Hi
[Star]
00:05:129 (3) - add soft whistle, and 00:05:301 - change to drum whistle? I don't know, but it sounds better to me.
00:20:560 (5) - I think moving to 00:20:387 - fits music better.
00:30:129 (3,4,1) - maybe make them more lively, like: (and move other notes accordingly)
00:33:577 - 00:38:060 - in this part, add whistles according to lyrics instead of rigid white lines? i.e.
00:33:232 (1) - also make it normal sample? sounds strange in soft
00:34:784 (1) - add whistle
00:34:956 (2) - remove whistle
00:35:301 - add whistle
00:35:646 - remove whistle
00:35:818 - add whistle
00:56:336 (5) - Maybe delete this note? The music seems to have a break at this point, and this blank jump plays evil. Or if you like to hit every beat in the music, maybe reduce the spacing.
00:57:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to normal sample? sounds cool. or drum, up to you.
[Insane]
00:33:232 (2) - same as Stars
00:33:577 - 00:38:060 -^
00:48:749 (1,2) - exchange NC to follow vocal?
00:55:474 (4) - delete? it's hard to read, and deleting it gives the player more feeling on the next jump
00:57:025 (1) - suggest using 0.75, because it looks like 1/4 in 0.5
00:57:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Stars
01:00:474 (3) - add some curve, like
01:30:818 (4,5) - ctrl+G? imo it's hard to read.
[Hard]
00:00:818 (2,3) - blanket
00:02:370 (3) -
the reverse arrow is overlapped by previous 300 in default skin, which is unrankable.00:53:577 (3,4,5) - slightly increase the distance to separate
01:01:680 (3,4) - blanket should look better
01:02:715 (2,3) - blanket better
01:06:336 (4,1) - ^
01:20:818 (1) -
the star and end of the star is too close, which is hard to read, and thus unrankable. My adjust as an example:
281,179,80818,6,0,B|293:194|293:194|381:204|381:204|327:264|327:264|353:347|353:347|266:323|266:323|198:364|198:364|197:287|197:287|138:238|138:238|207:205|207:205|229:134,1,750,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Normal]
00:25:818 (3) - shorten by 1/2?
00:56:163 (2) - curve more
01:25:129 (4) - moving to 01:25:301 - will fit the music a lot better.
01:23:577 (1) - extend by 1/2? confusing to hit.
I think you need some improvement in the map. Find a couple (2) more mods and ask me for a recheck. Good luck!