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Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo

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Natsu
Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:

yo Natsu ~ from the queue. i'm late >_>

[Flower]
00:07:583 (1) - This feels a bit loud considering to the slow pitch, try reducing the volume a bit or change it to soft-finish instead ? changed to soft
00:15:390 - Are you sure you want to skip the drum hit here ? adding a note would be much fun to emphasize it yeah I kinda want to have just the prominent beats mapped at the beggining
00:25:185 - ^ ^
00:18:298 (4) - Whistle on the tail ? done
00:24:726 (3) - Rotate this around -8* degree would improve the circular flow even more ~ okis
00:29:012 (1,2,3,4) - These 1/3 was quite hard to figure in the first sight because of the spacing, maybe you could move them a bit farther ? I changed them to slider, since people keep clicking bad there
01:13:094 (4) - Replace the whistle on the head with finish instead, it would match the splash cymbal on the bgm better. done
01:34:675 - I think it's okay to add note here since it's going for approval, it feels very weird to follow on gameplay if you skip it >< I want to start with the vocals >:
01:53:808 (7,8) - Swap their position maybe ? the stop going awkward here.. i would go for slider + note instead I know but I want to the cymbal in 01:53:961 to be clickable
You missed a lot 1/6 piano on the after 1st kiai part, it's better to map that instead of sticking out with drum at least imo since it give more fun and sense. but it's up to you tho... I explained this before, since I dont want to mix up rhythms too much, I want to keep this a relax and enjoyable map for most of players >:
03:13:094 (6) - i would go for a drum clap here.. done
03:13:706 (3,6) - bit more curve on (6) for neater blanket i guess.. moved a bit
03:17:073 (5) - This slider looks a bit weird for me.. orz I fixed this with gero
03:30:543 (1) - Move this a bit upside to create smoother flow according to where 1's end was pointing on. done
03:31:767 (4) - Whistle like you did on 03:34:216 (4) - ? added
03:34:216 (4) - Add note with clap here ?
04:22:124 - Note here pls >< done

short mod o.o , the map is quite fine imo
Good luck ~ :3

thanks :3
Gero
I've searched a bit about metadata and this is what I found so yeah your currently title is correct but artist should be HANATAN or YURiCa instead Hanatan, you can pick which you want, I guess that's all, call me back when you're done.




EDIT:

Everything should be fine now ~

Bubbled #1
Topic Starter
Natsu
changed to YURiCa
Mira-san
Ohohoho. Nice. :D
Melophobia
Some CD scans indeed say it's HANATAN/YURiCa, so I think it's also fine to use them as Artist. But for example, http://puu.sh/bSGFi/ffc241ae41.jpg This scan says otherwise. Therefore it's safe to say that she doesn't have any settled "preferred romanization". I've talked with KSHR, Oracle, Natsu and Gero and we all reached the same conclusion that it's better to use "Hanatan" since it's the most common one in osu! and more consistent with old ranked maps.
Topic Starter
Natsu
yeah, also don't forget: #BLAMEGERO2014 XD
Gero
Thanks for your confirmation Melo, Everything should be fine now orz ~

Bubbled #1
Oracle

Natsu wrote:

yeah, also don't forget: #BLAMEGERO2014 XD
x.x
Thanks for taking your time melo, kshr, gero, and natsu!
FlobuFlobs
q_______q NATSU THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL, STAAAAHP
Topic Starter
Natsu

FlobuFlobs wrote:

q_______q NATSU THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL, STAAAAHP
<3
PatZar
insta rank <3
Topic Starter
Natsu

Genocide wrote:

insta rank <3
some day I hope :)
Shohei Ohtani
This is the third time I'm modding this song jesus christ.

Diff
02:13:706 (5) - Would prefer it if this ended on the blue tick, so the repeat sliders would feel more natural. I played it perfect when I played it, but it'd be nice.
04:26:665 (4,5) - ^ same as before

Forum PM me back so I can double bubble.
Topic Starter
Natsu
All done o/
Shohei Ohtani
Bubble #2!!!!
Topic Starter
Natsu

CDFA wrote:

Bubble #2!!!!
thanks! flame pls :oops:
Xinely
One more again! Ganbatte baka QAQ
riffy
We did a check via IRC.

Changes:
  1. Removed extra .osb files
  2. Diff settings changes
  3. Flow improvements
  4. A few pattern changes
  5. Rhythm improvements


IRC log
12:46 Natsu: Hello
12:49 -Bakari-: Hey o/
12:50 Natsu: I'm wonder if you take mod request, mm I have this98 bpm song for like 5 months already lol, I kinda want to move it foward (already have bubbled 1 and 2 ) is a really relax map, not sure if you are taking request? o.o
12:52 -Bakari-: Sounds cool to me, link the map :)
12:52 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/180366# Ican irc f you feel better with that lol
12:53 -Bakari-: give me like 10-15 minutes and I'll check it
12:53 Natsu: okis
13:04 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/433441 Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo [Flower]]
13:04 *Natsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/433441 Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai keredo [Flower]]
13:04 -Bakari-: Let me start with the SB
13:05 Natsu: okis
13:05 -Bakari-: Are you good with storyboards, dude? :V
13:06 Natsu: I know basics lol, not really good
13:06 -Bakari-: >There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images. and then we have [http://puu.sh/cCJ8Q.jpg this]
13:07 Natsu: I see, so basically xinely must cut that parts from images?
13:08 -Bakari-: Well, I'd ask her to do so.
13:09 Natsu: kk
13:09 -Bakari-: Yeah, it'd also reduce the filesize slightly
13:10 Natsu: Let me ask to dammae about it
13:10 -Bakari-: btw, why do you keep those pink combo colours?
13:10 -Bakari-: Yeah, sure.
13:11 Natsu: you ean why I ahve both?
13:11 Natsu: my kb lol,do you mean why I have both
13:12 -Bakari-: well, I can't see any reason to have pink colours in the set
13:12 Natsu: I keeped just one
13:12 Natsu: the first one
13:13 Natsu: flowers are usually pink or red, and just having green and skyblue will be kind sad tho
13:13 -Bakari-: And I'm pretty sure that those 2 extra osb are unrankable.
13:14 Natsu: deleted lol, there was a big discussion about artist that's why
13:16 -Bakari-: alright, seems like we're done with general parts.
13:16 -Bakari-: anyways, what did Damnae suggest about the unnecessary transparency?
13:17 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203160
13:18 -Bakari-: Okay, I guess he knows it better than we do :)
13:18 -Bakari-: now to the diff itself.
13:19 Natsu: yeah he is pro in sb stuff
13:19 -Bakari-: try to drop OD by 0,5 or 1
13:19 Natsu: I just know basics so yea
13:19 -Bakari-: the map is a marathon, so it's supposed to hve slightly easier diff settings
13:20 Natsu: mmm Garven can complain about low OD, tho, but I'm ok with 6.5
13:22 -Bakari-: 00:07:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try gradually increasing spacing here from x0.8 to x1.8 or so?
13:22 -Bakari-: I feel like keeping high DS here doesn't match well with the song + it feels kinda forced to me
13:25 Natsu: mmmm I kinda want to keep my flower, also 0.80 will be the same as the 1/4 part
13:25 Natsu: 00:06:971 (4,5,6) -
13:25 -Bakari-: 00:36:971 (1) - minor - we could improve your flow here. [http://puu.sh/cCJQO.jpg ~] so, the slider will match perfectly with the triangle
13:26 Natsu: done
13:29 -Bakari-: 01:11:257 (7) - I feel quite sad about the piano beats there, can we probably stress them? [http://puu.sh/cCK2r.jpg miaow]
13:33 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203179 what about this
13:34 -Bakari-: I'd rather do it like [http://puu.sh/cCKbF.jpg this]
13:34 -Bakari-: I think that 01:11:869 - should be emphasized
13:36 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203186
13:36 Natsu: I kinda don't want to map the blue tick there, doesn't sound prominent imo
13:37 -Bakari-: fair enough.
13:37 Natsu: 01:11:869 - I added NC here instead of 01:12:175 (2) -
13:37 Natsu: will be better I think
13:37 -Bakari-: of course, nice idea
13:39 -Bakari-: 01:32:073 (3) - minor - the shape feel unnatural to me. don't you feel like changing it? [http://puu.sh/cCKlC.jpg bad example]
13:41 -Bakari-: 01:40:645 (1) - I'd rather use a simple 1/2 slider, it sounds better to me. I can't hear anything on the blue tick, after all
13:41 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203196 what about this? slider shape
13:42 -Bakari-: exactly what I was hoping for <3
13:42 Natsu: mmm I mainly focus in vocals, and wheni listen at 25% I hear one here 01:40:798
13:42 Natsu: 01:40:798 -
13:43 -Bakari-: as you say :)
13:44 -Bakari-: 01:44:318 (5) - gets overlapped with scores on 4:3 displays.
13:44 Natsu: okis, I'm really crazy with vocals lol
13:45 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203204
13:45 -Bakari-: 02:07:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - great. <3
13:45 -Bakari-: looks safe o/
13:47 -Bakari-: I'd move the NC 02:17:379 (2) - here.
13:47 -Bakari-: vocals are pretty intense + the downbeat is here
13:48 -Bakari-: 02:28:859 - sur about ignoring the piano here?
13:48 Natsu: but the vocals verse are starting 1/2 back in 02:17:073 -, I did my comboing following it
13:49 Natsu: is that 178 or 1/6 lol
13:50 Natsu: 1/8?
13:51 -Bakari-: sounds like 1/6 to me
13:51 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203213 will be safe to stay like this?
13:52 -Bakari-: let's try it :)
13:54 -Bakari-: 02:32:532 (2) - can we quickly get someone to check these beats in the piano part?
13:55 Natsu: okay, who owo?
13:55 -Bakari-: any BAT who's online, atm
13:56 Natsu: actually sounds like 1/3 right o.o
13:56 Natsu: askig to zero wind 1 sec
13:56 -Bakari-: 1/6, probably
13:57 -Bakari-: 02:28:859 (6) - 02:32:532 (2) -
13:58 Natsu: 1 sec zero wind is busy, asking to captin1
14:00 -Bakari-: I have the worst luck ever, every time I try to rank stuff, I get into troubles @.@
14:01 Natsu: haha same, but I manage to keep a live lol
14:01 Natsu: I got unranked for stuff that i dont even, like the spacing in the hard diff, I'm sure that it got moved by mapper for accident XD
14:02 -Bakari-: I got 6 unranks and I'm not even THAT active in bubbling/ranking ;_;
14:03 Natsu: they didn't even reset it tho
14:03 Natsu: they say was every month?
14:04 -Bakari-: "yeah, sure, don't be so scared to rank stuff, we will reset the log soon"
14:05 Natsu: hahaha I was scared a few times, example gero map (frost one) but not anymore hahaha
14:06 -Bakari-: oh, look, captin is still checking
14:07 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203236
14:07 Natsu: is 1/12 lol
14:07 -Bakari-: HOLY SHIT D:
14:07 Natsu: is not better to keep my repeat slider to be safe?
14:08 -Bakari-: it's up to you, but I'd keep the 1/12 slider :D
14:08 -Bakari-: that warning is kinda scary, tho
14:08 Natsu: idk since is not like i was mapped every sound, also people will be pissed off with 1/12 slider breaking combos in DT
14:09 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203240 I guess this will be the better option
14:09 Natsu: (personally I got mad with those slider breaks as well) haha
14:09 -Bakari-: okay, let it stay as it was before @.@
14:09 Natsu: 02:32:532 (2,3) - he said this one is ok
14:10 Natsu: is just the piano being baka
14:13 -Bakari-: 03:14:930 (6) - I'd prefer to have an 1/2 slider with a repeat there
14:13 -Bakari-: see if you like it
14:14 -Bakari-: 03:17:073 (5) - let's try to represent the drums here! [http://puu.sh/cCLtO.jpg ugu]
14:15 -Bakari-: vocals fade at the red tick too, if i'm not mistaken
14:16 Natsu: 03:13:706 (3,6) - i prefer keep them with the vocals, (natsu being paranoic with vocals again)
14:16 Natsu: didthe second one
14:17 -Bakari-: 03:27:175 (1,2) - come on, the pattern you've used in the first kiai was waaaaaaay better
14:17 -Bakari-: can you use it here again?
14:20 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203261
14:20 Natsu: like this?
14:20 -Bakari-: Yes <3
14:20 Natsu: kk owo
14:20 -Bakari-: btw, a little jump between 2 and 3 would be great
14:21 Natsu: were?
14:21 -Bakari-: 03:27:481 (2,3) -
14:22 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203265 what abut this?
14:22 -Bakari-: looks cool
14:23 Natsu: kk
14:24 -Bakari-: 03:45:543 (1) - minor - drop the red nod EXACTLY to the slidertick, so, shape will matc perfectly with the music. [http://puu.sh/cCLMk.jpg example]
14:26 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203267 i keeped my shape, but I did the tick thing, since I want to have an up and down movement there
14:26 -Bakari-: 04:16:461 - an 1/2 slider with a repeat?
14:27 -Bakari-: 04:16:461 - the beat here is quite strong and it interrupts the vocals, so...
14:28 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203270
14:29 -Bakari-: 04:28:859 - weren't you obsessed with the vocals? why there's a simple 1/2 slider then?
14:30 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203274 this is better?
14:30 -Bakari-: 04:34:216 (1,2) - minor - try to ctrl+g them. for some reason I feel like the jump here would represent the vocals perfectly.
14:31 -Bakari-: // yeah, better :)
14:31 Natsu: done
14:33 -Bakari-: 04:55:951 (9,10,11,12) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2203277 what do you think about this? :)
14:33 Natsu: 04:55:645 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - mmmm the drums have the same sound, I want them to be clickeables, like I did withthe others
14:34 -Bakari-: okay then
14:34 -Bakari-: and that's it :)
14:34 Natsu: okis let me updated

everything was doublechecked and, finally, I am happy to give you my burning heart! Qualified!
Topic Starter
Natsu
thanks <3

Gero
I want to join to the party >//w//< ~

Grats man o/
Oyatsu
Congratz!! Natsu-san :D
Len
congratzzzzzzzz
P A N

Fast wrote:

congratzzzzzzzz
Edogawa Conan

Fast wrote:

congratzzzzzzzz
Veemon
congratzz !!
Xinely
finally my 3 hours SB has been qualified ~ <3
formi
00:53:961 (6,7) - is horrible to play!
Rakuen
:) Grats Natsu~ :)
[Yue]
Congratz Natu ;3
Kinshara
wow natsu-sama omedetou >w<
Topic Starter
Natsu

formi wrote:

00:53:961 (6,7) - is horrible to play!
blame the piano lol.

thanks guys <3
Piine
Grats. Here some cake
Zero__wind
seems I'm the only one who felt the timing is doubtful, from the start
Topic Starter
Natsu

Zero__wind wrote:

seems I'm the only one who felt the timing is doubtful, from the start
It sounds pretty accurate to me
Oracle
congratz :3
Modem
Congratz!
scanter
omedetou \o/ this has really nice quality and storyboarding !
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