Hi,
m4m req in zetsubou queue ---> Zetsubou RestaurantGeneralThe kiai finish in 01:46:062 -
Normal00:11:089 (1) - 00:11:989 (2) - if you look closely, you'll notice that the angle of the two are not the same, if do be the same would be cool
00:13:189 (4) - try this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2520691, i think improve a bit
01:03:589 - the absence of an object breaks a little the rhythm here, if you were following the vocal remake this reversearrow 01:01:189 (5) - like 01:03:589 -(yes, this set is losing consistency)
01:28:831 (2) - why you dont use this slider like 01:23:989 (2,3) - and add another circle in 01:30:031 (3) -, for me is better and more consistent
Hardcs=3,8 or lower sounds better
Add a circle in 00:25:189 - to improve the consistency
00:52:789 (3) - this slider loses some previous rhythm, it's a little too long for the moment
add any object in 01:05:689 - to improve the consistency
01:42:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - there is abuse of a heavy sound here, maybe you can remove some whistle
Asphyxia's InsaneTest remove this circle 00:13:339 (1) -, for me it was more enjoyable
01:30:031 (1,2,3) - is better a triangle here
01:42:312 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there is abuse of a heavy sound here, maybe you can remove some whistle
01:45:162 (2) - press Ctrl + G, improve the flow and is more beautiful, i think ^^
Pantsu! 00:31:489 (1) - 00:33:889 (1) - 01:09:889 (1) - ead this:
osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
Slider speed changes should have corresponding prior cues. These cues may include changes in the music, changes in note density, or visible slider ticks, and should allow for the speed change to be expected before the slider begins. Large, unexpected changes in slider velocity damage the readability and playing experience of the map.
maybe your slides may not be accepted or your map may experience a risk of being self unqualifiqued
more nothing in special
Great map, congrats
+star and good luck > , <