Hi! From mod queue! Really sorry it took so long to get round to this
d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat
Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion[Kantan]
00:41:341 (1,1) - Ctrl+g these two notes, it will fit the drums better since there is a snare "clap" at 00:41:341 -
00:45:179 (1) - Add a finish to this note. I feel like there should be emphasis one the vocals starting again and since there are also cymbal crashes in the background, it matches up quite nicely
01:04:714 (1) -
Maybe add a finish to this note? When I tried it out it felt like it fit the map pretty well02:31:225 (1) -
Maybe add a finish to this note? It's a transition between the solo and the vocals coming back so I think it would make nice emphasis02:36:807 (1) -
Maybe add a finish here too? It's another transition and there are cymbal hits in the song. This one isn't too important though[Futsuu]
00:45:179 (1) - Add a finish to this note, same reasoning as in Kantan
01:57:737 (1) - Add a finish here since you've had one at the start of every other kiai time before this
02:03:318 (1) - Add a finish to this note since you have ones on 01:13:086 (1) - and 00:39:597 (1) -
02:49:365 (1) - Add a finish here since it's the start of kiai time and all the others have one too
03:19:016 (1) - Change this to a k so it contrasts with the triplet before it! (Or change 03:18:667 (1,1) - to k's so it matches with the triplet after)
[Muzukashii]
00:59:132 -
Consider adding a note here since you are following the vocals closely in this section. Leaving it empty makes an awkward gap since the vocals here are particularly stressed02:13:434 (1,2) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the ddk d d pattern flows better with the music here
02:39:597 - Add a d here since there are some unmapped vocals
02:42:388 - Add a d here for the same reason as above
[Oni]
00:10:121 - Add a k here. I'm assuming you are mapping the piano here and there is a very high pitched key played here
00:50:498 - to 00:50:760 -
I think for this part here, you should either make all the notes between these two times k's, or add a finish to 00:50:760 (1) - to give more character to this section!01:51:807 - to 01:52:155 -
Add k's between these two points or change 01:52:155 (1) - to a D for the same reason as above01:54:248 (1) - Change this to a k since the vocals and drums are a higher pitch here
02:39:597 - Add d here for the same reason as Muzukashii, there are unmapped vocals and it leaves an awkward gap
02:42:388 - Add a d here for the same reason as above
[IMT's Oni]
02:35:760 (920) - Start this slider at 02:35:411 -, it's a little bit awkward having the gap that large
03:25:179 (259,260,261) -
Maybe change these to 1/3 notes? I think it fits this part well03:25:411 (261) - Change this to a k to make it match the snare hit in the song
[YYJ's Inner Oni]
00:39:161 -
Add a k here and change 00:39:248 (109) - to a k? It sounded nice when I tested it out in the map!00:44:830 (8) - Change this to a k and add a k at 00:44:917 - to map the drum roll here
02:16:051 (333,334,335,336) - Change this to ddkd to add a bit more variation to this section
02:27:214 (426,427,428,429) - Same with this pattern here, change to ddkd
03:10:295 (40,41,42,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change these two patterns to kkddd to add variation to this section too
Inner Oni is great fun to play and I can't find anything wrong with it! Good luck with getting the mapset ranked, it was great fun modding it!
have some stars for the good work and nice SB! (∩`-´)⊃━
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