Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size · forum

smallboat

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-10-26T03:23:11+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月23日 at 上午 02:10:36

Artist: Mayama Rika
Title: Liar Mask anime size
Source: アカメが斬る！
Tags: akame ga Kill! tv size opening takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid Irie Miyuki Hollow Wings
BPM: 150
Filesize: 24277kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.49 stars, 96 notes)
Hard (3.18 stars, 231 notes)
HW's Insane (4.99 stars, 292 notes)
Insane (4.78 stars, 341 notes)
Irie's Insane (4.23 stars, 291 notes)
Normal (2.09 stars, 142 notes)

Download: Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#11 Ranked Map.

Easy by me

Normal

Hard

Irie's Insane by Irie Miyuki

Insane

HW's Insane by Hollow Wings

Akame OP 1 :
Amamiya Sora - Skyreach

Akame ED 1 :
Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.)

Akame ED 2 :
Amamiya Sora - Tsuki Akari

Map Log

2014/10/26 Submitted map
2014/10/30 Add Irie's Insane diff (Keep spread balance)
2014/11/02 Add HW's Insane diff ~~(Don't worry,this is a good heart map)~~
2014/11/04 Change song title by Natsu's suggestion

Thanks Mod

Sellenite
Wing My Way
Rakuen
Kawaiwkyik
Hollow Wings
CloudSplash16
sammy711
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Crystal
Irie Miyuki
Zweib
Kamio Misuzu
Kawaiwkyik
Natsu
Minakami Yuki
Irreversible Bubbled
TicClick (Divisor snap check)
CDFA Qualified

最後還是做了OP2 和 ED2

Last edited by smallboat 2014-12-10T03:39:38+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2014-10-26T07:48:38+00:00

Yay another map set

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-10-31T05:24:59+00:00

[Insane]

00:35:109 (2) - 这个NC？
00:35:553 (5) - 这个也是NC，三个一组比较易读
00:40:219 (1,2,3,4) - 这1/2放得像1/3了，有点难读
00:54:052 (5) - 现在flow反而打起来不顺，ctrl+g试试
00:57:552 (1) - 头加finish
01:00:218 (1) - ^
01:02:885 (1) - ^
01:06:718 (1) - ^
01:08:218 (1) - ^
01:09:552 和 01:09:635 都加circle，从红线stream听起来很怪啊，他有微小的音的
01:12:052 (1) - 头加finish
01:23:052 (3,1) - 交换NC
01:24:385 (5,1) - 交换NC

[Irie's Insane]

00:32:220 (4) - NC
00:32:886 (7) - NC，好难读啊
00:34:220 (2,3) - ctrl+g，重音不跳轻音跳有点不自然
00:47:219 (4) - 你这爆炸了，要NC提醒一下
01:16:718 (3,4) - 其实我觉得ctrl+g让重音放在短滑条的尾巴节奏会很好，不知你意下如何
01:22:885 (1,2) - 交换NC，你一开始就是红线NC的跟吉他啊
01:24:218 (1,2) - 交换NC

[Hard]

00:36:220 (1) - 这个因为sv变化ds变短了，手动调一下前后等间距比较好

剩下的还是你的finish可以加一加，美丽

Last edited by Sellenite 2014-10-31T09:26:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-10-31T05:29:16+00:00

chuanye loves akame ga kill, all 4 OP/ED's mapped :O

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2014-10-31T11:18:12+00:00

[Insane]

00:05:031 (2) - 这个往下挪一点如何？
00:18:553 (3) - 让3离4远一些如何？
00:29:220 (3,1) - ^
00:21:220 (5) - 5离6远一些吧，这样好读
00:35:109 (2,3,4) - 距离太大了，感觉不好
00:32:553 (2,3) - 如果是我我会https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2189297
00:33:998 (2,3) - 这样打起来不是很舒服
00:37:553 (2) - 做一个1/6的短滑这样好不好？
00:42:719 (3,4) - 再摆开一些？
01:17:718 (7,8,9) - 这样直线摆打着很不舒服
01:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:43:553 (2,3) - 开头加whistle?
00:47:219 (1) - 开头去whistle?

[Hard]

00:15:442 (2) - 加NC
00:21:442 (5) - ^
00:26:775 (4) - ^
00:32:109 (4) - ^
00:47:219 (4) - ^
00:32:109 (4) - 去NC
01:14:718 (6,7) - 中间加一个音如何
01:15:718 (2) - 叠到1上？

[Normal]
我觉得作为normal重音音量应该更突出，适当换一换音效感觉如何？
00:53:552 (4) - 这里换成一个spinner怎么样？

船爷让我这么一个新人摸图我当时吓了一跳orz主观意见太多求谅解OAQ

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-10-31T19:29:20+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3
船业~ 没带gd ;w;

[Hitsounds]
Don't like soft-hitclap2 ... prefer to change them to soft-hitclap, like the feel in Skyreach gives, just opinion

Read this!
For KIAI part, in my opinion (testplay), there are a lot of missing Finish sounds separately at white and red ticks, like 00:56:052 - , 00:57:552 - , 00:58:718 - , 01:00:218 - , 01:01:385 - and so forth.
Maybe it's the quality of the song, not really sure about it, but it sounds better after adding Finish on them

[Music Outtro]
Song actually ends at 01:29:552 - , make all diffs (which ended with sliders or spinners) there and maybe put 5% volume for it

[Easy]

00:18:886 (3) - Feel this one should point to 00:20:220 (1) - , flow is too curved:
Image
00:26:886 (3) - Just personal opinion here, don't like the slider humped to previous note 00:26:553 (2) - , imo a bit conflict with the same pattern previously 00:22:886 (1,2,3) - . Suggest something like 00:28:220 (1,2,3) - , looks pretty fine
00:31:886 (2) - Not snapped to the mid, use Grid Snap function
00:37:220 (3) - Minor blanket

[Normal]

00:06:231 (3) - Try to make it at the middle? Looks more symmetry. Move the set 00:01:431 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
00:29:553 (3) - Minor blanket
00:32:053 (3) - Vocal is at 1/3, also drum, so 1/2 here is not needed
00:34:720 (3) - Nothing sounded here, the drum is at 1/3 , 00:34:664 - . Could be an unrankable issue
00:46:719 (2) - Vocal is sounded at 00:46:886 - too, suggest to make it like 00:45:219 (3,4) - , maybe different pattern
01:10:218 (1) - Suggest this to stick with the constant DS to help reading it, maybe stick it to left bottom part like. Just to mention NC added or removed here as you wish:
Image
01:11:552 (2) - Blanket this with tail of 01:10:718 (1) - to fit pattern with 01:12:552 (4,1) -
01:15:552 (1) - Remove NC, instead, NC at 01:16:052 (2) - , like new upbeat in KIAI?

[Hard]

00:34:664 (4) - color=red]Drum is at 1/3 , 00:34:664 - .[/color]
00:36:220 (1) - Suggest to make this spaced more like between 00:35:553 (3,4) - , feeling~
01:16:052 (3) - NC for a bit anti jump and new beat (beat should look like 01:17:385 (1) - )
01:29:218 (4) - Suggest to follow the guitar at 01:29:302 - , the finish thingy might not sound very visible

[Irie's Insane]

00:11:811 (3) - I'd NC here for easier reading (opt. for Insane)
01:10:552 (11) - Can make a timing here to lower the clap sound, can't be heard very clearly in song
01:29:302 (7) - Maybe can change to slider and let it end at 01:29:552 - with 5% vol, optional to keep for pattern

[Insane]

00:01:431 (1) - Make this part's slider tails to be 5% or silence (if rankable), including all tails until 00:06:631 - , cuz it sounds a bit extra
00:54:219 - I'd lower the volume to 20% ~ 60% so players can hear the guitar sound more
01:14:718 - Mentioned in the Hitsound mod at top, like this one should be Finish instead of drum, maybe because of song quality

Good luck!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-01T00:00:52+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
[Irie's Insane]
00:32:220 (4) - NC 好
00:32:886 (7) - NC，好难读啊 ....
00:34:220 (2,3) - ctrl+g，重音不跳轻音跳有点不自然 g了以后flow不自然本来速度也就这么慢怎么放都一样
00:47:219 (4) - 你这爆炸了，要NC提醒一下 ?????
01:16:718 (3,4) - 其实我觉得ctrl+g让重音放在短滑条的尾巴节奏会很好，不知你意下如何打起来还是现在这样方便些
01:22:885 (1,2) - 交换NC，你一开始就是红线NC的跟吉他啊我也想在白线滑条尾NC阿
01:24:218 (1,2) - 交换NC ^

Rakuen wrote:
[Irie's Insane]
00:11:811 (3) - I'd NC here for easier reading (opt. for Insane) it's not hard to read under ar9 i suppose??
01:10:552 (11) - Can make a timing here to lower the clap sound, can't be heard very clearly in song changed to drum hitnormal
01:29:302 (7) - Maybe can change to slider and let it end at 01:29:552 - with 5% vol, optional to keep for pattern uh.. i'll just keep them now

thanks for modding!

code

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 54802
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Liar Mask
TitleUnicode:Liar Mask
Artist:Mayama Rika
ArtistUnicode:真山りか
Creator:smallboat
Version:Irie's Insane
Source:アカメが斬る！
Tags:akame ga Kill! tv size opening takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid
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OverallDifficulty:7
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smallboat

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smallboat 2014-11-01T01:51:42+00:00

Sellenite

Sellenite wrote:
[Insane]
00:35:109 (2) - 这个NC？好
00:35:553 (5) - 这个也是NC，三个一组比较易读好
00:40:219 (1,2,3,4) - 这1/2放得像1/3了，有点难读改了一點
00:54:052 (5) - 现在flow反而打起来不顺，ctrl+g试试 OK應該行
00:57:552 (1) - 头加finish 好
01:00:218 (1) - ^ 好
01:02:885 (1) - ^ 好
01:06:718 (1) - ^ 好
01:08:218 (1) - ^ 好
01:09:552 和 01:09:635 都加circle，从红线stream听起来很怪啊，他有微小的音的這兩點沒什麼聽到呢，不太想overmap，紅線stream我覺得蠻正常?
01:12:052 (1) - 头加finish 好
01:23:052 (3,1) - 交换NC 經自己的做法稍微改變這裡的NC
01:24:385 (5,1) - 交换NC ^
[Hard]
00:36:220 (1) - 这个因为sv变化ds变短了，手动调一下前后等间距比较好 Ok,fixed.
剩下的还是你的finish可以加一加，美丽 再看看，finish建議很有用，thx for mod!

xxdeathx wrote:
chuanye loves akame ga kill, all 4 OP/ED's mapped :O

:O不知道做什麼歌

Wing My Way

Wing My Way wrote:
[Insane]

00:05:031 (2) - 这个往下挪一点如何？座標想對中心
00:18:553 (3) - 让3离4远一些如何？這兩個對稱想保持 (Ctrl+J)
00:29:220 (3,1) - ^ 也是保持
00:21:220 (5) - 5离6远一些吧，这样好读移動了一點，也是作了對稱
00:35:109 (2,3,4) - 距离太大了，感觉不好這還能打吧
00:32:553 (2,3) - 如果是我我会https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2189297 覺得還好，另外，這個3也是對稱的
00:33:998 (2,3) - 这样打起来不是很舒服轉動了一點角度
00:37:553 (2) - 做一个1/6的短滑这样好不好？ OK行
00:42:719 (3,4) - 再摆开一些？放開了，也許這個日後會改變一下pattern，感覺難玩
01:17:718 (7,8,9) - 这样直线摆打着很不舒服稍微移動了點位置
01:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 再考慮
00:43:553 (2,3) - 开头加whistle? 考慮
00:47:219 (1) - 开头去whistle? 跟人聲

[Hard]

00:15:442 (2) - 加NC 覺得一大白線一NC就好讀了
00:21:442 (5) - ^ ^
00:26:775 (4) - ^ ^
00:32:109 (4) - ^ ^
00:47:219 (4) - ^ Added
00:32:109 (4) - 去NC 沒有加NC阿
01:14:718 (6,7) - 中间加一个音如何不了，想跟Hard有所區別
01:15:718 (2) - 叠到1上？選擇疊到3上

[Normal]
我觉得作为normal重音音量应该更突出，适当换一换音效感觉如何？感覺有點吵，不太喜歡N的hitsound set
00:53:552 (4) - 这里换成一个spinner怎么样？我想簡單一點

船爷让我这么一个新人摸图我当时吓了一跳orz主观意见太多求谅解OAQ 沒關係阿不介意，thx for mod!

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3
船业~ 没带gd ;w; 我錯了下次吧

[Hitsounds]
Don't like soft-hitclap2 ... prefer to change them to soft-hitclap, like the feel in Skyreach gives, just opinion Feel this hitsound set okay to me

Read this!
For KIAI part, in my opinion (testplay), there are a lot of missing Finish sounds separately at white and red ticks, like 00:56:052 - , 00:57:552 - , 00:58:718 - , 01:00:218 - , 01:01:385 - and so forth. All added.
Maybe it's the quality of the song, not really sure about it, but it sounds better after adding Finish on them Will add a bit hitsound for these diff

[Music Outtro]
Song actually ends at 01:29:552 - , make all diffs (which ended with sliders or spinners) there and maybe put 5% volume for it Fixed,but I think 20% volume sounds like fine.

[Easy]
00:18:886 (3) - Feel this one should point to 00:20:220 (1) - , flow is too curved: Fixed
Image
Fixed
00:26:886 (3) - Just personal opinion here, don't like the slider humped to previous note 00:26:553 (2) - , imo a bit conflict with the same pattern previously 00:22:886 (1,2,3) - . Suggest something like 00:28:220 (1,2,3) - , looks pretty fine Fixed
00:31:886 (2) - Not snapped to the mid, use Grid Snap function Move left a bit
00:37:220 (3) - Minor blanket Fixed
[Normal]
00:06:231 (3) - Try to make it at the middle? Looks more symmetry. Move the set 00:01:431 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Okay,moved
00:29:553 (3) - Minor blanket Fixed
00:32:053 (3) - Vocal is at 1/3, also drum, so 1/2 here is not needed Fixed
00:34:720 (3) - Nothing sounded here, the drum is at 1/3 , 00:34:664 - . Could be an unrankable issue Fixed
00:46:719 (2) - Vocal is sounded at 00:46:886 - too, suggest to make it like 00:45:219 (3,4) - , maybe different pattern Fixed a bit
01:10:218 (1) - Suggest this to stick with the constant DS to help reading it, maybe stick it to left bottom part like. Just to mention NC added or removed here as you wish: Fixed
Image
01:11:552 (2) - Blanket this with tail of 01:10:718 (1) - to fit pattern with 01:12:552 (4,1) - Fixed
01:15:552 (1) - Remove NC, instead, NC at 01:16:052 (2) - , like new upbeat in KIAI? Fixed
[Hard]
00:34:664 (4) - color=red]Drum is at 1/3 , 00:34:664 - .[/color] Fixed
00:36:220 (1) - Suggest to make this spaced more like between 00:35:553 (3,4) - , feeling~ Feel fine,think keep the same DS here
01:16:052 (3) - NC for a bit anti jump and new beat (beat should look like 01:17:385 (1) - ) Fixed
01:29:218 (4) - Suggest to follow the guitar at 01:29:302 - , the finish thingy might not sound very visible Keep it
[Insane]
00:01:431 (1) - Make this part's slider tails to be 5% or silence (if rankable), including all tails until 00:06:631 - , cuz it sounds a bit extra Will consider to add it or not
00:54:219 - I'd lower the volume to 20% ~ 60% so players can hear the guitar sound more Reduce to 30% here
01:14:718 - Mentioned in the Hitsound mod at top, like this one should be Finish instead of drum, maybe because of song quality I didn't notice to it,fixed
Good luck! Thx for mod! Useful suggestion ~!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
pm

[Easy]
以下是頭Finish
00:20:220 (1) - 好吧還是加一下雖然聽不太到
00:40:219 (1) - ^
00:41:219 (3,1) - ^
00:46:219 (1) - ^
00:48:219 (1) - ^
01:04:885 (4) - ^
01:13:385 - 這個也finish ^
00:33:553 (1) - 我覺得這不需要用折返slider, 00:34:220 - 這裡有個鼓音我覺得如果扔棄了它的話不太好要轉的話可以參考一下前面的節奏例如00:30:886 (1,2,3) - Ok,fixed
[Normal]
00:06:231 (3) - NC 我看你前面都是每條大白線都NC Fixed
00:09:411 (3,5) - ^ Fixed
00:20:220 - Finish Already added
00:24:886 - ^ Added
00:32:109 (3) - 這個東西放得好奇怪我認為直接delete比較好也對感覺Normal不需要1/3，removed
00:34:664 (3) - 同樣 ^
00:36:220 - 這段Finish跟Easy一樣 Fixed
00:56:052 (4) - 拉長到00:56:552 - 結束好
00:58:718 (4) - 同樣好
01:10:718 (1) - Remove nc Fixed
01:21:302 (3) - 這個有點難可以參考01:18:885 (1,2) - 的下法調了一點節奏
[Hard]
00:35:553 (3,4,1) - 最好用看上去一樣的間距好吧還是改了
00:52:719 (4,5) - 這樣分開的連打會很難把它們都stack在6上面吧好
01:13:385 (3) - 頭Finish Already added
01:16:052 (1) - ^ ^
01:17:885 (2,3) - ^ Added
[Insane]
你這個diff開頭的hitnormal聽上去很違和也許日後會替換一下hitnormal，因為現在這聲音聽的不明顯

這歌的1/3 part總覺得有點奇怪 我也覺得這前奏旋律好奇葩，是誰做曲的想打包
~~搞得我想做個diff了~~ hhh

Thx for mod ~ !

Hollow Wings

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req

昨天一直在打图233 233

Insane
图看上去清爽多了，有些地方可以再注重以下排版的美观，不要所有跳都ds snap，最好有大有小，然后不管flow稍微刻意摆几个形状也是可以的 OK我試試會改一點，真的看起來有些間距都一樣hh
00:12:611 (1) - 这个我倾向于你放在00:11:811 (1) - 的滑条头附近，这样跳大点因为这里是重音，如果你不是太过在意这里的symm 看來我很在意symmetry這個 hhh
00:18:220 (2,3) - 直接ctrl+g。00:17:553 (1,2) - 是1/2gap，00:18:553 (3,4) - 的4也是重音，跳大点比较好，虽然flow会变差但我觉得挺适合（个人感觉估计你不会改233 hh考慮看看，ctrl+g那個改了
00:21:442 (6) - 强烈建议移动到56,73。改了你这边00:20:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - 的跳都很大，突然这边有个2/3gap很容易造成误判，这么改ds大点也好读点改了一點，而且你00:15:442 (2,3) - 这边已经有相似的梗，前后呼应一下也好。照前面說的已改這裡
00:32:553 (2,3) - 平行吧，改2好了，否则后面00:33:553 (1) - 也要跟着改了。 2稍微往上了一點，00:32:886 (3,1) - 其實是對稱的你知道嗎hhh，所以那個3就不動了
00:34:886 (1) - 移动到262,314附近。移到了這座標附近的位置，然後似乎強迫症的想對稱坐標軸233 00:35:109 (1,2,3) - 的节奏极为特殊，最好放大之前的ds让玩家更容易读这个梗。這個再考慮一下，因為現在這圖形算工整不想破壞這pattern
00:35:553 (1,2,3,1) - 这边的跳有点乱，重新排一下。改了一點
00:50:219 (1,2,3) - 全部各自反向。这里vocal相对比较激烈，ds可以大点。說的有理，但是怎麼換了這三個方向反而DS更小了hhh另外，这三个滑条其实可以有更多摆法，具体怎么摆可以多自己试试。 OK，再看看
00:58:385 (4,5) - ctrl+g。換了总之这边00:58:552 (5,1) - 的音十分
之重，大跳比较好，而且flow没差。 OK，行
01:15:718 (2) - 十分有必要ctrl+g，01:15:718 (2,1) - 顺flow在这里1pc十分之坑爹，逆flow还好判定一些，即使是dt这边逆flow我觉得也更好打。 OK，行
接下来再跟你巴拉几句吧：flow的好坏并不代表梗的好坏，只是区分flow种类的代词而已（我更多地将它们称为顺flow和逆flow）例如坏的flow可以有antijump，用来表现一些重音或者特殊梗时就十分适合，又例如好的flow由于太过fluent，对于打图的要求会非常高，因为光标的定位会变得模糊，时间判定同理，有时候好的flow带来的效果可能并没有坏flow的好。举例来说，00:22:886 (1) - 如果让我来放我就会ctrl+g，乍看ds变大但其实难度并没有增加多少，打起来却更为爽快，你可以感受一下。感覺nice，換了又如00:30:053 (2,3) - 我也会ctrl+g 還是比較喜歡現在的hhh ，类似的情况很多，因为你做的是对称流的图，所以flow的东西占的分量可能没那么足，却可以靠ds的控制来弥补这一点（至于你怎么想的还是自己决定吧噗）可能會改變一點具体的方式就是在考虑flow的时候，可以这么来问自己：这个地方用大跳好还是小跳好，接着再来根据音乐和你要跟的轨来摆梗，可以让图打起来更合理也更爽。又見識到flow的神理論，我會好好研究hhh （至于我个人做图我是不太在意flow的，我只是对正常向的图给点建议233 很有用的建議
Hard
01:01:385 (4) - 这个反向，然后01:01:885 (5) - stack在3上之类的。这边这个vocal实在是太重要了，不这么改也行，不过最好弄个大点的跳，至少不要像现在这样这么小。這麼說也堆，我就把4拉開一點吧，變動了一點這兒
前面你在00:58:385 (4,5) - 和00:59:885 (8,1) - 也这么做了，为何这里没弄呢？眼力真好 ! 类似这里，01:05:885 (2,3,4) - 之间的跳也可以相应增大 OK已加大
01:24:052 (4,1) - 噗，这个overlap能去掉么233，你是叫我放開一點間距嗎? 這好像不行，因為這兒是兩次1/4折返，所以才會蓋一點做好讀的slider，不過我又把這滑條再覆蓋了一點然后01:25:552 (1,2) - 1和2的左边平行吧當初想這麼做，然後這裡一看發現有點難打，又把1移到左上角呈三角形放了，01:26:885 (1,3) - 1和3的右边平行，結果我把這裡的(1)跟前面的(1)做對稱了hhh
01:29:218 (4) - 这个滑条从01:29:302 开始，那个vocal是在这里的，你现在这样放节奏不太好抓。你聽的好清楚 ! Fixed
还是可以多注意一下ds的控制。行，改完會再看看
Normal
00:03:431 (2,1,2) - 不互相blanket么orz，低难度都靠这玩意吃饭的说233，还有00:41:219 (3,4,1) - 也柑橘弄一下比较好。稍微自己移動了下，感覺都還好呀hhh
00:12:611 (1) - 放在256,295不就在ds kept的情况下symm了嘛，虽然不知道这里放在正中是否有必要。這麼說也堆，fixed
某些1/3和1/2混在一起的节奏不知道对noob来说是否太难。玩起來還ok，有1/3嗎? 我記得沒有阿
Easy
00:36:886 (2,3) - 像这种就属于nazi了不过我觉得你以后做图还是多注意这种blanket比较好，现在这样是没有perfect的，强迫症看了会死的。还有00:38:220 (1,2) - 这种碰到一点点的，还是分开比较好。移動了一點，我都不知道到底有沒有包好，我覺得上下空隙都均勻呀，hhh
01:18:885 (1) - 这里的尾没有压到任何音，介于我的前车之鉴，你这又是最低难度，我建议你还是改掉这里的节奏：01:18:885 (1) - 改成1/2滑条不要折返，01:19:718 放一个3/4滑条（由于尾压蓝线应该没问题），01:20:218 (2) - 的替换同理。 OK，都換了
低难度看着就非常舒服，这是为啥捏233 可能我的天分只會做低diff吧真他媽sad hhh

赤瞳被你做完了也是有点厉害 Bybf

good luck

HW你的mod有點多我慢慢看慢慢回

CloudSplash16

CloudSplash16 wrote:
Hi, modding as you requested.

[Easy]
00:55:552 (2,3) - Why not blanket these? Okay,fixed
01:16:052 (2,3) - Minor spacing error. Fixed
01:15:552 (3,1) - I think it will fit your combo pattern better if you swap the NC on these notes. Changed
[Normal]
00:34:220 (2,3) - This rhythm is too hard for Normal. The player is likely to hit (3) too late, so I suggest removing (3). Perhaps can consider to it,I keep it first.
[Hard]
I think OD7 is too high for this diff, because you used circles on many unconventional rhythms, so the rhythms are already hard for the player to hit accurately, without needing to set the OD so high. I suggest OD6. Feel have a bit low to me, then I set OD 6.5 here.
00:35:553 (3,4,1) - Make these equidistant since they have the same beat spacing, so the player does not get confused. Changed
00:37:220 (3,4,5) - I feel like it will be better if you make (4,5) stack, separated from (3). I think it fits the feeling of the song better: http://puu.sh/cyTog/f8ca84c877.jpg (Also applies to the rest of this section) Changed
00:53:885 (2,3) - Why no hitsounds on (3) and end of (2)? I think soft-hitwhistle2 will fit well on those beats. Add a whistle for (3) slider end
01:16:052 (1) - Maybe finish will be good here? Already added
01:29:218 (4) - I find it weird that you used slider this way. The music still has a note on 01:29:385 so I think you should map to that because it is clearer to the player: http://puu.sh/cyTNh/58e582dfc0.jpg Will consider to this rhythm,because I think the voice still start here,thanks
[Insane]
00:01:431 - Honestly, this intro section is too overmapped with 1/2s which are not in the music. I think it would be much better to use low rhythm density in this part (see Irie's Insane). It will play much better with the song. Will consider to this rhythm,because I think the playing still looks fine here
00:15:553 (3) - Should be 2/3 slider. Feel fine to me,but will consider to this rhythm placement
00:16:220 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:26:220 (2,1,2) - ^ ^
00:58:218 (3,4,5) - This arrangement will feel smoother to play: http://puu.sh/cyVv6/d9c2bc4826.jpg Good,fixed !
Thx for mod ~ !

Zweib

Zweib wrote:
玛德看了一眼全是hw找来的摸 LOL

[Insane]
00:37:553 (2) - 这里也不应该是snap 1/3 尾端不就1/3了?
01:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有点丑。。拐弯前后用不同ds试试的確，日後會換這兒，先保留
01:21:552 (1) - 换1/8 reverse slider? 好

[Hard]
00:59:135 (6) - add a note? 听着挺明显的 Added
01:04:468 (5) - ^ Added
01:15:135 (7) - ^ Added
01:17:802 (6) - ^ Added

[Easy]
00:32:220 (3) - 太高了会不会碰血条移下來了一點

Thx or mod ~!

Kamio Misuzu

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
说好的摸。sorry for late Nothing

[I]
00:19:553 (7) - 改激霸slider 這兒對稱LOL

00:30:053 (2,3) - 2改slider，3改激霸免了想良心點ww（对不起，我不会激霸///仅供参考
SPOILER

00:33:331 - 加note 這樣加就overmap了

[H]
00:14:887 (1,2) - 距离有点近，改成00:20:886 (4,5) - 这样应该好些改了一點間距

00:31:886 (3,4) - 不slider吗，2连容易被黑說的堆，換了

00:54:219 (3) - 换slider？这里这个音还是比较适合用一个扭曲的slider 好

00:59:135 - add note 根據前面的mod加了

meili，GL Thx for mod ~!

Minakami Yuki

Minakami Yuki wrote:

From your request

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
01:25:552 (1) - I recommend to end the spin here in E/N. 不是在這裡了嗎?

[Easy]
CS 3? 喜歡CS3用在normal
00:01:431 (1,3) - 这两个头上加whistle，还有00:04:631 (1) - 好，都加了
00:06:231 (2) - whistle Fixed
00:12:611 (1) - 感觉是摆在中间，也就是x:256比较好，距离调整下好
00:36:886 (2,3) - blanket better? Fixed
00:53:552 (2) - 这里的whistle明显不合曲啊，用重一点的finish或者clap比较好有點吵不了
00:58:552 (2) - 头上的clap听起来相当奇怪，去掉 還好，這邊是用24clap，如果這去掉的話聽起來怪怪
我想说kiai time的clap听起来都非常奇怪，感觉你选错了音效 有可能選錯了吧，懶的換了
01:10:718 (1,2,3) - 我更倾向于1和2的开头拉一个滑条，2的结尾和3拉一个滑条考慮一下
01:23:052 (3) - 头上finish吧？气势更足一点。OK

[Normal]
CS 3.5? 太小
The hitsounds suggestions are the same mentioned in Easy. Fixed
00:48:219 (1,2) - blanket better? Change a bit
01:03:385 (2,3) - make a slider instead? Fllow the vocal
01:25:052 (2,3,4) - a 1/2 reverse slider instead? Consider to it

[Hard]
AR 7.5 is better since your normal is only ar5. Fixed
The hitsounds suggestions are the same mentioned in Easy. Fixed
00:01:831 (2,3) - blanket better? Fixed
00:03:431 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:07:031 (5) - 我觉得这里NC感觉更好不加，這還可以讀
kiai time 建议一节一NC，比如00:56:052 (5) - Fixed ,00:58:718 (5) - Fixed , 也方便读图，这两个00:58:385 (4,7) - 在时间轴上贴的太近了，NC5之后就好读很多好
01:01:885 (5) - 从4的尾巴移出来吧？移動了點位置
01:04:885 (1,2,1) - 这在hard里面有点难吧，把尾巴都接上好
01:10:718 (6) - NC啊啊啊算了不说了啊啊啊加了 ~~勤奮一點啊!~~
01:29:302 (4) - 我还是觉得不要在长白线结束，一个单点就好了想在這兒用滑條表達滑動感

[Insane]
开始不建议用这种hitnormal，听起来比较不舒服，最好就是用普通的hitnormal 考慮
00:01:431 (1,3,1,3,1,3) - whistle at head 加了，但都只加大白線
00:11:011 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉你很喜欢用这个梗啊（只是吐槽能力有限，想不出用啥梗了
00:52:885 (6) - 索性不要接上前面的5吧？想分開
01:04:052 (1,2,3,4) - 这个有点难读清啊不如不要stack？還好吧，那我考慮一下 (因為沒位置擺了..)
01:09:218 (5) - 延长到后面白线？不太想壓後面的，聽你這樣建議..這個也考慮 ~~這邊跟第一個note串其實是對稱~~
01:18:802 (8,1,2,3,4) - 这个角度比较卡手，建议1/4滑条是上下方向摆，2在1的右下一点 9改直的滑條，然後steam調動了一點
01:29:302 (1) - 这个还是建议就一个单点同前面理由

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Good luck! Thx for mod !

Last edited by smallboat 2014-11-12T10:41:43+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-11-01T11:41:16+00:00

pm

[Easy]

以下是頭Finish

00:20:220 (1) -
00:40:219 (1) -
00:41:219 (3,1) -
00:46:219 (1) -
00:48:219 (1) -
01:04:885 (4) -
01:13:385 - 這個也finish
00:33:553 (1) - 我覺得這不需要用折返slider, 00:34:220 - 這裡有個鼓音我覺得如果扔棄了它的話不太好要轉的話可以參考一下前面的節奏例如00:30:886 (1,2,3) -

[Normal]

00:06:231 (3) - NC 我看你前面都是每條大白線都NC
00:09:411 (3,5) - ^
00:20:220 - Finish
00:24:886 - ^
00:32:109 (3) - 這個東西放得好奇怪我認為直接delete比較好
00:34:664 (3) - 同樣
00:36:220 - 這段Finish跟Easy一樣
00:56:052 (4) - 拉長到00:56:552 - 結束
00:58:718 (4) - 同樣
01:10:718 (1) - Remove nc
01:21:302 (3) - 這個有點難可以參考01:18:885 (1,2) - 的下法

[Hard]

00:35:553 (3,4,1) - 最好用看上去一樣的間距
00:52:719 (4,5) - 這樣分開的連打會很難把它們都stack在6上面吧
01:13:385 (3) - 頭Finish
01:16:052 (1) - ^
01:17:885 (2,3) - ^

[Irie's Insane]

missing video

[Insane]

你這個diff開頭的hitnormal聽上去很違和

這歌的1/3 part總覺得有點奇怪
~~搞得我想做個diff了~~

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-01T12:32:32+00:00

as ur req

昨天一直在打图233

Insane

图看上去清爽多了，有些地方可以再注重以下排版的美观，不要所有跳都ds snap，最好有大有小，然后不管flow稍微刻意摆几个形状也是可以的
00:12:611 (1) - 这个我倾向于你放在00:11:811 (1) - 的滑条头附近，这样跳大点因为这里是重音，如果你不是太过在意这里的symm
00:18:220 (2,3) - 直接ctrl+g。00:17:553 (1,2) - 是1/2gap，00:18:553 (3,4) - 的4也是重音，跳大点比较好，虽然flow会变差但我觉得挺适合（个人感觉估计你不会改233
00:21:442 (6) - 强烈建议移动到56,73。你这边00:20:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - 的跳都很大，突然这边有个2/3gap很容易造成误判，这么改ds大点也好读点，而且你00:15:442 (2,3) - 这边已经有相似的梗，前后呼应一下也好。
00:32:553 (2,3) - 平行吧，改2好了，否则后面00:33:553 (1) - 也要跟着改了。
00:34:886 (1) - 移动到262,314附近。00:35:109 (1,2,3) - 的节奏极为特殊，最好放大之前的ds让玩家更容易读这个梗。
00:35:553 (1,2,3,1) - 这边的跳有点乱，重新排一下。
00:50:219 (1,2,3) - 全部各自反向。这里vocal相对比较激烈，ds可以大点。另外，这三个滑条其实可以有更多摆法，具体怎么摆可以多自己试试。
00:58:385 (4,5) - ctrl+g。总之这边00:58:552 (5,1) - 的音十分
之重，大跳比较好，而且flow没差。
01:15:718 (2) - 十分有必要ctrl+g，01:15:718 (2,1) - 顺flow在这里1pc十分之坑爹，逆flow还好判定一些，即使是dt这边逆flow我觉得也更好打。
接下来再跟你巴拉几句吧：flow的好坏并不代表梗的好坏，只是区分flow种类的代词而已（我更多地将它们称为顺flow和逆flow）例如坏的flow可以有antijump，用来表现一些重音或者特殊梗时就十分适合，又例如好的flow由于太过fluent，对于打图的要求会非常高，因为光标的定位会变得模糊，时间判定同理，有时候好的flow带来的效果可能并没有坏flow的好。举例来说，00:22:886 (1) - 如果让我来放我就会ctrl+g，乍看ds变大但其实难度并没有增加多少，打起来却更为爽快，你可以感受一下。又如00:30:053 (2,3) - 我也会ctrl+g，类似的情况很多，因为你做的是对称流的图，所以flow的东西占的分量可能没那么足，却可以靠ds的控制来弥补这一点（至于你怎么想的还是自己决定吧噗）具体的方式就是在考虑flow的时候，可以这么来问自己：这个地方用大跳好还是小跳好，接着再来根据音乐和你要跟的轨来摆梗，可以让图打起来更合理也更爽。（至于我个人做图我是不太在意flow的，我只是对正常向的图给点建议233

Irie's Insane

01:01:385 (1) - 我觉得这个应该反向，顺手而且爽。你现在这样这边突然小跳特别别扭。
卧槽？美雪的图做的很不错啊，给俩星。

Hard

01:01:385 (4) - 这个反向，然后01:01:885 (5) - stack在3上之类的。这边这个vocal实在是太重要了，不这么改也行，不过最好弄个大点的跳，至少不要像现在这样这么小。前面你在00:58:385 (4,5) - 和00:59:885 (8,1) - 也这么做了，为何这里没弄呢？类似这里，01:05:885 (2,3,4) - 之间的跳也可以相应增大
01:24:052 (4,1) - 噗，这个overlap能去掉么233，然后01:25:552 (1,2) - 1和2的左边平行吧，01:26:885 (1,3) - 1和3的右边平行，
01:29:218 (4) - 这个滑条从01:29:302 开始，那个vocal是在这里的，你现在这样放节奏不太好抓。
还是可以多注意一下ds的控制。

Normal

00:03:431 (2,1,2) - 不互相blanket么orz，低难度都靠这玩意吃饭的说233，还有00:41:219 (3,4,1) - 也柑橘弄一下比较好。
00:12:611 (1) - 放在256,295不就在ds kept的情况下symm了嘛，虽然不知道这里放在正中是否有必要。
某些1/3和1/2混在一起的节奏不知道对noob来说是否太难。

Easy

00:36:886 (2,3) - 像这种就属于nazi了不过我觉得你以后做图还是多注意这种blanket比较好，现在这样是没有perfect的，强迫症看了会死的。还有00:38:220 (1,2) - 这种碰到一点点的，还是分开比较好。
01:18:885 (1) - 这里的尾没有压到任何音，介于我的前车之鉴，你这又是最低难度，我建议你还是改掉这里的节奏：01:18:885 (1) - 改成1/2滑条不要折返，01:19:718 放一个3/4滑条（由于尾压蓝线应该没问题），01:20:218 (2) - 的替换同理。
低难度看着就非常舒服，这是为啥捏233

赤瞳被你做完了也是有点厉害

good luck

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-01T13:06:35+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
Irie's Insane
01:01:385 (1) - 我觉得这个应该反向，顺手而且爽。你现在这样这边突然小跳特别别扭。这么一说倒也对哦但是感觉连着两个反手往上拉的不太好我再思考一下怎么搞这里
卧槽？美雪的图做的很不错啊，给俩星。偶像又说笑了我还记得当年aspirin的惨剧

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Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-11-01T15:47:32+00:00

Hi, modding as you requested.

[Easy]

00:55:552 (2,3) - Why not blanket these?
01:16:052 (2,3) - Minor spacing error.
01:15:552 (3,1) - I think it will fit your combo pattern better if you swap the NC on these notes.

[Normal]

00:34:220 (2,3) - This rhythm is too hard for Normal. The player is likely to hit (3) too late, so I suggest removing (3).

[Hard]

I think OD7 is too high for this diff, because you used circles on many unconventional rhythms, so the rhythms are already hard for the player to hit accurately, without needing to set the OD so high. I suggest OD6.
00:35:553 (3,4,1) - Make these equidistant since they have the same beat spacing, so the player does not get confused.
00:37:220 (3,4,5) - I feel like it will be better if you make (4,5) stack, separated from (3). I think it fits the feeling of the song better: http://puu.sh/cyTog/f8ca84c877.jpg (Also applies to the rest of this section)
00:53:885 (2,3) - Why no hitsounds on (3) and end of (2)? I think soft-hitwhistle2 will fit well on those beats.
01:16:052 (1) - Maybe finish will be good here?
01:29:218 (4) - I find it weird that you used slider this way. The music still has a note on 01:29:385 so I think you should map to that because it is clearer to the player: http://puu.sh/cyTNh/58e582dfc0.jpg

[Irie's Insane]

Missing "Irie Miyuki" in tags.
00:15:387 (1) - Should be 1/6 at 00:15:442 according to the music.
00:17:053 (1,2) - This fits the music better: http://puu.sh/cyUGU/5418cf1e26.jpg
00:17:553 (1) - Extend this to match the music: http://puu.sh/cyUKi/3f2042e2f3.jpg
00:22:386 (7,8,9) - I don't understand why you are using these straight rhythm when the music feels as 1/3. This rhythm fits better with the music: http://puu.sh/cyUPN/c6b0c2c883.jpg
00:22:886 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/cyUSY/99eb14e9c1.jpg
00:25:553 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/cyUVu/6d664e7e06.jpg
Check the rest of the map for these rhythms.

[Insane]

00:01:431 - Honestly, this intro section is too overmapped with 1/2s which are not in the music. I think it would be much better to use low rhythm density in this part (see Irie's Insane). It will play much better with the song.
00:15:553 (3) - Should be 2/3 slider.
00:16:220 (1,2) - ^
00:26:220 (2,1,2) - ^
00:58:218 (3,4,5) - This arrangement will feel smoother to play: http://puu.sh/cyVv6/d9c2bc4826.jpg

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-11-02T07:39:04+00:00

[General]
akame ga Kill! tv size opening takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl aniki king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid Irie Miyuki Hollow Wings

红色部分是需要改的大哥=Aniki≠Anigi
[HW's Insane]
00:26:553 (2) - unsnapped!!
01:29:051 (2) - unsnapped!!
01:18:552 (5) - whistle+clap 这里还是不要把音效停下来好一点
实在不会摸了就这样

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-02T07:53:12+00:00

hw's insane
00:19:720 (4,6) - 建议放在这里
00:32:109 - 再加一个多好233
01:07:552 (3) - 建议这样摆 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196468
01:09:885 (3,4) - ctrl+G呀
01:10:301 (8,9) - ^
01:13:052 (3,4) - 可以这样放 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196470
01:14:385 (3,4) - 往里一点 blanket
01:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 应该左边小右边大嘛 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196474
01:29:051 (2) - 这样好不好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196479
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-11-02T09:45:13+00:00

mod requested from HW OVQ

[HW's Insane]
00:02:964 (2) - 这个是跟什么的? OAO 我听了好多遍没听到这里有音;w; 后面那个也是
00:19:470 (3) - 这个好难读;w; slider head放在352|112貌似好点
00:32:220 (1,2,3) - 这里有在跟什么吗? 0.0 如果一定要这么放的话我推荐间距放小这种间距会误以为是1/2
00:37:886 (5,1) - 好像没stack好
01:13:052 (3,4) - ctrl+G貌似好点
01:15:135 (2) - 256|192? OVQ 原来看起来像1/2
01:26:052 (1) - 放在这里对于连打会打过的人太痛苦了;w; 考虑stack在01:25:885 (5) - ? 后同

间距放的好confusing ;w;

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-02T09:51:49+00:00

[HW]
我已经深吸好多口气
missing video

00:11:811 (2) - +clap?
00:44:219 (1) - 这个finish好像有点太重了？
00:57:552 (1,2,3) - 感觉节奏不太对啊
01:05:385 (4) - 加个clap?
01:16:218 (1) - 我觉得这个note删了比较好听。。

爷爷最后这一段太霸气了不得不服啊

CloudSplash16

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[Irie's Insane]
Missing "Irie Miyuki" in tags. fixed
00:15:387 (1) - Should be 1/6 at 00:15:442 according to the music. fixed
00:17:053 (1,2) - This fits the music better: http://puu.sh/cyUGU/5418cf1e26.jpg i followed the piano sound and yes it sounds like 1/6 but it is 1/4
00:17:553 (1) - Extend this to match the music: http://puu.sh/cyUKi/3f2042e2f3.jpg
00:22:386 (7,8,9) - I don't understand why you are using these straight rhythm when the music feels as 1/3. This rhythm fits better with the music: http://puu.sh/cyUPN/c6b0c2c883.jpg
00:22:886 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/cyUSY/99eb14e9c1.jpg
00:25:553 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/cyUVu/6d664e7e06.jpg
Check the rest of the map for these rhythms. i reconsidered the rhythms, fixed some 1/3

thanks for modding!

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Source:アカメが斬る！
Tags:akame ga Kill! tv size opening takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid Irie Miyuki Hollow Wings
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Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-02T10:11:26+00:00

sammy711 wrote:
[HW's Insane]
00:26:553 (2) - unsnapped!!
01:29:051 (2) - unsnapped!![/color] fixed
01:18:552 (5) - whistle+clap 这里还是不要把音效停下来好一点就加了w，r没加，太吵了
实在不会摸了就这样噗OVQ

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
hw's insane
00:19:720 (4,6) - 建议放在这里玛德，看不懂啊OVQ
00:32:109 - 再加一个多好233 这边各种1/3不想再复杂节奏了
01:07:552 (3) - 建议这样摆 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196468 不要，这里我要搞对称
01:09:885 (3,4) - ctrl+G呀卧槽，这次我想做正常向啦！！OVQ
01:10:301 (8,9) - ^ ^
01:13:052 (3,4) - 可以这样放 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196470 这样虽然也不错但是跳实在太大了，船爷会把我拍死的所以还是不改了OVQ
01:14:385 (3,4) - 往里一点 blanket 不要，这个我就是喜欢这么摆
01:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 应该左边小右边大嘛 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196474 对称就美丽，除非改整个梗，哎还是算了orz

01:29:051 (2) - 这样好不好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196479 噗，这次还是做安图吧，就不玩猎奇了OVQ
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的这吐槽略凶猛orz我去跟船爷说
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的
这clap音效怎么只有左边响的 ar3姥爷真是。。。orz

Crystal wrote:
mod requested from HW OVQ

[HW's Insane]
00:02:964 (2) - 这个是跟什么的? OAO 我听了好多遍没听到这里有音;w; 后面那个也是跟的是八音盒的音，仔细听
00:19:470 (3) - 这个好难读;w; slider head放在352|112貌似好点改了滑条的位置，后面几个note跟着变了下顺序
00:32:220 (1,2,3) - 这里有在跟什么吗? 0.0 如果一定要这么放的话我推荐间距放小这种间距会误以为是1/2 跟的是鼓里的ride音轨，确实可能会误判，所以我在00:31:553 (2) - 放了个1/3折返让玩家有个缓冲，其实读起来没那么难的。
00:37:886 (5,1) - 好像没stack好 fixed
01:13:052 (3,4) - ctrl+G貌似好点 01:11:718 (4,5) - 是同向的所以这边想反向，后面大跳打起来多爽
01:15:135 (2) - 256|192? OVQ 原来看起来像1/2 这边全程都1/2大跳，这么点ds的1/4不是太难读，而且ds已经小到就算读错也很容易接上的程度了
01:26:052 (1) - 放在这里对于连打会打过的人太痛苦了;w; 考虑stack在01:25:885 (5) - ? 后同不会的，这个五连是带着移动的，一般很难转一圈后再打到中间。。。除非切指实在是弱多打，然而多打也不一定能打中因为光标趋向于甩出去

间距放的好confusing ;w; 噗我做对称流就是这幅样子了啦233

Irie Miyuki wrote:
[HW]
我已经深吸好多口气 233
missing video 哎哟我去我没下视频，我让小船加一下吧

00:11:811 (2) - +clap? 不好，太吵了
00:44:219 (1) - 这个finish好像有点太重了？嗯，我改个轻的
00:57:552 (1,2,3) - 感觉节奏不太对啊后面kick的声音太轻了听不太清楚，我就加强了一下而已
01:05:385 (4) - 加个clap? 好，01:05:385 (4,5) - 都加了
01:16:218 (1) - 我觉得这个note删了比较好听。。我喜欢保留

爷爷最后这一段太霸气了不得不服啊 233噗有吗哎好吧OVQ

thx for modding!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2014-11-02T10:18:48+00:00

玛德看了一眼全是hw找来的摸

[壕王]
00:19:386 (2,3) - 这改成一个reverse slider打起来会很舒服
00:37:775 (4) - snap到红线上，这里不是1/3; 圆舞曲节奏听起来是像1/3
00:38:220 (1) - ^
00:46:108 (1) - ^
00:46:775 (3) - ^

[没血]
不摸什么，赞！

[Insane]
00:37:553 (2) - 这里也不应该是snap 1/3
01:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有点丑。。拐弯前后用不同ds试试
01:21:552 (1) - 换1/8 reverse slider?

[Hard]
00:59:135 (6) - add a note? 听着挺明显的
01:04:468 (5) - ^
01:15:135 (7) - ^
01:17:802 (6) - ^

[Easy]
00:32:220 (3) - 太高了会不会碰血条

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2014-11-02T10:38:38+00:00

说好的摸。sorry for late

[HW]
咦，对称流
check aimod

00:02:964 (2) - 00:06:164 (3) - 不好玩。overmap干巴巴的

00:59:385 (4,5,6) - 这里稍微小跳一下？比如

SPOILER

01:02:718 (9) - 和后面slider距离有点太近了，建议朝左上角移动一点

01:13:385 (1) - ctrl+g？

01:15:135 (2,3) - 2压3脑袋上？

[I]
00:19:553 (7) - 改激霸slider

00:30:053 (2,3) - 2改slider，3改激霸（对不起，我不会激霸///仅供参考

SPOILER

00:33:331 - 加note

[Irie]
美雪要进阶神马破惹

00:11:811 (3) - 不NC嘛

00:19:553 (5) - 可以适当加速一点，0.75X之类的

[H]
00:14:887 (1,2) - 距离有点近，改成00:20:886 (4,5) - 这样应该好些

00:31:886 (3,4) - 不slider吗，2连容易被黑

00:54:219 (3) - 换slider？这里这个音还是比较适合用一个扭曲的slider

00:59:135 - add note

meili，GL

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-02T11:05:48+00:00

Zweib wrote:
玛德看了一眼全是hw找来的摸玛德再叫我壕王我就一拳打爆你OVQ

[壕王]
00:19:386 (2,3) - 这改成一个reverse slider打起来会很舒服好吧
00:37:775 (4) - snap到红线上，这里不是1/3; 圆舞曲节奏听起来是像1/3 这里是1/3，类似00:40:719 (2,3,4,5) - 的才是1/2，后同
00:38:220 (1) - ^
00:46:108 (1) - ^
00:46:775 (3) - ^

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
说好的摸。sorry for late

[HW]
咦，对称流咦
check aimod 都改了

00:02:964 (2) - 00:06:164 (3) - 不好玩。overmap干巴巴的这里没有overmap

00:59:385 (4,5,6) - 这里稍微小跳一下？比如改了一下5的位置
SPOILER

01:02:718 (9) - 和后面slider距离有点太近了，建议朝左上角移动一点这边是为了symm所以不改了

01:13:385 (1) - ctrl+g？其实哪种都行，试了下还是现在这样比较好

01:15:135 (2,3) - 2压3脑袋上？不

thx for modding!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-02T15:06:16+00:00

。。发现漏了个图

nokd

hw's insane

00:20:053 (6) - 6号在368:176 也就是和2,3成正三角形的地方 4和6对称过去

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-11-03T16:08:30+00:00

no kd
req by hw

[HW's Insane]
missing video
00:02:964 (2) - 這個放多了?
00:06:164 (3) - ^
00:56:052 (4) - 頭finish

看不懂orz

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-11-04T03:27:41+00:00

this should be: Liar Mask anime size
Source: http://www.mayamarika.com/artist/mayama ... /DFCL-2098

no kds

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-04T09:22:15+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
。。发现漏了个图笨蛋

nokd

hw's insane

00:20:053 (6) - 6号在368:176 也就是和2,3成正三角形的地方 4和6对称过去感觉没现在的好

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
no kd
req by hw

[HW's Insane]
missing video fixed
00:02:964 (2) - 這個放多了? 没有
00:06:164 (3) - ^ ^
00:56:052 (4) - 頭finish 好

看不懂orz 这都看不懂orz

thx for modding!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-11-09T14:08:51+00:00

From your request

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

01:25:552 (1) - I recommend to end the spin here in E/N.

[Easy]

CS 3?
00:01:431 (1,3) - 这两个头上加whistle，还有00:04:631 (1) -
00:06:231 (2) - whistle
00:12:611 (1) - 感觉是摆在中间，也就是x:256比较好，距离调整下
00:36:886 (2,3) - blanket better?
00:53:552 (2) - 这里的whistle明显不合曲啊，用重一点的finish或者clap比较好
00:58:552 (2) - 头上的clap听起来相当奇怪，去掉
我想说kiai time的clap听起来都非常奇怪，感觉你选错了音效
01:10:718 (1,2,3) - 我更倾向于1和2的开头拉一个滑条，2的结尾和3拉一个滑条
01:23:052 (3) - 头上finish吧？气势更足一点。

[Normal]

CS 3.5?
The hitsounds suggestions are the same mentioned in Easy.
00:48:219 (1,2) - blanket better?
01:03:385 (2,3) - make a slider instead?
01:25:052 (2,3,4) - a 1/2 reverse slider instead?

[Hard]

AR 7.5 is better since your normal is only ar5.
The hitsounds suggestions are the same mentioned in Easy.
00:01:831 (2,3) - blanket better?
00:03:431 (2,3) - ^
00:07:031 (5) - 我觉得这里NC感觉更好
kiai time 建议一节一NC，比如00:56:052 (5) - ,00:58:718 (5) - , 也方便读图，这两个00:58:385 (4,7) - 在时间轴上贴的太近了，NC5之后就好读很多
01:01:885 (5) - 从4的尾巴移出来吧？
01:04:885 (1,2,1) - 这在hard里面有点难吧，把尾巴都接上
01:10:718 (6) - NC啊啊啊算了不说了
01:29:302 (4) - 我还是觉得不要在长白线结束，一个单点就好了

[Irie's Insane]

00:11:811 (3) - NC?
01:00:552 (2,1) - stack
01:04:052 (1,2,3) - 这个会不会有点卡手啊？
01:16:718 (3,4,5,6) - 这梗说真的很恶心，最好改一下，或者把4和6移出来

[Insane]

开始不建议用这种hitnormal，听起来比较不舒服，最好就是用普通的hitnormal
00:01:431 (1,3,1,3,1,3) - whistle at head
00:11:011 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉你很喜欢用这个梗啊（只是吐槽
00:52:885 (6) - 索性不要接上前面的5吧？
01:04:052 (1,2,3,4) - 这个有点难读清啊不如不要stack？
01:09:218 (5) - 延长到后面白线？
01:18:802 (8,1,2,3,4) - 这个角度比较卡手，建议1/4滑条是上下方向摆，2在1的右下一点
01:29:302 (1) - 这个还是建议就一个单点

[HW's Insane]

00:20:553 (3,4) - stack?
00:20:886 (4,2) - stack better...
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - 这个间距看上去有点不对劲啊
01:02:718 (9) - 这个为什么不stack在01:01:385 (5) - 的尾巴上？
01:08:718 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:21:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的白线三连感觉太off music，怎么听怎么奇怪

感觉还是改叫ex比较好xD

Good luck!

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-11-14T19:00:10+00:00

i try to mod in chinese

wan an!

[General]

Try to play with the kiai times a bit, just 3/8 of the map being kiai is so bland imo.

[Easy]

00:04:631 (1) - That slider looks quite odd to me, why not making it a bit more even? (like a thunder shape)
00:26:886 (3) - I suggest a straight slider to get some variation. http://puu.sh/cQAUo/4e82f0e27c.jpg
00:37:220 (3) - bad blanket
00:58:552 (2) - I find this rhythm really questionable, as it follows nothing major ; try this please: http://puu.sh/cQC4B/16246b4122.jpg
01:02:218 (4) - I don't like how this is almost overlapping, please try to rotate 4 a bit to the left.
01:07:552 (4) - overlap with 2, little arrangements should do the trick.
01:09:718 (2) - Please stick to a simple rhythm. What you've mapped to is so silent, nobody can really hear it.
01:17:885 (4) - That's probably really misleading, as the beginners will probably lead to the reverse, and not the head. Try rearranging please, and while you're at it, eliminiate the blue ticks, I think that would probably be an unranking reason.
01:24:385 (1) - I strongly suppose this should end 1/2 earlier.

[Normal]

00:11:011 (1,2) - Try to get the lines paralell, nazi
00:14:887 (1) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Don't use 1/3, it's too difficult for normal. Stick to 1/1 please.
00:18:886 (3) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Well, you can leave it here, seeing it as something special.
00:22:886 (1) - ^, but use 1/1
00:29:553 (3) - idk what this is.. lol
00:33:553 (1) - 1/3, but use 1/1
36220,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0 < this green line is unnecessary 00:36:220 -
00:36:220 (1,2,3) - a pattern like that will be more awesome! http://puu.sh/cQCxl/3364fcb590.jpg and also flow better.
00:40:719 (2) - not following anything major, try again
00:42:719 (2) - same
01:00:885 (3) - moving this to somewhere like 124 212 will improve the flow drastically!
01:07:218 (5) - try 232 248 for a better flow too
01:18:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - I'm honestly not sure about it.. Try to get the blue tick on a repeater, it'll be better I strongly suppose.

Please get someone to check the divisor snap (1/3, 1/4), as I've originally told you; I'm a bit unsure, so it would be better to be on the save side. The normal is okay otherwise, but sometimes you could improve how the slider compliment each other (for instance, 2 curves like 00:17:553 (1,3) - look quite odd)

[Hard]

00:11:011 (1) - I'd suggest a straight slider which goes upwards instead of a curve like this, it's the same as in my comment @normal.
00:20:220 (1,2,3) - That spacing is quite big.. hmm.. mind lowering it a bit?
00:22:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm.. I think you could make this more appealing.. i mean.. following the vocals better, it seems a bit plain for me at the moment.
00:24:886 (7) - get rid off the overlap
00:31:886 (3,4,5) - Flow can be improved here, try to move 4 below 3, so you get a less circulare but more zig zag flow, which, imo, flows better
00:33:553 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't think that can be enjoyable to play for a hard diff, it seems rather random to me.. i'd stick to the vocals again

00:37:220 (3) - same problem as in normal, maybe it's just me, but i think a straight slider works better here (or an opposite curve)
00:37:720 (4,5) - put the same spacing? I think a stack doesn't make much sense here.
00:38:720 (2,3) - ^
00:40:219 - Mhh, about this rhythm, I can see improvement. Try this: http://puu.sh/cQDoN/e1566fb198.jpg It flows better with the vocals! Also, your spacing atm is a bit messed up and proportionally too big.
01:23:052 (1) - overlap
01:16:552 (2,3,4) - Again, this combination looks weird to me.please don't use a curve downwards here!
01:24:052 (4) - I guess people will miss that one, because it's pretty not guessable that it's 3 repeats instead of two. What do you think?

The kiai was pretty cool, the rest could use some polishment, the rhythm seems a bit messed up at some points.

[Irie's Insane]

People keep thinking Irie = Irre ..

00:10:211 (4,5) - That extended slider does not fit at all. Please remove it.
00:38:220 (3,4,5) - omg i love that
00:47:219 (4) - You should indicate that with NC imo
00:38:220 (3) - same
00:49:219 (3) - same
00:51:553 (5) - same
00:54:219 (1) - I think a normal-whistle hitsound would fit way better than ~nothing~ . Please try!

Sometimes quite overmapped, but well, 2014. I'm a bit sceptic about 01:09:718 (4) - this technique, as it plays pretty unintuitive and misleading.

[Insane]

Begin - Kiai: The rhythm is made quite bad. I'll talk to you IRC about it, so I can explain a bit better (it is .. uhm.. correct, but it can be done way better.. 1/3 is a thing for itself, i assume)
Kiai:
01:16:552 (2,3,4,5) - Try to use a bit more spacing here? It will look less clustered.
I really like the kiai, so, good job on that!

[HW's Insane]

00:02:964 (2,3) - ..delete 2.. that doesn't fit at all, can't even hear it on 25%
00:06:164 (3,4) - I can sadly hear this on 25%, so I guess you can leave that one.. although I think it's quite odd.
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - Use equal spacing here? Can't see why you lowered the spacing from 6 > 1.
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - party time
01:02:718 (9,1) - really strong voice here, why did you use so less spacing for 9 > 1?

good map o.o looks hard, but good

So, after we've improved the rhythm on insane, I'll think what to do next ~

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-14T21:10:20+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Irie's Insane]

People keep thinking Irie = Irre .. ....;w;

00:10:211 (4,5) - That extended slider does not fit at all. Please remove it. fixed
00:38:220 (3,4,5) - omg i love that :D
00:47:219 (4) - You should indicate that with NC imo fixed
00:38:220 (3) - same ^
00:49:219 (3) - same ^
00:51:553 (5) - same ^
00:54:219 (1) - I think a normal-whistle hitsound would fit way better than ~nothing~ . Please try! ^

Sometimes quite overmapped, but well, 2014. I'm a bit sceptic about 01:09:718 (4) - this technique, as it plays pretty unintuitive and misleading.
it seems fine to me, i asked some friends around my level for testplays and they all got 300s at this part, of course it could be changed if i really need to, but i still want to keep it for now

再不更新我diff我就要打人啦

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Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-15T05:59:40+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
[HW's Insane]
00:20:553 (3,4) - stack? fixed，这你都能看得出来？？orz
00:20:886 (4,2) - stack better... fixed
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - 这个间距看上去有点不对劲啊还好吧
01:02:718 (9) - 这个为什么不stack在01:01:385 (5) - 的尾巴上？想和01:00:885 (2,3,4) - 对称
01:08:718 (2) - ctrl+g? 其实感觉都行，不过既然vocal声音类似我就搞成同向了
01:21:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的白线三连感觉太off music，怎么听怎么奇怪鼓这么来我就这么放了，顺便为何都觉得连打应从红线起，从白线起我觉得亦毫无违和感

感觉还是改叫ex比较好xD 这显然只有insane等级噗

Irreversible wrote:
[HW's Insane]

00:02:964 (2,3) - ..delete 2.. that doesn't fit at all, can't even hear it on 25% there's music box's beats here, maybe i can just keep it coz that's the track i'm following...
00:06:164 (3,4) - I can sadly hear this on 25%, so I guess you can leave that one.. although I think it's quite odd. uhh, it plays really fine i promise.
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - Use equal spacing here? Can't see why you lowered the spacing from 6 > 1. alright, i'll just reverse 00:28:220 (1) - and ds can be good to u now imo.
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - party time kiai kiai
01:02:718 (9,1) - really strong voice here, why did you use so less spacing for 9 > 1? rearranged 01:02:385 (7,8,9) - 's order into 8,9,7, and now it'll be better indeed in ds.

good map o.o looks hard, but good w

thx for modding!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-11-15T07:24:12+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
i try to mod in chinese

wan an! 晚安

[General]

Try to play with the kiai times a bit, just 3/8 of the map being kiai is so bland imo. Perhaps will change a bit kiai time,I keep it first

[Easy]

00:04:631 (1) - That slider looks quite odd to me, why not making it a bit more even? (like a thunder shape) Okay,slider end move a bit to become the thunder.
00:26:886 (3) - I suggest a straight slider to get some variation. http://puu.sh/cQAUo/4e82f0e27c.jpg Okay,fixed.
00:37:220 (3) - bad blanket End move a bit.
00:58:552 (2) - I find this rhythm really questionable, as it follows nothing major ; try this please: http://puu.sh/cQC4B/16246b4122.jpg Sure,fixed.
01:02:218 (4) - I don't like how this is almost overlapping, please try to rotate 4 a bit to the left. Move a bit.
01:07:552 (4) - overlap with 2, little arrangements should do the trick. Move a bit.
01:09:718 (2) - Please stick to a simple rhythm. What you've mapped to is so silent, nobody can really hear it. Okay,change a easy rhythm here.
01:17:885 (4) - That's probably really misleading, as the beginners will probably lead to the reverse, and not the head. Try rearranging please, and while you're at it, eliminiate the blue ticks, I think that would probably be an unranking reason. Reduce a slider reverse here.
01:24:385 (1) - I strongly suppose this should end 1/2 earlier. The end voice release at 01:25:385 (Red line here),if deduce 1/2 will not play so flow I think

[Normal]

00:11:011 (1,2) - Try to get the lines paralell, nazi
00:14:887 (1) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Don't use 1/3, it's too difficult for normal. Stick to 1/1 please. Sure, (I select not use 1/3),so I remove the (2) note ,and change a 1/1 slider here.
00:18:886 (3) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Well, you can leave it here, seeing it as something special. Same reason,change a 1/1 slider here.
00:22:886 (1) - ^, but use 1/1 Fixed
00:29:553 (3) - idk what this is.. lol Fixed. lol
00:33:553 (1) - 1/3, but use 1/1 Fixed.
36220,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0 < this green line is unnecessary 00:36:220 - Deleted
00:36:220 (1,2,3) - a pattern like that will be more awesome! http://puu.sh/cQCxl/3364fcb590.jpg and also flow better. Fixed.
00:40:719 (2) - not following anything major, try again Change a note here.
00:42:719 (2) - same Same as above.
01:00:885 (3) - moving this to somewhere like 124 212 will improve the flow drastically! Fixed.
01:07:218 (5) - try 232 248 for a better flow too Change a bit here.
01:18:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - I'm honestly not sure about it.. Try to get the blue tick on a repeater, it'll be better I strongly suppose. This rhythm I think the playing it is fine,so I don't fix it.

Please get someone to check the divisor snap (1/3, 1/4), as I've originally told you; I'm a bit unsure, so it would be better to be on the save side. The normal is okay otherwise, but sometimes you could improve how the slider compliment each other (for instance, 2 curves like 00:17:553 (1,3) - look quite odd) Sure,will ask someone (445 or lfj) to check this divisor snap,and improve some slider shape here.

[Hard]

00:11:011 (1) - I'd suggest a straight slider which goes upwards instead of a curve like this, it's the same as in my comment @normal. Fixed
00:20:220 (1,2,3) - That spacing is quite big.. hmm.. mind lowering it a bit? Feel fine,keep 1.0x consistent DS here.
00:22:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm.. I think you could make this more appealing.. i mean.. following the vocals better, it seems a bit plain for me at the moment. Okay,(2) and (5) move to 1/3 rhythm here
00:24:886 (7) - get rid off the overlap Move a bit.
00:31:886 (3,4,5) - Flow can be improved here, try to move 4 below 3, so you get a less circulare but more zig zag flow, which, imo, flows better Move a bit here.
00:33:553 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't think that can be enjoyable to play for a hard diff, it seems rather random to me.. i'd stick to the vocals again I try to testplay few times to play it ,feel fine to me,so not change it.
00:37:220 (3) - same problem as in normal, maybe it's just me, but i think a straight slider works better here (or an opposite curve) Keep the same shape part with 00:36:220 (1,3,1) - here. (Express the vocal soft shape )
00:37:720 (4,5) - put the same spacing? I think a stack doesn't make much sense here. Fixed.
00:38:720 (2,3) - ^ Fixed.
00:40:219 - Mhh, about this rhythm, I can see improvement. Try this: http://puu.sh/cQDoN/e1566fb198.jpg It flows better with the vocals! Also, your spacing atm is a bit messed up and proportionally too big. Follow the downbeat,this part not follow vocal here,but reduce a DS there.
01:23:052 (1) - overlap Where? owo
01:16:552 (2,3,4) - Again, this combination looks weird to me.please don't use a curve downwards here! Sure,keep the straight slider here.
01:24:052 (4) - I guess people will miss that one, because it's pretty not guessable that it's 3 repeats instead of two. What do you think? Then I fix the 01:23:718 (3) - this slider become 2 reverse? Just become the 4 repeats , will be guessable to playable I think

The kiai was pretty cool, the rest could use some polishment, the rhythm seems a bit messed up at some points. Rhythm change a bit,but kiai time set will consider to it.

[Insane]

Begin - Kiai: The rhythm is made quite bad. Ehh? But I still feel fine to me lol I'll talk to you IRC about it, so I can explain a bit better (it is .. uhm.. correct, but it can be done way better.. 1/3 is a thing for itself, i assume) Sure.
Kiai:
01:16:552 (2,3,4,5) - Try to use a bit more spacing here? It will look less clustered. Move (3) a bit DS here 0.0
I really like the kiai, so, good job on that! Thanks ww

good map o.o looks hard, but good Thanks again ~!

So, after we've improved the rhythm on insane, I'll think what to do next ~ Sure.

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,416 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2014-11-18T19:31:47+00:00

requested by Irreversible; no kudosu because this is a mere snap check and not a mod post

[Insane]

00:15:553 (3) - should be 2/3
00:16:220 (1,2) - ^
00:26:886 (1,2) - ^

[Irie's Insane]

00:26:553 (3) - 2/3

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-18T20:03:12+00:00

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232,296,55885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,275,56885,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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232,216,58385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,58552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,308,58718,6,0,P|124:328|52:264,1,187.000005706787,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
36,200,59135,1,0,3:0:0:0:
36,200,59218,2,0,L|28:96,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,140,59552,1,0,3:0:0:0:
216,308,59718,1,0,3:0:0:0:
16,320,59885,6,0,P|64:260|168:260,1,178.499994552612,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,160,60552,2,0,P|408:104|384:52,1,93.5000028533936,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,60,60802,2,0,L|336:68,1,46.7500014266968,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,144,61052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,96,61218,1,8,0:0:0:0:
399,160,61385,6,0,P|376:248|432:320,1,187.000005706787,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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174,300,62218,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,220,62385,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,368,62552,2,0,B|80:328|80:328|88:224,1,140.25000428009,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,188,67718,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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248,356,68218,6,0,B|176:348|176:348|132:360|132:360|48:352,1,187.000005706787,4|8,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,81,68718,2,0,P|152:161|124:248,1,187.000005706787,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,344,70552,1,0,3:0:0:0:
288,344,70718,6,0,B|339:325|419:353|419:353|379:316,1,187.000005706787,4|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,252,76718,2,0,L|100:176,1,46.7500014266968,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,205,76885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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193,265,77219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,272,77385,6,0,B|364:264|364:264|408:280|408:280|488:272,1,187.000005706787,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,132,78385,2,0,L|260:128,1,46.7500014266968,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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80,220,89302,1,4,0:2:0:0:

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