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[Kantan]
00:50:936 (50) - (I swear I hate this song) Delete this note to have a 4/1 break again and to have a break before the kiai. Gives it more emphasis or sth
01:58:222 (139) - Move this 01:57:365 - here to follow the vocals a bit, it its current position it sounds random. 01:57:794 (138) - This could be changed to a kat or sth after that
02:05:079 (148) - Move 02:04:222 - here
02:15:365 (158) - Move 02:14:508 - here
02:18:794 (163) - 02:17:936 -
02:22:222 (168) - 02:21:365 -
02:37:222 (189,191) - These could be deleted since this part is calmer compared to the rest of the kiai in other diffs too and it makes a difference to Futsuu
[Futsuu]
00:23:936 - Add a note here since Futsuu currently is a lot like Kantan here while Muzu has a 1/4 triplet here (also Muzu is similar to Oni might want to look at that) (00:30:794 (35) - btw)
00:46:008 (57,58) - You could delete these notes since they don't seem to contribute that much and are already missing 00:39:365 - here
01:29:079 (149) - Would prefer if this note was gone, seems to be too much compared to the rest of this part (yes I know kiai has this)
01:28:222 (147) - Also it might not hurt to have this as kat so you have more than one ddk triplet here
[Muzukashii]
00:44:294 (87,88) - As I have mentioned in chat, after the deletions of some notes in Futsuu there has to be at least one more 2/1 break in Muzu, in my eyes at least since Futsuu -> Muzu is bigger than Muzu -> Oni here. Delete these, also has the nice side effect of giving vocals room. 01:46:222 - Also refer to this
00:51:365 (107,108,109) - Oni lacks these. Delete, add note 00:50:936 - here
02:04:365 (299) - Why isn't this 02:04:079 - here
[Onion]
00:45:365 - to 00:47:936 - is mapped very weird. 00:46:222 (116) - You suddenly stopped following your kat rhythm here and 00:46:651 - 00:47:936 - lacks notes while 00:45:365 - 00:46:651 - seems to have too many. I don't care what exactly you do but do something (and fix the kat rhythm)
00:51:365 (137) - Delete to have space before kiai since the song is so lame that you don't even notice that kiai starts if you keep 1/1ing
00:59:186 (171,172) - Delete these notes too. I'm okay with 1/4 anywhere but it doesn't sound well here. You could add a don 00:56:829 - here to compensate. It would even follow song :3
01:46:972 (338) - Why. Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy^4. Move it. Make a triple out of it. But no doublet
01:53:936 (367,368,369,370,371) - Previous diffs always had a break here and it doesn't seem like a bad idea for this diff tbh
02:19:508 (468,469) - Trade to follow kat rhythm more
02:25:651 (498) - Delete since this kiai is very similar to Inner and it would at least make a break here.
02:36:794 (548,549) - 02:37:365 (551,552) - ^
[Inner Onion]
00:05:294 (5) - That overmap is not necessary
00:24:044 (56,57,58) - Is this really needed. I mean, if it was consistent across the whole map, okay (01:35:722 - ) but it isn't and it doesn't really play that interesting, except if you want to screw DT players a little bit. Just make it 1/4
00:27:472 (75,76,77) - ^
00:30:902 (94,95,96) - ^
00:34:330 (114,115,116) - ^
00:40:972 (135,136) - > : (
00:51:794 - to 00:53:508 - ~ 00:59:079 - to 01:01:222 - dat difference
01:03:472 (264) - Move 01:03:686 - here and maybe change the pattern to kkd or something, it sounds weird atm. Also you could follow the 1/4 in vocals.
01:44:615 (469,471) - This is a little bit too much. A big little bit.
01:46:329 (479,481) - ^
01:46:865 - Meanwhile this actually lacks a note.
01:53:794 (520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527) - Since I mentioned this in Oni too, do something with this if there are changes in Oni
02:04:508 (573,574) - Change to dk (01:57:651 (539,540) - )
02:07:508 (588,589,590,591) - Change to dk kd 02:00:651 (554,555,556,557) - . Also might want to change 02:07:222 (587) - this to don (all doublets like this are dd) or 02:06:651 (584) - to kat
02:39:222 (749) - Change to don since the note is as low as 02:38:794 (747,748) - and it sounds better this way
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