:16:923 (1) - ^
03:25:411 - Add a note, following the piano sound. wow, yes there is a piano sound. but if i follow, it will be too difficult.. i keep.

IMT's Oni
00:10:295 (52) - D - Following the drums.
00:27:911 (161,162) - These finishers are kinda pointless. Is there any emphasis in the music?
00:45:179 (266) - K - Following the drums. But if you don't really like ooooX xxxxO - this kind of pattern, just ignore.
01:01:225 (336) - K - pretty much same as above
01:06:109 (362,363) - How about 1/2 d d k k? Following the rhythm.
01:16:748 (425,426,427,428,429) - ddkkd - Because current one doesn't really follow music's ambience. Also the drums.
01:18:667 (439) - K - Following the drums.
01:29:830 (518) - Same as 00:45:179 (266) -
01:33:493 (536) - K - k would be enough. I see why you put K here but, imo, there's no enough emphasis to put finisher.
01:58:260 (651) - d - Here the vocal pitch goes down.
02:20:062 (813) - Same as 00:45:179 (266) -
02:34:016 (914) - ^
03:04:365 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - This part kinda lacks streams. Especially considering that this is following the piano's pitch.
My suggestion :
03:11:690 (166) - Same as 00:45:179 (266) -
03:15:528 (192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - Same as 03:04:365 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) -
Though I actually found many issues, overall quite nice.

YYJ's Inner Oni - Current diff name is Inner oni. Please fix.
00:11:690 (40) - D - Following the drums.
00:20:062 (100) - ^
00:34:016 (71) - ^
00:42:388 (131) - ^
01:04:190 (122,123,124,125) - I don't really see the point why you put 1/4 dddd, instead of many patterns that possibly follow the music. I think it can be changed, if you want.
01:13:086 (185) - D - Following the drums.
01:15:876 (204) - K - ^
01:18:667 (218) - D - ^
01:27:039 (278) - D - ^
02:36:807 (42) - D - ^
02:54:946 (53) - D - ^

Let me say one thing, YYJ. To be really honest, I didn't really like your map. While looking at this map, I thought this is just big pile of copypasta of very general authentic patterns. Yes, it gave me a cancer when I was modding this diff. So it ends up me also giving you "folowin da drums ahueuhue" cancer. There just couldn't be a quality mod when I have some kind of discontent in my mind. I just mindlessly look at the map, and just pick up some very basic problems. I mean man look at this line 01:04:190 (122,123,124,125) - , this just looks like a un-grown 5-year-old kid whose hobby is throwing the dish complaining, what a joke. But still this does never mean "oh wow you're shit mapper go fucking suicide :^)^) #w0w #rekt" It is just my personal thoughts.
Sorry if this shit hurts you. But I couldn't have it in my mind and skip it. It may seem very rude to you and I know it. If you, too, don't like my mod, it would be okay if you reject everything I poked at.
Don't wanna pop some popcorns..

Inner Oni
00:22:853 (1) - D - Following the drums.
00:42:039 (1,1,1) - kkd - You seem to be piano-based mapping. kkd fits the piano's pitch better. fine
00:45:179 (1) - K - Following the drums.
00:50:760 (1) - D - ^
00:50:760 (1,1,1) - This part is so differently mapped compared with earlier part 00:45:179 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - . Please keep consistency. why keep consistency...... if this music has two same parts, you have to make some differences to make it fun but not to keep them the same.
00:56:341 (1) - D - Following the drums.
01:01:225 (1) - ^
01:01:923 (1) - ^
01:13:086 (1) - K - ^
01:29:830 (1) - K - ^
01:35:411 (1) - D - ^
01:40:993 (1) - ^
01:46:574 (1) - K - ^
01:52:155 (1) - D - ^
01:54:946 (1) - K - ^
01:55:295 (1,1) - Reverse. This follows the vocal pitch better. fine
02:03:318 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:06:109 (1,1) - D, k - These notes are what I explained likely one billion times in other diffs, I guess I don't really have to explain it again. though you explained for so many times i still choose to keep.. sry.
02:14:132 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:34:016 (1) - ^
02:36:807 (1) - ^
02:36:807 ~ 02:45:004 - SV 0.75~0.8, follows song's ambience much better imo. umm. good idea. let me think for a while.
02:46:225 (1) - k - The pitch is higher than some several previous notes. This would fit i made the same change as oni
02:49:365 (1) - K - Following the drums.
02:54:946 (1) - ^
02:57:737 (1,1) - Same as 02:06:109 (1,1) - ^
03:25:411 - Yeah, add a note. I, and also you can clearly hear the drum here. i tried to follow your suggestion, but finally i choose to leave it blank....

Hope you enjoy this, sorry for damn laziness ;_;/
I really enjoy this and I find you are a good modder in modding oni and inner oni. It is helpful, thx.
yaoyujie0332

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue! Really sorry it took so long to get round to this :(

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion


[YYJ's Inner Oni]

00:39:161 - Add a k here and change 00:39:248 (109) - to a k? It sounded nice when I tested it out in the map! OK
00:44:830 (8) - Change this to a k and add a k at 00:44:917 - to map the drum roll here OK
02:16:051 (333,334,335,336) - Change this to ddkd to add a bit more variation to this section OK
02:27:214 (426,427,428,429) - Same with this pattern here, change to ddkd OK
03:10:295 (40,41,42,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change these two patterns to kkddd to add variation to this section too OK

Inner Oni is great fun to play and I can't find anything wrong with it! Good luck with getting the mapset ranked, it was great fun modding it! :D have some stars for the good work and nice SB! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
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