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IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
[IamKwan]
10:36:830 - 其实我这里倒是建议加个note改成五连，跟vocal也不是很违和，主要我还是不太喜欢白线三连 音樂是這樣啊
10:57:646 - 这里理由同上 ^
其他加了
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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
all fix 另外加了很多finish，换了些梗
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Last edited by Fycho , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[Xinely]
  1. 04:53:600 (5) - I personally dont like tripet start on the downbeat, actually here is no sound in the music, I recommend you to remove this note. im sure i hear guitar sound, also this is not downbeat but 4th whitetick
  2. 05:02:377 (1) - i see no reason on NC here...removed
  3. 05:02:822 (1) - remove whistle? the whistle hears really weird... or use soft hitsounds instead. nope, bell sounds are strong here, i need normal whistle instead of soft one
  4. 05:03:488 (3) - ^, in fact you use all soft whistles in the following patterns. ^
  5. 05:17:044 (1,3) - ^ ^
  6. 05:33:822 - add a note? slider instead
  7. 05:35:155 (2) - the slider's head follows nothing, make a circle at 05:35:266 - instead? vocal's breathe here, so i feel i should map it
  8. 07:35:891 (1) - imo finish fits better. ok
  9. 07:54:126 (2,1) - make a better blanket? ok
  10. 07:57:068 (3) - add a default finish at head? nope, no cymbal here

In all, it's fine. So I want to give this a try.
Call me back after you all checked this after 12.1 :)

@examination : can i fix it later? im too lazy to send code, or just fix what i've write from this post, basically nazi things
05:33:488 (2) - move to 228,88 and then add a straight slider start from 05:33:599 - and end at 05:33:822 -
^basically only this one which isnt nazi lol
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[Kawaiwkyik]
  1. 03:00:504 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 没点音效？太缺少击打感了吧
  2. 03:24:504 (4,5,6,7) - 就这里的spacing我觉得有点问题，突然加的有点大，看着改改吧 這個我覺得有需要
  3. 10:15:311 (2) - whyyyyyyy这么扭曲！ 抄抄guy爺爺
  4. 10:28:663 (2) - 头上whistle？
  5. 12:16:575 (6) - 头上加点东西吧？whi和fin感觉都行
  6. 12:20:575 (6) - ^
  7. 12:17:700 (1) - 头上whistle？
  8. 12:18:575 (3) - whistle
  9. 12:21:700 (1) - ^
  10. 12:22:700 (4,9) - 24clap补上，还有12:23:575 (10) -
  11. 12:27:575 (7) - ^
  12. 13:02:950 (3,5) - 这两个头上的clap是不是补上比较好啊
  13. 13:04:950 (3,6) - ^
  14. 13:06:450 (4) - 头上finish clap
  15. 13:06:950 (3) - 头上clap
  16. 13:07:950 (2) - ^
  17. 13:12:700 - 这里漏了总觉得不舒服，可以把13:12:450 (7) - 加一个折返
  18. 13:14:450 (7) - ^
  19. 13:16:762 (1) - 转盘早点结束后面13:20:450 - 的1/3放四个note或一个折返滑条，只是提一下，可以不改 會變尾殺
沒提的都fix了
thanks for mod

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Yumeno Himiko
Elite Storyboarder
1,168 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Yumeno Himiko
[General]
  1. Your soft-whistle3.wav is only 28ms long, which is not acceptable.
    SPOILER
    fixed
    You can use this instead. http://puu.sh/d9w5h/10da33e7ec.wav
  2. Add audio leadin about 1500ms fixed
  3. Since ZZHBOY/[_Crystal] has changed his username to Elaine/Crystal, add their new username to tags. fixed,also going to fix the storyboard
  4. soft-hitclap3.wav is not used in the mapset, consider to delete it. deleted

[examination]
  1. 00:01:270 (1) - 头上finish？感觉这里加上还是可以的。 加了
  2. 00:07:936 (3) - s:c1 whistle fixed
  3. 00:15:825 (5,6) - 这里的1/6二连很容易被误读，最好改下滑条 改成滑条了
  4. 00:19:936 (1,2,3) - 不加个finish吗？ 加了
  5. 00:26:603 (5,6,7) - 和上面的1/6一样，不然56拉个滑条？ 改好了
  6. 00:35:936 (1,2,3) - 这里的间距最看不懂，搞那么近感觉完全没有必要啊，还特意拉花式滑条 嗯……换了一下
  7. 00:43:103 (1) - you must forget finish here. fixed
  8. 02:30:038 (3,2,2) - 头上的whistle太弱了，用finish？ 好
  9. 02:35:720 (1) - finish fixed
  10. 02:35:948 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 说真的我对这里的节奏的下发很不舒服，故意忽略了白线上的beat而去跟vocal打起来就有一种很违和的感觉，虽然现在也不是不可以，不过还是建议你考虑改动下 这段节奏完全抄的lovelive里面sg的日替hard难度，所以跟那个是一样坑的 ;)
  11. 02:40:948 (3,4) - blanket好点 嗯好了
  12. 02:41:175 (4,5,6,7) - 建议你在这里换个finish的音效，你这个finish太闷了都被whistle给覆盖了 换了drum的
  13. 02:48:902 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里音效都不下了？ 改了以后忘加了/w\ 现在加好了
  14. 02:55:493 (3) - 头上和尾巴都补上finish 好
  15. 07:02:962 (1,2,3) - 这三个头上都缺点东西吧？ finish added
  16. 07:24:162 (3,3,3,4,5) - 虽然说这个我可以给过，不过我还是建议就普通地下note比较好 还是想保持现在这个样子的=A=

fixed Xinely's req

updated examination Crystal Fycho Xinely Kawaiwkyik Regraz happy623 yf_bmp Elaine Hinsvar IamKwaN's parts
Last edited by Yumeno Himiko , edited 2 times in total.
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
ALL FIXED!
Thank you!~
:)
Notes
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Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,122 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
小古要起飞了
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
@Minakami Yuki : All fixed ﾉ ✧

thanks
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
all fixed

Part1
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

handsome wrote:

[Hinsvar]

01:03:008 (1) - follwing 00:54:268 (1) - would be pretty cool imo The music isn't similar so uh yeah.
01:08:205 - don't get the rhythm here. if i'm not wrong the larger spacing represents the 'stuttering' sound? if so it starts at this timing. maybe something along the lines of: piclink. maybe NC on 5 too~ I start when it's getting more noticeable (01:08:441).
01:10:331 (1,2,3,4,1) - not a nazi of spacing, but its too large here imo. Did... stuff.
01:29:073 - vocals here more suitable, compared to the blue tick hell that is 01:29:191 (3) - A 1/3 tick...? Uh what are you trying to say?
01:39:939 (1,2,3,4) - loudest vocals 2014, you might wanna emphasize each vocal portion individually? something like this. I'm pretty sure what I currently have goes better with the song though ._.

-[Hikari]- wrote:

[02&03]

  • 01:09:859 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make a stream with a smaller DS but do not stack them Sure.
    Well, a great part and I don't have more suggestion;w;

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[Hinsvar]
  1. 00:56:158 (2) - finish at head? Finish is too loud; used a whistle instead.
  2. 00:59:465 (1) - whistle? Whoops.
  3. 01:02:300 (1) - forget drum sampleset? ^
  4. 01:03:481 (2) - not drum whistle, just finish, fits much better imo Used soft addition instead.
  5. 01:05:134 (1) - add a whistle at end? Added.
  6. 01:16:237 - 01:16:709 - 01:17:182 - these three place I think finish fits better than drum whistle Again, finishes seem to be too loud considering how the instrument sounds like.
  7. 01:18:127 (6) - forget whistle? RIP
  8. 01:29:545 (1) - drum sampleset or finish? Drum/Soft'd.
  9. 01:37:104 - 01:37:340 - 01:37:813 (4) - all claps Sure, except for 01:37:340; seems a little too excessive.
  10. 01:42:655 (2,1) - that's too farrrrrr Reduced the spacing.
  11. 01:44:427 - 01:44:663 - 01:44:899 - 01:45:372 - all claps Okay, except for 01:44:427 (again), because it seems too much and will only conflict with other claps.
  12. 01:56:947 (1) - remove whistle, it sounds too weird. Done!
Thanks guys!

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Yumeno Himiko
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okay~ all parts updated now.
SB is also updated.
Hinsvar
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Btw, change SECRET to SCARLET please; the name of Maki's second solo album is SCARLET PRINCESS :P

EDIT: A kudosu for a metadata fix isn't necessary lol
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Yumeno Himiko
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sure~
:P
Winnie
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My bum isn't prepared for this yet...
Koiyuki
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Recheck

Your soft-hitfinish.wav has a 10ms delay:
SPOILER

The current rule is discussing about that. t/251629

For safe, please change to this soft-finish.wav

happy623 02:23:116 - to 02:23:347 - add something?
Xinely 05:33:933 (3) - change to a 3/4 slider and a note? sounds better

poke me later
Yumeno Himiko
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done
change the diff name to Scarlet Princess according to Hinsvar's advice.
Koiyuki
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We fixed some repetitive and useless timing sections via irc.
The map seems fine to me, so I want to give it a try.

Bubbled #1!
Take my virginfirst bubble!
lol I think it's also your first bubbled map? Good luck on approval!

To next BAT: Maybe you should need double check on 07:25:762 (3,4,5) - , these kinds of sliders are snapped on 1/12 which follow the vocal.
Yumeno Himiko
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谢谢m酱！
1st bubble >//<
Lavender
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Lavender
好
顺便，难度名里有scarlet princess了，tag里面的去掉吧
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu
加油！
Hinsvar
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IT'S REAL

HYPE FOR THE SCARLET PRINCESS

i wish i could bubble/approve this
Yumeno Himiko
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reply to [Teichan]

Will delete it tonight :)

Thank you =W=
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scarlet princess
Mira-san
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Mira-san
AYAYAYAYA.

Fix that SCARLET thing and w00t
Go exam /o/ \o\ \o/
smallboat
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先標，晚上應該能IRC
smallboat
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Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.

[Scarlet Princess]
01:17:654 (4,5,6) -
SPOILER
01:56:711 (4) - Feel no need to add so quickly speed change,reduce to 1.5x? And add a NC.
02:27:847 (6) - Stack 02:29:584 (1) ?
02:40:720 (1,4) - Switch NC,because downbeat vocal start at 02:41:175 (4).
SPOILER
02:47:425 (2) - Suggest stream DS keep consistent.
02:48:902 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move down a bit? Looks the pattern better :
SPOILER
03:16:949 (2) - (132|68)? Make symmetry with (1) , can have a good flow better imo.
03:24:949 (6,7) - This 1/4 distance seems place so far I think,perhaps you can reduce a bit distance make close some with these objects?
(6) - Move to (318,146),(7) - Move to (100|184).

05:19:488 (2) - This hitsound seems sounds like noisy , make the same with 05:17:711 (3) - head?
05:23:822 (4,6) - The same reason as above ,remove all whistle hitsound will listen better I think.
05:26:377 (1) - Has no special heavy vocal here,feel don't need a single NC.
06:08:961 (1) - Maybe can change 2 note to follow the vocal.
06:14:573 (6) - You can add a note and add finish express the downbeat do a song end.
08:11:341 (2) - Sounds like have a drum point here,add a note?
08:26:978 (2) - Suggest change a note make this play better,sounds like no stream there.
09:55:369 (1,2) - Stack 09:53:981 (1) - slider head? Make far a bit with 09:55:022 (5).
10:35:376 (5) - Add a note at (364,182),make play better I think.
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10:35:376 (5) 沒鼓阿 不加
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02:28:561 - The break is gone
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哼哼 要飞了
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smallboat wrote:

Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.

[Scarlet Princess]
01:17:654 (4,5,6) -
SPOILER
Sure.
01:56:711 (4) - Feel no need to add so quickly speed change,reduce to 1.5x? And add a NC. I'm very sure it's easily readable, and I made it 2x so it'd fit with how the instrument plays. Also an NC is not necessary, because the music's rhythm is still "continued" (not sure of the correct term lol) from 01:55:057.
Thanks!

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Xinely
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smallboat wrote:

Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.

[Scarlet Princess]
05:19:488 (2) - This hitsound seems sounds like noisy , make the same with 05:17:711 (3) - head? that's mistake lol, removed normal additions
05:23:822 (4,6) - The same reason as above ,remove all whistle hitsound will listen better I think. nope, drum fits a lot here
05:26:377 (1) - Has no special heavy vocal here,feel don't need a single NC. removed
thanks, please fix it examination coz im lazy to give code LOL
Rizia
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考試幫我改這個 09:55:369 (1,2) - Stack 09:53:981 (1) - slider head? Make far a bit with 09:55:022 (5).
Yumeno Himiko
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smallboat wrote:

Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.

[Scarlet Princess]
01:17:654 (4,5,6) -
SPOILER
Fixed as Hinsvar says

01:56:711 (4) - Feel no need to add so quickly speed change,reduce to 1.5x? And add a NC. No change as Hinsvar says
02:27:847 (6) - Stack 02:29:584 (1) ? 02:40:720 (1,4) - Switch NC,because downbeat vocal start at 02:41:175 (4).
SPOILER
stacked
02:47:425 (2) - Suggest stream DS keep consistent. Fixed
02:48:902 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move down a bit? Looks the pattern better : done
SPOILER
03:16:949 (2) - (132|68)? Make symmetry with (1) , can have a good flow better imo. no change according to Kawaiwkyik
03:24:949 (6,7) - This 1/4 distance seems place so far I think,perhaps you can reduce a bit distance make close some with these objects?
(6) - Move to (318,146),(7) - Move to (100|184). ^

05:19:488 (2) - This hitsound seems sounds like noisy , make the same with 05:17:711 (3) - head? Fixed as Xinely says
05:23:822 (4,6) - The same reason as above ,remove all whistle hitsound will listen better I think. No change as Xinely says
05:26:377 (1) - Has no special heavy vocal here,feel don't need a single NC. Fixed as Xinely says
06:08:961 (1) - Maybe can change 2 note to follow the vocal. I guess it's not necessary
06:14:573 (6) - You can add a note and add finish express the downbeat do a song end. done
08:11:341 (2) - Sounds like have a drum point here,add a note? 没鼓音啊111
08:26:978 (2) - Suggest change a note make this play better,sounds like no stream there. Fixed
09:55:369 (1,2) - Stack 09:53:981 (1) - slider head? Make far a bit with 09:55:022 (5). Fixed as Kawaiwkyik says

10:35:376 (5) - Add a note at (364,182),make play better I think. no change as IamKwaN says
also fixed the SB problem and the tag problem.
thx~~
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Looks fine,and discuss some suggestion with mapper,at last , good luck on ranking ~ !

#2 Bubbled !
Yumeno Himiko
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好 谢谢小船w :)
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要起飞了，aji人欢喜
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As requested!

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Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[Preview Point]
Prefer to be 00:21:936 - =v=

[Scarlet Princess]
  • Examination:
  1. 00:13:270 - Prefer to add a circle here, not too strong on vocal, like 00:15:770 (5) -
  2. 00:15:270 (4) - Tail can be closer to 00:14:603 (3) - :
    Image
  3. 00:31:270 (2) - Not to stack 00:30:603 (1) -
    Hinsvar:
  4. 00:49:662 (2,3) - Make their DS nearer to each other (on tail too maybe)
    happy623:
  5. 04:25:879 (3) - NC here to make it strong on 04:24:546 (1,2,1,2) -
  6. 04:45:435 (1) - Ctrl+G better flow imo
    Elaine:
  7. 06:07:666 - Finish?
    Examination:
  8. 07:19:762 (1,2,3) - Arrange the DS a bit, make them all around the same
  9. 07:25:762 (3,4,5) - Maybe can lower volume (or near silence) of slider tail, sounds extra especially 07:26:128 (4) -
    El SolarBeam:
  10. 08:38:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit low volume of claps here
    Regraz:
  11. 09:03:667 - Finish
    Kawaiwkyik:
  12. 09:56:756 - Finish
    IamKwaN
  13. 11:21:747 (1,2,3) - and 11:24:184 (1,2,3) - , can't see one of the border line of (3), but if it's okay to rank then...?
Call me back!

Edit: Missing mod time
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要起飛了
也是幫我改 謝謝
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