@Sakura: all fixed, also added some more in kiaiMomochikun wrote:
hello :3
[Easy]
00:04:846 (1) - Starting an Easy with 1/2 slider was not a good idea, consider simplify this rhythm into a single note. Just for easier pattern for beginners fixed
01:13:068 (6,1) - swap NC ? i though your nCs pattern is per 2 downbeat.. o.o no need here because of vocal :3
01:01:068 (6) - They're plenty of catchy instrument here, sounds harsh if this just a 2/1 slider, at leas divide them into 1/1 slider and note ? ahh it is to keep the difficulty, and i think it doesn't matter, however
01:20:179 (3) - Missing clap on end slider fixed
01:24:624 - I don't know why you leave this part empty.. but whatever orz i did it to make a strong sense on 01:23:735 (2) -
01:25:513 (1) - They're no snare drum at the music atm, so delete clap on reverse.. you may replace it with whistle too if you like it fixed
Fine diff, i wonder why you didn't use slider tick on those 3/2 sliders.. but well at least it work well. i didn't use tick sound on 3/2s because they all show something different, which using 1/1 sliders isn't enough to express. it breaks the sense to add tick sound on these sliders imo however, i added some of them in kiai
Good Luck :3
update
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