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Sakura Chiyo (CV:Ozawa Ari) - URAOMOTE FORTUNE

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 มกราคม 2558 at 16:37:58

Artist: Sakura Chiyo (CV:Ozawa Ari)
Title: URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Source: GEKKAN SHOJO NOZAKI KUN
Tags: ending asagi 10nya p_a_n 月刊少女野崎くん Monthly Girls' Nozaki-kun -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-
BPM: 132
Filesize: 13624kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. 10nya's Normal (1.59 stars, 239 notes)
  2. Asagi's Hard (2.74 stars, 474 notes)
  3. Insane (3.72 stars, 775 notes)
Download: Sakura Chiyo (CV:Ozawa Ari) - URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SB by 10nya

Normal by 10nya
Hard by asagi

TV Size ver by kantokun
KantoKun
mp3 นี่มัน loop ด้วยอ่ะ เวอร์เต็มมันออกแล้วนี่ ไม่ทำเวอร์เต็มอ่ะ
Meg
yo PAN :D

KSHR wrote:



Romanized Title: KIMIJYANAKYA DAMEMITAI
Romanized Source: GEKKAN SHOJO NOZAKI KUN

You can add the current romanized title to Tags instead.
you should change title and add tags and add source.

Title : URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Tags : ura omote fortune
Source : GEKKAN SHOJO NOZAKI KUN


Good Luck~
Asagi
hey
10nya
hey

holyfck that bg LOL
Topic Starter
P A N

10nya wrote:

hey

holyfck that bg LOL
YES! AHAHAHA
Topic Starter
P A N
to image--: I will change it when this mapset is move to pending, thanks
Asagi
I feel bad for you changing the BG ;w;
but i want new BG hahaha
10nya
rew0825
จากกิจกรรมในกลุ่ม =w=
-Yuzuriha
General

countdown remove
Letterbox remove
Widescreen remove

03:38:828~   I turn off the last song


Insane


00:24:965(3,4)  I feel a sense of discomfort in the direction


Hard

00:12:010(1,2) blanket
01:12:010(3,4) ^^

Nomal

good XD

good song

good lock! :)
Lovelyattack
Commencing Operation ~

all just suggest (i cant mod with good quality btw)

[All]
00:40:647 - 01:09:737 - kiai part? if not its okay
01:46:101 - 02:15:192 - another kiai part?
03:04:283 - 03:18:828 - kiai part ?
i like if you guys use it because it will make good part

[10nya`s Normal]

00:09:510 (3) - change it to whistle instead finish?
00:17:919 (4) - + finish?
00:32:919 (6) - the reserve one give clap?
01:07:919 (3) - + finish?
01:25:419 (2) - i think this is kinda bad on the beat maybe remake to another part ?
01:37:919 (4) - the end of slider + finish?
01:42:919 (1,2) - add clap on 1 and 2 (the end slider) and remove clap on 2 (the early slider)
02:13:374 (3,1) - on the spinner remove the finish and add finish on 3?
02:32:237 (2) - add clap / whistle on the end of slider ?
02:43:828 (5) - add finish on the end of slider?
03:17:010 (3) - finish on the early slider?
03:34:737 (5) - finish?

well i guess i got bad mods :( i do only the rythm part since your pattern is good

[Asagi Hard]
hp drain - 1?
how you can 5.7 overall difficulty? tell me i wonder :roll:

00:01:556 (3) - whistle on the end of slider?
00:11:328 (1) - remove combo? its better for me
00:19:624 (3,4) - kinda out of rythm maybe
00:25:647 (5) - for me bad for stream :)
00:47:465 (4,5) - i rather like symetrical between 00:47:919 (1) with 00:47:010 (3)
01:54:965 (1) - if you can make symetrical with 01:54:056 (2) , it would be better
02:44:283 (1) - i think better not new combo that
03:11:101 (4) - put finish at the early slider ?
03:18:828 (2) - put whistle / clap so it will good to hear
03:27:010 (1) - same as above
03:29:510 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - i guess its too hard for hard diff (for me) since too confuse and kinda like harder than other pattern
03:34:965 (3) - its better like this?

wow its kinda like half insane

[Insane]

hp drain - 1 ?too fast i guess

00:09:283 (6) - remove clap?
00:23:601 (7) - i guess you better put somewhere since its kinda not good looking (kinda not symetric)
00:32:919 (7,8,9,10) - go put whistle with auto / soft (?) additions
00:58:147 (4) - new combo?
00:58:828 (1) - remove combo?
00:59:056 (8) - new combo?
01:09:283 (8) - add finish?
01:49:056 (1) - new combo?
01:49:737 (1) - remove combo?
01:50:419 (4) - new combo?
02:07:465 (6) - add finish?
02:32:919 (5) - same as above
03:03:374 (1) - its like hidden slider , i guess since its insane its good but i suggest change the pattern on 03:02:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
03:26:215 (1) - for me its kinda out of rythm slider (well like overmap part)

thats all for me :D (me = bad english , bad mod , bad user , bad player , bad mapper)
Yauxo


Hi there, coming from your M4M queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion


[General]
■ Iam not sure if you really need the title in the tags again. Just add tags that fit to the anime. (Characters, whoi sings this song (screenname/real name) etc)


[Nyormal]
■ 00:04:283 (3) - Nazi: Blanket is off by a little bit (curve it more)
■ 00:11:556 (2) - This blanket is really off though.
■ 00:12:919 (4) - I kinda dislike that youve skipped a strong beat (the Slidertick) and supported a silent beat instead (Sliderend). This creates a weird-to-play combo, makes it harder than it should be and throws consistency away. Just shorten it.
■ 00:20:419 (3) - 00:24:965 (4) - 00:31:328 (4) - So from what I understand is that youve mapped the head on the vocals, but the end on the beats. Iam quite confused about this tbh, but ... I mean .. Is it wrong? I dont know :v I just thought I'd mark that one, since it might be confusing for the player If you have an idea on how to fix it, do it. Give it a second thought.
00:33:374 (1) - How about this kind of rhythm? 00:34:056 (2) - feels really weird since it has a "stong" vocal and a strong beat which are both unmapped in that slider


■ 00:43:374 (3) - Add >something< here. Random pause is random and doesnt add to the song/map
■ 01:07:919 (3) - Blanketfix
■ 01:25:419 (2) - dis? v


■ 01:48:828 (4) - also fill with >something<
■ 02:19:283 (2) - Blanket, end's too far off
■ 02:26:556 (2) - Overlap, -1 on both coords
03:03:828 (1) - Dont ever place a Sliderend on such a big white tick. This is pretty much the "strongest" beat in the song, since it'd be the beginning on the very last kiai (you didnt put kiais anywhere, but I'll just pretend there is one to make my point clear)

Do this and move all the Sliders to the left by one white tick and replace 03:05:647 (3) - if neccessary

03:20:192 (1,2,3,4) - I'd move all of those one white tick to the left on the timeline, place the longer slider on 03:23:374 (1) - and add a circle 03:24:737 (2) -

Gotta be honest here, youve used many different kind of rhythmic patters here which dont always end up in a good way. One time youve mapped the vocals, next time youve mapped the beats, the other time you have the strong beats supported by a Sliderhead (good), next time you have it supported by the Sliderend (bad). Iam not quite sure how this will work out, but I'd suggest that you might go over it and see if there's any possibility for you to recognize and fix said errors. (Following the beat is the best idea most of the time)

[Asagi's Hard]
■ 00:41:101 (2,2,2,2) - I dont really like that kind of pattern as it may be difficult to read, but it's creative on the other hand... I guess thats fine
■ 01:01:328 (3) - 01:55:874 (3) - Could be a real blanket
01:23:828 (3) - 01:45:647 (3) - NC due to SV change
01:34:737 (4,5) - I'd unstack these. Youve got some good flow going with the previous combo, why make it stop here?
■ 01:40:419 (4) - Add a Circle? The empty gap is rather ... well, inconsistent and empty.
01:46:556 (2,2,2,2) - On a side note, this kind of pattern works better since youre able to see the Sliderhead without and problem

I really like this diff :3

[Insane]
■ 00:16:556 (3) - I wouldnt let it end on the big white tick. Add a Circle or something instead
■ 00:37:692 (1) - Move this one closer to 00:37:010 (1) - , just like you did with 00:38:374 (1) - . Feels much better and you wont misread it
00:44:056 (6,1) -
00:51:328 (7,1) -
01:13:147 (4,5) -
01:48:601 (3,4) -
01:56:783 (9,1) -
02:04:056 (6,1) -
03:07:692 (6,1) - Why exactly did you put a stack in these places? Most of these are in the "jumpy part" where there's no sound that'd indicate a stack, nor does it support the movement youve build up
■ 01:10:419 (1,2,3) - 01:11:101 (1,2,3) - 01:11:783 (1,2,3) - Suddenly overmap. There is no other part mapped like this, so redo this one.
■ 01:35:874 (3,4) - Stack feels weird here as well.
■ 03:26:215 (1) - The sound's too quiet to be supported like this imo. It feels awkward to play and thats about it :v You could add a triplet 03:26:328 (12) -
■ 03:35:647 (5) - NC?
Topic Starter
P A N

Yauxo wrote:



[Insane]
■ 00:16:556 (3) - I wouldnt let it end on the big white tick. Add a Circle or something instead I let it end on white tick because place note after 1/8 slider with 1/8 gap between it is really hard to get 300 and hard to catch so better just let it end on white tick and start next note with slider.
■ 00:37:692 (1) - Move this one closer to 00:37:010 (1) - , just like you did with 00:38:374 (1) - . Feels much better and you wont misread it
sure ■[/color] 00:44:056 (6,1) -
00:51:328 (7,1) -
01:13:147 (4,5) -
01:48:601 (3,4) -
01:56:783 (9,1) -
02:04:056 (6,1) -
03:07:692 (6,1) - Why exactly did you put a stack in these places? Most of these are in the "jumpy part" where there's no sound that'd indicate a stack, nor does it support the movement youve build up yes, I think you know about this too because I modded your map and I saw these stuff in your map and you know, I stack it because I will make a jump on the vocal and stack is just instru to make jump only on vocal.
■ 01:10:419 (1,2,3) - 01:11:101 (1,2,3) - 01:11:783 (1,2,3) - Suddenly overmap. There is no other part mapped like this, so redo this one. it's not, you can try to delete all of those and you will hear the triple sound.
■ 01:35:874 (3,4) - Stack feels weird here as well. ok
■ 03:26:215 (1) - The sound's too quiet to be supported like this imo. It feels awkward to play and thats about it :v You could add a triplet 03:26:328 (12) - did something similar
■ 03:35:647 (5) - NC? ok, try
Len
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Fast wrote:

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w-wat? XD
xxdeathx
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byfar
m4m! >> t/255150

[Insane]
01:40:192 (5) - nc please. otherwise it's too dirty for reading
01:41:101 (2) - ^
01:51:328 (7) - nc instead of 01:51:556 (1) -
01:52:919 (9) - nc. vocal starts here
01:53:828 (2) - nc
01:54:737 (4) - ^
01:55:647 (6) - ^
01:56:556 (8) - nc instead of 01:57:010 (1) -
01:57:692 (4) - nc
02:00:192 (1) - why you nc here
02:17:919 (4) - nc
02:22:010 (4) - nc instead of 02:22:237 (1) -
02:58:374 (4) - move right 4 units (x) from 236 to 240

just combo errors. everything else looks good besides sometimes your patterns are out of symmetry (unless its intended)
Hollow Wings
mark

edit: really tired from daily work, scaned ur map and it's good enough to me, will give detail mod at weekend, a star for u in advance ;w;

edit2: sry for delay, mod here:

m4m

General

  1. why not use custom combo color? default ones' not fit that bg very well imo ;w;
  2. add gder's id into ur tags in all diffs.
  3. give same settings in countdown and letterbox in all diffs.

Insane

  1. 00:14:737 (2) - stack at 00:11:556 (2) - . u have 00:14:283 (1,2) - with 1/1 gap but similar ds with 1/2 jumps before, so i recommend u larger this jump to make this jump more readble.
  2. 00:16:556 (3,1) - here, i highly recommend u add a note at 00:17:010 and remove some time's repeating in 00:16:556 (3) - slider. u even have set a drum hs to emphasis that tick's beat already, then i think that note is really needed. and u have 03:33:828 (1) - as a same one as well, so i just suggest u change both of them.
  3. 00:25:647 (5) - move to 297,15 to give a trapezoid at 00:24:965 (3,4,5,6) - , which is better to me in composing. and also same suggestion in composing: 00:31:328 (8,1) - , 01:07:010 (4,5) - maybe give blanket to them (nazi
  4. 00:43:601 (4) - add nc. just give combo count break here as a new section as u did before, nothing to worry about. thou i think the current one is still good, and same mod to 00:58:147 (4) - , 03:07:237 (4) - .
  5. 01:23:260 (4) - maybe add nc here? to spread that pattern up to make an more easier set to read, thou the current one is still good as well.
  6. 03:14:965 (5,1) - swap nc set. u did this nc style before, and here's an inconsistant one, maybe just keep all of them the same. and also, u need to add nc at 03:24:965 (7) - to spread that long combo count.
  7. ur random jumps r just interesting imo.

Asagi's Hard

  1. nazi mod: 00:40:192 (3,1) - . 00:51:328 (1,2) - , 00:55:192 (1,2) - and so on: blanket perfect, better to me at least if u fix them especially something like 01:00:419 (1,3) - or 01:12:010 (3,4) - lol.
  2. so good diff that i can't say much more, a star for u.

10nya's Normal

  1. check all of ur blanket in ur diff and perfect some can be good to me.
  2. 00:54:283 and 00:54:737 add note, feel so hollow to ignore all beats and break objs' combo here.
  3. 01:00:192 (3,5) - nearly touched, consider to spread them.
  4. 01:25:419 (2,3) - don't overlap that repeating slider's arrow, avoid that to keep composing clean enough to noobs. 01:32:692 (2,3) - as well.
  5. too much overlap pattern and idk if it's acceptable to bats... thou personally i won't recommend u set them in low diffs.
dat bg www

good luck
-Mo-
Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

General
- Consider using custom combo colours.
- Countdown conflicts within difficulties; turn them all off.
- Letterboxing during breaks conflicts within difficulties. I'm not sure what you want, but keep them all consistent.
- Is there a reason you didn't use any Kiai time?

10nya's Normal
- 00:05:192 (4) - This blanket can be slightly improved [00:05:874]. If you look from that timestamp, you can see how the apprach circle compares with the slider (you may need to drag the slider along the timeline).
- 00:06:556 (2) - Same as above [00:05:874].
- 00:55:192 (1) - Same as above [00:55:838].
- 00:56:101 (2) - Same as above [00:56:783].
- 01:06:556 (2) - Same as above [01:07:806].
- 01:24:283 (1,2) - I would consider this bad polarity. On lower level difficulties, you should consider red and white ticks as seperate polarity levels.
- 01:27:919 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:31:556 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:47:465 (3) - This blanket can be improved [01:46:897].
- 01:55:192 (3) - Same as above [01:54:891].
- 02:19:283 (2) - Same as above [02:18:715].
- 02:26:556 (2) - This isn't perfectly stacked with 02:24:737 (4), move to (155:251).
- 02:33:828 (2) - This blanket can be improved [02:33:260].
- 03:26:783 (4) - Same as above. Reverse 03:25:192 (2) to view the approach circle easily.

Asagi's Hard
- 00:23:374 (3,4,5,1) - Perhaps make a more regular diamond shape out of this?
- 00:41:101 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All of these blankets are slightly off. Move the circles to the side slightly, the sliders themselves seem to be fine.
- 00:47:010 (3) - This blanket can be improved [00:46:841].
- 01:01:328 (3) - This blanket with 01:00:419 (1) can be improved.
- 01:12:465 (4) - This blanket can be improved [01:12:357].
- 01:29:510 (1) - This just about touches the health bar (at least on my end). Lower it a bit.
- 01:55:874 (3) - This blanket with 01:54:965 (1) can be improved.
- 03:35:647 (1) - Try a 1/6 time signature for this. I think it's better, but it's your call.

Insane
- 00:21:328 (3) - This blanket can be improved [00:20:760].
- 00:51:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this would look neater if you used regular shapes from the Create Polygon Circles feature rather than having them placed at random. Try a bunch of hexagon stars or triangles.
- 01:07:465 (5) - This blanket can be improved [01:06:953].
- 02:08:828 (4) - Same as above [02:08:317].
- 02:36:783 (1) - Same as above [02:35:987].
- 02:44:283 (1) - This stream doesn't need new combos that often I don't think. Having them after 8 circles would be better than 4 in my opinion.
- 03:06:783 (3) - This blanket can be improved [03:05:760].
- 03:08:374 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pentagon star can be improved.
- 03:12:237 (3) - This blanket can be improved [03:13:090].
- 03:35:647 (1) - As before; try a 1/6 signature and see what you think.

I like this beatmap though. Good luck :)
Yuthuil
From M4M !
Overall: after first chorus, reset metronome perhaps, it feels wrong at the end of the song and I confirmed this by watching the metronome and how about adding kiai, if you dont want to, then maybe just at the last chorus, to emphasize a bit more hmmm?
Normal:

00:00:647 (1,2) - neaten these two sliders up, make the tail of one end on x224 y240 then clone it for 2
00:03:374 (2,3) - blanket together properly, its not done
00:11:556 (2,3) - blanket pro
00:18:828 (1,2,3) - kinda bad note placement, cus it looks ugly when three appears
00:34:056 (2,3) - blanket correctly, to do this move the middle node of slider three to x280 y188
00:43:828 (3,1) - blanket properly
00:55:192 (1,2) - ^
00:56:101 (2,3) - try and make all your blankets like this, this one's nice
01:01:101 (4,5) - move to x444 y276, or reshape it since the tiny tiny overlap with 4 and 5 dont look good
01:03:147 (2,3) - blanket
01:06:556 (2,3) - ^
01:32:692 (2) - sound better if you moved here 01:32:919, since it's on a red tick with not much of a sound and the vocal comes slightly late, not to mention whiteticks are better
01:48:828 I dont think you should ignore this tick
02:18:828 (1,2) - blanket
02:26:556 (2) - move somewhere else hmmm? its a rather unnatural movement which disrupts the flow in normal, and its the only one in the map so it feels out of place
02:47:919 btw how do you make this blue break section
03:17:919 (4,1) - blanket
03:25:192 (2,4) - ^

Hard:

00:03:828 (1,2) - blanket
00:13:828 (3,4) - make completely parallel to three
01:00:419 (1,3) - blanket
01:41:556 (3,4) - ^
01:46:101 (1,2) - ^
03:35:647 (1) - remove sound on this

Insane:

AR8

02:36:783 I dont think you should ignore the triple
03:35:647 (1) - remove sound?

gosh cant find anything wrong with this diff ;O;

GL, i hope this gets ranked soon, an epic mapset
Meyrink
Hello there ! a M4M From u Queue !

[General]
  1. Disable CountDown In all diffs
  2. Enable LetterBox in the Insane
  3. How about some Moe BG ? *^* ! BackGround1 Or BackGround 2!
  4. Combo Collors :
    If you used BackGround1
    Combo1 : 255,51,51
    Combo2 : 255,128,64
    Combo3 : 255,128,128
    Combo4 : 0,128,255
    If you used BackGround2
    Combo1 : 255,255,128
    Combo2 : 255,128,64
    Combo3 : 255,128,128
    Combo4 : 0,128,255
    Combo5 : 255,51,51
    Combo6 : 0,128,64
  5. Source : 月刊少女野崎くん
  6. Add Those Tags : GEKKAN SHOJO NOZAKI KUN Monthly Girls' Nozaki-kun
  7. Add Kiai Time
[10nya's Normal]
  1. Places u should map them ( Circle / sliders End etc ... just don't ingnore those White tick Beats ) :
  2. 00:07:010 - Map This ! (U can Shorten Previous Slider )
  3. 00:13:374 - ^
  4. 00:15:192 - ^
  5. 00:43:374 - ^ (Note)
  6. 01:48:828 - ^
  7. 01:59:737 - ^
  8. 02:00:192 - ^
  9. 02:04:737 (2) - Delet this And map this places 02:05:192 - 02:06:101 - 02:07:010 - (just use the normal rhytm u used 1/1 Sliders )
  10. 02:18:828 (1,2) - Improve Blanket !
  11. 02:26:556 (2) - y = 251
  12. 03:15:874 (2) - 1st Dot (x:259 y:156) 2nd Dot (x:310 y:91)
  13. 03:16:783 (3,4) - DS Problem
[Asagi's Hard]
  1. PAAAFEKUTOO ! '-')/
[Insane]
  1. Yay PP Farm With DT *-*)/
Sorry i'm Terrible at high diffs ( for now ) ! great to see someone map this full song i love it :3 ! And Good luck
Aerous
M4M From Your Queue !

General :

Countdown conflicts with 10nya's Normal Diff.
Letterbox in breaks conflict with 10nya's Normal Diff.
Letter in breaks conflicts with Asagi's Hard diff.
kiai time?

Insane :

00:27:237 (2,3,4) Suggestion : Change it into a slider and end on white tick?
00:29:283 (4,5,6,7,8) Suggestion : Change it to this? http://puu.sh/cGYzx/1a539d0846.jpg
00:32:010 (2,3,4) Change slider number 2 and circle number 3 to y:84
00:47:124 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) Change this up a bit? Maybe add a repeat slider?
01:37:465 (8) Instead of a slider , circles? http://puu.sh/cGZej/27305d19ea.jpg
02:44:283 (1,2,3,4,1) Over mapped? Try 1/4 sliders or repeats sliders
03:02:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Spread them out a bit? Or just add repeat sliders.


I can't find any other problems on the other diff, sorry if my mod didn't help much. I'm new to modding
Topic Starter
P A N
I apologized for haven't replied your mod because there are too much and I take care all of them my self and I really headache with blanket mod :( it is not that unnecessary so didn't fix it much and thanks for modding everyone.
10nya
finally can connect internet im so sorry pano ;w;
-Tochi
From your M4M Queue~

[General]
-The offset is wrong. It should be 660, and remember to move the green lines +13 offset like:
And snap the notes to the right. Just do Ctrl + A and move them to the right on the timeline.
There's no kiai time. you could maybe put one from 00:02:465 - to 00:09:737 - And 00:40:647 - to 01:09:737 - And 01:46:101 - to 02:15:192 - And 03:04:283 - to 03:19:737 -
[Insane]
00:14:510 - put a note here?
00:24:965 (3) - is too close to 00:25:419 (4) -
01:37:478 (8) - New combo.
02:26:569 (3) - Delete and copy-paste this 02:25:887 (1) - Press Q and put it on the sliderhead of the deleted slider 02:26:569 (3) -
03:10:887 (4,5,6) - Too close to 03:10:432 (3) -
03:35:887 - Put a spinner there, to 03:38:614 - and use a green line at 03:38:614 - with the volume of 5%
[Asagi's Hard]
00:07:010 (4) - why not stack with 00:06:783 (3) - ?
01:14:056 (3) - New combo?
01:35:192 (1) - Use Finish instead of Whistle and the Addition should be on Auto
02:01:556 (1,1,1) - Stack probably?
03:16:783 (4,5,1) - Move to X: 376 Y: 124 like this:
And move 03:17:465 (2) - a bit more up and to the left.
03:17:465 (2) - Put a spinner there, to 03:38:147 - and use a green line at 03:38:614 - with the volume of 5%

Nice map c:
Good luck with it ^^
Asagi
No Reply = Fixed
SE_Soul

SE_Soul wrote:

[Asagi Hard]
hp drain - 1? ~actually, the HP drain is low
how you can 5.7 overall difficulty? tell me i wonder :roll: ~ to make it easier for me to play :roll:

00:01:556 (3) - whistle on the end of slider? ~sounds bad imo
00:11:328 (1) - remove combo? its better for me ~actually, that follow the vocals well
00:19:624 (3,4) - kinda out of rythm maybe ~try to hear the vocals
00:25:647 (5) - for me bad for stream :) ~idk why this is bad, its readable and follow the music too
00:47:465 (4,5) - i rather like symetrical between 00:47:919 (1) with 00:47:010 (3)
01:54:965 (1) - if you can make symetrical with 01:54:056 (2) , it would be better
02:44:283 (1) - i think better not new combo that ~because that follows the spinner
03:11:101 (4) - put finish at the early slider ? ~the long white tick fits perfectly, obviously
03:18:828 (2) - put whistle / clap so it will good to hear
03:27:010 (1) - same as above
03:29:510 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - i guess its too hard for hard diff (for me) since too confuse and kinda like harder than other pattern ~come on, its the last part, need to make a bit challenge (or make them rage? lol)
03:34:965 (3) - its better like this? ~the repeat fits better


wow its kinda like half insane
Yauxo

Yauxo wrote:

[Asagi's Hard]
■ 00:41:101 (2,2,2,2) - I dont really like that kind of pattern as it may be difficult to read, but it's creative on the other hand... I guess thats fine ~its easy to play tbh
■ 01:01:328 (3) - 01:55:874 (3) - Could be a real blanket
01:23:828 (3) - 01:45:647 (3) - NC due to SV change ~actually, that was intentional, but nvm, changed
01:34:737 (4,5) - I'd unstack these. Youve got some good flow going with the previous combo, why make it stop here? ~because the 2 claps fits on the stacked circles
■ 01:40:419 (4) - Add a Circle? The empty gap is rather ... well, inconsistent and empty. ~i was following the instrument on that part
01:46:556 (2,2,2,2) - On a side note, this kind of pattern works better since youre able to see the Sliderhead without and problem

I really like this diff :3
If i havent replied on your mods (because the mods are really piled up ._.), probably it was a nazi mod, and expect that ill fix them all

Thanks guys :)
Momochikun
quick glance on Insane because this song is just too moe ;w;

SPOILER
11:17 Momochikun: 00:35:205 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314064 try ! w
11:18 Momochikun: 00:00:660 (1,2) - this feels too loud, 30% volume should fit perfectly
11:18 Momochikun: 00:06:796 (4) - removing the drum whistle could make this rhythm more smooth to hear imo
11:19 P A N: ok ok
11:21 Momochikun: 00:11:569 (2,1) - try replace their position then testplay, the triangle flow could make more sense
11:21 Momochikun: i mean switch them xD
11:21 Momochikun: 00:22:250 (7) - i think u missed whistle, just like 00:29:523 (6) -
11:21 P A N: hmm I want some square so XD
11:23 Momochikun: 00:14:523 - you didn't want a note here ?
11:23 P A N: yep
11:23 P A N: >_>
11:24 Momochikun: 00:44:069 (6,1) - i'll unstack them so it wouldn't break the flow o.o
11:25 Momochikun: 01:07:478 (5) - could align more to the left for better blanket
11:26 Momochikun: 01:13:614 (2,6) - i prefer soft whistle for them, that could be more smooth
11:27 Momochikun: 01:17:250 (2,1,3,2,1,3,2) - i wonder if this missing whistle is intentional or not w
11:27 Momochikun: 01:25:091 (5) - try drum whistle at start
11:27 Momochikun: also at end
11:29 P A N: oh wow
11:29 P A N: that whistle missing
11:29 Momochikun: 01:45:660 (1) - add drum whistle just like you did at 00:40:205 (1) - ?
11:29 P A N: sure
11:31 Momochikun: 02:21:341 (3) - should be whistle at end
11:31 P A N: add
11:31 Momochikun: 02:41:341 (2,3) - you like this don't ya ? lol
11:32 P A N: lol kind of
11:33 Momochikun: why you don't add kiai anyway ?
11:34 P A N: lazy
11:34 P A N: lol
11:34 P A N: should I?
11:34 P A N: ahahahaha
11:34 Momochikun: 02:22:250 (1) - clap at head seems fitting for me, the music like making similiar sound
11:34 Momochikun: well.. it could give pressure to the song itself
11:34 Momochikun: 02:29:069 (4) - missing whistle at start
11:34 P A N: lol
11:35 Momochikun: the instrument is just lovely as fuck
11:35 P A N: lol as fuck
11:35 Momochikun: i hope there're more song like this ww
11:36 P A N: XD
11:36 Momochikun: 03:00:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you could use some raising up effect ? like adding more greenline with increasing volume
11:37 Momochikun: 03:12:250 (3) - thu does looks cramped, reducing the curve point slightly ?
11:38 Momochikun: 03:35:660 (1) - is this 1/8 ? idk either.. it's sounds too sudden and 1/6 is too late, lmao
11:39 P A N: lol
11:40 Momochikun: 01:19:523 (3) - ?
11:40 Momochikun: 01:19:978 (2) - ^
11:41 Momochikun: thats all i guess o.o
11:41 Momochikun: 612 circles 164 sliders lmao
11:43 P A N: lol
11:43 P A N: too different?
11:43 P A N: XD
11:43 Momochikun: haha yeah
11:43 P A N: btw
11:43 P A N: 01:19:523 (3) -
11:43 P A N: wat
11:43 Momochikun: missing whistle sir
11:44 P A N: oh ok
11:44 Momochikun: good luck :x
11:45 P A N: wait, but it already have
11:45 P A N: lol
11:45 Momochikun: oh.. my fault then ww
11:46 P A N: aw no >_>
11:46 P A N: ok thanks so much
11:46 P A N: :3
11:46 Momochikun: my pleasure ~
11:47 P A N: love ya
11:47 Momochikun: lmao
11:49 P A N: post
11:49 P A N: i want to give kd so hard
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks mochi-chan :3
10nya
hey hey dekita im finished it orz omg HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH akjaskldjalsjdklasdjasd
lo siento por llegar tarde

> haga clic para descargar sb y .osb <

don't forget to enable epilepsy warning and please don't check widescreen support because the SB is not for widescreen ;w;

edit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!akldasldjaslkdsa: new .osb please remove the one on .rar and change to this one http://puu.sh/dAOsD/41d4ceb6a9.zip

please add this code to each .osu file on //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)

Insane diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\dialog5.png",320,240
M,0,76796,,310,235
S,0,76796,,0.6283872
F,0,76796,77023,0,1
F,0,77023,80432,1
F,0,80432,80660,1,0.03380646
Asagi's Hard diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\dialog5-asagi.png",320,240
M,0,76796,,310,235
S,0,76796,,0.6283872
F,0,76796,77023,0,1
F,0,77023,80432,1
F,0,80432,80660,1,0.03380646
my diff
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\dialog5-tennya.png",320,240
M,0,76796,,310,235
S,0,76796,,0.6283872
F,0,76796,77023,0,1
F,0,77023,80432,1
F,0,80432,80660,1,0.03380646

espero que les guste

lmao if you're wondering i'm using spanish

edit2: might you have to add -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- on tags since it was my previous username who has ranked map
Hollow Wings
recheck

General

  1. ur mp3 file's bit rate is 320kbps which is over 192kbps and unrankble. fix this and retime.
  2. btw, ur current timing is not that good to me, offset-6 can be better. ask another bat to give a opinion on this. do this after checking my mods below.
  3. remove bg.png.

poke Minakami Yuki to req ur recheck plz.

good luck.
10nya
yey <3
Koiyuki
General
  1. I havent check the storyboard carefully but AIBAT said:
    Unused Image Files
    sb\drop.png
    sb\lr\6.png
    sb\lr\7.png
    sb\lr\8.png
    sb\lr\9.png
    sb\lr\fortunep.png
    Better for u to check it.
  2. Why the uninherited timing sections are different in Insane?
Normal
  1. 01:27:932 (1,2) - distance
Insane
  1. 00:47:131 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - heavily overmapped.
  2. 01:59:290 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
You'd better check the streams in Insane by yourself about the overmap issues.
Hold in mind that nowadays QATs check overmap issues very carefully even with 25% to listen to the song. If there is nothing changed on streams, I wont give it pass, sorry.
10nya

Minakami Yuki wrote:

General
  1. I havent check the storyboard carefully but AIBAT said:
    Unused Image Files
    sb\drop.png
    sb\lr\6.png
    sb\lr\7.png
    sb\lr\8.png
    sb\lr\9.png
    sb\lr\fortunep.png
    Better for u to check it.
    I'll leave to pan to delete this ;w;
  2. Why the uninherited timing sections are different in Insane? i'll leave this to pan
Normal
  1. 01:27:932 (1,2) - distance ok
You'd better check the streams in Insane by yourself about the overmap issues.
Hold in mind that nowadays QATs check overmap issues very carefully even with 25% to listen to the song. If there is nothing changed on streams, I wont give it pass, sorry.
code
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Uraomote Fortune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 183147
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 40647,55192,106101,215647
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:URAOMOTE FORTUNE
TitleUnicode:URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Artist:Sakura Chiyo (CV:Ozawa Ari)
ArtistUnicode:Sakura Chiyo (CV:Ozawa Ari)
Creator:P A N
Version:10nya's Normal
Source:GEKKAN SHOJO NOZAKI KUN
Tags:ura omote fortune asagi 10nya p_a_n 月刊少女野崎くん GEKKAN SHOJO NOZAKI KUN Monthly Girls' Nozaki-kun -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-
BeatmapID:501462
BeatmapSetID:210706

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG2.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,69950,79340
2,135405,137521
2,169737,179340
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\dialog5-tennya.png",320,240
M,0,76796,,310,235
S,0,76796,,0.6283872
F,0,76796,77023,0,1
F,0,77023,80432,1
F,0,80432,80660,1,0.03380646
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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1569,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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139296,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
153841,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
164750,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
184296,-100,4,2,5,80,0,0
198841,-100,4,2,5,40,0,0
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200205,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
207932,-100,4,2,5,80,0,0
215660,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


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Combo1 : 174,255,94
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,184,113

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