1. Futsuu (1,98 stars, 203 notes)
2. Muzukashii (2,72 stars, 328 notes)
3. Oni (3,61 stars, 463 notes)

-S o r a- wrote:

Hi~M4M by pm >w<

futsuu

00:29:175 (2) - move 00:28:950 - ? No, I prefer my pattern here.
00:44:739 (4) - 00:45:641 (6) - change d? I like to follow the chicken with kats here. No drums so no reason to put dons.
Everything else fixed, thanks!

Muzukashii

00:29:176 (2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - try change this
Nope, I prefer my easy streams.
01:24:438 - addk? Doesn't feel necessary and I want to leave a space before the roll.
01:28:611 (3) - del? Why? The ddd kkk ddd kkk pattern is fine.
01:35:040 (4) - k? That would make the stream way too hard for a muzukashii.
01:42:258 (4) - ^ ^
Everything else fixed, thanks!

Oni

01:12:935 (3) - del? Fixed
01:37:747 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - try this?
I prefer my pattern. :c
nice map~ Thanks.

finish~>w<

Onicorn wrote:

Hello

M4M :3 I Hope there is at least 1 thing that helps (it's perfect )!

Oni

SPOILER

00:21:055 - try this ( at 00:21:393 - there is nothing): Maybe you're right but I prefer my pattern, it has a nice flow imo. I'm not really following drum anyway.



00:28:273 - same here ^

00:30:641 (1) - k? Dunno, here too I think my pattern has a better flow. Not sure about it.

Muzukashii

SPOILER

00:21:393 (2) - move to 00:21:281 (2) - here I think dkk is too hard for a Muzukashii. I removed the note instead.

00:21:281 (2) - delete to make it a bit easier (sounds better,too imo) It fits the cot ( I'm laughing so much right now ) and since I fixed the previous suggestion differently, it's easy already.

01:03:235 - try this:

Yay, thanks!

Futsuu is perfect. Couldn't find anything.

Nwolf wrote:

1.6 can be cool tho

Nwolf wrote:

you forgot the kd

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ from my queue.

[Futsuu]
good~

[Muzukashii]
01:08:085 - add d? I think it would make the pattern too hard for my map.
01:30:303 (1) - end to 01:31:882, and 01:32:108 add d? My mapping is mostly following the chicken (lol) so I'd like to avoid that. It's not really a big beat anyway.

[Oni]
00:23:536 (2) - k? Nope, the mapping consistency is probably better with a don.
01:30:303 (1) - same as Muzukashii Well... same answer.

Good map
Good luck!

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• Remove ''widescreen support' in all diffs,' is not necessary, only if the map have a SB

• 00:39:100 - remove this note? you can get a little break and this is the easier diff of the mapset xD
  00:58:724 (1) - change this note to d? i think follows better the next 00:59:175 (1) -
  01:27:371 - remove this note? is a relax part so, less notes? (?
  01:29:626 - ^?

• This diff seems like a easy Oni ;w; kkd, ddk, ddddd and things like these are not recommend, if you want you can rename this diff to Oni, the actual Oni rename to Inner Oni, and make a new Muzukashii, if not, here suggestions for make the muzukashii more easy xD
  
  00:19:025 (1) - change to k, kkd is hard for a muzu
  00:21:168 (1) - change to d?
  00:22:634 (1) - change to k, same reason as before
  00:26:243 (1) - ^
  00:28:386 (1) - change to d?
  00:29:514 (2,1) - delete these notes?
  00:32:784 (2) - change to d, same reason, ddk a bit hard for a muzu..
  00:36:393 (2) - ^
  00:40:002 (2) - ^
  00:47:784 (2) - delete?
  00:52:972 (2) - ^?
  00:55:002 (2) - ^?
  00:59:401 (2,3) - i think will be better removing these notes
  01:01:656 (1) - change to d and remove 01:01:995 -
  01:07:634 (1) - delete, kk dddd hard pattern ;w;
  01:09:777 (1) - change to d
  01:19:025 (1) - i recommend you to remove this note, short breaks, is a relax part
  01:22:634 (1) - ^
  01:26:243 (1) - ^
  01:29:062 (2,1) - remove?
  01:33:010 (1) - change to k, same reason as before
  01:36:506 (2) - remove?
  01:40:228 (1) - change to k
  01:43:837 (1) - change to k

• 00:20:378 (1) - change to k? same sound ---> 00:19:476 (1) -
  00:27:596 (1) - ^?
  00:37:521 (1) - ^?
  00:41:130 (1) - ^?
  01:38:198 (9) - this pattern sounds a bit ''weird'' how about change to k? (ddkdkk)

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Kurosanyan~ here m4m :3

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• Remove ''widescreen support' in all diffs,' is not necessary, only if the map have a SB Yeah, I used it because I didn't understand correctly it's use, fixed.

[Futsuu]

• 00:39:100 - remove this note? you can get a little break and this is the easier diff of the mapset xD Yes
  00:58:724 (1) - change this note to d? i think follows better the next 00:59:175 (1) - Not sure what's the best choice but I think I'll keep my current ddk k k kkd pattern.
  01:27:371 - remove this note? is a relax part so, less notes? (? Nope, it's better this way.
  01:29:626 - ^? ^

[Muzukashii]

• This diff seems like a easy Oni ;w; kkd, ddk, ddddd and things like these are not recommend, if you want you can rename this diff to Oni, the actual Oni rename to Inner Oni, and make a new Muzukashii, if not, here suggestions for make the muzukashii more easy xD I agree for a few patterns, but for most of it, it's not even close to Oni. Cf my userpage.
  
  00:21:168 (1) - change to d? Yeah
  00:28:386 (1) - change to d? ^
  00:29:514 (2,1) - delete these notes? 6 notes streams aren't recommended for Muzukashii but the map is really slow and I can't find anything that fits to the global flow of my map, so I'll try to keep it this way.
  00:59:401 (2,3) - i think will be better removing these notes I agree, done.
  01:07:634 (1) - delete, kk dddd hard pattern ;w; M'yeah, done.
  01:19:025 (1) - i recommend you to remove this note, short breaks, is a relax part I don't really think this break is necessary but it kinda fits with the music so I'll remove it.
  01:22:634 (1) - ^ ^
  01:26:243 (1) - ^ ^
  The reason I didn't fix the rest is explained well on my userpage.

[Oni]

• 00:20:378 (1) - change to k? same sound ---> 00:19:476 (1) - I'm not really following the drums. I know it's bad but I'd like too keep it this way. Also I think k ddk is easier to follow than k kdk here because of the other patterns of my map.
  Same for the 3 others.
  01:38:198 (9) - this pattern sounds a bit ''weird'' how about change to k? (ddkdkk) ddkdkk is really hard to play. Also I don't really think this pattern is weird. Maybe it's because this part isn't following the chicken and you got used to it.

This is all, i hope my mod has helped you, good luck! ^^ sv 1,6 suck

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my request

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:19:025 (1) - move to 00:19:250
2. 00:22:634 (1) - move to 00:22:859
3. 00:26:243 (1) - move to 00:26:468
4. 01:33:010 (1) - move to 01:33:235
5. 01:40:228 (1) - move to 01:40:453 Everything fixed, it actually fits better with my other patterns, thanks!

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:514 (2) - Delete Not sure if kkk kk is easier than kkkkkk... I'll try to keep it this way.
2. 01:35:153 (5) - Delete Done
3. 01:42:371 (5) - Delete ^

[ Oni]

1. 01:42:371 (1,1) - ctrl+g I know, fits to drums. I'm the first complaining about maps not following drums and I know people might be mad at me for this but I really want to follow the chicken on this one. If I had to follow drums too, I would have to remap the whole thing anyway.

Good luck

snowball112 wrote:

Hey ^^ m4m from my queue, sorry for being so late :/

Muzukashii

- Maybe slightly change some of the doubles between 00:59:626 and 01:11:356? You use a lot of dd or kk doubles here and I think it might play out better if you include dk or kd doubles.
- turn 01:00:416 (1) into a k? Slightly different sound than at 00:59:626 (1,1,2,3) could justify this change.
- 01:04:814 (1) to k, similar ^
- 01:08:423 (1) to k, similar ^

You use k in the Oni in the places mentioned above, and I feel that it fits better so you could include these in the muzu as well. Maybe change other doubles as well, like 01:03:461 (1,2,3,1) to kd dk?

Other difficulties are good in my opinion. Hope this helps and good luck ^^

Kurosanyan wrote:

Nwolf wrote:

you forgot the kd

You forgot the mod. :>

_Gezo_ wrote:

Kurosanyan wrote:

[Futsuu]
Bon t'as une futsuu de 2,06 mais bon j'espère que ça va pas nazi pour si peu. inb4 OnoDQ

00:08:423 (2,1,1,2) - J'vois pas beaucoup ce genre de pattern sur toute la map, je te conseille de faire dk k histoire d'unifier à travers celle-ci Pas beaucoup ? Il revient 5 fois dans la map.
00:22:859 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern m'a l'air un peu compliqué pour une futsuu (plus ça rend le tout assez long si on compte les 6 notes en 1/1 avant), je te conseille de couper ça un peu. 00:22:859 (1) - ne sert pas à grand chose ici selon moi, je te conseille de le retirer. Fixed
00:46:995 (1) - ~ 00:53:536 (1) - Un peu long pour un pattern sans 2/1, mais honnêtement je vois pas comment simplifier vu que chaque note a sa place. J'ai retiré le kk du kkd.
01:19:702 (2,3,1,2) - Comme tout au début du mod de la diff. Pareil pour 01:26:920 (2,3,1,2) - . Même réponse.

[Muzukashii]
00:08:874 (1,2,1) - kkk pour suivre la hauteur ? (comme 00:12:709 (1,2,3) - ) J'utilse ddd pour garder mon pattern en d k d et coller au beat.
00:19:025 (1) - La hauteur ne change pas par rapport à tes autres k, change ça en k aussi ? Si tu dis non à ça, le reste suivant le même raisonnement tu pourras carrément retirer ce qui te convient pas sur les suggestions en-dessous Changé en ddd, la dernière note est un d pour coller au beat encore une fois.
00:22:634 (1) - 00:26:243 (1) - 00:47:897 (1) - 00:55:115 (1) - 01:33:010 (1) - 01:40:228 (1) - 01:43:837 (1) - ^
01:36:619 (1) - ^ (doute) Idem
01:03:461 (1,2) - 01:07:070 (1,2) - 01:10:679 (2,1) - dd ? C'est con comme ça mais t'as la même chose juste après sur dd Ce n'est pas tout à fait la même chose, je trouve que ça colle mieux comme ça. Pour le dernier, j'ai remplacé par d d d k par contre.
01:19:138 (1) - Bouge ça sur la white tick at change en k ? Le placement de la note est assez bizarre de mon côté. La même chose sur 01:22:859 (1) - , 01:26:468 (1) - Fixed
00:42:935 (1,2) - Overlap de notes, c'est pas bon (surtout une big note sur une normal note). Bouge la TS à 00:43:499 - ? Slow retiré.

[Oni]
Overlaps : 00:42:935 (1,2) - 01:11:807 (1,2) - Comme en muzu Viré aussi.
Overlap majeur : 00:59:175 (1,2,3,1) - Faut VRAIMENT changer ça sinon Ono va tous nous tuer. Onopls
00:21:393 (2,1) - dk ? La musique s'y prête mieux imo Remplacé dk kd par kd dk.
00:24:213 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Euh j'avoue ne pas vraiment piger le but de ce pattern... Tout est en 1/2 ici, je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un pattern en 2-4. Remplacé par d ddk.
00:29:175 (2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Je verrais mieux ddkddk d ddkk ici. Parce que poulet. Mais c'est toi qui vois. Fixed. Parce que poulet.
00:51:168 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - Léger overmap ici, y'a pas beaucoup de points intéressants pour un mini stream. Viré la première note.
01:04:476 (3) - Retire ça, aucun cue dans la musique. Plus, mini-pause. Fixed
01:07:747 (1,2,1,1) - dddd, les sons sont exactement les mêmes. Fixed
01:37:747 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - La musique ne s'y prête pas du tout, et le poulet il est pas en train de gueuler de la sorte; j'te conseille de changer ça aussi. Fixed


Mon cerveau a ragequit

1. 00:30:303 (1) - i feel this triplet is a bit weird to play. maybe 00:30:303 (1) - move to 00:30:754 - as a k for the chicken's voice? also if you want to keep triplet, dkd will get better sound totally.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - K? it lacks the consistency with 00:35:717 (1) - 00:39:326 (1) - . pitch is not the same but its really strong sound as with them. D also fits better.
3. 01:19:927 (3) - or 01:20:153 (1) - should be removed. this part is actually calm part. therefore, 4plet doesnt fit for the flow.
4. 01:27:145 (3,1) - same.

1. 00:29:288 (1) - remove? this pattern is fine for me since bpm is too low but its really hard to catch the rhythm. im sure players get confused.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - same as Futsuu. it needs finisher sound imo.
3. 00:49:476 (2,3) - 2 notes of triplet move to 00:49:363 - . i mean 00:49:363 - dd d d k here. sounds better for me.
4. 00:56:694 (2,3) - same.
5. 01:04:138 (1,2) - k. d d doesnt fit because the pitch of chicken's voice is clearly higher than previous notes.
6. 01:07:747 (1,1) - same.
7. 01:17:897 - ~ 01:28:047 - no need triplet sound for the same reason as Futsuu. they are just not good for the flow of song.
8. 01:24:664 (1) - why is this slider shorter than 00:13:386 (1) - ? really plays weird even if its just intentional.

1. 00:39:326 (1) - the same as others.
2. 01:03:799 (3,1,1,1,2) - almost the same reason as Muzukashii. kddk k will get better imo.
3. 01:07:408 - same. kddkkkk or something?
4. 01:20:040 (1) - 01:27:258 (1) - remove for the same reason as others.

TKS wrote:

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:30:303 (1) - i feel this triplet is a bit weird to play. maybe 00:30:303 (1) - move to 00:30:754 - as a k for the chicken's voice? also if you want to keep triplet, dkd will get better sound totally. I'll go with k dk.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - K? it lacks the consistency with 00:35:717 (1) - 00:39:326 (1) - . pitch is not the same but its really strong sound as with them. D also fits better. I want to make it different because of the sound, I'll try D.
3. 01:19:927 (3) - or 01:20:153 (1) - should be removed. this part is actually calm part. therefore, 4plet doesnt fit for the flow. Removed (1)
4. 01:27:145 (3,1) - same. same.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:288 (1) - remove? this pattern is fine for me since bpm is too low but its really hard to catch the rhythm. im sure players get confused. Yup and it gets a better consistency with the next pattern this way.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - same as Futsuu. it needs finisher sound imo. D again
3. 00:49:476 (2,3) - 2 notes of triplet move to 00:49:363 - . i mean 00:49:363 - dd d d k here. sounds better for me. Yeah, it probably sounds better, but I want to keep a rhythm consistency and this is a bit too hard to play imo.
4. 00:56:694 (2,3) - same. same.
5. 01:04:138 (1,2) - k. d d doesnt fit because the pitch of chicken's voice is clearly higher than previous notes. Not sure if it really doesn't fit but I like how the pattern looks with k k and it sounds good too, so I'll follow your suggestion.
6. 01:07:747 (1,1) - same. ^
7. 01:17:897 - ~ 01:28:047 - no need triplet sound for the same reason as Futsuu. they are just not good for the flow of song. Fixed
8. 01:24:664 (1) - why is this slider shorter than 00:13:386 (1) - ? really plays weird even if its just intentional. Uuuh, that's because I had x0,75 SV and forgot to fix the slider. Fixed on Oni too.

[Oni]

1. 00:39:326 (1) - the same as others. D
2. 01:03:799 (3,1,1,1,2) - almost the same reason as Muzukashii. kddk k will get better imo. Fixed
3. 01:07:408 - same. kddkkkk or something? Yup
4. 01:20:040 (1) - 01:27:258 (1) - remove for the same reason as others. Removed.

DakeDekaane wrote:

[General]
wow no Kantan *cries*

[ Oni]
00:06:393 - I think there should be a note (preferably a don) here instead a slider end, this will make it consistent with the rest of the chicken sounds here, the slider wouldn't be bad as a 1/2 slider, but up to you if you decide to remove/change it because this. Replaced by a k and a d. Rip sliders. :'(


[ Muzukashii]
I'm a bit worried about the ddk and kkd patterns, but ddd or kkk just doesn't fit there nicely, so I think it's okay to keep them. Should be fine.
00:29:514 (2) - This note should be moved to 00:29:288 - so it follows the chicken better. Changed the whole pattern into k k kk d d dd to make it easy to play.
00:34:927 (1) - This should be on 00:34:814 - for the chicken and 00:35:040 (1) - could be changed as a kat as it has a higher tone than the next. Removed this note and 00:35:491 - instead.
00:38:311 (1,3) - ^Something similar.
00:41:920 (1) - and 00:42:258 (1) - ^
01:01:544 (2) - Remove to be consistent with 01:09:213 - ? To be consistent, I need to remove both triples. I removed both and the first d k of the pattern too, it's d k d k d now.

[ Futsuu]
00:05:717 - and 00:06:168 - add notes (kats) here, or do something like you did in 01:23:311 (2,1) - ? the way you have now feels a bit incomplete. Fixed with dk kk k.

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