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Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution [Osu|Taiko]

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wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月22日 at 17:15:46

Artist: Uchida Maaya
Title: Gimme! Revolution
Source: 俺、ツインテールになります。
Tags: Ore, Twintail ni Narimasu. Gonna be the Twin-Tails!! OreTwi TV Size opening Momochikun stu00608 Kotone karenying
BPM: 180
Filesize: 22178kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.48 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Hard (3.19 stars, 266 notes)
  3. Kotone's Insane (4.31 stars, 340 notes)
  4. Mochi's Normal (2.04 stars, 168 notes)
  5. Revolution (4.96 stars, 416 notes)
  6. stu's Muzukashii (2.68 stars, 334 notes)
  7. stu's Oni (3.74 stars, 496 notes)
Download: Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution
Download: Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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anime「俺、ツインテールになります。」op「ギミー!レボリューション」

twintails >////<
Shrik
dank mastah arrived ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º)
thingymajig No matter how long I kept rewatching that small part you wanted in 25%, I couldn't find any problem.
I think you think theres a problem because of the way the vocals sound in that small section, it makes it feel kinda disorientated but dun worry, no problems

gjgjgjgggjgg

#Editoh
00:58:998 (3,4) - I think this feels like the problem with it. personally it feels like a slider + reverse, but that's just me. But that's definitely the problem with this.
Maybe change the volume with each hit there?


(Its the actual notes themselves in the compose)
Kurokotei
Hey, timing check request via PM!

So to be honest, I didn't find any real timing problem, but you should change BPM to 180 imo, sounds better (there are some ms changes at the end of the map, including the part you mentioned in the PM)

Oh and just a little warning in [Revolution]: 00:48:497 (3) - this slider's end isn't snapped

Sorry if I wasn't helpful, but I really couldn't find much ;)

Good luck then!

EDIT: Also no kd please :D
Tician
General
timing check - felt wrong, but I think it's still right (except the end....) =/
AiMod calling for background
Settings - don't you want combocolours?

Easy
Testplay: Sorry I can't enjoy it, but I think that's a problem of myself
00:05:995 (1,1) - 170 BPM, you should use a space of 4 Beats after the spinner before you start with the next object
00:15:829 (1) - the vocal ends 00:16:496, to avoid using 1/2 gaps, I would recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2181310 fitting good to the background or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2181317 for still following the vocal
00:18:496 (1,2) - Both fits better to the vocals if you extend them by 1/2 beat (well especially the second one I am not quite sure about the first slider
00:28:163 (3) - isn't this fitting better to your rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2181335
00:50:997 (2) - there are so many sounds and vocals going on in this slider why you don't map them? =)

Michi's Normal
Testplay: whee this sliders are fast :o
00:20:163 (4) - move 1/2 beat to 00:20:329
00:34:163 (1,2) - same rhythm but plays better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2181449
00:36:997 (1) - moce 1/2 beat to 00:36:997
00:40:497 (3) - not a good overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2181465
01:02:998 (5) - cut it by 1/2 tick, should fit better then

Hard
Testplay: I like this diff most, but it's still too fast :D
00:12:662 (2) - A 1/2 slider without reverse would fit better
00:34:497 (1,2) - stack them or put them near together, it's too confusing
00:36:830 (4) - delete
01:18:832 (2,4) - it's a bit strange, pls stack them

Revolution
Testplay: completely not playable for me sry
00:12:746 (6) - same as hard this circle is not fitting^^
00:32:747 (7) - same
00:43:497 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would prefer a bit mroe symmetry :D
00:59:414 (5) - like above
00:50:831 (4,8) - this is not fitting to the rest you always used only 2 circles, I would keep it like that and delete them

Well this are all just mentions I am still a beginne rin modding and mapping sry ;_;
tutuhaha
差评,下下来都BG
Sellenite
m4m
前些日子摸过我的加上这摸好像比较短,feel free to @ignorethis
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/223960

[Revolution]
wee,没什么好说的

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:996 (1) - tiny blanket
  2. 00:11:996 (1) - 换成这样?00:12:496音比较重这里有打击才好,二次折返对于后面那个有点难读
  3. 01:15:665 (1) - 滑条头改为finish?whistle有点沉
[Mochi's Normal]
默默吃困你不下音效至少把vol提到50%啊
  1. 00:08:496 i think you can add a 1/2 slider here,no need to leave 4 beats
  2. 00:36:830 (1) - just change into a circle in 00:36:997?this 1/2 slider rhythm is so wired imo
  3. 00:41:997 (6) - wired,too.move to 00:42:164 i will love you more,the "yeah" isnt good to become the slider head
[Easy]
sliderclap
  1. 00:05:995 (1,1) - 这在中间但时间点180bpm我还是有点怕
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
general
没有mochi姐的tag

in
00:07:162 (3) - 不是应该从这里就开始连打吗!
00:13:662 (2) - move 1 grid down
00:34:247 (2,3) - 这个串最好不要放 首先音乐里又没串你跟的是什么 然后这个间距看着就强迫症
01:20:999 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2182657 哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈

hard
00:35:663 (1,2) - 容易出100 建议改掉

mochi's normal
音效点赞 千万别改

easy
这clap 连红线都补上 sxbk
TicClick
I only checked timing and only the part you requested me to check. Add these:
58798,338.983050847458,4,2,1,70,1,0
60831,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,8
61162,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,0
If it is still off, tell me and I'll work on it a bit more.

Also, change first point's BPM from 179.992 to plain 180.
MirinH
m4m
[Easy]
  1. 01:13:830 (3) - 真心不好看
  2. 01:23:997 (3,4) - ^
    嘛。。ez没什么好摸的

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:12:831 (1,2) - blank it well?
  2. 01:07:164 (2,3,4) - make sure to build a perfect triangle here, your triangle is not straight
  3. 01:15:164 (2) - make slider like / \ will flow better than what u made like \ /.

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:14:331 (1) - 难看
  2. 00:21:664 (3) - ctrl+g flow好些?
  3. 01:12:831 (4,1) - blanket怪怪的
  4. 01:13:831 (3,1) - ^
  5. 01:16:163 (2,1) - blanket怎么样呢

  • [Revolution]
  1. 9.2有点快?试试9?
  2. 00:01:997 (4) - 弯一点?
  3. 00:11:997 (1,2,3,4) - 1243更漂亮
  4. 00:14:330 (1,3) - 尝试blanket3?
  5. 00:15:829 (1,4) - blanket
  6. 00:38:331 (1,2,3,4) - flow怪怪的
  7. 01:20:997 (1,2,3) - 距离不一样,逼死强迫症后期。。。
  8. 01:24:330 (4) - 往上移一点就可以blanket
captin1
why is this anime the best thing ever
Artavia
Hi, M4M Request!

General


  • ■ 00:47:830 - 01:09:163 - Suggest Kiai time

Easy


00:00:497 (1) - I think *this is better to do.

00:04:997 (3,1) - Try *this

00:31:497 (3,1) - stack?

Mochi's Normal

  • ■ CS - 0.2
00:41:831 (5,6) - stack?

I can't find big problem.

Hard


00:11:997 (1) - Remove one return and add circle

00:44:164 (2) - Ctrl+G?

Revolution


00:35:331 (7,1) - hmm I think this is very dangerous spacing

Woo~ awesome song! shoot star.
xxdeathx
twintails are love~
Number5
围观王长喜 M4M
[R什么什么的]
00:24:997 (1) - 这个滑条好像有点难看
01:04:080 (2,3,4,5) - 好像略微有点难读了
[Hard]
00:21:664 (3) - 这个看起来有点违和
[Normal]
cs3-3.5比较好一点
00:02:331 (2,3,4,5,1) - 打起来有点怪怪的
01:09:164 (1,2) - 好像漏了一个音有点点违和
这个难度有比较多地方是需要做一下修整的 比如说1/2滑条之类的
[Easy]
SB音效吓到我了...
01:13:831 (3) - 这个滑条违和感满满
01:23:997 (3,4) - 这样放在滑条边上又不blanket真的好吗?建议这样
01:25:330 (1,2) - ^
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
updated taiko diffs
Seiryuu
Here's the mod. Don't kudos if it didn't help you. (Probably the fastest mod i've done)

Easy
00:04:997 -> Make this slider end at 00:05:330
00:05:997 -> Spinner should start at 00:05:664
00:17:497 -> Slider should start at 00:17:330
01:02:330 -> Slider should end at 01:02:997

Mochi's Normal
00:05:497 -> I suggest changing the slider to a circle
00:05:830 -> Make spinner start at 00:05:664
00:26:330 -> Place circle here
00:28:330 -> Place circle here
00:34:997 -> I suggest making this start at 00:34:830
01:01:664 -> I suggest making this have rebounds in exchange for deleting slider at 01:01:997
01:27:663 -> Replace circle with slider for better ending

(From here onwards less mods because i can't play them properly)
Hard
00:34:997 -> Suggest that you start the slider at 00:34:820 and make it a triple tap
00:36:330 -> Same problem as above

Revolution
00:06:830 - 00:07:247 -> Make sliders closer to each other to prevent confusion
00:11:997 - 00:12:497 -> Put the circles further from each other to make it more difficult
00:32:830 -> Delete this note as there is no rhythm
00:33:497 -> Same problem as above
01:05:497 -> Same problem as above
01:27:663 -> Delete this note as the spinner is good enough for a ending

Good luck.
Firce777
modded with facebook
SPOILER
stu00608
尤其是muzu 怕會放太難
William Firce
這是要給rank的?
[Oni]
00:11:664 (31) - 改大圓
00:14:580 (44) - 改x
00:18:330 (66) - 改o
00:23:830 (99) - 大圓
00:39:830 (191) - 大圓
00:41:997加個o
00:46:664這邊加個什麼都好
00:49:664 (253) - 大圓
00:52:330 (272) - ^
00:54:997 (291) - ^
00:56:997 (305) - ^
01:03:580 (354) - 改o
William Firce
已mod玩
原來我irc mod如此神速
stu00608
2014-10-31 23:49
stu00608
不愧是7娘
William Firce
譜沒什麼大問題
不過保險起見 還是得再找些mod才行
muzu懶得看
stu00608
00:41:997加哥o <--這裡這樣加會不會太密
可是可是 我muzu比較有問題qwq
William Firce
我覺得不會
stu00608
好喔
William Firce
你叫我看muzu 我會把他mod成oni
syuru
from mod queue :> i honestly couldn't find a lot to point out, most of it was pretty good
[General]
  1. remember to add bg
i didn't spot anything in easy so i skipped it ;_;
[Mochi's Normal]
  1. 00:14:331 (4) - flip horizontally, i think curving this the other way would look nicer
  2. 00:40:997 (4) - shape looks kind of odd
  3. 00:44:497 (4) - i think you can move this down some to blanket better with 3
  4. 00:46:164 (3) - instead of slider i think you should use circles since both the beat and the 1/2 and important in the music
  5. 00:46:664 (4,5) - make this a slider instead?
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:997 (1) - i think this would be more fun if these were just singles going in an arc
  2. 00:38:997 (3) - placement looks odd compared to timing, maybe mirror 00:38:331 (1)?
  3. 00:44:831 (4) - move more to the right, around 312, 168
  4. 00:51:664 (1,3) - this part looks odd since it's more jagged compared to the other parts of the map which have lots of curved sliders
  5. 01:20:997 (1) - you could make this part stand out more by turning this into 3 single jumps imo
[Revolution]
  1. 00:00:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this feels awkward, imo it plays better as 1 stream
  2. 00:33:414 (2,3) - move closer to 1
  3. 00:34:830 - i think there should be a note here?
  4. 00:39:497 (4) - i think this should be a 1/2 slider to match vocals and maybe remove 5
  5. 01:14:164 (5) - ctrl g?
  6. 01:20:831 (6) - place evenly between 4 and 5
  7. 01:23:497 (6) - ^
mintong89
Hi, Mod request from wcx.

[stu' Taiko Oni]
Firstly I want say is: the map is quite random which isn't good. For example, the sound of interlude and chorus is more feel "rhythm" and middle isn't, but you make the rhythm of note almost same. I will recommend you delete some note at middle of the song to improve the quality of map.

00:08:164 (8) - Any reason to make this note to big note? There's no cymbal or really loud sound here.
00:13:164 (35) - Should be D here for cymbal.
00:38:330 (183) - & 00:38:997 (186) - should be big note too for cymbal.
00:40:497 - add a k here for vocal.
00:46:330 (239,240,241,242,243) - Uhh...why you suddenly change from follow BGM to follow vocal? It would be better if you 00:46:997 - add a note at here and delete last two or delete 00:46:330 (239,240) - these two and add note for follow vocal.
00:49:664 (255) - Shouldn't big note too because isn't have cymbal or loud sound.
01:13:830 (1) - I don't recommend you do this small spinner, because it just one count at spinner and it seem useless. So how about change to two big note?

[stu's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:02:997 (5) - Since you do the big note at here. How about do same with 00:03:664 (8,11,14) - these three? These three have same rhythm to this big note too.
00:13:164 (20) - D here for cymbal?

...It seem really rigidly follow the vocal.

The maps could be more improve.
Good Luck.
Icing_wind
既然是自己人我就不客气的用中文了hhhh 其实我英文很烂。。qwq

mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[stu' Taiko Oni]
00:09:914 (18,19) - 换成d?
00:13:914 (39) - delete
00:19:247 (71) - 换成 d
00:31:330 (143) - 换成 d
good lucky :D
mod太鼓我就是大水比
stu00608

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, Mod request from wcx.

[stu' Taiko Oni]
Firstly I want say is: the map is quite random which isn't good. For example, the sound of interlude and chorus is more feel "rhythm" and middle isn't, but you make the rhythm of note almost same. I will recommend you delete some note at middle of the song to improve the quality of map.

00:08:164 (8) - Any reason to make this note to big note? There's no cymbal or really loud sound here.
00:13:164 (35) - Should be D here for cymbal.
00:38:330 (183) - & 00:38:997 (186) - should be big note too for cymbal.
00:40:497 - add a k here for vocal.
00:46:330 (239,240,241,242,243) - Uhh...why you suddenly change from follow BGM to follow vocal? It would be better if you 00:46:997 - add a note at here and delete last two or delete 00:46:330 (239,240) - these two and add note for follow vocal.
00:49:664 (255) - Shouldn't big note too because isn't have cymbal or loud sound.
01:13:830 (1) - I don't recommend you do this small spinner, because it just one count at spinner and it seem useless. So how about change to two big note?

[stu's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:02:997 (5) - Since you do the big note at here. How about do same with 00:03:664 (8,11,14) - these three? These three have same rhythm to this big note too.
00:13:164 (20) - D here for cymbal?

...It seem really rigidly follow the vocal.

The maps could be more improve.
Good Luck.
00:46:330 (239,240,241,242,243) Here I would like retain my set and regulate some notes
like this
01:13:830 Here I change to K D ,also Muzu diff~

Thanks for your mod :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Aerous
M4M From Your Queue !

I'm new to modding and hope this helps !

Revolution :

00:34:830 Add a note here on top of the first slider. http://puu.sh/cC8gy/461ed25563.jpg

00:57:830 (4,5,6,1) Connect this stream

01:04:497 (4,5) space these 2 sliders a bit further away.

01:13:830 (4,5) Suggestion : make number 4 into a repeat slider and delete number 5.

Really like the mapping style!

Hard :


00:04:164 (2,4) Make these two singles' spacing the same.

00:16:330 (3) Make this into a slider

00:34:830 (1,2,3) Add a note on top of the slider. http://puu.sh/cC8Vn/bc587dc0f3.jpg

01:13:830 (3) Suggestion : Make this into a repeat slider

01:27:663 (1) Suggestion : Change this slider into a spinner

Normal :

I really like this diff !

Suggestion 01:07:497 (2,3,4) Try to make a triangle , move the 3 a bit higher.

Easy :

I couldn't find any mistakes/errors
mancuso_JM_
Hey wcx! I'll mod the taiko difficulties after you update this map (because I'd like to do M4M with you)..
So, I'll be waiting for the update!
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
updated taiko, also fixed a few things in my diffs
feel free to pm me if you need reply to your mods
tina71129
Mod來了~~~ 我好像Mod不出什麼頭緒:D
stu' Taiko Muzu
00:53:164 (29) - D?

stu' Taiko Oni
00:23:830 (99) - D
00:46:330 (240) - K?

祝好運^^
Neku Okazaki
[Muzukashii]
00:00:497 (1) - Is too short and isnt necesary, please delete it
00:13:497 (21) - Delete, to start with the voice
00:14:747 (27) - Delete
00:15:664 (31) - To follow te voice
00:15:997 (33) - Delete
00:18:830 (43) - Delete, to start with the voice
00:20:664 (51,52) - Ctrl + g
00:21:164 (53) - D
00:21:330 (54) - Delete
00:22:330 (58) - d
00:24:164 (2) - Delete... I say it
00:29:080 (23) - Delete and:
00:28:997 (22) - d
00:29:497 (24) - Move to 00:29:664 (24) -
00:38:330 (58) - k
00:43:164 (76) - d
00:50:080 (13) - Delete
00:51:414 (19) - ^
00:52:914 (25) - ^
00:56:080 (39) - Delete
00:56:747 (42) - ^
01:00:747 (56) - ^
01:02:080 (62) - Delete, dat slow part
01:06:997 (82) - Delete, to make goodest this part
01:07:580 (85) - Delete and:
01:07:497 (84,85) - 1/2 dd
01:10:747 (95) - Delete
01:10:830 (95,96) - Ctrl + g and:
01:10:997 (96) - Delete
01:11:163 (96) - d
01:19:413 (23) - Delete
01:21:414 (33) - ^
01:27:413 (61) - Delete

I think this map isnt look good with some 1/4, because this song sounds easy and have 180 of BPM

[Oni]
00:03:664 (19) - k, why D, isnt necesary
00:09:997 (19) - Delete?, sounds good
00:12:664 (31,32) - Delete
00:23:414 (93) - Delete
00:25:830 (108) - Delete?
00:28:997 (126) - d
00:29:497 (128,129) - Ctrl + G, sound better
00:32:747 (148) - Delete and:
00:32:830 (148) - d
00:40:664 (189) - k, sounds better
00:41:997 (199) - k
00:41:664 (197,198) - Ctrl + G, to make good this: 00:41:997 (199,200) -
00:44:080 (214) - Delete
00:45:330 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232) - What!!!
00:45:164 (221) - d
00:45:580 (225) - Delete
00:45:830 (227) - d
01:03:580 (349) - Delete
01:06:080 (360) - ^
01:21:997 (45) - k
01:27:414 (75) - Delete

This map can be ranked one day... Not today, or tomorrow but with some help your map can be better :D
Zweib
你好~

[Easy]
clean~

[Mochi's Normal]
01:03:664 (1) - maybe off-screen?

[Hard]
00:01:664 (2,3) - replace these with reverse slider instead? perhaps more natural imo
00:11:997 (1) - use lower sv to make a hold slider?

[Revolution]
00:05:664 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - NC these ? maybe abuse x_x just suggestion
00:11:997 (1,2,3,4) - ^?
00:41:997 (5) - use a 1/4 slider instead of circle?

[stu's Muzu]
00:23:830 (1) - big note?
01:03:997 (77) - add a D here? It'll be natural because you change to follow bgm here.
01:09:663 and 01:09:747 add notes? To be symmetric with 01:10:664 (106,107,108) -
mancuso_JM_
Hi wcx! Modding Taiko diffs. looking for a M4M (from your queue)

[General]

  1. Difficulties Names: I think you missed the last ''s'' after your name (I mean stu's Muzu and stu's Oni), well this is the correct form so you may want to fix it.
    On the other side, use ''Muzukashii'' instead of ''Muzu'', Muzukashii is the correct name after all and I think all of us should use the correct one, anyway this last one is just a suggestion (is not a must :P)
[stu' Muzu]

  1. 00:00:497 (spin) - You ignored some other important things in the map, and I think this shaker is not following the music really well (and it doesn't play really well neither), so I suggest you to remove it and start the map where start the stronger section.
  2. 00:03:997 (9,10,11) - Would be better if you emphasize the vocals using big kats as you did in the rest of the map. So, if I were you I'd use d d K instead.
  3. 00:10:997 (14) - I think the map needs a stop here if you listen to the music properly. Try to remove this note and use a rhythm like this one.
  4. 00:14:664 (27,28,29) - This 3-plet looks too random here and flows pretty bad. To make this more fluent, try to remove (28) and make (29) a kat to follow the vocals closer.
  5. 00:20:164 (x) - You're ignoring a strong beat here, try adding a kat.
  6. 00:25:497 (x) - To make the rhythm and flow constant here, try adding a kat here and make the next note a don.
  7. 00:26:830 (16) - kat instead (?
  8. 00:31:664 - 00:31:747 - You may want to add some don in both places to cover the strong drum sound.
  9. 00:37:330 (56,57,58,59,60) - This sounds/plays pretty weird to me, because you're ignoring some strong beats. To give this pattern some nexus, I tried to add some new notes, and well, this is what I tried
  10. 00:39:330 (x) - Add a note here (? This pattern will flow much better, give it a try pls.
  11. 00:52:664 (x) - Basically, I would add a note here to give some nexus between this and the previous pattern, actually the flow here is not the best.
- Well, I think I can't mod more in this difficulty, you've focused too much in vocals and this is not the best thing because you're ignoring a lot of strong beats when drums appear. Try to see my suggestions and apply it to the rest of the map, I don't want to touch your style that much but you should something to make this map much better.
Actually, this need more work but I think you can make it even better!


[stu' Oni]

  1. 00:03:664 (19) - Try using a big kat here instead, to emphasize the vocals.
  2. 00:05:664 (spin) - This plays weird to me, I think this spinner should finish 1/2 back and then the stream should start in 00:07:164 -. In addition, I personally think you should use something like kkddddddk, because drums sound more like this.
  3. 00:09:664 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - I would change a bit this pattern for a better flow, plus this will follow the music closer too. Try to use k ddkkd in this pattern instead.
  4. 00:12:664 (32,33,34) - This 3-plet looks so lonely here and it doesn't play really well. Just remove (33) and make (32) a don.
  5. 00:15:830 (51,52,53) - kkd for consistency (?
  6. 00:16:830 (x) - Try adding a don here, I think a nexus here is important for a better flow.
  7. 00:26:164 (115,116,117) - This is so random, ddk will fit much better.
  8. 00:27:497 (x) - Try adding a don here as well, as I explained before.
  9. 00:30:830 (x) - (^)
  10. 00:36:164 (x) - If you're following vocals here, try adding a don.
  11. 00:41:164 (199,200,201,202) - d kdk will follow the music closer, give it a try.
  12. 00:41:997 (205) - I think a pause here is necessary to start with the new section, so try removing this note.
  13. 01:05:997 (367,368,369,370,371) - This 5-plet is lonely and plays weird here. Try removing (370), I think you'll fix the problem if you do that.
  14. 01:21:997 (45,46,47,48,49) - Same as above.
- This is better than Muzukashii but this still needs more work in term of composition. I tried to fix some of them, but you'll need more mods to fix the difficulty before the rank!

Well, that's all. Both difficulties need more mods but I think you can make them even better.
I hope this can help you!
Good Luck!
X Light
sorry for the late mod
from wcx's M4M queue.
[Revolution]

00:19:331 (5,6,1) - flow不太顺
00:23:331 (4) - +whistle.
00:28:664 (7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/cFchK/db55599f51.png
00:48:497 (3,4,5) - 这个梗感觉应该放在00:58:497 (1) - 这个时间,和上面一次出现不太对应。
00:51:414 (7,8) - 这里clap加的比较特别,因为我听上去和之前是一样的,00:55:997 (2) - 这里也是
01:11:331 (5,6) - 音量可以稍微调小

[Hard]

00:11:997 (1) - 这里换成折返跳比较带感啊
还有一个就是我感觉滑条尾的判定更松所以00:30:331 (1,2,3) - 这种2离3应该更近不过怎么好看怎么来吧

[Mochi's Normal]

00:17:497 (4) - 感觉节奏有些奇怪,可以跟人声
00:20:164 (4) - 同理
00:36:830 (7) -拆成两个note吧..
01:03:497 - add note

[Easy]

00:37:664 (2) - 这个地方的嗵鼓没体现出来
pieguyn
[Easy]
00:00:497 (1) - there should be a hit on 00:01:164 - , imo. try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cFcnf/f0d6eca449.jpg
01:13:831 (3) - whistle on end? seems to be there on other diffs
01:15:164 (2) - dont get why whistle here o.o
01:24:331 (4) - kind of close to 01:23:164 (2) - imo. maybe angle 01:23:164 (2) - more up? http://puu.sh/cFcGN/fbe54c8eb6.jpg
352,112,83164,2,0,P|304:136|232:136,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,83997,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Mochi's Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:11:997 (1,2) - i kind of think soft whistle on every slider point sounds good here. might just be me, up to you. (same idea on Revolution)
00:41:831 (3,4,5) - personally i find straight flow leading into a jump awkward to play. how about moving 00:41:831 (3) - to x232 y248? this would break the straight flow and also make 00:41:497 (2,3) - look more nice. just an idea
01:05:330 (2,3) - how about making a jump here? it seems consistent with the rest of the map. up to you
01:09:997 (3,4) - triangle isn't perfect. move up 1 grid

[Revolution]
00:15:414 (4,5) - imo move it left 1 grid for better looking blanket
00:28:331 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - imo flow here is weird. it flows better to continue the clockwise rotation from 00:27:997 (2,3,4,5,6) - . example http://puu.sh/cFafe/88615919db.jpg
00:34:164 (1,4) - switch NCs? since 00:34:497 (4) - is a downbeat and u start a new pattern at 00:34:497 (4) - .
00:46:664 (2) - imo, it should end 1/4 earlier to fit better with vocal
00:50:747 (3) - missing clap?
00:58:497 (1) - how about ending it 1/4 later? imo it fits with how u did it in the rest of the map
01:11:080 - add a note here? seems to fit drum

all suggestions
nice map, gl :3
stu00608
Thanks for modding ~~~

BG will be changed this weekend~

Diff:
stu's Muzukashii
stu's Oni
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks for modding
updated taiko and my diffs, please pm me if you want reply
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by stu.

  • [stu's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:04:164 (10,11) - k D could match the vocal since 00:04:164 (10) - is higher-pitched than 00:04:330 (11) -
  2. 00:14:830 - adding a note, preferably a kat, could follow the vocal there.
  3. 00:22:330 (55) - consider changing this to K ? It has an equal stress as 00:21:164 (50,52,58) -
  4. 00:23:830 (1) - D would be better for pattern consistency as 00:13:164 (19) -
  5. 00:28:997 (23) - you may change this note to k since the vocal pitch is nearer to 00:29:164 (24) -
  6. 00:31:830 (36) - similar to 00:22:330 (55) - , D would be better.
  7. 00:39:830 (69) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  8. 00:42:497 (79) - ^
  9. 00:49:997 (12,15) - swap these notes to k d ? Again, this could follow the vocal smoothly imo.
  10. 00:52:164 (23,24) - d k could match the increase in vocal pitch there.
  11. 00:52:914 - add k ? I feel like something is missing.
  12. 00:53:164 (28) - D would be better if you apply ^
  13. 00:58:497 (49) - K would be nice to mark the start of the 2nd part of the kiai.
  14. 01:00:662 (58,61) - same as 00:49:997 (12,15) -
  15. 01:01:997 (64) - d would be good if you want to follow the vocal pitch.
  16. 01:03:164 - add a don here to lengthen the pattern ? If the consecutive three 1/2 patterns are too long, the part would become a bit monotonous.
  17. 01:04:830 (75,76) - k D could follow both the snare and the stressed sound at 01:04:830 and 01:04:997 - respectively.
  18. 01:06:997 (89) - d could result in a better flow of notes imo.
  19. 01:07:164 (85) - k would be better if you change ^
  20. 01:11:330 (99) - k for following the snare sound ?
  21. 01:27:330 (60) - d ? The pitch of the music is the same as 01:27:664 (62) -
  22. 01:27:663 (62) - D would be great for stressed sound there. Also, this could mark the end of the song nicely.
  • [stu's Oni]
  1. 00:09:497 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - k d kkddd could follow the pitch of the music in a way better.
  2. 00:13:164 (33) - D as you did in Muzukashii ?
  3. 00:13:497 - maybe k here for the snare ?
  4. 00:19:830 (73) - consider deleting this note ? A bit unnecessary imo.
  5. 00:22:164 (88) - k could fit both the snare and the increasing vocal pitch there.
  6. 00:30:664 - I would suggest another pattern here since the 5-plet does not fit very well imo: (cursor at 00:31:330 - )
  7. 00:40:664 (193,194,195) - It seems that ddk could fit the vocal better.
  8. 00:42:497 (204) - same as Muzukashii
  9. 00:42:664 (205) - move to 00:42:164 - for the vocal ?
  10. 00:45:164 (223) - putting D here could result in a better impact before the kiai.
  11. 00:45:997 (232,233) - kk would be better for the snare sounds.
  12. 00:46:997 (236) - move to 00:46:830 - and add k at 00:46:664 - if you want to follow the vocal.
  13. 00:47:497 (238) - K as you did in Muzukashii ?
  14. 00:52:330 (270) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  15. 00:52:830 (272,273) - maybe kk for the high-pitched piano ?
  16. 01:00:153 (328) - similar to 00:45:997 (232,233) - , k would be better.
  17. 01:04:997 (357) - same as Muzukashii
  18. 01:12:663 (398) - d could follow the relatively low-pitched vocal there.
  19. 01:14:497 (1) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  20. 01:21:997 (45,46,47) - ddk ? Again, this could fit the snare at 01:22:163 -
  21. 01:27:330 (73) - same as Muzukashii
  22. 01:27:664 (75) - ^
I think the Oni still needs more work. That's all and good luck~ :D
stu00608
thanks for mod~~

I almost changed the set~ :)
xxdeathx
twintails!

[General]
  1. I don't think negative offset is needed since you don't have any timing sections before 00:01:164, so the red timing point can begin there. Shiro dislikes negative offsets too.
  2. Add Thouars to tags because she's the character that Rikka Takanashi Uchida Maaya is voicing.
[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:831 (1,2) - improve blanket, middle is too far
[Hard]
fine

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - o.o trippy lol
  2. 00:02:330 (4) - should NC because it's really late after 00:01:164 (3) -
  3. 00:04:664 (2) - use 1/2 circles so player can hit key for both vocals?
  4. 00:06:997 - add circle here because here 00:05:664 (1,2,3,4) - you are following that sound in the music and the same sound is present at 00:06:997
  5. 00:34:830 - 00:34:997 - 00:36:164 - 00:37:497 - ignoring vocal sounds awkward
  6. 00:40:164 - this is a strong vocal on white tick so you should have a circle or slider start here because slider end is too weak
  7. 00:59:645 (7,8) - blanket?
[Revolution]
  1. 00:28:331 (4,5,6) - 00:29:664 (2,3,4) - ctrl-g suggested?
  2. 00:34:830 - ignoring this note sounds really weird and unintuitive
  3. 00:34:997 (6,7) - also don't ignore vocals on white ticks + spacing of 00:35:331 (7,1) - is too big for 1/4 jump
  4. 00:46:830 - don't ignore this vocal, how about make 3 1/4 sliders here?
  5. 01:23:664 (1,4) - Remove red point is simpler
Good luck with this!!
GGFFQQ55
from m4m queue

newbie mod, sorry if there's any mistake :)

Kotone's insane


00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - really hard to play and read...sliders or kick-back sliders are better maybe?

00:34:497 (1,2,3,4) - follow the vocal here maybe? I think it's better with the 1/2 with the flow going on

00:48:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - hard to read, maybe spread the 1/4 in a small DS

00:52:331 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - same as above

01:05:831 (1) - here maybe use 1/6 or 1/8?

01:14:164 (2,1) - too hard to play here, maybe ctrl+G 2 here?

01:27:747 (1) - spinner is fine, but try using a slider maybe?

Revolution


00:06:831 (1,2,3) - too hard ;w;

00:34:997 (6,7,1) - I dont see the reason using slow sliders here...

Hard


00:52:831 (4,1) - little bit hard to play for hard diff, maybe a full kick-back slider for this piece is better

I think it's kind of too hard for this diff, use less 1/4 rythm maybe

Normal and Easy


no big problem, only some detail problems, not crucial though ;w;

short mod orz, hope something may help QWQ
Atsuro
For M4M

[Mochi's Normal]
  1. 00:12:831 (1,2) - Maybe blanket this?

[Hard]
  1. 00:48:497 (3,1) - Put them a bit closer from each other, i think that jump after a repeat slider is a bit hard.
  2. 01:05:664 (3,4) - The sound that i think you're following with 4 starts here (01:05:830 - ), try to replace 3 with a circle and move 4 to where the sound begins and add a circle after

    Loved this diff :D

[Kotone's Insane]
  1. 00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too confusing and hard to read, i recommend changing it
  2. 00:06:997 - Add a note here, there's a sound
  3. 00:07:831 (1) - Make this slider 1/2, there's no reason for it to be 3/4 in my opinion
  4. 01:05:830 (1) - Try reducing the repeats and placing notes to differentiate the piano from the drum sound. (Is it a piano?)
  5. 01:10:497 - Put a note here, the blank space feels weird, or better move the slider 1/2 a beat forward and add a circle in it's place.
    Good map, but i think it still needs some work

[Revolution]
  • I can barely play this one, so my suggestions here may be bad
  1. 00:34:164 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you deleted "2" and made it a jump.
  2. 00:34:830 - Add a circle?
  3. 01:12:997 (1,2) - This doesn't fit in my opinion, make the slider 1/1 and delete the circle?

    Great map :D
Couldn't find anything in easy
I hope this helps, good luck
emilia
M4M?

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Transition from white to red is rather weird, maybe fix polarity/try sticking to only white ticks here? Its fine as it is though.
  2. 00:08:497 (1,2,3) - Maybe make 1 lead directly into 2, then make 3 stack on 1?
  3. 01:13:831 (3) - IMO the circle is really tight, try making a slider that is simpler

    The most part of the song is mapped on red lines, which I feel may be too hard for Easy players to follow. But its still fine.

    [Mochi's Normal]
  4. 00:12:831 (1,2) - Blanket?
  5. 00:39:497 (1,3) - ^
  6. 01:03:664 (1) - This is off-grid. I suggest shifting it inside, but its fine. As long as it doesn't hit the ranking panel (?)

    Great normal, I like the patterns + flow and everything :)

    [Hard]
  7. 00:03:664 (1,2,3) - Why the sudden change in DS?
  8. 00:04:164 (2,3) - Blanket?
  9. 00:11:997 (1) - Highly undesirable double reverse, try 1 reverse then 1 hitcircle?
  10. 00:21:664 (3) - Try Ctrl g
  11. 00:32:997 (1) - Maybe make this similar to 00:32:330 (4) - ?
  12. 00:34:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - IMO this rhythm on red line is hard to follow, but its fine
  13. 00:43:497 (4,1) - Mini blanket fix
  14. 00:53:997 (4,1) - Flow is slightly conflicting here, since 4 goes to right, then 1 requires a shift back to left, kinda awkward IMO. Suggest shift 1 to right.
  15. 01:27:664 (1) - Try ctrl g?

    I kinda like it. Flow is pretty good and patterns are also nice.

    [Kotone's Insane]
  16. 00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Holy shit god DAMN. This looks insane to play. I suggest fast jumpy single reverse kick sliders.
  17. 00:06:164 (2,3,4) - I suggest stack these like here: 00:21:664 (4,5) -
  18. 00:48:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try using another pattern. A stream feels rather unnecessary here
  19. 00:53:164 (1) - Offscreen?
  20. 00:58:798 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use 3 blanket 6 and 2?
  21. 01:03:664 (5,1) - Highly undesirable, because I feel that the slider is being hidden too much.
  22. 01:17:664 (3,5) - Stack?

    Some minor blanket problems. Also, I see a lot of sliders that are overly curved like 00:15:830 (4,5) - , 00:26:497 (4) - , 00:29:997 (4) - and 00:48:997 (1) - . These sliders may break flow, like in here, 00:48:997 (1,2,3) - , slider 1 doesn't exactly lead in to 2/3 properly, because its curved too much. Overall, still a good map.

    [Insane]
  23. 00:52:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rather hard to accomplish, since its hard to aim 5 stream keys then the slider is at a rather-far-away-but-enough-for-you-to-miss distance. Will suggest change, but its k
  24. 01:07:164 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why not perfect pentagon?

    Suggestions:
  25. 00:03:664 (1) - Ctrl g so flow shift isn't that bad
  26. 00:05:664 (5,6) - I'd rather have something blanket 6 than have slider 5.
  27. 00:10:331 (1) - Ctrl g
  28. 00:14:997 (3) - ^
  29. 00:16:664 (5) - ^
  30. 00:20:831 (8) - ^
  31. 00:27:331 (5) - ^
  32. 00:38:997 (3) - ^, shift 4 after
  33. 00:53:831 (8,9,1) - Shift in flow here is quite bad, suggest change
  34. 01:14:164 (5) - Ctrl g

    Generally a nice map. Why not change the name to Extra? Since its mapped in the style of an Extra. I like it :)
I like this spread. Mostly well done :D
Stefan
Made a really short check through the Taiko Difficulties and wanted to mod them but these doesn't seems to be ready. Call me after 2-3 good mods and I will see what we can do here.
Charlotte
Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

stu's Muzukashii

Song Setup→Design→Widescreen Support→(uncheck)

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*Almost unsnapped.

00:34:832 - add d.because,follow the vocal (same as Oni)
00:34:992 - add k.^
00:54:001 - change d
01:17:992 - ^
01:20:660 - change k

stu's Oni

Song Setup→Design→Widescreen Support→(uncheck)

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*Almost unsnapped.

00:36:174 - delete.because,better follow the vocal? & ddk ddk ddk is one pattern?

Nice map! Good luck :)
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