imoutosan wrote:

From queue

[Easy]
00:20:371 (3) - 尾巴出屏了 384是极限√
00:21:822 (4) - 顺便这个再往上点就可以顺便做个blanket了 感觉没什么不好√√
00:34:887 (4) - 教练你为什么硬是要让note把折返箭头遮住……√√√
00:40:693 (3) - 感觉也是有点黑 对新人来讲 顺便12我觉得用后面的节奏处理就好 easy1/2还是慎重√。。。？
01:30:048 (3,1) - 嘛 狂挑1/2可能是我太神经质 看看就好√！

[Normal]
同一个人不同难度break要一致 不过这只是ranking的rule√
00:37:306 - 前面都是按白线下满的节奏来的 这里空下了感觉有点莫名 毕竟和00:46:983 - 这里不一样√√√
01:27:145 (1) - 可以放出去不叠着√
02:15:048 (2,1) - 我觉得挺好 不知道别人怎么看√

[Sora]
节奏密了之后Drum音效有点突出
00:21:580 (6) - 去掉√
00:59:322 (6) - ^√√
00:39:242 (1) - 咦 为啥不拉个长的×！
02:47:467 (2,3) - 感觉有点大了 和14拉个正方形就好√

吊 星 好

Mira-san wrote:

From my queue.

Format: Time (object) - suggestion | reason why I suggested it

Sora

00:25:935 (4,5) - I think it sounds better this way. | Yes. Sounds better imo.

01:05:613 (7) - This one follows nothing. Remove it | There's no beat that I can hear.√
02:32:709 (2) - Remove note | You're following the vocals sooo yeah. There's a piano in the BG but that's not what you're following hahah.
03:06:312 (1) - Set the sound to 5% or use a blank hitsound.
02:09:242 - I recommend turning off kiai. | This song is calm. I think it would be better if there weren't anything flashing lol.

Normal

I think CS3.5 looks better.√√√
00:37:790 (4) - Move last point to x:136 y:300 | Flow directs to (1).√
01:31:500 (1) - Fix this blanket. There are many more blankets that can be fixed but this one got my attention. | Looks weird so plz fix huehue √√√√
02:15:048 (2) - ^√
02:17:467 (2,3) - Spacing here looks kinda weird. | Perfectionism
03:06:312 (1) - Set the sound to 5% or use a blank hitsound. >same as Sora | There's no sound at the end of the song sooo yeah. ^^
02:09:242 - I recommend turning off kiai. >same as Sora | This song is calm. I think it would be better if there weren't anything flashing lol. ^ Spacing here looks kinda weird Spacing here looks kinda weird Spacing here looks kinda weird Spacing here looks kinda weird

Easy

Nothing here except these:
03:06:312 (1) - Set the sound to 5% or use a blank hitsound. >same as Sora | There's no sound at the end of the song sooo yeah. ^^√
02:09:242 - I recommend turning off kiai. >same as Sora | This song is calm. I think it would be better if there weren't anything flashing lol. ^√√√

Nice song and map. ^^

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:20:371 (3) - 個人來說還是放得太低了-,-差不多
2. 00:21:822 (4) - 修改下balnket√
3. 01:20:854 (3,1) - ^√
4. 02:14:564 (1,2) - ^√
5. 02:20:854 (2) - 也是太低了√

[Normal]

1. 00:18:919 (1,2) - 放高點吧._.√
2. 00:28:113 (2,4) - blanket√
3. 00:33:435 (1) - http://puu.sh/cr8Cp/b6e8430d28.jpg?√
4. 01:22:548 (2) - 不要這個,把01:22:790 (3)放前吧√
5. 01:28:838 (4) - 放到01:29:080 (4),當然要調整位置:3
6. 01:30:532 (3,4,1) - Blanket√√
7. 02:14:564 (1,2) - ^√

就這樣吧:3
其實我不太喜歡用特別形狀的滑條._.
Style不同啦沒關係:3
Good luck :3

360,322,137951,2,0,B|316:335|316:335|297:346|297:346|267:348|267:348|247:358|247:358|208:380|

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue >w<

[Easy]
00:40:693 (3) - overlap not recommended in easy diff imo, might be too difficult for new players to get
02:17:951 (2) - add clap? seems to fit with others √√√
02:29:564 (1) - move 4th point down for better blanket?
02:54:242 (1) - combo here is in a place I didn't expect o.o maybe try NCs on 02:52:790 (1) - and 02:55:693 (1) - instead?√√√√

[Normal]
00:36:338 (4) - NC?√
02:17:951 (3) - better blanket imo

360,322,137951,2,0,B|316:335|316:335|297:346|297:346|267:348|267:348|247:358|247:358|208:380|

02:30:290 (1,2,3,4) - unstack? imo stack of this length is kind of boring to play. up to you
02:38:274 - imo, speedup isn't necessary for this slider. i'd recommend continue 0.8x to match the pace of the song instead. up to you fixed

[Sora]
00:22:790 (3) - move left a bit to make perfect triangle?
01:02:467 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern was arranged in a way i really didn't expect.... imo make 01:02:709 (4,5) - into 1/4 repeat slider might play better? up to you√！
01:11:177 (1) - down 1 grid for better blanket?
01:18:435 (1) - clap instead of whistle? keep consistency imo√
01:20:129 (6) - left 1 grid for perfect diamond
01:22:306 (2) - whistle here, seems to be missing o.o
01:31:016 (4) - add whistle?√
02:03:435 (4) - clap instead of whistle? √
02:27:629 (4) - don't understand what pattern it's following. mb make a diamond with 02:26:661 (1,2,3,4) - ?

hope it helps. nice map, gl >w<

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry about the short mod, I'm really tired.

General: Nice song, and nice mapping too

Easy

00:39:242 -> End slider at 00:40:209 while deleting circle at 00:40:209
01:06:822 -> End slider at 01:07:790 while deleting circle at 01:07:790
02:10:935 -> End slider at 02:11:661 while deleting circle at 02:11:661

Normal

00:37:790 -> Make it the same slider as 00:36:338
01:14:080 -> Make the slider end at 01:15:048 and delete circle at 01:15:048
01:21:338 -> Make the slider end at 01:22:306 and delete circle at 01:22:306
02:23:758 -> Make the slider end at 02:23:725 and delete circle at 02:23:725

Sora

Nothing wrong that i noticed here^^ (Because i mostly mod rhythm only)

All of the mods above have to do with some part being too difficult. Good Luck.

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

from m4m ;w;

sora

tag 感觉还能加一些？加上artist之类的？

其他美丽

00:47:467 (7,1) - 这两个做成一对的blanket?

01:05:371 (6) - 拉成1/1滑条试试？感觉更合节奏一点

01:14:080 (3,4,5,6,1) - 后面感觉对称流。。。这边也试试做成对称的？其实我不会搞那个简直麻烦

01:21:338 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这边的两个4都可以试着拉成1/1。。。好像都可以;w;比较好听，就这样吧

02:04:403 (5,6,7) - flow太直有点不舒服，建议和前面做成差不多的几何形状

有点特别形状的滑条还可以再捏的好看点，不过已经风格挺统一了，就是不大好看orz√

normal

00:16:016 (1,2,3) - 这里的123摆成左右对称的？x=396 y=68 差不多

00:18:919 (1) - 做成对称形状的呗QWQ

00:21:338 (1) - 这里不妨向上弯曲一点，flow比较顺些 √

00:36:338 (4,5) - 弧度有点大，建议改的平缓一点

00:56:661 (3) - 实在是不好看啊orz 球再捏捏√

02:16:500 (1) - 这根怎么说也做成左右对称的吧。。。

02:19:403 (1,2) - normal的话这边还是跟vocal吧？折返滑条？

02:29:564 (3) - 拉成1/1吧

02:38:274 (2,3) - 这个似乎有点问题吧？直接放在滑条开头的位置没问题吗OAO？没问题大概

02:51:338 (3,1) - blanket一下？

02:54:242 (4,5,6) - blanket一下？顺便感觉后面两个二分拍没必要

03:02:951 (3) - 中间的白点有点多余吧。。。√

ez我没有做过。。。就不摸啦，好喜欢曲子呢><