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meow
column 1234
[3i's Normal]
00:19:727 (19727|1,19922|0,20117|1,20117|2,20312|3,20507|2) -
i like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2057720(hi!=2chords)
to 00:30:247
00:36:481 (36481|3) - add?
00:49:922 - add 2?
01:43:494 (103494|2) - move to 2
03:16:611 - add 1
03:32:585 to 03:54:403 -^^^^^
03:58:591 (238591|2) - move to 03:58:688
this is unclear vocal part,so my and your rhythm is right.So i think my rhythm is better
[Hard]
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1,49468|0,49533|1,49598|2,49662|3) - 1/4
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - if this following vocal,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061015
02:39:890 (159890|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061032
03:35:117 (215117|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061036 ?
03:53:818 (233818|0,233916|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
[Insane]
00:09:403 (9403|3,9500|2,9598|3) - 1/6
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:21:870 (21870|3,21968|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1) - 1/4
00:55:182 (55182|2,55182|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061111 ?(opinion)
01:58:688 (118688|3,118786|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061117 ?(soi+ya!)
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - same Hard thing
02:39:890 (159890|2,159922|1,160052|1,160117|2) - ^
03:35:117 (215117|2,215214|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
がんばってめおう
column 1234
[3i's Normal]
00:19:727 (19727|1,19922|0,20117|1,20117|2,20312|3,20507|2) -
i like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2057720(hi!=2chords)
to 00:30:247
00:36:481 (36481|3) - add?
00:49:922 - add 2?
01:43:494 (103494|2) - move to 2
03:16:611 - add 1
03:32:585 to 03:54:403 -^^^^^
03:58:591 (238591|2) - move to 03:58:688
this is unclear vocal part,so my and your rhythm is right.So i think my rhythm is better
[Hard]
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1,49468|0,49533|1,49598|2,49662|3) - 1/4
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - if this following vocal,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061015
02:39:890 (159890|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061032
03:35:117 (215117|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061036 ?
03:53:818 (233818|0,233916|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
[Insane]
00:09:403 (9403|3,9500|2,9598|3) - 1/6
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:21:870 (21870|3,21968|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1) - 1/4
00:55:182 (55182|2,55182|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061111 ?(opinion)
01:58:688 (118688|3,118786|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061117 ?(soi+ya!)
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - same Hard thing
02:39:890 (159890|2,159922|1,160052|1,160117|2) - ^
03:35:117 (215117|2,215214|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
がんばってめおう
Topic Starter
fixed most thankshutunohito wrote:
meow
column 1234
[Hard]
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1,49468|0,49533|1,49598|2,49662|3) - 1/4
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - if this following vocal,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061015
02:39:890 (159890|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061032
03:35:117 (215117|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061036 ?
03:53:818 (233818|0,233916|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
[Insane]
00:09:403 (9403|3,9500|2,9598|3) - 1/6
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:21:870 (21870|3,21968|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1) - 1/4
00:55:182 (55182|2,55182|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061111 ?(opinion)
01:58:688 (118688|3,118786|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061117 ?(soi+ya!)
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - same Hard thing
02:39:890 (159890|2,159922|1,160052|1,160117|2) - ^
03:35:117 (215117|2,215214|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
がんばってめおう
justhow0615 wrote:
hello, DB詩人以及3i詩人
我來水個mod了
因為你們實在是太詩了，也挑不出什麼小瑕疵，所以這些建議如果不符合原來做譜的原則就無視吧
column 1|2|3|4
00:28:688 - add a note
00:29:468 - ^ 這邊不加 加了要連後面一起...
01:34:922 (94922|1,95117|2,95312|1,95507|2,95701|0,96091|0,96481|2,96870|2) - Ctrl+H
因為01:34:533 (94533|0) - 是左起，感覺這樣比較順一點，不過如果排列考慮到音高的話就無視這個吧:3 移了01:34:533 -
私心希望這裡01:52:844 (112844|1,112844|3,113234|0,113234|3,113624|2,113624|3,114013|1,114013|3) -
"きっと終幕は大団円"
是01:46:611 (106611|2,106611|0,107000|0,107000|1,107390|3,107390|0,107779|2,107779|0) -
"禅定門を潜り抜けて" 的 Ctrl+H
因為旋律一樣，而相反的排列可以讓左右手有平衡的感覺
不過如果一樣有考慮到音高或是私心喜愛原本的排列就無視吧w OK
02:26:156 (146156|2,146351|1,146351|3) - Ctrl+H
因為02:24:598 (144598|1,144792|3,144792|2) - 和 02:25:377 (145377|2,145572|1,145572|0) - 是相反排列
所以希望有相應的關係 OK
03:32:195 - add a note OK
Normal點贊
pocket-Gao wrote:
送上渣mod
00:02:974 - Finsh 和 Clap 分开放吧 (我无聊凑字数哈哈→ →)
00:13:104 - add a note (个人感觉这里两个note好点,相应前后note调整下位置,使音整齐一点点)OK
00:18:169 - add a note (00:18:364 处的音抓了,那这里的也抓吧) No
03:54:403 - add a note No
Thanks, guyshutunohito wrote:
meow
column 1234
[3i's Normal]
00:19:727 (19727|1,19922|0,20117|1,20117|2,20312|3,20507|2) -
i like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2057720(hi!=2chords)
to 00:30:247
00:36:481 (36481|3) - add?
00:49:922 - add 2?
01:43:494 (103494|2) - move to 2
03:16:611 - add 1
03:32:585 to 03:54:403 -^^^^^
03:58:591 (238591|2) - move to 03:58:688 ok
this is unclear vocal part,so my and your rhythm is right.So i think my rhythm is better
がんばってめおう
http://puu.sh/bJr3Q/a1947c0b7f.rar
All are suggestions only
asd
00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|3) - delete and add at 00:19:338 (19338|0) - this is the easiest diff and stressing on heavy beat instead of other minor things is recommended. 强调重音 其他地方可以简化的就没必要写出来了
00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|1,19143|3,19338|2,19338|0) - this is completely the reverse version of ^... still I would recommend you to delete 00:19:143 (19143|3) -
00:23:234 (23234|2) - ...?这些...写法跟前面不统一而且我没有听出来有什么需要double强调的音 我觉得这样还不如腾出点空间写一写1/4多点变化 我觉得这几个double有些莫名 尤其到后面重beat轻beat都分不开了完全是按节拍double
00:33:364 (33364|2,33364|0) - 00:34:922 (34922|1,34922|3) - why are they double? shouldn't double only occur in the case that crash is presented? How you map 00:36:481 (36481|3) - is clearly conflict with those doubles and I do believe that one note is fairly enough
00:39:598 (39598|2,39598|0) - ^一样的 我不是很理解问什么到双柏县的就double起来了
00:41:935 (41935|0,42325|2) - change to normal notes
00:50:896 (50896|1,50896|2,51286|3,51286|2,51675|0,51675|1) - same awkward doubles ^ refer to 00:45:831 (45831|1,46221|1,46611|1) -
00:52:844 (52844|3,52844|1,53234|2,53234|0) - ^
00:53:624 (53624|2,53624|3,53818|0,53818|1) - 这里还可以理解 上面感觉莫名
why chart becomes extremely plain when the song enter its climax...
01:32:195 (92195|2,92195|0,92390|3,92390|1,92585|2) - ^ still same issue heavy beat is dismissed while you spend notes on 01:32:195 (92195|0,92390|1) - which is not understandable
The repeated section shares the same issue that I pointed out above please check on your own
03:13:494 (193494|0) - 03:13:688 (193688|0) - add this obviously deserve notes
03:14:273 (194273|3,194662|1,195052|1,195442|2,195831|2,196221|0) - 这些跟的是什么...如果是鼓的话为什么在人声停的时候也停了
我觉得写的时候可能有点欠缺考虑 感觉有很多地方写的有些随便而且不统一 不好意思我没有时间从头到尾都看
00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|1,19143|3,19338|2,19338|0) - this is completely the reverse version of ^... still I would recommend you to delete 00:19:143 (19143|3) -
00:23:234 (23234|2) - ...?这些...写法跟前面不统一而且我没有听出来有什么需要double强调的音 我觉得这样还不如腾出点空间写一写1/4多点变化 我觉得这几个double有些莫名 尤其到后面重beat轻beat都分不开了完全是按节拍double
00:33:364 (33364|2,33364|0) - 00:34:922 (34922|1,34922|3) - why are they double? shouldn't double only occur in the case that crash is presented? How you map 00:36:481 (36481|3) - is clearly conflict with those doubles and I do believe that one note is fairly enough
00:39:598 (39598|2,39598|0) - ^一样的 我不是很理解问什么到双柏县的就double起来了
00:41:935 (41935|0,42325|2) - change to normal notes
00:50:896 (50896|1,50896|2,51286|3,51286|2,51675|0,51675|1) - same awkward doubles ^ refer to 00:45:831 (45831|1,46221|1,46611|1) -
00:52:844 (52844|3,52844|1,53234|2,53234|0) - ^
00:53:624 (53624|2,53624|3,53818|0,53818|1) - 这里还可以理解 上面感觉莫名
why chart becomes extremely plain when the song enter its climax...
01:32:195 (92195|2,92195|0,92390|3,92390|1,92585|2) - ^ still same issue heavy beat is dismissed while you spend notes on 01:32:195 (92195|0,92390|1) - which is not understandable
The repeated section shares the same issue that I pointed out above please check on your own
03:13:494 (193494|0) - 03:13:688 (193688|0) - add this obviously deserve notes
03:14:273 (194273|3,194662|1,195052|1,195442|2,195831|2,196221|0) - 这些跟的是什么...如果是鼓的话为什么在人声停的时候也停了
我觉得写的时候可能有点欠缺考虑 感觉有很多地方写的有些随便而且不统一 不好意思我没有时间从头到尾都看
Hard
00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap
00:18:169 (18169|0,18364|1) - move right by one column
00:18:753 (18753|0) - delete
00:21:675 (21675|1) - should be double according to your earlier pattern
00:31:026 (31026|3,31221|2) - I prefer to combine them into one LN at column 3
00:56:351 (56351|0,56448|1,56546|2,56643|3) - ???
01:16:026 - 01:16:124 - missing piano
01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 可能只是我个人不是很喜欢突然插鼓进来
01:32:779 (92779|1) - delete unnecessary imo
01:33:169 (93169|3,93169|0,93364|1,93364|2,93559|0,93559|3) - ...? 这个条后点...我觉得没有repeat的东西或者感觉啊 这个感觉莫名
01:38:331 (98331|2) - no sound
01:52:844 (112844|3,112844|1) - triple?
02:05:507 (125507|3,125701|2,125896|1) - ? piano clearly don't flow like this and if these are vocal notes then they should be unsnapped(02:05:604 - ). I don't quite get your idea here
02:26:935 (146935|0) - -> 02:26:156 - 02:24:598 - ect.. I thought they are the same drum
02:40:036 (160036|3) - missing a piano
02:42:520 (162520|1) - should start at 02:42:325 -
02:46:805 (166805|2) - add a note
02:49:143 (169143|0,169240|1,169338|2,169922|0,170020|1,170117|2) - 这种..其实是1/6不过算了吧...我觉得就这样了
02:52:942 (172942|1,173137|2) - unsnap 错位了啊整个应该往上1/4条子是红线开始的
03:11:935 (191935|2) - ?delete
03:12:520 (192520|1) - add
03:12:909 (192909|1) - add piano
03:43:494 (223494|0) - add note for crash..
03:44:273 (224273|3,224273|1,224468|0,224468|2) - I thought 1/1 LN is far more logic...
看来做到最后是醉了 这pattern已经跟insane没啥分别了
00:18:169 (18169|0,18364|1) - move right by one column
00:18:753 (18753|0) - delete
00:21:675 (21675|1) - should be double according to your earlier pattern
00:31:026 (31026|3,31221|2) - I prefer to combine them into one LN at column 3
00:56:351 (56351|0,56448|1,56546|2,56643|3) - ???
01:16:026 - 01:16:124 - missing piano
01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 可能只是我个人不是很喜欢突然插鼓进来
01:32:779 (92779|1) - delete unnecessary imo
01:33:169 (93169|3,93169|0,93364|1,93364|2,93559|0,93559|3) - ...? 这个条后点...我觉得没有repeat的东西或者感觉啊 这个感觉莫名
01:38:331 (98331|2) - no sound
01:52:844 (112844|3,112844|1) - triple?
02:05:507 (125507|3,125701|2,125896|1) - ? piano clearly don't flow like this and if these are vocal notes then they should be unsnapped(02:05:604 - ). I don't quite get your idea here
02:26:935 (146935|0) - -> 02:26:156 - 02:24:598 - ect.. I thought they are the same drum
02:40:036 (160036|3) - missing a piano
02:42:520 (162520|1) - should start at 02:42:325 -
02:46:805 (166805|2) - add a note
02:49:143 (169143|0,169240|1,169338|2,169922|0,170020|1,170117|2) - 这种..其实是1/6不过算了吧...我觉得就这样了
02:52:942 (172942|1,173137|2) - unsnap 错位了啊整个应该往上1/4条子是红线开始的
03:11:935 (191935|2) - ?delete
03:12:520 (192520|1) - add
03:12:909 (192909|1) - add piano
03:43:494 (223494|0) - add note for crash..
03:44:273 (224273|3,224273|1,224468|0,224468|2) - I thought 1/1 LN is far more logic...
看来做到最后是醉了 这pattern已经跟insane没啥分别了
Insane
sorry for the delay. good luck00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap
02:39:208 (159208|1,159305|1) - wrong snap
02:39:987 (159987|3,160085|1) - same as hard
这个diff摸不动..
02:39:208 (159208|1,159305|1) - wrong snap
02:39:987 (159987|3,160085|1) - same as hard
这个diff摸不动..
Topic Starter
其他都fix了richardfeder wrote:
All are suggestions onlyHard00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap
00:18:169 (18169|0,18364|1) - move right by one column
00:18:753 (18753|0) - delete
00:21:675 (21675|1) - should be double according to your earlier pattern
00:31:026 (31026|3,31221|2) - I prefer to combine them into one LN at column 3
00:56:351 (56351|0,56448|1,56546|2,56643|3) - ???
01:16:026 - 01:16:124 - missing piano
01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 可能只是我个人不是很喜欢突然插鼓进来
01:32:779 (92779|1) - delete unnecessary imo
01:33:169 (93169|3,93169|0,93364|1,93364|2,93559|0,93559|3) - ...? 这个条后点...我觉得没有repeat的东西或者感觉啊 这个感觉莫名这里我有点半意识流 其实这边是有一个鼓的。大体上没有抓音的问题
01:38:331 (98331|2) - no sound
01:52:844 (112844|3,112844|1) - triple?
02:05:507 (125507|3,125701|2,125896|1) - ? piano clearly don't flow like this and if these are vocal notes then they should be unsnapped(02:05:604 - ). I don't quite get your idea here
02:26:935 (146935|0) - -> 02:26:156 - 02:24:598 - ect.. I thought they are the same drumyes
02:40:036 (160036|3) - missing a piano
02:42:520 (162520|1) - should start at 02:42:325 -
02:46:805 (166805|2) - add a note
02:49:143 (169143|0,169240|1,169338|2,169922|0,170020|1,170117|2) - 这种..其实是1/6不过算了吧...我觉得就这样了
02:52:942 (172942|1,173137|2) - unsnap 错位了啊整个应该往上1/4条子是红线开始的
03:11:935 (191935|2) - ?delete
03:12:520 (192520|1) - add
03:12:909 (192909|1) - add piano
03:43:494 (223494|0) - add note for crash..
03:44:273 (224273|3,224273|1,224468|0,224468|2) - I thought 1/1 LN is far more logic...
看来做到最后是醉了 这pattern已经跟insane没啥分别了最后一部分好像都差不多。。一样也么啥问题吧 xD 最后的一部分是高潮部分 我所以加上了难度了 看上去还是和IN有区别的。Insanesorry for the delay. good luck00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap
02:39:208 (159208|1,159305|1) - wrong snap
02:39:987 (159987|3,160085|1) - same as hard
这个diff摸不动..
圖太蠢真是對不起了richardfeder wrote:
All are suggestions onlyasd00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|3) - delete and add at 00:19:338 (19338|0) - this is the easiest diff and stressing on heavy beat instead of other minor things is recommended. 强调重音 其他地方可以简化的就没必要写出来了
00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|1,19143|3,19338|2,19338|0) - this is completely the reverse version of ^... still I would recommend you to delete 00:19:143 (19143|3) -
00:23:234 (23234|2) - ...?这些...写法跟前面不统一而且我没有听出来有什么需要double强调的音 我觉得这样还不如腾出点空间写一写1/4多点变化 我觉得这几个double有些莫名 尤其到后面重beat轻beat都分不开了完全是按节拍double
00:33:364 (33364|2,33364|0) - 00:34:922 (34922|1,34922|3) - why are they double? shouldn't double only occur in the case that crash is presented? How you map 00:36:481 (36481|3) - is clearly conflict with those doubles and I do believe that one note is fairly enough
00:39:598 (39598|2,39598|0) - ^一样的 我不是很理解问什么到双柏县的就double起来了
00:41:935 (41935|0,42325|2) - change to normal notes
00:50:896 (50896|1,50896|2,51286|3,51286|2,51675|0,51675|1) - same awkward doubles ^ refer to 00:45:831 (45831|1,46221|1,46611|1) -
00:52:844 (52844|3,52844|1,53234|2,53234|0) - ^
00:53:624 (53624|2,53624|3,53818|0,53818|1) - 这里还可以理解 上面感觉莫名
why chart becomes extremely plain when the song enter its climax...
01:32:195 (92195|2,92195|0,92390|3,92390|1,92585|2) - ^ still same issue heavy beat is dismissed while you spend notes on 01:32:195 (92195|0,92390|1) - which is not understandable
The repeated section shares the same issue that I pointed out above please check on your own
03:13:494 (193494|0) - 03:13:688 (193688|0) - add this obviously deserve notes
03:14:273 (194273|3,194662|1,195052|1,195442|2,195831|2,196221|0) - 这些跟的是什么...如果是鼓的话为什么在人声停的时候也停了
我觉得写的时候可能有点欠缺考虑 感觉有很多地方写的有些随便而且不统一 不好意思我没有时间从头到尾都看
http://puu.sh/bLJ2M/49e2a2187c.rar
Kawawa
Hi ~
moding..
i think XD
3i's normal
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moding..
i think XD
3i's normal
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Fix some, Thanks.KawaEE wrote:
Hi ~
moding..
i think XD
3i's normal
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http://puu.sh/bXB67/63b6acd30d.rar
Topic Starter
KawaEE wrote:
Hi ~
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Hi 惊喜大礼包
[3i'Normal]
这个Diffculty没有Video
00:06:481 (6481|2) - 这里我私心认为和前面的Note是一样的音 所以也需要Double
00:32:779 - 关于这里 我测试了挺多次了 感觉还是加上这个钢琴音更好 否则打起来不是很舒服 如果采纳了之后相同的都加上
吧
00:49:435 (49435|1) - 这里干脆跟Vocal如何 删去这一个 或者还能在 00:49:922 - 加个Note跟loli音2333
01:05:896 - 后面的长条+Note很明显的跟了Vocal吧 所以这里也不要错过啦
01:18:364 - 同样的建议
01:34:825 - 这里开始有同样的问题前面提到过了
01:51:773 (111773|1) - 这个也是和前面一样的
02:08:234 - 和之前同样的建议
02:20:701 - 也是和前面同样的建议
02:28:688 - ~ 02:30:247 - 虽然抓的是没有问题 我个人感觉很奇怪 建议跟loli vocal
02:30:247 - 这边开始的重音好像稍微难了点 我建议进行略微简化 例如1/2撸过去 但是重音地方用loli音的hai 而且感觉比较好懂
02:47:974 - 我认为这里应该在加一个Hold到 02:48:169 - 然后长条再开始
02:53:624 (173624|1) - 这个是不是在02:55:182 - 更好 并且删去 02:54:792 (174792|2) -
03:29:273 - 和之前同样的建议
03:58:299 (238299|2) - 变成Hold在 03:58:688 - 结束
[Hard]
00:47:195 (47195|1,47292|2) - 这个我没有听到音
01:09:013 - 主要是我感觉食指打完之后的1/4立刻要松掉中指在Hard不太好 所以我的建议: http://puu.sh/ciF2i/a809aac70d.jpg
01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - 这两根是不是出问题了 应该在红线结束才是 打起来很不舒服
03:07:065 - 这边还有微弱的音 建议加上去
03:17:390 (197390|2,198169|2) - 这两个地方也加Hold连在一起会更好
03:58:640 (238640|0,238640|3) - 最后这两个 硬要说的话摆到1/8的黄线才是最合适的
[Insane]
01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - 和Hard一样
01:51:481 - 加个Note在3 这里有鼓声的
01:58:299 (118299|0) - 我这边有个鬼畜建议 先把这个移到4
01:57:909 - 在这里加个Note
01:58:104 - 然后再这里加个Hold到 01:58:494 - 结束 应该懂我意思吧>.>
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - 和Hard一样
好的基本上就这些
[3i'Normal]
这个Diffculty没有Video
00:06:481 (6481|2) - 这里我私心认为和前面的Note是一样的音 所以也需要Double
00:32:779 - 关于这里 我测试了挺多次了 感觉还是加上这个钢琴音更好 否则打起来不是很舒服 如果采纳了之后相同的都加上
吧
00:49:435 (49435|1) - 这里干脆跟Vocal如何 删去这一个 或者还能在 00:49:922 - 加个Note跟loli音2333
01:05:896 - 后面的长条+Note很明显的跟了Vocal吧 所以这里也不要错过啦
01:18:364 - 同样的建议
01:34:825 - 这里开始有同样的问题前面提到过了
01:51:773 (111773|1) - 这个也是和前面一样的
02:08:234 - 和之前同样的建议
02:20:701 - 也是和前面同样的建议
02:28:688 - ~ 02:30:247 - 虽然抓的是没有问题 我个人感觉很奇怪 建议跟loli vocal
02:30:247 - 这边开始的重音好像稍微难了点 我建议进行略微简化 例如1/2撸过去 但是重音地方用loli音的hai 而且感觉比较好懂
02:47:974 - 我认为这里应该在加一个Hold到 02:48:169 - 然后长条再开始
02:53:624 (173624|1) - 这个是不是在02:55:182 - 更好 并且删去 02:54:792 (174792|2) -
03:29:273 - 和之前同样的建议
03:58:299 (238299|2) - 变成Hold在 03:58:688 - 结束
[Hard]
00:47:195 (47195|1,47292|2) - 这个我没有听到音
01:09:013 - 主要是我感觉食指打完之后的1/4立刻要松掉中指在Hard不太好 所以我的建议: http://puu.sh/ciF2i/a809aac70d.jpg
01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - 这两根是不是出问题了 应该在红线结束才是 打起来很不舒服
03:07:065 - 这边还有微弱的音 建议加上去
03:17:390 (197390|2,198169|2) - 这两个地方也加Hold连在一起会更好
03:58:640 (238640|0,238640|3) - 最后这两个 硬要说的话摆到1/8的黄线才是最合适的
[Insane]
01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - 和Hard一样
01:51:481 - 加个Note在3 这里有鼓声的
01:58:299 (118299|0) - 我这边有个鬼畜建议 先把这个移到4
01:57:909 - 在这里加个Note
01:58:104 - 然后再这里加个Hold到 01:58:494 - 结束 应该懂我意思吧>.>
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - 和Hard一样
好的基本上就这些
Topic Starter
Simple_Star wrote:
Hi惊喜大礼包我喜欢惊喜大礼包
[Hard]
00:47:195 (47195|1,47292|2) - 这个我没有听到音可以把 虽然不是很明显 我还是去掉了
01:09:013 - 主要是我感觉食指打完之后的1/4立刻要松掉中指在Hard不太好 所以我的建议: http://puu.sh/ciF2i/a809aac70d.jpgok
01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - 这两根是不是出问题了 应该在红线结束才是 打起来很不舒服
人声条 感觉没错
03:07:065 - 这边还有微弱的音 建议加上去没有呀。。
03:17:390 (197390|2,198169|2) - 这两个地方也加Hold连在一起会更好改了一下
03:58:640 (238640|0,238640|3) - 最后这两个 硬要说的话摆到1/8的黄线才是最合适的hmm 这里我是人声。。感觉都差不多
[Insane]
01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - 和Hard一样
01:51:481 - 加个Note在3 这里有鼓声的
01:58:299 (118299|0) - 我这边有个鬼畜建议 先把这个移到4试了一下这个 感觉不太能表达我想写的 还是就单写人声好了
01:57:909 - 在这里加个Note
01:58:104 - 然后再这里加个Hold到 01:58:494 - 结束 应该懂我意思吧>.>
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - 和Hard一样
好的基本上就这些
除了上面這些其他基本上有改Simple_Star wrote:
Hi惊喜大礼包以嚇哭
[3i'Normal]
这个Diffculty没有Video
00:06:481 (6481|2) - 这里我私心认为和前面的Note是一样的音 所以也需要Double
00:32:779 - 关于这里 我测试了挺多次了 感觉还是加上这个钢琴音更好 否则打起来不是很舒服 如果采纳了之后相同的都加上
吧
00:49:435 (49435|1) - 这里干脆跟Vocal如何 删去这一个 或者还能在 00:49:922 - 加个Note跟loli音2333
這部分其實沒跟vocal, 要當成vocal看也不能說錯 下vocal的話這裡要連點 所以不改了
01:05:896 - 后面的长条+Note很明显的跟了Vocal吧 所以这里也不要错过啦
01:18:364 - 同样的建议
01:34:825 - 这里开始有同样的问题前面提到过了
01:51:773 (111773|1) - 这个也是和前面一样的
02:08:234 - 和之前同样的建议
02:20:701 - 也是和前面同样的建议
02:28:688 - ~ 02:30:247 - 虽然抓的是没有问题 我个人感觉很奇怪 建议跟loli vocal
02:30:247 - 这边开始的重音好像稍微难了点 我建议进行略微简化 例如1/2撸过去 但是重音地方用loli音的hai 而且感觉比较好懂
02:47:974 - 我认为这里应该在加一个Hold到 02:48:169 - 然后长条再开始
02:53:624 (173624|1) - 这个是不是在02:55:182 - 更好 并且删去 02:54:792 (174792|2) -
03:29:273 - 和之前同样的建议
03:58:299 (238299|2) - 变成Hold在 03:58:688 - 结束 Not fix
好的基本上就这些
感謝小星
http://puu.sh/cjipk/b100f5ee28.rar
@victorica_db:記得改video
Bubbled
Another Senbonzakura song to add in my list. Good luck!
after IRC with the mapper , checked overall spread , sv changes and some pattern fix , fun map!
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2014-10-29 20:22 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 20:22 Rumia-: wait me about 20~40 mins ww
2014-10-29 20:22 Rumia-: i go wash dish ;w;
2014-10-29 20:22 victorica_db: ok~
2014-10-29 20:44 Rumia-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/494045 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura]
2014-10-29 20:44 Rumia-: www
2014-10-29 20:44 Rumia-: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/494045 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Insane]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2014-10-29 20:45 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: wtf i died
2014-10-29 20:47 victorica_db: xD
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: wt th e hp
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: 9
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: are u baka 9 :@
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: fun man www
2014-10-29 20:48 map *
2014-10-29 20:52 victorica_db: sorry ..xD bad internet
2014-10-29 20:53 Rumia-: hp 8.5 plz ;w;
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: btw why is another
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: not insane ? w
2014-10-29 20:54 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 20:54 victorica_db: xD
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: dafuq
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: i wrong see
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: eye blind hhhh
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: also about the slow part
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: come
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/494045 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Insane]]
2014-10-29 20:54 victorica_db: yeah
2014-10-29 20:55 Rumia-: 03:06:773 (186773|1,186870|2,186968|3) - 1/6
2014-10-29 20:55 Rumia-: 03:06:870 - until here
2014-10-29 20:56 Rumia-: 03:06:968 (186968|3) - also snap to 1/6
2014-10-29 20:56 Rumia-: 03:07:000 - suppose to be here
2014-10-29 20:56 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuUmI.jpg
2014-10-29 20:58 Rumia-: 03:08:039 (188039|1) - 1/4 earlier since you follow vocal
2014-10-29 20:59 victorica_db: xD not vocal ..
2014-10-29 21:00 Rumia-: o
2014-10-29 21:00 Rumia-: i thought it is same as 03:11:059 (191059|1,191351|0) -
2014-10-29 21:00 Rumia-: but i think its more fit :c
2014-10-29 21:01 victorica_db: hmm i'll delete it
2014-10-29 21:01 Rumia-: 03:19:338 (199338|3,199435|1) - move to left ? i think a pattern here would be nice
2014-10-29 21:01 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuUzF.jpg
2014-10-29 21:02 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:03 Rumia-: 03:20:409 - i think should add a note.
2014-10-29 21:03 Rumia-: ?
2014-10-29 21:03 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:04 Rumia-: 03:22:455 (202455|1) - move 1/4 up to the blue line
2014-10-29 21:04 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuUH9.jpg
2014-10-29 21:04 Rumia-: 03:23:137 (203137|2,204695|2) - i think this note ignore better orz... since the vocal is quite catchy ,
2014-10-29 21:06 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:06 victorica_db: 03:22:552 - this part i didnt change xD
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: orz
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: k
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: i tot it would be better while play orz
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: btw no kiai time ?
2014-10-29 21:07 victorica_db: is no kiai ok ?
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: idk..
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: i think must have since new rule after 2013
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: only old maps without kiai i think
2014-10-29 21:08 victorica_db: ok..i'll add later
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: wait i check
2014-10-29 21:09 Rumia-: btw 03:57:130 (237130|0,237130|2) - is this vocal ?
2014-10-29 21:09 victorica_db: no
2014-10-29 21:10 Rumia-: 03:58:201 (238201|3,238201|0) - i think better not focus this , since 03:58:104 (238104|1,238104|2,238299|1,238299|2) - this is good audible sound
2014-10-29 21:10 Rumia-: 03:57:130 (237130|0,237130|2) - if not vocal it should be normal note
2014-10-29 21:10 Rumia-: theres no hold sound baka
2014-10-29 21:11 victorica_db: xD ok ok
2014-10-29 21:12 victorica_db: last part i think it is ok xDD
2014-10-29 21:13 Rumia-: lol
2014-10-29 21:13 Rumia-: ok lets go to hard
2014-10-29 21:14 victorica_db: xD wait about slow down part
2014-10-29 21:14 victorica_db: i use the new idea xD
2014-10-29 21:14 Rumia-: ok
2014-10-29 21:15 Rumia-: after done then go hard
2014-10-29 21:15 Rumia-: we mod all diff 1st then u update i see the new update on the sv
2014-10-29 21:15 victorica_db: xD ok i just revice a little pattern in slow down part
2014-10-29 21:16 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 21:16 Rumia-: tell me when u done
2014-10-29 21:19 victorica_db: down lets go
2014-10-29 21:19 victorica_db: done..
2014-10-29 21:20 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/504821 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Hard]]
2014-10-29 21:21 Rumia-: 01:14:078 - this part feel too empty when playing
2014-10-29 21:21 victorica_db: the same part in insane is changed
2014-10-29 21:21 Rumia-: consider add a note on the red line ?
2014-10-29 21:21 Rumia-: 01:14:468 - here too
2014-10-29 21:22 Rumia-: 01:16:611 (76611|0,77000|3,77390|1) - this part also , feel off since the LN end without note
2014-10-29 21:23 victorica_db: hmm ok add
2014-10-29 21:23 Rumia-: 01:19:727 (79727|2,79727|1) - ctrl + H ?
2014-10-29 21:24 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:24 Rumia-: good pattern w
2014-10-29 21:24 victorica_db: thanks
2014-10-29 21:25 Rumia-: 02:07:065 - same as 1st chorus
2014-10-29 21:26 Rumia-: 02:25:377 (145377|3) - move to 3 , diffferent pitch with 02:25:572 (145572|3,145766|3,145961|3,146156|3,146351|3,146546|3,146740|3) -
2014-10-29 21:27 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:27 Rumia-: 02:25:572 (145572|3,145766|3,145961|3,146156|3,146351|3,146546|3,146740|3) - this part dont fit with the jack ><
2014-10-29 21:27 Rumia-: ctrl + j ? feel better also good pattern ><
2014-10-29 21:28 victorica_db: xD ctrl + j
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: www
2014-10-29 21:28 victorica_db: i cant ctrl + j..
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: why ;w;
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: oh
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: wrong hl note
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: WTF
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: lol sorry
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: thats not even jack
2014-10-29 21:29 victorica_db: = =
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: i mean 02:29:662 (149662|0,149760|1,149857|2) -
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: ;w;
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: sorry
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: dont = = me or i nuke this map
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: hhhhhhhh lol jk
2014-10-29 21:30 victorica_db: ok change some pattern
2014-10-29 21:31 Rumia-: hhh
2014-10-29 21:34 Rumia-: 02:38:429 (158429|3,158526|2,158624|1,158721|0) - this part also feel awkward ><
2014-10-29 21:34 Rumia-: 02:38:429 (158429|3) - since this is hihat which is not piano like 02:38:331 (158331|3) -
2014-10-29 21:34 Rumia-: 02:38:526 (158526|2) - this one is actually the same pitch as 02:38:331 (158331|3) -
2014-10-29 21:35 Rumia-: i recommend to change like this ? http://puu.sh/cuW7I.jpg
2014-10-29 21:35 Rumia-: good pattern too
2014-10-29 21:36 Rumia-: 02:39:273 (159273|1,159338|2) - this is actually 1/4...................
2014-10-29 21:36 victorica_db: yes ,
2014-10-29 21:36 victorica_db: xD i think it is 1/6
2014-10-29 21:37 Rumia-: i slowed it down
2014-10-29 21:37 Rumia-: and didnt hear the piano is 1/6
2014-10-29 21:37 Rumia-: its really 1/4
2014-10-29 21:38 victorica_db: xDDD
2014-10-29 21:38 Rumia-: wtf u laugh wat la
2014-10-29 21:38 Rumia-: ACTION slaps db
2014-10-29 21:39 victorica_db: ;w;
2014-10-29 21:39 victorica_db: ok ok change to 1/4
2014-10-29 21:39 Rumia-: ;w;
2014-10-29 21:40 Rumia-: 02:40:474 (160474|2) - i think delete this better
2014-10-29 21:40 Rumia-: focus on piano here would be good
2014-10-29 21:41 Rumia-: 02:40:572 (160572|1,160669|2,160766|3,160864|3,160961|2,161059|1) - also pattenr suggestion with this http://puu.sh/cuWqb.png
2014-10-29 21:41 Rumia-: fit the song more
2014-10-29 21:46 Rumia-: 02:45:831 (165831|1) - this is 1/2 LN
2014-10-29 21:46 victorica_db: change some
2014-10-29 21:47 Rumia-: 02:46:903 (166903|0,166935|1,166968|2) - this is not 1/12 ;w
2014-10-29 21:48 Rumia-: should be 1/6 only
2014-10-29 21:48 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuWLK.jpg
2014-10-29 21:48 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:48 victorica_db: my mistake
2014-10-29 21:49 Rumia-: 02:51:091 (171091|0,171286|1,172065|0) - swap collumn ? would make nice pattern
2014-10-29 21:51 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:52 Rumia-: 02:54:403 (174403|0,174598|3,174598|1,174792|0,174792|3,174987|3,174987|1) - i dont get this lol
2014-10-29 21:53 victorica_db: i use this to emphsis the guita
2014-10-29 21:53 victorica_db: guitar
2014-10-29 21:55 Rumia-: better catch the cha cha cha sound
2014-10-29 21:55 Rumia-: i think more catchy
2014-10-29 21:56 victorica_db: i consider it before .. but i still want to keep this
2014-10-29 21:59 Rumia-: k
2014-10-29 22:00 Rumia-: 03:06:773 (186773|1,186870|2,186968|3) - 1/6
2014-10-29 22:00 Rumia-: like insane
2014-10-29 22:00 victorica_db: all changed
2014-10-29 22:00 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 22:00 victorica_db: 03:06:935 - seem there is also have sound
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: i think ive said it when i mod the insane ==
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: u ignore me ah
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuXnN.jpg
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: suppose to be like this
2014-10-29 22:02 victorica_db: wo i change the stair
2014-10-29 22:02 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 22:04 Rumia-: k lastly i suggest the same thing xD
2014-10-29 22:04 Rumia-: 03:58:201 (238201|0,238201|3) -
2014-10-29 22:05 Rumia-: btw make sure u apply same sv thing as you did in new insane
2014-10-29 22:05 victorica_db: xD
2014-10-29 22:05 Rumia-: since u use the same sv on hard dif
2014-10-29 22:05 Rumia-: k go update let wo kan kan ni tu de
2014-10-29 22:06 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:07 victorica_db: update
2014-10-29 22:07 victorica_db: i just change some pattern in insane slow part
2014-10-29 22:11 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 22:11 Rumia-: wait i test
2014-10-29 22:11 Rumia-: hh
2014-10-29 22:11 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:15 Rumia-: good
2014-10-29 22:16 Rumia-: 03:13:883 - i suggest add x0.8 sv here
2014-10-29 22:16 Rumia-: make like rising speed
2014-10-29 22:17 Rumia-: 03:17:000 rise here too sudden
2014-10-29 22:17 Rumia-: or maybe change the position of x0.65 to here
2014-10-29 22:18 Rumia-: 03:13:883 -
2014-10-29 22:19 Rumia-: 03:17:000 - and add x0.70 here would be a better effect
2014-10-29 22:22 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:23 Rumia-: apply to hard too
2014-10-29 22:24 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/504821 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Hard]]
2014-10-29 22:24 Rumia-: 01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - this LN is not fit with extended 1/4
2014-10-29 22:24 Rumia-: i think its better to 1/2 instead of 3/4 LN
2014-10-29 22:25 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:25 Rumia-: k fix and update
2014-10-29 22:25 Rumia-: lets qualify this
2014-10-29 22:25 Rumia-: lol
2014-10-29 22:26 victorica_db: lol
2014-10-29 22:26 victorica_db: reopen osu ..cant upload
2014-10-29 22:26 Rumia-: wtf lolol
2014-10-29 22:26 Rumia-: btw is the metadata has been checked properly ?
2014-10-29 22:27 victorica_db: check by kshr
2014-10-29 22:27 Rumia-: good
2014-10-29 22:27 Rumia-: done update tell me
2014-10-29 22:27 Rumia-: lets ♥ this
2014-10-29 22:30 Rumia-: since 3i diff is too good
2014-10-29 20:22 Rumia-: wait me about 20~40 mins ww
2014-10-29 20:22 Rumia-: i go wash dish ;w;
2014-10-29 20:22 victorica_db: ok~
2014-10-29 20:44 Rumia-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/494045 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura]
2014-10-29 20:44 Rumia-: www
2014-10-29 20:44 Rumia-: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/494045 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Insane]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2014-10-29 20:45 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: wtf i died
2014-10-29 20:47 victorica_db: xD
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: wt th e hp
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: 9
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: are u baka 9 :@
2014-10-29 20:47 Rumia-: fun man www
2014-10-29 20:48 map *
2014-10-29 20:52 victorica_db: sorry ..xD bad internet
2014-10-29 20:53 Rumia-: hp 8.5 plz ;w;
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: btw why is another
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: not insane ? w
2014-10-29 20:54 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 20:54 victorica_db: xD
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: dafuq
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: i wrong see
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: eye blind hhhh
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: also about the slow part
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: come
2014-10-29 20:54 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/494045 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Insane]]
2014-10-29 20:54 victorica_db: yeah
2014-10-29 20:55 Rumia-: 03:06:773 (186773|1,186870|2,186968|3) - 1/6
2014-10-29 20:55 Rumia-: 03:06:870 - until here
2014-10-29 20:56 Rumia-: 03:06:968 (186968|3) - also snap to 1/6
2014-10-29 20:56 Rumia-: 03:07:000 - suppose to be here
2014-10-29 20:56 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuUmI.jpg
2014-10-29 20:58 Rumia-: 03:08:039 (188039|1) - 1/4 earlier since you follow vocal
2014-10-29 20:59 victorica_db: xD not vocal ..
2014-10-29 21:00 Rumia-: o
2014-10-29 21:00 Rumia-: i thought it is same as 03:11:059 (191059|1,191351|0) -
2014-10-29 21:00 Rumia-: but i think its more fit :c
2014-10-29 21:01 victorica_db: hmm i'll delete it
2014-10-29 21:01 Rumia-: 03:19:338 (199338|3,199435|1) - move to left ? i think a pattern here would be nice
2014-10-29 21:01 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuUzF.jpg
2014-10-29 21:02 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:03 Rumia-: 03:20:409 - i think should add a note.
2014-10-29 21:03 Rumia-: ?
2014-10-29 21:03 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:04 Rumia-: 03:22:455 (202455|1) - move 1/4 up to the blue line
2014-10-29 21:04 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuUH9.jpg
2014-10-29 21:04 Rumia-: 03:23:137 (203137|2,204695|2) - i think this note ignore better orz... since the vocal is quite catchy ,
2014-10-29 21:06 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:06 victorica_db: 03:22:552 - this part i didnt change xD
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: orz
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: k
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: i tot it would be better while play orz
2014-10-29 21:07 Rumia-: btw no kiai time ?
2014-10-29 21:07 victorica_db: is no kiai ok ?
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: idk..
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: i think must have since new rule after 2013
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: only old maps without kiai i think
2014-10-29 21:08 victorica_db: ok..i'll add later
2014-10-29 21:08 Rumia-: wait i check
2014-10-29 21:09 Rumia-: btw 03:57:130 (237130|0,237130|2) - is this vocal ?
2014-10-29 21:09 victorica_db: no
2014-10-29 21:10 Rumia-: 03:58:201 (238201|3,238201|0) - i think better not focus this , since 03:58:104 (238104|1,238104|2,238299|1,238299|2) - this is good audible sound
2014-10-29 21:10 Rumia-: 03:57:130 (237130|0,237130|2) - if not vocal it should be normal note
2014-10-29 21:10 Rumia-: theres no hold sound baka
2014-10-29 21:11 victorica_db: xD ok ok
2014-10-29 21:12 victorica_db: last part i think it is ok xDD
2014-10-29 21:13 Rumia-: lol
2014-10-29 21:13 Rumia-: ok lets go to hard
2014-10-29 21:14 victorica_db: xD wait about slow down part
2014-10-29 21:14 victorica_db: i use the new idea xD
2014-10-29 21:14 Rumia-: ok
2014-10-29 21:15 Rumia-: after done then go hard
2014-10-29 21:15 Rumia-: we mod all diff 1st then u update i see the new update on the sv
2014-10-29 21:15 victorica_db: xD ok i just revice a little pattern in slow down part
2014-10-29 21:16 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 21:16 Rumia-: tell me when u done
2014-10-29 21:19 victorica_db: down lets go
2014-10-29 21:19 victorica_db: done..
2014-10-29 21:20 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/504821 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Hard]]
2014-10-29 21:21 Rumia-: 01:14:078 - this part feel too empty when playing
2014-10-29 21:21 victorica_db:
the same part in insane is changed2014-10-29 21:21 Rumia-: consider add a note on the red line ?
2014-10-29 21:21 Rumia-: 01:14:468 - here too
2014-10-29 21:22 Rumia-: 01:16:611 (76611|0,77000|3,77390|1) - this part also , feel off since the LN end without note
2014-10-29 21:23 victorica_db: hmm ok add
2014-10-29 21:23 Rumia-: 01:19:727 (79727|2,79727|1) - ctrl + H ?
2014-10-29 21:24 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:24 Rumia-: good pattern w
2014-10-29 21:24 victorica_db: thanks
2014-10-29 21:25 Rumia-: 02:07:065 - same as 1st chorus
2014-10-29 21:26 Rumia-: 02:25:377 (145377|3) - move to 3 , diffferent pitch with 02:25:572 (145572|3,145766|3,145961|3,146156|3,146351|3,146546|3,146740|3) -
2014-10-29 21:27 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:27 Rumia-: 02:25:572 (145572|3,145766|3,145961|3,146156|3,146351|3,146546|3,146740|3) - this part dont fit with the jack ><
2014-10-29 21:27 Rumia-: ctrl + j ? feel better also good pattern ><
2014-10-29 21:28 victorica_db: xD ctrl + j
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: www
2014-10-29 21:28 victorica_db: i cant ctrl + j..
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: why ;w;
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: oh
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: wrong hl note
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: WTF
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: lol sorry
2014-10-29 21:28 Rumia-: thats not even jack
2014-10-29 21:29 victorica_db: = =
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: i mean 02:29:662 (149662|0,149760|1,149857|2) -
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: ;w;
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: sorry
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: dont = = me or i nuke this map
2014-10-29 21:29 Rumia-: hhhhhhhh lol jk
2014-10-29 21:30 victorica_db: ok change some pattern
2014-10-29 21:31 Rumia-: hhh
2014-10-29 21:34 Rumia-: 02:38:429 (158429|3,158526|2,158624|1,158721|0) - this part also feel awkward ><
2014-10-29 21:34 Rumia-: 02:38:429 (158429|3) - since this is hihat which is not piano like 02:38:331 (158331|3) -
2014-10-29 21:34 Rumia-: 02:38:526 (158526|2) - this one is actually the same pitch as 02:38:331 (158331|3) -
2014-10-29 21:35 Rumia-: i recommend to change like this ? http://puu.sh/cuW7I.jpg
2014-10-29 21:35 Rumia-: good pattern too
2014-10-29 21:36 Rumia-: 02:39:273 (159273|1,159338|2) - this is actually 1/4...................
2014-10-29 21:36 victorica_db: yes ,
2014-10-29 21:36 victorica_db: xD i think it is 1/6
2014-10-29 21:37 Rumia-: i slowed it down
2014-10-29 21:37 Rumia-: and didnt hear the piano is 1/6
2014-10-29 21:37 Rumia-: its really 1/4
2014-10-29 21:38 victorica_db: xDDD
2014-10-29 21:38 Rumia-: wtf u laugh wat la
2014-10-29 21:38 Rumia-: ACTION slaps db
2014-10-29 21:39 victorica_db: ;w;
2014-10-29 21:39 victorica_db: ok ok change to 1/4
2014-10-29 21:39 Rumia-: ;w;
2014-10-29 21:40 Rumia-: 02:40:474 (160474|2) - i think delete this better
2014-10-29 21:40 Rumia-: focus on piano here would be good
2014-10-29 21:41 Rumia-: 02:40:572 (160572|1,160669|2,160766|3,160864|3,160961|2,161059|1) - also pattenr suggestion with this http://puu.sh/cuWqb.png
2014-10-29 21:41 Rumia-: fit the song more
2014-10-29 21:46 Rumia-: 02:45:831 (165831|1) - this is 1/2 LN
2014-10-29 21:46 victorica_db: change some
2014-10-29 21:47 Rumia-: 02:46:903 (166903|0,166935|1,166968|2) - this is not 1/12 ;w
2014-10-29 21:48 Rumia-: should be 1/6 only
2014-10-29 21:48 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuWLK.jpg
2014-10-29 21:48 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:48 victorica_db: my mistake
2014-10-29 21:49 Rumia-: 02:51:091 (171091|0,171286|1,172065|0) - swap collumn ? would make nice pattern
2014-10-29 21:51 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 21:52 Rumia-: 02:54:403 (174403|0,174598|3,174598|1,174792|0,174792|3,174987|3,174987|1) - i dont get this lol
2014-10-29 21:53 victorica_db: i use this to emphsis the guita
2014-10-29 21:53 victorica_db: guitar
2014-10-29 21:55 Rumia-: better catch the cha cha cha sound
2014-10-29 21:55 Rumia-: i think more catchy
2014-10-29 21:56 victorica_db: i consider it before .. but i still want to keep this
2014-10-29 21:59 Rumia-: k
2014-10-29 22:00 Rumia-: 03:06:773 (186773|1,186870|2,186968|3) - 1/6
2014-10-29 22:00 Rumia-: like insane
2014-10-29 22:00 victorica_db: all changed
2014-10-29 22:00 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 22:00 victorica_db: 03:06:935 - seem there is also have sound
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: i think ive said it when i mod the insane ==
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: u ignore me ah
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: http://puu.sh/cuXnN.jpg
2014-10-29 22:01 Rumia-: suppose to be like this
2014-10-29 22:02 victorica_db: wo i change the stair
2014-10-29 22:02 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 22:04 Rumia-: k lastly i suggest the same thing xD
2014-10-29 22:04 Rumia-: 03:58:201 (238201|0,238201|3) -
2014-10-29 22:05 Rumia-: btw make sure u apply same sv thing as you did in new insane
2014-10-29 22:05 victorica_db: xD
2014-10-29 22:05 Rumia-: since u use the same sv on hard dif
2014-10-29 22:05 Rumia-: k go update let wo kan kan ni tu de
2014-10-29 22:06 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:07 victorica_db: update
2014-10-29 22:07 victorica_db: i just change some pattern in insane slow part
2014-10-29 22:11 Rumia-: kk
2014-10-29 22:11 Rumia-: wait i test
2014-10-29 22:11 Rumia-: hh
2014-10-29 22:11 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:15 Rumia-: good
2014-10-29 22:16 Rumia-: 03:13:883 - i suggest add x0.8 sv here
2014-10-29 22:16 Rumia-: make like rising speed
2014-10-29 22:17 Rumia-: 03:17:000 rise here too sudden
2014-10-29 22:17 Rumia-: or maybe change the position of x0.65 to here
2014-10-29 22:18 Rumia-: 03:13:883 -
2014-10-29 22:19 Rumia-: 03:17:000 - and add x0.70 here would be a better effect
2014-10-29 22:22 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:23 Rumia-: apply to hard too
2014-10-29 22:24 Rumia-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/504821 Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura [Hard]]
2014-10-29 22:24 Rumia-: 01:36:481 (96481|2,96870|1) - this LN is not fit with extended 1/4
2014-10-29 22:24 Rumia-: i think its better to 1/2 instead of 3/4 LN
2014-10-29 22:25 victorica_db: ok
2014-10-29 22:25 Rumia-: k fix and update
2014-10-29 22:25 Rumia-: lets qualify this
2014-10-29 22:25 Rumia-: lol
2014-10-29 22:26 victorica_db: lol
2014-10-29 22:26 victorica_db: reopen osu ..cant upload
2014-10-29 22:26 Rumia-: wtf lolol
2014-10-29 22:26 Rumia-: btw is the metadata has been checked properly ?
2014-10-29 22:27 victorica_db: check by kshr
2014-10-29 22:27 Rumia-: good
2014-10-29 22:27 Rumia-: done update tell me
2014-10-29 22:27 Rumia-: lets ♥ this
2014-10-29 22:30 Rumia-: since 3i diff is too good
Congratz, nice map
Grats victorica_db ~