Kurokami wrote:

Ok, lets give a chance to DS to mod the CtB diffs before apple. :3 I want to avoid the pop and also I need to check the metadata as well.

General

1. Offset : I feel like the right offset is about 342 but I'm not sure about it... maybe you should ask someone who's good at timing
2. Combo Colors : It would better to use some colors that fit with the song. How about this? Just copy & paste the codes in your osu. files to apply it
3. Difficulty Spread : The gap between Salad and Platter is kinda big, you should nerf platter since it's bit harder than usual platter diffs
4. Approach Rate : Consider using AR 8.6~8.8 for rain since the bpm is low

Cup

1. 00:25:818 (1) - Remove NC and add new one at 00:26:675 (2) -
2. 00:29:032 (2) - Remove whistle and add new one on the head of 00:29:460 (3) -
3. 00:33:318 (2) - Ctrl+G?
4. 00:55:175 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider
5. 01:43:175 (1) - Remove finish on the head of the slider, and if you feel like it's good, you can add whistles on each head & arrow & tail of the slider
6. 01:43:175 (1) - Try this

Salad

1. 00:12:103 (4,1) - The jump between (4) and (1) is kinda unforgiving. Highly suggest you to reduce the distance between them
2. 00:20:460 (3) - Add finish on the tail of the slider
3. 00:51:746 (1) - Finish on the head, like what you did on 00:48:318 (1) -
4. 01:01:175 (1) - Ctrl+G for make this part more comfortable to play with, also consider moving it to about x:416 after you ctrl+g it
5. 01:05:460 (1) - Same as 00:51:746 (1) -
6. 01:12:318 (1) - How about moving this slider to x:208? I feel like the jump between (4) and (1) is kinda wide
7. 01:13:603 (3) - x:217 for better movement
8. 01:14:460 (5) - ^
9. 01:43:175 (1) - Try this

Platter

1. 00:11:675 (3,1) - The jump between (3) and (1) is way too much for the relaxing part, Try this
2. 00:20:460 (3) - Add finish on the tail
3. 00:27:425 - Actually, there's no rhythm at 00:27:425 - , so consider changing timeline here
4. 00:31:175 - Finish
5. 00:42:532 (2,3,4) - Select these notes and move them to x:288, the current jumps are way too hard
6. 00:50:460 (2) - Highly suggest you to move this slider to x:320, to make this part plays more comfortable
7. 01:19:175 (1,2) - Not really good, since this is the calm part, you should remove hdash between (1) and (2)
8. 01:21:746 (4,5) - The jump between (4) and (5) is pretty tricky, so how about sth like this?
9. 01:24:318 - Finish

Rain

1. 00:15:556 (6,1) - It's really hard to catch them because the distance between them is pretty unforgiving, how about adding a new HDash between (6) and (1)?
2. 00:33:770 (2,3) - Jump between (2) and (3) is kinda cruel... Please reduce the distance between them
3. 00:48:770 (2) - The finish sounds bit weird imo, how about removing finish?
4. 00:52:199 (2) / 00:55:627 (2) - ^
5. 01:12:127 (4) - I prefer x:144 for this note, since it makes the movement better
6. 01:13:199 (1) - Move this to about x:464 to have a HDash between two sliders
7. 01:42:770 (3,1) - People will mad and rate 1 star if they make a miss here, therefore consider having a HDash between (3) and (1)

Spectator wrote:

General

1. Offset : I feel like the right offset is about 342 but I'm not sure about it... maybe you should ask someone who's good at timing ok
2. Combo Colors : It would better to use some colors that fit with the song. How about this? Just copy & paste the codes in your osu. files to apply it Fixed
3. Difficulty Spread : The gap between Salad and Platter is kinda big, you should nerf platter since it's bit harder than usual platter diffs Not change
4. Approach Rate : Consider using AR 8.6~8.8 for rain since the bpm is lowNot change

Cup

1. 00:25:818 (1) - Remove NC and add new one at 00:26:675 (2) - Fixed
2. 00:29:032 (2) - Remove whistle and add new one on the head of 00:29:460 (3) - Umm...Not change
3. 00:33:318 (2) - Ctrl+G? Fixed
4. 00:55:175 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider Fixed
5. 01:43:175 (1) - Remove finish on the head of the slider, and if you feel like it's good, you can add whistles on each head & arrow & tail of the slider Fixed
6. 01:43:175 (1) - Try this I think move to right and use that pattern

Salad

1. 00:12:103 (4,1) - The jump between (4) and (1) is kinda unforgiving. Highly suggest you to reduce the distance between them Fixed
2. 00:20:460 (3) - Add finish on the tail of the slider Fixed
3. 00:51:746 (1) - Finish on the head, like what you did on 00:48:318 (1) - Fixed
4. 01:01:175 (1) - Ctrl+G for make this part more comfortable to play with, also consider moving it to about x:416 after you ctrl+g it Fixed
5. 01:05:460 (1) - Same as 00:51:746 (1) - Fixed
6. 01:12:318 (1) - How about moving this slider to x:208? I feel like the jump between (4) and (1) is kinda wide Fixed
7. 01:13:603 (3) - x:217 for better movement Fixed (x:224)
8. 01:14:460 (5) - ^ Fixed (x:224)
9. 01:43:175 (1) - Try this Fixed

Platter

1. 00:11:675 (3,1) - The jump between (3) and (1) is way too much for the relaxing part, Try this Fixed
2. 00:20:460 (3) - Add finish on the tail Fixed
3. 00:27:425 - Actually, there's no rhythm at 00:27:425 - , so consider changing timeline here Fixed
4. 00:31:175 - Finish Fixed
5. 00:42:532 (2,3,4) - Select these notes and move them to x:288, the current jumps are way too hard Fixed (x:256)
6. 00:50:460 (2) - Highly suggest you to move this slider to x:320, to make this part plays more comfortable Fixed
7. 01:19:175 (1,2) - Not really good, since this is the calm part, you should remove hdash between (1) and (2) Fixed
8. 01:21:746 (4,5) - The jump between (4) and (5) is pretty tricky, so how about sth like this? Fixed
9. 01:24:318 - Finish Fixed

Rain

1. 00:15:556 (6,1) - It's really hard to catch them because the distance between them is pretty unforgiving, how about adding a new HDash between (6) and (1)? Fixed
2. 00:33:770 (2,3) - Jump between (2) and (3) is kinda cruel... Please reduce the distance between them Fixed
3. 00:48:770 (2) - The finish sounds bit weird imo, how about removing finish? Fixed
4. 00:52:199 (2) / 00:55:627 (2) - ^ Fixed
5. 01:12:127 (4) - I prefer x:144 for this note, since it makes the movement better Fixed (x:96)
6. 01:13:199 (1) - Move this to about x:464 to have a HDash between two sliders Fixed
7. 01:42:770 (3,1) - People will mad and rate 1 star if they make a miss here, therefore consider having a HDash between (3) and (1) Umm...(1) - ctrl+h

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

ok. second check is up
NOTE : I am using cutting edge and they did update what AiMod can find for unsnapped notes Haha, me too. :p


[Unsure]
you have sv changes on the end of Salad difficulty. I don't know if that is acceptable for a Salad. I would check with someone like Spectator, CLSW, Kuro, etc because they know the ruling on that (also they are more experienced mappers/modders than I am) SV changes on CtB difficulties are accepted as long as the pattern is not extreme since they are only affect the size of the slider and makes easier to create nice slider patterns.

[Simple changes]
you forgot to snap the end of the second Kaia on Salad, Platter and Rain
The beginning of the third kaia time is not snapped on Rain This needs to be changed for sure.

[Other Findings]
you have sv changes on Cup. Last time I knew, you shouldn't have them on Cup (just like there should be none on an Easy) but that ruling might have been changed. I'm actually fine with them as long as they are not creates extreme pattern. The diff can be played just fine with them so I see no problem allowing it.

You have only two kaia times for the Taiko but you divided the first one into two for CtB (hence three). Just wondering why the different kaia times for going from one game mode to another Consistency would be nice here.

You have soft-sliderslide.wav in the song folder, but only sliders on the CtB difficulties (slider slides are not audible in CtB, so you can delete this from the mapset) Wut, I don't have it. o.o If it is really there then it needs to be deleted.

Sieg wrote:

yo

try

works perfectly imo

Umm... I'm not sure I will Keep , Thanks

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

ok. second check is up
NOTE : I am using cutting edge and they did update what AiMod can find for unsnapped notes I check this not have note unsnap !?

[Kantan]


[Futsuu]


[Muzukashii]

Kurokami wrote:

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

ok. second check is up
NOTE : I am using cutting edge and they did update what AiMod can find for unsnapped notes Haha, me too. :p


[Unsure]
you have sv changes on the end of Salad difficulty. I don't know if that is acceptable for a Salad. I would check with someone like Spectator, CLSW, Kuro, etc because they know the ruling on that (also they are more experienced mappers/modders than I am) SV changes on CtB difficulties are accepted as long as the pattern is not extreme since they are only affect the size of the slider and makes easier to create nice slider patterns.

[Simple changes]
you forgot to snap the end of the second Kaia on Salad, Platter and Rain
The beginning of the third kaia time is not snapped on Rain This needs to be changed for sure. l Ok Fixed

[Other Findings]
you have sv changes on Cup. Last time I knew, you shouldn't have them on Cup (just like there should be none on an Easy) but that ruling might have been changed. I'm actually fine with them as long as they are not creates extreme pattern. The diff can be played just fine with them so I see no problem allowing it.

You have only two kaia times for the Taiko but you divided the first one into two for CtB (hence three). Just wondering why the different kaia times for going from one game mode to another Consistency would be nice here. l In Taiko kiai is can't flashing

You have soft-sliderslide.wav in the song folder, but only sliders on the CtB difficulties (slider slides are not audible in CtB, so you can delete this from the mapset) Wut, I don't have it. o.o If it is really there then it needs to be deleted. l Ok Delete

rew0825 wrote:

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

ok. second check is up
NOTE : I am using cutting edge and they did update what AiMod can find for unsnapped notes I check this not have note unsnap !?

[Kantan]


[Futsuu]


[Muzukashii]

ursa wrote:

Mod time for suggestions

General :
About the hitsounds you used. the clap hitsound is really a quiet one & i feels the many usages for finish hitsound makes your flow sounds bad . I recommended you , how about try using normal clap & Normal hitsound finish. I think it'll be suitable for your maps.

also I feels not sure about the current offset. but i guess i should ask some experienced BAT/QAT about this case


Rain
Note : the last kiai part kinda pain & it's not works well with your overall pattern
00:33:340 (1,2) - well you can move this 00:33:768 (2) - slider a bit to left to make the next part more logically to catch Fixed
01:12:340 (1,1) - this slider's flow works so bad & it's not suit with your overall mapping flow , i strongly suggest you should try to improve a good pattern here Fixed
01:17:911 (4,5,6) - try to move this whole beat to left ( x = 368) to make this 01:17:482 (1,2,3,4) - jump works well (Select & move all the beat until the coordination shows on x = 368) Fixed
01:19:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this whole beat to right to (x = 304) ^ same case as above Fixed
01:30:875 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - this part's chain jump flow are bad , i sugges you should try to readjust the position on this part Fixed
01:34:304 (8,1,2,3,4) - bad chain flow too , try to readjust the position too Fixed
01:38:054 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest you should shorten this slider jump's position because it works bad Fixed
Extra : From Riari's Suggestion on #ctb !?

01:43:197 (1) - could also be shortened to a 1/2 with a circle at 01:43:625 - because it's sounds much more fitting Umm..No
00:26:697 (2) - Should that be a whistle slider - i understand the head is, but maybe the body is a mistake ok Fixed
00:24:340 (4) - this isn't too appealing either Move to x:128


Cup
Note : some beat's position are too short & make this cup diff very easy to play & it's kinda bored at the same time , i strongly suggest you should make some improvement ;w; I want this Cup is Easy
00:08:911 (1,2) - i think you co can raise this part's distance a bit ( 00:08:911 (1) - x = 128) Fixed
00:16:197 (3) - x = 352 Fixed
00:17:911 (1,2) - same case as 00:08:911 (1,2) - Fixed
00:20:911 (5,1) - 00:21:340 (1) - to x = 160 ? Umm..Fixed
00:24:768 (1,2,3,4) - you can move this part into the corner right to make some distance between the other parts Fixed
00:28:197 (1,2,3,4,5) - still you can improve this part by adding some distance Fixed
00:33:340 (2,3,4,5) - try not to make this part feels stacked Fixed

the Platter & Salad diff are well modded & I find no issue or errors about that . . . Really!?

For the last thing , i suggest you should find some experienced modder for hitsounds Ok I will find

btw , try to PM/Contact me after you applied & fix some issues , so i can Check it well , Goodluck

- N a n a k a - wrote:

For hs request
http://puu.sh/d3ywn/6ef2902c37.rar
call me if you have a problem

CLSW wrote:

Here's recheck.

[Rain]
00:44:891 (1,2) - Ctrl + G, to make it better flow. Fixed
00:45:320 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
00:45:748 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:46:391 (1,2) - Make it further, it's a bit boring for now. Maybe (1) for x : 128, and (2) for x : 384? Fixed
00:55:605 (2,3) - x : 256, x : 480. Actually you already used similar style of the circles for twice, so how about to try with this? Fixed (x:256 , x:160 for some easy)
01:11:034 (2) - add hyperdash on its tail. Fixed
01:20:034 (5,6) - Add more movements here, this one is boring though. Fixed (ctrl+h)
01:39:748 (1,3) - Fixed

try this

[Platter]
01:28:820 (4,5) - add a jump here, it will fit nicely.Fixed

[Salad]
00:32:034 (2) - Not really a good idea. Just use fliped 00:31:177 (1) as well. Fixed
01:39:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Feel pretty hard to catch them all without exact timing and sense. Could you reduce its distance for a bit? Fixed

[Cup]
00:35:034 (1) - move it a bit right. x : 272? Fixed
01:07:177 (3,4) - a bit excessive slider. Could you fix them with high-angled one? Fixed
01:38:034 (1,2) - Inconsistency sliders. Fix them with same shape. Fixed

That's it! Very nice work, and I think it's ready for the apple, Call me back if you were done.

Kitokofox wrote:

Here's my CtB mod!

Cup

The AR looks a little fast for a Cup. No
00:17:891 (1,2,3) - You use a lot of these vertical noodle sliders. if you rotate some of them, you could get a little more slider variance, since there's a whole lot of these in the map. Um..No
00:31:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - For stuff, this included, there's not a lot of movement variation sometimes. It helps to get the player to keep moving and dancing. ok some fix
01:17:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is a cool example of above. You're pulling the catcher along with the music, and it looks pretty as well as plays nicely. Um..ok
Overall, I feel like you could use a lot more slider variance in the map. This is just a personal suggestion into how you can improve your future maps. There's really not any immediate problem with the map, it conforms with the mapping criteria and plays rather nicely. ok

Salad

Again, the AR is rather speedy for a Salad. Seems to be a recurring thing. Easily fixed, though! and as with the previous map, there's a lot of vertical noodle sliders that you could probably rotate for some more map variance. Nooo not change AR ;w;
00:11:034 (1,2,3,4) - You have a couple of these long segments of going in one specific direction. I admit they are interesting, but it would be cool if you added a little spacing among some of these parts. Especially here.. 00:18:962 (4,1,2,3) - But, if this is your way of mapping, you can leave this comment be. It still looks pretty in it's own merit, all aligned like that. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2283987 Even by simply flipping the two middle sliders, we get a cool zig-zaggy motion which sounds cool with the music. Let your imagination run wild. Fixed
00:54:962 (4,1,2) - I really love how you did this with the notes and the slider. I really think you should pull off stuff like this more often, as it heightens parts of the songs with important movements. ok
01:15:748 (1) - As soon as we get off the Kiai here, some contradiction happens. In the Cup, there's a lot more movement energy compared to other parts of the map, but here, we see a lot less than was emphasized on the cup. It helps to make the difficulty range consistent through every part of a song's structure compared to other difficulties, so the player knows what to expect if they like your map and decide to challenge them self with a harder difficulty or mod up an easier one. ok
01:39:534 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like this motion you put here. this is why, earlier i suggested sliders go in a way like I said, because you can line them up and blanket them if you so desire and give the player more to do than just move on one direction for a couple of seconds. ok

Platter

The AR on Platter seems fine. It could be slowed down a wee bit to scale with Cup and Salad though. Nooo ;w;
There's a little more slider diversity here.
00:48:319 (1,2) - I feel that you could add a hyper-dash here to emphasize this part of the song. No 1/4 it's can't add Hdash
01:07:820 (3) - This is a really weird slider that throws out a random droplet away from it's ends. I found it strange to be honest. not change
01:15:748 - I feel like you could add some more with the rhythm. Since you're at a platter now, you can incorporate a lot more of the complex rhythm that this part of the song has to offer. not change
01:32:034 (4,1) - This happens to be nearly a pixel jump (970 units/second) And it's a rather tight jump for a platter. You really should revise this. Fixed

Rain

There's a lot of repeating patterns here, especially during the beginning of the map. Like earlier, you can rotate some of these patterns/sliders or space them a little differently to help give them diversity, or mix a little more patterns into it. The Ar looks fine here too. Um..not change
01:06:534 (4,5,6,7) - This went way out of place from the rest of the rhythm you had set. At first I thought it was a snapping error. Then 01:02:891 (3,4,5,6,1) - This here, and thought maybe this was supposed to be a part of the map. However, it also sounds hitsounded weirdly. Fixed
01:06:534 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - As previously, this whole second has some weird hitsounding that doesn't seem to go along with the music and the rhythm you already set previously in the map.Fixed
01:15:748 - And as soon as we get here, there's a lot of single-line movements set here. To be very honest, in a Rain, you can make the note spacing quite strange and complex, since players performing at this level of play should be able to play through it nicely. This is just a mild concern. Oh, and when the drums come in at 01:19:177 - Sounds like a great time to pull out your strange pattern you had as I mentioned previously, because it actually fits with the main rhythm set. And you can do that on a Rain. Umm..not change

Other than that, the timing feels pretty swift, I do enjoy the map in general. I hope you enjoy my comments!

ursa wrote:

Rain
00:57:105 (2,3) - This slider can be readjusted like this for improving this part's chainjump [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/2294097]*Pic[/url] Fixed
01:20:677 - how about putting a beat here & placed in x = 464 it feels empty if you not putting beat here Fixed and change some note
01:29:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about try re adjust the position like this this. i just feel the previous one kinda not work well when entering the impact jump part Fixed
01:31:391 (2) - how about mvoing this beat into x = 400 for reducing this 01:30:962 (1,2) - distance to make the next part flow can be better ok Fixed

Unused Green Lines
00:44:034 Fixed
00:46:177 Fixed
01:12:320 Fixed
01:34:070 Fixed

Hitsounds issue
00:45:105 (2) - remove clap Fixed
00:45:319 (3) - add Clap Fixed
00:58:820 (2) - add clap at the slider end Fixed
00:59:677 (3) - remove clap Fixed
01:00:102 (4) - add clap at head slider Fixed

Platter

00:26:677 (5) - this slider can be moved to x = 80 for giving some distance between 00:25:820 (4,5) - part Fixed
01:31:820 (3,4) - how try to move this slider into like this for good position i think Fixed

Hitsound issue
01:05:034 (4) - add clap Umm..No
01:06:748 (3) - add clap ? Fixed
01:34:391 (1) - remove clap at the end slider Fixed
01:34:820 (2) - remove clap at the end slider Fixed

just that & it's ok (no kd)

CLSW wrote:

* Removed soft-sliderslide, and soft-sliderslide2.wav cuz they were useless on Taiko and CtB both.

Okay, now it seems ready, Enjoy your apple!

• [Kantan]

1. 00:12:320 (7,8) - consider removing finish for these two notes ? A bit overemphasized imo.
2. 00:23:891 (21,22) - swap these notes to k d ? This could fit both the vocal and the snare at 00:23:891 -
3. 00:29:462 (29,31) - swap these notes to d k ? Similar to ^
4. 00:44:034 (50,51) - swap these notes to d k ? The vocal at 00:44:462 (51) - is higher-pitched than 00:44:034 (50) -
5. 00:57:748 (70) - maybe d here to show the drop in vocal pitch ?
6. 01:25:605 - How about adding k here and change 01:26:034 (110) - to d ? The patterns in this part are just too sparse that they does not fit the music well.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:11:034 (11,12) - maybe k d here to maintain a better pattern consistency as 00:07:605 (2,3) - ?
2. 00:12:320 (14,15,16) - Similar to Kantan, d k D would be better here.
3. 00:15:320 (19,20,21) - It seems that k d k could follow the snares nicely.
4. 00:16:391 (22,23) - try changing 00:16:391 (22) - to k and move 00:16:605 (23) - to 00:16:819 - and change to d ? This could follow the vocal in a way better.
5. 00:21:320 (35) - consider deleting this to make it consistent to 00:24:748 - ?
6. 00:23:891 (42) - k could follow both the vocal and the snare there.
7. 00:42:962 (92) - maybe k here to fit the high-pitched vocal ?
8. 00:44:462 (96) - maybe k here for snare consistency ?
9. 01:26:462 (187,188) - Again, k d could follow the snare at 01:26:462 (187) - , thus resulting in a better flow imo.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:08:462 (8) - k could fit both the vocal and the snare there.
2. 00:11:891 (24) - ^
3. 00:15:534 (39,41) - swap these notes to d k ? This could accompany the increase in vocal pitch there.
4. 00:16:819 (43,44) - d k could follow the snare at 00:17:034 (44) -
5. 00:23:891 (71) - same as Futsuu
6. 00:36:534 (118,119) - same as 00:16:819 (43,44) -
7. 00:39:962 (133,134,135,136) - consider removing the finishes here ? A bit overemphasized imo. Also, d k k d could follow the vocal pitch better.
8. 00:48:320 (165) - K ? The vocal pitch there is higher than 00:48:748 (166,167) -
9. 00:49:177 (167) - D would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:48:748 (166) -
10. 00:52:177 (178) - ^
11. 00:55:605 (191) - ^
12. 01:02:462 (216) - ^
13. 01:08:891 (241) - same as 00:48:320 (165) -
14. 01:09:748 (243) - same as 00:49:177 (167) -
15. 01:18:212 (275) - This note appears to be a little bit awkward. Consider deleting it to follow 01:16:498 - ?
16. 01:29:891 (318) - same as 00:49:177 (167) -
17. 01:33:320 (332,333) - K D would be nice since the vocal pitch at 01:33:320 (332) - is higher than that at 01:33:748 (333) -
18. 01:36:748 (346) - same as 00:49:177 (167) -

• [Oni]

1. 00:10:820 (21,22) - maybe d k for the sake of snare consistency ?
2. 00:19:391 (64,65,66,67) - It seems the d kkk could result in a better flow of notes since the vocal pitch at 00:19:391 (64) - is lower than that at 00:18:962 (63) -
3. 00:26:998 (101) - k could follow the background clapping sound nicely.
4. 00:28:177 (108) - k could fit both the high-pitched vocal as well as the snare there.
5. 00:39:962 (168,169,170,171) - same as Muzukashii
6. 00:46:712 (201) - consider deleting this note ? There is no obvious sound to be followed.
7. 00:48:320 (212,214) - swap these notes to K D ? Same as Muzukashii.
8. 00:52:177 (228) - same as Muzukashii
9. 00:55:177 (242,244) - same as 00:48:320 (212,214) -
10. 01:02:034 (280,282) - ^
11. 01:05:891 (298,299) - K D could match the vocal pitch nicely.
12. 01:09:320 (315) - same as Muzukashii
13. 01:14:248 (343) - d could represent the drop in vocal pitch there.
14. 01:29:462 (433,435) - same as 00:48:320 (212,214) -
15. 01:36:320 (467,469) - ^

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in my queue. Hi

[General]

Delete the timing point at 01:02:034 - which is redundant for all diffs. Fixed

• [Kantan]

1. 00:12:320 (7,8) - consider removing finish for these two notes ? A bit overemphasized imo. Delete finish at (8)
2. 00:23:891 (21,22) - swap these notes to k d ? This could fit both the vocal and the snare at 00:23:891 - Fixed
3. 00:29:462 (29,31) - swap these notes to d k ? Similar to ^ Fixed
4. 00:44:034 (50,51) - swap these notes to d k ? The vocal at 00:44:462 (51) - is higher-pitched than 00:44:034 (50) - Fixed
5. 00:57:748 (70) - maybe d here to show the drop in vocal pitch ? Fixed
6. 01:25:605 - How about adding k here and change 01:26:034 (110) - to d ? The patterns in this part are just too sparse that they does not fit the music well. Fixed

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:11:034 (11,12) - maybe k d here to maintain a better pattern consistency as 00:07:605 (2,3) - ? Fixed
2. 00:12:320 (14,15,16) - Similar to Kantan, d k D would be better here. change to D k D
3. 00:15:320 (19,20,21) - It seems that k d k could follow the snares nicely. Fixed
4. 00:16:391 (22,23) - try changing 00:16:391 (22) - to k and move 00:16:605 (23) - to 00:16:819 - and change to d ? This could follow the vocal in a way better. Fixed
5. 00:21:320 (35) - consider deleting this to make it consistent to 00:24:748 - ? Fixed
6. 00:23:891 (42) - k could follow both the vocal and the snare there. Fixed
7. 00:42:962 (92) - maybe k here to fit the high-pitched vocal ? Fixed
8. 00:44:462 (96) - maybe k here for snare consistency ? Fixed
9. 01:26:462 (187,188) - Again, k d could follow the snare at 01:26:462 (187) - , thus resulting in a better flow imo. Fixed

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:08:462 (8) - k could fit both the vocal and the snare there. Fixed
2. 00:11:891 (24) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:15:534 (39,41) - swap these notes to d k ? This could accompany the increase in vocal pitch there. Fixed
4. 00:16:819 (43,44) - d k could follow the snare at 00:17:034 (44) - Fixed
5. 00:23:891 (71) - same as Futsuu Fixed
6. 00:36:534 (118,119) - same as 00:16:819 (43,44) - Fixed
7. 00:39:962 (133,134,135,136) - consider removing the finishes here ? A bit overemphasized imo. Also, d k k d could follow the vocal pitch better. Fixed
8. 00:48:320 (165) - K ? The vocal pitch there is higher than 00:48:748 (166,167) - Fixed
9. 00:49:177 (167) - D would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:48:748 (166) - Fixed
10. 00:52:177 (178) - ^ Fixed
11. 00:55:605 (191) - ^ Fixed
12. 01:02:462 (216) - ^ Fixed
13. 01:08:891 (241) - same as 00:48:320 (165) - Fixed
14. 01:09:748 (243) - same as 00:49:177 (167) - Fixed
15. 01:18:212 (275) - This note appears to be a little bit awkward. Consider deleting it to follow 01:16:498 - ? Fixed
16. 01:29:891 (318) - same as 00:49:177 (167) - Fixed
17. 01:33:320 (332,333) - K D would be nice since the vocal pitch at 01:33:320 (332) - is higher than that at 01:33:748 (333) - Umm...Not change
18. 01:36:748 (346) - same as 00:49:177 (167) - Fixed

• [Oni]

1. 00:10:820 (21,22) - maybe d k for the sake of snare consistency ? Fixed
2. 00:19:391 (64,65,66,67) - It seems the d kkk could result in a better flow of notes since the vocal pitch at 00:19:391 (64) - is lower than that at 00:18:962 (63) - Fixed
3. 00:26:998 (101) - k could follow the background clapping sound nicely. Fixed
4. 00:28:177 (108) - k could fit both the high-pitched vocal as well as the snare there. Fixed
5. 00:39:962 (168,169,170,171) - same as Muzukashii Fixed
6. 00:46:712 (201) - consider deleting this note ? There is no obvious sound to be followed. Um...Not change
7. 00:48:320 (212,214) - swap these notes to K D ? Same as Muzukashii. Fixed
8. 00:52:177 (228) - same as Muzukashii Fixed
9. 00:55:177 (242,244) - same as 00:48:320 (212,214) - Fixed
10. 01:02:034 (280,282) - ^ Fixed
11. 01:05:891 (298,299) - K D could match the vocal pitch nicely. Fixed
12. 01:09:320 (315) - same as Muzukashii Fixed
13. 01:14:248 (343) - d could represent the drop in vocal pitch there. Fixed
14. 01:29:462 (433,435) - same as 00:48:320 (212,214) - Fixed
15. 01:36:320 (467,469) - ^ Fixed

That's all and good luck~

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From my modding queue

oni

00:18:748 (62,63) - ctrl + g Fixed
and.... nothing else gj =。=

muzu

01:41:034 (362) - how about put it here 01:40:819 Fixed
and... nothing again...

futsuu

01:13:177 (159) - put it here 01:13:391 Um...I thing not
01:40:605 (217) - 01:40:819 ^

kantan

nothing. gj

eat my star and good luck

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Legend:
d = small don
k = small kat
D = don with finish
K = kat with finish

Kantan

00:49:177 (58) - I don't think finisher fits this note. not change for same all diff
00:56:034 (68) - ^ ^
01:02:891 (78) - ^ ^
01:05:034 (81) - k might fit this better? Fixed

Futsuu

00:08:462 (4,5) - dk might fit the beat better? Fixed
00:09:320 (6,7,8) - ddk Fixed
01:07:177 (144,145) - dk? Um...not change

not much to point out, good diff.

Muzukashi

00:17:891 (47) - k? Fixed and change some note
00:25:177 (75) - ^ Umm...No
01:01:177 (211,212) - dd ^

Oni

nothing really to point out, good diff.

Good mapset overall, starred

1. 01:41:462(133,134) could be changed to k
2. Seems fine

1. 00:10:605 can be removed
2. 00:17:462 ^

1. 00:10:605 d , personally I don't suggest putting triplets other than ddd or kkk in a muzukashii, it is very rare. This applies to all notes in this diff
2. 01:21:748 d
3. 01:25:177 d
4. 01:28:605 d

1. 00:16:712 remove , vocal ends at the previous note
2. This diff is also fine

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

[General]

I don't suggest changing much the key volume , but 40% is really quite low

Since this is a taiko map , it's okay for the drum sound to be slightly high , it also helps the rhythm of gameplay

Anyways, I think 01:22:605 this time section could possibly be removed Ok change some green line 40% to 60% but 01:22:605 not remove

[ Kantan]

1. 01:41:462(133,134) could be changed to k Umm...No
2. Seems fine

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:10:605 can be removed Umm...No but remove 00:11:034 (11) and change some pattern
2. 00:17:462 ^ Umm...No but remove this 00:17:891 (26)

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:605 d , personally I don't suggest putting triplets other than ddd or kkk in a muzukashii, it is very rare. This applies to all notes in this diff Ohh! ok change
2. 01:21:748 d Change
3. 01:25:177 d Not change
4. 01:28:605 d Change

[ Oni]

1. 00:16:712 remove , vocal ends at the previous note Umm...not change
2. This diff is also fine

Nice mapset

1. 00:48:320 - unsnapped green line

1. HP 4 , 2 is too low so that i can pass when i only play 3/10 of whole song
2. 00:13:605 (9) - this note is not really necessary because you already had big note to emphasize this part on 00:12:320 (7,10) -
3. 00:33:748 (35,36) - ^

1. hp4
2. 00:08:462 (4,5) - try to reverse these note, this kind of pattern is harder for newplayer because he/she can't switch kat and don perfectly
3. 00:09:748 (8) - move to 00:09:962 - and remove 00:10:177 (9) - to make more break
4. 00:17:034 (26) - remove, the reason is same as above
5. 00:20:034 (34) - ^
6. 00:27:105 (51) - ^
7. 00:33:748 (67,69) - ^
8. 00:41:248 (89) - ^
9. 00:35:462 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - reduce some notes, it is too hard
10. 00:57:748 (122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - ^ try this
11. 01:11:462 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - ^
12. 01:38:892 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231) - ^

1. 00:07:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this continuous pattern on muzu is too hard, try to make more break like this
2. 00:11:034 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - ^
3. 00:13:605 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
4. 00:19:391 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - ^
5. try to make 1/4 pattern less frequent

1. 00:56:891 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - this pattern is a bit messy, try this would be more clear
2. 00:59:998 (267,268) - move to 01:00:105 - sounds better imo

qoot8123 wrote:

sorry for late www

[General]

1. 00:48:320 - unsnapped green line Ohh Ok Fixed

[ Kantan]

1. HP 4 , 2 is too low so that i can pass when i only play 3/10 of whole song Umm...for Newbie i will keep
2. 00:13:605 (9) - this note is not really necessary because you already had big note to emphasize this part on 00:12:320 (7,10) - Ok remove
3. 00:33:748 (35,36) - ^ Ok remove (35)

[ Futsuu]

1. hp4 same Kantan
2. 00:08:462 (4,5) - try to reverse these note, this kind of pattern is harder for newplayer because he/she can't switch kat and don perfectly Fixed
3. 00:09:748 (8) - move to 00:09:962 - and remove 00:10:177 (9) - to make more break Fixed
4. 00:17:034 (26) - remove, the reason is same as above Fixed
5. 00:20:034 (34) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:27:105 (51) - ^ Fixed
7. 00:33:748 (67,69) - ^ Fixed
8. 00:41:248 (89) - ^ Fixed
9. 00:35:462 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - reduce some notes, it is too hard Ok Fixed
10. 00:57:748 (122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - ^ try this Fixed
11. 01:11:462 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - ^ Fixed
12. 01:38:892 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231) - ^ Fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this continuous pattern on muzu is too hard, try to make more break like Fixedthis
2. 00:11:034 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:13:605 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:19:391 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - ^ Fixed
5. try to make 1/4 pattern less frequent ok

[ Oni]

1. 00:56:891 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - this pattern is a bit messy, try this would be more clear Ok Fixed
2. 00:59:998 (267,268) - move to 01:00:105 - sounds better imo Fixed

the overall is okay, but this difficulty on everydiff is harder, especially muzu, it contain too many continuous 1/2+1/4 pattern,you can use 1/4 on muzu, but remenber don't make the 1/2+1/4 continuous pattern too long , also oni is a bit hard too, but it is fine to me Thanks I will memorize