1. Infinity (5,64 stars, 1758 notes)

Infinity - Asphyxia

Special thank you box

Kyshiro - Helping me with offset, mp3 and testplay!
Cydros - For showing me this song and a great, great support with a lot of testplays and feedback!
MFZ - Continuous testplays, giving me good feedback, thanks so much! <3
ProfessionalBox - Helping me out with the difficulty name, and also with the hitsound samples, thanks <3
Priti - Thanks for the combo colors! <3

Modders & Checkers

ProfessionalBox
DampfNudel
Owntrolf
Yales
Xellie
Maeglwn
Kyshiro #1
Xilver15
Squigly
Lust#2
Desperate-kun

ProfessionalBox wrote:

kd for diff name pls

Owntrolf wrote:

I dont think you need countdown and disable letterbox Fixed~

00:18:434 (1,2) - could probably turn it into a triplet to fit better (Feel free to ignore)
00:21:177 (1,2) - ^
00:23:920 (1,2) - ^ Would feel too much for such an intro, better not to.

00:31:977 (6) - This feels like a really strange slider Oh well, fits better now because I moved objects around in the next part
00:31:977 to 00:35:577 - I think you should remap this area/move around the notes because the sliders sound really out of place Fixed, follows the music better now
01:34:377 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - I think you should change it to something like this because I dont think triplets in a row fit this area

SPOILER

Hmm sure, creating variation wont hurt
02:01:806 - You could always start the stream here(youcanignore)
02:04:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Might be a little hard to read it but its fine for me to play Should be a-okay after 1 retry if needed
02:07:292 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think something like this would be better

SPOILER

I kind of like as it is though, and it plays really good too so I'm gonna keep it
02:08:834 (5,6,7) - Replace with a 1/2 slider to fit when the singer says " we"
02:11:577 (5,6,7) - ^ something simlar here too Maybe... but then again I prefer my way and putting a slider there would make it somewhat dull? Idk, maybe just me, let's see what others think
02:13:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it sounds better as

SPOILER

Stream fits as well as your example (maybe even better?) so I want to keep it
02:15:006 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 slider with a circle at where it used to end Yeah, nice suggestion, fixed
02:15:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I dont really like many triplets in a row :> Should be fine to be honest, the song is getting ready for the second chorus so it fits in that sense a lot and now it creates some kind of variation from 1st kiai
04:09:520 (4) - Should proably change to a slider to fit vocals I feel like my current setup is better for this


04:52:034 - Everying after this seems fine

*im lazy to mod more since they're mostly similar things

Similar problems can be found throughout the song
I like the last klai time
Its so similar to -GN's pending An - ExaVid because it repeats the same thing but the combos in this actually fit well in this map

1. 00:21:692 (4) - Add NC? You used lots of NC and with those 00:20:834 (1,2) - notes we feel that you're going to keep up. But you don't ._. It also makes your pattern looks lighter.
2. 00:57:520 (9) - NC? The stream is really hard by itself, a NC would help the player to localize where's the downbeat. And you always used 8 combo on your stream before this part.
3. 05:20:834 (9) - ^
4. 02:48:949 (13) - ^ (maybe?) would be swag lol you did it here by the way 03:32:834 (1) - and some other parts as well (everywhere i think lol)
5. 03:32:149 (5) - ^ (for the "united" and the finish)
6. 04:16:034 (5) - ^
7. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - Oh, you did it here! XD (guess that was for the spacing change though i.i) the way you did this part is awesome btw
8. 02:01:292 (1) - I think it would flow better if you ctrl+j
9. 04:47:234 (1) - ^
10. 00:35:749 - Add a note? 00:35:577 (5) - feels a bit out of place this way. And the empty red tick before the spinner feels awkward. (like we're waiting but we're not sure why) You can add it at the middle of the triangle btw.
11. 03:55:463 (3,4) - I find the jump between (3) and the stream a bit too high honnestly try to have a consstance spacing between 03:55:292 (2,3,4) - those notes. Like.. Try to move (3) around x456y112
12. 04:38:663 (13,14,15,16,1) - Honestly I don't like the flow here, why do you break it?? Try something like this if you like http://puu.sh/dhtHA/8cc270b890.jpg

1. 01:42:777 (1,2) - Add finish
2. 02:26:320 (1,1,2) - ^
3. 02:48:263 (5,9,13) - ^
4. 04:16:034 (5,9,13) - ^
5. 04:37:977 (5,9,13) - ^
6. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - ^ (You even add NC here)
   After that, that's up to you, I still think the 1/8 I pointed out would definitely fit better with a finish

1. 00:19:806 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure why you NC like this, when it sounds the same as other parts in the song where you NC every downbeat
2. 00:24:434 (4) - Maybe change the angle or move this some to avoid the overlap with 1 that doesn't look very nice
3. 00:30:263 (5,6,1,2) - idk Why you stack these when they sound the same as the rest of the song
4. 01:25:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sound exactly the same as 01:22:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i'd make it a stream for consistency
5. 03:08:149 (4) - Maybe ctrl+G this
6. 04:39:006 - Why'd you change to soft hitsounds when the song sounds the same here?

Yales wrote:

Yo o/

1. 00:21:692 (4) - Add NC? You used lots of NC and with those 00:20:834 (1,2) - notes we feel that you're going to keep up. But you don't ._. It also makes your pattern looks lighter. I fixed it differently, thanks!
2. 00:57:520 (9) - NC? The stream is really hard by itself, a NC would help the player to localize where's the downbeat. And you always used 8 combo on your stream before this part.
3. 05:20:834 (9) - ^
4. 02:48:949 (13) - ^ (maybe?) would be swag lol you did it here by the way 03:32:834 (1) - and some other parts as well (everywhere i think lol)
5. 03:32:149 (5) - ^ (for the "united" and the finish)
6. 04:16:034 (5) - ^ As for the NC's go, I have a special pattern for them and these would break it so I have to deny them, sorry, if you're interested to hear about it, contact me in-game
7. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - Oh, you did it here! XD (guess that was for the spacing change though i.i) the way you did this part is awesome btw
8. 02:01:292 (1) - I think it would flow better if you ctrl+j Nice, fixed
9. 04:47:234 (1) - ^ Fixed
10. 00:35:749 - Add a note? 00:35:577 (5) - feels a bit out of place this way. And the empty red tick before the spinner feels awkward. (like we're waiting but we're not sure why) You can add it at the middle of the triangle btw. Sure, fixed
11. 03:55:463 (3,4) - I find the jump between (3) and the stream a bit too high honnestly try to have a consstance spacing between 03:55:292 (2,3,4) - those notes. Like.. Try to move (3) around x456y112 Awesome, plays a lot better now
12. 04:38:663 (13,14,15,16,1) - Honestly I don't like the flow here, why do you break it?? Try something like this if you like http://puu.sh/dhtHA/8cc270b890.jpg

I honestly prefer my current version a lot better and I think it plays really well too, if more people complain, I might change stuff around a bit

About your hitsounds, the only thing I could say is that I -really- liked the way you add the finishes here 03:32:149 (5,9,1) - and I think it would be cool if you do it each time. Soo.. Here's my suggestions.

1. 01:42:777 (1,2) - Add finish
2. 02:26:320 (1,1,2) - ^
3. 02:48:263 (5,9,13) - ^
4. 04:16:034 (5,9,13) - ^
5. 04:37:977 (5,9,13) - ^ Fixed every finish, thanks for the suggestions, the emphasis on those notes sound really good!
6. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - ^ (You even add NC here)
   After that, that's up to you, I still think the 1/8 I pointed out would definitely fit better with a finish

Well that's it, just suggestions..on stuff you did each part, so I guess you have your reasons, but I still wanted to point them out. The map is really good this way I gotta say, and the music is AMAZING too *-* Good job!

Xellie wrote:

Random Mod~

[Infinity]

1. 00:19:806 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure why you NC like this, when it sounds the same as other parts in the song where you NC every downbeat Fixed
2. 00:24:434 (4) - Maybe change the angle or move this some to avoid the overlap with 1 that doesn't look very nice The overlap doesn't show in-game and this way it flows really good so I left it
3. 00:30:263 (5,6,1,2) - idk Why you stack these when they sound the same as the rest of the song They fit imo
4. 01:25:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sound exactly the same as 01:22:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i'd make it a stream for consistency But isn't these two a stream already? Even so, having some kind of variety is good, and that's what I did here
5. 03:08:149 (4) - Maybe ctrl+G this Personal preference, I tend to leave stuff like this so I want to keep it
6. 04:39:006 - Why'd you change to soft hitsounds when the song sounds the same here? I wanted to give the chorus more emphasis, since it's more intense. Soft hitsounds fit on this part really good too

I know it's not much but I tried, going from what I've been modding to this makes me realize I have a lot to learn with modding x.x

Maeglwn wrote:

ayo

[General]

1. try 15690 offset, might be better by the looks of things fixed
2. I know for a fact you can think of a cooler diff name than Infinity ;D Infinity rolls the tongue well

[Dumbfinity]

1. 00:20:834 (1,2,1,2) - this looks and plays weird, imo. why not make both of the 1 and 2s just parallel to each other? would look much better. like, much much better I like this round-ish movement the star pattern gives me, so I keep it
2. 00:35:577 (5,1) - the pause here is mad awkward. make a 6th note on the red tick imo, every time I tried playing this it really felt like I was supposed to be hitting another note there Yeah, fixed
3. 01:03:349 (6,7) - flow kinda weird here. it's too much of a loop-ish motion for the angle it's at. maybe make the angle of the jump between 6 and 7 more obtuse so the cursor has more room to loop around into it? probably just an opinion Flows well if you ask me
4. 01:45:863 (8,1) - this transition seems kinda awkward. why not make this slider 1/2 and then put a jump at the end of it or something to another note and then back down into the stream of the next part? seems a lot more fun. Awesome suggestion, fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   it even makes a cute triangle with 6 and 7 afterwards which is awesome looking
5. 02:04:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - RLC IS THAT YOU SENPAI LOL RLC the senpai
   holy shit this map screams RLC and I haven't realized it until now
6. 04:33:177 (10,11,12,1) - idk how I feel about this flow right here either coming off of an insane jump. might be just me. maybe space these out a bit more or something? I added a bit more spacing, it plays good nonetheless but better now

just approve this shit already it's so good

10/10

1. Offset -2 to make it perfect
2. I'd increase the volume a bit as the hitsounds are kinda hard to hear sometimes except for the intro
3. 00:18:432 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this down a bit as a whole to create a little jump? Would fit the music and you seem to have done that a bit further too
4. 00:32:147 - I prefer this note to be clickable
5. 00:35:747 (6) - Little more to the left to put it exactly between 00:35:061 (2,4) - YES IM NAZI NOW
6. 00:49:890 (7,1) - This gets me every time, maybe put it a bit closer to indicate that it's 1/4? Since it's the first one where you put this spacing it would let players know this spacing is being used further on too
7. 01:35:575 (2) - I don't see a reason for this to be 3/4 honestly, I think 1/2 would fit a lot better
8. 01:56:318 (3,4,5,6,7) - I can't help but feel this is a bit weird cause the stream is exactly like the one before it, maybe CTRL+J it?
9. 03:27:690 (1) - NC seems rather pointless here
10. 03:32:061 (4,5,6) - This angle felt rather awkward to play, maybe make it less pointy?
11. 05:20:832 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Would be cool if you could make the circle where it overlaps in the stream perfectly stacked
12. 05:24:604 (5) - I feel like 2x a 1/2 slider followed by a note would be a lot cooler than a 1/1 repeat

Kyshiro wrote:

sup
Infinity

1. Offset -2 to make it perfect Sure
2. I'd increase the volume a bit as the hitsounds are kinda hard to hear sometimes except for the intro Gave +10 except for the intro
3. 00:18:432 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this down a bit as a whole to create a little jump? Would fit the music and you seem to have done that a bit further too Fixed
4. 00:32:147 - I prefer this note to be clickable I prefer how it is now though, and I couldn't think of any placements for possible 2x notes. I feel like a slider is more appropriate anyway
5. 00:35:747 (6) - Little more to the left to put it exactly between 00:35:061 (2,4) - YES IM NAZI NOW Lol sure, how did I miss that :f
6. 00:49:890 (7,1) - This gets me every time, maybe put it a bit closer to indicate that it's 1/4? Since it's the first one where you put this spacing it would let players know this spacing is being used further on too Moved a bit closer
7. 01:35:575 (2) - I don't see a reason for this to be 3/4 honestly, I think 1/2 would fit a lot better Lol yeah, it follows the vocals somewhat nicely but I agree that 1/2 plays better here
8. 01:56:318 (3,4,5,6,7) - I can't help but feel this is a bit weird cause the stream is exactly like the one before it, maybe CTRL+J it? oh yeah nice catch, fixed
9. 03:27:690 (1) - NC seems rather pointless here Well it was according to my NC pattern, but I guess removing it is fine also
10. 03:32:061 (4,5,6) - This angle felt rather awkward to play, maybe make it less pointy? Sure
11. 05:20:832 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Would be cool if you could make the circle where it overlaps in the stream perfectly stacked I like how it plays now and re-arranging this part would be kinda.. hard for me loll
12. 05:24:604 (5) - I feel like 2x a 1/2 slider followed by a note would be a lot cooler than a 1/1 repeat Hmm true, fixed

i r8 8/8 gr8 map m8

Secretpipe wrote:

Does it even need mods ? LOL

Take my star~

Xilver15 wrote:

Seriously does this thing even need modding this map is so good LOL , let's try anywayyyy

DISCLAIMER: I am very new to modding. If my mod sucks, don't apply it. Wouldn't want to ruin a map like this c:

[Infinity]

00:57:516 (9) - NC? Would be easier to read with that spacing I have a thing with Unless you want like a wall of text how I wanted these NC's to be, you can contact me in-game for more detailed answer but I have to say no, sorry

01:20:145 (9) - I think short sliders would be nice for that part and would look and play better than just a long stream c: If you don't agree to this, then how about NCing 01:20:145 (9) ? :3 Same for the NC, and I think re-arranging the stream with 1/4 sliders would seriously take a lot of time and I currently like mine, so I want to leave this untouched

01:39:688 (5,6) - 1/3 sliders kinda play weird, I think leaving them on red tick would be fine c: They're 3/4 sliders instead of 1/3, and I partly agree, but I don't know any cool ways to come up with a pattern for this, so I'll leave them for now

02:16:973 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda nazi but I think it would look nicer if you made them angle down a bit, something like this: http://puu.sh/dJaZS/1730b8a891.jpg It was supposed to be a short wave (like a wave-slider) but yah, fixed

02:34:545 (5,6) - Angled sliders looks kinda weird, I think curved would be nicer c: Adjusted

03:53:745 (1,2,3,4) - That stream has a pretty drastic change in spacing LOL, I think if you made these 4 notes a bit more spaced it would be a lot easier to notice and play without flunking up. I honestly thought it was fine when I tested it several times, but I added some extra spacing on it so it would feel more comfortable

03:57:516 (7) - Same as 02:34:545 (5,6) and maybe just curve it a liiiiitle bit more down, holy shit this is so nazi Adjusted

04:20:488 (5,7) - I think if you curve these it's gonna work better with the curve on 6, sorta like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2388026 Awesome suggestion, fixed!


Alright that's what I have, really these are all minor things this map is amazing, great job hope to see it in approved

Nhawak wrote:

oh shit
the beatmap is very goooooooooooooooooooooood
congrats and good lock <3

1. 02:08:830 (5,6,7) - for things like this, there is a vocal here on the white tick, and it would fit to put a kicklider from the white to the blue, and then have a note on the red tick on the slider, but you dont need too, just an idea
2. 02:10:202 (4) - why not switch this curve to face the other side
3. 02:12:088 (9,10,1) - as an example, you could take like DS .8 and make this into a small line or curved triple that points away from the next note, i think it is rather good effect ;e;
4. 02:15:773 - there is indeed a note here, why not make this part a little better, as is the 2 triplets make it kinda silly ;w;
5. 02:16:973 (3,4,5,6) - you should make this curve into the next slider instead of away, it make more sense in this case
6. 02:18:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - i thought that maybe you could have changed the notes into sliders to follow the vocals here, might be better? ;w;
7. 02:28:373 (8) - this sounds better when you extend it 1 tick since the vocal matches it more that way
8. 02:29:230 (6,7) - maybe into kicksliders? ;w; it would work but up to you
9. 02:31:116 (7,8) - you kno wut i bout to sey
10. 02:32:659 (8,9,1) - maybe curve this away from next note as well? ;w;
11. 02:37:459 (6) - kickslider into next note? C:
12. 02:40:202 (6) - maybe a kickslider parallel to the next longer slider
13. 02:41:230 (2,3,4) - curve away
14. 03:00:259 (1,2,3) - why not make these like semi stacked with a really small ds you know what im sayin bruh?
15. 03:03:173 (2,3,4) - make this triangle look better you lazy scrubba
16. 03:14:659 (3,4) - shorten repeat to the red tick, delete the note, and make another repeating slider for the same length on the white tick? c:
17. 03:15:945 (7) - you can keep this note here but i feel only 1 note is necessary and creates a better feel so i would delete this ;w;
18. 03:17:573 (4) - this would be cool as a mini slider point back
19. 03:17:916 (6) - same here
20. 03:18:688 (7) - plserino
21. 03:26:830 (6,7) - i dunno, maybe repeating sliders? guess not but might as well suggest ;w;
22. uguu marathons

Squigly wrote:

uguu small mod


just some general ideas

1. 02:08:830 (5,6,7) - for things like this, there is a vocal here on the white tick, and it would fit to put a kicklider from the white to the blue, and then have a note on the red tick on the slider, but you dont need too, just an idea It surely would, but it's too awkward for me to put such things there now, so I have to deny it. Moreover, notes work as good as a slider, if not better.
2. 02:10:202 (4) - why not switch this curve to face the other side True, flow is better now and looks more appealing, fixed.
3. 02:12:088 (9,10,1) - as an example, you could take like DS .8 and make this into a small line or curved triple that points away from the next note, i think it is rather good effect ;e; I'll have to think about these kind of suggestions a bit more, they're good but I like my stacked triplets. I'll ask around and see what people prefer.
4. 02:15:773 - there is indeed a note here, why not make this part a little better, as is the 2 triplets make it kinda silly ;w; It's for the emphasis on the united-part, which fits if you ask me, so I decided to leave it.
5. 02:16:973 (3,4,5,6) - you should make this curve into the next slider instead of away, it make more sense in this case Yes, flows better and looks visually much better, fixed.
6. 02:18:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - i thought that maybe you could have changed the notes into sliders to follow the vocals here, might be better? ;w; I think I answered this before already
7. 02:28:373 (8) - this sounds better when you extend it 1 tick since the vocal matches it more that way It doesn't (for me, at least), so I denied all of these suggestions. Kickslider there does a better job than a 1/2 would
8. 02:29:230 (6,7) - maybe into kicksliders? ;w; it would work but up to you I prefer notes in this case, sorry ;_;
9. 02:31:116 (7,8) - you kno wut i bout to sey you know wuti bout to reply
10. 02:32:659 (8,9,1) - maybe curve this away from next note as well? ;w; As said before, will think about it more, same goes for every similar suggestion.
11. 02:37:459 (6) - kickslider into next note? C: Prefer notes, sorry
12. 02:40:202 (6) - maybe a kickslider parallel to the next longer slider I think it'd be an awkward addition because I haven't introduced any kicksliders besides the ones in kiai so no.
13. 02:41:230 (2,3,4) - curve away
14. 03:00:259 (1,2,3) - why not make these like semi stacked with a really small ds you know what im sayin bruh? Tried, but ended up liking my current one better. Nice suggestion, though
15. 03:03:173 (2,3,4) - make this triangle look better you lazy scrubba Lol sure xD
16. 03:14:659 (3,4) - shorten repeat to the red tick, delete the note, and make another repeating slider for the same length on the white tick? c: Sounds somewhat overmapped, it fits the vocals better, but I have a feeling mine fits the maps atmosphere better so I decided to stick with my current one.
17. 03:15:945 (7) - you can keep this note here but i feel only 1 note is necessary and creates a better feel so i would delete this ;w; Awesome suggestion, fixed!
18. 03:17:573 (4) - this would be cool as a mini slider point back ?
19. 03:17:916 (6) - same here ^
20. 03:18:688 (7) - plserino Fixed aswell ^_^
21. 03:26:830 (6,7) - i dunno, maybe repeating sliders? guess not but might as well suggest ;w; I think notes fit here better because I already introduced few short streams (and maybe even triplets) before this, it emphasis the united really well and also flow well into the stream.
22. uguu marathons

1. Add an epilepsy warning as the background flashes during the kiai times
2. 01:35:230 (1,2) - For some reason I don't like this and it flows rather odd, how about copying 01:35:230 (1) - and CTRL+H CTRL+G it
3. 05:25:716 (1) - Spinner feels so long and boring, maybe shorten it to 2 measures? (Also IF people are going to play it with HR it's close to a suicide spinner)

Kyshiro wrote:

Recheck

Infinity

1. Add an epilepsy warning as the background flashes during the kiai times Added
2. 01:35:230 (1,2) - For some reason I don't like this and it flows rather odd, how about copying 01:35:230 (1) - and CTRL+H CTRL+G it I fixed it differently, should have a smoother flow now!
3. 05:25:716 (1) - Spinner feels so long and boring, maybe shorten it to 2 measures? (Also IF people are going to play it with HR it's close to a suicide spinner)
   I don't want to shorten it anymore since it'd feel too awkward. Current place is enough HR-friendly to survive :f

Call me back

Kyshiro wrote:

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Bubble #1

Lust wrote:

log

13:43 Asphyxia: eyyyy
15:01 Lust: sorry buddy i was asleep
15:01 Lust: whats up?
15:01 Asphyxia: Ah all good
15:01 Asphyxia: I was just wondering if you remembered my mod request, it's currently sitting at 1st bubble
15:02 Lust: yeah i remember, the sb is done? o.o
15:02 Asphyxia: Yes
15:02 Asphyxia: It got finished yesterday
15:02 Lust: niceeeee
15:02 Lust: np the map lets do it now
15:02 Asphyxia: Also, how are you?
15:02 *Asphyxia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)]
15:02 Lust: im alright
15:03 Asphyxia: do you prefer irc or forum
15:03 Lust: irc
15:03 Asphyxia: alright
15:03 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix) [Infinity]]
15:04 Lust: 00:21:859 (5,6) - i think a ctrl+g here would provide for nicer flow, and the flow change from the newly placed 6 to 00:22:202 (7) - will reflect the song nicely imo
15:04 Asphyxia: Fixed
15:06 Lust: 01:03:173 (5,6) - same deal here, a ctrl+g will really flow a lot smoother and the transition from 01:03:345 (6,7) - will fit the song right
15:06 Lust: the changed angle from 6 to 7 will accent the song closer imo
15:08 Asphyxia: My intention was to make the jump slightly bigger what the ctrl + g gives, but I fixed it because it gives a smoother flow
15:08 Lust: yeah im aware of that, but the angle that you had before the ctrl+g was not as sharp as the angle after the ctrl+g making it actually a bit more difficult to play imo
15:09 Lust: and since the flow from before was a lot more roundabout, the leadin will have the same effect as before
15:14 Lust: alright
15:14 Lust: that should be it
15:15 Lust: update that shit and lets get this bubble #2

We fixed various patterns to make it flow nicer and provide nicer transitions into the following ones.

Lust wrote:

Bubble #2

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Desperate-kun wrote:

Approved ヽ(´ー`)ﾉ